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THE ORAL CIGARETTES - Kyouran Hey Kids!!

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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 30, 2015 at 10:53:14 PM

Artist: THE ORAL CIGARETTES
Title: Kyouran Hey Kids!!
Source: ???? ARAGOTO
Tags: noragami opening tv size pkhg appleeaterx pishifat Yato Iki Hiyori Yukine
BPM: 142
Filesize: 24343kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.42 stars, 173 notes)
  2. apple's ORAL (5.04 stars, 352 notes)
  3. Collab Easy (1.31 stars, 79 notes)
  4. Insane (3.87 stars, 317 notes)
  5. pishi's Extra (4.87 stars, 356 notes)
  6. pishi's Hard (3.46 stars, 263 notes)
  7. pkhg's Normal (1.85 stars, 141 notes)
Download: THE ORAL CIGARETTES - Kyouran Hey Kids!!
Download: THE ORAL CIGARETTES - Kyouran Hey Kids!! (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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anime tv size doesnt fit with my other maps - cat

easy by mlg mapper and pishi
Last edited by Milan- , edited 4 times in total.
Bearizm
1,213 posts
Joined October 2013
Bearizm
As requested through in-game PM.

General
  1. Inconsistent breaks at 01:25:225 - in pishi's Hard and Advanced. These difficulties has none of it.

apple
  1. 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think this fits the sounds, just make this a regular spaced stream instead? and gameplay wise, it also destroys flow and momentum due to the stops.
  2. 01:24:591 (3,4,5,6) - this is fine tho.

pishi's Insane
  1. as expected, no real suggestions.
  2. except for this one xd 01:20:999 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - this plays a bit awkward due to the angle from 01:20:999 (2) - to 01:21:211 (1) - and where the flow is headed. it should be fine but it's a bit uhh.. not smooth i guess.but it's better than stacking them i guess

Insane
  1. 01:10:225 (3,4) - ctrl+g?
  2. 01:24:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmmm the stream starts in blue tick. i suggest you remove the repeat and map the stream so that the circle starts at 01:24:591 - not an issue but it could be better this way I believe.

pishi's Hard
  1. 00:03:465 (3) - Spacing error.
  2. 00:05:155 (3,1) - same. or are these intentional?
  3. In general, from 00:09:063 (2) - to 00:20:683 - I think you should add some whistles so that it's obvious you're following the guitar because some of the drums are skipped such as at 00:15:929 -

Advanced
  1. 00:15:718 (5) - NC
  2. 00:23:324 (5) - this should be placed at 00:23:535 -
  3. 01:13:182 - could add a circle here.

Normal
  1. Where.

Good luck!
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
M4M here! :D

[Advanced]
00:08:324 (4,1) - Blanket here :P
Actually I feel this 00:08:324 (4) - could be like 00:10:225 (5) - and 00:10:225 (5) - could be like 00:08:324 (4) - . (I think they should swap the rhythm due to the background music)
00:12:338 (1) - http://puu.sh/l2MQi/de2ca5a995.jpg The longs sliders are covering too much sounds which is quite weird with your overall rhythm setting. Try to split them. Same at 00:19:098 (1) - .
01:00:507 (1,2,1) - Re-arrange the spacing here.

[pishi's Hard]
No Kiai Time ;w;?
00:01:353 (2,3) - Spacing quite larger, try to use the same spacing as 00:03:043 (2,3) -
Cool!

[Insane]
00:43:605 (2) - A little higher position would be better.
00:56:281 (8) - NC
01:27:760 (1,2,1,2) - In one combo set?

[pishi's Insane]
Just one thing:
00:27:443 (4,1) - Do not use enlarged spacing here? Since in this part there's no large spacing in similar rhythms.

Cool song and map!
Good Luck!
Last edited by Mafumafu , edited 1 time in total.
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-

Bearizm wrote:

Advanced
  1. 00:23:324 (5) - this should be placed at 00:23:535 - that wouldnt make much sense i thin o.o
  2. 01:13:182 - could add a circle here. wanted to emphasis the slow part by not doing it

Normal
  1. Where now.

Good luck!
did the others w thank you bae. also will reply to regraz wwhen he's done
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
AAAAAAaaaaaAaAAAAAAaaaaaaAAAAaaAaaa THIS songggggggggggggg wanted to map it pvvvvvp
Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
@Bearizm: Since it's the final KIAI, I wanted to make it a bit harder than the first KIAI. Played it a few times myself and it's plays okay to me. I never really mapped Expert difficulties before, so I'll wait what other people have to say about it. Keeping this for now xd
-Lemons
219 posts
Joined July 2012
-Lemons
For your queue

  • Easy
  1. 00:47:830 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:14:873 (1) - Curve maybe

    pkhg's Normal
  3. fine

    advanced
  4. 00:03:043 (5,6) - I would make these 1/2 sliders
  5. 00:29:239 (7) - You could curve this around 5
  6. 00:59:450 (5) - curve more for blanket? or just raise this up a bit


    pishi's hard
  7. Where's ur kiai xd
  8. 00:32:514 (4) - idk if you wanted to make this a curve but if not move it here 150|125

    Insane
  9. 00:05:578 (1) - move to 374|191?
  10. 01:18:042 (7) - Ctrl-J and put in same spot

    pishi's Insane
  11. Reminds me of Jinsei wa hoeru map from you
  12. 01:13:182 (3) - Move to like 337|186?

    Apple is ORAL
  13. 00:31:985 (5) - It's kinda hard to see this note on default skin
  14. 00:50:366 (1,3) - overlap on these two seems kinda weird I would probably make it even more of an overlap similar to this one 01:16:985 (3) -
Kewl stuff. Fav diff is pishi's Insane
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata


01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) -

PLEASE DONT STACK THEM I PLAYED YOUR DIFF 40 TIMES AND I FAILED THERE EVERY TIME T_____T

If you wanna make them hard, do like a zigzag pattern or something geometric instead of a linear/simple-curved pattern, but stacking them makes me cry T___T If you check out some of the val0108/Lesjuh maps with really high bpm, they usually only do stacks when the circle is followed/preceded by a slider. circle>circle stacks in between jumps creates a stop>go>stop>go movement that becomes increasingly annoying to play as BPM goes up and generally doesn't flow well. If this were mapped like 142 bpm streams, YOU ARE NOT HANZER.

Call me when the set's ready. I wanna map the full version xD
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hey! from your queue ~

[General]
  1. Please add a video on Easy
  2. "soft-hitwhistle" is a bit low about volume. try to use this one !
[Collab Easy]
  1. HP Drain Rate +1. It's enough for beginner.
  2. 00:47:830 (1) - I guess it's snap error o.o
  3. 00:52:478 (2,3,4) - This ryhthm is a little hard for beginners. try to use my rhythm like this. You can use sounds with constant rhythm. or 00:52:478 (2,3) - these notes change to one slider.
    SPOILER
    I recommend you to write collab member to somewhere!
[pkhg's Normal]
  1. 00:20:789 (1,2,3) - You took the background sound only here. It's better to take the vocal same as here 00:22:479 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:29:239 (1,2,3) - .
    SPOILER
  2. 00:37:690 (1) - add a finish to the head ?
  3. 01:25:013 - Please add a short break time to here!
[Advanced]
  1. 00:13:183 (3) - I can hear the guitar sound at here 00:13:394 - So try to use 1/1 srhythm around here like this. It would fit well with this kind of music.
    SPOILER
[pishi's Hard]
  1. You took many 1/4 rhythms (It's fine) So please try to set OD 6 for players.
  2. 01:11:175 - I feel empty at here. You didn't take like this sound only here. It's better to take this sonud in my opinion!
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:366 (1) - This part looks crowded between 00:49:943 (3) - and 00:50:366 (1) - . Please use more spacing at both!
    SPOILER
[pishi's Insane]
  1. Cool! just one thing, This difficulty is harder than Milan-'s. How about renaming to pishi's Extra or something ? It's good to me!
[appleeateroral c:]
  1. 00:01:775 (2) - add a whistle to the head or tail. It would fit well with this kind of music.
  2. 00:03:465 (2) - ,00:05:155 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:05:578 (1) - I feel drum-finish is better than soft-clap to here!
  4. 00:54:169 (3,4) - I like your next part at here 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - . I prefer to use four notes at here 00:54:169 (3,4) - It would be cool for playing.
really cool! feel free to poke me for bubble or something :)
Bearizm
1,213 posts
Joined October 2013
Bearizm

alacat wrote:

really cool! feel free to poke me for bubble or something :)
wait what? QATs can bubble? I thought they can only bubble if the map is DQ'd?
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Yes, we can ;)
Bearizm
1,213 posts
Joined October 2013
Bearizm

alacat wrote:

Yes, we can ;)
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Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
k I might be bit rusty with modding. let's see

11/10 for pishi

[General]
this is on most diffs idk what they are supposed to do in lower diffs.
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71809,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,70,0,0
72337,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
72443,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,71,0,0
what are these green lines o.o - kinda unnessecary.

87865,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
87971,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88077,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88182,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88288,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88394,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
^same. I don't get the purpose of them.
just bcs of volume change?

ya i copeaayy pasterino.

you could prolly add the main character names to tags even tho I think those are enough.

[easy]
00:47:830 (1) - wat
00:53:535 (4) - this slider feels a bit weird to play idk ending it 1/1 beat before or after plays way nicer. idk prolly bcs of claps, i think sticking with the basic pattern works better?

71704,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
71809,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,70,0,0
72337,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
72443,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,71,0,0
what are these green lines o.o - kinda unnessecary.

87865,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
87971,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88077,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88182,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88288,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88394,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
^same. I don't get the purpose of them.
just bcs of volume change? welp put in general tab since it occured almost in any diff.

[pk thing diff]
dis diff is gud.
00:30:929 (1,2) - ya i guess this asyemmtrical pattern here is wanted. Just pointing it out.

[advanced ..]

00:28:605 (5,6,7) - ya I think you should nc this like your leaving out the vocal even tho its new.
00:22:479 (4) - ^
00:23:746 (1) - nc
00:26:915 (1) - nc
it prolly got fucked up now, but the vocal seems to me more important.

[fishhard]

ya no kiai ? but insane mate.

00:03:043 (2) - you might wanna move that up a bit, its almost offscreen.
01:25:013 (1) - break, I think this just bcs you forgot lel

[insane not so insane]

00:43:605 (2) - can you move that a bit up, almost offscreen too.
00:56:281 (1) - nc for vocal
01:16:880 (2) - not properly stacked
01:22:161 (2) - is this a thing? or is this just accidently stacked too like the one above.

[fishyinsane]

00:20:260 (2,3,4,5) - ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. pls give a nub like me a chance to play 280bpm ok. give it a little bit spacing just for me. will you?

yea no objections at all nice shit here.

[apple's don't give needed vitamin therefore they are not needed that much-diff]

00:35:577 (1,2,3) - make that not that edgy to hit to reach 00:36:000 (1) - unless I wanna break sth.
01:23:746 (3,4) - iknow it sounds strange but try it and tell me whatya think. this ctrl+g and ctrl+g 4 again. so yeah ...


did you really map anime tv size? wat
burn

gl toast
UndeadCapulet
1,100 posts
Joined April 2013
UndeadCapulet


01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) -

PLEASE DO STACK THEM I PLAYED YOUR DIFF 8000 TIMES AND I PASSED THERE EVERY TIME OWO

It's so fun please don't listen to monstrata
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
you got a qat icon

such ~ Q U A L I T Y ~
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

alacat wrote:

Hey! from your queue ~

[pkhg's Normal]
  1. 00:20:789 (1,2,3) - You took the background sound only here. It's better to take the vocal same as here 00:22:479 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:29:239 (1,2,3) - .
    SPOILER
    sure
  2. 00:37:690 (1) - add a finish to the head ? every diff has a whistle here so no xd
  3. 01:25:013 - Please add a short break time to here!up to you milan
really cool! feel free to poke me for bubble or something :)
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: apple so oral.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46669
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Kyouran Hey Kids!!
TitleUnicode:狂乱Hey Kids!!
Artist:THE ORAL CIGARETTES
ArtistUnicode:THE ORAL CIGARETTES
Creator:Milan-
Version:pkhg's Normal
Source:ノラガミ ARAGOTO
Tags:noragami opening tv size pkhg appleeaterx pishifat
BeatmapID:814392
BeatmapSetID:371419

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.699999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"apple is oral.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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pkhg
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pkhg
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Side
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Joined October 2013
Side
Hi for the M4M :V
SPOILER
[Collab Easy]

HP2? 1 is way too baby xD especially since it's not just like 2/1 slider spam easy there's actually movement and a few more notes so more drain would work. Maybe 1.5 I would say too.

00:47:830 (1) - weird snap. Pretty sure it should end on 00:48:676 - to go with drum/vocals.

00:49:098 (2,3) - Probably not a big deal but you could make a nice triangle pattern anyway with consistent spacing.

00:52:901 (3,4) - Personally I feel this wouldn't read very nicely to newer players. The best option would be making this a 3/1 slider/reverse. Unfortunately this also means changing some patterns so my suggestion is something like this ss2. For this example I changed 00:55:859 (2) - to a note and then made a 1/1 slider for 00:56:281 - Surely here are better options of course but I feel this pattern will play more naturally for newer players.


[Kghp's Normal :v]

00:20:577 - I feel there could be a note here with clap to compliment the downbeat and transition to the verse better.

01:24:380 - Also feel there could be a note here mostly because you did it for 01:22:267 (2,4) - and it would feel a bit fuller considering it's near the end.

No real issues.


[Advanced]

00:46:351 (4) - Not wrong the way it is but stacking over 3 could add a nice effect.

No real issues.


[Pishi's Hard]

Consider AR7.5 here. I suppose you might say it works well because of the note density and BPM but idk compared to the other diffs I think 7.5 would be enough. Not a big deal though

I think stack leniency at 7 is fine. I'd like to know if you had a reason for 10 though :o

00:01:353 (2,3) - While this snap to 3 is cool idk if it would play naturally for players at this level. Consider having it somewhat like 00:03:043 (2,3) - or 00:04:733 (2,3) - I think it might be fine though idk.

No real issues.


[Insane]

Consider AR 8.7 here. I could see AR9 working too but personally I dont like seeing baby insanes with AR9. I prefer them to be more like introductory insanes but still kinda like hards so I prefer seeing an in-between AR to compliment that transition.

Maybe round down OD to 7.5. I mean a change in 15ms is almost negligible and multiples of 5 look better anyway :v

00:08:007 (4,5) - Would work better as a 1/1 slider to compliment the guitar note. Would also work well as a quick rhythm adjustment kinda hard to explain this but basically cuz its high BPM something like this would allow players to adjust and keep going with the rhythm in mind idk it makes sense in my head but maybe I can't explain it well :p Basically like what you did 00:09:697 (4) - and 00:11:387 (5) - .

00:12:760 (3,4,1) - Consider this pattern. I say this because it better compliments the way the guitar plays while keeping the sense of rhythm you have for this section.

00:20:260 (6,7,8,9) - Lol rude but it's nice :v

No real issues though.

[pishi's Insane]

Consider lowering AR to 9.2. Maybe 9.3 at most imo. Especially if the previous diff dropped AR. Might seem minor but in this case not really since higher BPM with funky jumps and then pauses is a bit trippy at higher AR at least to me idk maybe I'm just bad :v

Consider OD 8.5 especially if you choose NOT to change AR but would be nice to change anyway for teh pp

HP7. Gotta be evil against those TV size farmers >:v


Honestly didn't see anything note-wise that would play awkwardly. I'm not the best at playing high BPM maps but I didn't do too badly here so I guess it's cool :v


[Apple's thing]

AR is fine but if the others drop significantly consider 9.5.

OD 8.5? :(

HP7. No mercy for TV size farmers >:V (also btw you never really drain to death with HR unless you have bad acc and miss a few. This applies for pishi's diff too)

00:06:846 (1) - Might work better stacked over 00:05:578 (1) - or even 00:07:268 (1) - imo. First one to indicate a pause from the small break or the 2nd one to indicate the pause into the shorter pause.

01:02:197 (5) - Head missing clap I think like 01:03:887 (3) -

00:19:838 (4,1,2,3,4) - This isn't bad but I think something that would be neat would be something like this obcviously it could look much better. Basically (1) should start where 4 starts to emphasize the guitar note more naturally and then change add three pairs of 1/2 stacked notes. Maybe that last part with the stack notes you don't have to do but I definitely suggest removing 4 and moving 1 back there then adding a note at 00:20:155 - or changing this to a 1/2 slider etc. works better with the song.

00:28:605 (4) - remove clap. Doesn't follow the pattern from previously or the one from the song

01:00:823 (2,3,4,5,1) - Man that empty 01:01:035 - makes me sad since musically, it would normally be a pair with 01:00:929 (3) - and have a drum sample and whistle like that thing drums do with the high toms then low toms etc. Maybe try to connect this as a stream somehow. I think it could work. Something like this roughly :v

01:08:535 (3) - I think two notes would feel better imo but this isn't bad of course.

01:24:591 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is cool :v Would be cool if this was done more often in the diff though :(


Anyway nice spread. No major issues anywhere (except that thing in the easy lol) looks pretty much ready for ranking imo.


Good luck with this! :)
Mint
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Joined February 2013
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-Lemons wrote:

Apple is ORAL
[*]00:31:985 (5) - It's kinda hard to see this note on default skin :arrow: Hmm.. not at all for me? Quite obvious if you'd read the approach circles.
[*]00:50:366 (1,3) - overlap on these two seems kinda weird I would probably make it even more of an overlap similar to this one 01:16:985 (3) - :arrow: Should be okay now![/list]

alacat wrote:

[appleeateroral c:]
  1. 00:01:775 (2) - add a whistle to the head or tail. It would fit well with this kind of music. :arrow: Added!
  2. 00:03:465 (2) - ,00:05:155 (3,4) - ^ :arrow: Added!
  3. 00:05:578 (1) - I feel drum-finish is better than soft-clap to here! :arrow: Added!
  4. 00:54:169 (3,4) - I like your next part at here 01:21:211 (3,4,5,6) - . I prefer to use four notes at here 00:54:169 (3,4) - It would be cool for playing. :arrow: You have a good point, but I just love this slider pattern xd. I made the distance a bit larger here to emphasize it a bit better, hope it's okay for you :3

    this hentai cat xddd

Feb wrote:

[apple's don't give needed vitamin therefore they are not needed that much-diff]

00:35:577 (1,2,3) - make that not that edgy to hit to reach 00:36:000 (1) - unless I wanna break sth. :arrow: Not sure what you mean here.. just change the curve a bit.
01:23:746 (3,4) - iknow it sounds strange but try it and tell me whatya think. this ctrl+g and ctrl+g 4 again. so yeah ... :arrow: I prefer my own one, that one seems easier to hit after some testplays.

Side wrote:

[Apple's thing]

AR is fine but if the others drop significantly consider 9.5. :arrow: Would consider, but keeping this if other difficulties remain untouched.

OD 8.5? :( :arrow: Ehh... this OD is fine too I guess, I'll see what other people see.

HP7. No mercy for TV size farmers >:V (also btw you never really drain to death with HR unless you have bad acc and miss a few. This applies for pishi's diff too) :arrow: This difficulty is quite a challenge, especially for people who are not used to alternating. There are also some slow, not so dense, parts and I thought I'd be better to put 7.

00:06:846 (1) - Might work better stacked over 00:05:578 (1) - or even 00:07:268 (1) - imo. First one to indicate a pause from the small break or the 2nd one to indicate the pause into the shorter pause. :arrow: Well, I want to keep the triangle formation, so no fix.

01:02:197 (5) - Head missing clap I think like 01:03:887 (3) - :arrow: Fixed!

00:19:838 (4,1,2,3,4) - This isn't bad but I think something that would be neat would be something like this obcviously it could look much better. Basically (1) should start where 4 starts to emphasize the guitar note more naturally and then change add three pairs of 1/2 stacked notes. Maybe that last part with the stack notes you don't have to do but I definitely suggest removing 4 and moving 1 back there then adding a note at 00:20:155 - or changing this to a 1/2 slider etc. works better with the song. :arrow: I think you're idea is awesome, but monstrata is going to kill me if I add more stuff like that lol. I'll ask Milan- what he thinks about it.

00:28:605 (4) - remove clap. Doesn't follow the pattern from previously or the one from the song :arrow: Fixed!

01:00:823 (2,3,4,5,1) - Man that empty 01:01:035 - makes me sad since musically, it would normally be a pair with 01:00:929 (3) - and have a drum sample and whistle like that thing drums do with the high toms then low toms etc. Maybe try to connect this as a stream somehow. I think it could work. Something like this roughly :v :arrow: I actually had this rhythm before, but after thinking about it, I decided to remove it. The sound is there, but it's reaaaalllyyy soft. The sounds on the other notes are so much stronger, so I removed that one.

01:08:535 (3) - I think two notes would feel better imo but this isn't bad of course. :arrow: I like sliders :c

01:24:591 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is cool :v Would be cool if this was done more often in the diff though :( :arrow: see comment above hihi

@monster & undead: Ehhh i can pass with stacks, but I can see it might suck for some and it's not hanzer bc its a normal stack :cccc
idk but ill try to look for some testplays from some pro's and see what they think.
Asked for some testplays, keeping the stacks!
thanks to these wonderful people w





Thank you all for modding <3
pishifat
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SPOILER

Bearizm wrote:

pishi's Insane
  1. as expected, no real suggestions.
  2. except for this one xd 01:20:999 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - this plays a bit awkward due to the angle from 01:20:999 (2) - to 01:21:211 (1) - and where the flow is headed. it should be fine but it's a bit uhh.. not smooth i guess.but it's better than stacking them i guess you got a 1/1 gap to figure out how to play it it's k

pishi's Hard
  1. 00:03:465 (3) - Spacing error.
  2. 00:05:155 (3,1) - same. or are these intentional? adjusted them
  3. In general, from 00:09:063 (2) - to 00:20:683 - I think you should add some whistles so that it's obvious you're following the guitar because some of the drums are skipped such as at 00:15:929 -
Good luck!

Regraz wrote:

[pishi's Hard]
No Kiai Time ;w;? woops
00:01:353 (2,3) - Spacing quite larger, try to use the same spacing as 00:03:043 (2,3) - ya
Cool!

[pishi's Insane]
Just one thing:
00:27:443 (4,1) - Do not use enlarged spacing here? Since in this part there's no large spacing in similar rhythms. made 00:32:408 (5,6,1) - the same

-Lemons wrote:

pishi's hard
[*]Where's ur kiai xd yes
[*]00:32:514 (4) - idk if you wanted to make this a curve but if not move it here 150|125 i dunno what iwas doing sure

pishi's Insane
[*]Reminds me of Jinsei wa hoeru map from you weird how maps made by the smae mapper look the same w0w
[*]01:13:182 (3) - Move to like 337|186? triangle tho

Kewl stuff. Fav diff is pishi's Insane shit taste tbh

alacat wrote:

[pishi's Hard]
  1. You took many 1/4 rhythms (It's fine) So please try to set OD 6 for players. k
  2. 01:11:175 - I feel empty at here. You didn't take like this sound only here. It's better to take this sonud in my opinion! k
[pishi's Insane]
  1. Cool! just one thing, This difficulty is harder than Milan-'s. How about renaming to pishi's Extra or something ? It's good to me! k

Feb wrote:

11/10 for pishi shit taste here too

[fishhard]

ya no kiai ? but insane mate. my b

00:03:043 (2) - you might wanna move that up a bit, its almost offscreen. almost B)
01:25:013 (1) - break, I think this just bcs you forgot lel my b

[fishyinsane]

00:20:260 (2,3,4,5) - ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. pls give a nub like me a chance to play 280bpm ok. give it a little bit spacing just for me. will you? but its so beautiful

Side wrote:

[Pishi's Hard]

Consider AR7.5 here. I suppose you might say it works well because of the note density and BPM but idk compared to the other diffs I think 7.5 would be enough. Not a big deal though considering all the 284 sections are like doublebpm stuff using 8 is prob better

I think stack leniency at 7 is fine. I'd like to know if you had a reason for 10 though :o none really lol i just dont like direct stack stuff so 10 makes sure i have as little of those as possible (even tho it affected nothing on this map)

00:01:353 (2,3) - While this snap to 3 is cool idk if it would play naturally for players at this level. Consider having it somewhat like 00:03:043 (2,3) - or 00:04:733 (2,3) - I think it might be fine though idk. despite what it looks like they're play pretty similarly (like you click on the head then you move faster to the next object)


people do it in hards a lot and i think it's sexy

No real issues.

[pishi's Insane]

Consider lowering AR to 9.2. Maybe 9.3 at most imo. Especially if the previous diff dropped AR. Might seem minor but in this case not really since higher BPM with funky jumps and then pauses is a bit trippy at higher AR at least to me idk maybe I'm just bad :v 9.2'd k

Consider OD 8.5 especially if you choose NOT to change AR but would be nice to change anyway for teh pp would be higher than apple's so neh

HP7. Gotta be evil against those TV size farmers >:v lol higher than apppelse's tho


Honestly didn't see anything note-wise that would play awkwardly. I'm not the best at playing high BPM maps but I didn't do too badly here so I guess it's cool :v g

SPOILER
2015-10-30 12:47 pishifat: so do you wanna see how much i suck at your diff before i complain
2015-10-30 12:48 appleeaterx: suree xd
2015-10-30 12:49 pishifat: if i remember right
2015-10-30 12:49 pishifat: there were onl,y
2015-10-30 12:49 pishifat: 2 things that really annoyed me
2015-10-30 12:49 pishifat: more tinyannoying things but they arent as important
2015-10-30 12:49 appleeaterx: o
2015-10-30 12:49 appleeaterx: okii
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: so the stack thing that people complained about
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: did you see how
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: i fuckedup on the first one
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: and not the second one
2015-10-30 12:52 appleeaterx: yea
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: second one easier
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: cuz angle is sharper
2015-10-30 12:52 pishifat: if you can somehow make the first one sharper it's cake
2015-10-30 12:53 pishifat: 00:18:676 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - was the second gross thing
2015-10-30 12:53 pishifat: which i trained myself to play after failing on it 100 times lol
2015-10-30 12:54 pishifat: so u know how this 123 plays like poo https://i.gyazo.com/f784cbc613957ada1ba ... 948d1b.png
2015-10-30 12:54 appleeaterx: what played bad about it, cant really play this properly myself xd
2015-10-30 12:54 pishifat: pictures take time im slow
2015-10-30 12:55 pishifat: the first issue i have iwth it is
2015-10-30 12:55 pishifat: linearness of 00:18:676 (3,4,1) -
2015-10-30 12:55 pishifat: then with th 00:19:098 (1,2,3,4) -
2015-10-30 12:55 pishifat: you've gotta play it as if the reverses are hold sliders
2015-10-30 12:55 pishifat: which is super awkward if you dunno what's going on
2015-10-30 12:56 pishifat: i dunno how you play it actually but that's how ive started doing it since i played the map a bunch
2015-10-30 12:56 pishifat: basicaly would work better with non linear 341 and circles in the same directions as your reverse arrows like https://i.gyazo.com/8349c93588d20d5a1fa ... c8100e.png
2015-10-30 12:56 pishifat: which ruins your pattern so gg
2015-10-30 12:58 appleeaterx: i think i fixed those two last ones
2015-10-30 12:58 appleeaterx: still coming up with something for the stacks
2015-10-30 12:58 pishifat: .
2015-10-30 12:58 pishifat: the only other things are
2015-10-30 12:58 pishifat: ideas repeated everywhere so
2015-10-30 12:58 pishifat: cant really say they're bad
2015-10-30 12:59 pishifat: like 00:49:098 (3,4) - is kinda ew since i use sliderbodies to predict where the next object is gonna be a lot more on higher bpm stuff
2015-10-30 13:00 pishifat: so 4 being to the left of wehre 3 points screws my mind
2015-10-30 13:00 pishifat: although i dont know how many other people use the same idea so it's like ok
2015-10-30 13:02 appleeaterx: ok uhh
2015-10-30 13:02 appleeaterx: the stack thing is sharper
2015-10-30 13:02 appleeaterx: the last point i just rotated the slider a bit
2015-10-30 13:02 appleeaterx: butt
2015-10-30 13:02 appleeaterx: someone said i should use more stack things xd
2015-10-30 13:03 appleeaterx: do you agree or do you think monstrata would hate me for that
2015-10-30 13:03 pishifat: example
2015-10-30 13:04 pishifat: if it's not a wide angle i can play it fine
2015-10-30 13:04 pishifat: monstrata plays mouse only so i dunno how anything is playable for him lol
2015-10-30 13:05 appleeaterx: xdddd
2015-10-30 13:05 appleeaterx: uhh
2015-10-30 13:05 appleeaterx: 00:20:366 (3,4) - into circles
2015-10-30 13:06 appleeaterx: 00:54:169 (3,4) - same here
2015-10-30 13:07 pishifat: id say its okay to do that
2015-10-30 13:09 appleeaterx: okiii
2015-10-30 13:09 appleeaterx: one last thing
2015-10-30 13:09 appleeaterx: did you change the diff settings?
2015-10-30 13:09 pishifat: changed ar
2015-10-30 13:09 appleeaterx: because then ill need the change mine too
2015-10-30 13:09 pishifat: to 9.2
2015-10-30 13:09 pishifat: other stuff nope
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banana 01:24:591 (3,4,5,6) -

i think its cool

bye
Milan-
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Milan-
"Regraz"
M4M here! :D

[Advanced]
00:08:324 (4,1) - Blanket here :P yes
Actually I feel this 00:08:324 (4) - could be like 00:10:225 (5) - and 00:10:225 (5) - could be like 00:08:324 (4) - . (I think they should swap the rhythm due to the background music) i think it's the samme tbh xd
00:12:338 (1) - http://puu.sh/l2MQi/de2ca5a995.jpg The longs sliders are covering too much sounds which is quite weird with your overall rhythm setting. Try to split them. Same at 00:19:098 (1) - . i did it so i dont spam 1/1 uhm let me see if someone else agree ><
01:00:507 (1,2,1) - Re-arrange the spacing here. right

[Insane]
00:43:605 (2) - A little higher position would be better. it's not offscreen so it's fine
00:56:281 (8) - NC right i fucked up comboing xd
01:27:760 (1,2,1,2) - In one combo set? i think it's more readable and consistent this way

Cool song and map!
Good Luck!

"-Lemons"
For your queue
[notice]

  • Easy
  1. 00:47:830 (1) - Unsnapped ya
  2. 01:14:873 (1) - Curve maybe changed the flow instead

    advanced
  3. 00:03:043 (5,6) - I would make these 1/2 sliders uhm i didnt want to have much 1/2 in a row, hope it doesnt sound too bad ;w;
  4. 00:29:239 (7) - You could curve this around 5 ya
  5. 00:59:450 (5) - curve more for blanket? or just raise this up a bit yus

    Insane
  6. 00:05:578 (1) - move to 374|191? i just moved it a bit more down
  7. 01:18:042 (7) - Ctrl-J and put in same spot would flow not too well to the next slider i think

    Kewl stuff. Fav diff is pishi's Insane

"alacat"
Hey! from your queue ~

[General]
  1. Please add a video on Easy forgot xd
  2. "soft-hitwhistle" is a bit low about volume. try to use this one ! ok
[Collab Easy]
  1. HP Drain Rate +1. It's enough for beginner. pok
  2. 00:47:830 (1) - I guess it's snap error o.o xd
  3. 00:52:478 (2,3,4) - This ryhthm is a little hard for beginners. try to use my rhythm like this. You can use sounds with constant rhythm. or 00:52:478 (2,3) - these notes change to one slider. did 1 slider instead, did the same with 00:56:704 - then
    SPOILER
    I recommend you to write collab member to somewhere! right, map description
[Advanced]
  1. 00:13:183 (3) - I can hear the guitar sound at here 00:13:394 - So try to use 1/1 srhythm around here like this. It would fit well with this kind of music. did other rhythm cuz alternating was hard
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:366 (1) - This part looks crowded between 00:49:943 (3) - and 00:50:366 (1) - . Please use more spacing at both! ok
    SPOILER
really cool! feel free to poke me for bubble or something :) <3

"Feb"
k I might be bit rusty with modding. let's see

11/10 for pishi

[General]
this is on most diffs idk what they are supposed to do in lower diffs. they dont matter tbh xdd altho you can notice the volumen change a bit
71704,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
71809,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,70,0,0
72337,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
72443,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,71,0,0
what are these green lines o.o - kinda unnessecary.

87865,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
87971,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88077,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88182,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88288,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88394,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
^same. I don't get the purpose of them.
just bcs of volume change?

ya i copeaayy pasterino.

you could prolly add the main character names to tags even tho I think those are enough. right

[easy]
00:47:830 (1) - wat xd
00:53:535 (4) - this slider feels a bit weird to play idk ending it 1/1 beat before or after plays way nicer. idk prolly bcs of claps, i think sticking with the basic pattern works better? it's ok i think o.o

71704,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
71809,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,70,0,0
72337,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,40,0,0
72443,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,71,0,0
what are these green lines o.o - kinda unnessecary.

87865,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
87971,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88077,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88182,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
88288,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88394,-100,4,2,1,71,0,0
^same. I don't get the purpose of them.
just bcs of volume change? welp put in general tab since it occured almost in any diff.


[advanced ..]

00:28:605 (5,6,7) - ya I think you should nc this like your leaving out the vocal even tho its new. uh changed the nc'ng a bit so it makes sene with the vocals
00:22:479 (4) - ^
00:23:746 (1) - nc
00:26:915 (1) - nc
it prolly got fucked up now, but the vocal seems to me more important.

[insane not so insane]

00:43:605 (2) - can you move that a bit up, almost offscreen too. not offscreen so..
00:56:281 (1) - nc for vocal i think i reworked the nc i bit xd
01:16:880 (2) - not properly stacked ya
01:22:161 (2) - is this a thing? or is this just accidently stacked too like the one above. blame osu

did you really map anime tv size? wat
burn

gl toast xddx

"Side"
Hi for the M4M :V
SPOILER
[Collab Easy]

HP2? 1 is way too baby xD especially since it's not just like 2/1 slider spam easy there's actually movement and a few more notes so more drain would work. Maybe 1.5 I would say too. did 2

00:47:830 (1) - weird snap. Pretty sure it should end on 00:48:676 - to go with drum/vocals. blame osu

00:49:098 (2,3) - Probably not a big deal but you could make a nice triangle pattern anyway with consistent spacing. 1-2 looks kinda odd xd did better triangle with 00:51:211 (1) - tho

00:52:901 (3,4) - Personally I feel this wouldn't read very nicely to newer players. The best option would be making this a 3/1 slider/reverse. Unfortunately this also means changing some patterns so my suggestion is something like this ss2. For this example I changed 00:55:859 (2) - to a note and then made a 1/1 slider for 00:56:281 - Surely here are better options of course but I feel this pattern will play more naturally for newer players. uhm i dont get what is wrong here, it just follows vocals like the rest of my section ;w;


[Advanced]

00:46:351 (4) - Not wrong the way it is but stacking over 3 could add a nice effect. i was thinking that too, then i thought i'd be a bit hard to read cuz the randomness it'll generate to ill leave it as is i think

No real issues.

[Insane]

Consider AR 8.7 here. I could see AR9 working too but personally I dont like seeing baby insanes with AR9. I prefer them to be more like introductory insanes but still kinda like hards so I prefer seeing an in-between AR to compliment that transition. uhm but bpm is so hard to read with low ar ;w; newbies like me like playing ar9 tbh

Maybe round down OD to 7.5. I mean a change in 15ms is almost negligible and multiples of 5 look better anyway :v ok xd

00:08:007 (4,5) - Would work better as a 1/1 slider to compliment the guitar note. Would also work well as a quick rhythm adjustment kinda hard to explain this but basically cuz its high BPM something like this would allow players to adjust and keep going with the rhythm in mind idk it makes sense in my head but maybe I can't explain it well :p Basically like what you did 00:09:697 (4) - and 00:11:387 (5) - . right, but i wanted to make the first combo kinda "fast" so i went with 1/2 slider, hope it's cool ;w;

00:12:760 (3,4,1) - Consider this pattern. I say this because it better compliments the way the guitar plays while keeping the sense of rhythm you have for this section. uhm iirc i did this way cuz the drums and because guitar is more prominent on the downbeat here i think ><

00:20:260 (6,7,8,9) - Lol rude but it's nice :v added nc xd

No real issues though.

Anyway nice spread. No major issues anywhere (except that thing in the easy lol) looks pretty much ready for ranking imo. Thank you <33


Good luck with this! :)

thank you all <3

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damn Milan you're going crazy on these mods. 40 hours upload and 2 pages of mods already! O:

and my goodness pishi's making GIFs in mods now, gotta step up my modding game xddd
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thx side but i wanna keep it less d e n s e

pls rank
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