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nano.RIPE - Kodama Kotodama [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Gomuryuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 1, 2015 at 9:04:13 PM

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Kodama Kotodama
Source: のんのんびより りぴーと
Tags: Non Biyori Repeat 2nd Second Season Opening OP TV Size
BPM: 120
Filesize: 3007kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. HD - 4Key (2.68 stars, 688 notes)
  2. NM - 4Key (1.74 stars, 436 notes)
Download: nano.RIPE - Kodama Kotodama
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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a new start.

Please redownload (5/8/2015): added hitsound

Special Thanks to Frim4503 for hitsounding all diff :)
NlHIL
Here is my bad modding. lol
HD
00:12:856 - This LN should end at 00:14:690
00:14:815 - remove the note. and that LN should start from here

00:48:815 ~ 01:02:815 - I couldn't find the rule about using LN
(example 00:58:440 - why did you use LN and here is no note...?)
NM
00:48:815 ~ 01:02:815 - I couldn't find the rule about using note
(ex. 00:58:440 - )
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

NlHIL wrote:

Here is my bad modding. lol
HD
00:12:856 - This LN should end at 00:14:690 keep, i can still hear the sound continues
00:14:815 - remove the note. and that LN should start from here ok

00:48:815 ~ 01:02:815 - I couldn't find the rule about using LN guitar sound, triplet for snare and double note for kick. But i'll consider changing this if another modder mention this in the future
(example 00:58:440 - why did you use LN and here is no note...?)
NM
00:48:815 ~ 01:02:815 - I couldn't find the rule about using note i use LN for the guitar sound, and use double note when there's snare sound, but only single note for kick sound
(ex. 00:58:440 - )
Thanks for mod NlHIL~ :)
I also did a some selfmod on note replacement and snapping

UPDATED
AlisceaSparku
Hi Gomu~! :D

Here's my mod for M4M xD
sneaky lil box
[HD]
00:25:815 - remove a note, it's to differentiate the beat of this and 00:26:315 <--- it's louder
00:26:815 - ^
00:27:815 - ^
00:28:815 - ^
00:29:815 - add note
01:08:565 - remove a note, sound not that strong
01:08:815 - ^
01:09:065 - ^
01:17:065 - ^
01:21:315 - don't want to make 4 a slider? xD
01:22:315 - ^, but 1
01:26:815 - make 2 sliders? for the outro ( it's better imo )
[NM]
00:02:315 - add a note?
00:04:315 - ^
00:06:315 - ^
00:10:315 - ^
00:12:315 - ^
01:26:815 - make a slider for the outro ( it's better imo )
that's all I think
nice mapset :D -sees a flying star-
this mapset lacks an EZ difficulty xD I wanna make it!!

hope these can help, Good luck with your map! :D
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi Gomu~! :D

Here's my mod for M4M xD
sneaky lil box
[HD]
00:25:815 - remove a note, it's to differentiate the beat of this and 00:26:315 <--- it's louder ok
00:26:815 - ^ ^
00:27:815 - ^ ^
00:28:815 - ^ ^
00:29:815 - add note ^
01:08:565 - remove a note, sound not that strong keep for consistency
01:08:815 - ^ ^
01:09:065 - ^ ^
01:17:065 - ^ ^
01:21:315 - don't want to make 4 a slider? xD nice idea ><
01:22:315 - ^, but 1 ^, but on 3
01:26:815 - make 2 sliders? for the outro ( it's better imo ) ^, but on 3
[NM]
00:02:315 - add a note?
00:04:315 - ^
00:06:315 - ^
00:10:315 - ^
00:12:315 - ^
01:26:815 - make a slider for the outro ( it's better imo )
All applied!~
that's all I think
nice mapset :D -sees a flying star-
this mapset lacks an EZ difficulty xD I wanna make it!!

hope these can help, Good luck with your map! :D
Thanks for mod, Aliscea :) I'm still working on your map

I'm still not sure about EZ diff, i tried making one before but it always ends up having near 1.5 star rating, which is too close to NM, that's why i didn't include EZ in this mapset. But if you think you can make a good EZ with star rating around 1 or below then i'll be glad if you could make one for me. :D

Oh~ and thanks for the star :)
AlisceaSparku
I made one awhile ago and it was 1.42 stars...
Oh well xD
Frim4503
M4M

bingung pas buka mau modding -_- (stylenya beda)
diganti hs cek aja mau ga
ntar aku pasangin hs
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

Frim4503 wrote:

M4M

bingung pas buka mau modding -_- (stylenya beda)
diganti hs cek aja mau ga
ntar aku pasangin hs
Boleh boleh, tolong ya :) Thanks Frim~
Raediaufar
Wedew map baru lagi -w-, good luck :3
Frim4503
nanti sore hsnya selesai jdi jgn apply apa apa dulu

EDIT : baru selesai yg HD, masih agak males buat nyelesain NM


HS done

http://puu.sh/jqeDC/789562b41f.rar

kudo pelis
Arzenvald
masih ada diff missing kah? kalau ya pastikan semua diff diselesaikan, nanti panggil gw lagi.. =w=)7 p/4398631
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

Frim4503 wrote:

nanti sore hsnya selesai jdi jgn apply apa apa dulu

EDIT : baru selesai yg HD, masih agak males buat nyelesain NM


HS done

http://puu.sh/jqeDC/789562b41f.rar

kudo pelis
Yay, Thanks Frim~ :)

~also did some minor change on pattern
UPDATED
hitsounded!


ExUsagi wrote:

masih ada diff missing kah? kalau ya pastikan semua diff diselesaikan, nanti panggil gw lagi.. =w=)7 p/4398631
Nope, emang diffnya cuma dua kok.

ditunggu modnya~ :)
Arzenvald
okray.. ;w; this set is too clean, i'll just mod the most stuff i could find.. im being really honest, doesn't mean i trying to say harsh thing toward map or what.. but hopefully it helps.. x__x

[General]
idk how to metadata but most stuff seems clean

[HD]
00:02:690 (2690|0) - 1/6
00:12:856 (12856|3) - this LN feels too early to hit.. 1/8 sounds more accurate

00:32:815 (32815|0) - for this stanza you keep using same pattern.. like truly copy-pasted pattern... then so on in next stanza..
although its correct, but i learned that in previous case QAT disqualify a map with same problem.. (don't get this wrong, not saying this is unrankable)
the in 3-4 beat at 00:38:815 - until 00:40:565 - you can variate the layering more by following the bell sound & guitar..

00:48:815 (48815|0) - this stanza tho, it doesn't same as 00:52:815 (52815|0) - yet the pattern is exactly same with previous one..
00:53:815 (53815|1) - there's 1/4 between here
00:54:315 (54315|2) - ^
00:55:565 (55565|1) - & 00:56:065 (56065|3) - 1/2 guitar string here, not 00:55:815 (55815|2) - here

01:04:814 (64814|0) - then here comes the kiai part.. at least divide the pattern into 4 or 2 different pattern placement..

[NM]
00:02:690 (2690|0) - 1/6 wont fit to be appearanced in Normal diff, use 1/2 LN instead
00:12:856 (12856|3) - this LN feels too early to hit.. 1/8 sounds more accurate

00:22:565 (22565|1,22815|3,23065|0,23315|2,23565|3) - variate these notes placement.. same reason like what i mention in HD diff.. http://puu.sh/jr7uf.png

00:32:815 (32815|0) - same reason with HD diff and so on
for this diff.. i will mention same stuff in HD with same time mark.. repetitive pattern, not-so-variate layering.. with same reason etc etc...


welp.. sorry for short mod.. but overall i feel this map needs a lot improvement, mostly with this copy-pasted patterns over the map..
but i could say this map is also potential to get ranked.. so.. good luck!
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

ExUsagi wrote:

okray.. ;w; this set is too clean, i'll just mod the most stuff i could find.. im being really honest, doesn't mean i trying to say harsh thing toward map or what.. but hopefully it helps.. x__x

[General]
idk how to metadata but most stuff seems clean

[HD]
00:02:690 (2690|0) - 1/6 ok
00:12:856 (12856|3) - this LN feels too early to hit.. 1/8 sounds more accurate ok

00:32:815 (32815|0) - for this stanza you keep using same pattern.. like truly copy-pasted pattern... then so on in next stanza..
although its correct, but i learned that in previous case QAT disqualify a map with same problem.. (don't get this wrong, not saying this is unrankable)
the in 3-4 beat at 00:38:815 - until 00:40:565 - you can variate the layering more by following the bell sound & guitar.. changed note placement, still the same pattern but mirrored

00:48:815 (48815|0) - this stanza tho, it doesn't same as 00:52:815 (52815|0) - yet the pattern is exactly same with previous one.. hmm, still the same i think
00:53:815 (53815|1) - there's 1/4 between here nice catch
00:54:315 (54315|2) - ^ ok
00:55:565 (55565|1) - & 00:56:065 (56065|3) - 1/2 guitar string here, not 00:55:815 (55815|2) - here in this part, the piano sound is more noticeable, so i used the 1/2 LN for this sound instead

01:04:814 (64814|0) - then here comes the kiai part.. at least divide the pattern into 4 or 2 different pattern placement.. my bad =w=

[NM]
00:02:690 (2690|0) - 1/6 wont fit to be appearanced in Normal diff, use 1/2 LN instead no really necessary i think, i'll just leave it empty in this diff for consistency
00:12:856 (12856|3) - this LN feels too early to hit.. 1/8 sounds more accurate nice

00:22:565 (22565|1,22815|3,23065|0,23315|2,23565|3) - variate these notes placement.. same reason like what i mention in HD diff.. http://puu.sh/jr7uf.png ok

00:32:815 (32815|0) - same reason with HD diff and so on ok
for this diff.. i will mention same stuff in HD with same time mark.. repetitive pattern, not-so-variate layering.. with same reason etc etc...


welp.. sorry for short mod.. but overall i feel this map needs a lot improvement, mostly with this copy-pasted patterns over the map..
but i could say this map is also potential to get ranked.. so.. good luck!
Thanks Usagi!~ :) changed some pattern with more variation as you suggested.

~and thanks for the star, I'll try my best to get this mapset ranked

UPDATED!


will mod your map soon
Chronocide


From the modding que!
This really needs 5k mapset! (Novice Drum, Advanced Drum, Expert Drum) cough Guest Difficulty cough I really want to make those cough
General

  1. Change offset to 825
NM

  1. Nothing to say, really, very nice and simple patterning!
HD

  1. Nothing to say about note placement! Very nice, little bit harder with the LN's, but still very well done!
  2. This http://puu.sh/juZht/718a529107.png really spooked me, but actually, well done!
Sorry for the short mod, it's just so good ;-;
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

Han Solo wrote:



From the modding que!
This really needs 5k mapset! (Novice Drum, Advanced Drum, Expert Drum) cough Guest Difficulty cough I really want to make those cough
General

  1. Change offset to 825
NM

  1. Nothing to say, really, very nice and simple patterning!
HD

  1. Nothing to say about note placement! Very nice, little bit harder with the LN's, but still very well done!
  2. This http://puu.sh/juZht/718a529107.png really spooked me, but actually, well done!
Sorry for the short mod, it's just so good ;-;
Changed the offset, i also did some selfmod and nerf'd down the LNs that you mentioned. Hope you still like it
Thanks for mod Han!~ :)

and for the GD, I'm really sorry but i planned to rank this map with this spread from the start :? . The best that i could do is to put your GD in creator's word.

UPDATED!
offset 815 :arrow: 825
Verniy_Chan

Language : English
Hi Gomu-san

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭
: Seem Nothing Issue
: Still Questionable
: Unrankable Issue
General
■ Mapset


■ Metadata

you must add in tag : TV Size
source : http://nanoripe.com/page/discography.html or http://nonnontv.com/goods/music/

■ Timing


■ Audio

lel, why you use soft-hitclap2.wav & soft-hitwhistle2.wav as sample import windows (Ctrl+Shift+I), just use Audio Timing control point (F6) -__-
and drum-hitclap.wav -> soft-hitclap.wav, ah forget it xD don't apply my suggestion
Next time use simple HS like other map, it more easier for creator & modder to check your map :3

■ Background


■ Other

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variety/Consistency Pattern)

NM
HP : 7
OD : 7

00:31:950 (31950|1) - soft-hitwhistle -> drum-hitclap, since it snare not kick

00:46:825 - add hithat

00:47:075 - add drum-hitclap

00:47:325 - ^

00:47:575 - soft-hitwhistle

00:47:825 - soft-hitclap

00:48:075 - soft-hitwhistle

00:48:325 - soft-hitclap

00:48:575 - soft-hitwhistle

00:48:825 (48825|2) - add F

01:19:200 (79200|1,79575|3,80200|2) - please hear this sounds repeat, change into snare (soft-hitclap)

01:21:325 (81325|3,82325|0) - add soft-hitclap for snare

01:24:825 (84825|2,85825|0,86825|1) - add soft-hitwhistle

Nice Pattern, considering reheck HS, don't let some note is empty
HD
HP : 8
OD : 8

00:02:575 (2575|1) - move to 3, then 00:02:658 (2658|0,2741|1) - Ctrl + G, fit play

00:08:825 (8825|2,8825|3) - better Ctrl + H for row balance

00:16:366 - add note, since snare have 3 note, check KIAI part

00:22:700 (22700|3,22825|2) - Ctrl + G, avoid low shield pattern

00:31:950 (31950|1) - this not kick (soft-hitwhistle), change into snare (drum-hitclap)

00:32:575 - kick 2 note? check 00:33:700 -

00:47:575 - snare, not kick xD

01:19:200 - 01:19:575 - 01:20:200 - ^

01:24:825 - 01:25:825 - 01:26:825 - add kick, i mean soft-hitwhistle

please reheck HS again

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
81

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only
Thanks for requesting
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
-BANGKE-


ayyy mod req from queue

MOD
NM
  1. 00:11:950 (11950|3) - col 2
  2. 00:12:075 (12075|0) - col 4
  3. 00:31:950 (31950|1) - col 1
  4. 00:32:075 (32075|2) - col 2
  5. 00:32:200 (32200|1) - col 3
HD
  1. 00:04:575 (4575|2,4700|3) - ctrl + j
  2. 00:10:575 (10575|2,10700|3) - ^
rating, awesome map~
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Language : English
Hi Gomu-san

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭
: Seem Nothing Issue
: Still Questionable
: Unrankable Issue
General
■ Mapset


■ Metadata

you must add in tag : TV Size
source : http://nanoripe.com/page/discography.html or http://nonnontv.com/goods/music/

■ Timing


■ Audio

lel, why you use soft-hitclap2.wav & soft-hitwhistle2.wav as sample import windows (Ctrl+Shift+I), just use Audio Timing control point (F6) -__-
and drum-hitclap.wav -> soft-hitclap.wav, ah forget it xD don't apply my suggestion
Next time use simple HS like other map, it more easier for creator & modder to check your map :3

■ Background


■ Other

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variety/Consistency Pattern)

NM
HP : 7
OD : 7

00:31:950 (31950|1) - soft-hitwhistle -> drum-hitclap, since it snare not kick

00:46:825 - add hithat

00:47:075 - add drum-hitclap

00:47:325 - ^

00:47:575 - soft-hitwhistle

00:47:825 - soft-hitclap

00:48:075 - soft-hitwhistle

00:48:325 - soft-hitclap

00:48:575 - soft-hitwhistle

00:48:825 (48825|2) - add F

01:19:200 (79200|1,79575|3,80200|2) - please hear this sounds repeat, change into snare (soft-hitclap)

01:21:325 (81325|3,82325|0) - add soft-hitclap for snare

01:24:825 (84825|2,85825|0,86825|1) - add soft-hitwhistle

Nice Pattern, considering reheck HS, don't let some note is empty
HD
HP : 8
OD : 8

00:02:575 (2575|1) - move to 3, then 00:02:658 (2658|0,2741|1) - Ctrl + G, fit play

00:08:825 (8825|2,8825|3) - better Ctrl + H for row balance

00:16:366 - add note, since snare have 3 note, check KIAI part

00:22:700 (22700|3,22825|2) - Ctrl + G, avoid low shield pattern

00:31:950 (31950|1) - this not kick (soft-hitwhistle), change into snare (drum-hitclap)

00:32:575 - kick 2 note? check 00:33:700 -

00:47:575 - snare, not kick xD

01:19:200 - 01:19:575 - 01:20:200 - ^

01:24:825 - 01:25:825 - 01:26:825 - add kick, i mean soft-hitwhistle

please reheck HS again

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
81

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only
Thanks for requesting
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
All applied, Thanks Verniy :)

-BANGKE- wrote:



ayyy mod req from queue

MOD
NM
  1. 00:11:950 (11950|3) - col 2 keep
  2. 00:12:075 (12075|0) - col 4 ^
  3. 00:31:950 (31950|1) - col 1 nice idea
  4. 00:32:075 (32075|2) - col 2 ^
  5. 00:32:200 (32200|1) - col 3 ^
HD
  1. 00:04:575 (4575|2,4700|3) - ctrl + j keep
  2. 00:10:575 (10575|2,10700|3) - ^ ^
rating, awesome map~
Thanks for mod, Bangke!~ :)

~Also did some selfmod

UPDATED!
Aphrodena
Hi, from queue, sorry for the late mod, col 1234

[HD]
00:14:825 - Can also do the 1/8 note for col 2 (like how you did the first LN)
00:37:700 (37700|0,38075|0) - You should have more variety for these patterns. Right now you only have doubles on col 12 and col 34 -> in my opinion it gets boring to play the same pattern for the entire first verse. I'd recommend remapping a lot of the patterns, for example, so you have col 23 or col 14 or col 13/24 etc.
01:23:825 (83825|2,83825|3,83950|0,83950|1,84075|3,84075|2,84325|0,84325|1,84575|2) - Ctrl+H for hand balance, to not repeat the exact pattern you used at 01:23:075 -
01:24:825 (84825|1) - Move to col 3 (if you did above)

[NM]
Not much to say, just watch out for really, really repetitive patterns (for example the chorus).

From 01:05:325 to 01:18:325 basically has the exact same pattern -> I'm pretty sure you can make this more fun to play.
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, sorry for the late mod, col 1234

[HD]
00:14:825 - Can also do the 1/8 note for col 2 (like how you did the first LN)
00:37:700 (37700|0,38075|0) - You should have more variety for these patterns. Right now you only have doubles on col 12 and col 34 -> in my opinion it gets boring to play the same pattern for the entire first verse. I'd recommend remapping a lot of the patterns, for example, so you have col 23 or col 14 or col 13/24 etc.
01:23:825 (83825|2,83825|3,83950|0,83950|1,84075|3,84075|2,84325|0,84325|1,84575|2) - Ctrl+H for hand balance, to not repeat the exact pattern you used at 01:23:075 -
01:24:825 (84825|1) - Move to col 3 (if you did above)

[NM]
Not much to say, just watch out for really, really repetitive patterns (for example the chorus).

From 01:05:325 to 01:18:325 basically has the exact same pattern -> I'm pretty sure you can make this more fun to play.
Applied all~ Thanks for mod Aphrodena :)

UPDATED!~
-SoraGami-
Hi again Gomu!~ lol xD

mod again
1|2|3|4

[NM]
- 00:06:825 - add note?
- 00:10:575 (10575|3,10825|0) - ctrl + h, it seems the flow is too right-sided when playing (you can notice it based on the number of notes in the col 4)
[HD]
- 00:32:825 (32825|2) - move to 2 (notice 00:32:075 (32075|2,32325|2,32575|2,32825|2) - )

lol sorry for the short mod
Good Luck!~
Rivals_7
Hi From my queue :)
Here's my short mod ^^
Don't kudosu if this isn't help xD

[HD]

00:32:825 (32825|2,33075|3,33325|2,33575|3) - 2|3|4|3 respectively. seems more comfortable to hit also to avoid this pattern - 00:32:074 (32074|2,32324|2,32574|2,32825|2) -

01:09:575 (69575|3) - to 1 maybe?

Okay Can't find anything to change. I'm afraid i'll gonna broke your pattern xD

GL~
Topic Starter
Gomuryuu

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi again Gomu!~ lol xD

mod again
1|2|3|4

[NM]
- 00:06:825 - add note? keep
- 00:10:575 (10575|3,10825|0) - ctrl + h, it seems the flow is too right-sided when playing (you can notice it based on the number of notes in the col 4) nice
[HD]
- 00:32:825 (32825|2) - move to 2 (notice 00:32:075 (32075|2,32325|2,32575|2,32825|2) - ) ok, rearranged a bit

lol sorry for the short mod
Good Luck!~
Thank for mod Sora :)

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi From my queue :)
Here's my short mod ^^
Don't kudosu if this isn't help xD

[HD]

00:32:825 (32825|2,33075|3,33325|2,33575|3) - 2|3|4|3 respectively. seems more comfortable to hit also to avoid this pattern - 00:32:074 (32074|2,32324|2,32574|2,32825|2) - ok, changed a bit

01:09:575 (69575|3) - to 1 maybe? rearranged

Okay Can't find anything to change. I'm afraid i'll gonna broke your pattern xD

GL~
Thanks for mod Rivals :)

~also did some major remap on some pattern

UPDATED!
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