For M4M,
Note : I am inexperienced with hitsounds, hence I can't do it.
[Normal]
00:50:487 (2,3,4) - A circular flow would be better imo. (i.e. bring circle (3) down)
01:00:122 (1) - Have this blanket (4).
02:08:443 (3) - An idea, bring the red anchor to (356,252), does it play better?
02:39:976 (4) - Loosen up the sharpness by a bit for it to blanket (1).
03:53:552 (4,5) - Feels a little empty. How about a 1/1 slider and a circle?
04:27:275 (2) - Bring it higher for a curve flow.
Solid Normal.
[Hard]
00:27:713 (1) - Bring this down to (88,100), I think it looks better this way.
00:33:406 (5) - NC here.
00:34:063 (1) - Remove this NC.
00:35:158 (5) - Notes like like these tend to be held down and not dragged from start to finish hence it feels quite sudden to move to the next slider. Make it so that the direction of the slider is opposite to the next, i.e. ctrl+G.
01:09:757 (5) - Consider adding a NC.
01:09:757 (5,6,7,8) - Imo it is a very awkward shape, I think a bigger square works better. (copying from the first 4 circles and using ctrl+shift+s on it)
01:22:895 (1,2,3) - For simpler reading purposes, keep them at 1.2 dist. snap.
01:29:465 (5) - Rotate this by -3 degrees for a better unnoticable blanket. (...sorry for being a nazi)
01:48:078 (3) - Move it to the left by 1 grid for a better blanket.
02:31:873 (2,3,4) - Honestly, I think the current pattern is fine. If you really want to change it here is an idea of mine, I'm not sure if it is better though :
02:34:282 (3) - If you changed the pattern above^, move this to where circle (2) is.
02:46:983 (1) - Bring final anchor to (68,176) for a better blanket.
03:04:939 (2) - Optional, since it plays out fine for me. However, I'm not sure it will be the same for Hard players, maybe you should keep this at 1.2 dist. snap.
03:30:778 (1) - This slider does not fit the song at all. Either change it to a straight/curved slider, or increase dist. between the 2 red anchor points to make the slider smoother.
03:48:297 (1) - For cleanliness's sake, you should have the 1st part of this slider blanket slider (3) properly.
04:12:494 (4) - I suggest 1.2 dist. snap for consistency unless you have a good reason for it.
04:29:793 (5) - I don't get this circle. I don't think it follows the rhythm and the dist. snap is kinda awkward.
04:33:844 (1,2) - Make them 1.2 dist. snap, from these circles to slider (2). It'll play out smoother.
04:47:859 (1) - Woah, that's a little too far.
05:22:895 (1) - If possible, make the curves sharper for the blankets to stand out.
Beautiful patterns, jumps. I also like how clean the blankets are. Really well done!
I like this mapset a lot, so here's a star.
Good luck!
Note : I am inexperienced with hitsounds, hence I can't do it.
[Normal]
00:50:487 (2,3,4) - A circular flow would be better imo. (i.e. bring circle (3) down)
01:00:122 (1) - Have this blanket (4).
02:08:443 (3) - An idea, bring the red anchor to (356,252), does it play better?
02:39:976 (4) - Loosen up the sharpness by a bit for it to blanket (1).
03:53:552 (4,5) - Feels a little empty. How about a 1/1 slider and a circle?
04:27:275 (2) - Bring it higher for a curve flow.
Solid Normal.
[Hard]
00:27:713 (1) - Bring this down to (88,100), I think it looks better this way.
00:33:406 (5) - NC here.
00:34:063 (1) - Remove this NC.
00:35:158 (5) - Notes like like these tend to be held down and not dragged from start to finish hence it feels quite sudden to move to the next slider. Make it so that the direction of the slider is opposite to the next, i.e. ctrl+G.
01:09:757 (5) - Consider adding a NC.
01:09:757 (5,6,7,8) - Imo it is a very awkward shape, I think a bigger square works better. (copying from the first 4 circles and using ctrl+shift+s on it)
01:22:895 (1,2,3) - For simpler reading purposes, keep them at 1.2 dist. snap.
01:29:465 (5) - Rotate this by -3 degrees for a better unnoticable blanket. (...sorry for being a nazi)
01:48:078 (3) - Move it to the left by 1 grid for a better blanket.
02:31:873 (2,3,4) - Honestly, I think the current pattern is fine. If you really want to change it here is an idea of mine, I'm not sure if it is better though :
02:34:282 (3) - If you changed the pattern above^, move this to where circle (2) is.
02:46:983 (1) - Bring final anchor to (68,176) for a better blanket.
03:04:939 (2) - Optional, since it plays out fine for me. However, I'm not sure it will be the same for Hard players, maybe you should keep this at 1.2 dist. snap.
03:30:778 (1) - This slider does not fit the song at all. Either change it to a straight/curved slider, or increase dist. between the 2 red anchor points to make the slider smoother.
03:48:297 (1) - For cleanliness's sake, you should have the 1st part of this slider blanket slider (3) properly.
04:12:494 (4) - I suggest 1.2 dist. snap for consistency unless you have a good reason for it.
04:29:793 (5) - I don't get this circle. I don't think it follows the rhythm and the dist. snap is kinda awkward.
04:33:844 (1,2) - Make them 1.2 dist. snap, from these circles to slider (2). It'll play out smoother.
04:47:859 (1) - Woah, that's a little too far.
05:22:895 (1) - If possible, make the curves sharper for the blankets to stand out.
Beautiful patterns, jumps. I also like how clean the blankets are. Really well done!
I like this mapset a lot, so here's a star.
Good luck!