1. Hard (2.91 stars, 531 notes)
2. Insane (3.74 stars, 681 notes)
3. Normal (1.78 stars, 384 notes)

arronchu1207 wrote:

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIM4M

[N]
00:09:290 (3) - 弄整齊一點吧>_>? >>OK
00:55:812 (1) - 柑橘KIAI一開始是箭頭好像有點怪.. >>會嗎?? 有第二個人說很怪我就立刻改
01:09:725 (1) - ^
02:26:247 (1) - ^
[H]
01:33:421 (6) - 擋到前面的滑條 看起來頗怪@@ >>全部已改
01:56:899 (5) - ^
02:00:160 (4) - ^
02:41:464 (1) - ^
[I]
01:16:899 (5) - x104 y116 >>這裡是我故意這樣擺的
02:33:529 (6) - x72 y340 >>這裡因為做的時候沒想到，已改
02:33:421 (5) - x100 y332
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好圖
找不到什麼問題(?)

話說slidertick 跟 sliderslide 好像不能同時消音 >>刪掉slidetick1.2.3

總之 , Good luck \:DDDDD/

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:14:942 (1) - 換成滑條? >>我是跟背景音還有鋼琴
2. 00:22:986 (3) - 移到x:264 y:312, 00:23:203 (4) - x:316 y:296 >>已改
3. 00:47:986 (5) - 移下1格~ ^
4. 01:31:464 (1) - ^00:14:942 (1) >>我是跟背景音還有鋼琴
5. 01:51:464 (6) - 順時針15度 >>已改
6. 02:01:464 (4,1) - Blanket? >>已改

good luck~~~

[ Joey ] wrote:

Hey there, so sorry for the late m4m

Insane

00:07:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo runs a little long. Consider breaking it up. Right here would be best 00:09:290 -
00:14:508 - The finish on the end of this slider is loud. Reduce the volume of it to about 30% >No breaking, I think it is no influence to play. And Fix sound volume
00:25:594 (3,4,5) - I would keep this spacing consistent
00:26:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is really good, but I have a small suggestion. How about you lessen the distance on these 4 notes 00:26:899 (1,2,3,4) - maybe to about 1.6x distance and then increase the distance on these notes 00:27:768 (5,6,7,8) - . A combo like this feels nice: http://puu.sh/cNcel/ae9356e47e.jpg >Fix more Good
00:40:160 (4,5) - This needs a much larger jump, to match the finish and the music. >OK let me think how to do. I have no idea.
00:41:247 (2,3,5,6) - These notes sound like they should be bass drum hit sounds, rather than the snare drum hitsounds you have on them. >OK fix
00:56:247 - Since this is the start of the chorus, do you think a small change of ryhthm would fit here? Something like this? http://puu.sh/cNcLo/fdf117d59a.jpg >OK, 1st, 2nd kiai change.
01:10:160 - ^ Same thing here and for the other chorus' ^
01:40:594 - It feels nice if a 1/1 slider started here, so there is the piano note on the head of the slider and the tail. >OK
01:56:681 (4,5) - Needs a bigger jump >Isn't now
02:02:116 (10) - Move to x: 184 y:46 >moved
02:05:812 (1,2) - This distance is a little too far. I would stack the tail of 02:06:247 (2) - on 02:05:377 (5) -
03:27:116 (4,5) - A larger jump belongs here imo

Hard

00:11:029 (7) - NC? >fix
00:17:986 - 1/1 sliders should start on these beats rather than end on them. >I don't think so
00:21:464 - ^ ^
00:27:551 (7) - I would rather be hitting hitscircles here because of the clap >Fix
00:45:812 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern looks better: http://puu.sh/cNiLU/30344d448a.jpg >no change
02:11:681 (1,2) - I would un-stack these. Two stacks in a row doesn't feel good to me. >put other look
02:35:377 (1,2) - You should re-position these like this: http://puu.sh/cNj58/193795b131.jpg It's not a big deal but I think it looks better >Fix
02:40:594 (5) - Move to x: 205 y: 242 >fix
02:58:855 - No reason for a gap here imo >add circle
03:53:203 (5,1) - Make a bigger jump >No
04:14:508 - I think a note should be placed here and have the slider start a 1/2 beat after that. >No

Normal

00:27:768 - A loud clap like this should be mapped. Or maybe add a clap slidertick hitsound on it.
01:49:290 (2,5) - The head of 5 stacked under 2 might be a problem for a normal difficulty. Not sure though >fix
Hmm maybe for a normal it would be better to just put a hitcircle here 03:13:638 - and have the break start 03:15:377 -
This is a reallllly good difficulty. I didn't find much >OK

I enjoyed this mapset a lot. I remember I download one of your maps a while ago, and you have improved a lot since then.
I hope this gets ranked. Have a star
Good luck!

byfar wrote:

m4m (please only mod insane and normal) song is 1:23 min drain

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

[Insane] 00:16:247 (5) - was this meant to be a blanket? i think it should be a blanket, it works better that way >No

sound @kiai time at 02:12:768 could be a tad bit (5-10%) louder. >Fix or not fix volume, what is difference??

02:11:681 (1,2,3) - space out a bit more. along with slider 02:12:334 (4) - too close to each other i feel >not fix

instead of spacing out here more 02:34:725 (4,5) -
do it on 02:34:942 (5,6) - instead or remove jump completely >get a little close here, I think jump here better
because it feels awkward

1. Good hitsounds
2. For Hard and Insane, the spinner should end on 03:13:638 - and the break should start on 03:15:377 - for the emphasis effect. Example below.
   
   
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1. 00:20:594 (5) - I think it looks better when you curve this slider towards Slider 6. Try to do this for similar patterns as well.
2. 02:32:551 (5,6) - Try a different pattern here instead?
   
   
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3. 03:58:638 (3) - The Slider Head is missing a Finish.
4. 03:59:508 (5,1) - Try to curve the slider here.
   
   
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1. 02:26:681 (1,2) - Blanket Slider 2 with Slider 1.

1. Nothing apparent, nice Insane!