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Shindehai - ONE-PUNCH MAN FOREVER

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Yoges wrote:

You know I gave up on this map. Now I feel like working on it again!
<3
Lumael
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Joined December 2014
Lumael
Let's rank this!

BMaD's God

  1. 00:07:279 (4) - It'd be nice to have more emphasis on this beat by placing it further away to increase the jump because the jump to 00:07:753 (1) - seens too sudden as the prev. pattern was really plain like an Insane.
  2. 00:09:016 (6,1) - Swap NC here, I don't see a reason to put it on 00:09:174 - if the change on the song is actually on 00:09:016 - .
  3. 00:09:490 (4,5) - This jump is not right, you seemed to give too much importance for 00:09:648 (5) - while the strongest note here is 00:09:490 (4) - , you should give more emphasis to this one than the 5th note.
  4. 00:15:332 (1,1) - I don't see a valid explanation for this 1/4 slider, it sounds more a try to increase the difficulty of this extra, but it sounds completely awkward as the song don't provide any sound on the blue snap to make the slider ending there. If you manage to fix here, there are more times that you can find this issue so it'd be interesting to fix them as well.
  5. 00:15:332 (1) - This might not be a problem but why did you increase the slider velocity here? The rhythm is the same from the prev. parts and you didn't do it before.
  6. 00:22:911 (5) - The clap on the tail doesn't sound good for me, I know that from here the song starts to spam the claps more oftenly but on this beat especially I found it odd to play.
  7. 00:27:490 (1) - 00:29:858 (1) - 00:30:332 (1) - I didn't get the reason for the usage of NC here, you didn't use it at other similar places.
  8. 00:30:332 (1,3) - Swipe NC, probably missplaced on 00:30:332 - as the tone of the song changes at 00:30:648 -
  9. 00:33:016 (7,1) - ^
  10. 00:38:069 (6,1) - It's a bit awkward to reduce player's moviment here by stacking them, the beat on 00:38:227 - should get some emphasis and by stacking you treated it as a normal beat /me :cry:.
  11. 00:38:700 (3,4) - Control G on them play much better with the vocals.
  12. 00:43:121 (7,1) - Swipe the NC for the same reason mentioned above.
  13. 00:45:016 (1,1) - Remove those NCs and place one at 00:45:174 (2) - because this is where the music starts to change
  14. 00:52:437 (1) - I didn't get the usage of NC here, it would be nice if you added where the singer's voice resets on this stream like you did at 00:52:753 - and 00:52:121 - but the one at 00:52:437 - seemed randomly placed for me as nothing changes on this beat.
  15. 01:05:069 (3) - You should give more emphasis to this beat by placing it further away from the prev. note, the guitar is very strong there which asks for a higher spacing, don't you think so?
  16. 01:05:227 (1) - Why NC here? Nothing on the song suggest adding one here so I recommend you to remove it. If you still want a NC somewhere on this pattern, try 01:05:385 (2) - it's a good point to insert one.
  17. 01:15:174 (1) - Are you sure you want to place a clap here? It sounds very awkward as the song don't provide anything to cover the usage of a clap here.
  18. 01:13:595 - Stop kiai time here? I didn't get why you kept it until 01:16:595 -
  19. 01:15:490 (3,1) - Swipe NC to make it consistent with the prev. pattern.
  20. 01:15:648 - I can clearly hear the drums here, add circle?
  21. 01:16:595 (3) - Stacking it with 01:16:279 (1) - might not be a good idea... you should emphasize more this note by placing it further from 01:16:437 (2) - .
  22. 01:16:595 (3,1) - Swipe NC here as well, the 3rd note starts the other strong part of the song so it must be an NC, and the NC at 01:17:385 (1) - seens completely random to me. In fact all this section 01:16:279 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - has a completely random comboing, please remove all the NCs on this section I've just linked and add at: 01:17:858 - 01:19:121 - 01:20:385 - 01:21:648 - . See the difference? ^^
  23. 01:30:332 (3,1) - Swipe NC, thn swipe here 01:31:279 (5,1) - then here 01:31:911 (5,1) - to make the combo consistent.
  24. 01:32:542 (3,4) - Why have you added claps here?
  25. 01:41:385 (6,1) - Swipe NC, 01:42:016 (4,1) - 01:44:385 (7,1) - here too please.
  26. 01:47:069 (5,1) - ^
  27. 01:52:121 (3,1) - ^
  28. 01:53:700 (1,5) - ^ because of the vocals, same thing explained b4, also for consistency as you did this on the other part (b4 the first kiai).
  29. 01:58:279 (1,1) - ^
  30. No more NC from now, please rework hardly on it, it's the only thing that's not good on this diff.
  31. 02:00:648 (2,3) - This jump pattern is not so good, why did you give more emphasis to 02:00:806 (3) - than 02:00:648 (2) - ? It's clearly easy to see that this beat 02:00:648 - is much stronger than the other and it should have more emphasis than it.
  32. 02:03:174 (5,6) - ^ exacly the same thing
  33. 02:04:437 (1) - Are you sure you want to use a 1/1 slider here? You're making a strong beat on 02:04:753 - unclickable wich is really weird, normally the strong beats should be emphasized by placing them further away from the last note and by making them clickable as they're the downbeat of the song!
  34. 02:08:542 - Uhh, this break is a bit weird, the song is pretty fast here and making such break is annoying to play.
  35. 02:21:806 (1,2) - Control G those to play better the rhythm, I know that you were following the vocals with this pattern but the drums are clearly stronger and following them makes much more sense to me.
  36. 02:29:069 (5,6) - Spacing is a bit incosistent here as it seems that you emphasized this 02:29:227 (6) - more than 02:29:069 (5) - but in fact it should be the oposite as the drums kicks very hardly on 02:29:069 (5) - , so please invert the spacing here.
  37. 02:30:016 (3) - You should place this further away from 02:29:858 (2) - this beat need more emphasis and the current spacing is not bad but it's not good as well, it's too short for such a strong beat.
  38. 02:34:121 (6,7) - Same of 02:29:069 (5,6) -.
  39. 02:59:858 (2) - This is just a suggestion, but it would be cooler if you did a slider like 02:58:437 (1,3,5) - . I really liked this pattern.
  40. 03:48:648 (1) - I already mentioned this on the other kiai, I think you remember, about making the downbeat unclickable.
  41. 04:16:437 (5,6,1) - This pattern is not right, you emphasized more 04:16:753 - this beat but actually you should emphasize more 04:16:595 (6) - . I assume that you did this mistake because the NC is on the wrong place as well.


I liked this diff, but the NC seens to be a huge problem here, I strongly advise you to completely rework on it. Also some jumps where placed at the wrong place sometimes but I assume this happened because you comboed the wrong note and you did a jump on it as you assumed it was the right place while mapping, but in fact it wasn't D:

Good Luck!
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
@Yoges: Can you boost my AR, OD and HP all by 1. Thanks.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

DahplA wrote:

@Yoges: Can you boost my AR, OD and HP all by 1. Thanks.
Yeah sure. I'll do it when I come back from school.
BarkingMadDog
465 posts
Joined October 2013
BarkingMadDog

Lumael wrote:

Let's rank this!

BMaD's God

  1. 00:07:279 (4) - It'd be nice to have more emphasis on this beat by placing it further away to increase the jump because the jump to 00:07:753 (1) - seens too sudden as the prev. pattern was really plain like an Insane. fixed
  2. 00:09:016 (6,1) - Swap NC here, I don't see a reason to put it on 00:09:174 - if the change on the song is actually on 00:09:016 - . fixed
  3. 00:09:490 (4,5) - This jump is not right, you seemed to give too much importance for 00:09:648 (5) - while the strongest note here is 00:09:490 (4) - , you should give more emphasis to this one than the 5th note. fixed
  4. 00:15:332 (1,1) - I don't see a valid explanation for this 1/4 slider, it sounds more a try to increase the difficulty of this extra, but it sounds completely awkward as the song don't provide any sound on the blue snap to make the slider ending there. If you manage to fix here, there are more times that you can find this issue so it'd be interesting to fix them as well. fixed
  5. 00:15:332 (1) - This might not be a problem but why did you increase the slider velocity here? The rhythm is the same from the prev. parts and you didn't do it before. fixed
  6. 00:22:911 (5) - The clap on the tail doesn't sound good for me, I know that from here the song starts to spam the claps more oftenly but on this beat especially I found it odd to play. fixed
  7. 00:27:490 (1) - 00:29:858 (1) - 00:30:332 (1) - I didn't get the reason for the usage of NC here, you didn't use it at other similar places. fixed
  8. 00:30:332 (1,3) - Swipe NC, probably missplaced on 00:30:332 - as the tone of the song changes at 00:30:648 - fixed
  9. 00:33:016 (7,1) - ^ fixed
  10. 00:38:069 (6,1) - It's a bit awkward to reduce player's moviment here by stacking them, the beat on 00:38:227 - should get some emphasis and by stacking you treated it as a normal beat /me :cry:. fixed
  11. 00:38:700 (3,4) - Control G on them play much better with the vocals. fixed
  12. 00:43:121 (7,1) - Swipe the NC for the same reason mentioned above. fixed
  13. 00:45:016 (1,1) - Remove those NCs and place one at 00:45:174 (2) - because this is where the music starts to change fixed
  14. 00:52:437 (1) - I didn't get the usage of NC here, it would be nice if you added where the singer's voice resets on this stream like you did at 00:52:753 - and 00:52:121 - but the one at 00:52:437 - seemed randomly placed for me as nothing changes on this beat. fixed
  15. 01:05:069 (3) - You should give more emphasis to this beat by placing it further away from the prev. note, the guitar is very strong there which asks for a higher spacing, don't you think so? fixed
  16. 01:05:227 (1) - Why NC here? Nothing on the song suggest adding one here so I recommend you to remove it. If you still want a NC somewhere on this pattern, try 01:05:385 (2) - it's a good point to insert one. fixed
  17. 01:15:174 (1) - Are you sure you want to place a clap here? It sounds very awkward as the song don't provide anything to cover the usage of a clap here. fixed
  18. 01:13:595 - Stop kiai time here? I didn't get why you kept it until 01:16:595 - fixed
  19. 01:15:490 (3,1) - Swipe NC to make it consistent with the prev. pattern. fixed
  20. 01:15:648 - I can clearly hear the drums here, add circle? fixed
  21. 01:16:595 (3) - Stacking it with 01:16:279 (1) - might not be a good idea... you should emphasize more this note by placing it further from 01:16:437 (2) - . fixed
  22. 01:16:595 (3,1) - Swipe NC here as well, the 3rd note starts the other strong part of the song so it must be an NC, and the NC at 01:17:385 (1) - seens completely random to me. In fact all this section 01:16:279 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - has a completely random comboing, please remove all the NCs on this section I've just linked and add at: 01:17:858 - 01:19:121 - 01:20:385 - 01:21:648 - . See the difference? ^^ fixed
  23. 01:30:332 (3,1) - Swipe NC, thn swipe here 01:31:279 (5,1) - then here 01:31:911 (5,1) - to make the combo consistent. fixed
  24. 01:32:542 (3,4) - Why have you added claps here? removed
  25. 01:41:385 (6,1) - Swipe NC, 01:42:016 (4,1) - 01:44:385 (7,1) - here too please. fixed
  26. 01:47:069 (5,1) - ^ fixed
  27. 01:52:121 (3,1) - ^ fixed
  28. 01:53:700 (1,5) - ^ because of the vocals, same thing explained b4, also for consistency as you did this on the other part (b4 the first kiai). fixed
  29. 01:58:279 (1,1) - ^ fixed
  30. No more NC from now, please rework hardly on it, it's the only thing that's not good on this diff.
  31. 02:00:648 (2,3) - This jump pattern is not so good, why did you give more emphasis to 02:00:806 (3) - than 02:00:648 (2) - ? It's clearly easy to see that this beat 02:00:648 - is much stronger than the other and it should have more emphasis than it. fixed
  32. 02:03:174 (5,6) - ^ exacly the same thing fixed
  33. 02:04:437 (1) - Are you sure you want to use a 1/1 slider here? You're making a strong beat on 02:04:753 - unclickable wich is really weird, normally the strong beats should be emphasized by placing them further away from the last note and by making them clickable as they're the downbeat of the song! think they are fine
  34. 02:08:542 - Uhh, this break is a bit weird, the song is pretty fast here and making such break is annoying to play. fixed
  35. 02:21:806 (1,2) - Control G those to play better the rhythm, I know that you were following the vocals with this pattern but the drums are clearly stronger and following them makes much more sense to me. fixed
  36. 02:29:069 (5,6) - Spacing is a bit incosistent here as it seems that you emphasized this 02:29:227 (6) - more than 02:29:069 (5) - but in fact it should be the oposite as the drums kicks very hardly on 02:29:069 (5) - , so please invert the spacing here. fixed
  37. 02:30:016 (3) - You should place this further away from 02:29:858 (2) - this beat need more emphasis and the current spacing is not bad but it's not good as well, it's too short for such a strong beat. fixed
  38. 02:34:121 (6,7) - Same of 02:29:069 (5,6) -. fixed
  39. 02:59:858 (2) - This is just a suggestion, but it would be cooler if you did a slider like 02:58:437 (1,3,5) - . I really liked this pattern. no space for 4th
  40. 03:48:648 (1) - I already mentioned this on the other kiai, I think you remember, about making the downbeat unclickable. its fine
  41. 04:16:437 (5,6,1) - This pattern is not right, you emphasized more 04:16:753 - this beat but actually you should emphasize more 04:16:595 (6) - . I assume that you did this mistake because the NC is on the wrong place as wellfixed.


I liked this diff, but the NC seens to be a huge problem here, I strongly advise you to completely rework on it. Also some jumps where placed at the wrong place sometimes but I assume this happened because you comboed the wrong note and you did a jump on it as you assumed it was the right place while mapping, but in fact it wasn't D:

Good Luck!
thank u for mod ! http://puu.sh/knErr/13cd31e752.txt woo
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
heads up on metadata real quick, most of his compositions are under the name "Tai Wuang - Shindehai -" so use shindehai alone maybe? (even though he personally does not care)
and tai reflections is two words



no kd ok
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

_Gezo_ wrote:

heads up on metadata real quick, most of his compositions are under the name "Tai Wuang - Shindehai -" so use shindehai alone maybe? (even though he personally does not care)
and tai reflections is two words



no kd ok
ok
Silverboxer
670 posts
Joined December 2012
Silverboxer
From Silver's modding queue

Beginner

• 00:13:911 (5) - this slider looks uneven and angled slightly too sharply. maybe change to this: anchor 2 at 212,212; anchor 3 at 212,300; anchor 4 at 116,256.
• 00:17:858 (4,5) - the flow is odd for slider 5 and the notes before and after it. move it to the left and rotate it counterclockwise
• 00:24:174 (5) - blanket works fine but spacing doesn't look nice between 4 and 5 here. slider shape is good too, I just don't think it works here
• 00:40:595 (1) - this shape doesn't work for short sliders in my opinion, but this doesn't need to change
• 00:41:385 (2,3,4,5) - not good flow here, and may be confusing for beginner players. one possible suggestion: http://puu.sh/kpACw/9a83662969.jpg
• 01:26:700 (1) - slider looks too short for its intended shape?
• 01:35:542 (7) - fix blanket: second anchor to 482,185; third anchor to 460,128
• I am quite against a note leading into the back end of a slider such as 01:37:595 (2,3) or 01:43:911 (4,5). I feel like this plays much better with the sliders flipped. If nobody else has mentioned this then maybe it's just a silly preference on my part
• 01:47:069 (1) - slider looks too short for its intended shape. Make sure the last anchor is on the center of the sliderend when making nice shapes like this (if you want the slider the way it is then disregard this)
• 01:50:858 (7) - fix the blanket here (maybe anchor1 376,272; anchor2 396,236; anchor3 396,196)
• 01:57:016 (2) - fix blanket (just move middle anchor point a bot)
• 02:02:227 (2) - fix blanket
• 02:29:069 (2) - slider too short for its intended shape?
• 03:35:069 (3,4,5,6) - this plays better with note 6 on the right side of the next slider. this pattern looks odd the way it is now
Novice

• 00:54:963 (6) - why not put a circle here?
• 01:53:385 (3,4) - fix blanket
• 03:00:016 (5) - doesn't match anything in the song. delete this, and maybe add one at 03:00:174
• 04:03:174 (1) - should end at the next white tick.
• My only problem with this diff is that it is really click intensive for a Normal. I think it might be slightly too hard in some places but it's a really nice diff so I think it can stay how it is. I would consider making some patterns have less notes if it's brought up by other mods.
Advanced
• 00:30:490 (10,1) - catches me off-guard that it isn't one slider that starts where circle 10 is and ends where slider 1 does. consider changing it
• 00:34:279 (5,6) - these two should be swapped on the timeline. a slider fits better at 00:34:279 and a circle fits better at 00:34:595
• 00:42:016 (5) - move left one square
• 00:53:385 (1) - should be a slider like the next two notes
• 01:23:700 (7) - odd place to put a jump. there are other places more deserving of breaking the distance snap, but I don't think this makes sense. ctrl + g
• 01:31:753 (10,1) - catches me off-guard that it isn't one slider that starts where circle 10 is and ends where slider 1 does. consider changing it
• 01:32:858 (4) - change to circle and make slider 5 start at 01:33:016
• 01:34:121 (8,1) - same thing here ^
• 02:12:648 (2,3) - weird place to randomly ignore distance snap. it's not a bad pattern though, so it's not a problem.
• 02:26:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - a bit confusing for a Hard diff
• 02:48:253 (1) - start on previous red tick
• 03:50:701 (8,9) - maybe not so big of a jump here, there isn't as much emphasis on this note. maybe here? http://puu.sh/kpCTc/81c37bfb33.jpg
• 03:54:648 (4,5) - don't think this big of a jump fits here either
• 04:28:595 (3) - move this further to keep spacing consistent. this might look like 1/4 space here

This is already past my 10 minute limit of drain time I will mod. I added the rule after you left your map in the queue so if you want me to, I will come back and mod Professional and God. They are both really nice diffs but I have to take a break after the first three for now :o
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA

Silverboxer wrote:

Novice

• 00:54:963 (6) - why not put a circle here? Extended out the slider, so it's the same thing really.
• 01:53:385 (3,4) - fix blanket Not intended
• 03:00:016 (5) - doesn't match anything in the song. delete this, and maybe add one at 03:00:174 Yep, moved
• 04:03:174 (1) - should end at the next white tick. Can't. I need two beats worth of gap for spinner recovery.
• My only problem with this diff is that it is really click intensive for a Normal. I think it might be slightly too hard in some places but it's a really nice diff so I think it can stay how it is. I would consider making some patterns have less notes if it's brought up by other mods.
Thank you. I know it's a bit mashy, but it fits the song so it should be alright.

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374,312,170542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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318,153,172437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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59,109,192648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
I've made the decision to remap the beginner and the professional. So... sorry to make you waste your time modding them.
Lumie's also told me that he wants to remap the advanced lol

Silverboxer wrote:

From Silver's modding queue

This is already past my 10 minute limit of drain time I will mod. I added the rule after you left your map in the queue so if you want me to, I will come back and mod Professional and God. They are both really nice diffs but I have to take a break after the first three for now :o That would be appreciated ^^. I'll send you a message when all diffs have been remapped
Zerss
730 posts
Joined December 2013
Zerss

PLACEHOLDER: I WANT MY BANANA DZAOND?KJZALNFHJDBZAJHFZA

send me a pm or sth like that when the maps are remapped :3
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Z e r s s wrote:


PLACEHOLDER: I WANT MY BANANA DZAOND?KJZALNFHJDBZAJHFZA

send me a pm or sth like that when the maps are remapped :3
No problem! Your help is appreciated ^^.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
The dragon's going to take longer than I thought to remap. I've done the intro and first section like 7-8 times now. I'm literally trying to get it to a state where it's unmodable.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
I've decided not to remap it because after repeated attempts to remap this my creativity is absolutely exhausted. I'm literally out of ideas for this. I've just decided to stick with the previous version, since so many of you liked it (I'm still not happy with it tho).
Thanks to lummie who provided me with the old diff because I was retarded and didn't make a backup copy when I started remapping ;w;
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
Are we ready to go?
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Lumael wrote:

Are we ready to go?
Yeah
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
ok m4m from a long time that I'm doing now

im pissed rn so im using the shitty proper sentence structure and spelling and shit so yea take this once-in-a-lifetime chance or whatever

General

  1. If I was the BN I'd say to change diff names or at least take the (x) shit out
  2. anime and japanese dont need to be in tag
  3. put the anime name in source
  4. add the non-romanised artist and title in
  5. Your offset is fucked ask pishi it should be at 00:00:963 - the first 2 notes aka 00:01:595 (1,2) - are called pickup notes in music theory

Beginner

  1. 00:40:122 (4,1) - fucked rhythm consider changing to something more natural like making 4 into a 1/2 slider with a repeat and bringing the slider to the respective D.S.
  2. 00:41:385 (2,1) - f
  3. 00:44:542 (4) - lazy mapping leaving the part after this blank
  4. 00:55:753 (1) - combos are redundant cut all of the combos by 1/2 in length
  5. 01:03:490 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is fucked to play in an easy consider using sliders instead of circles
  6. 01:38:542 (3,4,5,1) - this looks so cluttered try using a curved flow for the circles instead pretty sure that looks less fucked
  7. 01:45:805 - you're consistent but it's so weird leaving it blank
  8. 01:54:647 - this is literally lazy mapping tbh idk
  9. 02:19:437 (3,5) - ask sukinathan why this is shit
  10. 02:55:121 (5,1) - dropoff looks fucked and probably plays fucked
  11. 03:30:648 (1,2) - switch ncs the next measure is at 2 not 1
  12. 03:36:016 (1,2) - ^

Dragon

  1. The spacing emphasis is so whack in the intro the snares have the lower spacing and the weaker notes are spaced farther
  2. 00:27:490 (7,8) - why
  3. 00:30:015 (1,3) - next measure is at 3 not 1
  4. 00:30:963 (4,6) - ask sukinathan why this is shit v2.0
  5. 00:31:753 (1,2) - this overlap looks ugly and would look better if it wasnt so close im 600% sure
  6. 00:37:595 (7,8) - why v2.0
  7. 00:37:279 (6,8) - this is also touching and it's like no
  8. 00:41:858 (5,6) - man
  9. compare ^ to 00:44:069 (4,5) -
  10. 00:50:858 (1,2,3,4) - completely ignored stream but mapped the stream right after this
  11. 01:00:016 (6,2,4) - wtf
  12. 01:05:542 (2,4) - wtf v2.0
  13. 01:08:858 (6,7) - wtf v3.0
  14. 01:26:700 (1) - can you make the parts of this slider all even it's so f
  15. 01:38:858 (7,8) - isweartogod
  16. 01:46:437 (1,2,3) - is mapped but not 01:52:121 (3) - a
  17. 02:00:963 (5,2) - idk why you like to do this
  18. 02:04:437 (5,6) - like
  19. 02:06:332 (5,3) - really
  20. 02:07:595 (1,4) - stop hurting me
  21. 02:10:121 (9) - it hurts
  22. 02:18:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so much
  23. 02:21:332 (4,4,4) - it hurts too much (stronger beat on sliderend is complete shit in almost every instance that exists)
  24. 02:39:490 (5,1) - new measure is at 5 not 1
  25. 02:43:279 (1,3) - ask sukinathan v3.0
  26. 02:52:911 (5) - this is too much
  27. 02:55:437 (8) - for me
  28. 02:56:700 (4,6) - to handle
  29. 02:58:121 (4,1) - man this is making me even more pissed than I am now fuck
  30. 03:24:963 (1,2) - wtf
  31. 03:26:069 (1) - missed strong beat in slider ok
  32. 03:29:227 (2,4) - ask sukinathan v5.652
  33. 03:34:911 (5,6,7) - im gunna kill myself
  34. 03:36:174 (3) - you miss a strong beat right in the middle of the slider and the slider is off by 1 ms if you give a shit about that
  35. 03:51:016 (2,4) - can i stop modding already
  36. 03:54:332 (6,1) - no emphasis change in the song ok
  37. 04:02:858 (1,2) - flow is fucked by this
  38. 04:02:385 (4,1,3) - ok bye gunna go kill myself now
  39. 04:20:069 (8,1) - fucking
  40. 04:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what am i looking at
  41. ok
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
Lumael's Deamon?
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

DahplA wrote:

Lumael's Deamon?
Woops I need to change that.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Mishima Yurara wrote:

ok m4m from a long time that I'm doing now Is there a map I have to mod? Or this a courtesy of someone? I don't see you in my queue.

im pissed rn so im using the shitty proper sentence structure and spelling and shit so yea take this once-in-a-lifetime chance or whatever

General

  1. If I was the BN I'd say to change diff names or at least take the (x) shit out The stuff inside the brackets? No that would make the diff names unrankable. If you're referring to the stuff outside the brackets then also as they're a nice reference for anyone who's read the manga.
  2. anime and japanese dont need to be in tag Ok
  3. put the anime name in source It's fan made it's not from the anime
  4. add the non-romanised artist and title in I had the non-romanised artist and title in before. The guy's french. He does not use non-romanised artist name. He's usually referred to as "Tai Shindehai Wuang", "Tai Shindehai" or most commonly as just "Shindehai".
  5. Your offset is fucked ask pishi it should be at 00:00:963 - the first 2 notes aka 00:01:595 (1,2) - are called pickup notes in music theory Oh you're right. That's much better. It doesn't sound all weird in the 2nd half now.

Beginner

  1. 00:40:122 (4,1) - fucked rhythm consider changing to something more natural like making 4 into a 1/2 slider with a repeat and bringing the slider to the respective D.S.
  2. 00:41:385 (2,1) - f I understand you're pissed but like how the fuck am I meant to see what you think is wrong with a fucking lower case "f"
  3. 00:44:542 (4) - lazy mapping leaving the part after this blank
  4. 00:55:753 (1) - combos are redundant cut all of the combos by 1/2 in length Changed somewhat
  5. 01:03:490 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is fucked to play in an easy consider using sliders instead of circles It's meant to me a normal and nah
  6. 01:38:542 (3,4,5,1) - this looks so cluttered try using a curved flow for the circles instead pretty sure that looks less fucked
  7. 01:45:805 - you're consistent but it's so weird leaving it blank
  8. 01:54:647 - this is literally lazy mapping tbh idk
  9. 02:19:437 (3,5) - ask sukinathan why this is shit Yeah I see the awkward flow.
  10. 02:55:121 (5,1) - dropoff looks fucked and probably plays fucked Fixed
  11. 03:30:648 (1,2) - switch ncs the next measure is at 2 not 1 Fixed
  12. 03:36:016 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
Blank = Not changed

Dragon

  1. The spacing emphasis is so whack in the intro the snares have the lower spacing and the weaker notes are spaced farther
  2. 00:27:490 (7,8) - why Guitar
  3. 00:30:015 (1,3) - next measure is at 3 not 1 Fixed
  4. 00:30:963 (4,6) - ask sukinathan why this is shit v2.0
  5. 00:31:753 (1,2) - this overlap looks ugly and would look better if it wasnt so close im 600% sure Spaced a bit
  6. 00:37:595 (7,8) - why v2.0 Guitar v2.0
  7. 00:37:279 (6,8) - this is also touching and it's like no Spaced a bit
  8. 00:41:858 (5,6) - man Spaced
  9. compare ^ to 00:44:069 (4,5) -
  10. 00:50:858 (1,2,3,4) - completely ignored stream but mapped the stream right after this
  11. 01:00:016 (6,2,4) - wtf Ouch, fixed
  12. 01:05:542 (2,4) - wtf v2.0 Fixed
  13. 01:08:858 (6,7) - wtf v3.0 Don't see what's wrong there
  14. 01:26:700 (1) - can you make the parts of this slider all even it's so f
  15. 01:38:858 (7,8) - isweartogod OuO
  16. 01:46:437 (1,2,3) - is mapped but not 01:52:121 (3) - a
  17. 02:00:963 (5,2) - idk why you like to do this the 5 is gone by the time the 2 appears
  18. 02:04:437 (5,6) - like Nothing wrong here
  19. 02:06:332 (5,3) - really Fixed
  20. 02:07:595 (1,4) - stop hurting me I hope that eased your pain
  21. 02:10:121 (9) - it hurts Good
  22. 02:18:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so much Very good
  23. 02:21:332 (4,4,4) - it hurts too much (stronger beat on sliderend is complete shit in almost every instance that exists)
  24. 02:39:490 (5,1) - new measure is at 5 not 1 Fixed
  25. 02:43:279 (1,3) - ask sukinathan v3.0
  26. 02:52:911 (5) - this is too much
  27. 02:55:437 (8) - for me
  28. 02:56:700 (4,6) - to handle
  29. 02:58:121 (4,1) - man this is making me even more pissed than I am now fuck
  30. 03:24:963 (1,2) - wtf
  31. 03:26:069 (1) - missed strong beat in slider ok
  32. 03:29:227 (2,4) - ask sukinathan v5.652
  33. 03:34:911 (5,6,7) - im gunna kill myself
  34. 03:36:174 (3) - you miss a strong beat right in the middle of the slider and the slider is off by 1 ms if you give a shit about that
  35. 03:51:016 (2,4) - can i stop modding already
  36. 03:54:332 (6,1) - no emphasis change in the song ok
  37. 04:02:858 (1,2) - flow is fucked by this
  38. 04:02:385 (4,1,3) - ok bye gunna go kill myself now
  39. 04:20:069 (8,1) - fucking
  40. 04:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what am i looking at
  41. ok
After going through that mod I feel like remapping again.
nhlx
194 posts
Joined January 2014
nhlx
some mod idk

i can only mod extra ;;

bmd's god (expert):
("how about's" are suggestions, just some minor things that would make map look preetier you don't have to accept)

00:05:700 (2) - this goes out of the screen when you play HR

00:10:753 (2) - not stacked to the slider

00:09:963 (7,8,9) - how about stacking this to 00:11:542 (1) - ?

00:17:227 (4) - how about stacking it to 00:17:858 (1) - sliderend?

00:22:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about

00:25:911 (2) - missing hitclap

00:42:016 (1) - how about

01:22:437 (3) - goes slightly out of the screen on HR

01:55:437 (3) - unnecessary hitclap

03:00:963 (1) - how about a hitfinish on this?

04:14:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this stream would look nicer if it was a bit curvier imo: like this

04:24:332 (3) - unnecessary hitclap

great map! looking forward to see this ranked
BarkingMadDog
465 posts
Joined October 2013
BarkingMadDog

Raikozen wrote:

some mod idk

i can only mod extra ;;

bmd's god (expert):
("how about's" are suggestions, just some minor things that would make map look preetier you don't have to accept)

00:05:700 (2) - this goes out of the screen when you play HR moved a bit

00:10:753 (2) - not stacked to the slider now stacks

00:09:963 (7,8,9) - how about stacking this to 00:11:542 (1) - ? stacks

00:17:227 (4) - how about stacking it to 00:17:858 (1) - sliderend? stacked

00:22:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about changed

00:25:911 (2) - missing hitclap added

00:42:016 (1) - how about fixed

01:22:437 (3) - goes slightly out of the screen on HR moved a bit down

01:55:437 (3) - unnecessary hitclap removed

03:00:963 (1) - how about a hitfinish on this? added

04:14:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this stream would look nicer if it was a bit curvier imo: like this now more curvier .. ;^)

04:24:332 (3) - unnecessary hitclap removed

great map! looking forward to see this ranked
Thanks! http://puu.sh/kyePO/f606330228.txt
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
hoyl fuk im sory L oL

u modded no title from a l o n g time ago or smt h and i didnt mod for a long time till now lolz
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Mishima Yurara wrote:

hoyl fuk im sory L oL

u modded no title from a l o n g time ago or smt h and i didnt mod for a long time till now lolz
Oh yeah. That was over a month ago mate. You took your fucking time.

Mishima Yurara wrote:

hoyl fuk
What is that?
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
BMD's God (Expert)

00:04:120 (1,2) A perfect stack would look way cooler
00:24:489 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) This stream looks kinda weird. First its curvy and then it gets kinda straight which looks strange. You should keep it curvy for a nice flow in the stream
00:25:436 (1,2) I dont think this 3/4 is necessary. Feels kinda forced
00:29:857 (1) NC is not necessary
00:55:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) There are many more beautifull patterns for streams than this, this looks strange
01:43:595 (2,5) NC on both

Dragon (Professional)

00:04:120 (1,2,3) A bit more distance would be nice here
00:20:384 (1,3) This overlap doesnt really look nice imo
00:27:489 (7,8) Is the SV-change really necessary? And when yes, please NC
00:31:752 (1,2) A better blank would let this pattern look better (otherwise they are pretty close anyway)
00:37:594 (7,8) NC is you want to keep sv
01:00:015 (6,2) Would look better if they wouldnt touch each other
01:05:541 (2,4) ^
01:28:752 (7,8) NC if you want to keep sv
01:38:857 (7,8) ^
02:21:015 (2,3,4) All those stacks take out the good movement you had throughout the map
02:21:331 (4,5,6) They should start on the white tick before, it fits more with the claps, they should be clickable
02:26:384 (4) ^
02:31:436 (4,5,6) ^ (Its really better if they would start on the white tick)
02:48:015 Are you sure about ignoring this beat? Seems kinda important to me


Awesome Mapset. Sadly you couldnt get this map ranked with ONE MOD! haha

No really. Good Luck! :3
BarkingMadDog
465 posts
Joined October 2013
BarkingMadDog

Come[Back]Home wrote:

BMD's God (Expert)

00:04:120 (1,2) A perfect stack would look way cooler stacked
00:24:489 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) This stream looks kinda weird. First its curvy and then it gets kinda straight which looks strange. You should keep it curvy for a nice flow in the stream well changed the whole stream pattern now, so it better be decent now zz
00:25:436 (1,2) I dont think this 3/4 is necessary. Feels kinda forced note above relevant, so no change
00:29:857 (1) NC is not necessary fixed
00:55:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) There are many more beautifull patterns for streams than this, this looks strange it looks decent now i guess
01:43:595 (2,5) NC on both fixed

No really. Good Luck! :3
thank you!!11 kapa123 8-)

http://puu.sh/kMI11/7e543b2289.txt
Last edited by BarkingMadDog , edited 2 times in total.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Dragon (Professional)

00:04:120 (1,2,3) A bit more distance would be nice here Done
00:20:384 (1,3) This overlap doesnt really look nice imo They're supposed to be blanketed
00:27:489 (7,8) Is the SV-change really necessary? And when yes, please NC I had them NC'd before. They probably got deleted when I restored the backup I had.
00:31:752 (1,2) A better blank would let this pattern look better (otherwise they are pretty close anyway) Done
00:37:594 (7,8) NC is you want to keep sv OuO
01:00:015 (6,2) Would look better if they wouldnt touch each other I want to keep the diamond pattern but Idk how to do it without those notes touching each other OnO
01:05:541 (2,4) ^ ^
01:28:752 (7,8) NC if you want to keep sv NCd
01:38:857 (7,8) ^ ^
02:21:015 (2,3,4) All those stacks take out the good movement you had throughout the map It fits the music tho
02:21:331 (4,5,6) They should start on the white tick before, it fits more with the claps, they should be clickable No, I'm following the vocals. Following the vocals in this section gives the map a sort of off beatness that really fits well with the music.
02:26:384 (4) ^ ^
02:31:436 (4,5,6) ^ (Its really better if they would start on the white tick) ^
02:48:015 Are you sure about ignoring this beat? Seems kinda important to me Fine, Since so many mods complain about that I'll add a note.


Awesome Mapset. Sadly you couldnt get this map ranked with ONE MOD! haha

No really. Good Luck! :3
Thanks for your mod ^.^/
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Increased the AR on the Demon to 8 as suggested by krfway
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Pretty odd song in order to adjust the metronome. Lyrics aren't going with the natural pace of the melody in almost the whole song, but I based my timing on the downbeats of the battery:

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
2236,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
5393,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
73603,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
76760,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
117023,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,1
134865,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
138022,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
196127,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
201179,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
218863,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
221231,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,1
239073,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
243336,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
245230,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
265598,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0

Added +10 to your general offset as well. I hope it works well!
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Deif wrote:

Pretty odd song in order to adjust the metronome. Lyrics aren't going with the natural pace of the melody in almost the whole song, but I based my timing on the downbeats of the battery:

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
2236,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
5393,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
73603,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
76760,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
117023,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,1
134865,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
138022,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
196127,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
201179,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
218863,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
221231,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,1
239073,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
243336,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
245230,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
265598,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0

Added +10 to your general offset as well. I hope it works well!
Made some slight changes because i still feel some parts weren't timed properly.

New Timing
[TimingPoints]
1288,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
5393,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
53393,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
55919,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
73603,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
76760,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
114654,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
117180,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
134865,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
138022,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
140548,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
143074,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
145600,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
148126,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
150652,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
153178,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
155706,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
158232,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
196127,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
201179,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
218863,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
221388,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
239073,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
245388,315.789473684211,4,1,1,56,1,0
265598,315.789473684211,3,1,1,56,1,0
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
Checked over my diff. I think everything timing-wise is fine. However, one of my Kiai ends is unsnapped. I'd appreciate it if you could fix this for me, since it's probably easier for the host to do it. Thanks.
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Nice way to name the diff, Mr. Yoges.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Nice way to name the diff, Mr. Yoges.
OuO
Zectro
371 posts
Joined April 2013
Zectro
Heya, m4m from your queue

[General]
I don't really like the normal-hitnormal. I don't think it fits this song too well, I like Asturo's hitsounding fit way better

[C-Class]
didn't really look at this for too long but I noticed these little thingies lol

  1. Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes): 02:18:022 -
  2. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s): 02:18:022 -
  3. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
    01:13:594 -
    01:47:069 -
    01:52:121 -
    02:14:857 -
    03:11:069 -
    03:13:595 -
    03:59:068 -
  4. 00:51:814 (2) - Fix spacing


[Alpha's B-Class]
  1. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped: 03:16:121 -

[Lumael's A-Class]
  1. Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes):
    00:53:393 -
    03:21:179 -
  2. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
    00:53:393 -
    03:21:179 -
  3. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
    00:55:752 -
    02:38:226 -
    03:28:753 -
  4. 00:25:287 (8,1) - This jump feels very sudden, I highly suggest moving 00:25:445 (1) - closer to 00:25:287 (8) - or the other way around.
  5. 00:27:498 (6,7,3,4) - These could be the same rotation tbh
  6. 02:48:021 (2,1) - Same as 00:25:287 (8,1) -
  7. 03:19:837 (1) - Why is this nc? Wouldn't it be more logical to nc 03:19:916 (2) - ?
  8. Can't really find much, diff seems great


[Asturo's S-Class]
  1. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
    00:55:919 -
    03:21:179 -
  2. 01:07:603 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh these jumps don't really fit, maybe come up with something else, since the current ones feel too standard and stuff idk how to explain
  3. 01:47:075 (1) - This looks pretty bad
  4. Nice diff, seems fine


[estellia's S-Class+]
  1. Imo od8 would fit better
  2. Concurent volume value for red-green line: 00:53:393 -
  3. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped: 01:26:699 -
  4. 03:17:548 (1,2,3,4) - Following the vocals here and leaving 03:18:653 - empty since you want to follow the guitar again is confusing
  5. Not much major issues in this one either


[BMD's X-Class]
  1. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
    02:14:865 -
    02:18:022 -
    02:38:232 -
    03:21:179 -
  2. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped: 01:54:647 -
  3. 00:19:603 (3,4) - I don't recommend doing this since you barely do it in the rest of the map
  4. 00:35:077 (4,5) - A bit more spacing between these would flow better
  5. 00:53:550 (2,2) - Consider making these 2/4 sliders for better flow
  6. 01:12:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too much jumps, you can barely differentiate the normal jumps from the jumps that follow the vocals, at least consider making 01:13:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - different
  7. 02:47:705 (1,2,3) - You sure about this?
  8. 03:18:653 (1,2,5) - Idk about these man haha, wont mention more of these in the future since that seems pointless
  9. The jumps kinda get repetitive in throughout the whole map :/


Nice job on this mapset, seems like it's going to be ready soon so good luck!

sorry for kinda short mod btw, ill shoot a star even though you don't really seem too need more sp haha
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Zectro wrote:

Heya, m4m from your queue

[General]
I don't really like the normal-hitnormal. I don't think it fits this song too well, I like Asturo's hitsounding fit way better Fine since everyone complains about it there ya go it's gone.

[C-Class]
didn't really look at this for too long but I noticed these little thingies lol

  1. Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes): 02:18:022 -
  2. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s): 02:18:022 -
  3. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
    01:13:594 -
    01:47:069 -
    01:52:121 -
    02:14:857 -
    03:11:069 -
    03:13:595 -
    03:59:068 -
  4. 00:51:814 (2) - Fix spacing


[Alpha's B-Class]
  1. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped: 03:16:121 -

All fixed ^

Nice job on this mapset, seems like it's going to be ready soon so good luck!

sorry for kinda short mod btw, ill shoot a star even though you don't really seem too need more sp haha
BarkingMadDog
465 posts
Joined October 2013
BarkingMadDog

Zectro wrote:

Heya, m4m from your queue

[BMD's X-Class]
  1. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s): Fixed
    02:14:865 - ^
    02:18:022 - ^
    02:38:232 - ^
    03:21:179 - ^
  2. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped: 01:54:647 - Snapped
  3. 00:19:603 (3,4) - I don't recommend doing this since you barely do it in the rest of the map I do not see anything wrong with it.
  4. 00:35:077 (4,5) - A bit more spacing between these would flow better I do not really see the need, but I increased tiny bit which is barely noticeable if that helps..
  5. 00:53:550 (2,2) - Consider making these 2/4 sliders for better flow No
  6. 01:12:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too much jumps, you can barely differentiate the normal jumps from the jumps that follow the vocals, at least consider making 01:13:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - different I will keep as it is. Though I decreased the spacings on 01:12:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - .
  7. 02:47:705 (1,2,3) - You sure about this? Yes
  8. 03:18:653 (1,2,5) - Idk about these man haha, wont mention more of these in the future since that seems pointless No
  9. The jumps kinda get repetitive in throughout the whole map :/ Sorry. Everyone has a different taste.


Nice job on this mapset, seems like it's going to be ready soon so good luck!

sorry for kinda short mod btw, ill shoot a star even though you don't really seem too need more sp haha
> http://puu.sh/lFCOS/11ca2bb2cf.txt <
-Xephyr-
30 posts
Joined August 2013
-Xephyr-
I was looking through modding queues to get a better idea of how to get a map modded for later reference, but I liked this map a lot and wanted to throw in my two cents about the S difficulty since you said in a post that it hasn't gotten a lot of mods. I might do a M4M at some point but I'm not 100% on how everything works with this and I'm a fairly new mapper so I didn't want to waste anyone's time at first.

00:22:603 (3) - This part, as well as the one right below this, are the only 2 places that have 8th sliders instead of streams. The song is kind of mapped and set up that it seems like there should be a stream instead of 8th sliders during the snare rolls, as the mapper does it every single time except for those two. Since the song is upbeat and heavier (and, well, One Punch Man), maybe keep the streams here.
02:47:705 (1) - ^^^. It's less of a problem here though, I can see the 8th sliders working better since they come after small reverse ones.

01:07:603 (2) - I personally don't think this jump pattern fits the map, there's nothing else really like it, everything similar has at least a little angle to it.

01:25:602 (1) - I don't care for the break between the stream here. It tripped me up until I looked at the editor. It does make sense with the music but the mapping has very few pauses except for when it makes sense with the vocals so it caught me off guard.

02:34:599 (3) - Not really sure what this longer slider is going for. It does make sense with the general flow but the more I played it the more out of place it seemed. This entire part is a buildup and longer sliders come right after that one after the end of the buildup, so it felt strange after repeated playthroughs.

02:38:232 (1) - Just have to say this part is awesome.

03:21:179 (1) - The slowdown on all of the sliders brings the map to too much of a halt during this part, the song is still epic through this part even though it is a lot of long notes. I agree with some of the longer notes, like the first and third sliders, but maybe speed parts like the second slider up to go with the vocals and buildup better. Quarter Note sliders may be too fast but in general some just seem too slow during this part.

04:01:915 (1) - Possibly shift this jump pattern upwards a little bit to follow his voice and get an effect like at 01:13:603 (1) - or 03:11:074 (1) - .

Overall really enjoyed the map.
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Atsuro

Zectro wrote:

[Asturo's S-Class]
  1. Concurent volume value for red-green line(s): This isn't something that needs changing but ok i guess
    00:55:919 -
    03:21:179 -
  2. 01:07:603 (2,3,4,5,6) - tbh these jumps don't really fit, maybe come up with something else, since the current ones feel too standard and stuff idk how to explain Made something slightly different
  3. 01:47:075 (1) - This looks pretty bad Made a blanket thingy
  4. Nice diff, seems fine
Thanks!

BronzeXephyr wrote:

00:22:603 (3) - This part, as well as the one right below this, are the only 2 places that have 8th sliders instead of streams. The song is kind of mapped and set up that it seems like there should be a stream instead of 8th sliders during the snare rolls, as the mapper does it every single time except for those two. Since the song is upbeat and heavier (and, well, One Punch Man), maybe keep the streams here.
02:47:705 (1) - ^^^. It's less of a problem here though, I can see the 8th sliders working better since they come after small reverse ones. It's mostly for variety, flow, and to keep the star difficulty a bit lower. Also the second one goes really nicely with the song

01:07:603 (2) - I personally don't think this jump pattern fits the map, there's nothing else really like it, everything similar has at least a little angle to it. Changed with previous mod

01:25:602 (1) - I don't care for the break between the stream here. It tripped me up until I looked at the editor. It does make sense with the music but the mapping has very few pauses except for when it makes sense with the vocals so it caught me off guard. Do you mean that the 1 beat break is confusing? If thats what you meant i increased the spacing between the circles and the stream and added a NC on the stream to make it more obvious

02:34:599 (3) - Not really sure what this longer slider is going for. It does make sense with the general flow but the more I played it the more out of place it seemed. This entire part is a buildup and longer sliders come right after that one after the end of the buildup, so it felt strange after repeated playthroughs. It's meant to keep the flow going and keep a steady and easy to play rhythm i thinks

02:38:232 (1) - Just have to say this part is awesome. Thanks!

03:21:179 (1) - The slowdown on all of the sliders brings the map to too much of a halt during this part, the song is still epic through this part even though it is a lot of long notes. I agree with some of the longer notes, like the first and third sliders, but maybe speed parts like the second slider up to go with the vocals and buildup better. Quarter Note sliders may be too fast but in general some just seem too slow during this part. I want to keep this part slow, as a build up. Also, if i use different SVs on the same section of the song it would end up being confusing to play

04:01:915 (1) - Possibly shift this jump pattern upwards a little bit to follow his voice and get an effect like at 01:13:603 (1) - or 03:11:074 (1) - . Not a bad idea

Overall really enjoyed the map.
Thanks! Nice mod for your first one

Edit: Forgot my update http://puu.sh/lFT9P/0921a088d4.rar
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Atsu could you just give me the code in future?
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Modding back!

  • General
  1. I suggest you to specify in the description the difficulty level of each diff as they have custom names. I wasn't sure about which one was meant to be a hard diff, hard+, insane, extra, etc. :o
[Alpha's B-Class]
  1. 00:16:129 (3,4,5) - I think this pattern would play and look better if you spread it like this:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:22:129 (5) - I think this circle would follow up 00:21:656 (4) better if placed more like this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:22:445 (6,7) - And here the flow could improve if you spread this pattern a bit more :)
    SPOILER
  4. 00:30:024 (4) - How about changing this slider's curve like this to follow up 00:30:498 (1) ?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:03:971 (2,3,4) - How about spreading this pattern like the previous examples I've given you?
  6. 02:14:865 (1,2,3,4) - Well these overlaps look ugly and lack flow imo. I recommend you to change these like this:
    (1) and (2)
  7. (3) and (4)
  8. 03:49:440 (2,3,4) - Spread out this pattern as well?
  9. 04:07:282 (6,7,1) - ↑?


    I think this diff can improve mainly by spreading slightly some patterns to increase the flow.
    I'm sorry if I bothered you with flow stuff and too many pictures. I'm kinda bad at explaining with words how to improve a pattern's flow.

[Lumael's A-Class]
  1. 00:24:656 (6) - How about adding a NC to fit the music? this will also help the player to notice that this slider starts here and not earlier.
  2. 00:55:761 (1) - I think that this slider is too far away from 00:55:287 (6) according to your previous spacings. Consider moving it slightly closer to (6).
  3. 01:22:917 (4) - This slider breaks the rhythm you've been following with your previous notes so far so I suggest you to try something better here as this slider looks lazy :P perhaps something like this:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:41:076 (5,6,7) - This doesn't flow good at all. I suggest you to try rearranging this spacing to improve the flow here. I suggest you this placement but it's up to you! I only changed (6)'s curve slightly:
    SPOILER
  5. 01:48:338 (1) - I don't see this NC necessary here, so I suggest you to remove it.
  6. 01:54:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo gets too long in my opinion. How about adding NC to 01:55:917 (6) to shorten it and follow the music?
  7. 02:06:654 (5) - Perhaps add NC here to emphasize the vocals change?
  8. 02:25:599 (1) - I personally dislike a lot how this slider overlaps the next one and doesn't even flow nicely. I think this looks and flows way better like this but it's just my opinon and it may not be of your liking or style so feel free to keep it as you wish :D
    SPOILER
  9. 03:50:860 (5) - NC here to fit the vocals?
  10. 04:02:704 (5) - ↑ ?
I really liked this song. I think I'll take a look at the source later :>
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