1. Collab Insane (4.4 stars, 697 notes)
2. Easy (1.3 stars, 175 notes)
3. Hard (3.25 stars, 506 notes)
4. Normal (2.03 stars, 285 notes)

Thanks to

Satellite:Bubbled
smallboat:Qualified
fycho:
Satellite:Rebubbled
smallboat:Requalified

1. 00:30:871 (2) - 建议改成滑条
2. 00:33:763 (2) - same as above
3. 00:34:847 (1,2,3) - 后面再加一个circle 这样圆滑一些
4. 00:39:908 (3) - 这里有5个四分拍就可以啦 7个显得乱
5. 00:41:082 (2) - 挪到红线上好一些（其实是我读图烂
6. 00:51:835 (4,5,6,7) - 摆成直线
7. 00:53:281 (4) - 00:54:365 (5) - 这两个平行起来有奇效
8. 01:02:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里用distance snap有奇效
9. 02:25:179 (4) - 挪到红线上好一些
10. 03:09:185 (6,7) - 间距要跟3,4相同

1. 00:33:040 (2,4) - 重叠起来
2. 01:06:293 - 这里建议加一个note
3. 01:38:462 - 这里建议加一个note
4. 02:25:449 (3) - 与1 2 齐平
5. 02:38:102 (3) - 垂直一下

Setsurei wrote:

[General]
look AI mod, there are objects unsnapped and some inconsistencies on the song setup fixed
[Easy]
00:16:414 (3,4,5) - this is a bad overlap, don't do this, this may confuse the newbies

SPOILER

fixed

00:20:389 (1,2) - don't stack prefer mine
00:21:835 (2,1) - overlap, move (2) a bit to the right prefer mine
00:31:956 (4,5,6,7) - a stack then a multiple hitcircles could confuse, change 00:32:679 (6,7) - to a slider? fixed
00:55:812 (7,8) - overlap, move (7) a bit to the right i can't understand how to overlap when i move right
01:08:100 (6,1) - overlap, rotate / flip (1) elsewhere, and then adjust the next object too to tidy up the flow fixed
01:28:703 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - overlap, make them like this? fixed

SPOILER

01:54:365 (7) - change to 1/1 repeat slider? fixed

SPOILER

01:56:172 (2,3) - make them like this? prefer mine

SPOILER

02:04:486 (5,7) - overlaps, rotate them a bit so it won't nudge each other fixed
02:44:968 (3,4) - overlap i think overlap may confuse the newbies
02:51:835 (2,3) - put them lower a bit fixed
03:02:317 (1) - ctrl+G fixed
[Normal]
00:22:196 (4,1) - overlap fixed
00:33:040 (2,4) - stack them, looks tidier fixed
00:59:425 (3) - stack properly, x 299 y 173 fixed
01:14:425 (4) - extend to 01:14:787 - nice fixed
01:27:979 (1,3) - stack properly fixed
01:33:762 (2,5) - overlap fixed
02:17:497 (3,4) - ^ prefer mine
02:20:389 (4,5,1) - ^ fixed
02:26:534 (5,6) - ^ prefer mine
02:39:909 (2,3) - ^ ?
02:50:751 (1) - x 96 y 36 prefer mine
03:00:148 (3) - x 309 y 235 to make a nice stack 03:00:148 (3,5) - prefer mine
[Hard]
00:20:389 (3,4) - fix the circle stack still stack

SPOILER

00:21:835 (1,3) - stack properly
00:49:305 (6,7) - ^ prefer mine
00:57:618 (6,1) - overlap i don't know how to overlap there
01:30:148 (2,3,4) - stack properly don't know how to stack there
01:31:956 (3,4) - ^ fix
01:33:040 (2,3,4) - ^ -^
01:34:847 (3,1) - ^ still stack 01:35:570 (1) - x 140 y 102 prefer mine
02:25:179 (4) - not recommended here, overmapping, delete i think no problem here
02:28:342 (8,1) - stack properly still stack here

nice hitsounding, good luck!

SuperHD wrote:

[General]
break time有点杂乱 特别是后面的那段(02:07开始的）02:07的break fixed
[Hard]

1. 00:30:871 (2) - 建议改成滑条 为了与吉他音的摆放重合（好像又不是吉他）
2. 00:33:763 (2) - same as above -^
3. 00:34:847 (1,2,3) - 后面再加一个circle 这样圆滑一些 后面没音
4. 00:39:908 (3) - 这里有5个四分拍就可以啦 7个显得乱 没有吧。。。
5. 00:41:082 (2) - 挪到红线上好一些（其实是我读图烂 我觉得还好
6. 00:51:835 (4,5,6,7) - 摆成直线 done 原本就打算摆直然后眼花了@-@ fixed
7. 00:53:281 (4) - 00:54:365 (5) - 这两个平行起来有奇效 我没发现有奇效...
8. 01:02:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里用distance snap有奇效 这里不是一直用着distance snap吗？
9. 02:25:179 (4) - 挪到红线上好一些 我倒是觉得我这样比较好
10. 03:09:185 (6,7) - 间距要跟3,4相同

fixed
[Normal]

1. 00:33:040 (2,4) - 重叠起来 fixed
2. 01:06:293 - 这里建议加一个note
3. 01:38:462 - 这里建议加一个note 这里加的话就是下一句歌词的开始了
4. 02:25:449 (3) - 与1 2 齐平 fixed
5. 02:38:102 (3) - 垂直一下 滑条短，垂直不好看

Shurelia wrote:

Chata!!!!

Here's mine~ :3

[General]
The original artist name should be "茶太" not "Chata". fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:13:161 (3) - The distance of this circle to the next slider is 0.85x which is too close , change it into 1.00x. fixed
2. 00:14:606 (5) - Change the distance from the previous slider to 1.00xin fact,i choose 0.9x with distance on this diff
3. 00:16:053 (2) - ^^^-^
4. 00:17:498 (4) - ^^^-^
5. 00:18:944 (6) - ^^^ (Change the distance to the next slider to 1.00x)-^
6. 00:24:004 (2) - This slider is too far away from the previous object.fixed,when i upload the map i forgget this problem><
7. . . .
8. . . .
   
   Almost all of the objects in the entire map have a wrong distance spacing. I Suggest you should remapping this (to fix the distances) and don't forget to use "Distance Snapping". I recommend 1.00xin fact,i choose 0.9x with distance on this diff and i choose grid size with small so there have something tiny wrong

[Normal]

1. 00:38:100 (1,2,3) - change the distance of 2 last circles to 1.00x , to keep the distance constantly.fixed
2. 02:29:064 (7) - move this into x:416 , y:48 , to keep the distance~fixed
3. 02:42:438 (4) - NCfixed
4. 00:45:329 (1) - Remove NC , and change it to 00:46:414 (2) fixed
5. 00:55:088 (4) - NCfixed
6. 01:09:907 (8) - NCfixed
7. 01:50:028 (1) - add kiai time from here to 02:07:016 (6) kiai time shouldn't too much
8. 02:13:160 (1) to 02:23:642 (3) didn't fit to be a kiai time in my opinion. it think this should be removed.there is special on the song
9. Make a spinner from 01:47:136 (1) to 01:49:667 (1)
10. 02:07:016 (6) - 02:13:160 (1) - Why leaving this part blank? it would be better if you fill this.fixed

[Hard]
[notice][list]
[*] 02:06:835 (1) - 02:13:161 (1) - Why leaving this part blank? it would be better if you fill this.fixed
[*] 01:47:136 (1) - make Spinner , end at 01:49:305 (1)
That's all from me.
I wish you luck and i hope more Chata's song get ranked!

thanks for your mod i will try my best to get rank

[Twinkle] wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:715 (1,2) - 在不影响与后面的ds情况下忘左边转一点 不要让00:11:715 (1) - 和00:12:618 (4) - 重叠到原来的好像也没重叠吧，fixed
00:22:377 (3) - 和00:21:835 (1) - 没叠好fixed
00:22:558 (4) - 也和00:22:197 (2,3) - 一样间距？这里很明显间距大了fixed
00:22:558 (4) - 包一下00:23:281 (1) - 的末尾 然后00:23:010 (5,6) - 直接放在底下像下面这样把上面那个间距问题改好之后已经自动包好了，虽然包得不太明显，感觉滑条弧度太大，滑条后面的二连就变难看了，叠起来的话DS又有问题0.0

SPOILER

00:26:353 (2,4) - 这上面的clap换成whistle？clap有点吵fixed
00:30:510 (1,3) - 00:33:402 (1,3) - 也换成whistlefixed
00:41:082 (2) - 这个放错了吗？没音 往后移一格或者前面滑条短一格这个移到前面0.0虽然没音，这里是打算自创节奏的，但是打起来还好,我再考虑一下
00:44:968 (1) - 包一下00:45:510 (2) - fixed
00:47:046 (2,3) - 去clap不加clap没存在感了
00:50:389 (7) - fixed
00:54:365 (5) - 去clapfixed
00:55:269 (1) - 不推荐使用track音clap 打起来很难受fixed
00:54:727 (1) - 不是太好看 改成这样？fixed

SPOILER

00:57:618 (1,1) - 和前面一样fixed自己改了0.0改成下面图那样DS有问题

SPOILER

01:03:492 (7,8) - 去clapfixed
01:05:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可以摆成两个五角星组合的造型fixed

SPOILER

01:09:185 (1) - 包好一下fixed

SPOILER

01:09:727 (1) - track音不推荐加fixed
01:15:148 (7,8) - 去clapfixed
02:08:552 (6,7) - 去clapfixed
02:10:992 (5) - 加NCfixed
02:13:341 (2,4) - 去掉不在白线上的clapfixed
02:16:233 (2,4) - 和上面一样fixed
02:21:835 (1) - 太长了 后面改成点连打hard难度不用能用长串吧，话说hard可以改成自定义难度名吗？
02:25:179 (4) - 这和前面00:41:082 (2) - 一样没音-^
02:37:739 (1) - 不好看，改成包02:38:281 (2) - 的应该好一点我觉得还好0.0
02:40:992 (6) - ctrl+gfixed
02:48:221 (4) - 没包好fixed
03:04:667 (4,5) - 移到03:03:763 (1) - 的尾巴上fixed

[Normal]
00:20:389 (1) - 和前面4太近了fixed
01:21:112 (1,2) - 都往中间转10度fixed
02:17:497 (3,4) - normal里不要这样叠fixed
02:27:618 (6) - 这也是fixed
02:30:510 这里加一个notefixed
02:39:909 (2,3) - 不要这么叠fixed

[Easy]
问题不大，就是感觉有点太难了节拍用的过密，有些都堆起来了，不过应该没什么问题>.<

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hard]
无力吐槽...感觉2kiou附体，流水线1/2节奏还是特别无聊的...这首歌的音大部分都很规则在1/2的地方，不在的地方我都跟了，新手，不会加合曲的节奏0.0，曲子本身比较慢，加太多note不太好吧，都2.3星了。试着加了点note构成3连，感觉太怪了，可能是因为歌曲节奏太慢，除了3连，其它合曲的节奏不会加
而且那种XXX XXX XXX XXX的节奏真是什么曲子都通用...XXX XXX XXX XXX的节奏是怎样的...

[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - nm就尽量别完全遮叠起来了...2L叫我改的，现在又改回来了fixed
00:38:100 (1,2,3) - 有点恐怖( 恐怖在哪0.0
01:21:112 (1) - 这clap重复了吧听起来感觉没什么问题
01:29:605 (4,5,1,2) - 分散，不要堆叠我觉得这样好看呐，也没完全堆叠
01:38:462 - 一般这样的结束，大白线是重音就别漏了fixed
03:09:365 (1) - 同大白线结束fixed

[Easy]
od-1fixed
比起easy，更像normal
00:29:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 堆得太密集了，新手不好读图fixed
00:42:799 (3,4) - 平行更好看fixed
00:46:414 (1) - 停止在00:47:498 - 就好fixed
01:15:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 太单调，加点1/2滑条过渡一下感觉改了不好看，这里节奏平缓，单点就够了
02:26:896 (3) - 停在大白线fixed
02:30:511 (1) - 和上面说过的一样改法fixed
02:47:859 - 为啥空了一截感觉easy转盘后要留点时间给新手缓冲，不过还是fixed
03:09:365 (1) - 结束在大白线更好fixed

lkx_Shore wrote:

test diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Chata - kokkei to i u na kare.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Kokkei to Iu Nakare
TitleUnicode:滑稽というなかれ
Artist:Chata
ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:4anke
Version:test
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:165224

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,26011,39880
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
149,361.44578313253,4,2,0,60,1,0
40630,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
51835,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 68,240,98
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 255,55,155
Combo5 : 255,0,0

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00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
不知道我自己摆3连的时候为什么感觉很怪，我果然不会摆3连orz，还需要努力
摆太多这种1+3连的梗感觉已经不是hard难度了0.0
最近又没什么时间作图，再完成一个insane也不知道要多久...
话说2kiou是谁？id查不到0.0

4anke wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

test diff

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00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
不知道我自己摆3连的时候为什么感觉很怪，我果然不会摆3连orz，还需要努力
摆太多这种1+3连的梗感觉已经不是hard难度了0.0 只是给个节奏你参考，你把3连换成两单点也可以的
最近又没什么时间作图，再完成一个insane也不知道要多久...
话说2kiou是谁？id查不到0.0 kioukiou

ZZHBOY wrote:

前辈你好我来啦

[Easy]
我觉得normal音效组不太适合 建议换成soft或者drum一直都是soft...只是音量比其它难度大了点，调低了
先开aimod点上check ds 低难度尽量保持全程ds一致fixed
00:21:835 (2,1) - 尽量避免这种遮挡...好丑的不好改
00:37:739 - 尽量不要让重音在滑条尾上会减弱打击感不好改，以后会注意的
00:52:197 - 同上 而且让kiai由滑条尾开始也是很不好的fixed
01:19:667 (3,1) - 移开点不要遮挡fixed
然后就是你三个kiai里节奏都太挤了 基本每拍都有note 不如适当空一些出来反而感觉好一些删了一点note
[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - 这里也是遮挡比较丑0.0
00:26:534 (1,2) - 这里可以弄个blanket 就是让下一个滑条包住上一个圈 让滑条和圈的缩圈是一个同心圆不明觉厉
00:26:895 (2,3) - 也是尽量避免遮挡没遮挡啊
01:29:426 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 你不觉得这一块很挤吗.-.好吧，删掉了01:29:606 (4) -
01:34:667 (3) - 这里就感觉有点overmap 可以去掉这个圈fixed
02:30:510 (10,1) - 交换ncfixed
[Hard]
这个难度用了1.0 1.2 1.3 1.5四种sv感觉不太好 建议是用三种就可以了你思考一下fixed
00:16:052 (5,6) - 两个滑条后半部分遮在一起有点丑故意的，我觉得还好
00:21:112 (1) - 这里遮挡感觉并不好 而且没必要ncfixed
00:30:510 (1,3) - 这里没有四分拍你却用了1/4的折返滑条感觉有点overmap感觉还好
00:34:847 (1,2,4) - 这里遮挡也是不太好往下移了一点
00:49:305 (6) - 前后一直是4拍一个nc所以这里也应该nc才对不必这么计较啦
01:21:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段一拍的圈感觉有点偷懒...嘘~别说出来嘛。前面那段跟吉他了，这段跟鼓
01:44:245 - 既然前面放了六个圈这里再空感觉不太自然.-.6个圈是突出音效的0.0仔细瞧瞧
02:08:552 (6) - 这个圈overmap也有点明显 建议去掉lkx还叫我加多点overmap,虽然我也觉得这首歌不需要overmap，但是还是稍微加一点比较好
02:21:835 (1) - 应该从后一拍开始因为02:21:926 - 这里似乎没有音可是02:21:835 (1) - 有音，为了降低难度所以填过去
02:25:179 (4) - 这个圈是怎么回事?好吧，删了
02:40:450 - 这里音倒是比较明显所以不建议空出来这里跟鼓音
03:10:811 (6) - 建议换成一个1/2滑条和其他难度在同一个地方结束0.0

前辈晚上好o.o
thx~
我不是前辈><

Regraz wrote:

Hi!M4M, and sorry for lateness!
[General Check]
1.If you don't have any specific reason, please keep Stack Leniency at 7 in Easy (default value).
2.The volumn of Easy and Normal is inconsisitent.(80% in Easy and 60% in Normal)前几次的更新已经改了
[Easy]
General：
1.Easy难度的话ds保持一致，所以建议开着Distance Snap拖一遍note。 而且你可以用稍大一些的DS防止overlap，这样排版不显得乱。
2.不同的段落使用不同的音量，例如在一开始的vocal部分，可以使用稍微低一些的音量，在KIAI 部分使用高一些的音量，有层次感。fixed
Placement：
1. 00:20:389 (1,2) - 首先，不推荐使用这样的排列，尤其是在Easy中。
而且，检查一下位于左上角的坐标可以看出，这两个slider尾巴是没有完全叠在一起的。尾巴叠起来了
2. 00:21:835 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/93o5v.jpg 把这两个分开一些距离，叠到一起了有一些不美观。改了DS就变了
3. http://puu.sh/93oax.jpg通过AR圈可以检查到，这2个slider是没有blanket好的。fixed
4. 00:55:812 (8,9) - 不要擦边，挪开一些fixed
5. 01:05:209 (3,4) - 弄成平行的，美观一些fixed
6. 01:16:775 (3,4,1) - 做成正三角形多好不够位置
7. 01:19:667 (3,4,1) - 同上-^
8. 01:22:558 (3,4,1) - 同上-^
9. 02:03:040 (4,5) - 像这样 http://puu.sh/98ISG/b12ab54a1b.jpg 包好，然后再调整一下后面的。fixed
10. 02:44:968 (3,4) - 叠得太近了。Easy不推荐这样搞。fixed
Hitsounds：
1. 00:36:294 (4) - 开头clap啊fixed
Rhythm：
1. 00:28:341 (5) - 感觉应该是1/1来跟音乐 而不是2/1 音乐就是2/1，后面那个是长音
2. 00:42:257 (2) - 太短了fixed
3. 00:44:245 (4) - 这么短新手反应不过来的，而且还是折返fixed
4. 00:47:860 (2) - 向后挪 1/2 重音就在这里
5. 01:26:173 (4) - 感觉不对节奏 音乐就是2/1，后面那个是长音
6. 02:26:353 (2,4) - 已经阐述fixed
7. 03:09:365 (1) - 向后推1/2-^
Others：
1. 02:08:823 (10) - combo太长，中间拆一下fixed
[Normal]
Placement：
Hitsounds：
Rhythm：
Others：
=======================================================
I'll finish my mod in several following days. Sorry for the procrastination!!
thx~

smallboat wrote:

嗨，4anke，抱歉來晚。

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
1.Stack Leniency 只有Easy不同，要一致。
2.Kiai線未對齊:00:52:197 (1) 和 02:13:161 (1) .

[Easy]

00:11:715 (1,2) - 最初開始就先來個stack也不太好，有些剛開始玩會很難點這個，所以覺得還是保持間距比較好點。(要stack后面再用)
00:20:389 (1) - stack歪了。
00:23:282 (1) - 好像錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
00:28:341 (5) - 建議頭跟尾端不要overlap。
00:29:426 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺新手玩這邊會有點錯亂,imo.
00:40:630 (1) - 錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
02:13:161 (1) - ^
02:36:293 (1) - ^

后面看過去節奏和擺放沒什麼問題。

[Normal] (同Easy，注意finish。)

00:23:281 (1) - 同Easy (看看順便Hard也加一下，Hard部分就不提這個)
00:34:124 (4,5,1) - 間距保持一致，看得比較整齊。
00:40:630 (1) - 錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
01:19:304 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - 可以擺個S形，不一定要照直線這樣死板板的擺放。
01:38:462 (5) - 我覺得再加一個note然後再break比較好(Easy剛沒講到，看看要不要加)? 在這邊滑完2個1/2滑條再break有點不太cool的感覺。
01:54:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感覺這段如果用DT連續打2組3個1/2note會很難打(我覺得會被黑一分)，畢竟是NM，也許能換個節奏擺。
02:57:618 (7) - 怎麼忽然空了一拍在這裡，不加note? 打得不舒服。

[Hard] (同Easy，注意finish。)

00:19:305 (4) - Stack 00:19:667 (1) 尾?
00:25:450 (4,5,6) - 聽音樂這邊間距可放大，現在這樣太小了，至少放大個1.2x~1.4x?
00:36:655 (2) - 應該能Ctrl+g
00:42:167 (2) - 聽這邊有個連打，或許可加個note.
00:44:245 (9) - 現在這樣放不太flow，放到(172|256)?
01:03:402 (1,2,3) - 不疊好?
01:44:245 (1) - 加一個note+finish?
02:19:124 (3) - 這邊弄個連打? (前面都有表現連打了，這怎不表現一下)
02:19:215 (2) - ^
02:19:938 (6) - ^
02:21:293 (5) - 感覺錯過一個note漏掉vocal?
02:23:281 (3) - Music從這起頭來個NC?
02:27:618 (6) - ^
02:29:606 (2) - 紅線有音呢，建議加個note。
02:49:847 (8) - 擺在(366|118)會比較整齊(然後后面的(1)稍微弄遠點間距)。
03:10:992 (1) - 在前面紅線結束有點蠻奇怪的感覺，重音在大白線，所以這邊應該是結束才是，加個note試試看(上面兩個diff也如此)。

質量還可以，但有些直線排列有點太Bored(尤其是Hard需要改進些)，沒什麼大問題，如果要拿給BAT看我覺得可以了，加油。
船业的mod很多都改了
hard的第二个kiai time大部分跟的是伴奏

1. I believe you have 2 mp3 files unless I have to re-download this map.

1. Looking at the spacing, I recommend using a smaller circle size like 3.
2. A bit inconsistent spacing here. Please move this slider 2 grids to the right to fix this.
3. 00:21:825 (2,1) - Don't let these notes touch each other.
4. 00:23:994 (2) - Move this slider a grid down so the end of this slider stacks.
5. 02:46:404 (1,1) - Avoid doing this on Easy difficulties. Allow novice players to rest after the spinner.
6. Easy difficulty Guide: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy

1. 00:13:873 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could have re-arrange these notes and make perfect stacks with them. For example, you could have stacked 00:14:958 (1) with 00:12:789 (4), stack 00:15:319 (3) with the start of 00:13:150 (5), and stack the end of 00:16:764 (6) with 00:15:680 (4). Fix spacing if necessary.
2. 00:22:187 (4,1) - Again, try not the overlap notes if possible.
3. 00:26:885 (2,3,4) - This slider pattern seem kind of random. Try doing something else.
4. 00:28:331 (4) - I would probably add a reverse here to capture the crash cymbals playing.
5. 00:55:078 (1,2) - Bad blanklet. Try copy and paste 00:55:078 (1) and flip it 180 degrees (Press Ctrl + > 2 times). Adjust spacing if nescessary.
6. 02:23:632 (3) - Try this pattern:
   
   Photo

   
7. 02:30:500 (4) - Add note?
8. 02:50:741 (1,2,3) - Don't overlap notes. Same with 02:52:548 (5,6) and 02:53:632 (1,2), and 02:56:163 (5,6).
9. 03:07:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awkward pattern arrangement. Try separating these patterns a bit.

1. I recommend AR7 or AR7.5!
2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 03:09:523 - snap to 03:09:536
3. 00:17:849 (1,3) - You tend to overlap a lot with your notes. Try to avoid that as possible.
4. 00:19:295 (4,1) - In addition, stack notes when you have the opportunity to.
5. 00:28:693 (5) - Ghost note.
6. 00:41:072 (2) - Another ghost note.
7. 01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Polish your patterns. You can make this a better star pattern and a straight triangle pattern:
   
   Photo

   
8. 01:42:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe delete these notes? The break time is inconsistent compare to the easier difficulties.
9. 02:48:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this and also stack 5 with 2, 6 with 3, and 7 with 4: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833063

1. Increase drain rate 6? Hard difficulty already has HP drain 5.
2. 01:42:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as Hard.
3. 01:50:379 (2,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
4. 02:08:813 (1) - Not perfectly stacked with the start of 02:07:548 (2).
5. 02:10:982 (4) - You could use the same slider shape as 02:10:259 (1) since they both share the same sound in the music.

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello There!

[Collab]

1. Increase drain rate 6? Hard difficulty already has HP drain 5.
2. 01:42:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as Hard.
3. 01:50:379 (2,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
4. 02:08:813 (1) - Not perfectly stacked with the start of 02:07:548 (2).
5. 02:10:982 (4) - You could use the same slider shape as 02:10:259 (1) since they both share the same sound in the music.

Yeah...this map needs a lot of work! Hope this mod helps a bit. Good luck!

osu file format v13

[General]
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PreviewTime: 52197
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Title:Kokkei to Iu Nakare
TitleUnicode:滑稽というなかれ
Artist:Chata
ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:4anke
Version:Collab
Source:
Tags:Usagi Kinoko Regraz
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• 
  有一些overmap的串感觉有点奇怪
  全图blanket重新排查一下
  OD+1

1. 4anke
   00:13:512 (4,5,6) - 这个往右下角的移动简直报复社会。。（仅从打图角度吐槽，不用在意）
   00:28:693 (3) - 考虑做成滑条？ 有个比较突出的音轨
   00:31:223 (5) - 滑条多拉了1格？ 音在红线上。。
   00:34:657 (4) - 重音滑条尾有点奇怪 （其他地方也有这个问题，建议全图排查。但是类似于00:42:247 (2) - 这个我觉得重音在滑条尾上还不错，有一种强烈的结束、提示空拍的感觉）
   01:14:959 (6,7,8,9,10) - 弧度有点过分。。
   01:15:861 (2,5) - 这2个要么删去 要么在后面的几段重复上加上
   02:18:934 - 到 02:22:910 - 串十分莫名。。 我是认真的。。
   02:27:247 - 放一个叠在5上做成原地3单点，那么重一个鼓音。。（其他地方也有 建议排查一下
   03:10:711 - 这里塞一个做成整串？
   
2. Regraz
   01:32:669 (1) - 真的不是放歪了？ 重新拉下blanket
   02:09:536 (3) - 这个滑条为什么不和02:04:114 (1) - 还有02:07:006 (1) - 一样在那个音上起？

Okazaki Ushio wrote:

[General]
送分界的良心（collab难度我自己都断了很多orz，这应该不送分吧）
fycho.jpg =w=

[Collab]

• 
  有一些overmap的串感觉有点奇怪 ？
  全图blanket重新排查一下 没问题
  OD+1fixed

1. 4anke
   00:13:512 (4,5,6) - 这个往右下角的移动简直报复社会。。（仅从打图角度吐槽，不用在意）
   00:28:693 (3) - 考虑做成滑条？ 有个比较突出的音轨拉成滑条的话00:29:054 (1,2,3) - 这个三连就没办法突出了
   00:31:223 (5) - 滑条多拉了1格？ 音在红线上。。这个音比较长，这样拉没关系
   00:34:657 (4) - 重音滑条尾有点奇怪 （其他地方也有这个问题，建议全图排查。但是类似于00:42:247 (2) - 这个我觉得重音在滑条尾上还不错，有一种强烈的结束、提示空拍的感觉）很多图都这样
   01:14:959 (6,7,8,9,10) - 弧度有点过分。。insane难度不过分吧
   01:15:861 (2,5) - 这2个要么删去 要么在后面的几段重复上加上偶尔换一下节奏，一直同一个节奏太无聊了
   02:18:934 - 到 02:22:910 - 串十分莫名。。 我是认真的。。这里音很密集啊
   02:27:247 - 放一个叠在5上做成原地3单点，那么重一个鼓音。。（其他地方也有 建议排查一下这里跟人声
   03:10:711 - 这里塞一个做成整串？ 没音
   
2. Regraz
   01:32:669 (1) - 真的不是放歪了？ 重新拉下blanket
   02:09:536 (3) - 这个滑条为什么不和02:04:114 (1) - 还有02:07:006 (1) - 一样在那个音上起？

[Hard]
HP+1
00:27:608 (1) - 这个折返点上的clap有点奇怪fixed
00:50:379 (2) - 音不是在红线么。。音结束在蓝线
02:37:006 (3,1) - 从这2个之后出现好多90°的直角滑条。。前面没怎么又。。感觉一下子换了图风。。0.0
02:48:211 (2,3,4) - 既然都做blanket了 那3个就一起包一下好难包好啊，包好两个第三个很难包，就这样留点误差没关系

[Normal]
kiai比其他地方简单你不觉得吗（0.0没规定kiai必须难吧
从02:28:693 - 到 02:30:500 - 空闲感太重fixed
02:41:524 (4) - y-1 or 02:41:705 (5) - y+1fixed
02:55:078 (4) - 考虑和(3) blanket一下？fixed
nice map, good luck

1. your BG have weird dimensions, will be nice if you can resize it to a properly one
2. I think your preview point is unsnapped, snap it to 00:52:187
3. Adding some sb with the names for collab will be nice
4. I think ¨Collab¨ as diff name is not allowed, use Collab Insane or another diff name that you like

1. your HP is really low, I suggest you to go with HP 7 after all this is an Insane diff
2. same with your OD, try OD 8 or 7.5
3. 00:16:132 (2) - 00:17:398 (5) - there are a lot of triplets that doesn't fit the music nicely IMO
4. 00:23:271 (1,2,3) - you have some transitions that are kinda weird to play like this one, try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:25:440 missing whistle? since it sound pretty nice with the music at this point
6. 00:29:145 (2) - 00:29:868 (6) - there are more triplets like this that doesn't have support from the music
7. 00:31:223 (5) - I don't see a reason to have this extended slider here, the music is clearly in 1/2
8. 00:36:554 (2,3) - will be nice if you stack this, to be consistent with 00:36:916 (4,5) - 00:37:277 (6,7) -
9. 00:43:512 (6) - you are missing a NC here
10. 00:53:632 (5) - ^
11. 01:08:813 (3,4) - really tricky pattern ¿what one is the head? ¿what one is the tail? also that sv change without advice is really annoying IMO
12. 01:12:066 this NC is unnecesary
13. 01:16:765 (1) - there is not 1/4 in the music a 1/2 slider will fit better this part, the triplet should be in 01:17:036 -
14. 01:17:217 ^
15. 01:26:163 kinda weird that you are ignoring this important beat in the music
16. 01:50:018 (1,1) - I don't see a valid reason for this combo spam
17. 02:03:030 (1,2) - ugly overlap, try to move 1 a bit to the left to avoid it
18. 02:06:283 (2,4) - same this overlaps doesn't look nice
19. 02:12:428 (1) - this NC is not even necessary
20. 02:13:873 ^
21. 02:14:596 (4) - you are missing a NC here
22. 02:16:765 (5,6) - this spacing is so confuse O.O, since it looks like 1/4 when it is 1/2
23. 03:05:922 (4,2) - not stacked properly
24. 03:10:801 (10) - a slider will be nice ending in 03:10:982

1. HP +1 (6)
2. 00:22:548 (4,5,6) - 00:23:271 (1,2,3) - 00:23:994 (4,5,6) - patterns like this are kinda difficult for a hard diff, since the off hand streams are always hard to get, maybe use normal triplets or 1/4 repeat sliders instead? also you will improve the rhythm
3. 00:29:054 (5,1) - swap NC following your combo pattern
4. 00:31:765 (5) - there is not music at 1/4, as I said in ¨collab¨ diff there are a lot of triplets that doesn't have support from the music
5. 00:43:512 (6) - missing NC, following your combo pattern
6. 00:47:036 (2,3) - weird rhythm and really hard to play for a hard diff, if you still want to keep that rhythm use a slider instead, the current one is not appropriate
7. 00:50:379 (2) - this extended slider is not necessary the music is clearly 1/2
8. 00:52:910 (3,1) - there are some ugly overlaps like this one, that will be nice if you check by yourself to improve your diff design
9. 01:13:512 (6,2) - ^
10. 01:24:898 a 1/4 repeat slider will sound really nice here
11. 02:00:861 (3,4,5) - same as 00:22:548
12. 02:08:813 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, the music is clearly 1/2
13. 02:21:825 (1,2) - really confuse to play, mainly cuz the repeat slider end in an otherwise way that the next slider
14. 02:24:355 (4,1) - those beats are too close, add some more spacing to make this less confused to play
15. 02:30:319 (5) - ending slider on such important beats like the one in 02:30:500 doesn't fit the music at all, those beats should be mapped as slider head or circles
16. 02:33:392 (1,2,3) - whistle spam sound really bad, consider to remove some
17. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, music and vocals are landing in 1/2
18. 02:49:295 (5) - missing NC
19. 03:10:801 (6) - same as collab diff
    

1. 00:20:379 (1,2) - circle + slider stack are nice, but circle to circle in the easy diff of the set is not ok IMO, try a single slider instead
2. 00:21:825 (1,2) - ^, also remove NC from here 00:21:825 (1) - is breaking your combo pattern
3. 00:39:897 (5,6,1) - this look really hard to play for new players (since you don't have an easy diff)
4. 00:43:512 (6) - from this point you break your combo pattern >:
5. 00:49:295 (7) - your NC should be here 00:49:295 (7) - but not in 00:50:740 (1) -
6. 00:51:463 (3,1) - anti jumps in the easy diff of the set are discouraged, try to keep your stacks at the same gaps, if you use 1/1 stacks don't use 1/2 or other gaps
7. 00:59:416 (3) - this slider shape look really bad IMO, try to make the curve in the last part a bit better
8. 01:13:873 (3,4,1,2) - this kind of patterns are not suitable for a normal which is the easy diff in the set
9. 01:25:801 (4,5,6,7) - same as above, also take in mind what I said about stacks gaps in 00:51:463
10. 01:37:729 (5,6,7) - same as 01:13:873
11. 02:13:150 (1) - too soon after a spinner
12. there are more patterns that are really hard to play for this diff, since by adding an easy diff you can have a harder normal diff, but in this case your normal diff have to be ¨new player friendly¨
    

Natsu wrote:

M4M sorry for late D:


General

1. your BG have weird dimensions, will be nice if you can resize it to a properly onewhich size is properly?
2. I think your preview point is unsnapped, snap it to 00:52:187 fix
3. Adding some sb with the names for collab will be niceI don't know how to make a sb :<
4. I think ¨Collab¨ as diff name is not allowed, use Collab Insane or another diff name that you like

fixed

Collab

1. your HP is really low, I suggest you to go with HP 7 after all this is an Insane diffI think HP6 is enough for this map
2. same with your OD, try OD 8 or 7.5-^
3. 00:16:132 (2) - 00:17:398 (5) - there are a lot of triplets that doesn't fit the music nicely IMOfixed
4. 00:23:271 (1,2,3) - you have some transitions that are kinda weird to play like this one, try this instead:fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:25:440 missing whistle? since it sound pretty nice with the music at this pointno
6. 00:29:145 (2) - 00:29:868 (6) - there are more triplets like this that doesn't have support from the musicfixed
7. 00:31:223 (5) - I don't see a reason to have this extended slider here, the music is clearly in 1/2fixed
8. 00:36:554 (2,3) - will be nice if you stack this, to be consistent with 00:36:916 (4,5) - 00:37:277 (6,7) - fixed
9. 00:43:512 (6) - you are missing a NC herefixed
10. 00:53:632 (5) - ^fixed
11. 01:08:813 (3,4) - really tricky pattern ¿what one is the head? ¿what one is the tail? also that sv change without advice is really annoying IMOfixed
12. 01:12:066 this NC is unnecesaryfixed
13. 01:16:765 (1) - there is not 1/4 in the music a 1/2 slider will fit better this part, the triplet should be in 01:17:036 - fixed
14. 01:17:217 ^ -^
15. 01:26:163 kinda weird that you are ignoring this important beat in the musicI don't think so,there isn't important beat
16. 01:50:018 (1,1) - I don't see a valid reason for this combo spam
17. 02:03:030 (1,2) - ugly overlap, try to move 1 a bit to the left to avoid it
18. 02:06:283 (2,4) - same this overlaps doesn't look nice
19. 02:12:428 (1) - this NC is not even necessary
20. 02:13:873 ^fixed
21. 02:14:596 (4) - you are missing a NC herefixed
22. 02:16:765 (5,6) - this spacing is so confuse O.O, since it looks like 1/4 when it is 1/2fixed
23. 03:05:922 (4,2) - not stacked properlyfixed
24. 03:10:801 (10) - a slider will be nice ending in 03:10:982

fixed

Hard

1. HP +1 (6)I think HP5 is enough
2. 00:22:548 (4,5,6) - 00:23:271 (1,2,3) - 00:23:994 (4,5,6) - patterns like this are kinda difficult for a hard diff, since the off hand streams are always hard to get, maybe use normal triplets or 1/4 repeat sliders instead? also you will improve the rhythmfixed
3. 00:29:054 (5,1) - swap NC following your combo pattern fixed
4. 00:31:765 (5) - there is not music at 1/4, as I said in ¨collab¨ diff there are a lot of triplets that doesn't have support from the musicfixed
5. 00:43:512 (6) - missing NC, following your combo patternfixed
6. 00:47:036 (2,3) - weird rhythm and really hard to play for a hard diff, if you still want to keep that rhythm use a slider instead, the current one is not appropriatefixed
7. 00:50:379 (2) - this extended slider is not necessary the music is clearly 1/2I think the music is end in00:50:651 -
8. 00:52:910 (3,1) - there are some ugly overlaps like this one, that will be nice if you check by yourself to improve your diff design fixed
9. 01:13:512 (6,2) - ^prefer mine
10. 01:24:898 a 1/4 repeat slider will sound really nice hereprefer mine
11. 02:00:861 (3,4,5) - same as 00:22:548fixed
12. 02:08:813 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, the music is clearly 1/2fixed
13. 02:21:825 (1,2) - really confuse to play, mainly cuz the repeat slider end in an otherwise way that the next sliderend at 02:22:367 - fixed
14. 02:24:355 (4,1) - those beats are too close, add some more spacing to make this less confused to playfixed
15. 02:30:319 (5) - ending slider on such important beats like the one in 02:30:500 doesn't fit the music at all, those beats should be mapped as slider head or circles
16. 02:33:392 (1,2,3) - whistle spam sound really bad, consider to remove someI don't think so
17. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, music and vocals are landing in 1/2unnecesary to fixed,I think the voice is a bit extended at 1/4
18. 02:49:295 (5) - missing NCfixed
19. 03:10:801 (6) - same as collab difffixed

Normal

1. 00:20:379 (1,2) - circle + slider stack are nice, but circle to circle in the easy diff of the set is not ok IMO, try a single slider instead Is allowed at normal,another BAT say
2. 00:21:825 (1,2) - ^, also remove NC from here 00:21:825 (1) - is breaking your combo patternfixed
3. 00:39:897 (5,6,1) - this look really hard to play for new players (since you don't have an easy diff)if they can retry,there isn't difficult to play
4. 00:43:512 (6) - from this point you break your combo pattern >:fixed
5. 00:49:295 (7) - your NC should be here 00:49:295 (7) - but not in 00:50:740 (1) - fixed
6. 00:51:463 (3,1) - anti jumps in the easy diff of the set are discouraged, try to keep your stacks at the same gaps, if you use 1/1 stacks don't use 1/2 or other gapsfixed
7. 00:59:416 (3) - this slider shape look really bad IMO, try to make the curve in the last part a bit betterno
8. 01:13:873 (3,4,1,2) - this kind of patterns are not suitable for a normal which is the easy diff in the setfixed
9. 01:25:801 (4,5,6,7) - same as above, also take in mind what I said about stacks gaps in 00:51:463
10. 01:37:729 (5,6,7) - same as 01:13:873
11. 02:13:150 (1) - [/color]too soon after a spinner[/color]fixed
12. there are more patterns that are really hard to play for this diff, since by adding an easy diff you can have a harder normal diff, but in this case your normal diff have to be ¨new player friendly¨

GL hope this help a bit

1. 00:31:946 (6,3) - Overlap
2. 00:44:234 (7,8) - ctrl+g以及整理
3. 01:14:415 (4) - 忽略了白线去押较轻的红线，不合适
4. 02:12:428 - 转盘结束可以往前一拍，具体细则https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019

1. 00:26:885 (3,4,2,3) - 有点乱，拉开些或者叠一下或许比较好
2. 00:42:066 (1,2) - 后移1/2
3. 01:03:392 (1,2,3) - 三连建议挪到红线
4. 01:05:922 (5,6,7) - 形状不太规则，可以用ctrl+shift+d调整
5. 01:26:343 (1) - 感觉有点刻意了，而且后面接三连的话也容易miss
6. 02:21:825 (1) - 试下拆成两个一折
7. 02:47:849 - circle

1. 00:11:705 (1) - 尽量避免白线三连
2. 00:14:054 (4,4) - overlap
   ----
3. 01:54:717 (2,3) - 重叠次数可以减少些
4. 02:06:825 (4,4) - 叠好
5. 02:09:536 (3,4) - 叠在3尾部比较合适
   ---
6. 02:19:657 (8) - NC
7. 02:27:970 (2,2) - 叠好

AIR wrote:

hi :3
[Normal]

1. 00:31:946 (6,3) - Overlap?
2. 00:44:234 (7,8) - ctrl+g以及整理?
3. 01:14:415 (4) - 忽略了白线去押较轻的红线，不合适fixed
4. 02:12:428 - 转盘结束可以往前一拍，具体细则https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019

fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:26:885 (3,4,2,3) - 有点乱，拉开些或者叠一下或许比较好我觉得还好啦，间距都一样，不乱
2. 00:42:066 (1,2) - 后移1/2我这样摆也可以
3. 01:03:392 (1,2,3) - 三连建议挪到红线没音
4. 01:05:922 (5,6,7) - 形状不太规则，可以用ctrl+shift+d调整这里不是三角型，而是五角星的一部分
5. 01:26:343 (1) - 感觉有点刻意了，而且后面接三连的话也容易miss0.0
6. 02:21:825 (1) - 试下拆成两个一折？
7. 02:47:849 - circle

没位置放circle

[Collab Insane]

1. 00:11:705 (1) - 尽量避免白线三连0.0
2. 00:14:054 (4,4) - overlapfixed
   ----
3. 01:54:717 (2,3) - 重叠次数可以减少些
4. 02:06:825 (4,4) - 叠好
5. 02:09:536 (3,4) - 叠在3尾部比较合适
   ---
6. 02:19:657 (8) - NCfixed
7. 02:27:970 (2,2) - 叠好fixed

goodluck

Okazaki Ushio wrote:

Regraz
01:32:669 (1) - 真的不是放歪了？ 重新拉下blanket ?
02:09:536 (3) - 这个滑条为什么不和02:04:114 (1) - 还有02:07:006 (1) - 一样在那个音上起？ 因为这个是为了后面节奏变化而准备的

nice map, good luck

1. 00:18:933 (3) - Try "CTRL + G" I think more better flow.
2. 00:33:030 (3) - Broken distance snap. please remake this note.
3. 00:37:729 (1,2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
4. 00:39:897 (5) - add clap on slider head. You should respond by a drumbeat of the back.
5. 00:44:234 (2) - It is an awfully crooked slider imo. Please changed this ? ( I used 00:46:403 (1) - this slider ctrl + h
   00:43:512 (1,2,3) - If you are not understand. try this code.
   

   173,71,43512,6,0,P|229:45|288:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   346,141,44235,2,0,P|365:197|410:237,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   464,332,44958,1,2,0:0:0:0:

   img

   
6. 00:51:464 (5) - add clap better.
7. 00:53:272 (2) - Please not used "overlap" You should be changed another pattern.
8. 00:56:525 (3) - A point of view is sudden and is not beautiful. try this.
   
   img

   
9. 00:59:416 (3) - Same as above.
10. 01:01:223 (4) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle on slider end.
11. 01:03:030 (7) - add clap on slider head too.
12. 01:03:030 (7,1,2) - Try an arrange like this. for to make it easy to show it more.
    
    img

    

    148,292,63030,2,0,L|112:348,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    216,208,63753,6,0,B|248:232|256:268|256:268|280:232|328:208|368:204|404:216,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    464,304,64837,1,8,0:0:0:0:

13. 01:06:283 (4) - You shouldbe move x380 y60. because distance snap.
14. 01:25:440 (3,4,1) - Same as abobe. Please used "distance snap *0.9" remake this part.
15. 01:37:729 (5) - add clap on slider head.
16. 02:10:259 (1) - spinner end 02:11:705 - here. and add finish.
17. 02:17:488 (3) - To make it easy to show it more. Try this arrange.
    
    img

    
18. 02:23:632 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
19. 02:28:693 - add note.
20. 02:30:500 - and 02:30:861 (4) - this. Try this rhythm?
    
21. 02:35:560 (3) - add clap.
22. 02:41:524 (4) - Remove note. because the different patterns are dangerous to only here.
23. 02:57:970 (4,5,6,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and 02:58:512 (5,6,1) - this is overlap imo. Please changed another pattern. I suggestion here. Try this?
    
    
    img

    
24. 03:01:584 (4,5) - Please used Distance *0.9 The different patterns are dangerous to only here.
25. 03:08:090 (2) - Remove whistle. and Add finish better.
26. 03:08:813 (3) - Same as above. add finish better *slider head.

1. 00:11:705 (1,4) - I think that it is slightly tight. Please changed this pattern?
   
   img

   
2. 00:13:151 (1,4) - Why use 1/4 slider here? I think it's overmapped. You should be changed 1/2
   
3. 00:16:042 (5,6) - It looks slightly dirty to be piled up. Please use my suggestion here.
   
   img

   
4. 00:20:379 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
5. 00:23:994 (3,4,5,3) - add whistle
6. 00:29:777 (3) - Please do blanket more neatly.
   
   img

   
7. 00:30:500 (1,3) - Same as before part.
8. 00:30:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please remapping. You should be use Distance snap *1.1
9. 00:34:837 (1,2,3) - Need distance *1.1
10. 00:38:632 (2) - Remove clap. not need. I think add whistle better.
11. 00:39:898 (3) - No. not follow melody. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
12. 00:42:247 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
13. 00:46:404 (1,2) - Why is only this place that distance becomes small ? I think you should be use distance *1.1 This spacing is really awkward.
14. 00:47:126 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
15. 00:48:572 (2,3,4,5) - Humm... I think that it is hard to look a little on Hard diff. Try this ?
    
    img

    
16. 00:49:295 (1) - Why changed SV*1.2 ? I think not need this point. please use 1.00.
17. 00:51:916 (5,6,7) - all add clap ?
18. 00:55:259 (1) - More better rhythm suggestion and placement suggestion.
    
    img

    
19. 01:01:946 (6,1) - Why do you use the big jump at this place ? This spacing is really awkward on Hard diff. Please changed another pattern.
20. 01:03:030 (5,6,7,8) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me and This spacing is really awkward. please use this suggestion.
    
21. 01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This consecutive rhythm is very dangerous in Hard diff. You must be use Slider. because for mapset diff spread. and Please reconsider some these neighboring consecutive rhythm.
22. 01:20:560 (1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. please changed rhythm and pattern.
    
23. 01:25:982 (3,1) - Same as above.
24. 02:03:934 (1) - Not need SV changed.
25. 02:06:825 (1) - Same as above.
26. 02:09:898 (1,2) - Swap NC here, so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
27. 02:24:355 (4,1,2) - Remove note.
28. 02:26:885 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Please changed this.
    
29. 02:29:777 (2,3) - More better rhythm here. and 02:30:319 (4) - remove note.
    
30. 02:30:500 (4) - add Nc and 02:30:861 (1) - remove Nc. for downbeat.
31. 02:30:861 (1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm here.
    
32. 02:32:669 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Hard to look. Please remake another pattern.
33. 02:34:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard rhythm. Please switch to simpler rhythm.
34. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - Please change rhythm here.
    
35. 02:39:898 (2,3,4) - Hard to look. please changed another pattern.
36. 02:49:295 (1,2,3) - I know stack. But hard to jump on Hard diff. please changed another pattern.
37. 02:50:199 (1) - Not need SV changed.
38. 02:59:054 (1) - remove Nc
39. 03:09:536 (1,2,6) - Not need SV changed too.

4anke wrote:

Crystal wrote:

hi

[General]
Looks fine.

[Insane]
00:16:042 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 sliders is too low, which is much lower than the other jumps. it gives a sudden feeling on stopping but not as good as "anti-jump" or "stack" blahblah, so i suggest something like thisfixed

SPOILER

00:37:910 - consider adding a note hereI think delete this circle can make the rhythm more playable
00:39:355 - ^
00:42:066 (1,2) - to blanket well, maybefixed
00:42:789 (3) - 316|296, the stack here seems unnecessary imofixed
00:44:958 (1,3) - such overlaps seem weird for me x.x put 00:45:319 (3) - at 440|216 would be fine00:45:319 (3) - in order to stack with00:46:042 (6) -
00:52:367 - i prefer to emphasize this beat, since it is at the beginning of kiai, where there is thought to be stronger beats, so don't ignore the beat here. unnecessary IMO
00:56:163 (5) - 448|240, look nicer with 00:55:801 (4) - (adjust objects behind if necessary)fixed
01:38:452 - is this guy for some reason or just misplaced?
01:49:657 - map the 1/4 drums here, it might be better
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - irregular shapes of streams don't look nice for me, try thisfixed myself

SPOILER

02:37:367 (4) - try something like this, as i mentioned before02:37:367 (4) - in order to stack with02:36:283 (1) -

SPOILER

03:04:837 (1) - to emphasize the speed-up, you can change it to 1.5xunnecessary IMO
03:07:729 (6) - stack with 03:06:825 (2) - ?fixed
03:10:801 (10) - try this rhythmI want to end with the long white line

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:14:596 (7) - how about stack at the head of 00:13:873 (4) - ? the previous one seems too straight imofixed
00:16:584 - add a note here to keep consistent with 00:15:861 (4) - I want to follow the voice there
00:23:994 (3,4) - try thisjprefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:114 (3,4) - this can be mistook as 1/2 because of 00:33:392 (1,2) - , try to put 00:34:114 (3) - at 345|286 the DS is no problem there
00:39:898 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? seem betterfixed
00:50:922 00:51:283 - don't miss these beats, i prefer to change 00:50:741 (1,2) - to 2 slidersI follow the drum there
01:15:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just simply use the rhythm in the insane diff, just put reverse sliders at triples. that would be fine with lower distances (compared with insane) (same goes with 01:21:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )fixed
01:26:885 (3) - this isn't stacked wellfixed
01:29:777 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this pattern x.x use simple sliders would be finewhy0.0
01:37:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this patternfixed

SPOILER

02:03:934 (4) - this pattern looks nicer, right?fixed

SPOILER

02:11:705 (1) - spinner? surprising for me, just continue mapping instead of making a spinnerthere is no problem IMO
03:10:801 (8) - same as insane diff-^

[Normal]
00:43:151 (5,1) - blanketfixed
00:56:525 (3) - the shape looks weird, try thisno problem IMO

SPOILER

00:59:416 (3) - ^
02:10:259 (1) - prolong this spinner to 02:12:428 (maybe you should ask a BAT to make sure if this will be against the rule)this spinner should end at 02:11:705 - that the BAT say.oh,I don't know why I haven't fixed last update?orz


wow, finished
good luck!
Thank you to mod my map

jonawaga wrote:

Hey, m4m on your queue

Normal-

SPOILER

00:17:849 (2,3,4) - (4) isn't stacked with (2) correctly, try snapping the end of (2) to the grid, and re blanketing (3)fixed
00:26:163 (1,2) - these should be a bit less curved, to keep it consistent with 00:23:994 (3,4) - these,
or make 00:23:994 (3,4) - these look more curvesprefer mine
00:36:283 (4,5) - blanket this a bit better by making it a bit more curved prefer mineexample
00:43:512 (1) - this should look like 00:42:066 (3) - this because it sounds similarunnecessary IMO
00:50:017 (2) - this is a tight curve and a bad blanket, make it a bit less curvedfixed
00:51:464 (5) - x-64 y-64 examplefixed
00:53:271 (2,3) - this is spaced weirdly, try something like this and then thisfixed
01:35:560 (1) - overlap, try rotating example i did it by 20 clockwiseunnecessary
01:55:078 (4,1) - blanketfixed
02:15:319 (5,1) - ^fixed
02:23:632 (3) - x-352 y-136, then stack the next (1) and (5)It still stack at x-333 y-133,
02:26:524 (5,1) - these aren't perfectly aligned no problem IMO
03:02:307 (1) - flipping this vertically would avoid overlap and improve flow here examplefixed

Hard-

SPOILER

00:13:873 (4) - this is a bit far away, so either move it closer or move 00:13:151 (1) - this farther awayno problem IMO
01:03:753 - 01:03:753 - add note? at x-200 y-288, then stack 01:04:838 (6) - this to itfixed
01:14:054 (2) - overlap, try moving (2) to x-484 y-128 fixed
01:37:006 (1,2) - blanketfixed
01:57:157 - add note here, stacked with 01:57:247 (5) - thisI think the rhythm at there shouldn't jump there
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4) - this should be centered?
02:57:066 - add note, stacked with 02:57:247 (3) - this, you do have harder jumps than this in this diff, so it's not so badin order to same with 01:57:247 (5)

I would have modded insane, but you wrote on your queue not to mod it.

Good Luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
BG must be 4:3 or 16:9 aspect rate, but current is 10:6, so it looks Unrankble. You need to find another BG for Ranked.fixed
Uncheck Widescreen Support because there is no SB.fixed
Delete all SC2 hitsounds in this folder, you don't use these hitsounds.fixed
[Normal]
Prefer AR4 for newbie because there is no Easy diff, so this diff is the easiest diff. fixed
Placement
02:13:151(1) Change the direction of slider like this, and the flow to next note would be more good.fixed

SPOILER

02:36:283(1) Similar suggestion, upword curve would be better flow than current one.but It will stack with other circle

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:37:729(1) Prefer 1/2 slider than a circle becuase you followed vocal on next note(2), so to be consistence.unnecessary

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:46:404(1) Add finish at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:25:440(3) Add whistle at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:55:078(4) Delete whistle at head.fixed
03:09:536(1) Add finish.fixed
[Hard]
Placement
00:22:367(3) I don't like to stack this note on the end of slider, it looks not good. So move this note like this?prefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:657(5) Similar suggestion, this flow from (4) is a bit odd for me. I don't think so

SPOILER

00:41:705(3) Bent this slider a bit? I feel better than current one.fixed

SPOILER

01:04:837(2) CTRL+G to make a jmping, I found similar part in previous.fixed
01:29:777(1,2,3,4) So weird placement, why these sliders start on the end of pre slider... these flow doesn't look good. fixed
01:32:669(1,2,3,4) ^fixed
02:50:199(1) Useless NC I suppose.fixed
02:55:259(2) Stack this note on (1) better to see clearly.fixed
Rhythm
01:50:018 Unnecessary green line.fixed
01:03:753 Add a note here because there is cymbal sound here, so I don't suppose it is better to ignore this. (You already picked the sound on Normal and Insane)fixed
01:38:452 ^fixed
02:47:849 ^fixed
Hit Sound
00:51:464(3) Missing clap.unnecessary,because the voice is too loudly there
01:15:319(1) Add finish.fixed
02:11:715(1) Add clap same as Insane.fixed
02:33:392(1,2,3) Too loudly on this part, down the voleme better.fixed
02:34:837(1,2,3) Missing hitsounds?fixed
03:08:090(1,4,1,8) Add finish to follow the cymbal sound. Whistles sound weakly. (allpy to all diffs)fixed

Good luck.

Regraz wrote:

要起飞了！哇加油啊

1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
   
6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.
   
   changed here
   
8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
    
12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
    
14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
    
15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
    
20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
    
21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Lin-Kun wrote:

Please don't hate me but...
I can't find anything wrong with your beatmap
I've been going over it for the last month now that my internet's fixed and i cant find anything wrong with it :<
(I'm new to modding and probably don't have enough experience)
please forgive me (offers cake) and it's no lie

Satellite wrote:

hitsound suggestion

23:39 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415884 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare [Normal]]
23:40 Satellite: 00:13:873 (4) - slider head add whistle
23:40 Satellite: 00:16:765 (4) - ^
23:40 4anke: ok
23:41 4anke: fixed
23:41 Satellite: 00:24:717 (4) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:31:946 (1) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:34:114 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: (slider head)
23:41 Satellite: 00:37:006 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:42:788 (4) - ^
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:211 (5) - slider end
23:42 4anke: fixed
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:933 (6) - remove whistle
23:42 Satellite: 00:54:355 (4) - slider head
23:43 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - make more beautiful please. try this (please wait)
23:43 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3KLJ/15dc85bd82.jpg try this ?]
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:44 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:46 Satellite: 01:01:223 (1) - slider end add whistle
23:46 Satellite: 01:03:753 (1) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:07:367 (3) - add whistle on slider head
23:46 Satellite: 01:08:451 (5) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:259 (2) - add whistle
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:982 (4) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:13:151 (2) - head
23:47 Satellite: 01:14:596 (4) - head too
23:47 Satellite: 01:17:488 (5) - slider head
23:48 Satellite: 01:18:934 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:20:379 (4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:21:825 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:23:271 (5) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:24:717 (2,4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:27:247 (2) - make more beautiful :3
23:50 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3LwT/42337397fe.jpg try this ?]
23:50 Satellite: 01:31:946 (5) - slider head add whistle because you are pattern ~
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:030 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:51 Satellite: 01:34:837 (4) - slider head
23:51 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3LIb/49137e1eff.jpg
23:52 Satellite: why use this break ?
23:52 Satellite: I think add note better http://puu.sh/e3LL5/aec3c7dc16.jpg
23:52 Satellite: What do you think :3 ?
23:55 Satellite: fight ww
00:01 Satellite: 01:50:018 - ~ same as whislte suggestion :3
00:01 Satellite: fight !!
00:02 Satellite: and same as Hard diff ! If you are sure please use hitsound copy ?
00:02 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/tari
00:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3MX1/73f9de7dab.jpg
00:02 Satellite: hitsound copier :3 please dl w
00:03 4anke: ok,thank you :3 fixed nomal diff now
00:06 Satellite: fight ! I'm not modding placement now =3=
00:19 4anke: 01:50:018 - use finish and whistle?
00:19 Satellite: finish is okay
00:20 4anke: only finish?
00:20 Satellite: yes :3
00:21 4anke: 01:38:452 - add a note in all diff?
00:23 4anke: 0.0
00:29 4anke: all fixed now

Sorry late ~

[Normal]

1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

[Hard]

1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
   
6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.
   
   changed here
   
8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
    
12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
    
14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
    
15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
    
20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
    
21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Hard diff needs more work orz
Call me again. I'll rerecheck next week. and full mod again.
There are a lot of mistakes of hitsound. Please check all yourself.

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

pkhg wrote:

hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.fixed

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlapfixed
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this )fixed
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistlefixed
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some
02:24:537 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3unnecessary IMO
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imoprefer mine

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverseprefer mine
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?no
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tailfinish is proper on there
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3I don't think so.
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:fixed

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard let me think...

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imoI am so lazy to map a new diff,if necessary,I will map a new different between the normal and hard

Anyway good luck ^^

think you to mod my map

1. 00:51:102 (4) - Hitsound changed clap better. please try.
2. 00:58:331 (1,2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try changed this rhythm.
   
3. 01:06:645 (1) - overlaps to 01:05:199 (3) - this slider end. changed this pattern. and Try use this code.
   Code is 01:06:645 (1,2,3) - this part. please check this.
   

   492,96,66645,6,0,P|464:148|408:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,140,67367,2,0,P|254:120|188:136,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   120,208,68090,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:16:042 (2) - Forgot soft-whistle on slider head ?
5. 01:28:331 (3) - and this slider end add whistle ?
6. 02:11:705 (3) - hitsound is finish better and 02:12:428 (5) - add clap
7. 03:07:729 (1) - Missing New combo. remove Nc and 03:08:090 (2) - add Nc.
   

1. 00:52:187 (1) - Forgot clap on slider end.
2. 00:57:608 (6,1,2,3,1) - Try this code. for more clean object
   

   334,320,57608,2,0,P|370:271|348:189,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   291,249,58151,6,0,B|347:191|347:191|416:172,1,150
   487,209,58693,2,0,L|504:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   480,129,59054,2,0,L|462:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   414,173,59416,6,0,B|341:173|341:173|282:99,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:04:115 (3,4,5) - Nazi. missing distance snap. and 01:05:922 (3,4,5) - this. please use 1.1 ds
4. 01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and This spacing is really awkward to me. Try an arrange like this.
   
   rhythm

   
   placement

   
   code (01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - )

   426,72,73873,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   491,122,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   485,204,74235,2,0,L|480:281,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   403,310,74596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   338,260,74777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,178,74958,2,0,L|349:101,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   350,61,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   350,61,75319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   266,213,75681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   430,140,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   266,213,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:20:379 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
6. 01:26:163 (4,5) - Same as above.
7. 01:27:247 (4,5) - Same as above. Try this rhythm.
   
8. 01:30:138 (2,3,4) - Why used jump this part ? not much imo.
9. 02:49:837 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
10. 02:52:729 (2,3) - Same as above.
    
11. 03:04:476 (3,4,5) - please changed this part. not much jump pattern.
12. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in Hard diff is too difficult imo. Please changed this pattern.
    

1. 00:11:795 (2) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
2. 00:12:247 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
3. 00:37:910 - add note. why not add circle here? and this 00:39:355 -
4. 00:41:163 - add note better.
5. 00:42:247 (2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
6. 00:46:946 - Same as 00:41:163 -
7. 00:54:355 (4,5) - Too large jump. not much imo.
8. 01:00:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ramdom jump... ? This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Try this placement code.
   

   395,108,60861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   297,121,61042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,53,61223,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   185,151,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   117,276,61584,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   215,263,61765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   340,331,61946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   327,233,62127,1,0,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:24:536 - You forgot note. please check you are pattern. 01:15:861 (2) -
10. 01:31:946 (3) - Try to " Ctrl + G " ? I think more better flow.
11. 01:38:452 (1) - This circle should more jump better. I think more fit For example move X : 386 Y : 271
12. 02:14:596 (1) - Missing rhythm ? I'm not sure this rhythm. but I think this rhythm more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
13. 02:25:259 - Same as before suggestion.
14. 02:32:126 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
15. 02:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Please changed another pattern.
16. 02:59:144 (7) - Remove note. It's overmapped.

Ohhh. sorry late recheck >_>
If you are question. Please send me " Forum - PM " Good luck 4anke san

Satellite wrote:

sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T

Satellite wrote:

Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T

IamKwaN wrote:

hi there, metadata check as requested.

SPOILER

Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!

1. Easy and Normal AR+1 better imo. because AR 3/5/7/9 is best spread.

1. 01:37:006 (2) - The contact with the Hp bar. It should be lowered a little more.
2. nice easy

1. looks fine

1. 00:38:632 (2) - Not stack this circle. because Shape is changed by Stack leniency.
   
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2. 00:51:825 (4) - Ctrl+G better.
3. 02:35:922 (4) - Same as above.

1. 00:36:102 - add note better.　(my suggestion x:20 y:256)
2. 01:09:536 (1,2,3,4) - Why interval is falling apart?
3. 01:14:054 (2,3) - Try ctrl+g I think more better flow!
4. 01:15:138 (8,9) - add clap
5. 01:18:573 (4,8) - Try changed rhythm ? about 1/2 slider :3
   
6. 01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above.
7. 01:25:259 - add note
8. 01:26:885 (8) - add Nc. 01:27:428 (1) - remove Nc
9. 01:38:090 (6,7,1) - Jump placement suggestion.
   
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10. 02:11:705 (1) - add finish
11. 02:12:428 (5) - same as above.
12. 02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped. please do this rhythm.
    
13. 02:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
    
14. 02:30:229 (7) - Remove note. it is overmapped imo.
15. 02:35:560 (5) - add clap ?
16. 02:39:355 (2) - not much this rhythm. try this
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17. 03:01:946 (1) - Remove Nc
18. 03:04:837 (1) - same as above.
19. 03:09:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Mmmm... too big jump orz Please be a little more small ;_;

1. Easy diff remove widescreen support check.
2. normal-hitnormal.wav is not use this map. remove this wav file.
3. soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide3 is must be use 44byte file. try used this wav. http://puu.sh/hJgLP/842271a41e.zip

2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: hi
2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: keep is ok
2015-05-10 22:14 4anke: hi
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: insane
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:186 (3) - 
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:908 (11) - clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:23:090 (12) - remo clap
2015-05-10 22:19 Satellite: 02:24:536 (5) - overmapped. remove note
2015-05-10 22:19 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:20 Satellite: 02:24:626 (5) - add whistle
2015-05-10 22:21 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4) - m0ve x256 y352 ? because
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4,5) - this spacing hard to read
2015-05-10 22:22 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: 02:33:211 (7) - move x164 y292 
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: ?
2015-05-10 22:23 Satellite: 02:35:018 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better
2015-05-10 22:23 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: 02:56:343 (6) - stack is not fit this melody
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: move x:108 y:340 better
2015-05-10 22:25 02:58:693 (3,4,5) - please use distance *1.0
2015-05-10 22:26 Satellite: 03:10:801 (10) - not fit this slider. i think circle + circle better (jump
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: http://puu.sh/hIbxJ/376a745480.jpg
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: jump suggestion
2015-05-10 22:29 Satellite: that's all update pls
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: I can watch the photo from punsh now ;w;
2015-05-10 22:30 Satellite: other puush http://puu.sh/hIbHs/52e8927570.jpg
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: cann't
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: can't
2015-05-10 22:32 4anke: ;w;my computer have some problem that can't watch the photo from punsh ;w;
2015-05-10 22:33 4anke: can you say the (x,y) for me?
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: k
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: 03:10:259 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 
2015-05-10 22:35 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3112262
2015-05-10 22:35 4anke: thank

Satellite wrote:

no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me

Satellite wrote:

wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/

smallboat wrote:

Confirm mapset fine and my suggestion almost fixed.

Qualified ~ !

1. 00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
2. why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
3. 00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
4. 00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
5. 01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?

1. The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
2. These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
   01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
   01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
   01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
   02:09:536 (3,4) -
   02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
   02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
   02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
   02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
   03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
   03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -

1. I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
2. 01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.

Fycho wrote:

Hello, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section by the QAT due to the following justifications:

1. The gap between Normal and Hard is large which can’t be accepted. Hard has quite a number of jumps and a few 1/4 rhythms, while Normal is almost 1/1, with a few 1/2 rhythm. The best way to fix the issue is increasing 1/2 rhythm in normal difficulty.

Additionally, we hope you fix the following things(it’s not a must, depending on you). Please take below as a modding, take them into consideration ranther than ignoring them, to make your map better.

下面的部分你最后好考虑一下，尽管它们不是作为DQ的理由。

[Insane]

1. 00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
2. why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
3. 00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
4. 00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
5. 01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?

[Hard]

1. The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
2. These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
   01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
   01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
   01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
   02:09:536 (3,4) -
   02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
   02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
   02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
   02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
   03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
   03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -

[Easy]

1. I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
2. 01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.

For further assistance, please contact with BNG members. Good luck.
you really need to thank to Satellite, this map is MUCH better than what I saw last time.
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