colonelkickass1 wrote:

I'm waiting for this to get approved! It's a great well made map!

CelsiusLK wrote:

at tags should be
ending2
also add GD mapper username in tags too

no kds pls ;^;

m1223961117 wrote:

Sorry I'm late.
I have college course all day. No problem

From my Queue~

Reflection
00:01:653 (4) - Move to x496 y208 > Make beautiful
00:13:228 (1) - Did you follow lyric or sound?? I think you follow sound
00:15:826 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it don't have this rhythm. Wait...You follow his "Ah...."?? Yea, follows that
00:20:787 (1,2,3) - I like this look Thanks
00:21:496 (3) - Slow down this slider's Velocity. > Green down to 1.0 better
00:27:165 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is your style?? If yes, Ignore this. same as before^
00:32:008 (7,8) - bad...link this
00:33:779 (4,5,6) - Put the same DS better
00:35:905 (1,3) - I don't know what are these... Really shitty sliders. I changed them
00:47:598 (1) - move to x188 y200
01:26:929 (10) - NC

Hard
bad look but nice flow
00:09:685 (1) - Del NC
00:13:464 (1) - ^
00:13:228 (8) - NC
00:16:771 (2) - ^
00:16:535 (1) - Del NC
00:17:244 (1) - ^
00:32:362 (1) - ^
00:32:126 (10) - NC
00:37:795 (6) - ^
00:39:213 (1) - Del NC
00:43:701 (1) - ^
00:43:465 (9) - NC
00:46:299 (6) - try this 01:13:465 (3,4,5,6,7)
00:47:480 (1) - Del NC
00:47:244 (7) - NC
00:51:260 (1) - ^
00:51:024 (9) - Del NC
00:59:055 (7,8) - try this: 00:38:976 (9,1,2,3,4,5) Don't really understand this
01:12:166 (1) - del NC
01:11:811 (10) - NC


Normal
00:09:212 (2) - Del this
00:25:748 (3,1) - no stacking here
00:39:685 (1,2) - ^
00:53:858 (7) - NC
00:54:567 (10) - Del this No thanks I think there's a beat there
01:04:016 (1) - NC
01:03:307 (5) - Del NC
01:04:252 (2) - NC No thanks
01:14:646 (5) - ^^
01:19:370 (7,1) - change 01:21:260 (2) with arrow I think spinner is ok
01:23:150 (4) - NC

I love this diff before kiai time


Easy
Reduce red line flow in Easy diff, very strange
00:54:094 (1) - start at 00:54:331

Just this problem...


Good luck Thanks !

Estellia- wrote:

Haven't modded in a while, lesgo

• 
  [Normal]

1. 00:05:669 (1,2) - Blahblah parallel
2. 00:28:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Flow here repetitive as FUCK. Switch up~ Wait what, flow or rhythm
3. 00:35:905 (1,2,1,2) - Sure there ain't a better rhythm placement for this bit? Works
4. 00:42:283 (2,3) - Maybe try a blanket or something Meh its k
5. 00:44:882 (3) - Pretty sure the random cymbal is out of place (I also hear a lot of random cymbals after) wtf this is clearly a finish. I'll recheck the later ones but this is very obviously here. Take off the finish and listen to it
6. 00:56:693 (1,2) - Try having more complex rhythm here, since its everywhere anyway (same for the bits after) uhh i'll think about it, normal dont need so complicated rhythms
   
   Eh its k. Still don't get how your flow works though. Not a major issue though.
   
   [Hard]
7. 00:20:787 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty sure, you had a more complex rhythm in Normal than this
8. 00:23:858 (1,2) - Try slider then triplets
9. 00:33:307 (4,5) - Nazi blanket lmaolmalmoamloamolalma
10. 00:47:953 (3,5) - ^
11. 00:51:969 (3,4) - Try not to have intersecting sliders
12. 01:11:339 (8) - Are you fucking serious this piece of shit aint snapped man it's a bug. it's fine here
13. 01:14:410 (8,9,1) - Which are you trying to blanket??? Or are you not even trying to blanket???
14. 01:16:300 (3,4,5) - ^
15. 01:20:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Jesus this is boring lmao switch up~
    
    Eh still that same weird ass flow. Some DS problems like 01:07:796 (7,8,1) - Try similar distance or something like that. Your sliders still intersect a lot awkwardly, try preventing that.
    
    [handsome's something]
16. Presumably not done/not going for rank/horrible/eh
    This has been deleted already wut r u doing
    [Weefwekshun]
17. 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Fix DS or something, 4 to 1 is off
18. 00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^. Also, flow doesn't really work here
19. 00:07:559 (1,1) - These are super ugly lmao, but eh you can keep them. (Contact me for COOL SLIDER ARTZIES)
20. 00:27:165 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS makes 7 to 8 look fast as fuck I don't understand this. 7 to 8 is DS'd
21. 00:28:701 (1,2) - bla bla blanket
22. 00:35:905 (1,2,1) - Pretty sure, you can get a better rhythm going on there
23. 00:42:992 (6,7) - Feels empty, maybe follow guitar or something? hence, cross half screen jump
24. 01:00:473 (4,5) - OH EM EF GEE DS. Last ditch effort to increase difficulty(like 01:15:945 (2,3)). Tested, doesn't play horribly
25. 01:04:488 (1) - Maybe split this slider up for more hitsounding opportunities there are no/very soft sounds in that slider
26. 01:14:882 (5) - Try ctrlg
    
    If anything, this mapset deserves rank more than Tokohana. There is no deserves. There is only hard work which allows a map to be rank

Have a nice one m8

m1223961117 wrote:

taku's Insane
00:09:212 (3) - Del this
00:59:764 (9) - NC
01:00:473 (1) - del NC
01:11:103 (1) - ^
01:04:725 (5,6) - Ctrl + G
01:17:835 (2) - Del this
01:26:457 (6) - move to x272 y364

Nice

Good luck

Estellia- wrote:

Haven't modded in a while, lesgo

• 
  
  [taku's Insane]

1. 00:02:834 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - I sense like some Amamiya Yuko thing here. Its fine, but SKYSTAR MAY SUE YOU FOR COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT jk yeah it is actually
2. 00:34:724 (1,1) - Drum on 2nd 1 should be at the end of the slider of 1st 1 Done
3. 00:39:685 (1) - If anything, SV should be less than before, since slow bit is here. But if you get lazy, don't bother haha I really like the way that the sv is speeding up in this part it suits imo
   
   Pretty nice diff, just that this diff is rather lacklustre, esp for an Insane. Try having things that bump up the difficulty. Also, you're missing some important beats like 00:19:252 - this violin and 00:21:141 - this violin as well. But whatever, you can't accommodate everything.added some extra beats also changed the OD to 8 to make the diff a bit harder

Have a nice one m8

1. 00:09:685 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think it would be better to snap the notes on white tick here because the current feel really off for me
2. 00:20:787 (1,2) - The rhythm here is quite hard for beginner to read consider change (1) to 1/1 reverse slider instead
   SPOILER

   
   It would also make the rhythm feel a bit more easier for beginner
3. 00:23:858 (2) - imo this doesn't flow very well but you can keep it , I would Ctrl+G this instead
4. 00:24:803 (1) - This 1/2 beat doesn't really need to map in Easy it sound a bit sudden that might make beginners have a little problem when playing this , recommend to map 1/1 beat here instead
5. 00:28:346 (5) - NC this instead of 00:28:583 (1) -
6. 00:28:583 (1,2) - Somehow this play a bit weird , it would play better if you put a slider here 00:29:055 - Suggestion rhythm
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:31:417 (5,6) - I'm not sure is this acceptable but I would not recommend stacking in Easy, it a bit hard to read for beginners
   
8. 00:32:126 - Try using this rhythm and placing first two notes like this
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:52:441 (2,3) - Blanket is off
10. 00:54:331 (1) - Unrankable Easy spinner this should end on 00:55:748 - https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:12:756 (2) - Maybe make this line up with (1)'s tail a bit for better flow
12. 01:19:370 (1) - Same as 00:54:331 (1) -
13. 01:21:260 (1) - 1/4 note is not recommend in Easy it too hard for beginner
    
    Wait, you have your own mapset of this song , doesn't it ? Anyways this Easy can be a bit more easier , rhythm and flow can be improved a bit
    
    [Normal]
    
    1. 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) - This might be too hard for Normal consider you make the rhythm and flow simple a bit , suggestion
       SPOILER

       
    2. 00:03:779 (1,2) - imo bad overlap for Normal , try Ctrl+H (1) then adjust a bit
       SPOILER

       
    3. 00:05:669 (1,2) - The aesthetic here is pretty bad imo it way you curve (2) make the parallel here looks bad, try placing like this( it doesn't ruin spacing that much)
       SPOILER

       
    4. 00:07:322 (3) - imo this doesn't really to map in Normal consider delete it , it just too much for Normal
    5. 00:09:448 (1,2) - And this really looks cute
    6. 00:12:047 (2,1) - This kind of overlap somehow looks bad in Normal it might make the player confusing , I would place like this
       SPOILER

       
       and you don't have to change it if you think it will ruin the spacing but for me it doesn't ruin that much
    7. 00:16:771 (3) - Same as 00:07:322 (3) -
    8. 00:20:787 (1) - 1/4 beat is not recommend in Normal, it too hard to play
    9. 00:24:921 (2) - ^ it okay to not map some beat in Normal
    10. 00:26:811 (2) - ^
    11. 00:30:590 (2) - ^ Oh wow there are a lots, I thought you mapped this by mistake
    12. 00:35:197 (3,4,5,1) - How about placing like this?
        SPOILER

        
    13. 00:47:480 (1,2) - These place so close, maybe try make some distance here a bit
    14. 00:47:953 (2,4) - imo bad overlap try placing like this
        SPOILER

        
    15. 00:53:858 (1,2,3,4) - imo the music doesn't really sound emphasized so I would say that this is somehow a bit too much for Normal try convert them to 1/2 slider
    16. 00:59:291 (5,6,7) - Play a bit weird for Normal , I would use this rhythm instead
        SPOILER

        
    17. 01:03:307 (5,6,7,8) - Might be too much for Normal try using 1/1 slider here
    18. 01:19:488 (1) - Unrankable Normal spinner should start on 01:19:843 - and end on 01:20:788 - https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
    19. 01:24:803 (1) - How about start this spinner here 01:25:040 -
        Normal probably need some work on rhythm and a little work on flow
    [Hard]
    
    • :O 1.8 SV? Why not make this looks a bit different from Reflection around 1.5-1.6 SV should be fitted for this Hard
    1. 00:00:944 (3) - How about place this at x=92 y=180 it might make the flow better
    2. 00:06:378 (2) - imo this doesn't need to increase in spacing
    3. 00:09:448 (1) - Why not 1.3x spacing here?
    4. 00:09:685 (2,3) - It would flow better if you make jumps to (3) instead of (2) ( I mean make spacing at (2) consistent then make a jumps at (3))
    5. 00:11:338 (5) - NC
    6. 00:13:464 (2,3) - You can make jumps here
    7. 00:15:118 (5) - NC
    8. 00:16:771 (1) - Delete clap on blue tick , I think whistle+ finish sound nicier than clap on red and white tick here
    9. 00:18:897 (5) - NC
    10. 00:18:897 (5,6) - Small inconsistent in spacing
    11. 00:20:787 (1) - This would play better if you triplet at tail
        SPOILER

        
    12. 00:27:165 (5) - NC
    13. 00:30:236 (5) - NC
    14. 00:33:779 (5) - NC
    15. 00:39:213 (5,6,7,8,9) - This might be too hard for Hard
    16. 00:43:228 (7,8,1) - Why not stacking them it play much better for Hard
    17. 00:48:898 (5) - NC
    18. 00:53:740 (1) - How about start this spinner here 00:53:858 -
    19. 00:56:693 (1,2,3,4) - This gonna be too hard to play for Hard
    20. 00:58:583 (6) - NC
    21. 01:00:473 (1,2) - A rhythm like this would play better
        SPOILER

        
    22. 01:02:362 (6) - NC , okay I think NC on every big white tick make the NC a bit more reasonable
    23. 01:10:866 (6,7) - Not recommend this rhythm for Hard
    24. 01:19:488 (1) - How about start on 01:19:843 - and end on 01:20:788 -?
    25. 01:25:040 (1) - Start on 01:25:040 - ?
        Hard need some work on rhythm and flow, it just doesn't looks good to me ,you might need to try make this a bit more easier to play ( try take a looks at some ranked Hard)
    [taku]
    
    1. 00:09:448 (1) - From here you can try placing clap on the white tick that near the big white tick it would make this part sound a bit nice
    2. 00:12:756 (3) - Whistle to emphasis the beat here
    3. 00:12:992 (5) - ^
    4. 00:13:228 (1) - Finish?
    5. 00:15:118 (1) - Finish to emphasis the instrument
    6. 00:15:827 (2) - ^
    7. 00:16:535 (3) - Whistle to emphasis the beat here, also would make this 1/4 slider feel nice when playing
    8. 00:16:771 (4) - ^
    9. 00:17:008 (1) - Finish to emphasis instrument
    10. 00:17:716 (3) - ^
    11. 00:18:897 (2) - Whistle or finish
    12. 00:20:787 (1) - Finish to emphasis instrument
    13. 00:21:260 (2,3) - You can make jumps here
    14. 00:22:205 (1) - Whistle at head to emphasis beat there
    15. 00:25:275 (4) - Clap at head
    16. 00:25:748 (5) - Clap at tail
    17. 00:26:457 (1) - Clap or whistle at head
    18. 00:26:811 (1) - ^ also whistle at tail
    19. 00:27:165 (1) - Clap or whistle at head
    20. 00:27:520 (1) - Whistle at tail
    21. 00:34:016 (1) - Whistle at tail
    22. 00:34:370 (1) - Whistle at head
    23. 00:37:087 (1) - Add finish at tail too?
    24. 00:41:575 (2) - Clap at tail
    25. 00:42:283 (1) - Whistle or finish at head
    26. 00:56:221 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle?
    27. 01:23:150 (3) - Whistle or finish to emphasis instrument
        Mostly the flow and rhythm are pretty nice so I'm only suggest hitsound here so feel free reject some suggestions if you think it doesn't looks good , I'm just learning to mod hitsounds
    [Reflection]
    
    1. 00:00:944 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make the flow similiar to this 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) - ?
    2. 00:01:889 (1) - Whistle at head to emphasis downbeat here
    3. 00:03:779 (1) - ^
    4. 00:05:669 (1) - ^
    5. 00:13:228 (1) - Finish instead?
    6. 00:16:062 (5) - Whistle so it sound a bit consistent here
    7. 00:16:771 (9) - No need to clap on blue tick
    8. 00:20:787 (1) - Clap instead?
    9. 00:21:496 (3) - Clap at head
    10. 00:26:929 (1) - Whistle to emphasis downbeat
    11. 00:27:401 (4) - Whistle so it sound a bit consistent here
    12. 00:27:637 (6) - ^
    13. 00:45:827 (8) - Finish at tail
    14. 01:18:898 (7) - No need to finish here
    15. 01:25:040 (6) - Finish at head
    16. 01:25:985 (8) - Finish at head
        This diff is somehow feel a bit overmapped to me make sure you try not to overmapped too much here sometimes it can ruin the flow and the rhythm, I think this diff might need a some works but well it just so much and might be too nazi to say it all here, also I'm still learning to mod hitsounds so feel free to reject some suggestions if you think it doesn't looks good

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi m4m here

Bold = Highly suggested
Blue = Questionable
Red = Somehow unrankable

[General]
The meta data is fine as it is http://vgmdb.net/album/46501
No need for TV in tags since it already tagged at Title
I think offset = -1885 will check on that

[Normal]

1. 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) - This might be too hard for Normal consider you make the rhythm and flow simple a bit , suggestion
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:03:779 (1,2) - imo bad overlap for Normal , try Ctrl+H (1) then adjust a bit
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:05:669 (1,2) - The aesthetic here is pretty bad imo it way you curve (2) make the parallel here looks bad, try placing like this( it doesn't ruin spacing that much) Yeah that looks really nice
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:07:322 (3) - imo this doesn't really to map in Normal consider delete it , it just too much for Normal it's ok because low BPM
5. 00:09:448 (1,2) - And this really looks cute
6. 00:12:047 (2,1) - This kind of overlap somehow looks bad in Normal it might make the player confusing , I would place like this I changed it but a different way
   
   SPOILER

   
   and you don't have to change it if you think it will ruin the spacing but for me it doesn't ruin that much
7. 00:16:771 (3) - Same as 00:07:322 (3) - ^
8. 00:20:787 (1) - 1/4 beat is not recommend in Normal, it too hard to play It's only the slider-end
9. 00:24:921 (2) - ^ it okay to not map some beat in Normal
10. 00:26:811 (2) - ^
11. 00:30:590 (2) - ^ Oh wow there are a lots, I thought you mapped this by mistake
12. 00:35:197 (3,4,5,1) - How about placing like this?
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:47:480 (1,2) - These place so close, maybe try make some distance here a bit It's snapped correctly
14. 00:47:953 (2,4) - imo bad overlap try placing like this
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:53:858 (1,2,3,4) - imo the music doesn't really sound emphasized so I would say that this is somehow a bit too much for Normal try convert them to 1/2 slider I will think about it. I use alot of 1/2 in this normal cuz the BPM is quite low, as you can see from the star diff this is still easier than average nomals
16. 00:59:291 (5,6,7) - Play a bit weird for Normal , I would use this rhythm instead
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:03:307 (5,6,7,8) - Might be too much for Normal try using 1/1 slider here
18. 01:19:488 (1) - Unrankable Normal spinner should start on 01:19:843 - and end on 01:20:788 - https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
19. 01:24:803 (1) - How about start this spinner here 01:25:040 -
    Normal probably need some work on rhythm and a little work on flow

[Hard]

• :O 1.8 SV? Why not make this looks a bit different from Reflection around 1.5-1.6 SV should be fitted for this Hard it's cuz I forgot to change it in reflection but I use the F6 panel to increase SV instead

1. 00:00:944 (3) - How about place this at x=92 y=180 it might make the flow better
2. 00:06:378 (2) - imo this doesn't need to increase in spacing
3. 00:09:448 (1) - Why not 1.3x spacing here?
4. 00:09:685 (2,3) - It would flow better if you make jumps to (3) instead of (2) ( I mean make spacing at (2) consistent then make a jumps at (3)) I'll keep the spacing mainly constant for the slow part
5. 00:11:338 (5) - NC
6. 00:13:464 (2,3) - You can make jumps here ^
7. 00:15:118 (5) - NC
8. 00:16:771 (1) - Delete clap on blue tick , I think whistle+ finish sound nicier than clap on red and white tick here I think it should be there
9. 00:18:897 (5) - NC
10. 00:18:897 (5,6) - Small inconsistent in spacing
11. 00:20:787 (1) - This would play better if you triplet at tail I think it's ok
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:27:165 (5) - NC
13. 00:30:236 (5) - NC
14. 00:33:779 (5) - NC
15. 00:39:213 (5,6,7,8,9) - This might be too hard for Hard Changed the last 3 notes to a reverse slider
16. 00:43:228 (7,8,1) - Why not stacking them it play much better for Hard
17. 00:48:898 (5) - NC
18. 00:53:740 (1) - How about start this spinner here 00:53:858 -
19. 00:56:693 (1,2,3,4) - This gonna be too hard to play for Hard k I stack 3 and 4
20. 00:58:583 (6) - NC
21. 01:00:473 (1,2) - A rhythm like this would play better I think current one is ok
    SPOILER

    
22. 01:02:362 (6) - NC , okay I think NC on every big white tick make the NC a bit more reasonable
23. 01:10:866 (6,7) - Not recommend this rhythm for Hard
24. 01:19:488 (1) - How about start on 01:19:843 - and end on 01:20:788 -? No change
25. 01:25:040 (1) - Start on 01:25:040 - ?
    Hard need some work on rhythm and flow, it just doesn't looks good to me ,you might need to try make this a bit more easier to play ( try take a looks at some ranked Hard)

[Reflection]

1. 00:00:944 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make the flow similiar to this 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) - ? cuz it flows better into the next one and snaps correctly
2. 00:01:889 (1) - Whistle at head to emphasis downbeat here
3. 00:03:779 (1) - ^
4. 00:05:669 (1) - ^
5. 00:13:228 (1) - Finish instead? I don't hear a finish :/
6. 00:16:062 (5) - Whistle so it sound a bit consistent here
7. 00:16:771 (9) - No need to clap on blue tick No change
8. 00:20:787 (1) - Clap instead? Don't hear a clap. Also too loud
9. 00:21:496 (3) - Clap at head ^
10. 00:26:929 (1) - Whistle to emphasis downbeat
11. 00:27:401 (4) - Whistle so it sound a bit consistent here
12. 00:27:637 (6) - ^
13. 00:45:827 (8) - Finish at tail o_O...no thanks
14. 01:18:898 (7) - No need to finish here I think there is a finish here
15. 01:25:040 (6) - Finish at head
16. 01:25:985 (8) - Finish at head
    This diff is somehow feel a bit overmapped to me make sure you try not to overmapped too much here sometimes it can ruin the flow and the rhythm, I think this diff might need a some works but well it just so much and might be too nazi to say it all here, also I'm still learning to mod hitsounds so feel free to reject some suggestions if you think it doesn't looks good so hard to map low BPM extra without overmapping lol. star diff still under 4 stars orz

[/list]

Good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi m4m here

Bold = Highly suggested
Blue = Questionable
Red = Somehow unrankable

[taku]

1. 00:09:448 (1) - From here you can try placing clap on the white tick that near the big white tick it would make this part sound a bit nice
2. 00:12:756 (3) - Whistle to emphasis the beat here
3. 00:12:992 (5) - ^
4. 00:13:228 (1) - Finish?
5. 00:15:118 (1) - Finish to emphasis the instrument
6. 00:15:827 (2) - ^
7. 00:16:535 (3) - Whistle to emphasis the beat here, also would make this 1/4 slider feel nice when playing
8. 00:16:771 (4) - ^
9. 00:17:008 (1) - Finish to emphasis instrument
10. 00:17:716 (3) - ^
11. 00:18:897 (2) - Whistle or finish
12. 00:20:787 (1) - Finish to emphasis instrument
13. 00:21:260 (2,3) - You can make jumps here
14. 00:22:205 (1) - Whistle at head to emphasis beat there
15. 00:25:275 (4) - Clap at head
16. 00:25:748 (5) - Clap at tail
17. 00:26:457 (1) - Clap or whistle at head
18. 00:26:811 (1) - ^ also whistle at tail
19. 00:27:165 (1) - Clap or whistle at head
20. 00:27:520 (1) - Whistle at tail
21. 00:34:016 (1) - Whistle at tail
22. 00:34:370 (1) - Whistle at head
23. 00:37:087 (1) - Add finish at tail too?
24. 00:41:575 (2) - Clap at tail
25. 00:42:283 (1) - Whistle or finish at head
26. 00:56:221 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle?
27. 01:23:150 (3) - Whistle or finish to emphasis instrument
    Mostly the flow and rhythm are pretty nice so I'm only suggest hitsound here so feel free reject some suggestions if you think it doesn't looks good , I'm just learning to mod hitsounds

Good luck

Estellia- wrote:

Accepted most fixes. Sent the diff via PM already.

@CelsiusLK Yes :3 I do have my own mapset. But why did you star this guy's map instead of mine :c

Rtyzen wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 4 December, 2014 at 10:58:47 AM

Artist: Yasuda Rei
Title: Mirror -TV edit-
Source: 魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags: エンディングテーマ ED Ending ending3 The irregular at magic high school Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei Shiba Tatsuya Miyuki TV Size handsome taku estellia-
BPM: 127
Filesize: 9591kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Estel's Easy (1.36 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (2.75 stars, 187 notes)
3. Normal (2.14 stars, 141 notes)
4. Reflection (3.96 stars, 309 notes)
5. taku's Insane (3.49 stars, 294 notes)

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IMPORTANT: TITLE CHANGED ON 7/10/14. PLEASE REDOWNLOAD THE MAP IF YOU DOWNLOADED THE MAP BEFORE THIS TIME
New mp3 - 25/9/14
New video - 29/9/14
New title - 7/10/14
Reflection REMAPPED (here's the old one if anyone wants it RIP ;_:) - 8/10/14
I had that diff name way before skystar did hmpf =3=
Normal REMAPPED - 25/10/14
Extra diff mapped by taku here
Insane diff mapped by handsome here

Title source: http://www.yasudarei.net/

SPOILER

Thanks to all modders!

m1223961117

TIMING CHECK Anyone? Thanks alot
MODS WELCOME AS WELL

handsome wrote:

taku

00:06:614 (3) - maybe remove nc for consistency with previous :D
00:18:897 (2) - try having the vocal on the elbow of the slider, which happens on 00:19:134 - i removed the current one and replaced it by a 1/4 slider
00:58:110 (1) - keep the two sides parallel, or at least close to it. now its pretty uneven changed the slider
01:07:323 (3,1) - blanket gonna think about it
01:23:622 (5,6) - sliderend of 5 blanket the top curve of 6? i already changed things here c:

1. bg is 1364x767 wich should be 1366 x 768 pls fix C:

1. AR -1
2. finish the kiai like in the other diff is better imo instead of 01:10:850 - finish it on 01:11:339 -
   Unsnapped green lines at:
3. 01:02:346 - snap to 01:02:362
4. 01:04:000 - snap to 01:04:016
5. 01:04:236 - snap to 01:04:252
6. 01:07:782 - snap to 01:07:795
7. 01:07:786 - snap to 01:07:795
8. 01:08:016 - snap to 01:08:032
9. 01:08:020 - snap to 01:08:032
10. 01:10:850 - snap to 01:10:866
11. 01:11:558 - snap to 01:11:575
12. 01:11:562 - snap to 01:11:575
    
13. audio lead-in is just 1500 rise it up to 2000 :V
14. 00:14:645 (2,3) - please don't use stacks in the easy diffu try to fix it in this way:
    
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    wich is the best way for the flow aswell
15. 00:25:512 (2) - try to change this slider in this way:
    
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16. 01:08:032 (1,3) - don't overlap pls

1. 00:35:905 (1) - ctrl +g
2. 00:37:795 (1) - ctrl+g
3. 00:49:842 (5,2) - this overlap is a bit meh try to fix it
4. 00:54:803 (1) - imo changing this slider like this is better for the flow:
   
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5. 01:06:614 (5,6,7,8,1) - the flow of this pattern is such confusing really try to remap it with a better flow
6. 01:19:488 (1,1) - you need more space time between the spinner and the first object since is a normal diff

1. hp +1
   00:21:496 (2,3) - tre flow here is a bit messy try to change this pattern in something else

1. hp +1
2. 00:12:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could curve this stream so it would be a better flow with the next object

1. 00:14:882 (7,1) - the flow here is a bit meh why don't you try to do something like:
   
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   i gave to the slider another shape and i moved the circle 00:15:590 (2) - to create a manual stack with 00:15:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - wich i moved a little bit

Crystal wrote:

m4m

[Info]

1. Red: Unrankable Issues
2. Bold: Highly Recommended
3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[taku's Insane]

1. 00:01:889 (1) - 276|260? Maybe you don't want to stack this with 00:01:417 (3) - .
2. 00:21:260 (2) - This can be mistook as to be 1/2 later.. Try 216|96.
3. 00:26:457 (1,1) - If I were you I won't slow down these sliders.. Consider using 1.0x.
4. 00:56:221 (1,2,3,4) - It might be too hard.. using 2 reverse sliders can be enough.
5. 01:19:370 (7) - Add NC?
6. 01:20:788 (3) - I prefer 2 circles instead, for its strong vocal here.
7. 01:23:622 (2) - This can be confusing because the distance here is nearly the same, but the time gap isn't the same. http://puu.sh/ejMiJ/34d36d2a9a.jpg (Together with 01:24:449 (4) - , I failed to catch the rhythm at my 1st try.)

good luck!

koreapenguin wrote:

[notice]Yoooooooooooooooooo


General

1. Seem haven't any SB then disabled this
2. about audio leadin, i think AudioLeadIn: 2000 is safe
3. BG is 1365x768 it should be 1366x768 16:9 or 1024x768 4:3, you must check that

taku's Insane

1. 00:03:425 (4,1) - does it play well? don't look at only your view. Changed to a better flow now c: even 00:05:315 (4) - this i don't see a problem about this part o:
2. 01:04:488 (1,2) - this... unnatural to play a bit imo, becuz of 01:04:961 (2) - this. feel so unclear it feels good at the vocals imo
3. 01:14:646 (2) - some hat sound is can't be 1/8, if you have that then you must make same all. for consistency. anyway, i don't want recommend this changed it
   
   Good Insane

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Rtyzen!

taku's Insane

1. 00:58:110 (8) - The combo feels too long, so maybe a new combo on this slider will trim it? Or 00:58:583 (10) -. To be honest, I don't follow your new combo. Done!
2. 01:21:260 (1) - This seems to unexpected in my opinion. By unexpected means that the distance from the previous circle shouldn't be that high. I would bring it more closer to the previous circle and change the form. You can try this:
   
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   Fixed! should be better now c:
3. 01:26:339 (5) - I would move this somewhere on x:187 y:268, that will make a blanket with 01:25:512 (3) . The circle was a bit hidden because of 01:25:512 (3) -, so it's kind of unreadable (well, for me). If you moved this, you can move 01:26:457 (6) to x:261 y:221, else make another pattern.

Fixed! i think this part needs a new slider but i don't know, i will let it be for now ^^
Good work! I don't found anything else.

This would be it! Any questions can be asked via PM or in-game. Good luck on ranking this mapset!

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Rtyzen! Hi o/

Normal

1. 00:05:669 (1) - Move this more to the up. It's too close to the borders. it's the best distance snap, and I think it's not too bad
2. 00:13:228 (1) - Move the 2nd node on the opposite side, like x:85 y:133, to avoid the touch from (3)? There's also 00:17:008 (1,2) -, but I don't to ruin the pattern.
3. 00:26:456 (1) - I think the tail should have a whistle and not clap. It sounded weird, because it doesn't follow the pattern. There's also 00:34:016 (1) .
4. 00:52:913 (5,6) - I don't think 1/4 rhythms are allowed in Normal. Change it to avoid it because it seems too hard for novice players. Even 00:55:630 (2,3) -, because they won't know when to click (2). It becomes confusing since it's on the blue tick. You should change it. And 00:56:220 (4,1) . I changed the second one. The other 2 are ok imo because the bpm is low
5. 01:20:788 (4,1) - The distance between them is inconsistent. Approach more (1) to (4).

Hard

1. 00:10:866 (4,1) - They aren't perfectly stacked.
2. 01:03:780 (8) - Move the tail to somewhere on x:291 y:91. That way, the slider won't shoot back and I think you have a better cursor movement if you get to the next circle.
3. 01:11:811 (1) - Why not extending it to the upbeat (01:12:284 -) so it could hit the beat instead of the vocal.
4. 01:14:882 (11,1) - I see that it fits with the vocals, but doesn't really work, because there's the downbeat that you might want to hit it. I would go for something like this:
   
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5. 01:18:898 (1,2) - They seem too quick for me, and it doesn't go with this difficulty (hard). Maybe a stream with circles would work. It's actually just like 3 1/2 circles. Also, I think I can fit things that are slighttly faster then normal because of the low BPM

Reflection

1. 00:05:669 (1) - You should make it as a slider, because of the previous patterns, the circle 00:06:023 (2) can make confusion: I thought it was on the red tick, so I clicked earlier. And you should keep the consistency. Nah people wont click too early because of 1. the distance 2. the previous patterns
2. 00:10:630 (4) - Move this further from 00:10:157 (3) because of the short distance. It would avoid the confusion from the 1/4 rhythm like 00:09:448 (1,2) and the uncomfortably.
3. 00:26:220 (6) - This breaks the rhythm from before, so it sounds pretty. The rhythm that starts on 00:24:567 follows the instruments, but this slider follows the vocals, which it doesn't go very well with the music. I suggest that you follow the music (without the vocals) for this part. This also goes to 00:33:779 (5) Following the instruments then back to the regular beat was my intention.
4. 00:30:000 (6) - I don't know if you want to hit the guitar beat, but it sounds weird to me. I think a better rhythm would go like this, if you want to follow the guitar:
   
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5. 00:35:905 (1,1) - I'd remove them because the length is too long and they won't fit in this type of difficulty because you avoid some good beats. Plus, 00:37:795 (1) is too much outside of the playfield, so I think you should make a new rhythm. eh i want to keep it consistent with my other diffs
6. 00:43:228 - The pause sounds too weird and uncomfortable. I'd just add a circle. It's the pause betweeen the 2 cymbals. I'll think abbout it
7. 00:48:425 (4) - Move this out of 00:47:953 (3) -'s tail so the pattern would be consistent throught the map? There's also 01:12:284 (2) .
8. 00:54:567 (9) - Add a bit more distance between this and the circle (8) because it's a little uncomfortable, and something a bit intense would help. It also goes to 00:55:512 (6) .
9. 01:24:213 (3) - This slider feels that it's on the white tick, due to the intense stuff you made from the previous patterns. Maybe adding a circle would go? moved it further

This difficulty seems a bit too random for me.

This would be it! Any questions can be asked via PM or in-game. Good luck on ranking this mapset! Thanks!

1. ~

1. 01:19:370 (5) - A new combo according with your combo pattern?, if you do that, remove here
2. 01:23:150 (3) - This really needs a new combo

1. 01:26:929 (3) - This note is really closer from the spinner, so I'd suggest removing this note and add a repeat in the previous slider

1. 01:23:150 (5) - New combo to avoid the longest combo

1. Nice

1. Hmm this diff some parts looks a bit overmapped, some streams are not according with the song but is not the big deal is just a point of view

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

1. ~

Estel's Easy

1. 01:19:370 (5) - A new combo according with your combo pattern?, if you do that, remove here Fixed
2. 01:23:150 (3) - This really needs a new combo this is ok

Normal

1. 01:26:929 (3) - This note is really closer from the spinner, so I'd suggest removing this note and add a repeat in the previous slider no need since it's before the spinner

Hard

1. 01:23:150 (5) - New combo to avoid the longest combo done

Insane

1. Nice

Reflection

1. Hmm this diff some parts looks a bit overmapped, some streams are not according with the song but is not the big deal is just a point of view

Good luck

Lokovodo wrote:

Hello, very good map! I can't really help with modding much because it is very good and fun to play.

On taku's insane i abosolutely love the spacing on 00:39:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - and patterns like this 01:00:945 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - and 01:09:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - it is all really visually appealing but also plays good. The only thing i would conder changing is that on 01:07:087 (5) - i would "Crtl+G" because i think it fits better.

On Reflection again i can't help you here, this difficulty is supposed to be the highest in the curve and it does that well while stabilizing very visually good patterns and not overusing patterns or anything negative. I can learn from this map for example this pattern 00:20:787 (1,2,3,4) - I can't recall ever playing anything like it, it is very good. It is also completely readable too.

Goodluck i would like to see this map ranked sometime.

1. Last spinner should end on the downbeat
2. Check your tags, is handsome still in the set?

1. 00:13:228 (1) - You want to curve this the other way so it plays better.
2. 00:14:645 (2,3,4) - This transition is a bit awkward because the circles aren't in the slider's line of curvature.

1. 00:31:653 (3) - These hitsounds don't fit the music
2. 00:42:283 (2) - Curve this the other way, it'll play much better.
3. From 00:35:197 to 00:58:110 you don't have a single 1/1 break in the map, and in between are things like multiple 1/2 circles and some 1/4 rhythm. Although mapping this bpm lets you make some allowances (which is why I overlooked the bigger spacing), I still think Normal difficulties should have frequent 1/1 breaks and avoid 1/4.
4. I'm still not quite sold on the 4 circle patterns like 01:03:307 (6,7,8,9) - either. Aside from that, the kiai is more reasonably mapped.

1. 00:07:559 (1) - Really should end on 00:08:031 to follow music!
2. 00:13:228 (1,2) - This stack breaks the momentum from the previous jumps, so it's better not to stack.
3. 00:27:874 (2,3,4) - I think a stream like this is spaced a bit too far.
4. 00:28:583 (1,2) - fix blanket better
5. 00:37:795 (1) - Following the vocal on 00:38:268 is a much better choice, as there's a clap too.
6. 00:47:244 (1,2) - It sounds better to have a 1/2 repeat slider at 00:47:244 because 00:47:480 is a red tick, a weak beat, and starting the slider there is awkward.
7. 00:48:898 (1,2) - This too, the sliders would sound much better starting on white ticks.
8. 00:59:055 (2,3) - fix blanket, also the slider can stack fully on 00:57:638 (4) -
9. 01:00:473 (1) - don't use 3/4 slider when you're ignoring the music on the red tick
10. 01:18:898 (1,2,3) - 01:20:079 (5,6) - This is really confusing. The first set of 1/4 sliders has 1/4 between them, while the second pair has 1/2 beat gap. Although they're technically distance snapped, due to slider leniency and your placement both sets of sliders appear similarly spaced. The best choice is to change the rhythm you use for the second part, but you could also rearrange them in a way that is less deceiving.

1. 00:34:016 (1,1) - These SV changes don't make sense?
2. 01:04:488 (1,2) - Placement is kind of ugly, put the smaller slider closer to the slider end of the bigger one

1. 00:09:448 (1) - you're completely ignoring the vocal on 00:09:685
2. 00:11:338 (1) - ^
3. 00:13:228 (1) - ^ I'll stop mentioning them since they're in every measure
4. 00:16:771 (9) - the music is faster than 1/4 for this part, so this is snapped wrong I think. Also those hitsounds don't belong. Remove the hitsounds on 00:16:535 (8) - too
5. 00:20:787 (1) - Why the weird snap?
6. 00:21:141 (2) - You're ignoring a very prominent sound in the middle
7. 00:23:267 (3,5,7) - overmapped
8. 00:23:976 - 00:24:212 - why do you overmap ^ but undermap these?
9. 00:26:811 - ^
10. 00:27:283 (3) - also overmapped
11. 00:28:228 (10,1) - isn't this jump too big?
12. 00:54:921 (2,3,4) - overmap?
13. 00:55:630 - undermapped
14. 00:57:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - jump is way too big!
15. 01:00:473 (4,5) - this is really big for a 1/4 jump
16. 01:03:307 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this is a technique only meant for very advanced players, it's best if you don't use it here
17. 01:07:795 (4,5,6,1) - Firstly I'd recommend lowering the spacing of the circles as these are 1/4 jumps, and that way it'll be easier to see the slider is 1/2 beat away
18. 01:18:898 (7,8,9,10,1) - I believe 1/4 jumps in this song are faster than DADADADADADADADADADA so please be cautious with them.
19. 01:19:370 (1,2) - It's best to swap NC here (even though it's downbeat) because of the rhythm.

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:016 (1,1) - These SV changes don't make sense? Done! looks better now c:
2. 01:04:488 (1,2) - Placement is kind of ugly, put the smaller slider closer to the slider end of the bigger one doneeee!