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Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-

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Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 16. Dezember 2014 at 00:18:17

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: ao no kanata four rhythm sprite eroge vn visual novel op opening short version momochikun
BPM: 160
Filesize: 19379kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,6 stars, 146 notes)
  2. Hard (3,14 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Insane (4 stars, 390 notes)
  4. Mochi's Insane (3,72 stars, 362 notes)
  5. Normal (2,17 stars, 181 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
Download: Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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私の勇気の翼
Last edited by Konei , edited 23 times in total.
[ Eon Fox ]
302 posts
Joined September 2014
[ Eon Fox ]
Just a heads up, you might want to fix the Insane tags. They conflict with the other difficulties.
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei

VeronicaTheFox wrote:

Just a heads up, you might want to fix the Insane tags. They conflict with the other difficulties.
Yeah thanks, fixed that!
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
M4M /.\
delete the word "op" on the tag

[Insane]
00:08:937 (4,5,1) - make same space?
00:24:968 (x) - I may suggest dont miss this rhythm /.\
00:25:437 (6) - ctrl+g？
00:33:874 (3) - ...weird..maybe try this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2313524
just try to make it looks more smooth
00:35:937 (4) - well someone may say it is hard to hear the sound at the end so...maybe try 20%
00:37:062 (3,4,5) - I suggest make the same space between those three note
00:38:187 (2,3,4) - use same space
00:42:687 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this flower could make it more better
00:50:187 (2) - suggest ctrl+g
00:50:937 (5,6,1) - same space？
01:01:437 (7,8,9) - ctrl+g
01:05:749 (3,4,1) - same space？
01:30:874 (2,3,4,5,6) - well, I dont think here need really big jump..try to make it more close
01:31:812 (1) - if you really want to use 0.65x on here, you better use the same thing on 01:33:124 (1) -
01:34:249 (5,6) - ctrl+g
01:39:687 (x) - try add note here will feel great when you playing I think
01:40:812 (1,2,3) - use same space
01:54:312 (1,2,3) - ^
02:04:905 (1) - do slience on this spinner I think will be better

[Mochi's Insane]
00:23:187 (2,3) - I suggest move them more close
00:23:937 (2,3) - ^
00:24:687 (2,3) - ^
00:28:812 (1,2,3) - same space？
00:35:562 (3) - I more like the rhythm which delete this note /-\
00:52:249 (8,9,1) - same space？
00:54:687 (6) - ctrl+g
00:57:124 (1,2) - well......I dont suggest that because is really confusing when you playing.....
01:12:687 (3) - delete
01:13:437 (6) - delete
01:37:812 (1,2,3) - move those more close because is unreadable...it look like the same space you using on 1/4 rhythm
02:01:812 (1,2,3) - ^
02:04:905 (1) - do slience on this spinner I think will be better

[Hard]
00:23:280 (3) -
00:24:030 (5) - I dont really think those two note is necessary, maybe just delete it
and maybe 00:24:218 (x) - this is the rhythm you want to show it？
01:20:374 (2,3,1) - same space？
01:31:812 (1) - make it look like this？
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2313596
01:46:062 (3,4) - make the same space like 01:43:062 (3,4) -
02:04:905 (1) - do slience on this spinner I think will be better

[Normal]
00:34:812 (1) - some bat may say this is too short on normal diff so........
00:50:374 (2) - delete
00:53:749 (3) - delete
01:57:499 (x) - add note？
01:59:374 (2) - delete
02:04:905 (1) - do slience on this spinner I think will be better
well, I really sure someone may say this normal is too hard for a normal diff even I think is fine, at that time try to delete some note will be helpful

[Easy]
00:06:124 (x) - how about just end slider at here
01:08:937 (4,5) - this space may let new player feel confusing, how about just use this rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2313624
02:04:905 (1) - do slience on this spinner I think will be better
Leiwa
575 posts
Joined July 2012
Leiwa
for M4M

[General]
  1. drum-hitfinish.wav has 3ms delay. It's not unrankable but may be some problem.
    Here is no delay ver.
  2. Please unify wide screen support off at All diff.
[Easy]
  1. 00:33:312 (3,4) - This looks and flow better?
    SPOILER
  2. 01:21:687 (4) - why not whistle?
  3. 01:24:312 (3) - make better blanket.
  4. 01:27:687 (4) - missing drum-whistle.
  5. 01:28:437 (5) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:124 (3,4,5) - You should take 00:45:687 (4) - to better rhythm, because they

    are clear sound and It makes fun.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:48:124 (3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:57:124 (3,4,5) - ^
  4. 01:40:812 (1,2) - nice sliders :D
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:562 (2) - start at 00:02:374. it sounds better.
  2. 01:21:124 (1) - make smooth slider please. It makes better flow and beautiful.
  3. 01:57:124 (1) - You should use DS.
[mochi]
  1. 00:03:312 - you can put a circle.
  2. 00:06:312 - ^
  3. 00:55:437 (8,9,1,2,3) - Please make clear star... you can do it by ctrl+shift+d
  4. 01:12:593 (2,3) - 1/4 slider is better because Suddenly DS change and hard to read rhythm.
  5. 01:13:343 (6,7) - ^
  6. 01:14:937 (4) - why not stack with 01:13:437 (7) - ?

[Insane]
  1. fine. I can't say anything :?
Good luck
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
Hi M4M:D

[Insane]
00:27:687 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow is fine, but it's not fun to play, maybe you can make some jumps here.like this
SPOILER


00:46:437 (4,1) - I think start the slider 1 at 00:46:812 - is better, you can try to end slider at 00:46:718 - for example
SPOILER

00:58:437 (4,1) - ^

01:33:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - try to make here more beautiful（triangle）
SPOILER

00:12:124 (3,4) - 1/8 slider? like this 00:13:437 (4) -

01:24:124 (5,1) - not a good flow here, try this
SPOILER

[Mochi's Insane]
Hitsound seems too low for me, try to change 30% 20% into 40% 30%

00:55:437 (8,9,1,2,3) - adjust these objects

nothing else, nice diff

[Hard]
00:01:812 (1,2) - change these like your insane diff, start slider2 at 00:02:374 -

01:18:124 - add a note here

02:00:874 (3) - move to 02:01:062 -

[Normal]
00:45:687 - don't ignore this sound. you should add a note here, OR, try this(maybe not with a good-looking at all Orz)
SPOILER

00:48:687 - ^

00:57:687 - ^

00:50:374 (2) - delete

00:53:749 (3) - ^

01:12:124 (3) - ^

[Easy]
nothing to say;w;

good luck！
samplefish
1,198 posts
Joined November 2010
samplefish
hey konei, trying for m4m

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:374 (2) - much too fast, the beginning of this is very calm with no instruments, just vocals. make this slider slower
  2. 00:04:624 (4,1) - why does the calm beginning have one of the biggest jumps in the entire map? no big instrument sound or music change to accommodate such a large jump. i also feel this jump is quite uncomfortable to pull.
  3. 00:06:124 (2) - not sure what youre following, vocals start a little bit back on the white tick
  4. 00:46:812 - feel like the beat here should be clickable http://puu.sh/diLh4/25b292325f.jpg
  5. 00:58:437 (4,1) - ^ also here
  6. 00:48:874 (3) - move midpoint to x159y107 to stack with previous slider
  7. 01:08:937 (1,2) - jump between these two
  8. 01:31:812 (1) - counter intuitive to the large spacing of 01:30:874 (2,3,4,5,6) -, also since its still pretty long on x.65 i broke my combo on it. i think you can lessen the distance of the jumps before it, or just make it x.5 so itll be shorter, so no miss, even for surprised people. also if you make it x.5 you can have these 01:32:374 (2,3) - increase by more DS so theyre noticeably faster.
  9. 01:39:687 - add circle for vocals
  10. 01:43:062 (3) - ctrlg plays better i feel

[Mochi's Insane]

  • 00:54:687 (6) - ctrl-g
  1. 01:55:437 (6) - ctrl-g

[Hard]
  1. feel like you should lower SV at the beginning by a little. its very calm compared to the other parts of the map, so it should have a lower sv.
  2. 00:04:062 (1,2,3,4) - the only 4 note single tap outside of kiai and its at the calm beginning before the beat kicks in
  3. 01:07:812 (1) - http://puu.sh/diMUQ/3f862e30b2.jpg
  4. 01:16:624 (1,2) - i wouldnt begin this with a triplet after a spinner on hard
  5. 01:38:187 (2,3) - not sure how easily hard players will be able to follow this

[Normal]
  1. 00:48:687 - add a note, very strong sound here
  2. 00:57:687 - ^
  3. 01:03:124 (2) - dont feel like this belongs, it doesnt really land on anything. try http://puu.sh/diO5q/5bec12a123.jpg
  4. 01:10:812 (1) - id like to see this capture the vocals, like these 01:26:937 (2,3) - , try this http://puu.sh/diOld/f1fbb0f214.jpg
  5. 01:32:749 (2,3) - i would avoid this placement, newbies may mistaken tail for head since its so close.
  6. 01:56:562 (2) - take it out

[Easy]
  1. im worried bout these 1/2 sliders 00:56:562 (2) - in the diff. i had to remap most of my easy because of them on this p/3500588. "The 1/2-sliders don't really fit into an Easy diff because they are very short (= difficult to read) and make the rhythm more complex than it should be." might want to double check with some people on these.
  2. 01:01:812 (1,2) - 3/2 gap not recommended, i feel this works much better in capturing the strong beat as well as simplifying the rhythm. http://puu.sh/diPJq/646a458a13.jpg
  3. 01:08:562 (3,4) - 3/2 gap with 1/2 sliders, try this, simplied rhythm while hitting the vocals. http://puu.sh/diPQZ/1b6ca70823.jpg
  4. 01:13:437 - note here?

very nice mapset!! beautiful song. good luck with this!
GamerCL
GamerCL
Just M4M

Insane:

00:01:839 (1) - Move here: http://puu.sh/diRKz/09ee565906.jpg

00:15:124 (5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/diRSb/973ff72462.jpg

00:27:124 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/diS9H/82d3fb7ec3.jpg

00:33:874 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/diSoE/45a7963d5c.jpg

01:14:374 (4) to 01:15:124 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/diSui/d138adf511.jpg

01:33:687 to 01:34:618 - It's hard to read, please change

01:34:812 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/diSFI/87565fc65f.jpg

01:40:812 (1) - Move down (a little space)

01:43:062 (3) (4) - Change (Example http://puu.sh/diSZw/78cd0727d2.jpg)

01:46:062 (3) (4) - Change (Example http://puu.sh/diT9k/5cb8fefa5b.jpg)

Nice~
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Mira-san
M4M plz.

Bold: Highly recommended | Blue: Not so important.

[General]
I feel like there's an unnecessary delay for the notes. Consider using offset 302.

[Insane]
00:08:937 (4,5,1) - Fix distance here unless intended.
00:19:427 (4) - I think this would be better if it was only 1/2. Why? >It sounds better >Making it a 3/4 slider makes it follow nothing at the end of the slider >You didn't use 3/4 sliders on similar parts. 00:28:802 (1,2,3,4) - I see no 3/4 slider here. Consistency for the best, yeah? :D
00:27:874 (3) - Hmm. I think it would be better if you placed this on x:394 y:188 instead.
00:31:812 (1,2,3) - Similar to the first suggestion. Fix the spacing unless intended. But it really bugs me because of these:
1. I hear no sound or something that could be used as a reason for a jump
2. It looks weird imo.
3. How 00:34:427 (4,1) and 01:49:614 (5,1) makes use of the "uneven" spacing properly as I can hear some kind of emphasis there.
00:36:864 (2,3,4,5) - Try making the spacing of these even.
00:42:677 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this perfect?
00:52:614 (5) - x:168 y:156 please. Fixes the spacing but keeps the intended flow.
01:12:302 (1,2,3,4) - It should be the other way around.

01:22:614 (5) - Mapped to nothing. Consider removing it.

[Mochi's Insane]
00:28:249 (4) - x:392 y:84
00:33:124 (1) - Blanket.
00:39:687 (6,7,8) - Okeeeeee. The spacing here. I particularly don't hear anything that could be strong enough for a 'jump' (piano? lolno). Moving this object to x:164 y:116 would fix it. 00:43:062 (7,8,9,1,2) - on the other hand seems fine for me though.
00:45:124 (1) - CTRL+G. Plays better. :D
00:52:239 (8) - whyyyyyyy. x:344 y:290.
01:14:927 (4) - Remove. It's mapped to nothing.
01:52:239 (2) - x:72 y:232
01:54:302 (4) - Blanket.
01:57:677 (6) - Rotate by 9 degrees (selection centre) perhaps?
02:01:052 (6,7,8) - You can try this as it flows better and kinda matches the map's style :D (NOTE: This one is completely fine regarding the spacing as there's something strong enough to signify a jump. >The drums)
Image

[Hard]
00:02:562 (2) - Hmm. Make this a 3/4 slider maybe? So when it ends it ends where the tone of the synth (in the bg) changes.
01:18:124 - Note here? The synth's tone changes here, so why not. You had a note on a similar part. 01:30:124 (4).

[Easy and Normal]
Didn't find anything here orz.


That's all.
Nice song and map! GG. ;)
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun

tutuhaha wrote:

M4M /.\
delete the word "op" on the tag


[Mochi's Insane]
00:23:187 (2,3) - I suggest move them more close
00:23:937 (2,3) - ^
00:24:687 (2,3) - ^
00:28:812 (1,2,3) - same space？ nope, they was did on purpose
00:35:562 (3) - I more like the rhythm which delete this note /-\
00:52:249 (8,9,1) - same space？
00:54:687 (6) - ctrl+g great !
00:57:124 (1,2) - well......I dont suggest that because is really confusing when you playing..... swapping NC for better readibility
01:12:687 (3) - delete
01:13:437 (6) - delete why,, ;w;
01:37:812 (1,2,3) - move those more close because is unreadable...it look like the same space you using on 1/4 rhythm
02:01:812 (1,2,3) - ^
02:04:905 (1) - do slience on this spinner I think will be better they're sound there

Urushi38 wrote:

for M4M


[mochi]
  1. 00:03:312 - you can put a circle.
  2. 00:06:312 - ^ nope
  3. 00:55:437 (8,9,1,2,3) - Please make clear star... you can do it by ctrl+shift+d kk~
  4. 01:12:593 (2,3) - 1/4 slider is better because Suddenly DS change and hard to read rhythm.
  5. 01:13:343 (6,7) - ^ i prefer this way
  6. 01:14:937 (4) - why not stack with 01:13:437 (7) - ? fixed


Good luck

Mira-san wrote:

M4M plz.

Bold: Highly recommended | Blue: Not so important.


[Mochi's Insane]
00:28:249 (4) - x:392 y:84
00:33:124 (1) - Blanket. ok
00:39:687 (6,7,8) - Okeeeeee. The spacing here. I particularly don't hear anything that could be strong enough for a 'jump' (piano? lolno). Moving this object to x:164 y:116 would fix it. 00:43:062 (7,8,9,1,2) - on the other hand seems fine for me though. this is partially fine imo
00:45:124 (1) - CTRL+G. Plays better. :D thats not the flow i want
00:52:239 (8) - whyyyyyyy. x:344 y:290. fix
01:14:927 (4) - Remove. It's mapped to nothing. there re sound
01:52:239 (2) - x:72 y:232
01:54:302 (4) - Blanket. k
01:57:677 (6) - Rotate by 9 degrees (selection centre) perhaps?
02:01:052 (6,7,8) - You can try this as it flows better and kinda matches the map's style :D (NOTE: This one is completely fine regarding the spacing as there's something strong enough to signify a jump. >The drums) i prefer current pattern as this two
Image


That's all.
Nice song and map! GG. ;)
Thanks, others fixed :3

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage - Mami Kawada.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 75868
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Konei
Version:Mochi's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:ao no kanata no four rhythm sprite eroge vn visual novel op opening short version momochikun
BeatmapID:553689
BeatmapSetID:238930

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,-522,"op movie.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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109812,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
123312,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
124905,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,247,45
Combo2 : 248,117,20
Combo3 : 155,16,239
Combo4 : 46,239,24

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Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei
Oh my god guys, thanks for the load of mods.

I barely did anything from samplefish's mod, very helpful, thanks!

I did some flow changes from tutuhaha's mod but most ctrl + g suggestions didn't fit my will.

I did lots of rhythm and some placement changes by Mira-san's mod.

And only some small changes from Kamio Misuzu and GamerCL's mods.

I replaced the file Urushi38 gave me and fixed the widescreen problem aswell.

Thanks for all of your modding!

Updated. ~
GamerCL
GamerCL
I can made a Extra GD? :D
samplefish
1,198 posts
Joined November 2010
samplefish

Konei wrote:

I barely did anything from samplefish's mod, very helpful, thanks!
Uh do you mean you did a lot from it and it was helpful, or you barely did anything from it, and it wasnt helpful? lol
Momovely
Momovely
really good song:3
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei

samplefish wrote:

Konei wrote:

I barely did anything from samplefish's mod, very helpful, thanks!
Uh do you mean you did a lot from it and it was helpful, or you barely did anything from it, and it wasnt helpful? lol
Lol, sorry I was tired. I mean I barely did everything, it was helpful, sorry!

@GamerCL: Sorry, I don't plan on adding any other difficulty.
GamerCL
GamerCL
Okey :3
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
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Hi, konei o/
Request from In-game


  • Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. about the start..., I feel weird about there timing, if you follow the pipe organ, 00:03:312 - is really late for me, try to find someone to timing check? Also, you can try this timing first which I think, but it's maybe not correct
    the timing code
    350,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
    4062,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
    4812,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
    for Easy's example: 00:01:850 (1,2) - this

[Easy]

  1. 00:37:062 (2) -i think there sound is different from 00:36:687 (1) - , it would be more suitable if 00:36:687 (1,2,3) - have a high-low-high pitch, try to use 60% volume and change Sampleset to Drum?
  2. 01:12:687 (2) - the slider-head not fits the song, dose it? I worry there would make newbie confused, how about change to this or this?
  3. 01:34:437 (5) - change it to be like 01:21:687 (4) - the slider-end's setting of hitsound?
~

[Normal]

  1. 00:02:374 (2) - Same as Easy
  2. 00:55:062 (5) - a little weird about the rhythm, how about change to a slider? just to make 00:55:062 (5,6) - same as 00:52:062 (5,6) - , I think there're full of 1/2 is more necessary than 00:52:062 (5,6) -
  3. 01:25:812 (1,2,3) - a cat smile? (:3
  4. 01:34:437 (5) - same as Easy
  5. 01:51:687 (4) - try to NC, I worry 01:51:687 (4,5) - would make newbie hard to read when they are close 01:51:124 (3) - slider-end
~

[Hard]

  1. 00:01:812 (1,2) - ...weird for the rhythm (crying, IDK how to explain my feeling, how about make them like this?
  2. 01:18:312 (1) - how about follow the piano? if you want, just make it like this
  3. 01:30:124 (4,1) - IMO, the rhythm would be more suitable (run, in other hand, follow the piano
~

[Mochi's Insane]

  1. 00:19:624 (1,2,3) - the flow make me feel a little uncomfortable... "try to make it straight" or "bend the slider and change the circles site"
    there is the reason
    the flow would be the green line, but actually, the flow is the red line, that is why I said
  2. 01:12:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a little hard to read when there have many overlaps, try to 01:13:062 (5) - NC?
  3. 01:24:312 (7,8,1) - I like this!
nice!

[Insane]

  1. 01:32:374 (2) - try to NC it to make 01:31:812 (1) - alone to emphasize 01:31:812 (1) - and would be easier to read the speed-change
nice, too!
that's all
good luck!
and star~!
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
Fixed stuff except NC, its based on pattern o.o
Thanks

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage - Mami Kawada.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 75868
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Konei
Version:Mochi's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:ao no kanata four rhythm sprite eroge vn visual novel op opening short version momochikun
BeatmapID:553689
BeatmapSetID:238930

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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503,256,100437,2,0,P|469:241|431:238,1,67.4999979400635,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,304,100812,6,0,B|254:343|197:338|197:338|159:312,2,150,4|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
340,218,101749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,160,101937,2,0,L|276:82,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,57,102312,2,0,P|429:47|513:30,1,150,0|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,31,102874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,159,103062,6,0,P|372:169|301:189,1,112.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,217,103437,2,0,P|254:228|215:229,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,173,103812,2,0,B|197:201|195:259|195:259|176:284|176:317,2,150,2|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,149,104749,5,0,0:0:0:0:
71,59,104937,1,0,1:0:0:0:
156,33,105124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,106,105312,2,0,B|263:109|307:91|307:91|360:114,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
425,162,105874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,30,106062,6,0,L|476:74,1,112.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
493,82,106437,1,0,1:0:0:0:
458,239,106624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,104,106812,2,0,L|359:134,1,75,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,239,107187,2,0,B|489:284|462:347|462:347|442:331|420:331,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
347,354,107749,5,2,0:0:0:0:
257,365,107937,1,0,1:0:0:0:
293,283,108124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
293,283,108312,2,0,L|284:206,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,138,108687,2,0,P|299:174|208:155,2,150,2|2|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,109624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,248,109812,6,0,L|185:173,1,75,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,110187,2,0,P|320:86|392:111,1,112.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,116,110562,2,0,P|409:72|384:37,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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447,270,111218,1,0,1:0:0:0:
447,270,111312,2,0,P|483:245|501:206,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,197,111687,2,0,B|251:188|251:188|205:200,1,112.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
179,207,112062,5,2,1:2:0:0:
85,256,112249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,105,112437,2,0,L|82:66,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
108,46,112812,2,0,B|172:59|172:59|202:51|202:51|256:62,1,150,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
353,81,113374,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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337,179,113937,2,0,L|262:188,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,370,114312,2,0,P|424:306|390:235,2,150,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
342,307,115249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,187,116937,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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332,173,123312,1,4,1:0:0:0:
64,270,123874,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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286,293,124624,5,0,0:0:0:0:
283,315,124718,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,337,124812,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,124905,12,4,130812,1:0:0:0:
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei

Loneight wrote:

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Hi, konei o/
Request from In-game


  • Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. about the start..., I feel weird about there timing, if you follow the pipe organ, 00:03:312 - is really late for me, try to find someone to timing check? Also, you can try this timing first which I think, but it's maybe not correct Used yours, it's good!
    the timing code
    350,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
    4062,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
    4812,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
    for Easy's example: 00:01:850 (1,2) - this

[Easy]

  1. 00:37:062 (2) -i think there sound is different from 00:36:687 (1) - , it would be more suitable if 00:36:687 (1,2,3) - have a high-low-high pitch, try to use 60% volume and change Sampleset to Drum? I don't like drum sample here, reduced the volume though.
  2. 01:12:687 (2) - the slider-head not fits the song, dose it? I worry there would make newbie confused, how about change to this or this? Sure.
  3. 01:34:437 (5) - change it to be like 01:21:687 (4) - the slider-end's setting of hitsound? No, the clap don't fit for this part in my opinion.
~

[Normal]

  1. 00:02:374 (2) - Same as Easy I don't get it. o.o
  2. 00:55:062 (5) - a little weird about the rhythm, how about change to a slider? just to make 00:55:062 (5,6) - same as 00:52:062 (5,6) - , I think there're full of 1/2 is more necessary than 00:52:062 (5,6) - Sure.
  3. 01:25:812 (1,2,3) - a cat smile? (:3 Haha, true!
  4. 01:34:437 (5) - same as Easy Same reason.
  5. 01:51:687 (4) - try to NC, I worry 01:51:687 (4,5) - would make newbie hard to read when they are close 01:51:124 (3) - slider-end [b]Sure.
~

[Hard]

  1. 00:01:812 (1,2) - ...weird for the rhythm (crying, IDK how to explain my feeling, how about make them like this? Sure.
  2. 01:18:312 (1) - how about follow the piano? if you want, just make it like this Oh my god, nice.
  3. 01:30:124 (4,1) - IMO, the rhythm would be more suitable (run, in other hand, follow the piano Ah, not for this one, I prefer following the beat here. :3
~

[Insane]

  1. 01:32:374 (2) - try to NC it to make 01:31:812 (1) - alone to emphasize 01:31:812 (1) - and would be easier to read the speed-change Sure.
nice, too!
that's all
good luck!
and star~!
Thank you for modding :3
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
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20:44 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/552498 Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- [Insane]]
20:44 Irreversible: 00:04:062 (1,2,3,4) - wieso kein anständiges viereck?
20:44 Irreversible: also, die ausrichtung ist ok aber DS stimmt nicht
20:45 Konei: okay
20:45 Irreversible: 00:21:687 (2,3) - blanket + avoid overlap?
20:46 Konei: improved blanket a bit, overlap isnt seen in game
20:46 Irreversible: 00:28:249 (5) - fände 400 136 vom jump verhältnis iwie noch interessant
20:46 Irreversible: 00:30:874 (3) - move up to improve flow?
20:46 Irreversible: 176 32 ^
20:47 Konei: sure
20:47 Irreversible: 00:33:874 (3) - http://puu.sh/dqzCH/1b45bc0c02.jpg ? xD
20:48 Irreversible: 00:42:874 (4,5,6,7,8) - benutz dieses tool um n besseres pentagon zu kriegen und dann ctrl + g
20:48 Irreversible: 00:53:937 (5) - 192 272 bc triangle
20:50 Irreversible: 01:43:437 (4) - move slightly down
20:50 Irreversible: 2 grids or smth like this
20:50 Irreversible: 01:46:062 (3,4,1,2) - dat "UUHHHUUUUUHUUU" xDDDD
20:51 Konei: hahahahah
20:51 Konei: ikr xDDD
20:51 Irreversible: xDDDDD
20:51 Irreversible: personal highlight in this map
20:51 Irreversible: coole map sonst *-*
20:52 Konei: danke :D
20:52 Irreversible: den slider haste nich gefixed oder?
20:52 Irreversible: xD
20:52 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/553055 Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- [Hard]]
20:52 Irreversible: 00:06:124 (2) - würde iwie ctrl +g ka ._.
20:53 Konei: spacing far too high D:
20:53 Irreversible: 00:43:249 (4) -
20:53 Irreversible: ctrl h the shape
20:54 Konei: sure
20:55 Irreversible: 01:46:812 (1) - die ecken in der letzten kurve
20:55 Irreversible: die fitten uuuh gar nicht XD
20:55 Irreversible: sonst nice hard o.o

gl uhhh
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei
Yay, thanks for the check. :3
Mafumafu
Nomination Assessment Team
3,372 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi,Konei! There is Regraz's mod! :D From your in-game req.
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Same issues won’t be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
  5. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. Fine. Though I guess the tags ”ao” and “no” wont work when searching coz they are only 2 letters long.

Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. 01:12:687 (1) –Why not add a 1/1 repeat slider here? Leaving the vocal here empty may not be a nice choice.
    Structure:
  2. 01:19:062 (5,1) – Adjust 5’s shape so that this can be a better blanket. Don’t forget to adjust 1’s shape so that the symmetry can be kept.
    Hitsounds
  3. Fine. Better to add more whistles at the very beginning part of the map.
    Others:
  4. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:02:749 - 00:03:312 -

Normal

  1. Nothing much to say. Little hard imo but fine.
  2. 00:10:905 (1) –Is this OK? Maybe too close to its previous note.
  3. Remove some unnecessary greenlines.
  4. 01:12:312 (3,4) –Blanket?

Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. OK
    Structure:
  2. 00:04:062 (1,2) –Try not to overlap them?
  3. 00:08:187 (3) –Stack 3 to 4’s head for better downbeat reading since 1 2 and 3 4 are naturally separated by downbeats.
  4. 01:20:937 (3) –Keep DS consistent?
  5. 01:38:749 (3) –Easily to be recognized as 1/2 later than previous note. Try this instead? http://puu.sh/dtTPv/25f3e748bc.jpg
    Hitsounds
  6. 02:01:812 (1,2) –Ah too loud imo.
    Others:
  7. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:01:812 –
  8. 00:15:124 (1) –No need to NC. Keep consistent with later sections.

Mochi’s Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. OK
    Structure:
  2. 01:06:312 (4,7) –Do not completed stack them. Really hard to read and also not a nice pattern .
  3. 01:24:687 (8,1) –Suddenly a large jump? It plays weird. Try to place these 2 notes closer.
    Hitsounds
  4. 00:12:499 (4,5) –Er.. Make it louder, it feels weird when it can hardly be heard.
  5. 01:24:687 (8,1) –Volume too high imo. Try to lower 5% or 10%.
    Others:
  6. Stack Leniency 0.2? If not intended, try to use default one.

Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 02:01:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Wow this long stream is sudden imo. Trying to use some 1/4 repeat sliders or at least lower the volume a little.
    Structure:
  2. 00:28:062 (4,5,6) –Consider making perfect triangle just like your previous sections by adjusting the place of 5.
  3. 00:33:124 (1,2,3) –Not very nice flow, especially 2 to 3. Try this? http://puu.sh/dtUwm/e05d6b3cf0.jpg or http://puu.sh/dtUzD/6f672d50eb.jpg Also because you already have a similar shape slider at 01:21:124 (1) -.
  4. 01:24:312 (1) –HP-bar touching..
  5. 01:33:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – Try this: http://puu.sh/dtUOP/761be0ffe6.jpg
    Hitsounds
  6. 00:36:499 (1) –Lower the volume a little.
    Others:
  7. 00:43:437 (1) – Remove NC.

In all, a nice mapset! :3 (Also a nice song indeed)
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei

Regraz wrote:

Hi,Konei! There is Regraz's mod! :D From your in-game req.
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Same issues won’t be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
  5. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. Fine. Though I guess the tags ”ao” and “no” wont work when searching coz they are only 2 letters long. You can use them in game, it's fine.

Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. 01:12:687 (1) –Why not add a 1/1 repeat slider here? Leaving the vocal here empty may not be a nice choice. I find this inconsistent, prefer the break here.
    Structure:
  2. 01:19:062 (5,1) – Adjust 5’s shape so that this can be a better blanket. Don’t forget to adjust 1’s shape so that the symmetry can be kept. Sure, adjusted.
    Hitsounds
  3. Fine. Better to add more whistles at the very beginning part of the map. I don't intend on using that many whistles in the start, it sounds noisy.
    Others:
  4. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:02:749 - 00:03:312 - This is fine.

Normal

  1. Nothing much to say. Little hard imo but fine.
  2. 00:10:905 (1) –Is this OK? Maybe too close to its previous note. True, moved to the red tick.
  3. Remove some unnecessary greenlines.
  4. 01:12:312 (3,4) –Blanket? Yus.

Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. OK
    Structure:
  2. 00:04:062 (1,2) –Try not to overlap them? It's intended to fit DS.
  3. 00:08:187 (3) –Stack 3 to 4’s head for better downbeat reading since 1 2 and 3 4 are naturally separated by downbeats. Nah, so many stacks in a row play bad to me.
  4. 01:20:937 (3) –Keep DS consistent? Yeah.
  5. 01:38:749 (3) –Easily to be recognized as 1/2 later than previous note. Try this instead? http://puu.sh/dtTPv/25f3e748bc.jpg Yeah, changed another way.
    Hitsounds
  6. 02:01:812 (1,2) –Ah too loud imo. Fine for me.
    Others:
  7. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:01:812 –
  8. 00:15:124 (1) –No need to NC. Keep consistent with later sections. Both fixed.

Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 02:01:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Wow this long stream is sudden imo. Trying to use some 1/4 repeat sliders or at least lower the volume a little. It's very fun to play to me.
    Structure:
  2. 00:28:062 (4,5,6) –Consider making perfect triangle just like your previous sections by adjusting the place of 5. Sure.
  3. 00:33:124 (1,2,3) –Not very nice flow, especially 2 to 3. Try this? http://puu.sh/dtUwm/e05d6b3cf0.jpg or http://puu.sh/dtUzD/6f672d50eb.jpg Also because you already have a similar shape slider at 01:21:124 (1) -. I think mine plays fine, also the way you have it it makes my cursor feel somewhat stuck.
  4. 01:24:312 (1) –HP-bar touching.. Adjusted a bit.
  5. 01:33:687 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – Try this: http://puu.sh/dtUOP/761be0ffe6.jpg Changed another way.
    Hitsounds
  6. 00:36:499 (1) –Lower the volume a little. Nah, it's fine here, the volume fits the instruments.
    Others:
  7. 00:43:437 (1) – Remove NC. Hm, put it for better readability and think it's fine.

In all, a nice mapset! :3 (Also a nice song indeed)
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks a lot. :3
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun

Regraz wrote:

Hi,Konei! There is Regraz's mod! :D From your in-game req.
There is a few points of my mod:

Mochi’s Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. OK
    Structure:
  2. 01:06:312 (4,7) –Do not completed stack them. Really hard to read and also not a nice pattern . fix
  3. 01:24:687 (8,1) –Suddenly a large jump? It plays weird. Try to place these 2 notes closer. its not that big
    Hitsounds
  4. 00:12:499 (4,5) –Er.. Make it louder, it feels weird when it can hardly be heard. fixed
  5. 01:24:687 (8,1) –Volume too high imo. Try to lower 5% or 10%. nope
    Others:
  6. Stack Leniency 0.2? If not intended, try to use default one.


In all, a nice mapset! :3 (Also a nice song indeed)
Finally, good luck on your ranking!

Thanks

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage - Mami Kawada.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 75868
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Konei
Version:Mochi's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:ao no kanata four rhythm sprite eroge vn visual novel op opening short version momochikun
BeatmapID:553689
BeatmapSetID:238930

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,-522,"op movie.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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13812,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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36499,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
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93124,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
93499,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
95187,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
95749,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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100905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
108687,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
109812,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
123312,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
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Konei
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Updated.
Loneight
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Recheck~ o/
no kd :3


  • Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. Mochi's Insane of the timing point(red line) is different, please make it consistent
  2. Also, check a part of inherited section(green line), seems they are unsnapped (I think this is like a nazi suggestion, lol)
    unsnapped green line
    Easy:00:02:749 - 00:03:312 -
    Normal:00:02:749 - 00:03:312 -
    Insane:00:02:374 - 00:02:749 - 00:03:312 -

[Easy]

  1. 01:12:687 - no! why the nice rhythm is gone (crying, then... I feel weird about the empty, how about add some notes to follow the vocal? for example: this. If you accept this, remember NC it because of the long recovery time
call me back after checking
Konei
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Everything has been done, thanks! :3
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there we go!
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Konei
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Thank you! ~
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A bit neating small stuffs on the easier diffs, sorry for the lateness, Konei ;w; Mostof it are just suggestion, feel free to ignore it!

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If there's something you didn't understand or if the images and links are messed up, feel free to state so and I'll try my best to explain it better!

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:412 (2) - Eh is small but the way how this dlier's tail isn't connected to 00:04:062 (3) - despite having an identical shape really bothers me lol. Try to make it a bit more like this?
    SPOILER
    . The long slider doesn't looked worse and the flow should move smoother that way imo :3
  2. 01:40:249 (3) - This note could be confusing for beginner imo. You see, this last kiai part follows the vocal, though the next slider are following the background music, the gap here can be quite misleading due to that :< So yeah, I'd suggest to change this circle to a 1/2 beat slider until 01:40:437 -, filling that gap should make the rhythm much more readable by beginners imo :3
  3. 00:40:062 (4,1) - Didn't really like how these two is shaped lol, and also the tail of (4) does directing to the edge of the map, which would make the flow to (1) a bit cranky :< Consider changing the pattern to be a bit more like this?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:42:312 (3,4) - The rhythm for this part seems a bit off imo, considering how you still followed vocal until the previous note at 00:41:749 (2) -, thus making this part a bit awkward when played, especially for the particular powerful beat on 00:43:437 (4) - :< So yeah, I think a bit rhythm arrangement should do it here; How about this one?
    SPOILER
    The rhythm should stick to the vocal better with the repeat and especially at the circle on 00:43:437 (4) - owo
  5. 01:03:499 (2) - Dunno but this gap in the rhythm could be a bit confusing for beginners imo, especially how there aren't any distinct beat on 01:03:499 -, it'd better if you stick with the main beat for this part imo. So yeah, consider changing this slider to start from 01:03:312 - instead of the current, should be easier to read that way for beginners :3
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:850 (1) - Consider making this one a slider that extend to 00:02:225 - instead of a single circle? I think it would fit well here imo considering you also follow the vocal by using a 1/2 beat rhythm at 00:04:812 (1,2) -, the same rhythm as Easy also doesn't feel really good imo, a bit rhythm variation between the diffs would be nice :b
  2. 00:38:562 (2) - hmm I somehow feels that this circle would fit more if it's placed on 00:38:749 - instead imo :< You see, the rhythm is a bit awkward at it's current position with how simple the rhyhtm at 00:39:687 (4,5) - is, feels a bit empty if you ask me, I somehow expected a bit more complexity if you put the circle on 00:38:562 - :<
  3. 01:00:874 (4,5) - Considering on how you rarely used stacks in this difficulty, having this one stacked looked a but weird imo, it also makes the flow stopped here which isn't really nice imo since these two is the kinda lead in for the pre-chorus on 01:01:812 (1) -
  4. 01:12:312 (3) - eh it's kinda sad that the loud beat on 01:12:593 - is covered by the long slider :< It'd be better if you could emphasize it with a repeat on that beat, and also you could try doing the same for the next slider, and the spin can start from 01:13:812 - which fits since that's where the piano-thingy beat is started ouo The rhythm should become like this
    SPOILER
  5. 01:52:062 (2) - Consider changing this slider to a 2 circle instead? Since this slider is the lead in to the next powerful beat on 01:52:812 (1) -, I think it'd be nice if these drums here are clickable :3
Good luck Konei, pretty nice mapset as usual! :3
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AnreFM wrote:

A bit neating small stuffs on the easier diffs, sorry for the lateness, Konei ;w; Mostof it are just suggestion, feel free to ignore it!

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If there's something you didn't understand or if the images and links are messed up, feel free to state so and I'll try my best to explain it better!

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:412 (2) - Eh is small but the way how this dlier's tail isn't connected to 00:04:062 (3) - despite having an identical shape really bothers me lol. Try to make it a bit more like this?
    SPOILER
    . The long slider doesn't looked worse and the flow should move smoother that way imo :3 Sure, done another way.
  2. 01:40:249 (3) - This note could be confusing for beginner imo. You see, this last kiai part follows the vocal, though the next slider are following the background music, the gap here can be quite misleading due to that :< So yeah, I'd suggest to change this circle to a 1/2 beat slider until 01:40:437 -, filling that gap should make the rhythm much more readable by beginners imo :3 I mostly follow the instruments, and there are instrument tones to back that note up so there's no problem I guess.
  3. 00:40:062 (4,1) - Didn't really like how these two is shaped lol, and also the tail of (4) does directing to the edge of the map, which would make the flow to (1) a bit cranky :< Consider changing the pattern to be a bit more like this? Changed around a bit.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:42:312 (3,4) - The rhythm for this part seems a bit off imo, considering how you still followed vocal until the previous note at 00:41:749 (2) -, thus making this part a bit awkward when played, especially for the particular powerful beat on 00:43:437 (4) - :< So yeah, I think a bit rhythm arrangement should do it here; How about this one?
    SPOILER
    The rhythm should stick to the vocal better with the repeat and especially at the circle on 00:43:437 (4) - owo I think that rhythm would be too complex, I think it's easier to get how it is.
  5. 01:03:499 (2) - Dunno but this gap in the rhythm could be a bit confusing for beginners imo, especially how there aren't any distinct beat on 01:03:499 -, it'd better if you stick with the main beat for this part imo. So yeah, consider changing this slider to start from 01:03:312 - instead of the current, should be easier to read that way for beginners :3 Gaps like that will occure more often in advanced gameplay, I think this one is fine.
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:850 (1) - Consider making this one a slider that extend to 00:02:225 - instead of a single circle? I think it would fit well here imo considering you also follow the vocal by using a 1/2 beat rhythm at 00:04:812 (1,2) -, the same rhythm as Easy also doesn't feel really good imo, a bit rhythm variation between the diffs would be nice :b I'd rather have it consistent haha.
  2. 00:38:562 (2) - hmm I somehow feels that this circle would fit more if it's placed on 00:38:749 - instead imo :< You see, the rhythm is a bit awkward at it's current position with how simple the rhyhtm at 00:39:687 (4,5) - is, feels a bit empty if you ask me, I somehow expected a bit more complexity if you put the circle on 00:38:562 - :< Right, done.
  3. 01:00:874 (4,5) - Considering on how you rarely used stacks in this difficulty, having this one stacked looked a but weird imo, it also makes the flow stopped here which isn't really nice imo since these two is the kinda lead in for the pre-chorus on 01:01:812 (1) - It fits the music very well, I think it's fine.
  4. 01:12:312 (3) - eh it's kinda sad that the loud beat on 01:12:593 - is covered by the long slider :< It'd be better if you could emphasize it with a repeat on that beat, and also you could try doing the same for the next slider, and the spin can start from 01:13:812 - which fits since that's where the piano-thingy beat is started ouo The rhythm should become like this
    SPOILER
    I don't want it to become too hard and having 2 repeating 3/4 Slider is too much for me.
  5. 01:52:062 (2) - Consider changing this slider to a 2 circle instead? Since this slider is the lead in to the next powerful beat on 01:52:812 (1) -, I think it'd be nice if these drums here are clickable :3 Slider feels easier to hit to me in this position, because the placement is a bit harsh.
Good luck Konei, pretty nice mapset as usual! :3
Thanks for the mod and sorry for denying so much. ;_;
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Konei fixed AnreFM's modding, and nothing to say!
Rebubble!ヽ( ･д･´)
Shohei Ohtani
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Overall:

You can't have BOTH silent ticks and silent sliderslides! This is mostly applying to the beginning of normal and easy, but also wherever else it may be if I missed it.

That is unrankable :(.

So adjust it so one of them is audible :P. I know it sucks, but it rules ;ww;!!

I'll be happy to rank after that change.
Konei
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Alright, increased tick's volume to 25 percent.
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DANK OF COURAGE
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Thanks for making it happen!
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gratz~ konei-kun :3
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15 days to rank wow.
Gratz~
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Really nice of you to speedqualify this over the one that's been in pending for 6 months of the same song.
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Thanks!
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You're welcome!

OT: Congratulations Konei
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typing...
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are you guys all high right now
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Lust
Just wait for the edgy stoner "live today die tomorrow" scorpiour-esque posts, thats when it gets good
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Koiyuki
It seems you found a unrankable issue without popping the bubble then straigly give a heart??!!
Lust
osu! Alumni
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Lust
Unrankable stuff like what CDFA pointed out does not really require a bubble pop and rebubble. Its a simple fix. However, with something big like a timing change that significantly changes the gameplay of the map then that should require a pop. The BAT rules only state that a bubble pop should be enacted if there are quality issues that hinder the set enough from being qualified - nothing about popping for a small discrepancy.
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
ok I get that, thanks Lust
Sakura
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2010
Sakura
Technically, yes a bubble pop should have happened because you pop when you find an issue that could get the map disqualified if it was ranked with it (like unrankable issue), I talked about this with p3n the other day.

Edit: However he can still go for it like he did, so it doesn't really matter. (I think)
Lust
osu! Alumni
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Lust
somebody update the BAT rules please

anyway, end of that discussion
lets stop cluttering up this thread
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
I could have popped the bubble but im not a dick like lmao the entire map was fine except that.

I usually pop bubbles if the unrankable issue is like, huge, or if I actually didn't want to rank the map :P
Sakura
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2010
Sakura
Doing what CDFA did is fine, he's the one that doesn't get the bonus points from popping in the end.
Only issue i have is qualifying a map after like only 15 days submitted when there was another map of the same song sitting in pending for like 6 months (and bubbled)
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Gratzz~
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Konei

Sakura wrote:

Doing what CDFA did is fine, he's the one that doesn't get the bonus points from popping in the end.
Only issue i have is qualifying a map after like only 15 days submitted when there was another map of the same song sitting in pending for like 6 months (and bubbled)
I'm sorry for this, I should've let the other one go first, gonna note this for future.

And thanks everyone by the way!
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