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Fushimi Rio
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Fushimi Rio
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月10日 at 11:10:49

Artist: every-ing!
Title: Kesaran Pasaran TV size
Source: レーカン！
Tags: RE-KAN! Storia Ts8zs ending
BPM: 168
Filesize: 13411kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.68 stars, 106 notes)
  2. Hard (3.22 stars, 234 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 383 notes)
  4. Storia's Normal (1.96 stars, 141 notes)
  5. Ts8zs' Insane (3.94 stars, 279 notes)
Download: every-ing! - Kesaran Pasaran TV size
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Plz Re-dl after 5/3/2015.

Thanks for ts8zs's bg and DreaM117er's mp3!

老年屙屎 best屙屎
兵役荣耀

Storia wrote:

2016.9 afk 服兵役两年甚至更久 我草你妈怎么征兵都能落选的
Last edited by Fushimi Rio , edited 26 times in total.
Meyrink
728 posts
Joined February 2014
Meyrink
As Requested, just some suggestions :3

Easy
  1. i think you really should avoid stacks in easy they are really confusing ! like 00:04:061 (1,2) - 01:01:918 (1,2) - 01:07:632 (1,2) - 00:05:847 (3,4) - 00:08:704 (2,3) -
  2. 00:08:704 (2,3) - the Slider is almost of screen cuz of stack Leniency
  3. 00:12:989 (1,1,1) - is this ncs really neccesarry ? isn't normal combos better ?
  4. 01:27:275 (1,1,1) - ^
  5. 00:15:847 (1,2) - unrankable ! don't put circle on a Reverse arrow ! and also distance between 00:15:847 (1) - & 00:17:275 (2) - should be 1.0x
  6. 00:45:847 (2) - u can put this a bit down to make it fits with 00:44:418 (1) - like this
  7. 01:01:204 (6,1,2) - this is really confusing to play cuz of the gap ! i think this 01:01:204 (6) - can be a 1/1 slider
  8. 01:04:061 - why u didn't mapped those "Hiii" it would be good if it's mapped with circles ! and also in others places ;w;

Hard
  1. 00:03:525 (2,1) - this jump is really big in the intro of the map !
  2. 00:11:382 (1,2,3) - this rhythm imo is not good ! i think this is better http://puu.sh/hi9St/b306bcadd7.jpg ! just like u did in previous rhythms 00:08:168 (2,3,1,2) - etc...
  3. 00:17:275 (1,2) - imo better if they were 1/2 sliders really ! but rip cool stack :/ !
  4. 00:23:704 (3,4) - Do CTRL + G ! when that is done ! Do it Again for 00:23:882 (4,5) - to have a circular mouvements between 00:23:525 (2,3,4,5) -
  5. 00:30:847 - what u think about adding circle here and stack under sliders 00:30:132 (1) - end ? or stack it on 00:31:025 (3) -
  6. 00:32:275 - same ! ucan stack on 00:32:454 (2) - cuz spacing 00:31:561 (1,2) - confusing i tho first this 00:32:454 (2) - is 00:32:275 - lol

Amori's Insane
  1. Missing Kiai
  2. Some of rhythms are kinda awkward or wierd imo u need to have most of strong symbals sounds in the start or head of object instead of the end , for emphasis and more fun in play ! check this thread for more info ! p/961783
  3. 00:04:061 (3) - u have a downbeat on a sliders end which sounds wierd for me ! cuz i think strong beats better to have clickable things instead of ending sliders ! here's an example of rhythm that can be used in the intro http://puu.sh/hiarr/a3e972250a.jpg
  4. 00:06:918 (5) - this one is same ! really better to have a 1/1 slider start from 00:07:275 - by removing slider reverse from 00:06:918 (5) - etc..
    because having a trong cymbal sound on slider end is wierd ! and it's even a downbeat !
  5. 00:20:132 (1,2,3,4) - this stream is overmapped imo there's nothing in music that allow stream there ! exactly 00:20:222 (2,4) - those 2 need to be removed
  6. 00:44:061 (1,4) - switch nc ! remove from 00:44:061 (1) - and add 00:44:418 (4) -
  7. 00:51:204 (1,2) - same
  8. 00:52:632 (1) - remove nc and add nc 00:52:989 (3) - , u can check others placements ! most of ncs follow the measures so u can nc on every Downbeat i think ! like what u did here 00:54:418 (1,1,1) - this was correct
  9. 00:59:061 (7) - remove finish there's no symbal sound in music !
  10. 01:01:918 (3) - for example here u can add finish on sliders head since there's symbal sound in music
  11. 01:07:632 - same , u can check for others in the diff

GL o/
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
M4M from your queue

Legends~
Red = unrankables / Strong suggestions
Bold = Suggestion
Others are nazi

[General]
So kawaiiii
You should make kiai time consistence between diffs, although it's a GD
Include all GD'er in tags

[Easy]
00:47:275 (1) - dunno this spinner is too short for not for easy
00:50:132 (1,3) - suggeting this should 'mirrors' each others
00:15:847 (1,2) - use DS here
Neat

[Nitta's Normal]
This one is REALLY unrankable
Misleading spacing
00:07:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - VERY hard to read for beginners
00:09:239 (1,2,3,4) - also here
00:11:382 (1,2,3) - here and here
00:12:097 (3,1,2) - no anti jumps in normal pls
00:11:382 (1,2,3) - also no SV change like this pls
BTW ^ if you still wants to go with this, nc it ALL

00:22:632 (1,2,3,4) - Also no jumps and increase in SV
00:38:704 (1,1,2,3,4) - no antijumps like this in normal
00:40:132 (1,2) - and SV change
00:46:561 (1,1) - and slider stacking like this
ok I will stop here
sorry to be rude but this diff needs a remapping
Sudden SV change jumps and antijumps also sudden DS change mustn't appear in normal
like all I mentioned above

[Hard]
00:08:168 (2,3,1) - swap 2 and 3 for better flow, stack 1 with 2 like you did
00:12:097 (3,1) - weird overlapping here
00:30:132 (1,2) - anti jumps like this are fine but... imo this is too misleading
You should do something like this
00:31:561 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:418 (1,1) - this could be better, try another pattern
00:52:989 (3,4) - blanket them

[Amori's Insane]
AR too fast 8.5 should be fine
This diff seems a bit random
This will be general suggestions due to I really don't get the pattern here
Hitsounds needs some improvement also
00:24:061 (1) - people will miss this, remove the nc
recheck your stacking like 00:34:061 (4,7) -
Also check the 1/1 and 1/2 spacing differences like
00:39:597 (7,8,1,2,3,4) -

[Insane]
omg so high, this mod will be sucks
01:24:061 (1,5) - stack'em
00:11:204 (5,1,2) - that's weird
00:29:775 (4) - nc rhythm change
00:34:418 (5,6) - stack 6 and 5's end, consistency
can't mod much so high sry :o

GL !!
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
m4m
这歌好洗脑啊

[Insane]
00:35:489 (8) - 这样重叠会不会不太好看啊 可以放在96|172
00:50:311 (2,3,4) - 468|188 00:50:668 (5,6,1) - 408|356 这种感觉可能比较好 调整后面的如果你有需要
00:51:740 (2,3,4) - ^ 152|148
01:23:704 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个可以再舒张一点 这样和后面的配合看起来好些

[Amori]
加个kiai
00:10:132 - 重音 最好给一个circle
00:12:989 (2,3,4) - ^ 6个circle
00:14:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 试试这个 (1和6重叠 2和7重叠) http://puu.sh/hjgbc/968d405d4e.jpg
00:54:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:04:061 (1) - 这个要变速的话明显一点吧 不然没有效果 后面的也是
这个diff还需要很多改进imo

[Hard]
00:12:989 (1,2) - 这个会不会不好读啊 1就会被以为是和前面的1/2间隔的
00:26:114 - 加个circle
00:31:025 (2,3) - 也是不太好读的感觉
00:32:454 (2,3) - ^

[Nitta's Normal]
00:03:347 (2) - i think the speed-up is not necessary, and it confuses newcomers..
00:09:418 (2,3) - spacing is confusing here. consider moving a bit farther.
00:12:097 (3,1) - ^
00:14:061 (5) - omg i dont think any newcomer can catch a slider with such a high speed ;w;
00:22:989 (2,3,4) - ^ (every slider which has the same sv are applied to)
00:31:918 (2,3,4,5) - confusing distance again
00:34:954 (4,5) - ^
00:35:847 (6,1) - ^
00:38:704 (1,1) - ^
00:44:418 (1,1,1,1) - maybe 1/1 sliders are just enough, though rhythm supports 1/2 sliders, but remember it is a Normal difficulty.
00:59:775 (3,4,1) - confusing distance
01:02:989 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:14:775 (4,5,1) - ^
01:18:347 (1,2,3) - ^
Overall, i think this difficulty needs a complete remap, paying attention to ranking rules and whether it is playable. remember that you are mapping a normal difficulty.

Easy diff seems fine.

good luck.
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Meyrink wrote:

As Requested, just some suggestions :3

Easy
  1. i think you really should avoid stacks in easy they are really confusing ! like 00:04:061 (1,2) - 01:01:918 (1,2) - 01:07:632 (1,2) - 00:05:847 (3,4) - 00:08:704 (2,3) - fixed
  2. 00:08:704 (2,3) - the Slider is almost of screen cuz of stack Leniency moved up
  3. 00:12:989 (1,1,1) - is this ncs really neccesarry ? isn't normal combos better ? removed
  4. 01:27:275 (1,1,1) - ^
  5. 00:15:847 (1,2) - unrankable ! don't put circle on a Reverse arrow ! and also distance between 00:15:847 (1) - & 00:17:275 (2) - should be 1.0x this won't affect much imo. moved 1 away.
  6. 00:45:847 (2) - u can put this a bit down to make it fits with 00:44:418 (1) - like this I guess I don't need a blanket here...
  7. 01:01:204 (6,1,2) - this is really confusing to play cuz of the gap ! i think this 01:01:204 (6) - can be a 1/1 slider
  8. 01:04:061 - why u didn't mapped those "Hiii" it would be good if it's mapped with circles ! and also in others places ;w; ok

Hard
  1. 00:03:525 (2,1) - this jump is really big in the intro of the map ! made some change
  2. 00:11:382 (1,2,3) - this rhythm imo is not good ! i think this is better http://puu.sh/hi9St/b306bcadd7.jpg ! just like u did in previous rhythms 00:08:168 (2,3,1,2) - etc... vocal on red lines are stronger than those on white lines. This is better imo.
  3. 00:17:275 (1,2) - imo better if they were 1/2 sliders really ! but rip cool stack :/ !
  4. 00:23:704 (3,4) - Do CTRL + G ! when that is done ! Do it Again for 00:23:882 (4,5) - to have a circular mouvements between 00:23:525 (2,3,4,5) - ...why? a stop here fits the song.
  5. 00:30:847 - what u think about adding circle here and stack under sliders 00:30:132 (1) - end ? or stack it on 00:31:025 (3) - I prefer following the drum here. not going to add circles. but I stacked the circles.
  6. 00:32:275 - same ! ucan stack on 00:32:454 (2) - cuz spacing 00:31:561 (1,2) - confusing i tho first this 00:32:454 (2) - is 00:32:275 - lol

GL o/

CrystilonZ wrote:

M4M from your queue

Legends~
Red = unrankables / Strong suggestions
Bold = Suggestion
Others are nazi

[General]
So kawaiiii
You should make kiai time consistence between diffs, although it's a GD Yeah, but I'm going to remove the gd /.\
Include all GD'er in tags

[Easy]
00:47:275 (1) - dunno this spinner is too short for not for easy not that short I guess
00:50:132 (1,3) - suggeting this should 'mirrors' each others I planned to do at first, but changed idea in the end
00:15:847 (1,2) - use DS here
Neat

[Hard]
00:08:168 (2,3,1) - swap 2 and 3 for better flow, stack 1 with 2 like you did it's not better...
00:12:097 (3,1) - weird overlapping here
00:30:132 (1,2) - anti jumps like this are fine but... imo this is too misleading fixed
You should do something like this
00:31:561 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:418 (1,1) - this could be better, try another pattern no better pattern orz
00:52:989 (3,4) - blanket them not necessary

[Insane]
omg so high, this mod will be sucks
01:24:061 (1,5) - stack'em people won't find them unstacked lol
00:11:204 (5,1,2) - that's weird not that weird....
00:29:775 (4) - nc rhythm change not necessary
00:34:418 (5,6) - stack 6 and 5's end, consistency ok
can't mod much so high sry :o

GL !!

Crystal wrote:

m4m
这歌好洗脑啊

[Insane]
00:35:489 (8) - 这样重叠会不会不太好看啊 可以放在96|172 结合上面的mod调整了一下
00:50:311 (2,3,4) - 468|188 00:50:668 (5,6,1) - 408|356 这种感觉可能比较好 调整后面的如果你有需要 应该没必要 我喜欢三连之后离近一点
00:51:740 (2,3,4) - ^ 152|148
01:23:704 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个可以再舒张一点 这样和后面的配合看起来好些

[Hard]
00:12:989 (1,2) - 这个会不会不好读啊 1就会被以为是和前面的1/2间隔的 哎我已经彻底放弃读图的问题 这种我一直觉得不会出问题
00:26:114 - 加个circle 没地放
00:31:025 (2,3) - 也是不太好读的感觉 前面改了
00:32:454 (2,3) - ^

Easy diff seems fine.

good luck.
Thanks for mods.
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
加油吧！這首好聽 :)
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
我想加一个Insane ;w;
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

ts8zs wrote:

我想加一个Insane ;w;
抱歉 diff已经很多不想再加了
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

imoutosan wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

我想加一个Insane ;w;
抱歉 diff已经很多不想再加了
已经做完了;w;
http://puu.sh/hoA8g/930c327240.zip
可以看一眼么;w;
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

ts8zs wrote:

已经做完了;w;
http://puu.sh/hoA8g/930c327240.zip
可以看一眼么;w;
……
我看看啊……
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
听了歌就追番去了
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

AIR wrote:

听了歌就追番去了
动画的节奏感觉控制的不是特别好 原作比较好玩（然而翻译只到第二卷
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
NM from my queue~



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]

  • Why you not add [Nitta Emi] and Ts8zs in tags? ;w; (they make a diff, right?)
    For all diff: Disable "Widescreen Supprot" because you not have SB!

    [Easy][list:1337]
    OD -1

    00:17:565 (2,3) - DS is problem and error, Plz fixed that ;w;
    01:00:422 (3) - NC
    01:11:851 (3) - ^ or delete and change to slider because music really like many circle and so hard for newbie player
    01:18:994 (1) - Ugly slider, change plz and plz use slider with blanket for 01:20:422 in end slider
    01:23:279 (3) - NC or delete and change to slider because music really like many circle and so hard for newbie player

    Well, I don't see many trouble, and Nice Diff!

    [Nitta's Normal][list:1337]
    HP +1

    00:13:279 (1,2) - change to slider because that so hard if use circle
    00:13:815 (3,4) - ^
    00:14:351 (5,6,7) - Plz distance snap that, if you change 00:13:279 and 00:13:815
    00:27:565 (5) - NC
    01:02:565 (1) - Remove NC
    01:06:137 (3) - NC
    01:27:565 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Unrankable snap, Plz fixed that! or Change to slider like 00:13:279 because too hard if use circle

    No hitsound! ;w; and I think you need rework again!
    Same in Easy diff, Nice diff!

    [Hard][list:1337]
    AR and HP -1

    01:23:993 (3) - remove finsih and why not change to slider (use 1/2)?

    Nice~
For Ts8zs's Insane: AR and HP -1 and 00:47:565 - 00:49:708, is unrankable NC slider?
For Insane diff: Use AR 8 or 9, HP 6 or 7, and OD 7 or 8

Can't mod Insane diff because that so nice~ :3
Sorry if my mod is bad~ (NO KDS if not change all)

Good Luck~
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
速水还债 这歌听着我好难受啊不知道为什么

[General]
  1. 前面恭喜哥说的widescreen support和tags
  2. Hard里就一个三连，删了吧，怕被挑spread
[Easy]
  1. Fine.
[Normal]
  1. NC基本是乱的，请有规律的选择一个或者两个长白线来加NC
  2. 基本没有blanket是对的。。。请善用hitcircle来修正你所有的blanket
    example
  3. 00:04:708 (1,3) - 在低难度下尽量不要出现这样的overlap，以前只是看着不好而已，现在qat可以拿这个来dq了
  4. 00:06:851 (4,1) - stack也尽量避免 00:32:208 (4,5) - 00:55:779 (4,1) - 01:03:279 (2,3,4) - 等等
  5. 00:24:351 - 很明显的clap我觉得还是不要漏
  6. 00:33:279 (1) - 这个3/2没有理由啊
  7. 00:36:137 (1,2,3,4) - 00:38:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:41:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这三段的节奏是完全重复的，你第三段跟了vocal，而前面两段不知道在跟什么，我觉得跟一个轨就要跟到底
  8. 00:47:565 (1) - 这个spinner不明所以，你前面在跟vocal，那你这里放7个单点都比这个好
  9. 00:50:065 (1) - 不美观
  10. 00:53:815 (2,3,1) - 这个overlap+stack，绝壁被挑
  11. 00:58:994 (3) - 这个稍微好一点，但是还是不建议用3/2折返
  12. 01:15:779 - 这个萌萌音也漏掉了 01:18:637 -
总体来看，这个diff主要存在这些问题:
  1. NC乱
  2. blanket不好
  3. 选轨乱
  4. overlap和stack比较严重
需要返工

[Hard]
  1. 没什么问题，就是最好把三连删了，这个stack有点多，不太合我的style，不过应该也不会被挑
[包子]
  1. 00:03:994 (1,2,3,4) - 不如跟vocal
  2. 好像看不出什么大问题，懒摸nazi了
[imouto]
  1. 同上
看着看着又懒了
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg
from your M4M queue~

General
  1. please check writing by other modders . (widescreen support etc.)
  2. preview point on 00:49:797 - ? plz snap clean
Easy
  1. 00:28:994 (3) - sampleset-Normal, Additions-soft + finish?
  2. 01:00:422 (3) - ^
  3. 01:11:851 (3) - why here only sampleset-Normal? 01:06:137 (3) - here is finish. i think finish is better.
  4. 01:18:994 (1) - add whistle on tail
  5. 01:23:994 (5) - how about add finish? will rise tension and it is good for me
Nitta's Normal
  1. 00:11:494 (3,4,5) - ummm hard to read rhythm. i recommend this rhythm
    SPOILER
  2. 00:27:565 (5) - add NC
  3. 00:30:065 (1,2) - replace NC?
  4. 01:02:565 (1) - yes. i can understand that you added NC on here. but this NC doesn't need on here in playing. so remove NC imo.
  5. 01:18:994 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read... but i don't have good idea ;w;
  6. 01:24:708 (1,1) - to close this spin and circle. maybe needs more space
Hard
  1. 00:18:279 (3) - add NC
Ts8zs' Insane
  1. 00:22:476 - no circle on here? feels strange for me
  2. 01:24:708 - i think kiai is end on here.
Insane
  1. NICE DIFF
please check hitsounds on all diffs. i wrote on Easy diff 's mod.
nice map and good luck~
AsakuraNe
690 posts
Joined January 2015
AsakuraNe
Heeey~ :3 M4M from a long long time ago xD

These are just suggestions. If you don't want to change it, Feel free to do so ;)

GENERAL

  1. Add in Tags: Ending Tv_size Ibuki Kido Erii Yamazaki
  2. Uncheck widescreen support on all diffs, you don't have a storyboard.
  3. Change Stack Leniency to 7: http://puu.sh/hLuYc/5158b6fe58.png

EASY

  1. 00:06:137 - Remove NC. I know you're following the vocals but a combo of 2 is baad >,<{well, in my opinion xD)
  2. 00:08:994 - Remove NC
  3. 00:11:851 - Remove NC. There's no use if the combo is only 1~
  4. Okay~ I'll help you decrease the star rating by lessening the notes. :3
  5. I'm not a fan of stacking in easy so how about changing these:
  6. 00:06:137 - Change to 2/1 reverse slider
  7. 00:08:994 - ^^
  8. 00:16:851 - There's a sound here. Change 00:16:137 into a 2/1 slider or just add a note
  9. 00:18:637 - Fix DS
  10. 00:53:815 - Fix DS
  11. 01:01:494 - Ending on a white tick =v=. Change into a circle and Add 1/1 slider at 01:01:851 and NC.
  12. 01:02:565 - The slider's current position is a bad flow for an easy. How about stacking it with 5 to move it up? But I don't want stacking so... Depends on what slider you're gonna make from post above :3
  13. 01:07:565 - Important big white tick :3 It's better to click here. Start a note here~. Add Finish and NC here
  14. 01:21:851 - Change it like this: http://puu.sh/hLwtA/4e67d3840a.jpg

NITTA's NORMAL

  1. CHange HP drain rate to 4
  2. 00:04:708 - I don't like the place of this. It's not neat if the next slider is overlapping with this. Hmm. How about changing the pattern like this: http://puu.sh/hLwPs/97115a981f.jpg ? It's more easier to read. Also, Fix the blanket.
  3. 00:06:137 - Stack this to 1 like this: http://puu.sh/hLwTR/e70af0a1f4.jpg
  4. When I played it in double time. The stacking is Hard to read T_T. I prefer stacking if it's a circle and a slider. But the stacking here is a reverse slider and a circle so....(just saying my opinion though :D )
  5. 00:07:565 - UNstack these please :o You can stack instead at 3's tail end though: http://puu.sh/hLx13/efb673497d.jpg
  6. 00:10:422 - please T_T(lol xD it's just my preference because I'm want to FC it if it's ranked :D ) Unstack and make a triangle pattern
  7. 00:11:494 - The current is not good to me. How about this instead?: http://puu.sh/hLxnZ/225429ed3a.jpg ~ It follows the vocals or this:
  8. 00:19:529 - Make this a straight slider =v= It's wierd to see 1/4 look-alike curved :3 and It suits the vocals if straight
  9. 00:25:244 - Add Circle
  10. 00:26:137 - Better if you change this like the pattern at 00:24:708 because it's the same tone in the vocals anyway.
  11. 00:30:422 - Change reverse slider to 1/2 slider an a circle so to emphasize the big white tick
  12. 00:32:922 - Unstack please. Make a triangle instead
  13. 00:33:279 - Change slider into this: http://puu.sh/hLIeO/74d797f010.jpg
  14. 00:34:708 - Change the slider patern into this: http://puu.sh/hLInr/c606f7db94.jpg . Also, Make 2 stack w/ 5 to be neat.
  15. 00:36:137 - Change pattern to this: http://puu.sh/hLIzB/2f86c0941e.jpg . Blanket 1 to previous slider like the example.
  16. 00:38:994 - Change into this: http://puu.sh/hLIIR/4e358b1c14.jpg
  17. 00:39:708 - Pattern like this: http://puu.sh/hLILF/f59a9b9e1c.jpg
  18. 00:41:851 - Bad flow~ Change to this: http://puu.sh/hLJ0k/c6c21eb00c.jpg
  19. 00:58:637 - Unstack and triangle pattern again.
  20. 01:02:387 - Add Circle
  21. 01:03:815 - Add Circle - I was expecting to click here but there was no note T_T haha
  22. 01:04:351 - Don't stack w/ previous slider instead make 1 blanket this circle
  23. 01:09:529 - There should be something here that will be clicked. Try changing to 1/2 slider or just add circle. and Don't stack ;;_;;
  24. 01:11:851 - Don't stack again lol xD
  25. 01:12:108 - Change all to hitcircles like 01:06:137(3,4,5,6)
  26. 01:13:279 - Big white tick here. Make a 1/1 slider
  27. 01:16:851 - Ctrl+G
  28. 01:17:565(3,4,5) - Ctrl+JHG and fix Ds
  29. 01:18:994(1,2,3,4) - Example of a good stack for me though
  30. 01:20:779 - Bad Direction~ make it the same with 01:19:529 but in the opposite direction of that
  31. 01:23:279 - Another bad flow~ Move this up like this: http://puu.sh/hLJJ0/a406dc3681.jpg
  32. You still have messy rhythms and bad flow but you'll get better with it :3

HARD

  1. CHange Approach Rate to 7(A lot will die xD if 8 for a hard)
  2. 00:03:815 - Stack with 3 to make it look neat
  3. 00:04:708 - I repeated it like so many times before I understood where the next note will be xD How about this? http://puu.sh/hLK5a/0f978c2ded.jpg A small jump won't matter because it fits for me
  4. 00:06:851 - Make this a reverse slider like 00:06:137 . It's the same in the vocals anyway so for consistency.
  5. 00:08:458 - Another Hard to read :0 Change it like this: http://puu.sh/hLKGk/b1c5a0474a.jpg
  6. 00:16:672 - There's a sound here. Add 2 circles or a 1/2 slider
  7. 00:17:387 - Add Circle or change to 1/2 slider
  8. 00:26:137 - Well, if you're making a straight line from all those circles. This one is not straight though But if not, Nvm :3
  9. 00:30:950 - Finshing the slider here, feels wierd :0 Because of the vocals, I think you should map at 00:31:137
  10. 00:32:387 - ^^
  11. 00:31:315 - There's nothing here though~ Remove Circle, it fits more for following the vocals
  12. 00:32:744 - ^^
  13. 00:30:333 - To add spice xD Add circle here if you did above though
  14. 00:31:762 - ^^
  15. 00:40:958 - If you're gonna make a short jump here, make it consistent with the others. Because the other 3 doesn't have short jumps then this one had.
  16. 00:42:029 - The reverse slider doesn't suit for me =v= make it 1/1 slider like the other ones.
  17. 00:43:458 - ^^ this one too. =v= feels off.
  18. 00:51:762 - Add circle ~ another spice =3=
  19. 00:59:351 - The back and forth kills my eyes xD How about this? http://puu.sh/hLLWS/f0396a7b9c.jpg Also fix the alignment, i didn't fix it :D
  20. 01:08:279 - Make this like a rotation: http://puu.sh/hLMh5/052afa30cc.jpg

Okay~ wooh! That was long :3
I'll just mod these three ;) Good Luck for Ranking :)
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Forget to tell you:
Tittle is correct: ケサランパサラン TV size
Romajied Tittle: Kesaran Pasaran TV size

http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/re-kan/goods/cd1.html

No KDS~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio
Sorry for late reply.

SPOILER

gokugohan12468 wrote:

NM from my queue~



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]

  • Why you not add [Nitta Emi] and Ts8zs in tags? ;w; (they make a diff, right?)
    For all diff: Disable "Widescreen Supprot" because you not have SB! ok[/color]

    [Easy][list:1337]
    OD -1

    00:17:565 (2,3) - DS is problem and error, Plz fixed that ;w; you mean 12? they won't see 2 when they click 1 so ds is fine.
    01:00:422 (3) - NC ok
    01:11:851 (3) - ^ or delete and change to slider because music really like many circle and so hard for newbie player nced. actually most newbies can play 200bpm 1/1 even if they haven't played osu before so it's fine.
    01:18:994 (1) - Ugly slider, change plz and plz use slider with blanket for 01:20:422 in end slider ? it has blanket now
    01:23:279 (3) - NC or delete and change to slider because music really like many circle and so hard for newbie player ^

    Well, I don't see many trouble, and Nice Diff!

    [Hard][list:1337]
    AR and HP -1 -0.5

    01:23:993 (3) - remove finsih and why not change to slider (use 1/2)? because there's drum here

    Nice~
[/list]

For Ts8zs's Insane: AR and HP -1 and 00:47:565 - 00:49:708, is unrankable NC slider?
For Insane diff: Use AR 8 or 9, HP 6 or 7, and OD 7 or 8 It's fine imo

Can't mod Insane diff because that so nice~ :3
Sorry if my mod is bad~ (NO KDS if not change all)

Good Luck~
Thanks for mod!

SPOILER

[Teichan] wrote:

速水还债 这歌听着我好难受啊不知道为什么

[General]
  1. 前面恭喜哥说的widescreen support和tags
  2. Hard里就一个三连，删了吧，怕被挑spread 啥玩意 该下三连还能不下了不成
[Easy]
  1. Fine.
[Hard]
  1. 没什么问题，就是最好把三连删了，这个stack有点多，不太合我的style，不过应该也不会被挑
[包子]
  1. 00:03:994 (1,2,3,4) - 不如跟vocal
  2. 好像看不出什么大问题，懒摸nazi了
[imouto]
  1. 同上
看着看着又懒了
谢谢摸图

SPOILER

iMage-- wrote:

from your M4M queue~

General
  1. please check writing by other modders . (widescreen support etc.)
  2. preview point on 00:49:797 - ? plz snap clean ok
Easy
All fixed

Hard
  1. 00:18:279 (3) - add NC ok
Ts8zs' Insane
  1. 00:22:476 - no circle on here? feels strange for me
  2. 01:24:708 - i think kiai is end on here.
Insane
  1. NICE DIFF
please check hitsounds on all diffs. i wrote on Easy diff 's mod.
nice map and good luck~

SPOILER

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heeey~ :3 M4M from a long long time ago xD

These are just suggestions. If you don't want to change it, Feel free to do so ;)

GENERAL

  1. Add in Tags: Ending Tv_size Ibuki Kido Erii Yamazaki
  2. Uncheck widescreen support on all diffs, you don't have a storyboard.
  3. Change Stack Leniency to 7: http://puu.sh/hLuYc/5158b6fe58.png ...why? No rule says mapper must use 7

EASY

  1. 00:06:137 - Remove NC. I know you're following the vocals but a combo of 2 is baad >,<{well, in my opinion xD) what, I just nc at white lines
  2. 00:08:994 - Remove NC
  3. 00:11:851 - Remove NC. There's no use if the combo is only 1~
  4. Okay~ I'll help you decrease the star rating by lessening the notes. :3
  5. I'm not a fan of stacking in easy so how about changing these:
  6. 00:06:137 - Change to 2/1 reverse slider ...why?
  7. 00:08:994 - ^^
  8. 00:16:851 - There's a sound here. Change 00:16:137 into a 2/1 slider or just add a note no
  9. 00:18:637 - Fix DS players won't find it
  10. 00:53:815 - Fix DS
  11. 01:01:494 - Ending on a white tick =v=. Change into a circle and Add 1/1 slider at 01:01:851 and NC. sorry, didn't get your meaning
  12. 01:02:565 - The slider's current position is a bad flow for an easy. How about stacking it with 5 to move it up? But I don't want stacking so... Depends on what slider you're gonna make from post above :3 not that bad imo
  13. 01:07:565 - Important big white tick :3 It's better to click here. Start a note here~. Add Finish and NC here for newbies there's not much difference between slider ends and circles.
  14. 01:21:851 - Change it like this: http://puu.sh/hLwtA/4e67d3840a.jpg I prefer current one

HARD

  1. CHange Approach Rate to 7(A lot will die xD if 8 for a hard) they will die even if I use 7
  2. 00:03:815 - Stack with 3 to make it look neat ok
  3. 00:04:708 - I repeated it like so many times before I understood where the next note will be xD How about this? http://puu.sh/hLK5a/0f978c2ded.jpg A small jump won't matter because it fits for me but it flows bad
  4. 00:06:851 - Make this a reverse slider like 00:06:137 . It's the same in the vocals anyway so for consistency. then it can't follow the vocal on 00:07:208 -
  5. 00:08:458 - Another Hard to read :0 Change it like this: http://puu.sh/hLKGk/b1c5a0474a.jpg
  6. 00:16:672 - There's a sound here. Add 2 circles or a 1/2 slider no
  7. 00:17:387 - Add Circle or change to 1/2 slider I'm not following that track
  8. 00:26:137 - Well, if you're making a straight line from all those circles. This one is not straight though But if not, Nvm :3 fixed
  9. 00:30:950 - Finshing the slider here, feels wierd :0 Because of the vocals, I think you should map at 00:31:137 but I'm following drum
  10. 00:32:387 - ^^
  11. 00:31:315 - There's nothing here though~ Remove Circle, it fits more for following the vocals
  12. 00:32:744 - ^^
  13. 00:30:333 - To add spice xD Add circle here if you did above though ...no
  14. 00:31:762 - ^^
  15. 00:40:958 - If you're gonna make a short jump here, make it consistent with the others. Because the other 3 doesn't have short jumps then this one had. fixed
  16. 00:42:029 - The reverse slider doesn't suit for me =v= make it 1/1 slider like the other ones. ok
  17. 00:43:458 - ^^ this one too. =v= feels off.
  18. 00:51:762 - Add circle ~ another spice =3= uh, feels off.
  19. 00:59:351 - The back and forth kills my eyes xD How about this? http://puu.sh/hLLWS/f0396a7b9c.jpg Also fix the alignment, i didn't fix it :D
  20. 01:08:279 - Make this like a rotation: http://puu.sh/hLMh5/052afa30cc.jpg

Okay~ wooh! That was long :3
I'll just mod these three ;) Good Luck for Ranking :)
Thanks for modding.

Edit: metadata什么的已经改了
Last edited by Fushimi Rio , edited 1 time in total.
Peachtrees
815 posts
Joined May 2013
Peachtrees
M4M from your Q >w</~

Easy

00:04:708 (2) - curve honestly looks rather jagged :c not sure if that's what you were going for, but instead of looking speacial/different, it really just looks bad

00:08:994 (1,2) - reaaaallly close to being off-screen. Some BNs might be bothered by this (happened to me on a few occasions) so see if you can move this up a little?

00:17:565 (2) - wouldn't this need a NC?

00:24:708 (1,2,1) - why not fill up the gaps here? the song kind of picks up in tempo, so I feel like filling these gaps would reflect the song more accurately

00:30:422 (1) - is a shaped like this really the way to go? looks reaaally jagged, and I honestly don't think the song is calling for something like this, especially since I'm not sure if newer players might end up being umm confused by this (apparantly they can confused by literally everything so just saying)

00:37:565 (2) - perhaps move the red anchor to an earlier point to make the sldier look a little less jagged?

00:58:994 (1,2) - ew overlap :c + I'm not sure if 3/2 gaps like these are really predictable for beginners, these might end up being confusing

01:04:708 (1) - pretty picky, but you could make this curve a little smoother

Nitta's Normal

00:03:280 (1,1) - why not make these copy's of each other? pattern looks messy right now >< could also make this symmetric if you feel like it, you know, for xtra neatness

00:04:708 (1,3) - messy overlap ><

00:06:851 (4,1) - are you sure about stacking these? doesn't feel like keeping the cursor stationary properly emphasizes the downbeats strength

00:11:494 (3) - putting the downbeat on the slidertail here feels odd, doesn't really do the song justice

00:22:387 (2) - add a circle? feels like this goes along nicely with the vocals

00:28:815 (7) - ^

00:43:279 (4,1) - see if you can avoid this overlap? doesn't feel like that'd require lots of re-arranging :c

00:51:494 (3,4) - could fix up the blanket a little here

00:54:351 (3,1) - i REALLY REALLY doubt that stacking this is a good idea

00:55:779 (4,1) - again, opverlap looks rather messy. I'd avoid these as much as possible

01:06:851 (5) - could fix the spacing on this one (0.95 DS to previous note)

Not a big fan of stacking Stuff like this :c

Hard

00:07:565 (1,2) - feels sorta uncomfortable with 1 facing down like this :/ could perhaps ctrl+g 2 and 3

00:26:404 (3) - add a circle?

00:27:208 (5,1) - could probably stack this, for some extra neatness c;

00:30:422 (1,2) - this feels rather weird :c vocals feel rather strong, so not mapping these feels odd. Additionally, having the 1/1 break between red ticks feels odd and a bit unpredictable

00:37:744 (2,3) - put the red anchor into the middle of the slider? symmetry is kinda off, which bothers me a bit ><

00:43:458 (2) - are you sure that having a red anchor here is neccessary? wouldnt this play/look a lot nicer with a normal round blanket

01:05:066 (2,6,1) - looks a little messy imo

01:09:529 (4) - remove thie one? feels like this might end up confusing lots of people, I certainly didn't expect it

01:14:708 (1,2) - dunno, but stacking just doesn't feel like a good idea here. the 'hoi' feels 'jumpier'

ts8zs' Insane

00:11:494 (6,1) - 3.6 DS jump? isn't this a bit overdone?

00:12:387 (3,4) - these feel a little close

00:23:637 (3,4,5,6,7) - symmetry here is off, which honestly feels kinda noticeable ><

00:24:976 (3) - 1/4 here really neccessary? I can't really here anything on the blue tick

00:27:565 (1) - hmm not sure if this one is really fitting the song well, especially since I feel like the vocals on the tail need something clickable on them

00:37:744 (6,7) - blanket looks pretty sloppy

00:40:958 (6,7) - ^

00:47:565 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - is the NC spam here really neccessary?

00:58:636 (5,1) - overlap here doesn't look as neat 00:52:566 (4,2) this one too actually ><

01:00:422 (1,2,3) - are you sure about having these so close? these feel very powerful, yet they're very close with near to no impact

01:17:208 (3,1) - feel a little close

Lots of overlappin in the kiai, I personally dislike that, though I guess that is just my personal taste ><

Insane

00:47:208 (3,4) - 5. 2 jump? isn't this a tiny bit overdone? next section has similar jumps, but these are between sliders and they actually feel a lot stronger

00:55:958 (4,1) - blanket is off by a bit ><

01:12:029 (2,4) - could perhaps space these out a little more. This feels very strong and jumpy and I feel like it calls for something a bit harsher c:

My favourite Diff in the set <3

Lovely song! I wish you the best of luck o3o
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
allfixed
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: ED.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49775
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Kesaran Pasaran TV SIZE Ver.
TitleUnicode:ケサランパサラン TV SIZE Ver.
Artist:everying!
ArtistUnicode:every♥ing!
Creator:imoutosan
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:レーカン！
Tags:RE-KAN!
BeatmapID:686399
BeatmapSetID:303324

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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256,264,21315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,144,21494,2,0,L|248:160,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,104,21851,6,0,L|112:88,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,32,22208,1,8,1:2:0:0:
200,144,22387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,88,22565,6,0,L|144:72,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,16,22922,1,8,1:2:0:0:
232,128,23101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,23279,5,0,1:2:0:0:
352,64,23458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,168,23637,1,8,1:2:0:0:
312,168,23815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,168,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,23994,1,0,1:2:0:0:
256,72,24172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,272,24351,1,8,1:2:0:0:
256,112,24708,5,4,1:2:0:0:
104,152,24887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,152,24976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,25065,2,0,L|184:168,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,25422,1,0,1:2:0:0:
304,160,25601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,240,25779,2,0,L|56:256,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,26137,5,0,1:2:0:0:
48,144,26316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,144,26405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,26494,2,0,L|128:160,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,26851,1,0,1:2:0:0:
248,152,27030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,232,27208,2,0,L|0:248,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,27565,6,0,P|200:216|168:312,2,160,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
160,312,28458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,200,28637,2,0,L|328:280,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,28994,5,0,1:2:0:0:
280,168,29351,1,8,1:2:0:0:
264,152,29708,1,0,1:2:0:0:
232,272,30065,5,8,1:2:0:0:
360,240,30244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,184,30422,2,0,L|64:160,1,80,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
200,80,30958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,112,31137,2,0,L|328:152,1,40,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,31494,2,0,L|440:256,1,40,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,31851,6,0,L|112:224,1,80,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
248,144,32387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,176,32566,2,0,L|376:216,1,40,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,32923,2,0,L|488:320,1,40,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,33279,6,0,P|304:343|265:335,1,80,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
312,232,33815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,312,33994,2,0,L|176:352,1,40,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,224,34351,2,0,L|56:272,1,40,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,135,34708,6,0,P|70:128|32:136,1,80,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
160,216,35244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,144,35422,2,0,L|316:106,1,40,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,35779,5,8,1:2:0:0:
264,136,36137,5,0,1:2:0:0:
208,224,36315,2,0,P|272:240|344:208,1,128,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,136,36851,1,0,1:2:0:0:
272,112,37029,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,56,37208,2,0,P|488:112|480:184,1,128,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
368,256,37744,2,0,P|304:232|240:256,1,128,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,38279,2,0,P|344:352|384:352,1,64,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,304,38637,1,8,1:2:0:0:
272,328,38994,5,0,1:2:0:0:
184,320,39172,2,0,P|264:320|328:296,1,128,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,39708,1,0,1:2:0:0:
352,96,39886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,200,40065,2,0,P|456:280|440:352,2,128,8|0|8,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,40958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,232,41137,2,0,P|288:232|344:184,1,128,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
408,64,41851,5,0,1:2:0:0:
352,152,42029,2,0,P|336:216|368:288,1,128,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,42565,1,0,1:2:0:0:
296,64,42744,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,240,42922,2,0,B|224:264|256:280|256:280|296:264|312:240,1,128,8|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
240,88,43458,6,0,P|184:96|160:160,1,128,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,148,43994,2,0,P|325:93|264:88,1,128,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,44529,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,160,44708,5,0,1:2:0:0:
176,160,44887,2,0,L|144:80,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,45422,1,0,1:2:0:0:
336,112,45601,2,0,L|368:32,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,46137,5,0,1:2:0:0:
208,176,46316,2,0,L|176:96,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,46851,1,0,1:2:0:0:
368,128,47030,2,0,L|400:48,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,224,47565,6,0,P|360:240|408:240,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,159,47922,2,0,P|162:146|122:142,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,135,48279,2,0,P|301:98|305:58,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,48637,2,0,P|208:296|208:344,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,48994,6,0,P|349:126|373:84,1,80,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,160,49351,2,0,P|152:144|103:144,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,49708,2,0,P|266:306|290:347,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,50065,5,8,1:2:0:0:
136,304,50244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,168,50422,6,0,P|152:168|248:216,1,160,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
136,304,50958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,207,51137,2,0,P|302:175|398:175,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,304,51672,5,2,0:0:0:0:
472,192,51851,2,0,P|401:156|321:152,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,304,52387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,152,52566,2,0,P|257:120|161:120,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
224,248,53101,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,104,53279,2,0,P|174:68|254:64,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
144,224,53815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,160,53994,6,0,P|16:128|16:80,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,54351,2,0,P|248:200|248:248,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,54708,6,0,L|472:128,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,55065,2,0,L|424:288,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,55422,2,0,L|280:128,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,55779,2,0,L|232:288,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,176,56137,5,4,1:2:0:0:
40,176,56315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,96,56494,2,0,L|160:176,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,56851,2,0,L|368:48,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,57208,2,0,L|328:248,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,344,57565,5,0,1:2:0:0:
368,344,57744,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,192,57922,2,0,L|464:272,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,58279,2,0,L|320:144,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,24,58636,2,0,L|480:104,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,96,58994,6,0,P|376:96|472:32,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59529,2,0,L|434:270,1,80,2|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
312,112,59887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,256,60065,2,0,L|352:344,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,60422,5,0,1:2:0:0:
248,208,60779,1,8,1:2:0:0:
152,184,61137,1,0,1:2:0:0:
176,280,61494,1,8,1:2:0:0:
144,160,61851,5,0,1:2:0:0:
160,48,62029,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,112,62208,2,0,L|256:208,1,80,12|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,62565,5,0,1:2:0:0:
192,96,62743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,160,62922,2,0,L|288:256,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,63279,5,0,1:2:0:0:
224,144,63457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,208,63636,2,0,L|320:304,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,63994,2,0,L|432:64,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,64351,1,8,1:2:0:0:
400,136,64708,6,0,P|272:120|240:136,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
320,232,65244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,152,65422,2,0,L|440:72,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,65,65779,2,0,L|226:161,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,255,66137,6,0,P|108:282|32:264,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,128,66851,2,0,P|403:101|480:120,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,136,67565,5,0,1:2:0:0:
176,24,67743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,88,67922,2,0,L|272:184,1,80,12|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,68279,5,0,1:2:0:0:
208,72,68457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,136,68636,2,0,L|304:232,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,232,68993,5,0,1:2:0:0:
240,120,69171,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,184,69350,2,0,L|336:280,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,120,69708,2,0,L|448:40,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,240,70065,1,8,1:2:0:0:
408,112,70422,6,0,P|360:96|296:112,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,160,70779,1,8,1:2:0:0:
351,193,70958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,79,71137,6,0,P|257:63|193:79,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,127,71494,1,8,1:2:0:0:
248,160,71673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,48,71851,6,0,P|152:32|88:48,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,79,72208,2,0,P|342:45|361:-17,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,72565,2,0,P|234:209|279:256,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,72922,6,0,P|408:152|320:168,2,160,8|4|8,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
400,280,73815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,264,73994,6,0,L|272:104,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
192,168,74529,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,232,74708,2,0,P|72:184|104:72,2,160,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,75779,1,8,1:2:0:0:
128,64,76137,5,0,1:2:0:0:
0,112,76315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,208,76494,2,0,L|176:224,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,76851,5,0,1:2:0:0:
64,184,77029,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,280,77208,2,0,L|240:296,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,208,77565,6,0,P|344:208|384:192,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,160,77922,2,0,P|484:125|450:98,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,24,78279,2,0,P|340:58|333:101,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,78637,1,8,1:2:0:0:
222,47,78994,6,0,P|143:39|64:48,1,160,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
208,144,79530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,104,79709,2,0,P|384:96|464:104,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
296,200,80244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,216,80423,6,0,P|72:168|104:56,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
208,144,80958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,344,81137,2,0,P|176:296|184:248,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,296,81494,1,8,1:2:0:0:
320,280,81851,6,0,P|244:287|160:280,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,104,82565,2,0,P|267:96|352:104,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,112,83101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,208,83279,6,0,L|304:320,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,83637,2,0,L|448:272,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,224,83994,2,0,L|264:336,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,84352,2,0,L|408:288,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,84708,5,4,1:2:0:0:
136,256,84887,2,0,L|56:272,1,80,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
184,160,85244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,160,85333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,85422,2,0,L|104:176,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,192,85780,1,8,1:2:0:0:
48,96,85958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,256,86137,5,0,1:2:0:0:
240,272,86316,2,0,L|320:288,1,80,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
192,176,86673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,176,86762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,86851,2,0,L|272:192,1,80,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,87209,1,8,1:2:0:0:
376,192,87565,5,0,1:2:0:0:
280,216,87744,1,4,1:2:0:0:
280,232,88101,5,0,1:2:0:0:
176,216,88279,1,4,1:2:0:0:
176,200,88637,5,0,1:2:0:0:
72,216,88815,1,4,1:2:0:0:
呃...话说那些meta和previewtime什么的改完了之后叫我更新下orz
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
最近送摸，來加點分數

[General]
1.Nitta's Normal have a not the same combo color in combo 3.
2.Open Aimod seems many errors there (Inconsistency in PreviewTime,title,tags etc..)
3.The 'Size' title should be fix to 'size',follow the official website to named better.
4. and
[Easy]
00:04:351 (1,2) - At Easy diff don't stack better (By IamKwaN confirmed,and the same status too)
00:14:351 (3,1,2) - Actually it can keep consistent distance,try to fix it.
01:04:351 (4) - Missed clap? (If listen to the 24 clap..)
01:27:565 (1,2,3) - Follow current some dq reason,seems don't 1/2 spam in easy diff better (Suggest change a spinner,feel still fine)

[Nitta's Normal]

這Ctrl+A的分布太向內部集中了，不摸這個diff。

[Hard]
00:17:565 (1,2,1,2,3) - Seems not fit to do this pattern at Hard diff,to these Q will say so hard with beginners imo.
00:54:708 (1,2,3) - Feel sounds like has no any jumps there,why not the same DS?
01:01:137 (3) - Same heavy vocal here,the distance it should be the same here?
01:23:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seems looks like a bit complicated pattern to their viewpoint.

[Insane]
00:15:066 (2,3) - Have a bit inaudible imo.
00:18:547 (5) - This note has no sound imo.
00:47:565 (1,2) - This 2 sliders use ctrl+g?

[Ts8zs' Insane] (Missed video)

00:23:637 (3,4,5,6) - Feel it can enlarge a bit distance,seems a bit close imo (Because the same jump part here)
00:47:565 (1) - Forgot to add finish?
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Edit: 新人來修之後再叫我來幫你 :)
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