General- I'm not sure if diffnames related to a username can be used anymore, you should ask a BN or a QAT about this ;_; will do
- Tags suggestions: metal rock death metal marathon speed
addedDoKo00:23:850 (6) - Since you were always using jumps on those sections, you should add one here too to be consistent. Here's a suggestion
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2809564.
fixed. Dunno why i did that myself.00:33:000 (4) - Ctrl + G this would improve the flow a lot. It would be smoother.
done00:39:750 (11) - Wasn't the NC supposed to start here? Since you're always adding one in a big white tick and it's a new section.
Doesn't really look too good and i want these 3 circles to be kind of seperated.00:49:800 (1) - Why NC here and not 00:49:350 (4) - here? :c
changed00:54:150 (11,1) - Same as above.
Nah. This is fine as it is imo.There are some things like these I mentioned above about the NC, I didn't really understand why you did but it's okay since it's consistent.00:57:450 (10) - Increasing the jump here would be better better. The section is being emphasized by 00:56:550 (8,9) - with bigger jumps, an anti-jump would break this ;_;
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2809668.
I didn't want that sliderende to disappear under that long slider before... But i guess that's irrelevant.01:19:950 (9,10,11,12) - This is a REALLY breaking-flow-and-combo pattern, doesn't fit well there in my opinion, doing this would be better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2809727 (look at the numbers). This is just a suggestion, but really recommended tho.
fixed01:23:250 (2) - Ctrl + G this wouldn't break the flow and put enphasis on this beat 01:23:550 (3) - . Since the vocal is strong there I guess there is no problem and it would be better to add a jump c:
fixed01:28:200 (2) - Overlaping this was confusing, I thought it was a 3/4 rhythm, at least while a played. Maybe it's just me ;_;
Nobody else got a problem with that so far, but if somebody else mentions it again i will change it (:02:22:800 (10) - There's no need of a 1/8 here, there is no 1/8 rhythm here and you were always using big sliders to enphasize this part. Would be weird to have just one 1/8 slider here :c
You are right. Really no point in making a 1/8 there. But i kinda liked it :c03:12:150 (14) - You probably forgot to add a NC here
q_q03:18:750 - You really shouldn't ignore those beats, try adding a stream with a low DS here or 1/4 sliders.
done 03:52:800 (10) - Same about the 1/8 I've mentioned before.
done04:17:850 (10) - What about a Ctrl + G to improve the flow?
done04:55:645 (1) - Using a gray 1/16 tick here would be better. Try listening at 25% and you'll see that 1/2 is really late.
changed04:56:814 (1) - Same here, but 1/4 is better than 1/16.
timing and things like that is my worst. lol05:02:250 (10,11,12,13) - Why slow spaced streams? You were using 0,9x before, try to do the same here, I couldn't notice any weak beats here for low DS :c
I like to vary some things, but okay :305:55:800 - You should add a stacked circle here. Do anything but pleeeeeeeease don't ignore this beat ;_;
GOMENE! Q_q06:24:450 (1) - I don't recommend stacking this. Some players can miss this by clicking more than 17 times. It's nearly on the end and missing here would be really bad. Plus, the beat here is strong, stacking is really not a good idea.
This was actually my intention. I'm such an evil prick. But I should change it. Made the last circle into a slider as well.07:01:875 (4,5,6,7) - This is more spaced than 07:01:650 (1,2,3) - . Is it intentional? If it is, you can ignore this.
Not intentional. It was a sliderstream before. I changed it, but must have picked the wrong DS.07:36:450 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ♥ ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ ♥ ~(^O^)~07:39:450 (1,2,3) - Since the spacing between these sliders and 07:38:850 (1,2,3) - is really near, it can cause a sliderbreak confusing the players. I'd recommend increase the spacing a bit, or instead of sliders you can add streams.
That's why i put a NC there. But i increased the spacing as you said, just to make sure07:42:450 (13) - New combo here? c:
done07:49:050 - There is no beat here to follow, you should end the spinner here and delete 07:49:200 (1) - this note. But it's just a suggestion, you can keep it if you like.
Changed it. Most people fall asleep at the last, long spinner anyways. One circle is easier to click than 2