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Arcubin

Dasheroo wrote:

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00:14:117 (1) - kk it's better if you avoid the overlap here! no... breaking the flow
00:23:529 (1,2,3) - Flow is bad here. Can you do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157023 ^
00:32:941 (1,2,3) - This is a terrible case of overlap... But.. It looks good. So it's np ^^ I'm noticing that now. already noticing @_@ okay
01:08:235 (3) - This weird form! Make something better if possible! It corrupts the perfect flow this map has. no.. i follow the piano
Hard
OD+1 too high.. no
Start of this 00:02:647 (5) -... In the end of the previous slider! no, breaking the flow
00:04:632 (1) - It's better if you delete this. following the piano
01:15:000 (8) - This is impossible to read, for an hd player. kay
01:19:705 (8) - ^. I suggest to move it out. kay

Hope I helped. ^^
thanks
lino1000

azintairin710 wrote:

sorry ._. i think i won't use another taiko ._. but maybe i can pick it as external diff :D
It took me only arround 20 minutes to make it, and it was some training in mapping anyway, so I dont mind :D. If you want do with it whatever you want :)
IA42
Becus you fo offline without any notice so i decide to continue the chat before
here the last chat
16:06 IA42: kaya-nya nih server-nya deh yang down... maaf ya agak lama'an dikit T.T
16:06 azintairin710: gpp :D
16:07 IA42: dah ku DL :D
16:07 azintairin710: y
16:07 azintairin710: kalo udah selese ngomong aja :D entar aku spec
16:08 IA42: dah selese nih :3
16:08 azintairin710: ok...
16:10 IA42: maaf tadi adek gangguin T.T
16:10 azintairin710: uhh..
16:10 azintairin710: gpp
16:10 azintairin710: :D
16:10 azintairin710: tenang aje...
16:13 azintairin710: gimana?
16:14 IA42: ntar masih nyari... tunggu ntar ye :3
16:14 azintairin710: yo..
16:17 IA42: 00:04:632 (1) disarankan gantii jadi slider dan pindah awalan slider ini 00:04:705 (2) ke 00:05:000 (2) dan hilangkan slider reverse
16:18 azintairin710: ...
16:18 azintairin710: itu normal ato champ
16:18 IA42: oh champ XD
16:18 azintairin710: XD
16:19 IA42: ubah hit ini 00:23:382 (1,2) menjadi slider karna kalo hit terkesan agak mengejut kan.
16:19 azintairin710: ettoo...
16:19 azintairin710: coba habis timing pake -
16:20 azintairin710: biar kepisah antar timing sama mod
16:20 IA42: oh iya maaf soal-nya baru belajar nge map niih :p
16:20 azintairin710: buat yang 00:04:632 (1) - gak aku ambil...
16:20 azintairin710: ya gpp... :D
16:20 azintairin710: sama-sama belajar
16:21 azintairin710: 00:23:382 (1,2) - yang ini coba dipke deh
16:23 IA42: coba letakkan hit di sini 00:34:411 soal-nya masih ada kedengeran suara disitu jadi menurutku mungkin bisa di tambah kan agar bisa mengikuti irama musik :3
16:24 IA42: dah itu aja sisa-nya masih "yes" gak tau deh mas anang XD
16:25 azintairin710: gak deh... suaranya pelan banget... apalagi kalo ditambahin malah ngerusak flow
16:26 azintairin710: ._. kalo kak danielnya? (emang indonesian idol cilik ._.)
16:27 azintairin710: oh iya...
16:27 azintairin710: menurutmu diff champ itu low-hard ato normal?
16:28 IA42: ahaha XD kalo yang normal coba pindah ini 00:49:411 (3)- agak jauhan dikit, kalo diff champ menurutku ya low-hard lah....
16:29 azintairin710: :D syukur deh... :D soalnya emang targetin low-hard
16:29 IA42: soal-nya ini 00:49:411 (3)- gak kebaca kalo deket kaya gitu bila pake DT+HR+HD
16:29 IA42: oh i see
16:30 azintairin710: lebih jauh?
16:30 azintairin710: dari (2) ato (4)?
16:30 azintairin710: 00:47:941 (2) - ato 00:51:176 (4) -
16:31 IA42: bukan timing-nya tapi posisi-nya mas T.T
16:32 IA42: oh ya sama yang ini 01:17:647 (4)- juga pindah posisi-nya sedikit ke atas
16:33 azintairin710: iya...
16:33 IA42: dah itu aja deh untuk sekarang ntar aku re-check lagi kalo dah update :3
16:33 azintairin710: aku juga tau... tapi dijauhin dari yang (2) ato (4)?
16:34 IA42: kan tadi yang 3??? ini diff normal kan??
16:34 azintairin710: iy:3
16:36 IA42: nih mas yang ini 00:49:411 (3)- agak kiri dikit mungkin bagus >.>
16:36 azintairin710: ohh... ok
16:37 azintairin710: maksud aku itu pindah 00:49:411 (3) - lebih jauh dari mana. 00:47:941 (2) - ato 00:47:941 (2) - gitu... ya udah udah ngerti sekarang
16:39 IA42: yang ini 00:49:411 (3)- dari x452 y164 ke x504 y208 kay gini nih http://puu.sh/cpLpD.jpg
16:43 IA42: ...
and here for my opinion:
[normal]
- 00:49:411 (3) pindah ini dari x452 y164 ke x504 y208 kay gini nih http://puu.sh/cpLpD.jpg
just that.
Topic Starter
Arcubin

IA42 wrote:

Becus you fo offline without any notice so i decide to continue the chat before
here the last chat
16:06 IA42: kaya-nya nih server-nya deh yang down... maaf ya agak lama'an dikit T.T
16:06 azintairin710: gpp :D
16:07 IA42: dah ku DL :D
16:07 azintairin710: y
16:07 azintairin710: kalo udah selese ngomong aja :D entar aku spec
16:08 IA42: dah selese nih :3
16:08 azintairin710: ok...
16:10 IA42: maaf tadi adek gangguin T.T
16:10 azintairin710: uhh..
16:10 azintairin710: gpp
16:10 azintairin710: :D
16:10 azintairin710: tenang aje...
16:13 azintairin710: gimana?
16:14 IA42: ntar masih nyari... tunggu ntar ye :3
16:14 azintairin710: yo..
16:17 IA42: 00:04:632 (1) disarankan gantii jadi slider dan pindah awalan slider ini 00:04:705 (2) ke 00:05:000 (2) dan hilangkan slider reverse
16:18 azintairin710: ...
16:18 azintairin710: itu normal ato champ
16:18 IA42: oh champ XD
16:18 azintairin710: XD
16:19 IA42: ubah hit ini 00:23:382 (1,2) menjadi slider karna kalo hit terkesan agak mengejut kan.
16:19 azintairin710: ettoo...
16:19 azintairin710: coba habis timing pake -
16:20 azintairin710: biar kepisah antar timing sama mod
16:20 IA42: oh iya maaf soal-nya baru belajar nge map niih :p
16:20 azintairin710: buat yang 00:04:632 (1) - gak aku ambil...
16:20 azintairin710: ya gpp... :D
16:20 azintairin710: sama-sama belajar
16:21 azintairin710: 00:23:382 (1,2) - yang ini coba dipke deh
16:23 IA42: coba letakkan hit di sini 00:34:411 soal-nya masih ada kedengeran suara disitu jadi menurutku mungkin bisa di tambah kan agar bisa mengikuti irama musik :3
16:24 IA42: dah itu aja sisa-nya masih "yes" gak tau deh mas anang XD
16:25 azintairin710: gak deh... suaranya pelan banget... apalagi kalo ditambahin malah ngerusak flow
16:26 azintairin710: ._. kalo kak danielnya? (emang indonesian idol cilik ._.)
16:27 azintairin710: oh iya...
16:27 azintairin710: menurutmu diff champ itu low-hard ato normal?
16:28 IA42: ahaha XD kalo yang normal coba pindah ini 00:49:411 (3)- agak jauhan dikit, kalo diff champ menurutku ya low-hard lah....
16:29 azintairin710: :D syukur deh... :D soalnya emang targetin low-hard
16:29 IA42: soal-nya ini 00:49:411 (3)- gak kebaca kalo deket kaya gitu bila pake DT+HR+HD
16:29 IA42: oh i see
16:30 azintairin710: lebih jauh?
16:30 azintairin710: dari (2) ato (4)?
16:30 azintairin710: 00:47:941 (2) - ato 00:51:176 (4) -
16:31 IA42: bukan timing-nya tapi posisi-nya mas T.T
16:32 IA42: oh ya sama yang ini 01:17:647 (4)- juga pindah posisi-nya sedikit ke atas
16:33 azintairin710: iya...
16:33 IA42: dah itu aja deh untuk sekarang ntar aku re-check lagi kalo dah update :3
16:33 azintairin710: aku juga tau... tapi dijauhin dari yang (2) ato (4)?
16:34 IA42: kan tadi yang 3??? ini diff normal kan??
16:34 azintairin710: iy:3
16:36 IA42: nih mas yang ini 00:49:411 (3)- agak kiri dikit mungkin bagus >.>
16:36 azintairin710: ohh... ok
16:37 azintairin710: maksud aku itu pindah 00:49:411 (3) - lebih jauh dari mana. 00:47:941 (2) - ato 00:47:941 (2) - gitu... ya udah udah ngerti sekarang
16:39 IA42: yang ini 00:49:411 (3)- dari x452 y164 ke x504 y208 kay gini nih http://puu.sh/cpLpD.jpg
16:43 IA42: ...
and here for my opinion:
[normal]
- 00:49:411 (3) pindah ini dari x452 y164 ke x504 y208 kay gini nih http://puu.sh/cpLpD.jpg
just that.
gak aku ambil :) ngerusak flow rasanya
emilia
Hey from M4M queue :D Sorry I can only mod std :P

  • [General]
  1. Suggest you add AudioLeadIn since the map starts on 0 offset, may be too fast for players

    [Normal]
  2. 00:02:353 (3,4) - Personal preference, but I suggest shift 4 more towards the right so lead in is better
  3. 00:02:353 (3,4) - Blanket fix
  4. 00:06:176 (2,4) - Suggest shift 4 away to prevent intersection with 2
  5. 00:15:588 (2,3) - Try to make this more circular as well
  6. 00:18:823 (1,2) - Intersection is quite ugly here IMO
  7. 00:21:176 (3,4,5) - Maybe change to reverse slider?
  8. 00:32:941 (1) - Make the 2nd half of the body more circular
  9. 00:32:941 (1,2,3) - Intersection is super ugly
  10. 00:37:647 (1,2) - You can perfect this blanket more
  11. 00:42:941 (1,2) - ^
  12. 00:45:588 (4) - Just personal preference, curve this less to flow better with 5
  13. 01:08:235 (3) - Unfitting slider art IMO
  14. 01:15:294 (1,2) - Ugly stack
  15. 01:17:647 (4) - Unfitting slider shape
  16. 01:20:000 (1) - Dunno about the spinner, I think it should end on the white line later

    Its an ok Normal, rather good already, just minor problems

    [Champion]
  17. 00:01:470 (3,5) - Ugly stack, either shift completely away or stack nicely
  18. 00:02:647 (5,6) - Minor blanket fix
  19. 00:04:632 (1,2) - The rhythm here may be too hard for players to grasp, maybe try triplet or remove the hitcircle
  20. 00:11:764 (4,5,6) - Maybe try having 5 and 6 blanket 4's tail and have 5 and 6 be more circular
  21. 00:13:235 (6,1) - Blanket fix
  22. 00:15:588 (3,4,5) - The timing here may be hard to get for players, try to not have such big jumps
  23. 00:23:382 (1) - It appears to me that this note covers nothing in the music, suggest remove
  24. 00:24:411 (3,4,5,6) - Suggest 5 and 6 to be more circular and blanket 4, and for the tail of 6 to stack better with tail of 3.
  25. 00:31:470 (3,4) - Shift 4 higher to have blanket instead
  26. 00:35:588 (1,2) - Try blanket
  27. 00:44:705 (4,5) - Very very slight blanket issue
  28. 00:45:588 (5,6) - The intersection feels a bit ugly + weird
  29. 00:48:823 (3,4,5) - Try a stack on 5's head on 3's tail and blanket 4 better with them
  30. 00:51:764 (1,2) - Minor blanket fix
  31. 00:52:647 (2,3) - Awkward intersection
  32. 00:57:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  33. 01:02:941 (3,4) - Minor blanket fix
  34. 01:04:411 (5) - Go for better symmetry
  35. 01:05:294 (6,1) - Awkward intersection
  36. 01:05:882 (1,2) - Very very minor blanket fix
  37. 01:05:882 (1,3) - Stack tail of 1 and head of 3
  38. 01:07:647 (3,4,5) - Fix blanket
  39. 01:15:294 (1,2) - Awkward intersection
  40. 01:20:000 (1) - Same spinner problem as Normal

    Sorry if this seems super super nazi, but I'm only trying to help improve your map to be the best :)

    Basically just quite a lot of awkward intersections between sliders, not many problems really, this map is super neat :D
No problems on standard difficulties I think, only very very minor problems and a few weird sliders

GL :D
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Estellia- wrote:

Hey from M4M queue :D Sorry I can only mod std :P

  • [General]
  1. Suggest you add AudioLeadIn since the map starts on 0 offset, may be too fast for players okay

    [Normal]
  2. 00:02:353 (3,4) - Personal preference, but I suggest shift 4 more towards the right so lead in is better nope, too plain
  3. 00:02:353 (3,4) - Blanket fix ? there's no circle that have to be blanketed
  4. 00:06:176 (2,4) - Suggest shift 4 away to prevent intersection with 2 kay
  5. 00:15:588 (2,3) - Try to make this more circular as well
  6. 00:18:823 (1,2) - Intersection is quite ugly here IMO no
  7. 00:21:176 (3,4,5) - Maybe change to reverse slider? there will be a jump. plus i tried to put some challenge
  8. 00:32:941 (1) - Make the 2nd half of the body more circular fixed
  9. 00:32:941 (1,2,3) - Intersection is super ugly nah.. you don't know the art here
  10. 00:37:647 (1,2) - You can perfect this blanket more
  11. 00:42:941 (1,2) - ^
  12. 00:45:588 (4) - Just personal preference, curve this less to flow better with 5 nope
  13. 01:08:235 (3) - Unfitting slider art IMO listen it better :D and you will know what i'm supposed
  14. 01:15:294 (1,2) - Ugly stack no use
  15. 01:17:647 (4) - Unfitting slider shape i don't mind it
  16. 01:20:000 (1) - Dunno about the spinner, I think it should end on the white line later there's a *dup* sound here. so i use that as the end

    Its an ok Normal, rather good already, just minor problems

    [Champion]
  17. 00:01:470 (3,5) - Ugly stack, either shift completely away or stack nicely meh... stack properly make the flow broken
  18. 00:02:647 (5,6) - Minor blanket fix
  19. 00:04:632 (1,2) - The rhythm here may be too hard for players to grasp, maybe try triplet or remove the hitcircle okay... cause much people like this note is deleted than deleted :3
  20. 00:11:764 (4,5,6) - Maybe try having 5 and 6 blanket 4's tail and have 5 and 6 be more circular yes that's what i mean but (6) was supposed to blanket (1)
  21. 00:13:235 (6,1) - Blanket fix
  22. 00:15:588 (3,4,5) - The timing here may be hard to get for players, try to not have such big jumps nah... it's indicates the jump on the sound
  23. 00:23:382 (1) - It appears to me that this note covers nothing in the music, suggest remove well, if you use 25% speed you will hear the piano... but removed
  24. 00:24:411 (3,4,5,6) - Suggest 5 and 6 to be more circular and blanket 4, and for the tail of 6 to stack better with tail of 3. fixed
  25. 00:31:470 (3,4) - Shift 4 higher to have blanket instead no.. it's breaking the DS
  26. 00:35:588 (1,2) - Try blanket no, i think
  27. 00:44:705 (4,5) - Very very slight blanket issue
  28. 00:45:588 (5,6) - The intersection feels a bit ugly + weird the sound is increasing so i use mine
  29. 00:48:823 (3,4,5) - Try a stack on 5's head on 3's tail and blanket 4 better with them fixed
  30. 00:51:764 (1,2) - Minor blanket fix
  31. 00:52:647 (2,3) - Awkward intersection nope
  32. 00:57:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^ nope
  33. 01:02:941 (3,4) - Minor blanket fix
  34. 01:04:411 (5) - Go for better symmetry fixed
  35. 01:05:294 (6,1) - Awkward intersection nope
  36. 01:05:882 (1,2) - Very very minor blanket fix
  37. 01:05:882 (1,3) - Stack tail of 1 and head of 3 fixed
  38. 01:07:647 (3,4,5) - Fix blanket
  39. 01:15:294 (1,2) - Awkward intersection nope
  40. 01:20:000 (1) - Same spinner problem as Normal same answer

    Sorry if this seems super super nazi, but I'm only trying to help improve your map to be the best :)

    Basically just quite a lot of awkward intersections between sliders, not many problems really, this map is super neat :D
No problems on standard difficulties I think, only very very minor problems and a few weird sliders

GL :D
Topic Starter
Arcubin
Fort's mods is over here :)

SPOILER
19:59 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/496905 Park Jae Sung - Theme Duel [Champion]]
19:59 azintairin710: okay
20:00 Fort: fix spacing disini 00:04:705 (1,2) -
20:01 azintairin710: lupa belum di fix :3
20:01 Fort: 00:15:588 (3,4,5) - ini susah dibaca, jadi fix spacing nya
20:01 Fort: 00:18:235 (7) - NC karena pergantian SV
20:02 Fort: 00:18:823 (1,2) - disini boleh ditambah jump karena menambah flow empatize
20:02 azintairin710: 00:15:588 (3,4,5) - masak haru diganti >:( padahal bagus jump menurut aku
20:03 Fort: yaudah nc 00:15:588 (3) - karena perbedaan pada pattern sebelumnya
20:03 Fort: yaitu 00:11:764 (4,5,6) -
20:03 azintairin710: okay deh :)
20:04 Fort: 00:24:411 (2,5) - keliatannya butuh sedikit fix blanket
20:04 Fort: di slider 5
20:05 Fort: sama stack ekor slider 2 & 5
20:05 Fort: itu juga kalau bisa, klo gk jgn dipaksain
20:05 azintairin710: agak susah tuh :3 tapi dicoba deh
20:06 Fort: 00:25:882 -
20:06 Fort: sugesti disini, butuh clickable object
20:07 Fort: karena itu stanza besar
20:07 azintairin710: tapi entar slider (4) harus diilangin?
20:07 Fort: itu terserah anda
20:08 azintairin710: dicoba dulu deh
20:08 Fort: 00:46:470 (6,7,1) - ane suka jump disini http://puu.sh/dntWf/a5694a0ef5.jpg
20:08 Fort: up to you
20:09 azintairin710: kalo (7) di kasih ke headnya (5) gak apa?
20:10 Fort: 00:49:705 (4) - rotasikan 23 derajat
20:10 Fort: lalu pindahkan ke x344 y12
20:10 Fort: fix balnket
20:10 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/496905 Park Jae Sung - Theme Duel [Champion]]
20:10 Fort: 00:53:529 (3,4) - overlap
20:11 Fort: menurut ane ganti pattern ini 00:52:647 (2,3,4,5,6) -
20:12 Fort: slidexr 01:02:058 (2) - sama dengan slidxer
20:13 Fort: 01:04:411 (5) -
20:13 Fort: ok sisanya fix overlap aja
20:13 Fort: ganti pattern baru
20:13 azintairin710: :3 okay entar di check lagi
20:14 Fort: wh ada yg kelewat
20:14 Fort: eh*
20:14 Fort: 00:18:235 (7) -
20:14 Fort: unranked volume
20:14 Fort: minimal gunakan 15%
20:14 azintairin710: :3 owhh... baru tau kalo itu udah unrank :3
20:15 Fort: OD sama HP kurangi
20:15 azintairin710: 6 cukup?
20:15 Fort: terutama HP kurangi
20:16 Fort: ane masih mengampuni OD 7
20:16 azintairin710: :>
20:17 Fort: ya itu terserah kamu sih
20:17 Fort: yg penting HP kurangi soalnya lagu ini slow
20:17 azintairin710: okay
20:17 Fort: ane recomend volume itu 60
20:17 Fort: di kiai 80%
20:18 azintairin710: gak ketinggian? ._. perasaan 60 aja udah agak ketinggian
20:19 Fort: yang penting notes ini bisa tetap kedenger di volume rendah
20:21 Fort: k bye
20:21 Fort: sama ganti nama diff nya jadi Normal
20:21 azintairin710: thanks fort :)
20:21 azintairin710: yang ini?
20:21 Fort: http://puu.sh/dnuuZ/c58be704f3.png
20:21 Fort: star rating = 1.97
20:21 Fort: Normal criteria
20:21 Fort: lol
20:22 azintairin710: ;w; tapi ada unsur hardnya ;w;
20:22 Fort: ah kalau masalah itu ane kurang yakin
20:23 Fort: yg jelasz tuh map terlalu mudah di mainin
20:23 azintairin710: ;w; emang
20:24 Fort: oke goodluck gan
20:24 Fort: jgn lupa /savelog
20:24 azintairin710: thanks :)
20:24 azintairin710: okay
CaptainTatsujin
Halo kk... Tq buat masuk ke Q-nya X3
Jadi kumod pake b.indo aja yaa~

Note :
*Aku ga mod taiko. Udah pensi (main game taiko lain sih...)

General
*Durasinya cukup pendek. Buat aku sendiri enggak masalah. Tapi kok di ujung lagu kayak ke"cut" gitu ya? Kalau di"cut", Usahakan ujung lagu di-fade out supaya tidak terdengar seperti di"cut".
*Dari web osu! sendiri, logo diff yang dicantumkan adalah E dan N. Untuk ini tidak perlu dipermasalahkan, karena :
-BPM rendah mungkin memungkinkan star diff rendah.
-Durasi pendek sehingga star diff tidak bisa sebesar map 3 menit.
*Hitsoundnya sudah bagus. Tapi, aku rekomendasi untuk coba-coba untuk pake whistle dan finish. Untuk hitsound finish, bisa pakai hitsound normal hit. (Refrensi dari "One in a Million" - dimap Andrea)

Timing
*Kalau di kiai, saya biasanya memakai fountainnya setiap 4 stanza. Kalau mau, tambah timing

point ini...
01:01:029 Tambah inherited point, matikan kiai.
01:01:176 Tambah lagi di sini, nyalakan kiai.

Normal
*Untuk normal mungkin DSnya terlalu kecil? rekomendasi 0.9 ,tapi kalo tidak mau diremap tidak

apa2
*Diff ini mengandung beberapa overlap yang membuat map kurang indah. Mungkin penyebab utamanya

DS?
*Mungkin kk bisa bereksperimen supaya bisa membuat slider dengan jumlah anchor yang lebih

sedikit.
*Usahakan volume hitsound setiap diff sama. Mungkin untuuk diff ini dinaikkan 20%?
00:11:764 Sayang sekali slider ini mengoverlap slider selanjutnya.
00:19:705 Ada overlap.
00:23:529 Untuk overlap yang seperti ini masih bisa dimaklumi.
00:32:941 Slider ini sebenarnya bagus. tapi pake anchornya terlalu banyak. kalau mau

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389337 - 6 anchor cukup :3
00:35:294 Cukup disayangkan ada overlap di sini.
00:40:000 (wow, such time) 4 titik cukup https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389364
00:58:823 ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389366
01:15:294 Overlap lho...

Hard
sekitar 00:28:676 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389366 Overlap bagian sini lebih bagus kalau seperti ini :3
00:31:470 Sedikit guncangan tidak akan indah. Coba ini : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389400
00:32:941 Kalau ^ dipakai, pakai yang ini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389405
00:34:705 Kalau ^ dipakai (lagi?!) geser ke bawah supaya tidak overlap. Untuk yang ini tenang saja. Ngehit slider selanjutnya tidak sulit kok. Toh tinggal lurus ke atas :v
00:36:764 Geser ke atas supaya pas dengan awal slider 1
00:39:411 Kalau mau ngestack biasa saja
00:52:647 Tuh kk bisa. Tapi sedikit kurang benar. Geser anchor kedua satu kotak ke kanan.
00:54:705 Perbaiki stacking
Kombo 00:56:470 Di sekitar slider 4 ada overlap. mungkin polanya dirubah.
01:02:058 kurang simetris. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389415 Coba Crtl+G, lalu diatur supaya pas.
01:05:294 Blanket saja ke slider 1. "Loh? kan aku maunya simetri" Ya... simetri ga harus selalu 100% kan?
01:07:647 Buat slidernya pas melewati ujung slider 2. Selanjutnya bisa fix sendiri.
01:15:882 Whoops...

Overall menurut aku lumayan. Tapi, masih bisa diimprove! Semangat ya kk :D
jangan lupa mod map aku +_+
Topic Starter
Arcubin

CaptainTatsujin wrote:

Halo kk... Tq buat masuk ke Q-nya X3
Jadi kumod pake b.indo aja yaa~

Note :
*Aku ga mod taiko. Udah pensi (main game taiko lain sih...)

General
*Durasinya cukup pendek. Buat aku sendiri enggak masalah. Tapi kok di ujung lagu kayak ke"cut" gitu ya? Kalau di"cut", Usahakan ujung lagu di-fade out supaya tidak terdengar seperti di"cut". dari file Mp3 aslinya emang gitu ;3
*Dari web osu! sendiri, logo diff yang dicantumkan adalah E dan N. Untuk ini tidak perlu dipermasalahkan, karena :
-BPM rendah mungkin memungkinkan star diff rendah.
-Durasi pendek sehingga star diff tidak bisa sebesar map 3 menit.
*Hitsoundnya sudah bagus. Tapi, aku rekomendasi untuk coba-coba untuk pake whistle dan finish. Untuk hitsound finish, bisa pakai hitsound normal hit. (Refrensi dari "One in a Million" - dimap Andrea) hitsound ini udah cukup

Timing
*Kalau di kiai, saya biasanya memakai fountainnya setiap 4 stanza. Kalau mau, tambah timing

point ini...
01:01:029 Tambah inherited point, matikan kiai.
01:01:176 Tambah lagi di sini, nyalakan kiai. gak suka fountain di mapset ini akunya :>

Normal
*Untuk normal mungkin DSnya terlalu kecil? rekomendasi 0.9 ,tapi kalo tidak mau diremap tidak

apa2
*Diff ini mengandung beberapa overlap yang membuat map kurang indah. Mungkin penyebab utamanya

DS?
*Mungkin kk bisa bereksperimen supaya bisa membuat slider dengan jumlah anchor yang lebih

sedikit.
*Usahakan volume hitsound setiap diff sama. Mungkin untuuk diff ini dinaikkan 20%? okay
00:11:764 Sayang sekali slider ini mengoverlap slider selanjutnya. sayang sekali flownya bagus kayak gini :>
00:19:705 Ada overlap. flownya malah ancur
00:23:529 Untuk overlap yang seperti ini masih bisa dimaklumi. :>
00:32:941 Slider ini sebenarnya bagus. tapi pake anchornya terlalu banyak. kalau mau

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389337 - 6 anchor cukup :3 circlingnya kurang halus kalo cuman pake sedikit anchor
00:35:294 Cukup disayangkan ada overlap di sini. flownya gimana? dirasain gak? :>
00:40:000 (wow, such time) 4 titik cukup https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389364 ada beberapa trik yang digunain mapper untuk buat wave slider.aku pake yang ini karena kalo mau buat blanket jadi lebih mudah
00:58:823 ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389366 ^
01:15:294 Overlap lho... flownya?

Hard
sekitar 00:28:676 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389366 Overlap bagian sini lebih bagus kalau seperti ini :3 ? gambarnya beda tuh
00:31:470 Sedikit guncangan tidak akan indah. Coba ini : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389400 malah unrankable... :>
00:32:941 Kalau ^ dipakai, pakai yang ini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389405 karena ^ gak dipake jadi....
00:34:705 Kalau ^ dipakai (lagi?!) geser ke bawah supaya tidak overlap. Untuk yang ini tenang saja. Ngehit slider selanjutnya tidak sulit kok. Toh tinggal lurus ke atas :v ^
00:36:764 Geser ke atas supaya pas dengan awal slider 1 takutnya kalo ada player pake HD malah gak keliatan
00:39:411 Kalau mau ngestack biasa saja emang gak distack :>
00:52:647 Tuh kk bisa. Tapi sedikit kurang benar. Geser anchor kedua satu kotak ke kanan. ? emang aku gak bisa apanya? ._. kalo blanket mah itu udah perfect blanket
00:54:705 Perbaiki stacking whoops.. fixed
Kombo 00:56:470 Di sekitar slider 4 ada overlap. mungkin polanya dirubah. flownya ancur entar
01:02:058 kurang simetris. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389415 Coba Crtl+G, lalu diatur supaya pas. fixed
01:05:294 Blanket saja ke slider 1. "Loh? kan aku maunya simetri" Ya... simetri ga harus selalu 100% kan? drop flownya aku suka :>
01:07:647 Buat slidernya pas melewati ujung slider 2. Selanjutnya bisa fix sendiri. mungkin nggak kali ini :>
01:15:882 Whoops... ?

Overall menurut aku lumayan. Tapi, masih bisa diimprove! Semangat ya kk :D
jangan lupa mod map aku +_+
Momochikun
hi, as requested on my queue :3

I don't really sure with the metadata, do you have proper licensed web on it ? just to be safe maybe you can ask some Bats that expert on this stuffs to be sure. Also audio-lead in is different between your diffs and the taiko diffs

[Champion]
HP 6 instead to fix the spread ? it's kind of weird to have low HP drain when the AR itself is quite high
00:07:941 (6) - would sounds more soft with the whistle being removed since there're no proper piano sound that played there
00:15:588 (1,2,3) - This part could be very sudden and confusing since mostly player doesn't expect something like this on a Hard diff, i'd change (1) into 3/4 slider reverse or just simply make they spaced more close.
00:31:470 (3) - I'm not sure if this kind of wiggle slider is still rankable orz.
00:36:764 (3) - I'd like to delete this note since it was landed on anything at the music, make it weird to play imo
00:59:705 (5,6) - does this really need to be overlapped ?
01:07:647 (3,4) - ^ah and this one is pretty ugly if you ask me
01:18:529 (6,7) - you could try straight shape instead imo
Also maybe you could silent the last spinner ? its kind of noisy lol o.o

[Normal]
00:16:470 (3) - DS inconsistent, this should be avoided on easier diff
00:18:823 (1,2) - oh i don't really recommend overlap like this, beside ugly also (1) were covering mostly sliderbody of (2) which could be really confusing for beginners, especially since this is the easiest diff on the mapset
00:21:470 (4,5) - Change them into slider for easier pattern ? 3 note maybe a bit extreme for this part
00:32:941 (1,3) - orz
00:45:588 (4) - this slider looks a bit cramped, maybe slightly lower it shape a bit ?
00:47:647 (1,2) - should be no stack on easiest diff
01:16:176 (2) - same as before

pretty fine map, good luck o.o
fanzhen0019
General
  • Fine~

Normal

Hitsounds
  • Well done!
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:47:647 (1,2) - Stack notes is hard for newbie players. I suggest to put the circle somewhere else.

Champion

Hitsounds
  • Nothing can I pick up! Well done~
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:15:588 (1,2,3) - Umm.. You use the same distance snap but different rhythm here. Because they are sliders, they can be hit with 300 easily. But I highly recommend you to change the placement of these 3 notes.
  2. 00:27:058 (1) - I'd put it to 00:25:588 (4) - 's place to avoid overlapping. If you do so, you need to remake the slider to adjust to the spacing. The same case occurred here too: 00:29:117 (5) - . Moving the circle away may be a solution:
  3. 00:39:411 (4) - I think you can move this circle to x384 y324, in order to achieve a perfect symmetry with 00:40:588 (6) - . The anti-jump won't be broke by doing this. Also, you need to add new combo on 00:39:411 (4) - , since you switched distance.
    Tbh, the spacing of these two triangle is about too big. Just my own opinion :)
  4. 01:10:000 (6,7,1) - The overlapping with former note can be avoided in some degree. Like the picture given below:
  5. 01:17:941 (4,5,6) - Making them in the same line looks better. :)

Good luck!
Charlotte
hi~ from my modding queues

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • Widescreen Support→uncheck (guest Taiko)
[ Gnc's Futsuu]


  • OD5→4

    00:15:301 - delete.1/2-pattern is long.

    00:15:588 (34,35,36) - This pattern=I think Muzukashii.but, 00:15:301 - If this notes delete,have enough break time.

    00:23:385 - delete.no need.

    00:24:709 - ^

    00:32:801 - ^

    00:34:108 - ^

    00:42:067 - change to k

    00:45:888 - delete?

    01:00:881 - change to k

    01:01:764 - ^

    01:02:349 - delete.no need.
sorry.I'm not good at slow bpm.so Futsuu only.Good luck :)
PatZar

Charlotte wrote:

hi~ from my modding queues

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • Widescreen Support→uncheck (guest Taiko)
[ Gnc's Futsuu]


  • OD5→4

    00:15:301 - delete.1/2-pattern is long.

    00:15:588 (34,35,36) - This pattern=I think Muzukashii.but, 00:15:301 - If this notes delete,have enough break time.

    00:23:385 - delete.no need.

    00:24:709 - ^

    00:32:801 - ^

    00:34:108 - ^

    00:42:067 - change to k no rhytm

    00:45:888 - delete?

    01:00:881 - change to k nop rhythm

    01:01:764 - ^ no d d cause 01:02:349 - delete.no need.

    01:02:349 - delete.no need.
sorry.I'm not good at slow bpm.so Futsuu only.Good luck :)

thanks charlotte!
gw ganti nama diff ke gen's
http://puu.sh/dO8Xv/96da5b25a7.rar
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Momochikun wrote:

hi, as requested on my queue :3

I don't really sure with the metadata, do you have proper licensed web on it ? just to be safe maybe you can ask some Bats that expert on this stuffs to be sure. Also audio-lead in is different between your diffs and the taiko diffs i ever ask on the game itself and it's confirmed :3 audio-lead in fixed

[Champion]
HP 6 instead to fix the spread ? it's kind of weird to have low HP drain when the AR itself is quite high well, look ok
00:07:941 (6) - would sounds more soft with the whistle being removed since there're no proper piano sound that played there the slider tail sound is lower then the head. so i use whistle to make a sense of it
00:15:588 (1,2,3) - This part could be very sudden and confusing since mostly player doesn't expect something like this on a Hard diff, i'd change (1) into 3/4 slider reverse or just simply make they spaced more close. i try some challenge, the pitch on the song is kinda high here. so i use it as jump
00:31:470 (3) - I'm not sure if this kind of wiggle slider is still rankable orz. still rankable :) imo ._. well i will ask BAT to check it
00:36:764 (3) - I'd like to delete this note since it was landed on anything at the music, make it weird to play imo beats kinda weird if there's no note here.
00:59:705 (5,6) - does this really need to be overlapped ? not sure... will change if anybody will point this again
01:07:647 (3,4) - ^ah and this one is pretty ugly if you ask me fixed
01:18:529 (6,7) - you could try straight shape instead imo i think no this time :3
Also maybe you could silent the last spinner ? its kind of noisy lol o.o kay... added

[Normal]
00:16:470 (3) - DS inconsistent, this should be avoided on easier diff i think it's okay cause the following beat is far
00:18:823 (1,2) - oh i don't really recommend overlap like this, beside ugly also (1) were covering mostly sliderbody of (2) which could be really confusing for beginners, especially since this is the easiest diff on the mapset kay fixed ._.
00:21:470 (4,5) - Change them into slider for easier pattern ? 3 note maybe a bit extreme for this part fixed
00:32:941 (1,3) - orz i like this flow.... owo
00:45:588 (4) - this slider looks a bit cramped, maybe slightly lower it shape a bit ? fixed
00:47:647 (1,2) - should be no stack on easiest diff okay fix
01:16:176 (2) - same as before same

pretty fine map, good luck o.o

fanzhen0019 wrote:

General
  • Fine~

Normal

Hitsounds
  • Well done!
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:47:647 (1,2) - Stack notes is hard for newbie players. I suggest to put the circle somewhere else.

Champion

Hitsounds
  • Nothing can I pick up! Well done~
thanks :D

Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:15:588 (1,2,3) - Umm.. You use the same distance snap but different rhythm here. Because they are sliders, they can be hit with 300 easily. But I highly recommend you to change the placement of these 3 notes. same reply i do on Momochikun's mod
  2. 00:27:058 (1) - I'd put it to 00:25:588 (4) - 's place to avoid overlapping. If you do so, you need to remake the slider to adjust to the spacing. The same case occurred here too: 00:29:117 (5) - . Moving the circle away may be a solution: okay fixed
  3. 00:39:411 (4) - I think you can move this circle to x384 y324, in order to achieve a perfect symmetry with 00:40:588 (6) - . The anti-jump won't be broke by doing this. Also, you need to add new combo on 00:39:411 (4) - , since you switched distance. fixed. but no NC :D
    Tbh, the spacing of these two triangle is about too big. Just my own opinion :)
  4. 01:10:000 (6,7,1) - The overlapping with former note can be avoided in some degree. Like the picture given below: fixed on my own way :3
  5. 01:17:941 (4,5,6) - Making them in the same line looks better. :)
fixed

Good luck!
thanks for mad uhh.. i mean Mods Mochi and fanzhen :)
Ringating
from my queue:

I found a higher res version of your image and then cropped it to 16:9 and downscaled it to 768p:no kudosu
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

I found a higher res version of your image and then cropped it to 16:9 and downscaled it to 768p:no kudosu
thanks :D
rew0825
Hi from my mod requeue :)

Muzukashii I think it's Good :)

[ Gen's Futsuu]
  1. 00:00:294 (2,7,12) - Delete ?
  2. 00:08:235 (16,17) - Delete
  3. 00:14:411 (26) - Delete
  4. 00:17:941 (33,34,35) - Delete
  5. 00:20:882 (38) - Delete
  6. 00:22:353 (41) - Delete
  7. 00:23:823 (43,46) - Delete
  8. 00:27:058 (49) - Delete
  9. 00:33:235 (60) - Delete
  10. 00:35:588 (65,68) - Delete
  11. 00:50:588 (94) - Delete
  12. 00:52:058 (97) - Delete
  13. 01:08:529 (128) - Delete
  14. 01:13:235 (137) - Delete
  15. 01:15:000 (141) - Delete

    I think Futsuu is Lite Muzu [Muzu not have 1/4] = =" Some Delete for easy :)

Good luck :)
Gemu-
Hi, From Game's Queue :D

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[Gen's Futsuu]

00:10:294 - Change to d To make a kd dk http://puu.sh/dVEpf/b4e3d5a64c.jpg
00:41:176 - Change to d for the pattern.
00:41:764 - Change to k for the pattern.
00:54:117 - Change to d To do this:
00:55:000 - Change to d To do a beautiful dk d kd http://puu.sh/dVD6F/35982567ff.jpg


[Gen's muzukashii]

You forgot to remove the Widescreen Support and the Letterbox During Breaks http://puu.sh/dVDUD/4465207a22.jpg

00:17:353 - Change to k?
00:48:823 - Change to d? is more convenient.
00:58:823 - Here Makes a sound suitable for a k.
01:05:294 - Change to k for the pattern and the rhythm.

The Beatmap is great and I hope what my mod has helped you :oops: , good luck :) :D
Sky Trias
as Request from #Indonesian

I hope i can mod Hard / Insane difficult in here :(
Here's my mod :D

  • [General]
  1. add tag in Genocide GD's : Kog. studios (also tag : "Gen")
  2. Skin Dimensions : AIBAT Said : "comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 700x645)
  3. Background : AIBat Said : "void.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768" (decrease the MB of the song)
  • [ Champion]
  1. This is Normal difficult please decrease HP , AR , and OD
  2. 00:02:647 (5,6) - blanked well
  3. 00:11:764 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:14:117 (1) - give more space over here maybe move to (x:196 y:284)
  5. 00:20:294 (3) - can you make this slider like 00:18:235 (1)
  6. 00:51:764 (1) - make curve a bit to make better blanked with 00:52:647 (2)
  7. 01:06:764 (2,3) - can you make better blanked ? maybe move to (x:124 y:60)
  8. 01:07:647 (3,4) - give more space over here and fix the blanked please
  9. 01:16:176 (2) - same like 01:06:764 (2,3) maybe move to (x:244 y:108)
  10. 01:16:176 (2,3) - give more space over here
  11. 01:19:411 (7) - i think this slider no need to make a curve .. just a straight slider will make better blanked
Some noob taiko mod :oops:

  • [Gen's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:647 (20,21) - Swap ? k d k k d
  2. 00:21:470 (59) - k ( i think this same like 00:06:764 (17,18,19))
  3. 01:00:588 (154) - k ( same like 00:41:764 (113,114,115))
  4. 01:13:529 (188) - k
Ok that's all i can mod
GL!azintairin710 ;)

Please aku jangan di bully .. Aku Noob kaka
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Sky Trias wrote:

as Request from #Indonesian

I hope i can mod Hard / Insane difficult in here :(
Here's my mod :D

  • [General]
  1. add tag in Genocide GD's : Kog. studios (also tag : "Gen") fixed will ask Genocide about "Gen" tag
  2. Skin Dimensions : AIBAT Said : "comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 700x645) looks no problem in game :>
  3. Background : AIBat Said : "void.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768" (decrease the MB of the song)it's fit too 16:8 screen :>teach me how to use AIBat
  • [ Champion]
  1. This is Normal difficult please decrease HP , AR , and OD it's supposed as "Easy Hard" :3 no thanks
  2. 00:02:647 (5,6) - blanked well fixed
  3. 00:11:764 (4,5) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:14:117 (1) - give more space over here maybe move to (x:196 y:284) okay fixed
  5. 00:20:294 (3) - can you make this slider like 00:18:235 (1) you mean straight? i don't think so
  6. 00:51:764 (1) - make curve a bit to make better blanked with 00:52:647 (2) fixed
  7. 01:06:764 (2,3) - can you make better blanked ? maybe move to (x:124 y:60) breaking DS :3
  8. 01:07:647 (3,4) - give more space over here and fix the blanked please fixed
  9. 01:16:176 (2) - same like 01:06:764 (2,3) maybe move to (x:244 y:108) slider body doesn't clear ;<
  10. 01:16:176 (2,3) - give more space over here breaking DS
  11. 01:19:411 (7) - i think this slider no need to make a curve .. just a straight slider will make better blanked okay fix
Ok that's all i can mod
GL!azintairin710 ;) thanks

Please aku jangan di bully .. Aku Noob kaka
Lally
[General]
Skin Dimensions
  1. comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 700x645).
Letterbox:
  1. Gen's Muzukashii has it and all other diffs don't so remove it from this diffu o3o
Tags:
  1. in all taiko diff is missing the tag Kog i suggest you to remove the dot since it won't be reconized as tags
Lead-in
  1. why is -5000 your lead-in? it should be up to 2000 since you start to map from the beginning ovo
[Normal]
  1. AR 4 HP and OD 3 pls
  2. 00:32:941 (1,2,3,4) - WHY WHY WHY no really why this mega overlap? sorry but you have to remap this part o-o
  3. 00:46:470 (5) - why don't you try to change this slider like this:

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:941 (6) - ctrl+g
  2. 00:15:588 (1,2,3) - the spacing here don't let you understand the rhythm change so try to fix the spacing
  3. 00:31:470 (3) - personally a sraight slider would be better here :V
  4. 00:32:941 (4,5) - don't overlap
  5. 00:57:353 (3,4,5,6) - don't overlap ;_;
  6. 01:05:294 (6,1) - why? again ^
  7. 01:06:764 (2,3) - why don't you try to do like this:
  8. 01:13:529 (5,6) - :/ again
  9. 01:15:294 (1,2) - doesen't look good
  10. 01:20:000 - add a note here and start 1/4 later the spinner
good luck
A Mystery
Hello! from my queue

General

  1. What can I say... Good map, but also simple because of the difficulty (which is not a bad thing at all).
  2. Also, that makes it easy to spot little mistakes in the blankets and stacks. Consider going through the map to check them all
  3. Are you sure that bass sound in the very end is part of the actual song?
Champion

Plays well, can't say much but very minor things

00:01:470 (3) - 1 pixel to the right for a perfect stack
00:02:647 (5) - Why doesn"t this one stack with the slider end of 00:01:470 (3) - ?
00:04:705 (1) - I prefer something like this, because of the flow and how it looks http://puu.sh/efdbJ/729f04e4f1.jpg, but your call
00:10:294 (2) - Improve the blanket a little bit
00:13:235 (6,2) - ^
00:15:588 (1,2,3) - I think it's weird how you used spacing for 1/4 jumps here, why don't you just overlap some sliders?
00:22:058 (7) - Blanket (just a bit down and left)
00:39:411 (4) - nothing changes in the music, yet you overlap a circle here instead of making a jump.
00:47:941 (2,3) - Spacing between (2) and (3) is a bit off compared to (1) and (2)
00:52:647 (2) - This is making a blanket for 00:51:764 (1) - and 00:53:529 (3) - but the position of (3) and the slider head of (1) is completely different :?
01:10:000 (6,7) - Why not a straight path to 01:10:588 (1) - http://puu.sh/efeAn/c517ae55b7.jpg
01:12:647 (4) - Why a slider return on such a strong downbeat? :( Consider making this 1 circle and 1 slider

Normal

Only some blankets, seems fine.

00:06:176 (2) - Blanket
00:15:588 (2) - ^
00:37:647 (1,2) - Double blanket maybe?
00:44:117 (2) - blanket

Looking great, good luck!
PatZar

Sky Trias wrote:

as Request from #Indonesian

I hope i can mod Hard / Insane difficult in here :(
Here's my mod :D

  • [General]
  1. add tag in Genocide GD's : Kog. studios (also tag : "Gen")
  2. Skin Dimensions : AIBAT Said : "comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 700x645)
  3. Background : AIBat Said : "void.jpg is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768" (decrease the MB of the song)
^ tolong di fix saiya gk pernah megang
Some noob taiko mod :oops:

  • [Gen's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:647 (20,21) - Swap ? k d k k d no 00:07:647 (20) - have a soft sound also kdkdk is have a complicated sound imo
  2. 00:21:470 (59) - k ( i think this same like 00:06:764 (17,18,19)) ok, yang km bilng i think this same like blah itu beda loh sama yang ini 00:21:470 (59) -, reason why i keep this cause 00:21:176 (58) - piano and 00:21:470 - gk ada suara jadi dd cukup
  3. 01:00:588 (154) - k ( same like 00:41:764 (113,114,115)) uda di update blm sih ._.
  4. 01:13:529 (188) - k kan uda k ._.
Ok that's all i can mod
GL!azintairin710 ;)

Please aku jangan di bully .. Aku Noob kaka
http://puu.sh/empEf/727c06d6ab.rar update
kebnykan emng direject :v

@Also game rock and rew i forgot to reply one per one of your mod:^)
for reason, why you reject it ? you can PM me as well , good job you two!
and thanks for mod!
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Lally wrote:

[General]
Skin Dimensions
  1. comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 700x645). it's look okay when playing. so, again i have to refuse this
Letterbox:
  1. Gen's Muzukashii has it and all other diffs don't so remove it from this diffu o3o removed
Tags:
  1. in all taiko diff is missing the tag Kog i suggest you to remove the dot since it won't be reconized as tags already fixed but looks like my update isn't finish last time i update this
Lead-in
  1. why is -5000 your lead-in? it should be up to 2000 since you start to map from the beginning ovo is there a restriction? o.O i don't know, okay changed to 2000
[Normal]
  1. AR 4 HP and OD 3 pls fixed
  2. 00:32:941 (1,2,3,4) - WHY WHY WHY no really why this mega overlap? sorry but you have to remap this part o-o no... no... no... ;w;
  3. 00:46:470 (5) - why don't you try to change this slider like this: fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:941 (6) - ctrl+g no.. for pattern and DS
  2. 00:15:588 (1,2,3) - the spacing here don't let you understand the rhythm change so try to fix the spacing so much... T^T why do everybody hate this?
  3. 00:31:470 (3) - personally a sraight slider would be better here :V to plain... :v i make it wooble cause i thinks it's quite fun looking for it's pattern ;v
  4. 00:32:941 (4,5) - don't overlap it's still clear to catch after the slider
  5. 00:57:353 (3,4,5,6) - don't overlap ;_; changed pattern
  6. 01:05:294 (6,1) - why? again ^ it's making sense of higher piano
  7. 01:06:764 (2,3) - why don't you try to do like this: fixed
  8. 01:13:529 (5,6) - :/ again the slider path is clear :3
  9. 01:15:294 (1,2) - doesen't look good at least the path is still clear
  10. 01:20:000 - add a note here and start 1/4 later the spinner too harsh i think :3
good luck
Thanks :D

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! from my queue

General

  1. What can I say... Good map, but also simple because of the difficulty (which is not a bad thing at all). thanks :>
  2. Also, that makes it easy to spot little mistakes in the blankets and stacks. Consider going through the map to check them all checked
  3. Are you sure that bass sound in the very end is part of the actual song? yes... i don't do editing to the mp3 file at all. (the actual song in game is have the bass as well]
Champion

Plays well, can't say much but very minor things

00:01:470 (3) - 1 pixel to the right for a perfect stack no... i follow grid snap here
00:02:647 (5) - Why doesn"t this one stack with the slider end of 00:01:470 (3) - ? i make advantageous for HD player.. make it more visible
00:04:705 (1) - I prefer something like this, because of the flow and how it looks http://puu.sh/efdbJ/729f04e4f1.jpg, but your call nope, for blanket
00:10:294 (2) - Improve the blanket a little bit fixed
00:13:235 (6,2) - ^ ^
00:15:588 (1,2,3) - I think it's weird how you used spacing for 1/4 jumps here, why don't you just overlap some sliders? changed to other pattern
00:22:058 (7) - Blanket (just a bit down and left) fixed
00:39:411 (4) - nothing changes in the music, yet you overlap a circle here instead of making a jump. the piano sound isn't increased as much as before :3 i take it as a advantage
00:47:941 (2,3) - Spacing between (2) and (3) is a bit off compared to (1) and (2) fixed
00:52:647 (2) - This is making a blanket for 00:51:764 (1) - and 00:53:529 (3) - but the position of (3) and the slider head of (1) is completely different :? fixed
01:10:000 (6,7) - Why not a straight path to 01:10:588 (1) - http://puu.sh/efeAn/c517ae55b7.jpg too plain if i just make it straight
01:12:647 (4) - Why a slider return on such a strong downbeat? :( Consider making this 1 circle and 1 slider no... it's already making sense

Normal

Only some blankets, seems fine.

00:06:176 (2) - Blanket
00:15:588 (2) - ^ not supposed to do blanket
00:37:647 (1,2) - Double blanket maybe? will break DS however i fix it :3
00:44:117 (2) - blanket

Looking great, good luck!
thanks :D

ALL UPDATED!
guineaQ
frooooooooooom #modhelp

Just a quick look

Normal

00:37:647 (1,2) - How this doesn't blanket sticks out like a sore thorn in my eyes.
01:10:588 (1) - Personally I would just make it like this
01:12:941 (4) - ^^

Some slider arts are kinda overdone but its okay

Champion

Only thing that bothers me is the lack of jumps despite being a hard diff and having low bpm.

Futsuu

  1. 00:08:235 (19) - Um, there is nothing in the music here? having a k at 00:07:941 - makes more sense to me.
  2. 00:14:117 (30,31,32,33) - kddk
  3. 00:24:705 (57) - it works with or without, its really your choice.
  4. 00:25:882 (60) - k
  5. 00:26:764 - You might wanna get more opinion on this, but it feels weird how you mapped the same instrument sound at 00:25:882 (60) - and yet you left this one empty. I do understand its a futsuu and you might not want 5 1/2 notes in a row, but still get more opinion about this.
  6. 00:35:000 - d here
  7. 00:35:588 (80) - remove
  8. 00:42:353 (95) - K?
  9. 00:52:058 (115) - I would remove
  10. 00:55:588 - and put d here to compensate for the lost note density if you removed 00:52:058 (115) -
  11. 01:13:235 (157) - I would remove this for consistency since you were strictly following the loud piano for the whole kiai

    Eh it's kinda weird how the diff gets easier in the kiai :<
    Either map to more diverse instruments in kiai or make the part before kiai easier by following only one main piano

Muzukashii

  1. 00:04:558 (11) - yo this feels really awkward
  2. 00:09:264 (22) - ^^
  3. 00:13:823 (34,35) - :<
  4. 00:22:353 - I would put kd here
  5. 00:32:794 (93) - ahhhhh
  6. 00:34:117 (98,107) - I would remove
  7. 00:36:764 - and I would add note here
  8. 00:39:117 - ,00:39:705 - would add d here to make up for the lost note density if you applied the mods above
  9. 00:40:000 (116) - K?
  10. 00:43:235 - add k
  11. 00:44:411 - add d
  12. 00:51:617 - good place to add d
  13. 00:54:411 - d
  14. 00:56:323 - k?
  15. 01:08:529 (176,179) - I would remove these and add k at 01:11:323 -
  16. 01:20:147 - you could add k here o_o

    Mostly worried about awkward overmaps in the intro.
Xelasto
From my modding queue :D

Normal
00:07:941 (4) - Place this a bit further up.
00:09:411 (1,2) - Use the same slider
00:11:764 (4,1) - Don't touch these. Really doesn't look good.
00:15:588 (2) - Curve slightly less
00:18:823 (1,2) - This overlap looks weird. Try figuring out something else, like curving 1 downwards
00:32:941 (1) - Why such a weird shape, you aren't blanketing anything
00:32:941 (1,3) - Don't overlap these. It's really noticeable
00:37:647 (1) - I suggest you turn this and the stuff after it sideways, as the sharp upward curve doesn't flow well.
00:46:470 (5) - This ends on a strong beat, which isn't good. Strong beats like this should be the start of something, not the end.
00:51:176 (4,1) - Place 4 lower so it looks better
00:56:470 (1) - This slider shape doesn't look too good. Change it up a bit.
01:01:176 (1,2) - Ctrl + J 1 as the sharp upward curve once again doesn't flow well.
01:08:235 (3) - Why the bumps? There are no things suggesting bumps in the music. Also this doesn't look good.
HP drain, Approach Rate, and Overall difficulty all up by 1

Overall a decent difficulty, but the slider shapes and flow can be improved.

Champion
00:12:353 (5) - Make this blanket 4
00:16:764 (4,5) - Make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2535423
01:05:294 (6,1) - Try and not touch
01:10:588 (1,2) - ^
01:13:529 (5,6) - ^
HP drain up by 1

Very solid difficulty. Flows VERY nicely. 8-)

Overall, this is a great map. However, the normal mode requires some work. Get a few mods for it and then possibly you could call a BAT. Good luck on getting your map ranked. :)
PatZar

guineaQ wrote:

frooooooooooom #modhelp

Just a quick look

Futsuu

  1. 00:08:235 (19) - Um, there is nothing in the music here? having a k at 00:07:941 - makes more sense to me. no, calm rhythm so no
  2. 00:14:117 (30,31,32,33) - kddk
  3. 00:24:705 (57) - it works with or without, its really your choice. deleted
  4. 00:25:882 (60) - k no, almost the piano lowers sound i use d
  5. 00:26:764 - You might wanna get more opinion on this, but it feels weird how you mapped the same instrument sound at 00:25:882 (60) - and yet you left this one empty. I do understand its a futsuu and you might not want 5 1/2 notes in a row, but still get more opinion about this.
  6. 00:35:000 - d here ok
  7. 00:35:588 (80) - remove no, 00:36:176 - have a gap sound, so i put d on that line,
  8. 00:42:353 (95) - K? k
  9. 00:52:058 (115) - I would remove nah
  10. 00:55:588 - and put d here to compensate for the lost note density if you removed 00:52:058 (115) -
  11. 01:13:235 (157) - I would remove this for consistency since you were strictly following the loud piano for the whole kiai eh?, dk is monosound and increase the powah imo

    Eh it's kinda weird how the diff gets easier in the kiai :<
    Either map to more diverse instruments in kiai or make the part before kiai easier by following only one main piano

Muzukashii

  1. 00:04:558 (11) - yo this feels really awkward really?, for me is fine
  2. 00:09:264 (22) - ^^ ^
  3. 00:13:823 (34,35) - :< ddk , that double d for increase the power of k, so no
  4. 00:22:353 - I would put kd here bad pitch for me so no
  5. 00:32:794 (93) - ahhhhh
  6. 00:34:117 (98,107) - I would remove no, want to emphasize about that section
  7. 00:36:764 - and I would add note here nope, unnecessary note imo
  8. 00:39:117 - ,00:39:705 - would add d here to make up for the lost note density if you applied the mods above about this, added
  9. 00:40:000 (116) - K? i added 00:39:705 - as k , so no
  10. 00:43:235 - add k nah, unnecessary emphasize imo
  11. 00:44:411 - add d no, same reason^
  12. 00:51:617 - good place to add d oh yeah, forget to add d here, nice catch
  13. 00:54:411 - d unnecessary dons
  14. 00:56:323 - k? since its k , so no
  15. 01:08:529 (176,179) - I would remove these and add k at 01:11:323 - no
  16. 01:20:147 - you could add k here o_o no too hard for me

    Mostly worried about awkward overmaps in the intro.
thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/eAEIL/38abd329b1.rar
Topic Starter
Arcubin

guineaQ wrote:

frooooooooooom #modhelp

Just a quick look

Normal

00:37:647 (1,2) - How this doesn't blanket sticks out like a sore thorn in my eyes. fixed
01:10:588 (1) - Personally I would just make it like this too harsh i think :3
01:12:941 (4) - ^^ ^^

Some slider arts are kinda overdone but its okay

Champion

Only thing that bothers me is the lack of jumps despite being a hard diff and having low bpm. well i just want to make it simple to read
thanks guin \:D/

Xelasto wrote:

From my modding queue :D

Normal
00:07:941 (4) - Place this a bit further up. too overlapping
00:09:411 (1,2) - Use the same slider too plain
00:11:764 (4,1) - Don't touch these. Really doesn't look good. it's fine...
00:15:588 (2) - Curve slightly less fixed
00:18:823 (1,2) - This overlap looks weird. Try figuring out something else, like curving 1 downwards fixed
00:32:941 (1) - Why such a weird shape, you aren't blanketing anything it's not supposed to blanket anything though ._.
00:32:941 (1,3) - Don't overlap these. It's really noticeable still noticeable :D
00:37:647 (1) - I suggest you turn this and the stuff after it sideways, as the sharp upward curve doesn't flow well. already fixed the flow before
00:46:470 (5) - This ends on a strong beat, which isn't good. Strong beats like this should be the start of something, not the end. well, the next beats is quite far :) and i can't force the beats itself
00:51:176 (4,1) - Place 4 lower so it looks better nope
00:56:470 (1) - This slider shape doesn't look too good. Change it up a bit. it's still readable imo
01:01:176 (1,2) - Ctrl + J 1 as the sharp upward curve once again doesn't flow well. fixing the curve
01:08:235 (3) - Why the bumps? There are no things suggesting bumps in the music. Also this doesn't look good.make sure to notice the piano :D
HP drain, Approach Rate, and Overall difficulty all up by 1 it's already look well

Overall a decent difficulty, but the slider shapes and flow can be improved.

Champion
00:12:353 (5) - Make this blanket 4 it's already blanket (4)'s tail
00:16:764 (4,5) - Make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2535423 nope, i think
01:05:294 (6,1) - Try and not touch imo flow is good
01:10:588 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:13:529 (5,6) - ^^
HP drain up by 1 too harsh for low BPM ;w;

Very solid difficulty. Flows VERY nicely. 8-)

Overall, this is a great map. However, the normal mode requires some work. Get a few mods for it and then possibly you could call a BAT. Good luck on getting your map ranked. :)
idk :D thanks btw
Sky Trias
Hey azintairin710 o/
Just small check for hitsounding ;)
no kds

  • [Champion]
  1. 00:05:588 (2) - remove whistle on the tail
  2. 00:12:353 (5) - ^
  3. 00:20:882 (4) - remove whistle
  4. 00:22:058 (7) - remove whistle on the tail
  5. 00:24:411 (2) - change to clap
  6. 00:40:588 (6,7) - blanked well (and remove (6) - whistle)
  7. 01:15:000 (8) - change to clap
  8. 01:19:411 (7) - change to clap on the tail
Shiranai
Halloooo kak dari queue aku :)

[General]
  1. Aku kira ini lagu pop korea -_-
  2. Kak kalo volume sebelum kiai diturunin jadi 40~50% gimana? kan biasanya pas kiai volumenya lebih gede dibandingin sama bagian lain, kalo yang ini mah sebelum dan pas kiai volumenya malah sama-sama 60% terlebih suara 60% buat di awal kayanya terlalu gede karena bagian awal cukup soft musiknya
  3. Lagunya berakhir dengan absurd, engga coba diganti mp3 lain kak yang lebih bagus?
  4. Mungkin di bagian akhir spinner bisa ditambah beberapa green lines terus diset volumenya biar mengecil mengikuti suara lagu
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:882 (2) - Add whitle on end, to emphize strong piano sound on red tick
  2. 00:03:235 (4) - Sama
  3. 00:07:941 (4) - Kak menurut aku, suara whistlenya baiknya didelete terus diganti dibagian ini 00:07:058 (3) - di akhir slider, entah kenapa rasanya lebih cocok kaya gitu kak
  4. 00:10:294 (2) - Kalo puter 5 derajat terus ctrl+h itu gimana kak? terus letakin di x:336 y:196 terus ini 00:11:176 (3) - juga pindah ke x:304 y:48, gimana ya kak ngejelasinnya bingung, jadi posisi slider yg sekarang itu kaya mau jatuh terus posisinya kaya melemah gitu, sedangkan piano dari lagunya kuat, jadi lebih baik di ctrl+h kebalikan dr bentuk slider sebelumnya mengikuti kuatnya dari suara piano, ya gitu lah kak hahaha XD, http://puu.sh/eCIK7/649fe848fa.jpg
  5. 00:15:588 (2,3) - Kak udah tau belum tentang polarity rhythm? jadi itu kan ada slider (2) berhenti di blue tick sedangkan slider (3) mulai dari white tick setelahnya, jadi supaya lebih readable bagi beginners banyak orang pasti nyaranin supaya (2) itu dikasih reverse supaya slider (2) berakhir di white tick di mana slider (3) mulai, pemain jadi ga bingung nentuin ritme dari blue tick yang tiba-tiba pindah ke white tick nanti, lebih jelasnya mungkin ritmenya bisa diganti jadi gini http://puu.sh/eCJ69/44f06fde4f.jpg , terus posisinya mungkin bisa dicoba kaya gini http://puu.sh/eCJbR/7b8e3af970.jpg dengan tambahan whistle di bagian reverse slider (3)
  6. 00:21:176 (3) - 00:18:823 (1) - Add whistle di akhir, suara pianonya lumayan kuat kak
  7. 00:40:000 (3) - Tambah clap kak di akhir supaya kesan hitsoundnya menanjak menunjukkan kalo mau masuk kiai time
  8. 00:41:764 (4) - Tambah whistle di awal kak, mengikuti suara piano di white tick
  9. 00:51:764 (1) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak
  10. 00:55:000 (5) - Kayanya node ke dua dari awal bisa agak ditarik ke kanan kak, biar bentuk curvenya bener-bener curve http://puu.sh/eCLGh/44e1436102.jpg , kalo butuh codenya:
    220,104,55000,2,0,B|292:96|312:40|312:40|328:64|360:76,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,124,56176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    360,172,56470,6,0,B|372:232|352:292|352:292|322:274|308:244,2,180,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,76,58823,2,0,B|276:60|224:76|224:76|156:92|96:76,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  11. 00:55:000 (5) - Tambah whistle di awal kak
  12. 01:00:588 (3) - Tambah whistle kak sama kaya 00:41:764 (4) -
  13. 01:05:882 (1) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak
  14. 01:08:235 (3) - Yah kak bentuk curve yang ini kurang rapih http://puu.sh/eCMwD/7fd8edc3cc.jpg dan sebenernya slider wiggle kaya gitu kurang cocok menurut aku, mending curve aja yang simple, kaya gini kan bagus kak http://puu.sh/eCMVb/61df80efd1.jpg , kalo butuh kodenya:
    56,152,66764,2,0,P|128:152|208:224,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,308,68235,2,0,P|380:324|444:140,1,360,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    444,92,70294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  15. 01:15:294 (1) - Tambah whistle di akhir
[Hard]
  1. Menyusul
[]
Sementara itu dulu ya kak, aku mau pergi. Semoga ga bingung haha XD
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Sky Trias wrote:

Hey azintairin710 o/
Just small check for hitsounding ;)
no kds oh... shet i clicked kudos XD will ask BAT to deny it

  • [Champion]
  1. 00:05:588 (2) - remove whistle on the tail
  2. 00:12:353 (5) - ^
  3. 00:20:882 (4) - remove whistle no...
  4. 00:22:058 (7) - remove whistle on the tail ^
  5. 00:24:411 (2) - change to clap ^
  6. 00:40:588 (6,7) - blanked well (and remove (6) - whistle) fixed blanket but doesn't remove the whistle
  7. 01:15:000 (8) - change to clap no...
  8. 01:19:411 (7) - change to clap on the tail^
Mako mod is also placed here after finish modding :)
Lifdrasir
#LongLiveTheChase
Hi I come to m4m std peggaso & D4rksho0ter

Normal
01:00:588 (3,4) - try a slider
00:07:058 (3,4) - try a two sliders
00:15:588 (2) - not indicated whether it would be a blue termination, try a red tick pls.
01:20:000 (1) - ends 01:22:353 pls

Champion
00:18:235 (1) - ends red tick

I see more things for now , anyway , I am newbie modding

#LongLiveTheChase
Shiranai
Halloooo kak~

[Hard]
Misc.
  1. Add green line here 00:02:058 - 00:04:411 - 00:08:529 - 00:10:882 - 00:13:823 - 00:20:588 - 00:24:117 - 00:25:000 - 00:34:117 - etc and set volume to 10~20% as you hear closer, there's no sound on that red tick in other words you can silence that part with set the volume lower and don't forget to re-addjust the volume afterward, bisa juga pake code di bawah ini kak:
    SPOILER
    [TimingPoints]
    0.1,588.235294117647,4,2,1,60,1,0
    2058,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    2353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    4411,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    4705,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    8529,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    9411,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    10882,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    11176,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    13823,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    14117,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    18235,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
    18823,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    20588,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    20882,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    24117,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    24411,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    25000,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    25294,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    32647,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    32941,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    34117,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    34705,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    42353,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    47647,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    47941,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    48529,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    48823,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    50882,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    51176,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    53235,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    53529,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    67353,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    67647,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    80000,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    80588,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    81176,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    81764,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
Hitsound
  1. 00:00:588 (2) - Add whistle on head, you can hear strong piano sound there
  2. 00:02:647 (5) - Add whistle on tail, same explaination as above
  3. 00:05:588 (2) - Add whistle also on tail
  4. 00:07:647 (5,6) - Swap whistle between them, it seems that (5) have more strong piano sound rather than (6)'s heaad
  5. 00:09:411 (1) - 00:12:353 (5) - 00:19:411 (2) - Add whistle on end?
  6. 00:28:823 (4) - Add whistle
  7. 00:31:470 (3) - Add whistle on both beginning and reverse
  8. 00:41:176 (7) - Add whistle on tail
  9. 00:41:176 (7) - Tambah clap kak di awal? biar suara hitsoundnya kedengeran menanjak
  10. 00:42:353 (1) - Add whistle on end?
  11. 00:49:705 (4) - 00:51:764 (1) - 00:55:000 (6) - 01:00:000 (6) - Add whistle on tail?
  12. 00:57:058 (2) - Add whistle?
  13. 01:04:411 (5) - Add whistle on head?
  14. 01:08:529 (4) - Add whistle on tail?
  15. 01:14:705 (7) - 01:18:235 (5) - Add whistle?
  16. 01:20:000 - Add circle there then put whistle and NC then move last spinner on 01:20:147 -

Pattern & rhythm

  1. 00:07:353 (4,5,6) - How about make them circular patern instead of triangle pattern? you can move (4) to x:196 y:240 then move (5,6) to x:256 y:292 , to be precise something like this http://puu.sh/eTfhF/46959c1cd8.jpg
  2. 00:11:764 (4) - Biar paralel kayanya itu dibuat curve aja kak terus blanket sama ini 00:12:353 (5) - kayanya flownya bakal lebih bagus
  3. 00:16:764 (4) - Better blanket, second node on x:80 y:352 then third node on x:112 y:376
  4. 00:18:235 (1) - Ganti rhythm aja bgmn kak? buat slider itu berhenti di red tick ini 00:18:529 - terus tambah circle blue tick ini 00:18:676 - Buat triplet di situ mengikuti suara peralihan bass nya, jadi kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/eTqXT/e76cd474a2.jpg
  5. 00:20:294 (3,4,5,6,7) - Tbh aku ga begitu suka kak sama pattern yang itu, kesan bgmn ya kaya menukik gitu tajem bgt, kalo dibuat gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/eTrvT/469da2c2cc.jpg Buat antara (6) ke (7) sedikit jump, ya berhubung ini hard dan diff paling susah aku pikir ga masalah deh jump sedikit, kalo butuh codenya:
    360,276,20882,2,0,P|352:314|364:352,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    428,304,21470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    504,276,21764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    430,71,22058,2,0,B|416:108|432:152|432:152|444:192|432:228,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:29:117 (5,6) - Bisa dibuat blanket mungkin kak biar keliatan lebih rapih
  7. 00:31:470 (3) - Jujur slider wiggle kaya gitu di sini ga cocok sama sekali, it's like out of place, dibuat straight aja kan bisa padahal atau dibuat S curve http://puu.sh/eTstd/75e0934212.jpg
  8. Lack of jumps imo
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No kds, just continuing my mod above
Topic Starter
Arcubin

D4rksho0ter wrote:

#LongLiveTheChase
Hi I come to m4m std peggaso & D4rksho0ter

Normal
01:00:588 (3,4) - try a slider
00:07:058 (3,4) - try a two sliders
00:15:588 (2) - not indicated whether it would be a blue termination, try a red tick pls.
01:20:000 (1) - ends 01:22:353 pls

Champion
00:18:235 (1) - ends red tick

I see more things for now , anyway , I am newbie modding

#LongLiveTheChase
nothing changed ;) but thanks for mod

Mako Sakata wrote:

Halloooo kak~ o/

[Hard]
Misc.
  1. Add green line here 00:02:058 - 00:04:411 - 00:08:529 - 00:10:882 - 00:13:823 - 00:20:588 - 00:24:117 - 00:25:000 - 00:34:117 - etc and set volume to 10~20% as you hear closer, there's no sound on that red tick in other words you can silence that part with set the volume lower and don't forget to re-addjust the volume afterward, bisa juga pake code di bawah ini kak: aku rasa nggak :/ soalnya malah aneh dimainin
    SPOILER
    [TimingPoints]
    0.1,588.235294117647,4,2,1,60,1,0
    2058,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    2353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    4411,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    4705,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    8529,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    9411,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    10882,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    11176,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    13823,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    14117,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    18235,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
    18823,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    20588,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    20882,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    24117,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    24411,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    25000,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    25294,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    32647,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    32941,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    34117,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    34705,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    42353,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    47647,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    47941,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    48529,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    48823,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    50882,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    51176,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    53235,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    53529,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    67353,-100,4,2,1,20,0,1
    67647,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    80000,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    80588,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    81176,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
    81764,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
Hitsound
  1. 00:00:588 (2) - Add whistle on head, you can hear strong piano sound there (2)'s head have same sound as (1)'s tail :/ no i think
  2. 00:02:647 (5) - Add whistle on tail, same explaination as above overused banget :3
  3. 00:05:588 (2) - Add whistle also on tail added
  4. 00:07:647 (5,6) - Swap whistle between them, it seems that (5) have more strong piano sound rather than (6)'s heaad no...
  5. 00:09:411 (1) - 00:12:353 (5) - 00:19:411 (2) - Add whistle on end? lagi-lagi rasanya overuse
  6. 00:28:823 (4) - Add whistle 00:29:117 (5) - head sound higher
  7. 00:31:470 (3) - Add whistle on both beginning and reverse added on reverse only
  8. 00:41:176 (7) - Add whistle on tail nope...
  9. 00:41:176 (7) - Tambah clap kak di awal? biar suara hitsoundnya kedengeran menanjak added
  10. 00:42:353 (1) - Add whistle on end? nope...
  11. 00:49:705 (4) - 00:51:764 (1) - 00:55:000 (6) - 01:00:000 (6) - Add whistle on tail? sound overused :3
  12. 00:57:058 (2) - Add whistle? 00:57:353 (3) - head's sound higher
  13. 01:04:411 (5) - Add whistle on head? nope...
  14. 01:08:529 (4) - Add whistle on tail? overused
  15. 01:14:705 (7) - 01:18:235 (5) - Add whistle? 01:15:000 (8) - sound higher
  16. 01:20:000 - Add circle there then put whistle and NC then move last spinner on 01:20:147 - too harsh i think :3

Pattern & rhythm

  1. 00:07:353 (4,5,6) - How about make them circular patern instead of triangle pattern? you can move (4) to x:196 y:240 then move (5,6) to x:256 y:292 , to be precise something like this http://puu.sh/eTfhF/46959c1cd8.jpg sut, it's so good >< but no cause i keep the DS consistency here :(
  2. 00:11:764 (4) - Biar paralel kayanya itu dibuat curve aja kak terus blanket sama ini 00:12:353 (5) - kayanya flownya bakal lebih bagus overuse curve :( nggak deh
  3. 00:16:764 (4) - Better blanket, second node on x:80 y:352 then third node on x:112 y:376 fixed
  4. 00:18:235 (1) - Ganti rhythm aja bgmn kak? buat slider itu berhenti di red tick ini 00:18:529 - terus tambah circle blue tick ini 00:18:676 - Buat triplet di situ mengikuti suara peralihan bass nya, jadi kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/eTqXT/e76cd474a2.jpg too harsh imo :3
  5. 00:20:294 (3,4,5,6,7) - Tbh aku ga begitu suka kak sama pattern yang itu, kesan bgmn ya kaya menukik gitu tajem bgt, kalo dibuat gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/eTrvT/469da2c2cc.jpg Buat antara (6) ke (7) sedikit jump, ya berhubung ini hard dan diff paling susah aku pikir ga masalah deh jump sedikit, kalo butuh codenya:
    360,276,20882,2,0,P|352:314|364:352,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    428,304,21470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    504,276,21764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    430,71,22058,2,0,B|416:108|432:152|432:152|444:192|432:228,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:29:117 (5,6) - Bisa dibuat blanket mungkin kak biar keliatan lebih rapih fix flow instead of blanket
  7. 00:31:470 (3) - Jujur slider wiggle kaya gitu di sini ga cocok sama sekali, it's like out of place, dibuat straight aja kan bisa padahal atau dibuat S curve http://puu.sh/eTstd/75e0934212.jpg ;w; changed to wave
  8. Lack of jumps imo karena emang lagunya sendiri simple :) jadinya jumpnya dikit
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No kds, just continuing my mod above
okay owo)/

Mako Sakata wrote:

Halloooo kak dari queue aku :)

[General]
  1. Aku kira ini lagu pop korea -_- ya maaf :v
  2. Kak kalo volume sebelum kiai diturunin jadi 40~50% gimana? kan biasanya pas kiai volumenya lebih gede dibandingin sama bagian lain, kalo yang ini mah sebelum dan pas kiai volumenya malah sama-sama 60% terlebih suara 60% buat di awal kayanya terlalu gede karena bagian awal cukup soft musiknya fixed
  3. Lagunya berakhir dengan absurd, engga coba diganti mp3 lain kak yang lebih bagus? aku akuin mp3 filenya agak absurd. tapi, ini mp3 file asli dari folder gamenya sendiri. jadi kalo aku cari ya sama aja :(
  4. Mungkin di bagian akhir spinner bisa ditambah beberapa green lines terus diset volumenya biar mengecil mengikuti suara lagu oww.. fixed on normal
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:882 (2) - Add whitle on end, to emphize strong piano sound on red tick added
  2. 00:03:235 (4) - Sama added
  3. 00:07:941 (4) - Kak menurut aku, suara whistlenya baiknya didelete terus diganti dibagian ini 00:07:058 (3) - di akhir slider, entah kenapa rasanya lebih cocok kaya gitu kak nope... (4) sound higher
  4. 00:10:294 (2) - Kalo puter 5 derajat terus ctrl+h itu gimana kak? terus letakin di x:336 y:196 terus ini 00:11:176 (3) - juga pindah ke x:304 y:48, gimana ya kak ngejelasinnya bingung, jadi posisi slider yg sekarang itu kaya mau jatuh terus posisinya kaya melemah gitu, sedangkan piano dari lagunya kuat, jadi lebih baik di ctrl+h kebalikan dr bentuk slider sebelumnya mengikuti kuatnya dari suara piano, ya gitu lah kak hahaha XD, http://puu.sh/eCIK7/649fe848fa.jpg nope deh... :3 flownya malah aneh imo
  5. 00:15:588 (2,3) - Kak udah tau belum tentang polarity rhythm? jadi itu kan ada slider (2) berhenti di blue tick sedangkan slider (3) mulai dari white tick setelahnya, jadi supaya lebih readable bagi beginners banyak orang pasti nyaranin supaya (2) itu dikasih reverse supaya slider (2) berakhir di white tick di mana slider (3) mulai, pemain jadi ga bingung nentuin ritme dari blue tick yang tiba-tiba pindah ke white tick nanti, lebih jelasnya mungkin ritmenya bisa diganti jadi gini http://puu.sh/eCJ69/44f06fde4f.jpg , terus posisinya mungkin bisa dicoba kaya gini http://puu.sh/eCJbR/7b8e3af970.jpg dengan tambahan whistle di bagian reverse slider (3) well... already considering about newcomer player reaction for this :3 but i think it's not a problem cause i want some challenge so they can play better in no time :3 but okay changed as you say
  6. 00:21:176 (3) - 00:18:823 (1) - Add whistle di akhir, suara pianonya lumayan kuat kak no... hitsound object setelahnya lebih tinggi
  7. 00:40:000 (3) - Tambah clap kak di akhir supaya kesan hitsoundnya menanjak menunjukkan kalo mau masuk kiai time added
  8. 00:41:764 (4) - Tambah whistle di awal kak, mengikuti suara piano di white tick reversenya lebih tinggi :3 biar gak terlalu overemphasized juga
  9. 00:51:764 (1) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak following note lebih tinggi :3
  10. 00:55:000 (5) - Kayanya node ke dua dari awal bisa agak ditarik ke kanan kak, biar bentuk curvenya bener-bener curve http://puu.sh/eCLGh/44e1436102.jpg , kalo butuh codenya: remove 2nd curve instead :3
    220,104,55000,2,0,B|292:96|312:40|312:40|328:64|360:76,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,124,56176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    360,172,56470,6,0,B|372:232|352:292|352:292|322:274|308:244,2,180,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,76,58823,2,0,B|276:60|224:76|224:76|156:92|96:76,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  11. 00:55:000 (5) - Tambah whistle di awal kak objek sebelumnya lebih tinggi soudnnya :3
  12. 01:00:588 (3) - Tambah whistle kak sama kaya 00:41:764 (4) - the reason is same :3
  13. 01:05:882 (1) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak next object sound higher
  14. 01:08:235 (3) - Yah kak bentuk curve yang ini kurang rapih http://puu.sh/eCMwD/7fd8edc3cc.jpg dan sebenernya slider wiggle kaya gitu kurang cocok menurut aku, mending curve aja yang simple, kaya gini kan bagus kak http://puu.sh/eCMVb/61df80efd1.jpg , kalo butuh kodenya: intended to follow the piano :3 coba didengerin lebih fokus lagi :)
    56,152,66764,2,0,P|128:152|208:224,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,308,68235,2,0,P|380:324|444:140,1,360,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    444,92,70294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  15. 01:15:294 (1) - Tambah whistle di akhirsame reason as before :3
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Sementara itu dulu ya kak, aku mau pergi. Semoga ga bingung haha XD
okay... owo)/ thanks for mod
Hinsvar
\o/

>General
  1. Tag sama audio lead-in antara diff standard sama Taiko-nya gak konsisten.
  2. Kenapa diff si Genocide gak ada BG?
>Normal
  1. 00:32:941 (1,3) - Kalau bisa jangan sampai ada slider path sama head/tail yang bersentuhan satu sama lain dong biar kelihatan lebih rapi. Sekarang kan kepala (1) nyentuh badan (3), dan ekor (3) nyentuh badan (1) juga.
>Champion
  1. Setting yang sekarang ketinggian buat diff Hard. Rasanya jadi Insane banget. Inget loh, lagunya kalem gini. Ubah HP jadi 5, AR jadi antara 6,5 atau 7 (bagusan 6,5 sih), dan OD jadi 6. Ini bakal bikin permainan lebih gampang dan relaxing (karena lagunya juga gini).
  2. 00:18:676 - Coba deh ini diberi volume 5%. Sebenarnya di sini gak ada apa-apa yang bisa di-map, bener kan? Karena sudah begitu, lebih baik dibikin "diem" aja.
  3. 00:27:058 - Perasaan dari sini combo-nya mulai gak konsisten, jadi terasa acak-acakan gitu penempatan NC dan panjang combo-nya. Ada alasan kenaa nggak tetep dibikin biar ada NC tiap 2 birama aja?
  4. 00:37:647 (1,2,3) - Ini spacing-nya gak nyantai banget buat Hard ._. Coba 1,9x aja, sama kayak 00:39:411 (4,5,6).
Buat spinner di semua diff, akhiri aja di 01:22:353, karena instrumennya emang berakhir di situ.

...Well itu aja sih. Silahkan panggil balik kalau udah nyelesaiin semua masalah ini :)
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Hinsvar wrote:

\o/

>General
  1. Tag sama audio lead-in antara diff standard sama Taiko-nya gak konsisten. fixed...
  2. Kenapa diff si Genocide gak ada BG? fixed
>Normal
  1. 00:32:941 (1,3) - Kalau bisa jangan sampai ada slider path sama head/tail yang bersentuhan satu sama lain dong biar kelihatan lebih rapi. Sekarang kan kepala (1) nyentuh badan (3), dan ekor (3) nyentuh badan (1) juga. fix dengan cara re-map :3 aku gak bisa buat seperti yang kamu buat
>Champion
  1. Setting yang sekarang ketinggian buat diff Hard. Rasanya jadi Insane banget. Inget loh, lagunya kalem gini. Ubah HP jadi 5, AR jadi antara 6,5 atau 7 (bagusan 6,5 sih), dan OD jadi 6. Ini bakal bikin permainan lebih gampang dan relaxing (karena lagunya juga gini).
  2. 00:18:676 - Coba deh ini diberi volume 5%. Sebenarnya di sini gak ada apa-apa yang bisa di-map, bener kan? Karena sudah begitu, lebih baik dibikin "diem" aja. menurutku terlalu pelan sih ._. tapi bener juga kalo emang lebih baik dibikin "diam"
  3. 00:27:058 - Perasaan dari sini combo-nya mulai gak konsisten, jadi terasa acak-acakan gitu penempatan NC dan panjang combo-nya. Ada alasan kenaa nggak tetep dibikin biar ada NC tiap 2 birama aja? fixed :3 bener2 gak nyadar soalnya ngikutin lagu
  4. 00:37:647 (1,2,3) - Ini spacing-nya gak nyantai banget buat Hard ._. Coba 1,9x aja, sama kayak 00:39:411 (4,5,6).fixed
Buat spinner di semua diff, akhiri aja di 01:22:353, karena instrumennya emang berakhir di situ. sengaja make suara "dup" di 01:22:205 - sebagai akhirannya :3

...Well itu aja sih. Silahkan panggil balik kalau udah nyelesaiin semua masalah ini :)
thanks for star btw \ :) /

Last Chat
18:51 Hinsvar: :D/
18:52 Hinsvar: Soal suggestion saya di Normal itu...
18:52 Hinsvar: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2598171
18:52 Hinsvar: Coba gini deh.
18:52 Hinsvar: Jauh lebih enak dilihat :)
18:53 Hinsvar: Dan karena yang nge-bubble nanti pasti orang Taiko, dia mana bakal ngurus standard :))
18:53 Hinsvar: Well saya mau pergi keluar dulu.
18:53 Hinsvar: Nanti kalau udah balik saya circle.
18:53 azintairin710: okay owo)b
18:53 *Hinsvar is away: Somewhere.
Hinsvar
>Champion
  1. 00:18:235 (1) - Waktu saya bilang silence ekornya dengan volume 5%, maksud saya ya cuma ekornya yang 5%. Kalau begini malah satu slider yang kena, dan ini unrankable. Solusinya tinggal mindahin timing point di 00:18:235 ke 00:18:676.
Ditunggu owob
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Hinsvar wrote:

>Champion
  1. 00:18:235 (1) - Waktu saya bilang silence ekornya dengan volume 5%, maksud saya ya cuma ekornya yang 5%. Kalau begini malah satu slider yang kena, dan ini unrankable. Solusinya tinggal mindahin timing point di 00:18:235 ke 00:18:676.
Ditunggu owob
:3 sorry aku kira yang di silence seluruh slidernya XD okay fixed
Hinsvar
k \o/
Topic Starter
Arcubin

Hinsvar wrote:

k \o/
owo)9 it's happening

thanks Hinsvar
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