1. Charlotte's Kantan (1.69 stars, 119 notes)
2. Lundle's Oni (4.02 stars, 475 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.78 stars, 324 notes)
4. Nardo's Futsuu (2.19 stars, 219 notes)
5. Oni (4.2 stars, 510 notes)

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snowball112
Mame ga nyaa
Nofool
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JUDYDANNY
Julie

Charlotte wrote:

done.

Charlotte's Kantan

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Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Futsuu is done. :3

http://puu.sh/j4IMe.rar

snowball112 wrote:

Hey, from PM request :3

General

The hitsounds feels a little bit loud for me, maybe reduce by about 10% across all sections? This applies to all difficulties.

Also, for all diffs I think it would be better if you don't use D before 00:05:814. These feel like a bit too much, and I think k at 00:00:597 and 00:03:205 would fit better. Suggestions for changes to the part before 00:05:814 below: D would reflect the stressed sounds there.

Nardo
- Maybe move 00:01:738 (2) to 00:01:901 and 00:02:227 (3) to 00:02:553? You could then make 00:00:597 (1,2,3,4,5) k d ddk which would fit well in my opinion. I think the current pattern could accompany the synth in a way better.

- I think it would sound better if you would move 00:04:346 (6) to 00:04:510 and move 00:04:836 (7) to 00:05:162 and make it a d. Fits the instruments better and transitions well to the following dkdk part of 00:05:814 (9,10,11,12) etc. same as ^

Nardo's Futsuu

- See general, also applies to 01:18:857 (205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213). I think using D is too strong here, at least for 01:21:466 (207). Refer to the explanation above.

- I think it would be nice to have something mapped to the instruments between 00:51:466 (125,126) and between 01:01:901 (155,156). You could for example:

move 00:51:140 (124) to 00:51:792, make 00:51:466 (125) a k and add d at 00:52:118 and 00:52:444. You could do something similar with 01:01:575 (156,157).

I'm aware that you're following the vocals but I think spacing things a little differently would fit well here to put a little bit of emphasis on the instruments and the buildup of for example 00:52:607 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132). I would prefer following the vocal only for some breaks in between the patterns.

Nice mapset, good luck.

Mame ga nyaa wrote:

Hi~ from in-game chat

Nardo's Futsuu

・00:47:553 - add finish ? There is no stressed sound to map with...
・00:57:988 - ^ ^
・01:08:423 - ^ ^

Kantanなのですが指摘する場所が見つかりませんでした。。ごめんなさい ;w;

あと個人的にMuzukashiiとOniのヒットサウンドを少し下げたほうがいいかな？と思いました！
Rankedがんばってください！！

snowball112 wrote:

Hey, from PM request :3

General

The hitsounds feels a little bit loud for me, maybe reduce by about 10% across all sections? This applies to all difficulties.

Also, for all diffs I think it would be better if you don't use D before 00:05:814. These feel like a bit too much, and I think k at 00:00:597 and 00:03:205 would fit better. Suggestions for changes to the part before 00:05:814 below:

Charlotte:
00:00:597 (1,2,3,4) - kdkd? nope.I think dkDk is good.

Charlotte's Kantan

- 00:50:162 (72,73,74,75) ddkk? There is a higher sound on the last two notes, so I think it would be good to use k. okay.fixed

- 00:52:770 (76,77,78) dkd or ddk maybe? umm...I think kkd is good.so keep

You have the same pattern at 01:00:597 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) and I think it sounds much better. I think it would be good if you use it earlier as well for consistency and because it just fits better than kkdd kkd.

- 01:18:857 (122,123,124,125) kdkd? Similar to the beginning, I think D is too strong here. You could also use Dkkd instead here. nope.

- Maybe make 00:19:183 (23) k and move 00:19:510 (24) to 00:19:836 and use 00:19:836 (24,25) dk? Sounds better in my opinion because you still have the clap at 00:19:183. oh,nice suggestin.fixed

Nice mapset, good luck.

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Nofool wrote:

Hi', from pm req

[Nardo's Futsuu]
HP+1 I will consider this later.
- 00:00:597 - 00:05:814 - this part plays a bit weird imo, what about : move - 00:01:738 (2) - to 1/2 later and - 00:02:227 (3) - to - 00:02:553 - ? => d kkD, same for - 00:04:346 (6,7,8) - but this time remove - 00:05:488 (8) -, not needed. Same for the end of the map. Currently keeping the patterns atm. I think they could work well for the synths there.
- 00:43:151 (103) - i would still keep D here, to make a difference between the vocal and the following K for instrumental. I think it would be too plain for 5 consecutive big dons...
- move - 01:12:499 (186) - to - 01:11:846 - as k ? i think this should be mapped another way but i cant find something yet ,_, at least this change would make it a reversed pattern of - 01:03:042 - etc parts. It sounds a bit strange imo ;_;

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

- Racoon - wrote:

LALALALALALALALALALALA

Hm Hm Sorry

Hello from your request

Nardo's Futsuu

00:38:423 (90,97) - Same as Kantan That would become overemphasized imo.
00:53:096 (128) - d? - Follow vocal The vocal pitch is still high there.
01:10:869 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - All notes fit with vocal? - Like this http://puu.sh/j6TU9/152c069f27.jpg or http://puu.sh/j6TXe/f5edd225b3.jpg The spread with Muzukashii will be ruined if I do so.

Oni is... I'm so lazy...!

Good Luck!!

snowball112 wrote:

Hey, from PM request :3

General

The hitsounds feels a little bit loud for me, maybe reduce by about 10% across all sections? This applies to all difficulties. I think it isn't necessary to change

Also, for all diffs I think it would be better if you don't use D before 00:05:814. These feel like a bit too much, and I think k at 00:00:597 and 00:03:205 would fit better. Suggestions for changes to the part before 00:05:814 below: nope.

Toara

Muzukashii:
- 00:00:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) k d k dd d k d kdd k? Sound better in my opinion. ^

Oni:
- 00:00:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) k k dkkddk or k d dkdddk? Fits better in my opinion. ^

Muzukashii & Oni

Muzukashii:
- 01:21:139 (324,325,326,327) dkdk? Fits better in my opinion. General too

- Maybe move 00:52:933 (196) to 00:51:792 and change to k? Sound better in my opinion with the instruments. I use 00:51:466 (191,192) - 2/1 space :3

- Maybe add a k at 01:02:227, same reason as above. ^

Oni:
- 01:20:650 (486,487,488,489,490,491) ddkkdk or dkdddk? Fits better in my opinion. General too

- I think it sounds and is better to play if you move 00:51:221 (279) to 00:51:058 and add d at 00:51:629.

- Move 01:01:656 (350) to 01:01:493 same reason as above. Hmmm... no change

- Move 01:12:417 (431) to 01:12:580 okay. change :3
- Move 01:12:907 (435) to 01:13:069 okay. change :3
I think it's better to play to have the first triplet start on a red tick here.

Nice mapset, good luck. Thanks~ :3 !

Mame ga nyaa wrote:

Hi~ from in-game chat

Muzukashii

・00:08:749 - change k 低音でドゥーンっておとがあってそれ拾ってます
・00:31:738 - change d　00:31:901 (116) - 　ここkで拾いたいけど次のノーツがkになっててそれのカバー（？）に意味合いも込めてkおいてます :2
・00:36:792 - change k　okay. Oniも変えた :2

Oni

・00:08:586(31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - ここの k d k d k d k を d k d k d k d にしたほうが音にあっていると感じました 変えたほうが違和感ある；；
・00:16:004 - change d ? ddkddはスタンダード譜面っぽくない？
・00:24:564(118,119) - ctrl + G　ddkkddkkのタイミングで置いてます
・00:26:439 - change d ?　^
・00:53:586(295,296,297,298,299) - d d k d k のほうが違和感を感じませんでした　n1ce :3 Change

あと個人的にMuzukashiiとOniのヒットサウンドを少し下げたほうがいいかな？と思いました！ 前のModでも言われてましたが一応キープで :2
Rankedがんばってください！！ Thanks :3

Nofool wrote:

Hi', from pm req

[Muzukashii]
- 00:10:705 (33) - remove ? needs more break. okay.
- 00:35:162 - mm maybe add k here ? vocal. n1ce Change :3
nothing else i guess.

[Oni]
- 00:01:249 - theres a d here in the Muzu. yup
- 00:16:738 - add k ? consistency with - 00:18:042 -. change :3
- move - 00:27:254 (137) - to - 00:27:173 - and maybe remove - 00:26:846 (135) - ? ^. keep ;;
- remove - 00:39:075 (208,209) - and change - 00:39:238 (210) - to d ? better flow with the other break at - 00:37:770 -. okay.
- 00:46:249 - you could add more notes there to make this part similar to - 00:56:683 -. okay.
- 01:16:167 (463) - maybe remove this one ? to emphasize the next d. okay.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

- Racoon - wrote:

LALALALALALALALALALALA LALALALALALLALALALALALA

Hm Hm Sorry

Hello from your request

Muzukashii

00:25:053 (88,89) - Ctrl+G? - Same as 00:14:618 (48,49) I follow Vo.
00:37:118 (129,135) - Same as Kantan Hmmm... ?
00:49:999 (185,186) - Ctrl+G? - Follow vocal nope.
01:00:434 (232,233) - ^ ^
01:14:945 (301,302) - Add Finish? - Just a suggestion okay.
01:17:554 (313,314) - okay.

Oni is... I'm so lazy...!

Good Luck!!

Flying Pan wrote:

saw this on modreq. kinda like the song so i decided to mod it. here i go~

[Muzukashii]
00:03:532 (8) - delete for consistency with 00:00:923 - it's still beginning so just stay calm? oh my miss O.o delete note :3
00:13:151 (42) - move to 00:12:825 - to follow vocal like 00:15:433 - feels a bit weird if the first one follow drum, and the second one follows vocal okay. change it
00:11:846 (36) - delete no change :3
00:23:586 (82) - move to 00:23:260 - change it
00:22:281 (76) - delete ^
00:35:488 - add d here because too empty? Hmmm... i follow high pitch sounds
00:27:988 () - should this a finisher too? 00:26:684 (91) - too.

good map. here a random star!

Flying Pan wrote:

saw this on modreq. kinda like the song so i decided to mod it. here i go~

[Nardo's Futsuu]
00:16:575 (36) - i think changing this to k will be more fits since it has lower pitch than 00:17:879 (39) - and also follow the clap sound d d k would be better concerning the increasing pitch among 00:16:575 (36,37,38) -
00:17:879 (39,40,41) - change to dkk? sounds same with 00:13:640 (28,29,30) - and some other parts. Yeah, but d d k would flow better with the neighbouring patterns.
00:27:011 (64,65,66) - dkk or kdk sounds better imo refer to 00:16:575 (36) -
00:50:488 (122,123) - swap works better? k d would fit the pitch drop there..
01:00:923 (152,153) - ^ ^

good map. here a random star!

Nofool wrote:

Hi', from pm req

[Charlotte's Kantan]
OD+1 fixed
- 00:19:183 (23) - change to k, move - 00:19:510 (24) - to - 00:19:836 - as d. fits more instrumental/vocal. fixed
- 00:26:683 (33) - remove finisher ? sounds as high as the others. okay.fixed
- remove - 00:30:596 (39,40,41) - and add a slider form - 00:30:596 - to - 00:31:575 - ? more simple.
- 00:40:379 (53) - d, - 00:41:031 (54) - k, - 00:41:357 (55) - remove, - 00:41:683 (56) - k.
=> D d k k K, emphasis effects easier to handle. fixed
- 00:45:923 (64,65) - maybe move them to - 00:46:086 - ? vocal focus. Yes...but,If used your suggestion,stardiff is over 2.00
- 00:48:531 (69,70) - ^ (same for the other similar parts).

Good luck'

- Racoon - wrote:

LALALALALALALALALALALA

Hm Hm Sorry

Hello from your request

Charlotte's Kantan

Sorry... I don't know how to match notes with the song..
00:23:423 (29) - d? - 00:12:988 (15) - Same as this part, but you think about pattern, it's a nice pattern. nope.probably high-pitch so k is fit imo.
00:26:031 (32) - ^ ^
00:26:684 (33) - Remove Finish? - If you match with drum sound, you must add finish in 00:27:988 (35)
I think you match with drum sound when you use finish fixed
but, 00:37:118 (48,50,54) - In here, don't have a finish, Just my opinion.

Good Luck!!

Flying Pan wrote:

saw this on modreq. kinda like the song so i decided to mod it. here i go~

[Charlotte's Kantan]
00:12:988 (15) - change to k like you did at 00:23:423 - ?

00:34:510 (44,46,47) - i think finisher is not really needed in these notes because of the relatively calm section. add finisher at 00:37:118 (48) - instead will be good start for the merrier section changed D k D k.

00:46:738 (66) - move this note to 00:46:901 - it will be more fair for newbie because its hard to hit the notes in red tick when there's no really strong sound there nope.I tried your suggestion.but,I think don't fit.
00:49:346 (71) - move to 00:49:510 - ^ ^
00:57:173 (84) - move to 00:57:336 - ^ ^
00:59:781 (89) - move to 00:59:944 - ^ ^
01:07:607 (102) - move to 01:07:770 - ^ ^
01:10:217 (107) - move to 01:10:379 - ^ ^

good map. here a random star!

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Lundlerol wrote:

IRCmod

SPOILER

16:28 *Lundlerol is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/745140 fhana - Wonder Stella [Oni]]
16:28 *toara_fict is away: (|3[___]
17:34 toara_fict: 00:35:814 (153) -
17:34 Lundlerol: 00:42:825 (195) - 
20:48 toara_fict: あくしろ
20:48 Lundlerol: 00:26:683 - 
20:48 toara_fict: Mod あくしろ
20:48 toara_fict: ？
20:49 Lundlerol: 00:26:683 - 
20:49 toara_fict: 大音符消しましたよ～
20:49 Lundlerol: いいゾ～これ
20:49 Lundlerol: 00:27:988 - 
20:49 Lundlerol: 00:29:292 - 
20:50 Lundlerol: 00:39:727 - 
20:50 toara_fict: ok
20:50 toara_fict: むずも変えてあげた
20:51 toara_fict: 00:39:727 (212) - 　ここから３れんだ
20:51 toara_fict: 00:39:890 (213) - 　ddk
20:52 toara_fict: 00:39:727 (212) -  ここの音主張激しすぎんよ～じゃけんこ↑こ↓から三連打にしましょうね～
20:52 toara_fict: みたいな
20:52 Lundlerol: 00:41:031 - 
20:52 toara_fict: ここも便乗しちゃいますよ
20:52 Lundlerol: やっちゃいましょうよ
20:52 Lundlerol: そのための
20:53 Lundlerol: 卍m o d卍
20:53 toara_fict: さすがに草生えますよ
20:54 Lundlerol: 00:42:336 - 
20:55 Lundlerol: ~　00:43:966 - 
20:55 toara_fict: おっ、どうした
20:56 toara_fict: 00:43:966 (237) - 　ここkは譲れねえな
20:56 Lundlerol: 00:44:944 - 
20:57 Lundlerol: 00:47:553 - 
20:57 toara_fict: は↑に↑か↑む（ﾄﾞｩﾝ）
20:57 toara_fict: nope
20:58 Lundlerol: は↓に↑か↓む↑
20:58 toara_fict: えっ何それは（困惑）
20:58 toara_fict: ゲスい顔してそう
20:58 Lundlerol: は↓に↑か↓む↑　ﾄﾞｩﾝ(憤怒）
20:59 Lundlerol: 01:05:325 (381) - 
20:59 toara_fict: た↓ど↑こ↑ろ↑
20:59 Lundlerol: 00:54:890 - 
21:00 toara_fict: 00:54:075 (304,305,306,307) - 　こ↑こ↓ Finish4連あるし大音符置かなくてもいいじゃないっすか
21:00 toara_fict: 00:44:455 (238,239,240,241) -
21:00 toara_fict: こっちおとちいさいけど
21:00 toara_fict: はにかんでるし
21:01 toara_fict: 大おんぷいりましぇ～～～～～～～ん
21:01 toara_fict: って感じ
21:01 Lundlerol: は↑に↓か↑んでるからいらないって何(困惑
21:02 toara_fict: いらないっていってるの　何で　ねえ何でだよ　ｧｧｧｱｱｱｱｱｱ！！！！！！！！！！（tenga0216)
21:02 Lundlerol: ｾﾝｾﾝｼｬﾙ･･･
21:02 Lundlerol: 01:17:553 - 
21:03 toara_fict: 卍こ　だ　わ　り卍
21:03 toara_fict: クソマッパー特有の意味のわからないこだわり
21:03 Lundlerol: 卍　こ　だ　わ　り　卍があってこそ職人
21:04 Lundlerol: そのための
21:04 toara_fict: 音色
21:04 Lundlerol: こんなん草
21:04 toara_fict: そ　の　た　め　の　音　色
21:04 toara_fict: ド　ン　と　カ　ツ
21:04 Lundlerol: バランス先輩オッスオッス！
21:05 toara_fict: 50:50
21:05 toara_fict: 01:27:336 (523,524,525,526,527,528,529) -
21:05 toara_fict: dddkkkd
21:07 toara_fict: dddkddk
21:07 toara_fict: どどどかどどか
21:07 toara_fict: こうじ
21:07 Lundlerol: 01:14:700 - 
21:08 Lundlerol: 01:14:292 - 
21:08 Lundlerol: 01:14:129 - 
21:08 toara_fict: 01:14:129 (450) -
21:08 toara_fict: ここ
21:08 toara_fict: this ?
21:08 toara_fict: yes
21:08 Lundlerol: そうだよ
21:09 Lundlerol: 01:14:944 - 　
21:09 Lundlerol: ｄ　ｄ
21:09 toara_fict: p p
21:09 Lundlerol: 01:15:270 - del
21:10 toara_fict: 01:15:108 (459,460) -  どっちかkにしたさ、あります
21:10 Lundlerol: 01:16:738 - 
21:12 toara_fict: 01:12:336 (434) -
21:12 toara_fict: ここからすこしいじる
21:12 Lundlerol: いじる？
21:12 Lundlerol: なにやってんすか先輩まずいですよ！
21:16 toara_fict: 01:12:336 (434) - 　～　　01:18:857 (483) -
21:16 toara_fict: 01:12:988 (440,441,442,443,444) -  ddkkd -> kdkkd 01:13:803 (447,448,449) -  ddk -> dkd 01:16:412 (466,467,468) - ddk -> dkd
21:16 Lundlerol: ok

EdamaMe411 wrote:

こんにちわ、ＰＭからっす。
Ｍ４Ｍっは自分の２分３０秒超えてて、見てもらえないと思うのでいいです。
ＭＯＤさせてもらいますね! やろうかと思ったらBN見てた... ﾎﾟｯﾁｬﾏ...

とあらさんのMuzukashii

00:45:270 (161) - kにして、00:45:433 (162) - を00:45:760 - に移動!
今まで心地よかったリズムでした！けど、ここで若干ですが、詰まった感じになったので、（あくまで感覚ですが）上記のようにしていただいたら、私は納得いく感じになりました~。ぜひ試してみてください。keep. いい案だけどここ変えたらけっこういじらないといけないし保留で；；

お～に！！

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以上です。大音符が心地い譜面でした。頑張ってください！（★ひとつ～）　ありがっと～～～～～！