1. Easy (1.65 stars, 89 notes)
2. Hard (3.68 stars, 248 notes)
3. Insane (4.89 stars, 341 notes)
4. Normal (2.39 stars, 148 notes)

R801 wrote:

Hola o 3 o (De nuevo metiendo mi cuchara xD).

Si mis ojos no me engañan, creo que 橋本仁 debería estar en "Artist". Lo digo por...

o 3 o

Según yo, hay parecido. Coincidió en algunas páginas en internet, así que también me guio por eso (aunque tampoco hay garantía de que no me equivoque xDu).


Para que quedara algo más o menos como esto:

o 3 o

Respecto al mp3 y al background... El mp3 es de 320 kbps y la imagen (1280x720)... Supongo que quieres rankearlo, por eso me fijo en estos asuntos (y si no, ignora este post). Aquí te incluyo un link de mediafire, la carpeta tiene un mp3 de 192 kbps y una imagen en formato jpg (1024x768); aunque hay algo más qué decir de esta última... Tu imagen pesa 136 kb y la que yo te sugiero 370, por lo mismo dejo a tu criterio si la usas o no (lo mismo va para el mp3).

http://www.mediafire.com/download/2twmg ... ardust.zip

Por cierto, creo que estás mejorando o 3 o (no soy precisamente el que más sabe sobre mapear xDu; pero, así me lo parece ). Y ya estaba esperando que subieras este mapa xD

atsuro0 wrote:

Gracias por todo

No hay de qué o 3 o

Cuando copio y pego el texto en japones me salen cuadrados ( http://puu.sh/89hw7.png ) asi que no se si se copio bien...

R801 wrote:

Es curioso lo que dices. ¿Y si pruebas actualizándolo así y luego activas en osu la opción de "mostrar datos de canciones en su idioma original"? (en options) Para que cheques si funciona. Es de momento lo que se me ocurre o.o

atsuro0 wrote:

Al parecer si funciono, gracias por todo

¡Yay! (No agradezcas . Si puedo ayudarte con algo, no hay problema o 3 o).

Y por la estrella

La mereces

Ringating wrote:

random background mod:

I noticed that the bg was 1024x768 (4:3), but the max allowed resolution is 1366x768 (16:9), so I made the bg 1366x768 with a bit of editing (this change won't affect people who play at 4:3, because the bit i added will be cropped off for them). I also increased the contrast of the image a bit, cause it seemed rather faded. There was also a smoothing filter added so it would appear cleaner. Here is the final product:

new bg

De lo que uno se entera o.o
No creo que 70 KB de diferencia hagan tanto daño. Y, no puedo negar que se ve mejor o.o Podrías considerarlo

Nice job, Ringating!

pishifat wrote:

(you can thank me for telling ringating to make you a background too )

Ringating wrote:

random background mod:

I noticed that the bg was 1024x768 (4:3), but the max allowed resolution is 1366x768 (16:9), so I made the bg 1366x768 with a bit of editing (this change won't affect people who play at 4:3, because the bit i added will be cropped off for them). I also increased the contrast of the image a bit, cause it seemed rather faded. There was also a smoothing filter added so it would appear cleaner. Here is the final product:

new bg

pishifat wrote:

random mod here. mentioning a lot of basic things, so it's not too in depth (you can thank me for telling ringating to make you a background too )

general:
- you've got a lot of unsnapped inherited timing sections (green ticks), might want to snap those
- combos seem random at times, keeping them consistent (like one new combo near every large white tick) is the best way to go
- distance snapping on hard/normal/easy needs to be more utilized

insane:

00:01:387 (1,2,3,4,5) - based on the spacing from the first four notes here, you'd think the slider speed would be faster. make the stream closer in a way like this:

nsfw

00:09:023 (6) - NC (new combo) to maintain combo consistency. try to make a new combo once between each white tick, since that's what you did for most of the map
00:10:114 (12,13,14) - compared to previous triples, spacing is off. this happens on a lot of other streams, so i won't mention them more than this. find them yourself
00:12:841 (5) - maybe move this down to keep a better curved flow:

nsfw

00:13:387 (9) - NC for combo consistency. i won't mention every time this happens anymore, so just fix that on your own
00:28:660 (2,3,4,5) - keep your squares at exactly 90 degrees, or else it looks messy. use ctrl+shift+D for automatic squares
00:45:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:52:841 (3) - sudden slider velocity change, so make it a NC
01:20:660 (4,6) - flows a lot nicer of you ctrl+G these

hard: overall, the difficulty is pretty hard in comparison to most "hards" nowadays. especially when it gets to where the preview point is. distance spacing is also not used as much as it should be (or as strictly i guess). you're missing the kiai time on this difficulty for some reason too.
00:21:751 (9) - would be better to change the direction of this, so you'll know the next object is to the right:

nsfw

this also happens a lot of times, so i'd consider changing accordingly for the rest too

00:33:023 (9) - make this line up vertically with 7 and 8, it seems off
00:38:478 (6) - this should be stacked with 00:37:023 (2)
00:50:660 (9) - vertically line up with 7 and 8 too
00:52:841 (1) - make this in the exact center so it doesn't look out of place compared to the spinner:

nsfw

vs
the objects stacked here also will need some moving

01:02:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is definitely too confusing for a hard difficulty
01:19:205 (5) - move this to the left so it lines up with this T shape:

nsfw

01:22:841 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of spacing is too sudden, needs a definite change

normal: needs to follow exact distance spacing 99% of the time, so i'd suggest going through the entire map with 1.0x distance spacing and re-adjust the positions of things (gonna be a lot of work, but it's necessary). that being, i'm not really gonna say anything about this diff.

easy: what i said about the normal difficulty applies here too

anyway good luck with the map if you have any questions pm me and i'll definitely respond

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

[Easy]

00:29:387 (2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't use long strings of circles like this since new players play Easy diffs, and they will usually end up jumping the gun on strings like these. Try using 2 sliders instead, one from 2 to 3, and one from 4 to 5.


[Normal]

00:03:205 (2) - I would make this more symmetrical by making the tilt/bump/whatever happening halfway through the slider, in the center.

00:46:841 (8) - NC

01:25:387 (3,4) - DS error, fix the stacking or remove the stacking entirely

00:48:296 (10,11) - DS error, fix ASAP

[Hard]

00:22:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The thing where the circes stack where 2 and 3 were is pretty hard to play and see due to the AR rate. I probably wouldn't stack them this way just so the player can actually see and expect the circles.

00:58:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^^

atsuro0 wrote:

Should i reduce the difficulty in hard?

Okoratu wrote:

General

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1. Let's have a look into the rhythm of the insane and let's see how you manage to map 1/3s

Insane

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1. dude dude dude, the guitar part in the beginning is 1/3 lol Changed it
2. 00:01:751 (5) - like everything hereafter up until 00:07:387 (1) - isn't really snapped to the sounds that you intend to map there so i'll give you a rough roadmap of the guitar sounds that are there in case you want to map them in this:
   
   Example

   
   
   place some circles on the 1/3 snap like this and see for yourself how you could redo this part
3. 00:15:205 (9) - the stream starting here should be 1/6, making it 1/4 is like having unsnapped notes, either use a kickslider for this or think of a way to map these as 1/6 in a playable way? added a repeat slider there
   
   Example

   
4. 00:36:569 - might consider mapping this sound? ok
5. 00:49:569 (3) - would space this similarily to 00:48:841 (3) - (2.90x prev, 2.65x next) ok
   
   Example

   
6. 01:14:114 (5,1) - consider CRTL+H ing these to have not that much of an antijump but a neat repeating pattern? ok
7. 01:14:296 (1) - this part is 1/3 again, might look for the guitar sounds on the 1/3 lines again

Gl with your map!

Marinska wrote:

yo! from Queue

[general]
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shueisha to Tag coloum added

[hard]
00:25:569 (13) - NC fixed
01:17:205 (6) - extend slider by 1/2 ? so you can remove circle there changed
end spin here 01:28:660 changed

[Normal]
Hp 4 , OD & AR 5 changed
00:03:205 (3) - make keep 1.5x disnap.. changed Example:


00:15:932 - add 1/2 slider and remove note in 00:16:114 changed
00:57:205 - add circle? added

okay.. hope this helped...
plz write Fixed,changed,or added
so i can learning about modding from that..
GL with your map~~!

Moo-Chan wrote:

b]My mod for mod from your queue~/b]

[Insane]

1. 00:01:751 (5,6) - You could blanket these better
2. 00:04:478 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:10:660 (1,2,3) - It feels like the triplet isn't flowing into 00:11:023 (4) - at all, I'd change the angle of the triplet to point towards the 4
4. 00:11:205 (5,6,7) - If you do the above change, change this to make it symmetrical again
5. 00:21:751 (5,6,7) - These aren't evenly spaced, the slider is closer
6. 00:27:569 (7,8,9) - These aren't evenly spaced, the slider is further away
7. 00:30:841 (1,2) - Could blanket these better
8. 00:42:478 (4,5) - ^
9. 00:43:751 (3,4) - ^
10. 00:56:478 (1,2,3) - These aren't evenly spaced, slider is closer
11. 01:17:266 (1,2) - Could blanket these better
12. 01:20:114 (1,2,3) - These aren't evenly spaced, the slider is way closer
13. 01:23:387 (2,3,4) - These aren't evenly spaced, slider is further away
14. 01:23:932 (5,6,7) - ^
15. 01:24:478 (1,2,3) - Last note is further away

Good luck with your map