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Nana Mizuki - SCARLET KNIGHT (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, July 19, 2015 at 12:52:04 AM

Artist: Nana Mizuki
Title: SCARLET KNIGHT (TV Size)
Source: Dog Days
BPM: 144
Filesize: 14451kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.43 stars, 79 notes)
  2. Hard (2.54 stars, 182 notes)
  3. Insane (3.29 stars, 223 notes)
  4. Normal (1.68 stars, 104 notes)
Download: Nana Mizuki - SCARLET KNIGHT (TV Size)
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Oh my god Millhiore is like the cutest thing holy shit like damn like I would just like I wouldn't do anything with her sexually because she's like 14 but I would totally own her as a pet but not in a slavery kind of way but like a mutual thing where she's like she's aware that she's my pet but not like a pet but more like she's living with me but I like to pet her sometimes like that's ok right
Dog Days is a good anime.
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I asked MillhioreF if he wanted to make a hard and I think he said yes but I'm not sure and I'm too scared to ask him oh no.
jonathanlfj
i almost fainted trying to read your creator's words in one breath
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This guy
Coro
...sooo basically a Trainer-Pokemon type relationship then.
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sure o3o

Except like I'm not going to train Millhiore to be a killing machine because she's too cute to be a killing machine.
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
oh my god I swear to god if I ever get the time and motivation to mod again and get my maps ranked this is the first map I'm going to get ranked like holy shit
DakeDekaane
Yay, first mod here.
M4M

[General]
Remove the countdown pls. And turn Letterbox off. And Widescreen support too.
Unicode Artist: 水樹奈々(You may want to change the artist to Mizuki Nana)
Correct Title: SCARLET KNIGHT (yes all caps)

[Insane]
00:14:617 (4) - This looks pretty sloppy, fix the spacing here :u
00:18:471 (1) - Maybe revesing (Ctrl+G) this would make the jumpy feeling continue here, as this has very similar intensity as 00:17:846 (4).
00:25:034 (7) - Begin this in 00:25:138? Makes more sense for vocals, this 1/4 feels weird.
00:26:909 (4) - Maybe remove this one? I felt this stream is overdone, and a the resulting tap taptaptap would be more fun to play imo.
00:28:888 (6) - End this in 00:29:096? The music is strong there :I
00:36:180 (7) - Did this slider mess up? Because I think this would be a 1/1 slider.
00:39:825 (2) - Move this 1/4 beat forward, the 3/4 feels a bit weird there and the bassy instrument begins there too, leading to the nice stream better.

[Hard]
00:08:055 (2) - Shorten this by 1/4, so it matches correctly the music.
00:09:721 (6) - ^
00:16:284 (6) - Begin this in 00:16:388 - so it follows better the music.
00:20:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - You're missing some drum finishes here, the lack of them makes the one in 00:23:680 (7) sound too random. (Actually this happens in more spots in the diff).
00:30:555 (1) - Maybe remove NC? It seems you're basing your combos on vocals, and this belongs to the previous verse.
00:40:138 (1) - Remove NC?´
01:01:075 (6,1) - Swap NC?
00:49:513 (5,6) - This blanket looks sloppy.
01:09:721 (4,5) - ^
01:19:513 (3) - Maybe stack on (4)? To keep consistent the stacking in 1/4 objects.

[Normal]
00:09:096 (3) - Maybe add a repeat for this one? Feels a bit weird having that syllable ignored.
00:17:221 (5) - Maybe NC? The combo is a bit long imo
00:37:013 (4) - Move like 3 grid to the left (level 4) so this overlap looks neater. Fix the placement of the next note if you do.
00:50:971 (5,1) - Swap NC?
00:52:221 (1) - Maybe soften this curve a bit, looks quite squeezed.
01:33:055 (1) - Move closer to the center, so players have this easier to aim after spinning.

[Easy]
>HP0
Increase by 1 pls.
00:15:555 (3) - I'd remove the repeat and make it a 2/1 beat slider, and maybe a circle in 00:16:805. This would allow to follow the viola-like instrument better imo.
00:22:846 (4) - Move this 1/2 forward, this 3/2 space feels a bit weird as the main beat is more catchy than the vocals.
00:30:555 (5,6) - Instead of these two sliders a 2/1 slider with one repeat would fit better.
01:10:346 (2) - Again, the 3/2 feels a bit weird, I agree that this spot would have a note, but another way to achieve it is doing this, it'll be easy and still following the song.


uguu~
Lust
mod for mod of course why would i mod any other way

  1. In artist field put: 水樹 奈々
    Romanized put Mizuki Nana (Family name then first name as per japanese customs and what not)
  2. Disable widescreen support and letterbox in breaks. There is no storyboards and there are no breaks
  3. Video name is okay? "damn" (ACTUALLY LOL'D HAHA)
  4. Video also seems to have spanish subtitles
  5. There are no tags, consider adding some!

Well now thats out of the way lets get on with the set

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:221 (1) - Make this a little less curved, so that it can flow with 00:08:680 (2) - better
  2. 00:15:555 (3,4) - Nazi but the blanket is slightly off. Moving it to 181:301 then moving the midpoint to 157:256 and finally the endpoint to 212:161. Adjust the following spacing.
  3. 00:25:138 (3,1) - Because of the AR this overlaps for a little bit, making it look ugly and confusing
  4. 00:33:888 (2,3) - This could be prettier, either as a blanket or something else
  5. 00:42:638 (2) - Make this slider less curved, so that it will blanket 00:43:888 (1) - nice and warm
  6. 00:45:138 (2,3) - This blanket is also not perfect :o
  7. 00:45:138 (2,1) - Same overlap issue as before, but this isn't as bad. You might be able to scoot by with this
  8. 00:48:055 (2,2) - ^
  9. 00:50:138 (1) - Would sound better as two circles
  10. 00:57:221 (1,2,3,4) - In this pattern I can't help but feel newer players will try and click on the (4) instead of the (3)
  11. 01:21:805 (1,2) - Nazi but the blanket is slightly off again
  12. 01:33:888 - The kiai ends here, but the spinner ends here 01:30:555 (1) - ! either make the kiai shorter or the spinner longer
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:138 (2,3) - this stack seems a little iffy to me. the 1/2 is too close together for newer players. they will scramble a bit and will probably tap too fast or too slow
  2. 00:17:221 (1) - Press ctrl and move it so that it is perfectly in line with 00:16:388 (4) - (or alternatively move it to 436:92)
  3. 00:36:180 (3,4) - Not really a fan of how this overlap looks. Actually looks more like mistake then anything :\
  4. 00:58:471 (5,6,1) - Same stack issue
  5. 00:58:888 (1,2) - Same overlap issue
  6. 01:01:805 (2) - perhaps make this less curved so that it blankets 01:03:055 (3) - better
  7. 01:21:805 (1,2,3) - Same stack problem (3 is too much, 2 is somewhat acceptable but 3 notes in a row is meh)
  8. 01:33:888 - kiai ends here, but slider ends here 01:33:055 (1) - !
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:284 (6) - The 3/4 slider doesn't really fit. Perhaps just have it start at 00:16:388
  2. 00:42:534 (6,7) - Avoid the overlap
  3. 01:33:888 - same kiai time problem
Thats about it for the hard, I really liked how it played \o/
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:471 (1) - I don't really like the look of this slider art :(. Looks like a baby in the manger slider but upside down
  2. 00:30:555 (1,2,3) - Not perfectly symmetrical. Move 00:31:388 (3) - to 352:295
  3. 01:02:221 (4,5) - The flow here could be improved, the try to follow sliderbody in reverse's when it comes to things like this
  4. 01:33:888 - Same kiai time problem, just have it end on 01:33:680 for all diffs
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Lust wrote:

00:18:471 (1) - I don't really like the look of this slider art :(. Looks like a baby in the manger slider but upside down
Baby didn't know what was coming

Talk shit, get flipped.


thx 4 moddin
HabiHolic


sorry for late

tag add opening
[Insane]

hmm AR high 8 please

00:25:034 (7) - bad Rhythm 00:25:138 - move this and change 1/2 slider
00:27:117 (6) - drum awkward change soft hitsound
01:09:617 - add note vocal flow
01:11:388 (8) - Suggestions slider look https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1235297
01:18:888 (1) - blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1235299
01:20:867 (6) - delete clap on the head
01:22:221 (1,2) - swap NC
01:28:055 - 3 repeated blows
01:33:367 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1235307

[Hard]

00:16:284 (6) - why 1/3 slider? 1/2 batter
00:26:805 (6) - 192 : 304
00:35:971 - add note?
00:41:700 (4) -It is Suggestions to compensate for the shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1235313
00:42:534 (6) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1235316


[Normal]

00:16:388 (4) - blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1235321
00:59:513 (2) - blanket missing?
01:26:805 - clap?

good luck
HabiHolic
IRC Easy diff Check

lol
17:47 CDFA: HEY HABIHOLIC I forgot to give you kudosu for a map you modded 4 months ago can you post in the thread again so I can kds you ;3;
17:48 HabiHolic: lol
17:48 HabiHolic: my mod post??
17:48 HabiHolic: link plz
17:48 *CDFA is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/286143 Nana Mizuki - SCARLET KNIGHT (TV Size)]
17:48 CDFA: This map ;3;
17:48 CDFA: Sorry for not kds earlier ;3;
17:48 HabiHolic: ahha
17:48 HabiHolic: ok!
17:48 CDFA: yay :3
17:48 HabiHolic: but very bad mod
17:48 HabiHolic: orz
17:49 HabiHolic: hope helpful
17:49 CDFA: lol, any mod is helpful :P
17:51 CDFA: just make sure to post in the thread again so you can get your kds >3<~
17:51 CDFA: also yay we're mutual ;3;
17:52 HabiHolic: ok ok~
17:55 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281008 Nana Mizuki - SCARLET KNIGHT (TV Size) [Insane]]
17:55 HabiHolic: Easy diff check
17:55 CDFA: yay o3o
17:55 CDFA: :o!
17:56 HabiHolic: Easy
17:56 HabiHolic: 00:10:555 (1) -
17:56 HabiHolic: spiner finish 00:12:221 - here
18:00 HabiHolic: 00:19:721 (1) -
18:01 HabiHolic: delete NC
18:01 HabiHolic: 00:20:971 (2) -
18:01 HabiHolic: this NC plz
18:02 HabiHolic: 00:35:555 (3,4,5) -
18:02 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1622169
18:02 HabiHolic: this?
18:03 HabiHolic: 01:15:034 (4) -
18:03 HabiHolic: finish on the tail
18:04 HabiHolic: that all
18:05 CDFA: Yay, thanks so much for looking at it again ;3;. I'll add the stuff soon >3<
18:05 HabiHolic: ok
18:05 HabiHolic: post?
18:07 CDFA: Yup ;3;. And I'll kudosu your post >3<~
18:08 HabiHolic: ok~
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks a lot for modding <3~. Sorry for not kdsing your last post :(
Oyatsu
M4M! IRC mod. Good luck!! CDFA-nyan :)
Log
15:48 Oyatsu: video
15:48 Oyatsu: bad quality and there is sub =w=
15:49 CDFA: :-(((((
15:51 Oyatsu: ok open insane =w=
15:51 CDFA: yay -3-
15:52 Oyatsu: AR-1, 144 bpm, hm I think it isn't high enough to use AR9
15:52 CDFA: i did it ;3;
15:52 CDFA: I wasn't sure weather to use AR 8 or 9, so I tried 9 just to see >#<
15:53 Oyatsu: 00:07:846 (2) - there isnot beat, so I think remove
15:54 CDFA: also, I fixed it, and I changed (1) to fix the spacing
15:54 CDFA: =wwww=
15:54 Oyatsu: 00:14:096 (1,2) - i guess it didn't live, just remove, it is overmap now =w=
15:55 CDFA: removed ;3;
15:56 Oyatsu: 00:32:221 (4,1) - NC at 4 instead of 1
15:56 Oyatsu: 00:35:138 (4) - 320/316, wanna stack completely with 00:33:471 (1) -
15:57 Oyatsu: 00:36:180 (7,1) - stack at 7 instead of 1
15:58 Oyatsu: 00:42:534 (2) - I guess wrong time, right? it should be at 00:42:430
15:58 Oyatsu: 00:43:055 (1) - Remove NC, 00:43:888 (5) - NC
15:59 Oyatsu: moshi? =w=
15:59 CDFA: moshi moshi
15:59 CDFA: jesus desu
16:00 CDFA: i fixed most of it ;3;
16:00 Oyatsu: 00:56:180 (2) - add finish at head, I can hear abit =w=
16:00 CDFA: I can't do that since I'm using a drumfinish there ;333;
16:01 Oyatsu: use finish soft
16:01 Oyatsu: because drum finish is very small, soft finish is louder
16:01 CDFA: oh no~
16:04 Oyatsu: 01:00:555 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/8SjJo.jpg
16:05 Oyatsu: 00:19:721 (3) - I feel too curved, so ugly =w=
16:06 Oyatsu: 00:20:867 (3) - remove drum finish at head plz =w=
16:07 Oyatsu: 00:53:471 (1) - NC really isn't needed
16:08 Oyatsu: 01:05:555 (1) - move to 01:05:450 - , ofc move longer spin to 01:08:680 - =w=
16:09 Oyatsu: 01:26:388 (1) - no need NC
16:09 Oyatsu: moshi? =w=
16:09 CDFA: moshi moshi
16:09 CDFA: jesus desu
16:09 Oyatsu: =w=
16:09 CDFA: >3<
16:10 Oyatsu: 01:30:555 (1) - move spin to 01:30:450 - and move longer
16:10 Oyatsu: IRC modding, baka =w=
16:11 CDFA: is this the hard diff now ;3;
16:11 CDFA: or still insane
16:11 Oyatsu: now is Hard diff
16:12 CDFA: yay ;3;
16:12 Oyatsu: 00:10:346 (7) - NC, as Insane
16:13 Oyatsu: 00:15:971 (5) - Move more straight, I feel ugly slider ><
16:14 Oyatsu: 00:38:888 (5) - NC
16:15 Oyatsu: 01:03:055 (7) - NC, and remove all NCs afterthat
16:21 Oyatsu: 00:57:221 (3) - tail is at 208/24 to blanket
16:22 Oyatsu: normal
16:22 CDFA: normal ;3;
16:24 Oyatsu: 00:16:388 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1622195
16:25 Oyatsu: 00:50:971 (5,1) - NC at 5 íntead
16:25 Oyatsu: 00:51:805 (6) - I want it stack completely with 00:50:138 (4) -
16:26 Oyatsu: easy
16:27 Oyatsu: 00:31:388 (6,7) - plz fix it, easy, newplay can't play 1/4 @@
16:27 Oyatsu: 00:50:138 (1) - Remove NC
16:28 Oyatsu: 00:50:138 (1,3,4) - as 1/4
16:28 Oyatsu: 01:13:055 (3,4) - *
16:29 Oyatsu: 01:21:805 (1,2) - NC at 2
16:35 Oyatsu: ok
16:35 Oyatsu: the end! Good luck!
Yauxo
Oh my god Millhiore is like the cutest thing holy shit like damn like I would just like I wouldn't do anything with her sexually because she's like 14 but I would totally own her as a pet but not in a slavery kind of way but like a mutual thing where she's like she's aware that she's my pet but not like a pet but more like she's living with me but I like to pet her sometimes like that's ok right
Dog Days is a good anime. ಠ_ಠ




Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
(copy paste end)

[General]
■ As the map's over a year old, I'll assume that you also check it by yourself and change some rhythms, NCs or aesthetics here and there.
■ Tags are missing
■ It'd probably also a good idea to get a new video. I dont think a video with translated spanish(?) subtitles should be a thing. A blank one or maybe one with the japanese text would be the best thing to go

[Insanyuu]
■ HP 6 would probably be better


■ 00:09:721 (4) - 236/344 so that 00:09:513 (3,4) - is the same as 00:09:096 (1,2) - ?
■ 00:21:805 (5,6) - Blanket with 00:21:180 (4) - and move 5,6 by 4/4 (to adjust for automatic ingame stacking) While you're at it, try to position it further left, so that 6 and 00:22:846 (2) - dont touch
■ 00:24:825 (6) - The beat allows for another object to be placed. Not really neccessary though
■ 00:32:221 (1,2,3) - Maybe curve them a little, so that it'd look something like this?


or this

■ 00:35:138 (4) - 328/320 and 00:35:971 (6) - 184/320 for a better spacing between the objects before and after (was 0.9/1.10, is now 1.0/1.0)
■ 00:37:013 (9,1) - Make sure that the end tick of 9 hits the middle tick of 1 properly.

■ 00:40:138 (3,4,5,6) - I think it'd be better if you had a bit of a curve in these ones. Straight down like this doesnt really look good and feels rough
■ 00:42:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this rhythm would fit as well. Yours kinda ignores some important beats

■ 00:44:305 (4,5) - I'd say that you either copy paste 1 so that the angle stays the same, or that you increase the angle more
Increased angle

■ 00:50:555 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved. Also, move 2,3 down by 4/4 here as well (to avoid automatic stacking)
■ 00:57:221 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe some reversed windmill kind of pattern for these 4? Would do well imo

■ 00:59:513 (2,5) - blanket?
■ 01:09:617 (3) - circle here? Would fit very well (you did the same here: 01:15:971 (1,2,3) - )
■ 01:11:388 (9) - I really dislike the shape of this Slider. Mind changing it to something else? :v
■ 01:12:221 (1,3) - Make sure that the end of 1 hits the middle tick of 3
■ 01:20:867 (6) - You usually mapped a long Slider that mapped the full vocals on a place like this. There are so many things you could do with this Slider (change the rhythm, make it longer etc) so feel free to play around with this one, as long as it gets changed :v
■ 01:25:138 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make sure that the end of the Stream has the same DS as the Stream itself
■ 01:29:721 (1,2,3) - I feel like theyre spaced way too far. Something like 01:33:055 (1,2,3) - would be better imo

[Hard]
■ 00:08:055 (2,3) - Blanket could be improved
■ 00:14:617 (2) - circle?
■ 00:16:388 (6) - Let this one start on the white tick (and shorten it)
■ 00:17:846 (3,4) - This blanket could also need some improvement :3
■ 00:22:221 (4,5,6) - blankets?
■ 00:22:221 (4,5,6) - circle here? It feels really empty without
■ 00:40:138 (3) - 200/60 and rotate by -3° selection centre
■ 00:40:867 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ಠ_ಠ You probably want to remap this combo? D: It's cluttered and inconsistent in spacing.The basic idea would work though
■ 00:50:138 (6) - you probably want to use this rhythm

■ 00:52:013 (4,5,6) - triplet?
■ 01:09:617 (4) - ^
■ 01:09:721 (5,6) - proper blanket?
■ 01:12:221 (2) - Now I see how that weird Slider found its way into the Insane
■ 01:21:805 (1) - 1/4 repeat Slider?
■ 01:25:555 (4) - shorten by one tick and insert a circle
■ 01:28:888 (1,2,3) - the sudden spacing increase and timing change will most likely confuse players. Keep it at the normal spacing for these so that it's readable by the spacing

[Normal]
■00:15:138 (2,3) - I dont feel like having the next object to the top right of the Circle is a good idea while the flow indicates it being somewhere below. Somewhere around 76/352 maybe?
■ 00:38:471 (2,3) - It'd probably look better if you kept these two away from touching 00:37:013 (4) -
■ 00:50:138 (4) - How about this rhythm?

■ 01:00:971 (1,2,3,4) - Might also want to reconsider the rhythm here. How about this?

■ 01:28:263 (3) - doesnt really support anything, does it?
■ 01:33:055 (1) - probably too close after the Spinner because of that 750 MS rule

[Easy]
■ 00:15:555 (3) - shorten and add a circle on the new gap
■ 00:17:221 (4) - respace to 1.0 DS
■ 00:19:721 (1) - shorten to 1/1 and add a (NC'd) Circle after that?
■ 00:30:555 (5) - I'd remove the one after that, make this one longer and add a repeat

As mentioned above, the mapset's one year old and kinda outdated in rhythm and form (nothing else to expect though), so I didnt go too much into detail. A small revision here and there would surely be good for the map :3
Bara-
Wow, the creator's words xD
From M4M from your queue
All My images are drafts, They aren't perfect, don't copy if 100%, unless I give coordinates
[General]
Fix the things Yauxo said in AiMod
Make Kiai and here 01:33:680, there is no need for it to be 1/2 later, and the song is already finished (SCARLET KNIGHT is the end)
You have quite some overlaps/bad blankets xD

[Easy]
Wow, Cs2? Consider changing to 3
Diff settings so low

00:08:680 (2) - 3/2 feels kinda weird for Easy for me (Between (1) and (2)), even though it follow music perfectly
00:19:721 (1) - Make 1/1, and remove NC. Then add a note at 00:20:555 (1) - With NC
00:30:138 (4,5) - For me, the (5) doesn't feel right, in comination with the (4)
00:32:534 (7) - Overlapping with start (and end) of 6, and with end of (5). It look rather ugly. Also, 3/4 in Easy, wut?
00:38:888 (7) - I don't think red nodes feel well here, IMO, a grey-noded wave feels the best
00:43:888 (1) - I think this can get blanketed a little better
00:48:055 (2,4) - Kinda ugly overlap
00:53:888 (2,3) - Just personal preference, but these slider look kinda awful. I hate such slider, which you can get a 300 on with out moving the cursor.
00:55:555 (4,3) - Overlap
01:04:305 (1,2) - This can be blanketed much better, for example 01:21:805 (1,2) - Try to fix the blanket 01:26:388 (3) - Why is the start not horizontal? That feels better IMO
01:29:721 (3) - Blanket better please
[Normal]
00:07:221 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't feel really good,
How I'd do it
(1,2)

1--> 29;69 -- 48;188
2--> 156;244 -- 200;280 -- 200;312
(3,4)

3--> 48;188 -- 36;272 (starting on end (1))
4--> 156;244 -- 172;116 (Starting on start(2))

00:21:596 (2) - Doesn't look really nice, with the (1), pointing towards the end, and not towards the head
00:23:680 (3) - ^^(But with (2)
00:29:305 (1,3) - Overlap, try to make begin of 3, at the end of 1
00:30:971 (3,2) - Same story, so end of 2 and begin of 3 would be better if they were on the same place
00:37:013 (4,2) - Overlap
00:39:930 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - It might be hard for normal player to get used to this weird type of rhythm
00:53:263 (2,3) - Same place as (6)?
00:58:680 (6) - Doesn't go well with music, due to the heavy bells
01:13:471 (3) - Can blanket the (2) better, for example 01:23:888 (2,3) - Bad flow, due to the (2) reverse pointing at (3)
01:22:221 (3,1) - Same ^^

[Hard]
00:14:305 (1,2) - Make them the same. Ctrl D (1), Crtl > (2x), then put it at 196:164, for better line-up
00:16:284 (6) - Shouldn't this one start at 00:16:388?
00:18:471 (4) - This slider might need some re-work, for better blankteting
SPOILER

My coordinates:
460,168,18471,2,0,B|408:196|352:152|352:152|320:152|296:220|240:188|184:152|212:96,1,320,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:19:721 (3,4,5) - Just make it 3/4 circles/(reverse)sliders. It feels overmapped for hard, cause I don't hear similar sounds in the music
00:26:180 (5,6) - Try better blanketing 00:28:471 (4) - Make it 1/2?
00:31:388 (3) - Try to blanket better (This one is hard, as it's really close to each other) 00:37:013 (3,4) - Overlap looks ugly, due to the blanket 00:39:513 (2,3) - Blanket could be better 00:49:513 (5,6) - see 00:37:013 (3,4)
00:58:055 (5,6,1) - Wut? Dat blanket 01:10:346 (5,8) - Try to blanket better, can be tricky for this one if you want to keep pattern/distance
01:14:513 (1,2,3,4) - This is really awkward for me, I don't really get this ;-;
Rest of kiai is really good!

[Insane]
Ar to 8.5?
Symmetry :D
00:16:284 (4) - Seems needless for me
00:18:471 (1) - Really small detail, move the middle point to 256;138, instead of 257;138
00:19:721 (3) - I kinda hate such round sliders, consider changing, but it's just personal preference
00:29:305 (1) - Feels rather blank. Why not make it a doublet, or even a triplet, giving no awkward space to (2)
00:32:221 (1,2) - Sliders feel weird, as I don't feel the doubles
00:39:825 (2) - I dont like this one, cause it feels rather random
00:40:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really awkward sliders tbh
00:50:555 (1,2,3) - Blanket can be better 01:05:555 - Add note here, and move the spinner a little (Or even better, make it a stream, as there is a strong drumroll)
01:09:617 - I'm missing something here
01:28:055 - Add small stream here to fil the gap (and there is a drumroll) 01:33:367 (2,3) - For the ending, maybe give them all NC? Can be personal preference though


Yea, finished
Really good map!!!!


Yeah, I know, Many images xD
kamikin_old
Hello! From M4M queue, it is smaller than it used to be as my brother closed chrome while I was having supper...... :x

Easy
00:17:221 (4) - Imperfect blanket
00:18:888 (5) - This look strange in this position, logical but strange. Maybe move it so that 4 blankets it and then move 6 to blanket 5
00:22:846 (4) - I think you should horizontally flip this so that there isn't as much overlap
00:32:534 (7) - This looks strange when it touches both circles, maybe point it in a different direction?
00:33:888 (2) - Maybe make this into a blanket?
00:35:555 (3) - Imperfect blanket
00:37:221 (5) - I would rotate 3 180 degrees to make the pattern have symmetry
00:42:638 (2) - Imperfect blanket
00:45:555 (3) - Not sure if this is meant to be a blanket, it is imperfect if it is, but if its not I think you should make it more obvious otherwise it just looks like an imperfect blanket
00:47:221 (1) - I think you should stack the beginning of this on 00:45:138 (2) -
00:52:221 (1) - Imperfect a bit
00:53:888 (2) - I think you should have 1 blanketing this
00:55:555 (4,3) - Overlap
01:01:388 (2) - I think, to make it seem more symmetrical, you should copy 1 and then rotate it 180 degrees
01:22:221 (2) - Imperfect blanket
01:23:888 (3) - Imperfect blanket
01:26:388 (3) - The second point on this (the first red point) is 1 grid thing down, you should put it up imo to make it straighter and cleaner
01:29:721 (3) - Imperfect blanket
Lots of this was quite Nazi, so sorry about that! :(

Normal
00:08:055 (2,4) - Slight overlap
00:16:388 (4) - I would move this to the right a bit more to improve flow
00:21:596 (2) - I think this should be on the same line as 1 or in its path (after the player has finished the direction their cursor is moving)
00:50:138 (4,5) - I think these should blanket each other
00:53:263 (2,3) - Try tot tweak things so that these are stacked on 00:51:805 (6) -
00:59:513 (2) - Imo, you should move this up to make it neater
01:00:555 (3) - I think this should be on the same line as the ending of 2
01:03:055 (3) - I think 2 should blanket this or 3 should be moved a bit more towards the centre of 2
01:10:971 (4) - I think you should reuse 2 to make the pattern more symmetrical
01:12:221 (2,3) - Imperfect blankets
01:33:055 (1) - I think it would look nice if you blanketed the centre of the spinner (i <3 blankets....)

Hard
00:08:055 (2) - Imperfect blanket
00:14:721 (2) - This one is pointing at a different angle from 1
00:15:346 (4) - I find this a weird shape because it doesn't really blanket 2
00:16:284 (6) - If you slow the music down, you can hear that the next change in music is on the white tick
00:18:471 (4) - The tail of this has an imperfect blanket when blanketing 3
00:20:346 (5) - I think a flipped version of 4 should be used to have more symmetry
00:22:430 (5) - This should be a blanket imo
00:26:805 (6) - Imperfect blanket
I think 00:33:263 (4) - should be a straight line
00:39:513 (2) - Imperfect blanket
00:44:721 (3) - This slider shape is a bit weird, try and get the first half to blanket 2 (the beginning circle), you could then use the other half to blanket 00:45:346 (4) -
00:48:471 (3) - Imperfect blanket
00:58:055 (5) - I think you should use 00:57:221 (3) - (copy it then flip it then turn it 180 degrees)
00:59:513 (2) - Guesss what..? Imperfect blanket (I have OCD when it comes to these...)
01:09:721 (4) - Imperfect blanket
01:10:346 (5) - Imperfect blanket
01:12:221 (2) - Maybe use the second half of this to blanket 3?
01:33:055 (1) - As this is part of quite a defined part of the music I think you should make it have less ties with the previous combo (e.g. not being in a pattern with it)
01:33:680 (3) - I think it would sound better with a clap sound as well, that might sound weird to you though

Insane
This is my first time modding an insane (I used to not be able to play them) so don't expect much
00:23:680 (4,5) - I like the look of these but I don't think the sudden curve fits the music
00:31:388 (3) - I would flip 1 to make this
00:32:846 (3) - I don't think the music suggests a turn
00:45:138 (6) - This is facing a different angle to 5
00:49:513 (6) - Maybe use a flipped version of 5?
00:50:555 (1) - Imperfect blanket
00:58:888 (1) - Personally this shape looks strange to me, maybe don't curve the second part?
01:11:388 (8) - I think you should use this to blanket 7 and 9
01:12:221 (1) - Imperfect blanket
01:13:055 (3) - Imperfect blanket
01:18:888 (1) - I think this should be a blanket, otherwise it looks a bit out of place (if you can't fit it in maybe make it partially a blanket
[e.g.]

That's it from me! Bye! I hope you find my mod a bit helpful...... :(
Arlecchino
Hihi~ m4m from your queue

General

AR and OD +1 for Easy
HP -1 for Insane ?
consider repair the Artist in some diff




Easy

00:15:555 (3) - this slider kinda weird
00:17:221 (4,5) - Distance to not the same as the rest
00:20:971 (2,3,4) - make the flow more smooth,i think rotate 00:20:971 (2) - 12 degree and repaire this 00:22:221 (3) - slider *pict
00:42:638 (2,1) - blanket can be improved
00:53:888 (2,3) - i just thinking about make a straight Slider :3 *pict

Normal

00:09:721 (4) - move it to down for blanketing and better natural flow *pict
00:21:596 (2) - blanket ?
00:23:680 (3) - maybe curve to other side or sth else for not overlapped
00:30:138 (2,3) - blanketing so that's not overlapped ? *pict (about disntace,you can repaire the distance by your self , cuz CDFA-sama is pru >w< c teehee)
00:38:471 (2) - overlapped,i think better if 00:38:055 (1,2) - go flowing to down -> right then go up :3
00:40:867 (1) - how about start at white line, this is should be 1/2 cuz strong beat is at 00:40:971
00:42:221 (3,4) - hohoho.. imo better 00:42:221 (3) - add reverse and remove 00:42:846 (4) - so you can add circle at 00:43:05500:45:138 (2) - blanket properly ?
00:53:263 (2,3) - stack properly ?
01:16:388 (2) - overlapped *runs

Hard

01:18:055 (9) - Blanketing like Dis? and for the next note is gonna like deesss..
01:19:617 (4) - if you applied mod in above, im suggest to ctrl+j this slider and move it to the original place *pict
01:20:138 (5,6) - just move it for repair the distance :3
01:25:555 (4,5) - ctrl+j and move (already back to distance snap i guess) for better flow, so it will be like *pict, btw 01:26:388 (1) - blanket this `3`

Insane

00:09:721 (4) - reduce by 1/4 and add potato at 00:10:034 :3
00:18:471 (1) - Do M da!! CDFA-sama wa :3
yep sore dake da.. :<
im not that good at modding insane, i just feels its fine for me
anyway i cant pass insane xD but hope this helped
gud luck~
ac8129464363
hey, m4m from your queue

[Easy]
00:15:555 (3) - imo this could follow the 1/1 rhythm instead, as right after you use a slider of the same length but it actually hits emphasized beats
00:18:888 (5) - slight spacing error (from AIMod)
00:20:971 (2) - flow can be improved with a move to x:236 y:124 then reduce the curve so you can blanket the next slider nicely
00:22:221 (3) - if you do ^ ctrl-J it then blanket it
AIMod is also complaining about the spacing of 00:20:971 (2,3,4) - so keep that in mind if you don't do any of the above
00:42:638 (2,1) - this blanket isn't looking so nice imo
01:04:305 (1,2) - you can blanket these
01:10:138 (2,3) - I'm unsure about this stack - it might confuse an easy player, you could space it normally
01:29:721 (3) - Ctrl-G makes this flow much nicer to me

[Normal]
00:15:138 (2,3) - I think something like this flows and looks nicer, but you'll have to move some stuff around after. http://puu.sh/dKSYf/15cdfce1bb.jpg
00:22:846 (2,3) - you can let 2's tail flow into 3's head like this http://puu.sh/dKT2S/3897d27d36.jpg
00:43:888 (1,2) - why not blanket these two?
00:56:596 (1,2) - again, you can curve the flow between 1 and 2
00:58:888 (1,2) - the overlap between these two is a bit here, try this? up to you. http://puu.sh/dKT97/477f9d410c.jpg
01:01:805 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/dKTdU/f0fdbf8e9e.jpg
01:33:055 (1) - this slider's not very interesting, you could curve it a bit, up to you :)

[Hard]
00:08:680 (3,4,5,6) - blanket 2's tail into 3 then do this http://puu.sh/dKTtj/234294f992.jpg I think it flows and looks a lot nicer
00:22:430 (5) - straighten this out or blanket it, it looks kinda weird imo
00:26:180 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:40:867 (2,3) - this barely touching circle looks kinda messy, you could move it further or closer, up to you
01:14:930 (3,4) - weird rhythm, why don't you just use triple -> repeat slider?

[Insane]
00:17:846 (4,1) - Ctrl-G these separately
01:18:680 (9,1) - Awkward transition, you could move 9 closer to the middle of the slider

Very nice set :D
Xelasto
Hello! :D

[Easy]

Approach Rate, Health Drain, and Overall Difficulty all up by 1
During Kiai Time raise the volume to 100% to emphasize it.

00:09:721 (3) - This wavy slider could be improved
00:22:221 (3,4) - Try and make these not touch, they look and feel slightly awkward, or make 3 upside-down
00:33:888 (2) - Stretch this out so 3 can blanket it?
00:38:888 (7) - Try and make this more balanced by moving both red ticks to the right a bit
00:38:471 (6,1) - Try and make the beginning circles of both of these overlap.
00:42:638 (2,1) - Try and make 2 Blanket 1 better.
00:45:138 (2,1) - Try and make the beginning circles of both of these overlap.
00:48:055 (2) - Why not make just a curved slider? If you want to keep it try and make the repeat end on 00:50:971 (4)
00:52:221 (1) - Move this up 1 grid to make it cleaner.
00:53:888 (2,3) - Make this curve a bit less and make sure the ends point to the next slider.
00:55:555 (4) - Try and make this more balanced by moving both red ticks to the right a bit
01:04:721 (2) - Blanket Better :P
01:17:221 (2,3,1) - Try and make 3 equidistant from 2 and 1
01:18:471 (3,2) - Make 2 Begin on where 3 started.
01:21:805 (1) - Move this 1 grid down. Same with 2, also 3.
01:22:221 (2) - Make this blanket 1 better.
01:23:888 (3) - Improve this blanket.
01:29:721 (3) - If you can, blanket better.
00:30:555 (5) - NC
00:33:888 (2,3) - Looks odd. [/Easy]


There are also some problems with AImod in this mode.
A Great trick to make good blankets is to use the blanketed note's approach circle. :)

[Normal]

Approach Rate, Health Drain, and Overall Difficulty all up by 1
During Kiai Time raise the volume to 100% to emphasize it.

00:08:055 (2) - Try and improve this wavy slider
00:15:138 (2,3) - Try and not overlap. Doesn't look very good.
00:17:221 (1) - Same thing here. Try and make a more balanced wavy slider.
00:21:596 (2) - Curve less.
00:22:846 (2,3) - Please don't overlap this.
00:25:555 (3) - This.... is actually fine.
00:29:305 (1,3) - Make the end of 1 and the beginning of 3 overlap.
00:34:930 (2) - Curve less.
00:40:138 (5) - Curve less so 4 blankets a bit.
00:43:888 (1) - Curve less for better blankets.
00:50:138 (4,5) - Copy and past 4 for identical sliders.
00:51:805 (6,2,3) - Make these overlap.
00:54:305 (1) - Curve Less.
00:58:888 (1,2) - Make 1 blanket 2
01:13:471 (3) - Blanket better.
00:22:430 (1) - No NC (New Combo)
00:32:221 (1) - ^
01:20:555 (4) - Make this 1 tick shorter as it sounds better.
01:29:721 (1) - No NC

Sorry this was mainly blankets and appearance. I did NOT just pay attention to blankets :P

[Hard]

00:10:346 (1) - No NC
00:15:346 (4) - Try and make this blanket 2 better.
00:16:388 (6) - Move this forward one tick on the timeline and make it shorter by 1 tick.
00:17:638 (2,3,4) - Try and blanket better.
00:22:221 (4,5) - Blanket better.
00:23:680 (7) - Make 5 blanket this better.
00:26:180 (5) - Make this a better wave.
00:26:805 (6) - Move this down 1 and to the right 1.
00:31:180 (2,3) - Could be blanketed better (use 2's approach circle)
00:33:263 (4) - Make straight
00:39:513 (2,3) - Blanket better.
00:58:055 (5,1) - Try and make the arrow more even.
01:09:721 (4,5) - Make this blanket better, may be a challenge.
01:14:930 (3,4) - Why not make these notes and then make a triangle with 2,3,4?
01:18:055 (9,1,2) - Make equidistant
01:20:555 (6) - Make shorter by 1 tick, sounds better.
00:32:221 (1) - No NC
00:56:596 (1) - No NC, instead put NC on 3

That's it! :)

Since I modded 3 difficultes of your 1:30 song, and my song is 4:19, you only have to mod 1 mode. I would prefer you mod Hard mode.
byfar
from m4m

my map >> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

[insane]


woah sv. i got a 100 on this slider break 00:07:221 (1) -
maybe 2.00 > 1.8?
00:08:055 (1) - yo dude 1.2x DS from some friggin fast slider then 1.6x ds aint cool yo. stay same pls
00:27:742 (2) - PLS NO STACK UNDERNEATH SLIDER ;_; should be flowing tbh
00:39:825 (2) - this is a fast slider and u have the same DS (1x) to the next note.. missed stream entirely ;_;
00:41:180 (3) - shouldnt be a slider. theres a pretty strong vocal sound at the slider tail > should be a note
00:43:888 (3,4) - yea spacing
00:44:721 (5,6) - ^
01:18:680 (9,1) - fix blanketing?>
01:20:867 (6,1) - again spacing.

ok so first off for your insane has some issues why? because of the slider velocity. you are using a 2.00 SV while at the same time using so little DS making reading sometimes confusing. if u gonna make an insane with 2x sv like that, might as well go for a real insane.

[hard]
00:13:680 - should end slider earlier and put a slider here. had some trouble reading at here 00:14:305 (1) -
00:14:617 - put a note here
00:15:346 (4) - blanket with 00:14:721 (2) - ?
00:16:284 (6) - why did you start on the blue tick? theres no note there
00:17:846 (3,4) - blanket?
maybe something like this00:21:596 (3,4,5) - yo blanket
00:31:180 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:47:950 (2) - replace with notes
00:49:513 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:49:513 (5,6) - use a 1/4 repeat slider instead?
like this 00:52:846 (11,12) - if u followed my suggestion above, heres a better slider for flow 00:53:888 (1,2) - minor blanketing error
00:58:055 (5,6,1) - blanket pls

[normal]
00:30:971 (3) - put this on 00:29:305 (1) - slider tail?
00:32:221 (1,2) - and then if u followed my suggestion above fix these ds too
00:52:221 (1) - remove nc
00:56:596 (1) - ^
00:58:888 (1,2) - ugly overlap
01:21:805 (1,2) - stack this on slider? like u did here 01:23:679 (1,2) -

[easy]
00:15:138 (2,3) - doesnt this part seem weird to u? why did u start 2 on the white tick. should start on red tick instead. I think it plays better like this
00:16:388 - then if u followed my suggestion above, put a note on this white tick
00:30:555 (5) - where is the slider tail beat? if there is a beat, then this is too loud.
00:35:555 (3,4,5) - yo yo yo yo just cuz its an easy doesnt mean u should skip these beats :?
maybe something like this?

just some spacing issues in insane (sv too) & some aesthetics

overall is good
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
byfar and xelasto sorry for never kudosuing you

You can get kudosu if you want by just posting :P

also I don't remember when I last applied the mods so uhhh I'll do it later
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
So I've applied things now so we're all good.

I'll find people to mod this

I'm not entirely sure if I can get BN mods yet since I don't really fully grasp the quality standards of 2015
Seto Kousuke
My part of the m4m ^^

[easy]
  1. 00:45:555 (3) - Maybe making a better curve for blanketing and then pushing 00:48:055 (2) - a bit up so they don't overlap
  2. 00:50:138 (3,4) - In case you do some changes with those sliders mentioned before, then these 2 sliders 00:50:138 (3,4) - will have to go a bit to the right
  3. 01:09:305 (1) - I'm not entirely sure...but I remember someone telling me this kind of spinner is unrankable in Easy diffs because the next note is too close on the timeline
  4. 01:15:034 (4) - Move it a little to the left for aesthetics(they're a little merged)
  5. 01:30:555 (1) - Make the kiai ends at 1:33:680 to match the spinner
[Normal]
  1. 01:03:055 (3) - - Blanket with the previous slider maybe? looks better imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:388 (8) - I think this will have a better flow if you rotate this slider like this
[Insane]

On insane i don't know exactly what to say, there are some things like 01:24:513 (1) - that the kind of slider at this pattern just looks weird for me, but that's your mapping style and seems to do well...so i won't point out things here since they might actually be more preferences than an actual advice or idk...I don't know how to help in this diff x] sorry



And that's it...couldn't do something larger, I think i lack more knowledge :P and the song is perfect because mizuki nana <333 good luck! c:
MillhioreF

CDFA wrote:

oh my god I swear to god if I ever get the time and motivation to mod again and get my maps ranked this is the first map I'm going to get ranked like holy shit
cough
Cera-

CDFA wrote:

oh my god I swear to god if I ever get the time and motivation to mod again and get my maps ranked this is the first map I'm going to get ranked like holy shit
*Still Waiting*
*3 years later (again)*
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
LMFAO PLS

I really should get this ranked though uhhhh
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