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yuikonnu - Byoumei Koiwazurai

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FrzR
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FrzR
It's okay. Keep it up. :D
CakiP
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CakiP
ga nn ba re !!
litoluna
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litoluna
ga nn ba ru!!!!!!
Alternative
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Alternative
(Ranked)オッスお願いしま～す
litoluna
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litoluna
おっすおるたん。
がんばりまーっす
Forseen
363 posts
Joined November 2010
Forseen
Hi there, mod as promised.

Insane
  1. 00:14:912 (5) - Move this 1 grid to the left - the blanket will look more perfect that way.
  2. 00:20:162 (2) - The end of this slider isn't perfectly stacked with 00:18:662 (1,2,3).
  3. 00:28:225 (7) - Put this in in the same place where 00:28:600 (1) starts (x:296, y:292)?
  4. 00:35:162 (2,3) - Perhaps something like this?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:37:225 (6) - Stack the end of this slider perfectly with the head of 00:36:100 (1) (sorry for so much nazi, lol).
  6. 00:41:162 (3) - One grid left for a more perfect blanket.
  7. 01:00:100 (5) - Remove NC.
  8. 01:04:225 (4) - One grid up? I'm pretty sure you wanted to stack the end of this slider with 01:03:100 (1). If not, then ignore this.
  9. 01:33:100 (1) - I actually got a little confused when played this part for the first time, because of this circle not being stacked with the previous ones, BUT the pattern you made here looks good, so instead of changing something in the following combo, how about you edit the previous one? For example:
    SPOILER
    That way you will have these little jumps with stacks preparing the player for the next pattern.
  10. 01:39:662 (3) - End not stacked with the end of 01:38:912 (1).
  11. 01:44:537 (4) - Leave this where it is, just flip it horizontally.
  12. 01:57:850 (1,2,3,4) - Remove all these and replace with a single slider?
  13. 02:13:412 - I suggest you add a note here, since this part feels a bit too empty otherwise. Maybe something like:
    SPOILER
  14. 02:14:162 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - This sounds a bit overmapped. The music does ''slowly take effect'' here, but it would still be better if you removed 02:14:256 (3) and 02:14:631 (3).
  15. 02:21:100 (6) - Remove NC.
  16. 02:26:537 (4) - Move to x:272, y:172?
  17. 02:26:912 (6) - ^
  18. 02:31:600 (1) - Remove the reverse and replace with notes on red and white tick like you've been doing on the kiai time until now.
  19. 02:43:600 (1) - ^
  20. 02:53:912 (4) - Remove NC here as well.
  21. 03:21:100 (1) - Move this right to the center.
Good job so far, keep it up and have a star!
litoluna
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@Forseen
Almost fixed!!!
thanks :D
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Umi
and i'm done! u should have poke me earlier, really sorry for the huge delay, time to move forward ! ;)

http://puu.sh/8ISkF/62a4595fc5.zip (with somes hitsounds)
litoluna
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litoluna
thanks Umi channn
upload~
litoluna
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litoluna
moved pend!
Unsfamiliar
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Unsfamiliar
Go! ~☆
litoluna
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litoluna
thanks star!! Unsfamiliar~ ;)
Satellite
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Satellite
Hi

[General]
  1. offset +5ms ~ 10ms by Momovely
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:350 (3) - 1grid下に下げて頼む nazi
  2. 00:17:162 (2,3,4) - こういうSpacingわかりづらいと思う、こうやればいい

    img
  3. 00:22:600 (1) - ここにfinishいれるなら 00:16:600 (1) - ここもじゃないの？
  4. 00:30:850 (6) - エンドのFinishはうるせえ俺はVolume下げるかRemove.
  5. 00:42:850 (6) - 上と同じ
  6. 00:46:412 (1) - 音取りがブサイク 00:46:412 - ここにしっかりとした音があるしCircleで拾ったほうがBetterでしょ？
  7. 00:48:287 (2) - 主観だけど流れ的にケツは左のほうが叩きやすさある
    img
  8. 01:38:162 (2,3,4) - 前と同じ
  9. 02:07:412 (4,5,6,1) - 何この流れは、かなりやりづらい感ある
  10. 03:47:725 (2,1) - Nc入れ替え、１番２番の終わりと揃えような
Good Luck
litoluna
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litoluna
@sate

Satellite wrote:

Hi

[General]
  1. offset +5ms ~ 10ms by Momovely
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:350 (3) - 1grid下に下げて頼む nazi
    wakaru
  2. 00:17:162 (2,3,4) - こういうSpacingわかりづらいと思う、こうやればいい

    iyada
    img
  3. 00:22:600 (1) - ここにfinishいれるなら 00:16:600 (1) - ここもじゃないの？
    wakaru
  4. 00:30:850 (6) - エンドのFinishはうるせえ俺はVolume下げるかRemove.
    はうるせえ俺はclap
  5. 00:42:850 (6) - 上と同じ
    はうるせえ俺はclap
  6. 00:46:412 (1) - 音取りがブサイク 00:46:412 - ここにしっかりとした音があるしCircleで拾ったほうがBetterでしょ？

    うん。たしかに。変えます。
  7. 00:48:287 (2) - 主観だけど流れ的にケツは左のほうが叩きやすさある
    img
    okke~
  8. 01:38:162 (2,3,4) - 前と同じ
    iyadayada
  9. 02:07:412 (4,5,6,1) - 何この流れは、かなりやりづらい感ある
    gomennasaigomrennnasai
  10. 03:47:725 (2,1) - Nc入れ替え、１番２番の終わりと揃えような
    mitenakatta.//.
Good Luck
thanks pro
N a s y a
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N a s y a
hihihi

[Insane]

01:34:980 (2) - finishいれてもいいかも？
01:43:605 (1) - このスライダーの終点を01:42:667 (3) - の始点に重ねてみてはどうでしょうか？
03:19:605 (1,2) - スライダーの終点drumのwhistleでもいいかも？

頑張ったけどこれしか書くことありませんでした…
NormalとHardはよくわからないのでmodしませんでした。すいません :(

いい譜面です！がんばって :)
litoluna
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litoluna

N a s y a wrote:

hihihi

[Insane]

01:34:980 (2) - finishいれてもいいかも？
nice!!!wakaru!!
01:43:605 (1) - このスライダーの終点を01:42:667 (3) - の始点に重ねてみてはどうでしょうか？
okです ;)
03:19:605 (1,2) - スライダーの終点drumのwhistleでもいいかも？
確かにハイハットみたいな音があるので参考にしてSampleset Drum Additions Softにしてみました。
頑張ったけどこれしか書くことありませんでした…
NormalとHardはよくわからないのでmodしませんでした。すいません :(

いい譜面です！がんばって :)
N a s y a さんありがとー :)
Quilt
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Quilt
modもどき
SPOILER
23:12 Quilt: はーどの
23:12 Quilt: 03:16:042 (2,3) -
23:12 Quilt: これはちょっと難しい気がする
23:12 Quilt: 最近の譜面見てないから
23:13 Quilt: 最近の譜面で普通に使われてたらごめん
23:13 litoluna: 最近のHardやってないから同じくわからない。
23:13 litoluna: コレ変えとこ。
23:14 Quilt: あと
23:14 Quilt: 03:41:542 (1) -
23:14 Quilt: こことかNC入れてるけど初見だと結構つらいかも
23:16 litoluna: 配置かえるカァ。
23:16 Quilt: 俺の個人的な感想だから、お気に入りなら変えないでｗｑ
23:17 litoluna: testせずに見た目悪くないしいいかなぁ的な感じだったからここは変えよう
23:18 Quilt: つぎいんさねいきます、りとるなさん準備できたらいってください
23:18 Quilt: それまでなんかしてます
23:18 litoluna: OK_desu
23:18 Quilt: OK Ore Genki
23:18 litoluna: Uo~~
litoluna
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litoluna
Quiltnyan arigatto
Lecana
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Lecana
Hi~
Byoumei Kakinshitai
[Hard]
01:44:542 (3) - 曲げてみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
02:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - スライダーに変えてみてはどうでしょう
SPOILER
03:40:605 (1) - 03:43:792 (1) -
ここまでの間が
少しHardにしてはむずかしいような気がしました・・。

[Insane]
00:54:855 (1,4) - remove clap?
01:16:042 (2,4) - ^
01:34:980 (1,2) - 音取りに違和感を感じたので提案を
SPOILER
いい曲！いい譜面！かわe~(TAT)
りとるなちゃんのほうが可愛いけど
litoluna
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litoluna

Lecana wrote:

Hi~
Byoumei Kakinshitai
[Hard]
01:44:542 (3) - 曲げてみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
okです
02:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - スライダーに変えてみてはどうでしょう
SPOILER
このままで!
03:40:605 (1) - 03:43:792 (1) -
ここまでの間が
少しHardにしてはむずかしいような気がしました・・。
Quiltさんのと合わせて少し変えました、

[Insane]
00:54:855 (1,4) - remove clap?
01:16:042 (2,4) - ^
backに音あるのでつけたままで行きます！他のかたに指摘されたら直します。
01:34:980 (1,2) - 音取りに違和感を感じたので提案を
SPOILER
ここシンバル音しっかりとっていきたさあるからこのまままま
いい曲！いい譜面！かわe~(TAT)
りとるなちゃんのほうが可愛いけど
lecanachaん　ありがっと
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
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Abe Nana

Hi. From M4M

[General]
  1. Videoの大きさが848ｘ480だけど多分これアンランクド。
[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:01:600 (1) - slider is unsnapped
  2. 00:11:917 (3) - Unrankable. slier's portion are out of playground
  3. 00:23:917 (1,1) - some near these notes. so close. it work do not fit for normal's player
  4. 00:54:480 - 00:57:480 - should use these time 'soft-slidertick4'
  5. 01:41:167 - add whitsle to slider's end
  6. 03:44:355 - add clap to slider's end?
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:600 (1) - slider is unsnapped
  2. 00:16:417 - スライダーの終点Whistleを追加したほうが音がいいです
  3. 01:34:230 (4,1) - (4)の頭と(1)が近すぎて違和感があるので距離を撮ったりちょっと左に移したりするといいです
  4. 03:41:167 (2,1) - 距離を考えなおす必要がります。Anti-jumpだとしても距離が曖昧なので。
  5. 03:41:917 (2,1) - 03:43:042 (2,1) - ここも同じ
  6. 03:48:855 (4) - Unrankable. ArrowがHP barに重なったらいけません
[Insane]
  1. check in Widesreen support
  2. 00:01:600 (1) - slider is unsnapped
  3. 00:24:855 (1,2) - スペーシングを近くしましょう。1/4ならまだしも1/6なのでこんなスペーシングならやりづらいです
  4. 01:33:105 (1,3,5,7) - これは(1)が01:32:917 (6) - ココから始まるようにスタックするほうが良さそうです
  5. 01:39:667 (3) - これと01:36:667 (1) - これはNew comboを統一したほうが良さそうです
  6. 02:13:605 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ちょっとここのNCは乱雑だと思いますけど。こうやる必要はなさそう
litoluna
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litoluna

-Chata- wrote:


Hi. From M4M

[General]
  1. Videoの大きさが848ｘ480だけど多分これアンランクド。

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:600 (1) - slider is unsnapped
  2. 00:16:417 - スライダーの終点Whistleを追加したほうが音がいいです
  3. 01:34:230 (4,1) - (4)の頭と(1)が近すぎて違和感があるので距離を撮ったりちょっと左に移したりするといいです
    始まる位置はずらしたくないので上下曲げる方向変えてみました。
  4. 03:41:167 (2,1) - 距離を考えなおす必要がります。Anti-jumpだとしても距離が曖昧なので。
  5. 03:41:917 (2,1) - 03:43:042 (2,1) - ここも同じ
    音取りから帰る必要性がありそうだったので音取り変えて1.3でつなぎました~!
  6. 03:48:855 (4) - Unrankable. ArrowがHP barに重なったらいけません
[Insane]
  1. check in Widesreen support
  2. 00:01:600 (1) - slider is unsnapped
  3. 00:24:855 (1,2) - スペーシングを近くしましょう。1/4ならまだしも1/6なのでこんなスペーシングならやりづらいです
  4. 01:33:105 (1,3,5,7) - これは(1)が01:32:917 (6) - ココから始まるようにスタックするほうが良さそうです
  5. 01:39:667 (3) - これと01:36:667 (1) - これはNew comboを統一したほうが良さそうです
  6. 02:13:605 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ちょっとここのNCは乱雑だと思いますけど。こうやる必要はなさそう
chataさんmoddingありがとう！！！
記載のないところはそのままfixedです :)
videoに関しては追って直していきます~ ;)
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
[General]
The Kiai is only a TAD bit long, so end the Kiais in their respective timelines:
01:28:605
02:49:605
03:46:605

Wait, they all have 605 at the end...

[Insane]
00:05:917 (1,2,3) - Why not make this the same pattern as 00:02:917 (1,2,3)
00:57:667 (2) - Can you change the slider? I don't think it flows well under my case right now
01:29:730 - The slider velocity I think is currently too fast, considering that his part is more relaxing than the others
01:40:042 (2) - Make this half a beat long with a back slide because I think there's a guitar sound at 01:40:230
01:43:042 (2) - ^
02:50:730 - Slider velocity still a bit too fast, same situation with 01:29:730
03:46:605 - End Kiai here
03:47:730 - Same thing with 02:50:730 and 01:29:730

[Hard]
00:33:667 (2,3) - Don't you think that this is a bit trick for hard difficulty players? Usually people like Amamiya Yuko use this in there more harder difficulties (EX: Cruel Clocks)

01:29:730 - Same thing as the insane difficulty
02:06:667 (2,3) - Same thing as the first mod for this difficulty
02:50:730 - Same as insane
03:47:730 - ^

[Umi's Normal]
The slidertick that has the drum under S:C4 needs to be added in these places:
00:25:980
00:28:980
00:34:980
00:40:980
00:43:980
00:46:980
00:57:480
01:43:980
02:04:980
02:07:980

THIS WILL SO GET RANKED
Midge
475 posts
Joined December 2012
Midge
here for the m4m :V

[Umi's Normal]
in my general opinion, 01:22:605 (1,2) usually looks better than 01:19:605 (1,2)
but whatever man, it fits.

00:23:917 (1,1) - overlapping notes/sliders with spinners is confusing imo. maybe a slider instead of a spinner?
00:36:105 (2) - curve a little? (nazi)
01:58:605 (1) - curve
02:22:605 (1) - you should move the red anchor to the slider tick http://puu.sh/a7hNe/426ccc65b3.jpg
02:31:230 (4,1) - kinda dirty blanket :S it'd look nicer closer to the slider
02:32:730 (2,3,4,1) - keep this consistent with 2 http://puu.sh/a7hW1/d01ac65e9b.jpg

[Hard]
00:06:480 (2,3) - wonky overlap imo
00:15:667 (3) - ctrl+g
00:21:667 (3) - ^
01:13:417 - i think a note should go here
01:15:855 (2,3) - replace with circles instead of sliders (keep consistent with 01:09:855 (2,3)
01:22:605 (1) - 2 sliders instead of 1
02:59:730 (2) - copy+paste 02:58:605 (1) instead
03:21:105 (1,2,3,4) - it would look better as a line http://puu.sh/a7iAL/9dade7641d.jpg

[Insane]
00:41:167 (3) - ctrl+g
01:13:980 (3,5) - wonky blanket, 3 should be deeper http://puu.sh/a7iSD/e193c392e9.jpg
03:04:042 (1,2) - use a slider instead

i couldn't find much ;n;

gl o/
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hey. M4M in your queue.

Umi's Normal

English Version
  1. 00:01:600 (1) - According to the AiMod, it says that this slider isn't snap.
  2. 00:03:480 (4) - Flip it vertically and stack it with the head of 00:05:917 (3) for a better flow.
  3. 00:11:917 (3) - Isn't the curve a bit too outside of the grid?
  4. 01:11:355 (2) - Try Ctrl + G and Ctrl + G to 01:12:105 (3) to see if it has a better flow.
  5. 01:34:980 (1) - It feels like the 1/2 slider is too sudden. Try making another thing, or keep the way it is.
  6. 02:00:105 (3) - Try Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, and Ctrl + G for a better flow.
  7. 02:53:355 (2) - Nazi, but stack the tail perfectly to the tail of 02:51:855 (4) .
  8. 03:20:355 (2) - Still nazi, but move the last point to x:247 y:169 so 03:21:105 (1) could be on the same line.
French Version
  1. 00:01:600 (1) - Sur l'AiMod, il dit que le slider n'est pas sur une tige.
  2. 00:03:480 (4) - Inverse verticallement et empile avec la tête de 00:05:917 (3) pour une meilleure flow.
  3. 00:11:917 (3) - Pense-tu que la courbe n'est pas trop endehors?
  4. 01:11:355 (2) - Fait Ctrl + G et Ctrl + G à 01:12:105 (3) et regarde s'il y a une meilleure flow.
  5. 01:34:980 (1) - Ça me donne un sentiment qu'un 1/2 slider est trop soudain. Essaye de faire autre chose ou laisse-le comme il était.
  6. 02:00:105 (3) - Essaye Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J et Ctrl + G pour une meilleure flow.
  7. 02:53:355 (2) - Nazi, mais empile la queue parfaitement avec the queue de 02:51:855 (4) .
  8. 03:20:355 (2) - Encore un nazi, mais bouge la dernière point à x:247 y:169 pour que 03:21:105 (1) soit sur une même ligne.

Hard

  1. 00:02:355 (3) - Nazi. Move the second point to x:209 y:242 and the last one to x:194 y:206 to fix the blanket.
  2. 00:15:667 (3) - Try Ctrl + G for a better flow.
  3. 00:21:667 (3) - Same thing as the suggestion above.
  4. 00:46:886 (3,4) - Move them to x:91 y:212 so that these two can be on the same line with 00:46:605 (2) .
  5. 00:47:730 (6) - Make the curve a little less? It has a bit of an ugly curve, personally.
  6. 00:59:355 (1) - Copy and paste 00:58:605 (1) and do Ctrl + J and Ctrl + H. It should make 00:58:605 (1,1) a mirror pattern.
  7. 01:12:105 (1) - Move the first point to x:410 y:182 to get a blanket pattern with 01:12:855 (3) . It feels more beautiful.
  8. 02:52:980 (2) - Maybe lighten the curve a bit? Like the curve of 02:52:605 (1) .

Insane

  1. 00:32:167 (2) - Maybe a mirror pattern (copy and paste 00:31:605 (1) and do Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J) should fit here.
  2. 01:13:980 (3,5) - Maybe a proper blanket here?
No major problems, fun map. Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask on the forum PM or by poking me in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map and should deserve a star.
Aeonian Sonder
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Aeonian Sonder
Am I the only person when hearing "はんぶん" hearing "한번?"
AllStar12
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ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┏( ┏ ՞ ਊ ՞)┐⁾⁾


  • General

  1. Really feel the need to say this but I would love it if you could also map further to the end. For example from 03:49:605 to 04:01:417 would be circle notes and sliders and then top it off with a spinner from 04:01:605 to maybe 04:04:417 ? Anyway that's just what I feel about this so you can decide if you want to or not since you're the mapper. :3


  • Insane



    Hitsound

  1. 00:10:605 (1) - Sampleset is set to Soft even though the whole song is being played already on Soft hitsound, just change it to Auto anyway. Also, missing Whistle on the slider's tail?
  2. 00:11:355 (3) - Missing Whistle on the slider's tail? Since this part of the song plays similar to parts like 00:05:355 (3,4) - and 00:02:355 (4) -
  3. 00:24:105 (1) - Add Clap at the end of the slider?
  4. 00:25:230 (2) - Add Whistle on the third repeat because there's a strong drum sound as well on 00:25:355
  5. 00:27:386 (2) - Add Whistle on the circle note because there is a drum sound on this part? You also did it as well for 00:30:386 (2) -
  6. 00:48:480 (4) - Would say it's unnecessary to have a Finish here since there's no cymbal to it since it still sounds the same as 00:42:292 (2,3,4) - and other parts that are similar. However if you intentionally did it to just spice up that part and lead it to the next part then you can just keep it I guess.
  7. 00:43:230 (7) - Understand why you have Finish here but it doesn't quite sound like 00:31:230 (6) - so I would suggest removing it but you decide.
  8. 00:55:230 (3,4) - Probably unnecessary for me to say this but if you want you can add Whistle for both of these to deepen the sound and would lead to the slider.
  9. 01:03:105 (1,2,3,4) - Would also sound better to have Whistles on the end of these 4 sliders that are on the red ticks in my opinion.
  10. 01:09:855 (6) - Can also add in Whistle with the Finish on the slider's head to continue the beat and this part does have that beat.
  11. 01:21:855 (6) - ^
  12. 01:28:605 (1) - Missing Finish here
  13. 01:29:730 (1,2,3,4) - You can also have Whistle for every white tick from 01:29:730 ~ 01:31:230 if you want but if it's too noisy for you then you can leave it. If you do consider on doing it I advise you to do the same for the other two kiais.
  14. 01:46:230 (2) - Add Whistle on the third repeat because there's a strong drum sound as well on 01:46:355
  15. 02:01:042 (6) - Missing Whistle for the beat here
  16. 02:02:167 (3) - Missing two Whistles on the red ticks that the slider is on
  17. 02:09:480 (4) - As mentioned about it on 00:48:480 (4) -
  18. 02:09:855 (1) - Similar to this part at 00:48:855 (1) - but the only difference is that you added Whistle there and not at this part.
  19. 02:10:980 (2) - Add Clap here regardless of not it been strong as 00:51:480 (2) - ? Just to keep the pattern going from there.
  20. 02:16:980 (2) - Missing Clap on the slider's head
  21. 02:24:105 (1,2,3,4) - As mentioned for 01:03:105 (1,2,3,4) - , you can so the same here as well if you want.
  22. 02:30:855 (6) - Can also add in Whistle with the Finish on the slider's head to continue the beat and this part does have that beat.
  23. 02:36:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is similar to 01:15:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but the difference is that you used the hitsounds quite differently.
    Example Chart
  24. 02:42:855 (6) - As mentioned about it for 02:30:855 (6) -
  25. 02:50:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - As mentioned about it for 01:29:730 (1,2,3,4) -
  26. 03:00:855 (1) - Missing Whistle at the slider's end
  27. 03:04:605 (1) - Add Finish for that cymbal sound on this part but since it's a light cymbal sound and if you think it sounds bit too loud then you can lower the volume on this part.
  28. 03:16:323 (3) - Intentionally not set the slider's end with Addition to Drum and having it a Finish there like the previous slider?
  29. 03:27:855 (6) - Can have a Whistle on the slider's head here as mentioned for the others that sounds similar to this part
  30. 03:32:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part also sound quite similar to ones like 02:36:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:15:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Consider this part having the same hitsound pattern as the others starting from 03:33:105 ~ 03:34:417, wouldn't hurt.
  31. 03:37:605 (1) - Intentionally added a Finish on the slider's head here? Doesn't seem sound like it's needed here since there's no cymbal sound or strong meaning to have it there but it's your call.
  32. 03:39:105 (1) - ^
  33. 03:47:730 (1,2,3,4) - As mentioned about it for 01:29:730 (1,2,3,4) -

    Hitsound Recheck

  34. 00:14:917 (5) - Doesn't really have a beat here for the slider's head so I suggest removing the whistle here. The beat is on the white tick but it's in the middle of the slider so can't do anything about that :/
  35. 00:17:917 (5) - ^
  36. 00:20:917 (5) - ^
  37. 00:19:417 (6) - Remove Whistle because there's no beat to that part?
  38. 00:22:605 (1) - Remove Finish and add Whistle on the slider's head for the beat? Doesn't seem to sound like there's a cymbal sound here. You also did the same for 00:16:605 (1) - and they both sound quite similar


    Note Placements

    Good for me so not going to touch on this part based on my experiences.

    Results

    First Try


    Second Try
    Replay





  • Hard



    Hitsound

  1. 00:09:855 (3) - Missing Whistle on the slider's end
  2. 00:16:042 (4) - Remove Whistle on the slider's end
  3. 00:16:605 (1) - Remove Finish due to no cymbal sound or not having a strong meaning to it. Add Whistle here since the beat sounds like it and you also did the same for your Insane Difficulty
  4. 00:17:917 (1) - 00:14:917 (5) - Doesn't really have a beat here for the slider's head so I suggest removing the whistle here. The beat is on the white tick but it's in the middle of the slider so can't do anything about that :/
  5. 00:22:605 (1) - Remove Finish and add Whistle on the slider's head for the beat? Doesn't seem to sound like there's a cymbal sound here
  6. 00:30:855 (6) - You have 00:31:230 as Clap but for insane you have it as Finish/Clap so I guess you decide what to do with these two (As of now I would just suggest having that part as only Clap)
  7. 00:44:167 (2) - Missing Whistle on slider's head
  8. 00:48:292 (2) - Remove Finish
  9. 00:54:292 (2,3,4) - The hitsound is placed differently here when compare to Insane so I suggest copying the hitsound from Insane to Hard:
    Example Chart

    Note Placements

  10. 02:24:855 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Intentionally have the Distance snap set to 1.50x for this part?
  11. 03:28:605 (1,2) - distance snap between here is 1.18x, set it to 1.30x since that's your common distance snap


    Timing

  12. 00:13:323 Remove the green inherited point since there's no notes on it or between there.

    Flow is good for me but watch out for the New Combos such as 00:52:605 (1,2,1,2,1) - . Recheck your Hard and Insane Difficulties for your new combos if used improperly :S ( Believe you're going for every big white tick yes?)


  • Umi's Normal



    Hitsound

  1. 00:15:105 (3) - Have a Whistle on the red tick since there's a beat there?
  2. 00:19:605 (1) - ^
  3. 00:21:105 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head since there's a beat here
  4. 00:22:605 (1) - ^
  5. 00:23:167 (2) - ^
  6. 00:27:105 (2) - ^
  7. 00:25:605 (1) - Maybe a Whistle on the red tick of the slider?
  8. 00:28:605 (1) - Have Whistle on the slider's head and on the red tick?
  9. 00:30:105 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head
  10. 00:33:105 (3) - Whistle on both ends?
  11. 00:34:605 (1) - Whistle on the slider's head
  12. 00:36:105 (2) - Whistle on both ends?
  13. 00:37:605 (1) - Whistle on the red tick
  14. 00:39:105 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head
  15. 00:40:605 (1) - Whistle on the slider's head and on the red tick?
  16. 00:42:105 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head
  17. 00:43:605 (1) - Whistle on the red tick
  18. 00:45:105 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head
  19. 00:46:605 (1) - Whistle on the slider's head and on the red tick?
  20. 00:48:105 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head
  21. 00:50:355 (2) - Whistle on the slider's head ( Pretty sure you know where I'm getting at this point so you can accept and continue with the ones that are like this or decline these, will move on not saying this)
  22. 01:04:605 (1) - Missing Finish
  23. 01:09:855 (3) - ^ Since there's a cymbal sound here unless it's not strong enough for you to agree
  24. 01:10:605 (1) - ^
  25. 01:21:105 (3) - ^ On the slider's end
  26. 01:22:605 (1) - Finish on the slider's head
  27. 01:40:605 (1) - ^
  28. 02:30:855 (3) - Finish
  29. 02:31:605 (1) - Finish on the slider's head
  30. 02:42:105 (3) - On the slider's end
  31. 03:04:605 (1) - There's a cymbal sound here but it's pretty low so you can leave it if you want or have Finish here
  32. 03:27:855 (3) - Finish on the slider's head
  33. 03:28:605 (1) - ^
  34. 03:39:105 (3) - Finish at the slider's end
  35. 03:40:605 (1) - Finish on the slider's head

    Note Placements

  36. 00:01:600 (1) - AIMod says it isn't snapped

    If I'm right about the Hitsound then carefully check again to add in whistles for those kind of beats, if not then you can decline it.

Message me if you have any questions or comments and call me back for a recheck when you get more mods after this. ^^

Good Luck on ranking this litoluna! :D
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litoluna
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I was helpful ;)
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litoluna~ here's my m4m!

Uni's Normal

  1. 01:35:167 - as this sound is not too audible, use this rythm not to confuse 3/2beat
  2. 02:24:480 (2,3,4,1) - make it perfect square~
  3. 02:31:230 (4,1) - blanket
  4. 02:50:730 (2,3,4) - volume 60~70% will be best

Hard

  1. 01:02:167 (2) - doesn't fit with song well. change into circle+slider,
  2. 01:18:667 (2) - this circle hides under my scorebar xD
  3. 02:16:980 (1,2) - quite confusing to me..stack please
  4. 03:00:855 (2) - under the hp bar!!
  5. 03:07:605 (3) - try this rythm~

Insane

  1. 01:02:355 (5,6,7,8) - this seems better for flow

Not much to say. Take my star~when i got a kudosu :p
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well plz forgive my laziness for no reply but i fixed lot of things, it was helpfull thx :3

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TitleUnicode:病名恋ワズライ
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ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:litoluna
Version:Umi's Normal
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113,143,71355,2,0,P|72:188|64:240,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,235,72105,2,0,P|224:144|165:46,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,143,73230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,235,73605,6,0,P|233:239|283:235,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,129,74355,2,0,P|425:126|509:137,2,165,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,158,75855,1,10,0:0:0:0:
106,113,76230,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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226,266,77355,2,0,L|203:134,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,47,78105,2,0,P|274:77|419:25,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,117,79230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,211,79605,6,0,P|372:196|320:210,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,320,80355,2,0,P|373:334|425:320,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,211,81105,2,0,B|376:162|398:93|398:93|343:66|281:97,1,220,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,82230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,162,82605,6,0,P|97:107|104:52,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,83355,2,0,P|206:161|199:216,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,304,84105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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133,304,85605,6,0,B|97:261|125:200|125:200|151:138|123:95,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,145,86730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
34,255,87105,2,0,L|133:304,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,339,87855,2,0,P|285:315|316:265,2,110,2|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,49,89730,6,0,P|339:39|285:49,1,110
216,135,90480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,220,90855,2,0,P|339:229|393:220,1,110
463,135,91605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91792,12,0,94605,0:0:0:0:
308,107,94980,6,0,P|356:145|371:221,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,283,95730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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84,108,96855,2,0,P|124:56|188:48,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,84,97605,6,0,P|318:92|395:76,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,63,98167,2,0,P|459:140|410:239,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,246,99105,2,0,P|276:234|223:245,2,110,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,342,100230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,339,100605,6,0,P|116:276|124:196,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,126,101730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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342,144,103605,6,0,B|287:144|287:144|246:96|281:19,2,165,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105105,12,4,106605,0:0:0:0:
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349,76,119167,2,0,P|416:109|444:219,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,100,121605,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,60,121980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,100,123105,2,0,B|184:85|139:108|139:108|92:252,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,309,124230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
281,313,124605,6,0,B|356:313|356:313|410:313|433:276,1,165,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,110,125730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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260,18,133230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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331,287,134355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,239,134730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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430,239,136605,6,0,P|409:319|386:357,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,284,137355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,351,137730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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302,284,139230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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27,205,144855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
138,217,145230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,205,146355,2,0,P|361:200|412:240,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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378,22,148230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,39,148605,6,0,P|234:92|232:146,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,218,149355,2,0,P|309:283|249:369,2,165,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,123,150855,1,6,0:0:0:0:
149,164,151230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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180,133,152730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,70,153105,2,0,P|320:164|270:257,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,258,154230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,351,154605,6,0,P|270:364|323:350,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,241,155355,2,0,L|527:319,2,165,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,209,156855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,100,157230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,108,157605,6,0,P|396:105|466:45,2,110,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,40,158730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,79,159105,2,0,B|130:126|170:181|170:181|239:273,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,349,160230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
379,262,160605,6,0,P|412:306|418:369,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,220,161730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,112,162105,2,0,B|368:97|452:114|452:114|494:170,1,220,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,275,163230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,328,163605,6,0,B|359:307|301:326|301:326|238:346|193:320,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,242,164730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,165,165105,2,0,B|238:139|301:159|301:159|359:178|408:157,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,62,166230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,53,166605,6,0,P|183:60|124:91,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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455,36,169230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,142,169605,5,4,0:0:0:0:
222,348,170730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,263,171105,2,0,P|141:209|148:154,1,110
230,82,171855,2,0,P|284:93|338:81,1,110
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236,39,174105,2,0,P|135:73|114:185,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,148,175230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
323,120,175605,6,0,P|297:222|197:256,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,202,176730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
94,92,177105,2,0,P|147:78|200:91,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,213,180105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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415,306,184605,5,6,0:0:0:0:
129,140,185730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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492,148,187230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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492,148,189105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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302,244,198105,2,0,B|226:215|163:256|163:256|62:238,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,153,199230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
55,47,199605,6,0,P|92:37|166:37,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,62,200355,2,0,L|242:170,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,277,201105,5,2,0:0:0:0:
321,334,201480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
406,265,201855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,168,202230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,168,202605,6,0,L|133:168,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,270,203355,2,0,L|284:270,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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70,172,205230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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120,63,207480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,255,209730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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351,325,211230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
Thanks Allstar and Prayer!!

update~
Momovely
Momovely
動画のアス比がおかしかったので

１６：９でエンコードしたやつ

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litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
ももべりありがと
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
good map!
hope this can be ranked >.<
starred
btw, if your map need mod you can told me whenever~ :)
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
[General]
  1. Offset -8 feels much better to me remember to resnap all notes/lines and the preview time
    mod is done with your old timing
  2. I recommend tick rate 2 for Hard and Insane, especially because of the kiai and some sv changes. Normal might be fine as is
[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:39:855 (3,1) - blanket could be better here
  2. 01:34:980 (1) - not enough time from the end of the spinner to this slider especially since this is the lowest diff, give more time to recover
  3. 01:57:855 - unnecessary green line
  4. 02:49:605 (1,2) - nc should be on 2 to be consistent with 01:27:855 (4,1) - . if you ask me, the rhythm the second time is a lot better too, so i'd go with that for the first one
  5. 03:46:605 (1,2) - ^ or change the first one to be like these two
[Hard]
  1. Try AR6.5. I think it fits a bit better
  2. 00:13:323 - unnecessary green line
    great
[Insane]
  1. you could try AR8.5 with this, I think it plays well :D
  2. 00:14:917 (5) - some sliders like this are skipping a note on the white tick, up to you to map but this rhythm would fit the drum better
    SPOILER
  3. 01:14:355 (5) - this slider especially skips notes in the vocal, I would recommend replacing this with 1/2 rhythm
  4. 01:25:605 (1) - ^
    as I said, too many sliders skipping important beats. fun to play though
let me know
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna

kamisamaaa wrote:

good map!
hope this can be ranked >.<
starred
btw, if your map need mod you can told me whenever~ :)
wow thanks star~ ;)

captin1 wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset -8 feels much better to me remember to resnap all notes/lines and the preview time
    mod is done with your old timing
    :arrow:ok~
  2. I recommend tick rate 2 for Hard and Insane, especially because of the kiai and some sv changes. Normal might be fine as is
    :arrow:changed tick rate 2
[Hard]
  1. Try AR6.5. I think it fits a bit better
    :arrow:fixed
  2. 00:13:323 - unnecessary green line
    :arrow:oops. fixed
    great
[Insane]
  1. you could try AR8.5 with this, I think it plays well :D
    :arrow:fixed
  2. 00:14:917 (5) - some sliders like this are skipping a note on the white tick, up to you to map but this rhythm would fit the drum better
    SPOILER
    :arrow:leave something as it is. keeping Guitar follow Rhythm
  3. 01:14:355 (5) - this slider especially skips notes in the vocal, I would recommend replacing this with 1/2 rhythm
    :arrow:fixed
  4. 01:25:605 (1) - ^
    :arrow:fixed
    as I said, too many sliders skipping important beats. fun to play though
let me know
thanks captin ;)
I really appreciate your kindness.
Tenseki
803 posts
Joined November 2013
Tenseki
Hello
I love your maps of yuikonnu
Here's star,
Go Ranked!
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Tenseki

thanks<3 ;)
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

captin1 wrote:

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:39:855 (3,1) - blanket could be better here
  2. 01:34:980 (1) - not enough time from the end of the spinner to this slider especially since this is the lowest diff, give more time to recover
  3. 01:57:855 - unnecessary green line
  4. 02:49:605 (1,2) - nc should be on 2 to be consistent with 01:27:855 (4,1) - . if you ask me, the rhythm the second time is a lot better too, so i'd go with that for the first one
  5. 03:46:605 (1,2) - ^ or change the first one to be like these two
k all fixed thx :3
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