Orange Caramel - Catallena [Osu|Taiko] · forum

chaee

chaee 2014-07-06T01:24:26+00:00

m4m From: chaee's queue [NM 4/4] Status: CLOSED

thanks for your mod

[Normal]

00:17:937 (3) - make this slider longer
00:18:645 (4) - replace with a straight slider
00:20:063 (1) - i think this curve here is too large.
00:21:008 (2) - add a note here and move 00:21:480 (2) - to the next white tick
00:25:496 (3) - too curved. straighten a bit maybe?
00:26:677 (5) - remove this note here
00:32:583 (2) - ^
00:37:543 (3) - remove this and move 00:37:780 (1) - in its place
00:44:630 (6,7) - fix blanket
00:50:771 (1) - stack with 00:48:882 (5) - 's head and curve more to compliment 00:51:716 (2) -
00:52:661 (3) - move this closer to 00:51:716 (2) - 's end
00:54:078 (4) - here feels empty add a note
00:58:094 (4) - remove
01:03:528 (4) - add a note and move slider down
01:07:307 (2) - ^
01:11:087 (4) - ^
01:20:299 (2) - remove
01:24:551 (6) - there shouldn't be a break here
01:39:905 (1,2,3,4) - you could replace these with smaller sliders..
01:44:157 (2) - move up
01:57:622 (4) - remove
01:58:331 (1) - add a note here and move everything else down some
02:01:874 (6) - remove
02:16:047 (3) - ^
02:23:370 (5) - slider should end here
02:33:055 (2) - remove
02:36:126 (1) - add a note here and move spinner down by one beat
02:47:464 (1,2,3) - fix blanket if note space out the notes
02:49:354 (4) - add a note and move slider down
02:51:244 (6) - there's a beat here add a note
02:58:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these blankets are ugly please fix
03:04:945 (3) - stack on 03:04:000 (2) - 's head

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-06T10:01:22+00:00

chaee

chaee wrote:
m4m From: chaee's queue [NM 4/4] Status: CLOSED

thanks for your mod

[Normal]

00:17:937 (3) - make this slider longer nope
00:18:645 (4) - replace with a straight slider ^
00:20:063 (1) - i think this curve here is too large. fixed
00:21:008 (2) - add a note here and move 00:21:480 (2) - to the next white tick nope
00:25:496 (3) - too curved. straighten a bit maybe? fixed
00:26:677 (5) - remove this note here fixed
00:32:583 (2) - ^ nope
00:37:543 (3) - remove this and move 00:37:780 (1) - in its place fixed
00:44:630 (6,7) - fix blanket it just cant move ;-;
00:50:771 (1) - stack with 00:48:882 (5) - 's head and curve more to compliment 00:51:716 (2) - this is good
00:52:661 (3) - move this closer to 00:51:716 (2) - 's end fixed
00:54:078 (4) - here feels empty add a note fixed
00:58:094 (4) - remove nope
01:03:528 (4) - add a note and move slider down okay
01:07:307 (2) - ^ nah
01:11:087 (4) - ^ ^
01:20:299 (2) - remove ^
01:24:551 (6) - there shouldn't be a break here its okay tho
01:39:905 (1,2,3,4) - you could replace these with smaller sliders.. done
01:44:157 (2) - move up
01:57:622 (4) - remove
01:58:331 (1) - add a note here and move everything else down some
02:01:874 (6) - remove
02:16:047 (3) - ^
02:23:370 (5) - slider should end here
02:33:055 (2) - remove
02:36:126 (1) - add a note here and move spinner down by one beat
02:47:464 (1,2,3) - fix blanket if note space out the notes
02:49:354 (4) - add a note and move slider down
02:51:244 (6) - there's a beat here add a note
02:58:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these blankets are ugly please fix not to me
03:04:945 (3) - stack on 03:04:000 (2) - 's head

fixed some, thanks

-[ Asuna ]-

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Hi~
From my Queue

[General]
who's gokuhan ? you can remove it.. since there is gokugohan12468.. you can add gokuhan if
gokugohan have a ranked map and he change the username, so you can add new username and old username well, gokugohan12468 itself that wanted to put the gokuhan into the tags

remove widescreen etc since you dont have any SB done
and try to use different combo color (cari yang beda warna dasar'a)i think its good now

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanketing ?
00:20:536 (1,3) - overlapped purposely
00:32:346 (1) - blanket properly
00:34:236 (3) - ^
00:36:126 (2) - ^
00:47:937 (2,3) - repaire the paralel
00:50:771 (1) - blanket can be improved
00:57:386 (2,3) - 1/2 slider.. it's easy diff
01:03:527 (2) - blanket properly
01:07:779 (2) - ^
01:07:779 (2,1) - overlapped
01:35:181 (6) - blanket can be improved
01:41:323 (2) - ^
01:49:354 (3,5) - overlapped
01:53:134 (1,1) - ^
02:06:362 (1) - blanket ?
02:12:504 (1) - blanketing here.. so isnt be overlapped
02:13:921 (3) - blanket properly
02:23:370 (5) - blanket can be improved
02:32:819 (1) - blanket properly,make slider more curved to blanket.. also in all part which like this
02:32:819 (1) - blanket can be improved
03:06:834 (1) - ^

[Normal]
Open AiMod check distance snap.. Fix it blame it on my editor </3
00:16:283 (1,3) - overlapped
00:25:496 (3) - the tail overlapped with 00:23:842 (1) - it's not important but.. better you move it
01:46:047 (6) - blanket can be improved fixed
01:46:992 (7,5) - overlapped ^
02:47:937 (3) - blanket properly ^
03:06:834 (5,6) - blanket properly

ahh.. sumaannne.. bored..
pass collab it's 3 minutes song.. i'm feel so sleepy cuz i'm modding at 05:00 am
abis sahur...
saran di normal mending banyakin 1/1 atau 1/2 slider.. terlalu banyak circle itu..
ya gk tau sih.. bagiku itu agak susah buat normal diff.. karna ini map anyar bukan map jadul xD
kalo map jadul kebanyakan circle semua

PS: good luck~ hope this helped..

yg aku ngga tandain artinya dah fixed, thanks ya

Gaia

Gaia wrote:
From my Queue & 'cuz you're awesome <333

[General]
Yeah forgive me for skipping all of taiko lmao. I played for fun tho? (and failed so miserably LOL) LOL ME TOO
You have a map skin... But it's the default osu skin? lol? (And it only applies to normal and collab, easy has no skin) deleted the skin becuz im bored lmao

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanket this more?
00:29:984 (3) - I'd rotate this 180 degrees then Ctrl + G, so it goes more in a circle
00:31:874 - This is a down beat (start of a measure) I don't think you should ignore it
00:33:291 (2) - maybe (204, 220) so it connects smoother?
00:34:236 (3) - bad blanket? copy 00:33:291 (2) - and paste right there :p
00:48:882 (3) - Isn't parallel with the other 2 sliders
00:51:717 (2) - shift it down a lil bit?
00:55:732 (2) - I wouldn't even use 1/2 notes in Easys.. so yeah
00:57:386 (2,3,4) - Same as above
00:58:330 (1) - Might be just be but I feel this spinner is kinda random
01:03:527 (2,3) - Blanket?
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - from now on I won't talk about these 1/2 notes but yea I wouldn't use them
01:15:338 (5) - the reverse lands on a upbeat where the music doesn't really match imo
01:55:968 (2) - Blanket better
02:03:528 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack in an easy but up to u (not to mention the triplet)
02:05:417 (2,3,4) - ^
02:44:157 (1,2) - something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/9Y7i0/de8637c803.jpg
02:47:464 (4) - yeah I wouldn't stack ever in an easy
02:48:882 (2) - Blanket more?

[Normal]
00:50:771 (1) - stack better
00:55:496 (2,3,4) - should match 00:57:622 (2,3,4) - Take out or add another one (I'd take out so not overmapped)
02:05:180 (2,3,4,5) - spread them all out? It's pretty confusing the way you have it rn
02:47:464 (1,2) - I'd do this? http://puu.sh/9Y7XT/a2b74c5b49.jpg
03:06:362 (4,5) - blanket?

Personally I think notes placed awkwardly.. Maybe you could watch Auto-kun play and just listen to where you're putting your beats down? Well that's what I did for my map lol.

[Collab]
00:23:133 (8) - This should end on a blue tick o: Since this is supposed to be insane(I think?) you should follow the music more
00:24:787 (5,6) - The spacing between these 2 are the same between 00:24:669 (4,5) - even though they're 1/4 of a beat different (Misleading!)
00:29:039 (4,5,6,7) - tbh I don't think doubles suit the rhythm here
00:31:874 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds off too
00:36:126 (4,5) - ^
00:38:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - random stream imo, careful not to overmap
00:42:267 - if you really want a stream.. I'd say around here (The clapping in the background)
00:52:424 (4) - Follow your pattern.. Move this out?
00:55:496 (2,3,4,5) - again sounds off to me
01:04:000 (1,2) - blanket better
01:48:173 (4) - Don't stack 2 identical sliders together :]
01:50:535 (1,2) - blanket?
01:55:260 (1,2,3,4) - you had doubles before but now you've spread them all out nice and even, very misleading :] Besides, doubles fit music more
02:55:732 (1) - the *dooo doo? (lmao o-o) starts 1/2 a note before, so i'd start my slider there (and shift couple notes after too)
02:58:567 - The *nooon? (idk lol) sound starts here, so i'd change the slider into a circle to utilize that
03:00:456 (2) - a triple suits this slider more
03:06:834 (1) - I think you can do something a lot more exciting rather than this spinner

Again, listen to the rhythms, cuz I think it sounds kinda off (Auto-kun lol)

Oh yeah, you said you wanted me to teach you on hitsounds right? lmao ok let me give you some suggestions (and a quick music lesson?)
In a measure there are 4 beats -> http://puu.sh/9Y9ZR/bdbf2901d8.jpg I want to focus on the 1st (big white tick) and the 2nd and the 4th
If you listen to the break time, so there's no hitsounds (looking at ur collab rn), what do you notice beside the vocals? The drums. You should really utilize the drums and they can make your map a lot more interesting . They hit every 2 and 4, so put a snare (or any drum) sound (i.e. http://puu.sh/9YatP/d7244c4f44.wav) everytime you hear the drums
The beginning of a measure is also important. It's usually a heavy note (one that's stressed/accented/special?) so you should really make it stand out! look around for cool hitsounds and plug in what you think would suit your song best! LOVE YOUUU

Anyways that's all from me :] Good luck with your map!
p.s. is this korean? lol i can't tell at all LOL

lol, i somehow already fixed almost all before u mod this, thanks again!

-Famous-

-Famous- wrote:
So... here we go again! xD yeyeah

Easy

00:20:536 (1,3) - Overlap doesn't look really nice there. But I guess it's okay.

00:46:520 (3,1) - Wrong spacing.editor </3

00:55:732 (2) - I think you should move that slider a little bit more down, so easy player can read it better.

00:57:386 (2,3,4) - 1 circle and 1 reversed slider would fit better

01:14:393 (2,3,4) - Replace it in a reversed slider.

01:32:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is different, but I guess that's okay.

01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Reversed slider maybe?

02:55:496 (1,3) - Try to make them less overlap.

Normal

00:37:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Two options:

or

I recommend the second one, because it's a little bit easier.

01:11:087 (4) - That slider doesn't look nice. Try that.

02:05:417 (3,4,5) - Confusing.

Collab

00:24:551 (3,4,5) - It's STILL too confusing! I said that already the last time. You should stack these, it's too hard to read. its hard </3

01:47:228 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit confusing. But I guess it's okay.

03:05:889 (3,1) - Picutre.

I hope I could help you.

thanks for mod! same issues with gaia's mod lol

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-06T10:13:32+00:00

Gaia wrote:
From my Queue & 'cuz you're awesome

[Collab]
01:48:173 (4) - Don't stack 2 identical sliders together :]. No
01:50:535 (1,2) - blanket? No
01:55:260 (1,2,3,4) - you had doubles before but now you've spread them all out nice and even, very misleading :] Besides, doubles fit music more No. this is orange caramell song this (La La La, you know)
02:55:732 (1) - the *dooo doo? (lmao o-o) starts 1/2 a note before, so i'd start my slider there (and shift couple notes after too) Okay~
02:58:567 - The *nooon? (idk lol) sound starts here, so i'd change the slider into a circle to utilize that No
03:00:456 (2) - a triple suits this slider more No
03:06:834 (1) - I think you can do something a lot more exciting rather than this spinner ???

Again, listen to the rhythms, cuz I think it sounds kinda off (Auto-kun lol)

music lesson lol
Oh yeah, you said you wanted me to teach you on hitsounds right? lmao ok let me give you some suggestions (and a quick music lesson?)
In a measure there are 4 beats -> http://puu.sh/9Y9ZR/bdbf2901d8.jpg I want to focus on the 1st (big white tick) and the 2nd and the 4th
If you listen to the break time, so there's no hitsounds (looking at ur collab rn), what do you notice beside the vocals? The drums. You should really utilize the drums and they can make your map a lot more interesting . They hit every 2 and 4, so put a snare (or any drum) sound (i.e. http://puu.sh/9YatP/d7244c4f44.wav) everytime you hear the drums
The beginning of a measure is also important. It's usually a heavy note (one that's stressed/accented/special?) so you should really make it stand out! look around for cool hitsounds and plug in what you think would suit your song best!

Anyways that's all from me :] Good luck with your map!
p.s. is this korean? lol i can't tell at all LOL

Thanks for Mod~

Here my part!
Enjoy playing it~

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24,112,50063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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416,200,51125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,200,51243,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,136,51479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,40,51716,6,0,P|392:32|392:24,1,40
248,40,52070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,52188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,136,52661,6,0,P|80:216|104:280,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,53842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,54078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,256,54551,6,0,P|440:288|432:280,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,55496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,280,55614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,280,55850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,280,55968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,280,56204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,216,56441,6,0,P|176:184|216:192,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,57386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,57504,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,128,57740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,128,57858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,128,58094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58330,12,0,61165,0:0:0:0:
88,80,61638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,61874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,62110,2,8,P|256:80|280:128,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,62819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,63055,2,8,P|192:304|152:288,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,63763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,336,64000,6,0,P|-32:240|40:120,1,240
88,232,64945,2,0,P|152:144|96:16,1,240
112,28,65889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,66362,2,0,L|392:88,4,40,0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,48,67071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,48,67307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,67779,2,0,L|292:220,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,208,68724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,68960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,120,69669,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,120,69905,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,120,70141,2,12,P|432:120|456:168,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,70850,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,320,71086,2,12,P|368:344|328:328,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,71794,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,312,72031,2,0,P|120:296|104:256,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,72976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73449,12,0,77228,0:0:0:0:
320,136,92346,6,0,B|232:136|112:240|264:264|328:208|216:136|120:136,2,320,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,94708,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,280,94945,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,95417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,95653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,192,96126,6,0,P|292:112|228:200,1,320
60,188,97543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,88,101795,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,102740,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,88,103212,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,103685,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,132,103921,6,2,P|84:172|136:168,1,80
188,252,104393,2,0,P|196:192|172:152,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,104866,2,0,L|368:72,1,80
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344,192,105575,2,0,P|431:213|346:244,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107228,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107464,2,0,L|188:88,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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92,168,108645,6,0,P|72:240|136:308,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,109354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,109590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,312,109826,2,0,P|408:251|388:177,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,232,111952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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228,76,113134,2,0,P|152:44|60:84,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,114315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,244,114551,2,0,L|388:320,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,192,115023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,115260,5,8,0:0:0:0:
420,112,115496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,36,115732,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,36,115968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,116204,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,116441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,100,116677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,100,116913,2,8,P|128:92|52:224,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,118567,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,256,119275,2,8,L|430:197,1,80
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112,140,120456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,236,120693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,308,120929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,220,121165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,122346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,288,124236,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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260,288,124708,1,4,0:0:0:0:
380,288,124945,1,4,0:0:0:0:
372,168,125181,6,0,P|336:136|276:132,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,125653,2,0,B|140:128|96:72|96:72|96:228,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,127307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,136,127543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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196,244,128488,2,8,P|128:240|104:220,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,176,128960,2,8,L|24:88,1,80
108,80,129433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,80,129669,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,129905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,196,130141,2,0,L|96:288,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,130850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,131086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,131323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,131559,6,0,P|376:192|464:124,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,132740,2,0,P|144:244|100:344,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,240,133449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,240,133685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,128,133921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,124,134393,6,0,P|192:64|224:44,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,134866,2,0,B|344:144|308:176|308:176|356:240,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,135575,2,0,B|236:179|236:179|200:147|220:67,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,72,136283,2,0,P|88:132|56:164,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,311,136756,2,0,P|96:272|77:237,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,137228,2,0,L|240:256,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,137700,6,0,P|300:336|400:284,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,172,138409,2,0,P|416:116|328:52,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,96,139118,2,0,L|144:144,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,140063,2,0,P|152:332|224:352,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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464,56,142425,6,0,P|492:152|404:348,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,336,143606,2,0,L|192:288,1,80
224,180,144078,2,0,P|192:96|176:88,1,80
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156,284,145023,2,0,L|224:360,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,145496,6,0,P|392:280|400:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,145968,2,0,P|376:100|352:88,1,80
248,76,146441,2,0,P|192:92|176:136,1,80
116,208,146913,2,0,P|64:136|68:120,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,147622,2,0,L|264:352,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,196,149512,2,0,L|372:120,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,124,150456,2,0,L|196:192,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,151401,6,0,P|64:52|160:96,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,152582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,152819,2,0,P|280:284|184:240,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154236,2,0,P|136:144|16:164,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,276,154945,6,0,L|84:368,1,80
148,256,155417,2,0,B|216:352|216:352|296:248,1,240
408,276,156362,2,0,L|344:360,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,157071,2,0,L|344:80,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,157779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,152,160378,6,8,P|344:112|212:104,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161559,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,161795,2,8,P|212:256|328:328,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,162504,2,8,L|440:184,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,92,162976,2,8,P|352:72|240:128,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,228,164157,6,4,P|144:256|252:212,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,204,164866,2,0,P|364:144|388:120,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,165338,2,0,B|504:204|436:288|436:288|400:360|436:360,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,166992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,167228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,240,169118,2,0,L|312:320,1,80
416,264,169590,2,0,B|400:180|456:104|456:104|284:104,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,312,171480,2,0,B|160:352|264:312|264:312|344:316,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,172425,6,0,L|408:92,1,80
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32,152,173606,2,0,P|76:212|228:164,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,244,174551,2,0,L|408:272,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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476,176,175496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,356,180456,2,0,L|24:312,1,80
96,248,180929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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172,156,182819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,104,183527,2,0,L|312:44,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,184236,2,0,P|464:248|448:308,1,80
356,344,184708,6,0,P|316:320|196:336,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,272,185417,2,0,L|88:168,1,80
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256,192,186834,12,0,190614,0:0:0:0:

Joon

1,359 posts

Joined June 2009

Joon 2014-07-06T13:17:55+00:00

hi

Hit Sound modding

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1) - start notes add finish
00:24:315 (1) - add finish
00:34:236 (3) - end notes add clap
00:35:181 (1) - end notes remove clap
00:37:071 (3) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (3) - end notes add clap
00:46:992 (1) - start notes add finish
00:52:662 (3) - end notes add clap
00:54:551 (1) - 3st notes add whistle
00:55:732 (2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:57:386 (2,3) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (1) - 1st notes remove clap and add finish
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:15:338 (5) - 3st notes add finish
01:34:236 (5) - start notes remove clap
01:46:047 (7) - 2,3st notes add clap
01:47:465 (1) - remove clap
01:49:827 (4) - 3st notes add clap
01:50:772 (5) - 1st notes add clap
01:55:023 (1) - start notes add finish
02:02:583 (1) - ^
02:10:142 (3) - 1st notes remove clap and finish
02:17:701 (1) - 1st notes add finish
02:24:787 (6) - add finish
02:44:157 (1) - start notes remove clap and add finish
02:55:496 (1) - start notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:16:756 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:23:134 (2) - remove clap
00:24:315 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:29:039 (2) - add whistle
00:34:236 (1) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (6) - ^
00:46:992 (1) - 1st notes add finish
00:57:622 (2,3,4) - change whistle
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (3) - ^
01:14:394 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:46:992 (7) - add clap
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove clap
01:49:827 (1) - end notes add clap
01:50:535 (2) - add clap
01:58:331 (1) - end notes add clap
01:59:039 (2) - add clap
01:59:276 (3) - ^
01:59:984 (4) - ^
02:00:220 (5) - 1,4st notes add clap
02:01:874 (6,7) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (3) - ^
02:44:157 (1) - start notes add finish
02:47:937 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:52:661 (2) - add whistle
02:55:023 (4) - end notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - start notes add finish

[Collab]
00:16:283 (1) - end notes add finish
00:24:315 (2) - add finish
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:905 (2) - remove finish
01:10:850 (4) - ^
01:11:794 (6) - ^
01:13:449 (1) - add finish
01:43:921 (1) - remove whistle
02:02:582 (4) - start notes add finish
02:04:472 (7) - remove finish
02:04:945 (9) - ^
02:08:488 (2) - remove clap
02:09:433 (4,1) - ^
02:13:449 (3,4,5,6) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (1) - ^
02:32:819 (3) - start notes add finish
02:46:992 (4,5,6,7) - add clap
02:47:937 (1) - 1st notes add finish

good luck

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-07T01:52:56+00:00

Hello Celizavia !
I have check some your beatmap (masih ngantuk hoam)

But, for now i only can mod some.
About your tags.. I think you must add this :
orang caramel kpop k-pop korean

Normal diff, too many hit circle XD
Consider reducing it

And, you must add 1/1 and 1/2 slider (like what -[ Asuna ]- wrote before)
Your normal diff is too hard (i think)
So, please fix it

Hope this help

(w jarang2 lho mod lagu seperti ini, cuma w penasaran, pengen nyoba juga

)

Alepat

161 posts

Joined October 2011

Alepat 2014-07-07T05:23:18+00:00

Hi :3 I come to make a mod to the Taiko Diffs (Blue & Alepat Modding Team)
Taiko Fuutsu
The combo is very repetitive, lacks a bit of imagination, but is well done, just found this

SPOILER

01:30:929 (235) - Create DON note
01:31:165 (236) - Erase
01:31:283 (236) - Create KAT note
01:31:401 (237) - Erase

Taiko Muzu
Worked well, looks like a Oni combined with Muzu, but left me a little uncomfortable in the part of the Kiais, this would be a suggestion

SPOILER

00:19:826 (77) - KAT to DON
00:20:181 (79) - ^^^^^^
00:27:386 (112) - ^^^^^^
00:27:740 (114) - ^^^^^^
01:05:181 (15) - ^^^^^^
01:05:535 (17) - ^^^^^^
01:08:015 (27) - ^^^^^^
01:08:252 (28) - ^^^^^^
01:08:488 (29) - ^^^^^^
01:38:960 (141) - ^^^^^^
01:39:197 (142) - ^^^^^^
01:39:433 (143) - DON to KAT
02:20:771 (275) - KAT to DON
02:21:126 (277) - ^^^^^^
02:51:008 (377) - ^^^^^^
02:51:362 (379) - ^^^^^^

Taiko Oni
Honestly, in some parts lack imagination and fill with 1 single color, looks more like an insane style of Standard mode

SPOILER

00:12:504 (57) - Erase
00:12:622 (57) - Create DON note
00:20:181 (98) - Erase
00:20:299 (98) - KAT to DON
00:27:740 (137) - Erase
00:27:858 (137) - KAT to DON
00:27:976 (138) - Erase (probably)

00:35:063 (171) - a 00:35:653 (176) - lack imagination in combos
00:53:370 (263) - KAT to DON
00:53:724 (266) - erase
01:55:023 (556) - a 02:02:110 (580) - Redo with more imagination, that resembles the muzu

Well, that's all I'm saying, it's an honor to be of help

(sorry if misspelled, the translator does not help me at all <.<)

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-07T06:41:09+00:00

Joon wrote:
hi

Hit Sound modding

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1) - start notes add finish
00:24:315 (1) - add finish
00:34:236 (3) - end notes add clap
00:35:181 (1) - end notes remove clap
00:37:071 (3) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (3) - end notes add clap
00:46:992 (1) - start notes add finish
00:52:662 (3) - end notes add clap
00:54:551 (1) - 3st notes add whistle
00:55:732 (2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:57:386 (2,3) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (1) - 1st notes remove clap and add finish
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:15:338 (5) - 3st notes add finish
01:34:236 (5) - start notes remove clap
01:46:047 (7) - 2,3st notes add clap
01:47:465 (1) - remove clap
01:49:827 (4) - 3st notes add clap
01:50:772 (5) - 1st notes add clap
01:55:023 (1) - start notes add finish
02:02:583 (1) - ^
02:10:142 (3) - 1st notes remove clap and finish
02:17:701 (1) - 1st notes add finish
02:24:787 (6) - add finish
02:44:157 (1) - start notes remove clap and add finish
02:55:496 (1) - start notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:16:756 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:23:134 (2) - remove clap
00:24:315 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:29:039 (2) - add whistle
00:34:236 (1) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (6) - ^
00:46:992 (1) - 1st notes add finish
00:57:622 (2,3,4) - change whistle
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (3) - ^
01:14:394 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:46:992 (7) - add clap
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove clap
01:49:827 (1) - end notes add clap
01:50:535 (2) - add clap
01:58:331 (1) - end notes add clap
01:59:039 (2) - add clap
01:59:276 (3) - ^
01:59:984 (4) - ^
02:00:220 (5) - 1,4st notes add clap
02:01:874 (6,7) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (3) - ^
02:44:157 (1) - start notes add finish
02:47:937 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:52:661 (2) - add whistle
02:55:023 (4) - end notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - start notes add finish

[Collab]
00:16:283 (1) - end notes add finish
00:24:315 (2) - add finish
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:905 (2) - remove finish
01:10:850 (4) - ^
01:11:794 (6) - ^
01:13:449 (1) - add finish
01:43:921 (1) - remove whistle
02:02:582 (4) - start notes add finish
02:04:472 (7) - remove finish
02:04:945 (9) - ^
02:08:488 (2) - remove clap
02:09:433 (4,1) - ^
02:13:449 (3,4,5,6) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (1) - ^
02:32:819 (3) - start notes add finish
02:46:992 (4,5,6,7) - add clap
02:47:937 (1) - 1st notes add finish

good luck

will check your mod later, thank you so much

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Hello Celizavia !
I have check some your beatmap (masih ngantuk hoam)

But, for now i only can mod some.
About your tags.. I think you must add this :
orange caramel ngga, soalnya udah ada di artist kpop k-pop done korean di genre ntar ada

Normal diff, too many hit circle XD
Consider reducing it
And, you must add 1/1 and 1/2 slider (like what -[ Asuna ]- wrote before)
Your normal diff is too hard (i think)
So, please fix it
thats whats challenging means right?
Hope this help

(w jarang2 lho mod lagu seperti ini, cuma w penasaran, pengen nyoba juga )

makasih modnya!

Joon

1,359 posts

Joined June 2009

Joon 2014-07-07T14:46:14+00:00

OMG Celizavia~
You can tell it.

00:16:756 (1) - start notes add finish

^In this case, it is not the whole.

^This will select all.

BUT

^Like this selection.

Did you understand?

You will once again need to set the Hit sound.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2014-07-07T15:20:15+00:00

Hello, Celizavia!

Here's my mod:

SPOILER

Easy:
Consider adding hitcircles here: 00:41:323
00:42:740
00:44:630

Furthermore, slider 00:41:795 is too close to slider 00:40:378 (Check distance snap; it must always be activated in Easy and Normal diffs)

SPOILER

Normal:
Distance snap! Check out AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
Especially where this slider: 01:03:763 is too far from this hitcircle: 01:03:527
The same goes for this hitcircle: 01:05:417; it's too far away from this point: 01:05:181.
You have to bring them closer, otherwise they break the flow.

You have kiai time at this point: 02:22:425. Consider removing it.

SPOILER

Collab:
The kiai time~ 02:22:425. Consider removing it.

I don't really like the short sliders at these points: 00:31:874
00:32:346
00:32:819
00:33:291
00:36:126
BUT I like the use of the short sliders here: 00:50:771 and here: 00:51:716

The multiple hitcircles from here: 00:38:015 to here: 00:38:488 is a bit confusing.
This is all my opinion.

Overall, it's a great map!

Please reply.
Good Luck!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-07-07T15:53:30+00:00

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Easy]
Need same DS (distance snap) for the whole map for ranked
00:20:536 (1) - Keep 0.8x DS
^ If reverse slider is pointed to the previous note, new players may make mistake and press the reverse arrow or can't hit the slider properly
00:20:536 (1,2,3) - Try to make the pattern arranged properly, for example:

Image

00:25:260 (3,4) - If you want to keep the pattern, blanket it like this:

Image

00:31:874 - Missing beat here, put something hittable here
00:32:346 (1) - The flow is not linked from 00:30:929 (4) - (cursor are moving from anticlockwise to clockwise direction)
00:33:291 (2) - Please remain 0.8x DS
00:33:882 - At this point you can see 00:33:291 (2) - and 00:35:181 (1) - are stacked, make it separated if possible
00:35:181 (1) - Please remain same DS
00:41:795 (3) - DS, or something is missing at 00:41:323 -
00:43:212 (1) - DS
00:51:717 (2) - If possible make it stack on 00:50:299 (4) - , would be more neater
00:50:771 (1,2) - For pattern like this you can use copy and paste of 00:50:771 (1) - and then use rotate function
00:58:330 (1) - Let spinner stops at 01:01:047 - to follow vocal
01:03:527 (2) - DS is important
01:04:472 (3) - As you can see this slider is not properly arranged (blanket), refer the approach circle:

Image

01:17:228 - I prefer a hit here
01:32:346 (1,2,3,4) - DS
01:49:354 (3) - Blanket it properly, refer approach circle:

Image

02:09:669 (1) - This is called jump, the spacing is over 2x DS (which is not allowed in Easy)

[Normal]
Normally I prefer CS (circle size) 3 because most mappers use CS 4 for Hard and Insane diffs
Constant DS is also important in Normal too, try to fix all of them
My idea is refer some experienced mappers and see how they map Normal diffs, might be a great help
00:37:543 (3) - No jump please
00:38:724 (4,5) - Not suitable (distance)
00:39:669 (1) - ^

[Collab]
Diff name not rankable, need to indicate the difficulty of the map. Try to use Hard Collab

Notice:
I'm not sure of it but if possible don't give 1 mapper 2 times kudosu in a same map, except they are really really helpful

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-08T06:53:32+00:00

LizeKotze

LizeKotze wrote:
Hello, Celizavia!

Here's my mod:
SPOILER
Easy:
Consider adding hitcircles here: 00:41:323
00:42:740
00:44:630

Furthermore, slider 00:41:795 is too close to slider 00:40:378 (Check distance snap; it must always be activated in Easy and Normal diffs)
fixed all
SPOILER
Normal:
Distance snap! Check out AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) checked
Especially where this slider: 01:03:763 is too far from this hitcircle: 01:03:527
The same goes for this hitcircle: 01:05:417; it's too far away from this point: 01:05:181.
You have to bring them closer, otherwise they break the flow.

You have kiai time at this point: 02:22:425. Consider removing it. nah

SPOILER
Collab:
The kiai time~ 02:22:425. Consider removing it.nope

I don't really like the short sliders at these points: 00:31:874
00:32:346
00:32:819
00:33:291
00:36:126
BUT I like the use of the short sliders here: 00:50:771 and here: 00:51:716

The multiple hitcircles from here: 00:38:015 to here: 00:38:488 is a bit confusing.
This is all my opinion.

Overall, it's a great map!
Please reply.
Good Luck!

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Easy]
Need same DS (distance snap) for the whole map for ranked fixed all ds
00:20:536 (1) - Keep 0.8x DS
^ If reverse slider is pointed to the previous note, new players may make mistake and press the reverse arrow or can't hit the slider properly
00:20:536 (1,2,3) - Try to make the pattern arranged properly, for example:
Image
00:25:260 (3,4) - If you want to keep the pattern, blanket it like this:
Image
00:31:874 - Missing beat here, put something hittable here okay
00:32:346 (1) - The flow is not linked from 00:30:929 (4) - (cursor are moving from anticlockwise to clockwise direction)
00:33:291 (2) - Please remain 0.8x DS
00:33:882 - At this point you can see 00:33:291 (2) - and 00:35:181 (1) - are stacked, make it separated if possible
00:35:181 (1) - Please remain same DS
00:41:795 (3) - DS, or something is missing at 00:41:323 -
00:43:212 (1) - DS
00:51:717 (2) - If possible make it stack on 00:50:299 (4) - , would be more neater
00:50:771 (1,2) - For pattern like this you can use copy and paste of 00:50:771 (1) - and then use rotate function
00:58:330 (1) - Let spinner stops at 01:01:047 - to follow vocal
01:03:527 (2) - DS is important
01:04:472 (3) - As you can see this slider is not properly arranged (blanket), refer the approach circle:
Image
01:17:228 - I prefer a hit here yep
01:32:346 (1,2,3,4) - DS
01:49:354 (3) - Blanket it properly, refer approach circle:
Image
02:09:669 (1) - This is called jump, the spacing is over 2x DS (which is not allowed in Easy)

[Normal]
Normally I prefer CS (circle size) 3 because most mappers use CS 4 for Hard and Insane diffs the rank criteria says normal must have 2,25. i have no choice except to harden the diffs
Constant DS is also important in Normal too, try to fix all of them fixed
My idea is refer some experienced mappers and see how they map Normal diffs, might be a great help
00:37:543 (3) - No jump please
00:38:724 (4,5) - Not suitable (distance)
00:39:669 (1) - ^

[Collab]
Diff name not rankable, need to indicate the difficulty of the map. Try to use Hard Collab done

Notice:
I'm not sure of it but if possible don't give 1 mapper 2 times kudosu in a same map, except they are really really helpful

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-08T07:04:11+00:00

For Celizavia: Fixed all Joon's mod, plz~

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-08T10:09:35+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
For Celizavia: Fixed all Joon's mod, plz~

Sabar ya, disini internet lagi masalah, udah Di fix kok tinggal update aja

edit: updated

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-07-09T10:35:09+00:00

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
From my queue

I don't skip anyone

btw

IZenxl's Muzu : by IZenxl
IZenxl's Oni : by IZenxl

edit to

lZenxl's Muzukashii : by lZenxl
lZenxl's Oni : by lZenxl

lZenxl's Muzu
Change Diff name to lZenxl's Muzukashii please ... okays owo/!

01:38:724 (140) - d okays owo/!
01:53:606 (181) - K okays, added K on the fourth one also

~~this mod break you pattern hahaha~~
01:53:606 (181) - kkk Nah, I prefer a finish
02:32:582 (312) - k The snares here are the same, I'll keep the dons
02:32:700 (313) - add k ^

Great Muzukashii Thanks owo/!

lZenxl's Oni
00:12:031 (53,54,55,56,57) - dkkkd Nah, I prefer kkdkk, fits the claps more
00:19:708 (94,95,96,97,98,99) - My suggestion Okays owo/!
00:27:267 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - My suggestion Hmm, this is a rather long stream, not changing since I want to make the pattern simpler
00:46:519 (234) - K Okays owo/!
00:53:015 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268) - My suggestion Same reason as the 3rd mod
01:38:488 (479,482) - k Following the drums here, I would like to keep all of them as dons owo/!
01:38:488 (479,482) - kkk like muzu^
02:32:700 (730) - add k Fixed
03:10:378 (922) - D I would prefer a double kat here since the pitch doesn't change

Good luck !! I like this song ~

Alepat wrote:
Hi :3 I come to make a mod to the Taiko Diffs (Blue & Alepat Modding Team)
Taiko Fuutsu
The combo is very repetitive, lacks a bit of imagination, but is well done, just found this
SPOILER
01:30:929 (235) - Create DON note
01:31:165 (236) - Erase
01:31:283 (236) - Create KAT note
01:31:401 (237) - Erase
Taiko Muzu
Worked well, looks like a Oni combined with Muzu, but left me a little uncomfortable in the part of the Kiais, this would be a suggestion
SPOILER

00:19:826 (77) - KAT to DON
00:20:181 (79) - ^^^^^^
00:27:386 (112) - ^^^^^^
00:27:740 (114) - ^^^^^^
01:05:181 (15) - ^^^^^^
01:05:535 (17) - ^^^^^^
01:08:015 (27) - ^^^^^^
01:08:252 (28) - ^^^^^^ Not changing this for vocals
01:08:488 (29) - ^^^^^^
01:38:960 (141) - ^^^^^^
01:39:197 (142) - ^^^^^^
01:39:433 (143) - DON to KAT
02:20:771 (275) - KAT to DON
02:21:126 (277) - ^^^^^^
02:51:008 (377) - ^^^^^^
02:51:362 (379) - ^^^^^^ Fixed all unless specified
Taiko Oni
Honestly, in some parts lack imagination and fill with 1 single color, looks more like an insane style of Standard mode
SPOILER
00:12:504 (57) - Erase
00:12:622 (57) - Create DON note I'm fixing 1/4 patterns in which they end on 1/2 so that it's easier to read/play
00:20:181 (98) - Erasev
00:20:299 (98) - KAT to DON Following the sound in the music here, no change
00:27:740 (137) - Erase ^
00:27:858 (137) - KAT to DON ^
00:27:976 (138) - Erase (probably)

00:35:063 (171) - a 00:35:653 (176) - lack imagination in combos I prefer simplicity, after all, this song is really cheerful, I don't like to overcomplicate long patterns
00:53:370 (263) - KAT to DON Same idea here, I prefer to use an even number of kats/dons if there's a colour switch in between the streams
00:53:724 (266) - erase Thanks for pointing this out!
01:55:023 (556) - a 02:02:110 (580) - Redo with more imagination, that resembles the muzu
I don't think variation is going to help much if there's too much, I strongly believe that this pattern is rather nice and fitting for this section in both muzu and Oni
Well, that's all I'm saying, it's an honor to be of help (sorry if misspelled, the translator does not help me at all <.<)

Thanks for MOD!

Soz for late orz

Use latest update

Last edited by Evening 2014-07-09T13:22:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-07-09T10:43:27+00:00

Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue (second mod)

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Sariel's Fuutsu

OD5→4 HP6→5 SV1.6→1.4

01:53:606 (298,299,300) - change k
02:34:945 (400) - ^
02:37:543 (407,408,409) - ^ (be better?)

lZenxl's Muzu

SV1.9→1.4 or 1.6

lZenxl's Oni

00:53:015 (261) - change d
03:03:291 (882) - ^
03:04:000 (887) - ^

Good luck

Sauziteoi

205 posts

Joined February 2013

Sauziteoi 2014-07-09T12:06:24+00:00

Mod request From 5's Modding Team
(Sorry for my poor English...)
I hope i could help you

[Easy]
Should keep a distance of 0.8 to 1.2 in easy difficulty

00:18:645 (3,4) - make this blanket better
00:20:063 - add a note here
00:20:536 (1,3) - Beginners maybe can't read this
00:21:953 (2,3) - make this blanket better
00:25:260 (3,4) - make this blanket better
00:27:150 (5,2) - this two sliders are too close
00:30:929 (4,5) - 1.6 distance between slider4 and note5 is too far in Easy difficulty.
00:33:291 (2,1) - suggest↓
Suggestion
00:35:181 (1,3) - this two sliders are too close
00:39:433 (1,2) - maybe too strange?
00:50:299 (4,2) - move the note4 to (X:216, Y:152)
00:51:717 (2,3) - this two sliders are too close
01:09:197 (3) - Beginners maybe can't read this, suggest↓
Suggestion
01:13:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest↓
Suggestion
01:34:236 (5,6) - make this blanket better
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - keep the distance as same
01:49:827 (4,5) - make this blanket better
01:55:023 (1,3) - move the slider to (X:95, Y:185)
02:32:819 (1,2) - make this blanket better
02:44:157 (1,3) - make this blanket better
02:47:464 (4) - Beginners maybe can't read this
02:57:386 (3) - move the slider to (X:416, Y:120)
02:59:275 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:03:055 (1) - 2.1 distance between slider4 and note5 is even far in Easy difficulty.

[Normal]
Circle Size 4 maybe a little small

00:18:645 (4,1) - this two sliders are too close
00:21:008 (2,1) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
00:23:842 (1,2) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
00:44:630 (6,7) - this two sliders are too close
00:48:882 (5,1) - this two sliders are too close
00:51:716 (2,3) - make this blanket better
01:03:527 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
01:09:669 (3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
01:27:622 (1,2) - make this blanket better
01:59:039 (2) - move the note to (X:304, Y:179)
02:39:905 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:00:456 (1,2,3,4) - too close and make the blanket better

[Hard Collab]
you can keep more distance in the Hard difficulty
Use clap sound too frequently, a bit noisy

00:16:283 (1,2) - Time is long distance but the The length of short distance
00:18:173 (5,6) - Time is short distance but the The length of far distance
00:18:645 (1,2,3) - too close
00:29:984 (9) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:33:291 (4,5) - too close
00:36:126 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:46:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
change to
00:50:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the same as ↑
00:56:204 (6,1) - make this blanket better
01:03:055 (5,6) - too close
01:06:362 (4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
the slider4 change to
01:47:464 (2,4) - Don‘t Completly coverage the slider
01:48:645 (1) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
02:43:685 (8,9,1) - make this blanket better
02:52:897 (2,3) - make this blanket better

Good luck

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-07-09T13:21:50+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue (second mod)

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Sariel's Fuutsu

OD5→4 HP6→5 SV1.6→1.4

01:53:606 (298,299,300) - change k
02:34:945 (400) - ^
02:37:543 (407,408,409) - ^ (be better?)

lZenxl's Muzu

SV1.9→1.4 or 1.6 Fixed

lZenxl's Oni

00:53:015 (261) - change d The drum goes from high pitch to lower pitch, I would prefer a kat here
03:03:291 (882) - ^ I prefer a 2 don 3 kat pattern as it's easier to play
03:04:000 (887) - ^

Good luck

Thanks for 2nd mod owo/!

MUZU : http://puu.sh/a3Bdf/d465ba0d4b.osu
ONI : http://puu.sh/a3BeH/6c55fb838e.osu

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-07-09T13:25:46+00:00

From my modding queue

sorry for the long wait.

Easy

1. 00:26:205 (4) - Move it a little more to the right so that it doesn't creates a 'small overlap' with 00:25:260 (3) -

2. 00:31:874 (5,1) - It's always said that stacks aren't encouraged in Easy. Plus this is a slow song (BPM 127) you should able to put it away

3. This is...erm...you can put 00:33:291 (2) 's tail on 00:35:181 (1) 's head.

Sample

4. 00:46:992 (1) - Move this a little higher to avoid that little overlap with 00:45:102 (2) - which looks a little strange (and ugly for some)

5. 00:50:299 (4,2) - Well please put them together, but not that semi-stack people don't like. Circle on slider's head.

6. 00:54:551 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - This part is like...try not to overlap. A reminder is you can just make it simpler by using longer sliders. (Try to figure it out

)

7. 01:07:779 (2,3) - Same as 2.

8. Huh? 01:14:393 (2,3,4) - You can use a reversed slider (or a V-shaped slider to take over them). No need for stressing on circles for Easy Diff.

9. 01:42:268 (3,4,5) - Same as 8.

10. 01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Same as 9. (You might keep either 8 or 9 or this one for creating a variety of patterns and avoid a boring map).

11. 01:49:827 (4) - Face it towards the sky to avoid overlapping (knew what I mean)?

12. 01:54:551 (4) - A little lower so that tiny-overlap can be solved.

13. 01:55:023 (1,3) - Just like 3.

14. 02:03:528 (2,3,4), 02:22:425 (2,3,4) and 02:05:417 (2,3,4) and 02:11:559 (4,5,6) - Well...like 10.

15. 02:46:047 (3,4) - Copying and pasting? I hope not. But it's like 7.

Normal

Generally...Perhaps you can remove the tiny-overlaps all over the map? Using a larger DS will help in that. (Perhaps using 0.9 or 1.0 will look quite nice)

1. 00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a tiny (non-jump) square out of these

2. 00:48:882 (5,1) - Fix it like 3. in Easy.

3. 00:52:661 (3,4) - You can create a blanket out of these notes

4. 02:22:425 (2,3,4) - Small triangle possible here!

5. 02:36:126 (1) - I don't think you should use a spinner here...map the vocals using sliders

6. 02:58:803 (1,2,3,4) - After fixing overlaps, try to make this blanket better

Finished! (You might don't want to change some of the mods above, but that's up to you

I respect your decisions).

P/s: Please edit your post in my modding queue to say that this request is completed!

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-09T15:38:42+00:00

SPOILER

ItItS wrote:
Mod request From 5's Modding Team
(Sorry for my poor English...)
I hope i could help you

[Easy]
Should keep a distance of 0.8 to 1.2 in easy difficulty whoa, that's is tooo far for a beginner,even the rank criteria suggected that we should put 0,8 or 1,0 as DS in Easy
00:18:645 (3,4) - make this blanket better okay
00:20:063 - add a note here ^
00:20:536 (1,3) - Beginners maybe can't read this ^
00:21:953 (2,3) - make this blanket better ^
00:25:260 (3,4) - make this blanket better ^
00:27:150 (5,2) - this two sliders are too close nope it isnt
00:30:929 (4,5) - 1.6 distance between slider4 and note5 is too far in Easy difficulty. fixed
00:33:291 (2,1) - suggest↓
Suggestion
00:35:181 (1,3) - this two sliders are too close
00:39:433 (1,2) - maybe too strange?
00:50:299 (4,2) - move the note4 to (X:216, Y:152) i prefer this
00:51:717 (2,3) - this two sliders are too close fixed
01:09:197 (3) - Beginners maybe can't read this, suggest↓ fixed
Suggestion
01:13:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest↓
Suggestion
01:34:236 (5,6) - make this blanket better
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - keep the distance as same
01:49:827 (4,5) - make this blanket better
01:55:023 (1,3) - move the slider to (X:95, Y:185)
02:32:819 (1,2) - make this blanket better
02:44:157 (1,3) - make this blanket better
02:47:464 (4) - Beginners maybe can't read this okay
02:57:386 (3) - move the slider to (X:416, Y:120)
02:59:275 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:03:055 (1) - 2.1 distance between slider4 and note5 is even far in Easy difficulty.fixed
[Normal]
Circle Size 4 maybe a little small thats the problem, i think i have some issues in the diff spread. i juat cant get my diffs any mush harder since the ranking crit demans a normal diffs must be in 2,50 star difficulties
00:18:645 (4,1) - this two sliders are too close nope its not
00:21:008 (2,1) - Suggest↓ o...kayy
Suggestion
00:23:842 (1,2) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
00:44:630 (6,7) - this two sliders are too close its fine
00:48:882 (5,1) - this two sliders are too close ^
00:51:716 (2,3) - make this blanket better
01:03:527 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
01:09:669 (3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
01:27:622 (1,2) - make this blanket better
01:59:039 (2) - move the note to (X:304, Y:179)
02:39:905 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:00:456 (1,2,3,4) - too close and make the blanket better
[Hard Collab]
you can keep more distance in the Hard difficulty
Use clap sound too frequently, a bit noisy
00:16:283 (1,2) - Time is long distance but the The length of short distance
00:18:173 (5,6) - Time is short distance but the The length of far distance
00:18:645 (1,2,3) - too close
00:29:984 (9) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:33:291 (4,5) - too close
00:36:126 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:46:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
change to
00:50:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the same as ↑
00:56:204 (6,1) - make this blanket better
01:03:055 (5,6) - too close
01:06:362 (4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
the slider4 change to
01:47:464 (2,4) - Don‘t Completly coverage the slider
01:48:645 (1) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
02:43:685 (8,9,1) - make this blanket better
02:52:897 (2,3) - make this blanket better
Good luck

SPOILER

jinhang_ang wrote:
From my modding queue sorry for the long wait.

Easy

1. 00:26:205 (4) - Move it a little more to the right so that it doesn't creates a 'small overlap' with 00:25:260 (3) -

2. 00:31:874 (5,1) - It's always said that stacks aren't encouraged in Easy. Plus this is a slow song (BPM 127) you should able to put it away slow bpm doesnt mean its a slow song.

3. This is...erm...you can put 00:33:291 (2) 's tail on 00:35:181 (1) 's head.
Sample

4. 00:46:992 (1) - Move this a little higher to avoid that little overlap with 00:45:102 (2) - which looks a little strange (and ugly for some)

5. 00:50:299 (4,2) - Well please put them together, but not that semi-stack people don't like. Circle on slider's head.

6. 00:54:551 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - This part is like...try not to overlap. A reminder is you can just make it simpler by using longer sliders. (Try to figure it out )

7. 01:07:779 (2,3) - Same as 2.

8. Huh? 01:14:393 (2,3,4) - You can use a reversed slider (or a V-shaped slider to take over them). No need for stressing on circles for Easy Diff.

9. 01:42:268 (3,4,5) - Same as 8.

10. 01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Same as 9. (You might keep either 8 or 9 or this one for creating a variety of patterns and avoid a boring map).

11. 01:49:827 (4) - Face it towards the sky to avoid overlapping (knew what I mean)? what sky? *look up*

12. 01:54:551 (4) - A little lower so that tiny-overlap can be solved.

13. 01:55:023 (1,3) - Just like 3.

14. 02:03:528 (2,3,4), 02:22:425 (2,3,4) and 02:05:417 (2,3,4) and 02:11:559 (4,5,6) - Well...like 10.

15. 02:46:047 (3,4) - Copying and pasting? I hope not. But it's like 7.

Normal

Generally...Perhaps you can remove the tiny-overlaps all over the map? Using a larger DS will help in that. (Perhaps using 0.9 or 1.0 will look quite nice)

1. 00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a tiny (non-jump) square out of these

2. 00:48:882 (5,1) - Fix it like 3. in Easy.

3. 00:52:661 (3,4) - You can create a blanket out of these notes

4. 02:22:425 (2,3,4) - Small triangle possible here!

5. 02:36:126 (1) - I don't think you should use a spinner here...map the vocals using sliders

6. 02:58:803 (1,2,3,4) - After fixing overlaps, try to make this blanket better

Finished! (You might don't want to change some of the mods above, but that's up to you I respect your decisions).

P/s: Please edit your post in my modding queue to say that this request is completed!

Totoro le Pacha

241 posts

Joined March 2012

Totoro le Pacha 2014-07-10T00:55:48+00:00

Hi ! Quick mod from my queue ~

[Muzukashii]
Try to avoid the sliders in the taiko diff.
00:47:346 (178,179, 182, 183 ) - All the 1/4 dk aren't allowed in a Muzu. Try kk instead.
01:01:165 (1) - Remove that spinners. He's short, and he has nothing to do here
02:00:693 (197) - Ugly slider. Remove it. Too long, too useless. Map instead.
02:35:653 (325) - Same, slider's are ugly in a taiko diff. And you putting too many ones.

A fun map to play !

[Oni]
01:55:023 (556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567) - Why not put patterns like this ? http://puu.sh/a4r8V/62ca765444.jpg
02:02:819 (15) - k ?

Very good map ! Srsly. My suggestions on this map are facultative.

Good continuation

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-07-10T06:40:19+00:00

Hai, from queue :3

only testplay, so no kds

Collab Hard

Replay

~~dat one miss im gomen for being careless after spinner~~

idk yes it is playable but i'm sorry to say this but it's still need more works, especially at flow and rhythm. might be better if you every sliders co-relate with each other. my suggestion is, you should see other ranked maps and see how it's done

and also, since it's collab and has no video, maybe you should add mapper's name who's involved in the collab in the storyboard

Normal

Replay

mostly same issues with Hard. I suggest to use more consistent rhythm and spacing
~~and that sudden change rhythm at first kiai also got me~~

Easy

Replay

this diff has less issues than the others, but still need more tweaks in appearances. overall, i think the rhythm is fine. and i noticed some different part which is mapped with different ds. since it's easy diff, you should map with constant ds

sorry i can't testplay taiko ;w; but the oni is cute /runs

goodluck~ :3

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-10T08:59:54+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hai, from queue :3

only testplay, so no kds

Collab Hard

Replay

~~dat one miss im gomen for being careless after spinner~~

idk yes it is playable but i'm sorry to say this but it's still need more works, especially at flow and rhythm. might be better if you every sliders co-relate with each other. my suggestion is, you should see other ranked maps and see how it's done

and also, since it's collab and has no video, maybe you should add mapper's name who's involved in the collab in the storyboard ive thought of that but, ~~i dont know how to make a storyboard orz~~

Normal

Replay

mostly same issues with Hard. I suggest to use more consistent rhythm and spacing
~~and that sudden change rhythm at first kiai also got me~~

Easy
woah *-*
Replay

this diff has less issues than the others, but still need more tweaks in appearances. overall, i think the rhythm is fine. and i noticed some different part which is mapped with different ds. since it's easy diff, you should map with constant ds

sorry i can't testplay taiko ;w; but the oni is cute /runs *pokes lZenxl

goodluck~ :3

thanks for the testplay!

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-10T12:33:30+00:00

Wait, where is a bookmarks? (Why is 1?)

Here my parts!
Enjoy playing it~

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Catallena - Orange Caramel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61638
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 99905
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Catallena
TitleUnicode:Catallena
Artist:Orange Caramel
ArtistUnicode:Orange Caramel
Creator:Celizavia
Version:Hard Collab
Source:
Tags:Catallena The 3rd pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
BeatmapID:454633
BeatmapSetID:167402

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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Venellys

154 posts

Joined March 2013

Venellys 2014-07-10T14:20:13+00:00

hi, from V&V's modding queue

good thing you dont request veyron for this, he'd berserk when he sees it. such besterd veyron xD
[Easy]

00:14:866 - remove this inherit point, it's unused.
00:20:535 (1) - smooth like the slider on 00:22:425 (3) - for better flowing.
00:22:425 - add more notes, dont ignore strong beats
00:29:984 (3,5) - stack more here
00:32:346 (1,3) - overlap, split or stack the slider's tail
00:37:071 (3,2) - ^, but not slider's tail
00:41:795 (4) - move to x:32|y:148, for better blanket
00:50:299 (4,2) - stack
00:54:551 (1,) - small overlap, split
00:57:386 (2) - smooth like the next slider for better flow
01:01:638 (1) - same like 00:14:866 -
01:12:504 (3,1) - spacing here is bad, fix this
01:40:378 (1) - same like 00:57:386 (2) -
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -
01:49:827 (4,5) - overlap, split
01:54:551 (4,1) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -, jumps are not allowed on easy diffs
01:55:023 (1,3) - stack or split?
02:04:000 (4,1) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -
02:06:362 (1,2) - smoothen or sharpen one these sliders for sym
02:32:819 (1) - smooth more for better blanket
02:55:496 (1,3) - stack a bit more
03:03:055 (1,2,3) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -

[Normal]

00:14:866 -same reason in easy
00:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - nobody likes this flow this year, smoothen it
00:38:488 - add note here to follow vocals
00:39:433 - add note, strong beat here
00:50:771 (1) - smoothen the slider like the next two sliders for better flow.
01:03:527 (4,5,6) - fix spacing, jumps are not allowed on normal too
01:13:449 (1,2,3,4) - same like 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:27:622 (1,2) - same like 01:03:527 (4,5,6) -
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - same like 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:52:661 (7) - a bit boring, reduce repeats and add notes next.
01:58:331 (1,2,3) - same like 01:03:527 (4,5,6) -, and also smooth one of the sliders for sym
02:42:267 (1,2,3) - ^

i think these two diffs cannot be modable... the spacing is really different. big SP, but a little bad mapping, i hope you have a better maintenance on your map. Collab looks ok, but it has some flow problems, so find it yourself.
good luck~

Kioshinxs_old

Kioshinxs_old 2014-07-10T14:45:01+00:00

hi owo

Mod for you

About The Diff

nothing, Good map and mod for you :3

Mods

Futsuu

00:18:882 (37) - k
00:41:323 (97) - k
00:36:598 (85) - k
00:37:543 (87) - Finish, Big D
01:23:606 (213) - Finish, Big D
01:49:428 - k
02:47:937 (436) - k

Good map

Muzu

00:23:606 - Delete the d
00:23:842 (95) - k
00:26:204 (106) - Add big D
00:26:677 (108,109) - http://puu.sh/a5a3D/5a71619916.jpg
01:11:559 (43) - Add big D
02:12:031 (236) - Add big D
02:32:110 (309,310,311,312) - k
03:10:614 - http://puu.sh/a5aoJ/0270584094.jpg

Good map :3

Oni

00:10:378 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - http://puu.sh/a5avQ/0e3ce6f5f6.jpg
00:26:204 (129) - Big D
00:26:913 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - http://puu.sh/a5aD9/f65a164b9f.jpg
00:32:819 (161,162,163) - k dd
01:21:126 (399) - k
01:45:575 (514) - Big D

Good map :3

Sorry Im too vage today XD

Mystyk

osu! Alumni

950 posts

Joined June 2011

Mystyk 2014-07-12T17:07:03+00:00

Hi from my queue! Well only one diff YET, because it takes ages to mention everything, and I believe it will also take you long enough to fix them xD

Easy:

SPOILER

00:14:866 - delete this inherited point, on the easy diff there is nothing here, so it's unnecessary
00:20:536 (1,2,3) - you could try a different pattern here, it would look nicer imo and it would flow better - http://puu.sh/a74mp/85f6a8253f.jpg - also the next suggestion is kind of connected to this one
00:22:425 (3,1) - it would be better if you made (3) to have a different direction, because it will flow better, look at these - http://puu.sh/a742P/3dd673c358.jpg --> http://puu.sh/a749n/75d8897bd0.jpg
00:43:212 (1,2) - this is similar to the previous suggestion, it will have better flow if you tried to do this - http://puu.sh/a77FM/6ad760b8af.jpg - you will have to change the rest a bit, but I think it's not that much, so here how I changed it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1807768 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1807774 and http://puu.sh/a77Z3/a3d4f59227.jpg
00:46:992 (1) - remove the upper anchor of this slider, it kind of makes the slider shorter when it shouldn't! - http://puu.sh/a8eq2/e17eb4cfe0.jpg
00:54:551 (1,2) - this will fit better, because she starts singing that "oy-oy-oy" here 00:55:496 - and it will be easier to play as well - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1807845
00:57:386 (2,3) - I would remove (3) and make (2) a reverse slider, it will be easier to play, it would be better to use such things in a Normal difficulty imo - http://puu.sh/a7TPa/fdc713e197.jpg - also like this people will have enough time to get ready for the spinner
01:12:504 (3,1) - these are too close to each other, so it might be confusing for beginners, this could be easily fixed if you moved (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809422
01:13:449 (1,2) - these are too close, try to replace (2) a little - http://puu.sh/a7U8C/40f6f6d06b.jpg - well I replaced all 3 of those notes but only a little bit
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - use equal spacing please, this is an easy diff and there is no reason not to use equal spacing - http://puu.sh/a7UdO/d1d21bafdb.jpg
01:45:102 (4,5,6,7) - try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809458 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809481 - it will be easier to play in my opinion and the big beat at 01:46:992 - will be emphasized better too :3
01:49:827 (4,5) - try not to make these reach, it might be a little confusing and it doesn't look nice either, so what about this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809524
01:54:551 (4,1) - don't put jumps in an easy, and apart from that the pattern is a bit messy too, so try something different imo, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809531 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809534
02:03:528 (2,3,4) - and 02:05:417 (2,3,4) - I would change both to reverse sliders because it's easier to play oh and also 02:04:000 (4,1) - you have a jump between these, so it can be fixed with the reverse slider too - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809539 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809540 - also 02:04:472 (1,2) - this kind of stack is hard to read so it will be better if you change it
02:11:559 (4,5,6) - I would rather change this to a slider - http://puu.sh/a7VS9/1afd4e702c.jpg - you don't have to follow the vocals so much on an Easy, you have Normal and Hard diff to do that
02:13:921 (3,4) - I would remove (4) and make (3) longer because the vocals are not that strong, it doesn't have to be emphasized that much as I mentioned - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809560
02:42:740 (3,4) - these are too close, use equal spacing please
02:48:882 (2,3) - spacing is too big, as I said before, don't put jumps in an Easy
02:51:716 (1,2,3) - similar suggestion to this - 00:54:551 (1,2) - try using a slider and then a reverse slider for easier play - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809570
02:53:606 (1,2) - don't make them overlap, it's confusing, it would be enough if you gave the slider a different direction like this - http://puu.sh/a7Wqo/8460f9eeb6.jpg
02:55:496 (1,3) - I would rather not stack these since it might be confusing, a pattern like this would look a lot nicer and would also flow nicely and it wouldn't be confusing either :3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809591 - of course you might have to replace some notes, but don't be lazy to change it if it will improve your map
03:01:638 (3,1) - use equal spacing please, it will look nice and consistent and it won't be confusing
03:04:472 (2,3) - spacing is too big between these objects, please use distance snap - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809608 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809611

Hitsounds:

SPOILER

00:17:228 - until 00:31:874 (5) - you should put a clap on everyone second white tick, this means that you should put clap on:
00:16:756 (1) - the end of the slider
00:17:701 (2) - the end of the slider
00:18:645 (3) - the end of the slider
00:20:063 (5) -
00:20:536 (1) - the middle of the slider
00:21:953 (2) -
etc...I hope you can follow
you can hear that in the music these beats are a little different, so that's why you should place claps like this

00:32:346 (1) - until 00:45:102 - use soft sampleset on every second white tick, it will emphasize the big beats nicely, and since it's a slow part, soft hitsounds sound better at places where there are no big beats :3 this means that you should place soft hitsounds at places like this:
00:32:346 (1) - end of the slider - this is how you can do it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1810723 - just select the end of the slider and on the left side at Sampleset, choose Soft
00:33:291 (2) - end of the slider
00:34:236 (3) - end of the slider
00:35:181 (1) - end of the slider
00:36:126 (2) - end of the slider
00:39:433 (1) - beginning of the slider
00:40:378 (2) - beginning of the slider
etc...I think you can follow this pattern

00:45:102 - you could use soft sampleset here because the music is soft - http://puu.sh/a8dOY/d11f7ce99f.png
after this, just add a whistle to the middle of the slider 00:45:102 (2) - and also delete 00:46:519 - this inherited section and also add whistle to 00:46:520 (3) -

00:47:937 (2) - remove clap from the beginning of the slider
00:46:992 (1) - same applies that I mentioned at the beginning, use claps on every second white tick, because that's where they fit, this means:
00:46:992 (1) - end of the slider
00:47:937 (2) - end of the slider
00:48:882 (3) - middle of the slider
00:50:299 (4) -
etc...

try to follow these hitsound suggestions until the end of the map, I hope this helps enough >.<

Blankets:

SPOILER

00:25:260 (3,4) - this blanket doesn't look nice try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1810640
00:35:181 (1,2) - you could improve this blanket too - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1810652
00:50:771 (1,2,3) - again the blanket - http://puu.sh/a8cwU/3544eaba12.jpg
01:02:110 (1,2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/a8cAf/dd8887f123.jpg
01:34:236 (5,6) - blanket - http://puu.sh/a8cDp/d29b744f75.jpg
01:40:378 (1,2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/a8cHa/27cd8eb85f.jpg
01:47:937 (2,3) - same as above ^ - http://puu.sh/a8cKn/646bb4f872.jpg
02:06:362 (1,2) - you should make these symmetrical, it will look nicer - http://puu.sh/a8cOD/8263fbb803.jpg
02:12:504 (1,2,3) - I think you could make this pattern nicer, I'll wait for your reply, and if you change what I said in the mod, and you can't think of anything, I'll try to come up with something :3
02:22:897 (4,5) - blanket, just rotate (5) a bit - http://puu.sh/a8cX2/0aff914b77.jpg - -4 degrees selection centre
02:32:819 (1,2,3,4) - blankets - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1810690 and http://puu.sh/a8dbj/001bf0ceef.jpg
02:39:905 (1,2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/a8deV/0c65eafbb4.jpg
02:59:275 (1,2) - ^ - http://puu.sh/a8djz/1a1abf6c50.jpg

Normal:

SPOILER

00:16:283 (1,2,3,4,1) - the distance here is quite messy, you should fix it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1819978 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1819981 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1819985 - also I think this patterns looks nicer

00:20:063 (1,2) - the distance is too big between these, and also instead of using anchor points like this http://puu.sh/acgRh/2ec57713f1.jpg it's easier if you do it this way --> http://puu.sh/ach20/be908c13d4.jpg (you can make red anchor point by clicking on them twice)
00:21:008 (2,1,2) - you shouldn't make such overlap, and also I think a reverse slider would play better instead of a hit circle an a slider, so this is what I suggest - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820023 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820028 - it flows better and looks nice imo :3
00:24:315 (2,3) - distance is too big, use distance snap please, also, just a small thing but if you make a straight slider you don't need 3 anchor points

http://puu.sh/achvL/1a6039f81a.jpg --> http://puu.sh/achwl/953442c229.jpg - and the suggestion --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820066
00:34:236 (1) - remove this unnecessary new combo
00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - try not to use so many hit circles and also don't stack them, try to use 2 sliders instead, it follows the vocals just as much as 4 hit circles - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820083
00:41:795 (4) - try to give this different direction so that it will flow better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820090
00:44:630 (6,7) - this looks quite confusing and also the distance is too big, so I would try to think of a different pattern
01:03:527 (4,5,6) - don't put jumps in a Normal, it's confusing for players - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820119 (and also try to make that long slider more symmetrical so that you can place (6) nicely) - after this you'll probably have to replace 01:05:890 (1,2) - these
01:13:449 (1) - this slider should end on the white tick, because the big beat is there, I think you were trying to follow the vocals, but there is already a lot of 1/2 in your map, so try to make it more simple - http://puu.sh/aciFV/9db2539101.jpg
01:21:008 (4,1) - as I already said, don't put jumps in a Normal diff, use distance snap and put (1,2,3) closer to 01:21:008 (4) - example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1820136 - http://puu.sh/aciNQ/58dc93885d.jpg
01:27:622 (1,2) - as I said, don't place jumps, it's only a Normal diff, try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827186
01:29:748 (1) - please don't place the spinner so close the the previous object, give some time to players to react --> http://puu.sh/afiav/bbe1bd8b5e.jpg - also remove whistle from the spinner, it sounds out of place
01:39:905 (1,2) - it might be a bit hard to start the new section with 1/2 sliders and the music is not loud either, so I would rather replace these 2 sliders with one slider - http://puu.sh/afih3/0ff0064b2c.jpg
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't use so many 1/2 hit circles, it's hard >.<
01:48:882 (6,1) - put (1) closer to (6) because there should be no jumps
01:58:331 (1,2) - put them closer, use distance snap properly

02:01:874 (6) - remove this, it sounds a bit like overmapping the Normal >.<
02:02:583 (1,2,3,4) - this is confusing because the slider is short and fast and there are hit circles afterwards so try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827261 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827265
02:08:724 (4,1) - give (4) a different direction, because the middle of the slider is too close to the next object, so it might be confusing for players, something like this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827276 - but it depends on what you change from the previous points
02:16:283 (4) - remove one reverse and give it a different direction, as I said, this kind of things in a Normal are confusing - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827282
02:17:700 (3,4) - please fix the distance >.< it's a bit too big
02:19:118 (4) - add new combo, (7) is a big too much for Normal, and there might be other places, so in general try to have less than 6 for combos (imo)
02:19:590 (6,7) - I think you could make this look nicer and flow better as well if you changed the shape of (7), try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827295
02:22:425 (2,3,4) - try not to stack these, it might be easier to read - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827303
02:23:370 (5) - remove the last reverse and add a hit circle instead, it's better to play, because it's a bit confusing to have too many reverses - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827306
02:33:291 (3,4) - as I said it's confusing to place the hit circle after the reverse so replace (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1827323
02:57:858 (4,1,2,3,4) - try not to stack so much, this place looks really crowded, I suggest this --> http://puu.sh/afl3U/fa364c5ef2.jpg (there was also a reverse removed 03:01:165 (2) - and a hit circle was added)
03:06:834 (5,6) - these are too close, use distance snap so that it won't be confusing

Hitsounds and blankets:
Well try to follow what I said on the easy diff, the same applies here, so I'm not going to go into details this time.

Last edited by Mystyk 2014-07-17T14:25:27+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-13T10:34:03+00:00

VeeLaHee104 wrote:
hi, from V&V's modding queue

good thing you dont request veyron for this, he'd berserk when he sees it. such besterd veyron xD
[Easy]
00:14:866 - remove this inherit point, it's unused.
00:20:535 (1) - smooth like the slider on 00:22:425 (3) - for better flowing.
00:22:425 - add more notes, dont ignore strong beats
00:29:984 (3,5) - stack more here
00:32:346 (1,3) - overlap, split or stack the slider's tail
00:37:071 (3,2) - ^, but not slider's tail
00:41:795 (4) - move to x:32|y:148, for better blanket
00:50:299 (4,2) - stack
00:54:551 (1,) - small overlap, split
00:57:386 (2) - smooth like the next slider for better flow
01:01:638 (1) - same like 00:14:866 -
01:12:504 (3,1) - spacing here is bad, fix this
01:40:378 (1) - same like 00:57:386 (2) -
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -
01:49:827 (4,5) - overlap, split
01:54:551 (4,1) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -, jumps are not allowed on easy diffs
01:55:023 (1,3) - stack or split?
02:04:000 (4,1) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -
02:06:362 (1,2) - smoothen or sharpen one these sliders for sym
02:32:819 (1) - smooth more for better blanket
02:55:496 (1,3) - stack a bit more
03:03:055 (1,2,3) - same like 01:12:504 (3,1) -
[Normal]
00:14:866 -same reason in easy
00:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - nobody likes this flow this year, smoothen it
00:38:488 - add note here to follow vocals
00:39:433 - add note, strong beat here
00:50:771 (1) - smoothen the slider like the next two sliders for better flow.
01:03:527 (4,5,6) - fix spacing, jumps are not allowed on normal too
01:13:449 (1,2,3,4) - same like 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:27:622 (1,2) - same like 01:03:527 (4,5,6) -
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - same like 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:52:661 (7) - a bit boring, reduce repeats and add notes next.
01:58:331 (1,2,3) - same like 01:03:527 (4,5,6) -, and also smooth one of the sliders for sym
02:42:267 (1,2,3) - ^
i think these two diffs cannot be modable... the spacing is really different. big SP, but a little bad mapping, i hope you have a better maintenance on your map. Collab looks ok, but it has some flow problems, so find it yourself.
good luck~

Mystyk wrote:
Hi from my queue! Well only one diff YET, because it takes ages to mention everything, and I believe it will also take you long enough to fix them xD school starts already so, it mught take a while to update it, thank u so much ><

fixed!
edit: also fixed normal diffs, updated

Last edited by Celizavia 2014-07-19T13:56:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Konpaku Sariel

778 posts

Joined October 2010

Konpaku Sariel 2014-07-18T08:46:44+00:00

http://puu.sh/agw5U/fbfcc83b42.osu

Update!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-07-20T06:15:25+00:00

mod request in lacueva

General and Metadata Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:

Easy : 1 -
[Hard Collab : 1 -
[lZenxl's Muzukashii : 0 -
[lZenxl's Oni : 0 -
[Normal : 1 -
[Sariel's Fuutsu : 1

Inconsistency in Tags: -
[Easy :--------- --------Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[Hard Collab :--------- Catallena The 3rd pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[lZenxl's Muzukashii :- Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[lZenxl's Oni :---------- Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[Normal : ---------------Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[Sariel's Fuutsu :------ Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan

Inconsistency in Kiai Times: -

[Easy :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:16:764
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:023

[Hard Collab :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[lZenxl's Muzukashii :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[lZenxl's Oni :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[Sariel's Fuutsu :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[easy]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:16:764 - snap to 01:16:756

[hard]
00:16:283 (1,2) - It is a little confusing spacing ? 00:17:228 (2) - or new combo ?
00:45:102 - finish ?
00:46:992 - ^
02:25:260 - ^
02:27:622 (5) - NEW combo ?
02:29:512 (7) - ^

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2014-07-20T09:15:48+00:00

Thanks let me for M4M~

Unn..I'll tell you my thought for this map. (Just Std

)
I don't like Kpop, but I'll tell you problem. And this is First Kpop mod for me.

Hard Collab
1. I can't find what you focus on this diff.
2. Slider(s) ignore too more good sound.

00:01:638 - why not start here??
00:16:283 (1) - 3 voice, why a slider to ignore 2nd voice?? after this object, same sliders I won't tell you.
00:26:204 (3) - ^
00:28:685 - voice
01:32:346 - I think breaktime put here better, and start 01:39:905
01:55:023 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - try this↓

01:58:803 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:08:960 (3) - 1/4 slider
02:25:260 (6) - breaktime here better, start here 02:32:819
02:59:039 (6,7,8,9) - too much stacking

And this is for you to reference↓ (>40s)

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61638
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 115023,122582
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Catallena
TitleUnicode:Catallena
Artist:Orange Caramel
ArtistUnicode:Orange Caramel
Creator:Celizavia
Version:test
Source:
Tags:Catallena The 3rd pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,8960,14866
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Normal
00:38:488 (4,5,6) - change an arrow slider
00:40:850 (3) - ^
00:44:157 (5,6) - DS
02:01:874 (6) - ^
02:21:480 (1) - slider confuse

...Normal's DS are not unity, Please fix.

Easy
00:24:315 (1) - DS
00:37:071 (3) - ^
00:55:496 (2) - ^
00:57:386 (2) - remove an arrow
01:05:889 - circle??
01:09:197 (3) - DS
01:13:449 (1) - ^
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - an arrow slider better
01:15:338 (5) - remove all finish and finish is here 01:17:228
01:42:268 (3) - DS
01:43:685 (2) - ^
02:00:220 (2) - ^
02:06:362 (1) - ^
02:12:504 (1) - ^
02:15:338 (4) - ^
02:21:008 - lost sound
02:23:370 (5) - DS
02:24:787 (6) - ^
02:33:763 (2) - ^
02:55:023 (3) - ^
03:03:055 (1) - ^
03:07:779 (2) - ^

Notice: Easy, Normal diff must open Distance Snap from START to FINISH!!!

Good Luck

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-20T11:03:01+00:00

KokoroStudiox3

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:
mod request in lacueva

General and Metadata Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:

Easy : 1 -
[Hard Collab : 1 -
[lZenxl's Muzukashii : 0 -
[lZenxl's Oni : 0 -
[Normal : 1 -
[Sariel's Fuutsu : 1

Inconsistency in Tags: -
[Easy :--------- --------Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[Hard Collab :--------- Catallena The 3rd pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[lZenxl's Muzukashii :- Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[lZenxl's Oni :---------- Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[Normal : ---------------Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
[Sariel's Fuutsu :------ Catallena The 3rd kpop k-pop pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan

Inconsistency in Kiai Times: -

[Easy :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:16:764
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:023

[Hard Collab :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[lZenxl's Muzukashii :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[lZenxl's Oni :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496

[Sariel's Fuutsu :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:16:756, ends on 00:31:874
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:110, ends on 01:17:228
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:10:141, ends on 02:25:260
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:44:157, ends on 02:55:496
fixed all
[easy]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:16:764 - snap to 01:16:756

[hard]
00:16:283 (1,2) - It is a little confusing spacing ? 00:17:228 (2) - or new combo ?
00:45:102 - finish ? okay
00:46:992 - ^ ^
02:25:260 - ^
02:27:622 (5) - NEW combo ?
02:29:512 (7) - ^

thanks for the mod!

m1223961117

m1223961117 wrote:

Thanks let me for M4M~

Unn..I'll tell you my thought for this map. (Just Std

)
I don't like Kpop, but I'll tell you problem. And this is First Kpop mod for me.

Hard Collab
1. I can't find what you focus on this diff.
2. Slider(s) ignore too more good sound.

00:01:638 - why not start here?? consistency to the other std maps i suppose
00:16:283 (1) - 3 voice, why a slider to ignore 2nd voice?? after this object, same sliders I won't tell you. okay
00:26:204 (3) - ^ i prefer this
00:28:685 - voice fixed
01:32:346 - I think breaktime put here better, and start 01:39:905 no change
01:55:023 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - try this↓

01:58:803 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:08:960 (3) - 1/4 slider
02:25:260 (6) - breaktime here better, start here 02:32:819
02:59:039 (6,7,8,9) - too much stacking

And this is for you to reference↓ (>40s)

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Catallena - Orange Caramel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61638
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 115023,122582
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Catallena
TitleUnicode:Catallena
Artist:Orange Caramel
ArtistUnicode:Orange Caramel
Creator:Celizavia
Version:test
Source:
Tags:Catallena The 3rd pledis nana lizzy raina afterschool after school lZenxl Konpaku Sariel gokugohan12468 gokuhan
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"newbg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,8960,14866
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Normal
00:38:488 (4,5,6) - change an arrow slider
00:40:850 (3) - ^
00:44:157 (5,6) - DS
02:01:874 (6) - ^
02:21:480 (1) - slider confuse

...Normal's DS are not unity, Please fix.

Easy
00:24:315 (1) - DS
00:37:071 (3) - ^
00:55:496 (2) - ^
00:57:386 (2) - remove an arrow i prefer this
01:05:889 - circle?? no change
01:09:197 (3) - DS
01:13:449 (1) - ^
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - an arrow slider better
01:15:338 (5) - remove all finish and finish is here 01:17:228
01:42:268 (3) - DS
01:43:685 (2) - ^
02:00:220 (2) - ^
02:06:362 (1) - ^
02:12:504 (1) - ^
02:15:338 (4) - ^
02:21:008 - lost sound
02:23:370 (5) - DS
02:24:787 (6) - ^
02:33:763 (2) - ^
02:55:023 (3) - ^
03:03:055 (1) - ^
03:07:779 (2) - ^

Notice: Easy, Normal diff must open Distance Snap from START to FINISH!!!

Good Luck

thanks for the mod, will check the DS now :3

Koalazy

466 posts

Joined March 2010

Koalazy 2014-07-21T00:14:44+00:00

Hihi- testplay request as your request
and some suggestions

Easy

Replay

Easy diffs must follow consistent Distance snap all the time, or it will be unrankable
i think after fixing the placement will be fine...
01:14:630 (3) - easy diffs are not allowed to have red tick notes, or it will be unrankable

Normal

Replay

CS-1? the circle size is kinda small..

Hard Collab

Replay

this is my first try
i can't read 00:16:756 (2,3,4) - this

placement has a lot of improvement imo, try play more maps to extend the experience!

it's a nice start with mapping!
i can see you've put in many efforts in this, so don't give up

!
personally i think a remap will be much better, but most mappers refuses it..(included me XD)

good luck!

Neku Okazaki

Neku Okazaki 2014-07-22T19:10:26+00:00

Mod req from my moding queue

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-23T06:49:49+00:00

Neku okazaki wrote:
Mod req from my moding queue

Didn't noticed that lol, well there is a kantan diffs tho, so mind to mod that ?

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-23T08:47:39+00:00

Sorry for late~

SPOILER

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36,236,120693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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48,48,129433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,112,129905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,112,130850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,131086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,131323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,131559,6,0,P|376:192|464:124,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,132740,2,0,P|144:244|100:344,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,240,133449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,240,133685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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48,128,134157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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196,232,137228,2,0,L|240:256,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,172,138409,2,0,P|416:116|328:52,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,228,141480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,336,143606,2,0,L|192:288,1,80
224,180,144078,2,0,P|192:96|176:88,1,80
84,108,144551,2,0,P|88:180|116:200,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,284,145023,2,4,L|224:360,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,145496,6,0,P|392:280|400:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,145968,2,0,P|376:100|352:88,1,80
248,76,146441,2,0,P|192:92|176:136,1,80
116,208,146913,2,0,P|64:136|68:120,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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268,124,150456,2,0,L|196:192,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,151401,6,0,P|64:52|160:96,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,152582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,152819,2,0,P|280:284|184:240,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154236,2,0,P|136:144|16:164,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,276,154945,6,0,L|84:368,1,80
148,256,155417,2,0,B|216:352|216:352|296:248,1,240
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316,192,157779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,152,161323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161559,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,288,162504,2,8,L|440:184,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,128,163685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,228,164157,6,4,P|144:256|252:212,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,204,164866,2,0,P|364:144|388:120,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,165338,2,0,B|504:204|436:288|436:288|400:360|436:360,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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396,64,167228,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167700,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,152,167937,6,0,P|104:124|88:32,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,264,169590,2,0,B|400:180|456:104|456:104|284:104,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-25T10:42:25+00:00

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, Celizavia !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Easy

Don’t use 0.8x Distance Spacing, use 1.0x (Hold Alt and drag the sliderbar at top-right)
By using 0.8x, you still have the Distance problem, Check AiMod ! (Ctrl+Shift+A),
Add circle here 00:23:842 with Clap hitsound,
From here 01:02:110 why not use the same chart & hitsound as 00:16:756 ? With some changes ?
01:11:559 remove the clap hitsound,
From here 01:11:086 , yeah same as 00:16:756 ,
Add a circle with clap hitsound here 02:21:008 .

Normal

01:45:575 (5,6) – Keep the distance ,
Add circle here 02:01:638 ,
02:34:236 (4) – give it a Clap,
Add a circle here 03:02:110,
Remove this timing points 03:09:669 , it’s useless -_-,
And, move this timing point 03:10:141 to the end of spinner.

Sariel's Fuutsu

Check AiMod, Letterboxing is not allowed for Taiko 

Hard Collab

01:13:449 (1) –remove the spinner, change with something ‘interesting’,
01:26:677 (1) – Whoa ? What is this ?,
01:47:228 (1,2,3,4) – change the placing, I think it’s unrankable,
02:04:236 (6,7,8,9) - ^
02:10:850 (4,5,6) - ^
03:09:669 - remove this timing point and move 03:10:141 to the end of spinner.

lZenxl’s Muzukashii

Letterboxing conflicts with other diff.

lZenxl’s Oni

Letterboxing conflicts with other diff too .

That’s All Celizavia ! Good luck !

Last edited by KUURAhoshi 2014-07-25T21:45:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-25T12:25:11+00:00

No change, sorry

I see, lol~

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-25T12:51:33+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
No change, sorry

I see, lol~

No Problem

If it's not helping, feel free to tell me.. I'll shoot Kudosu star..

What do you think about my Modding Skills ?
Vote now !

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2014-07-27T03:43:31+00:00

sorry short mod,

[Easy]
00:22:425 (3,1) - newbie will cry when they see these
00:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these have same DS
00:29:984 (3,5) - overlap it more perfectly
00:34:236 (3) - the whole move to (232,140) and middle point to (280,168)
00:35:181 (1,2) - blanket
00:36:126 (2,3) - newbie will think there will fast!
00:41:795 (4) - - up the curve to blanket 00:41:323 (3) -
00:54:551 (1,2,1) - DS
01:34:236 (5,6) - blanket
01:43:212 (1,2) - ^
02:05:417 (2,1) - no
02:05:417 (2,1) - DS

EZ diff, you'd better not to change the DS, make the DS same

[Normal]
00:29:039 (2) - add a repeat
00:38:488 (4) - (352,124)
00:40:850 (3,4,1) - DS
01:45:102 (3,4,5,6) - blanket
02:44:157 (1,2) - try to parallel
03:02:582 (4,1) - too close

mod 2 diffs and so sorry

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-27T07:16:33+00:00

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, Celizavia !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
Easy
Don’t use 0.8x Distance Spacing, use 1.0x (Hold Alt and drag the sliderbar at top-right) i prefer 0,8
By using 0.8x, you still have the Distance problem, Check AiMod ! (Ctrl+Shift+A),
Add circle here 00:23:842 with Clap hitsound,
From here 01:02:110 why not use the same chart & hitsound as 00:16:756 ? With some changes ?
01:11:559 remove the clap hitsound,
From here 01:11:086 , yeah same as 00:16:756 ,
Add a circle with clap hitsound here 02:21:008 .will fixed the hitsounds
Normal
01:45:575 (5,6) – Keep the distance ,
Add circle here 02:01:638 ,
02:34:236 (4) – give it a Clap,
Add a circle here 03:02:110,
Remove this timing points 03:09:669 , it’s useless -_-, for the spinner to volume down the voice (?)
And, move this timing point 03:10:141 to the end of spinner.
Sariel's Fuutsu
Check AiMod, Letterboxing is not allowed for Taiko 
Hard Collab
01:13:449 (1) –remove the spinner, change with something ‘interesting’,
01:26:677 (1) – Whoa ? What is this ?,
01:47:228 (1,2,3,4) – change the placing, I think it’s unrankable,
02:04:236 (6,7,8,9) - ^
02:10:850 (4,5,6) - ^
03:09:669 - remove this timing point and move 03:10:141 to the end of spinner.
lZenxl’s Muzukashii
Letterboxing conflicts with other diff.
lZenxl’s Oni
Letterboxing conflicts with other diff too .
That’s All Celizavia ! Good luck !

thanks for the mod

_Stan wrote:
sorry short mod, :(

[Easy]
00:22:425 (3,1) - newbie will cry when they see these
00:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these have same DS
00:29:984 (3,5) - overlap it more perfectly
00:34:236 (3) - the whole move to (232,140) and middle point to (280,168)
00:35:181 (1,2) - blanket
00:36:126 (2,3) - newbie will think there will fast!
00:41:795 (4) - - up the curve to blanket 00:41:323 (3) -
00:54:551 (1,2,1) - DS
01:34:236 (5,6) - blanket
01:43:212 (1,2) - ^
02:05:417 (2,1) - no
02:05:417 (2,1) - DS

EZ diff, you'd better not to change the DS, make the DS same its already the same

[Normal]
00:29:039 (2) - add a repeat i dont understand waht that means
00:38:488 (4) - (352,124)
00:40:850 (3,4,1) - DS
01:45:102 (3,4,5,6) - blanket
02:44:157 (1,2) - try to parallel
03:02:582 (4,1) - too close

mod 2 diffs and so sorry

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