1. Easy (1,29 stars, 121 notes)
2. ego_17's Normal (1,59 stars, 164 notes)
3. Hard (1,97 stars, 183 notes)

Thanks to the modders

Kibbleru, ego_17, Gordon123,Gaia, FlobuFlobs, pandorawindy, Jaltzu, P o M u T a, handsome, theramdans, Hollow Wings, Ovoui(x2!), Nozhomi, Disgallion, Xgor, Neil Leo, Cherry Blossom, Pereira006, IceBeam, Paloma, Xgor, Pereira006

Kibbleru wrote:

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-Hard-
13:16 Kibbleru: the claps would be put on the 2nd and 4th white tick
13:16 Kibbleru: counting from the big white tick which is called the downbeat
Fixed. The only problem is this hard diff haven't enough items (particularly at the beginning) to punctuate all the concerned ticks with the claps.

13:28 Kibbleru: 02:21:586 -
13:28 Kibbleru: add another uninherited timing point here
13:28 Kibbleru: and set it to 76 bpm
13:29 Kibbleru: make sure u do that with easy diff too
Fixed ! Really useful

13:29 Kibbleru: oh btw u need a normal fyi if u didnt know that
I said it in the previous post ; I'm actually looking for a guest diff.

13:31 Kibbleru: 00:53:883 (3) - this note is a bit overmapped
Fixed.

-Easy-
13:33 Kibbleru: 00:17:213 - i really recommend you adding something here
13:33 Kibbleru: actually try this rhythm 00:16:785 - http://puu.sh/9GO2q/b6549dbaa5.png
13:33 Kibbleru: a 1/2 slider with reverse should work well
Fixed

13:34 Kibbleru: 00:23:647 - same here in this case
Fixed

13:35 Kibbleru: also people absolutely despise it when you reverse stuff more than once 01:06:105 (6)
Fixed

13:36 Kibbleru: however, thins like this 01:15:969 (4) - you can remove since it's not on a really prominent sound
Fixed

13:36 Kibbleru: and like 01:19:400 (6) -
Fixed

13:36 Kibbleru: 01:24:975 (1,2,3) - the 1/4 gap between objects is too short for newbies to react to
Fixed

13:37 Kibbleru: 01:38:699 - similar situation here
Fixed

13:38 Kibbleru: yeah dont do this lel 01:51:136 (1,2,3) -
Fixed

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ego_17 wrote:

change offset on easy diff too
easy
00:23:647 (2,3) - change to repeat slider like you did it before 00:16:785 (2) - fixed!
00:31:794 (6) - this note should be playeble, so circle mb? hm no, I like how it's placed currently
00:37:799 (5) - new combo fixed!
00:41:230 (9) - ^ ^
00:42:088 (1) - remove new combo ^
00:47:234 (4) - new combo ^
00:47:234 (4,5,6) - plays good but too hard - make it like this - 01:31:837 (2,3,4) - should be fine now
00:53:668 (2,3,4,5,6) - for easy try awoid more thet 3 circles in a row and for me its same as 00:14:640 (1,2,3) - but in another key so you dont need so many circles ^
00:57:956 (6) - stat from this place Fixed!
01:04:389 (2) - to many circles again and difficulty lvl incresed its ok to make harder in kiai part but not here i think replaced 2 circles by a slider
01:06:105 (6) - repeat offbeat for me make it simple slider or two half beat sliders starting on white tiks fixed differently
01:24:975 (1,2) - repeats again) I want to keep the break
01:34:410 (6) - new combo yep
01:35:268 (8) - remove last 2 repeats ^
01:42:130 (5) - ^ ^
and circles, theare is too much replaced by sliders
01:44:274 (7,8) - mb change to somthng changed
01:45:561 (1) - i point on it again) but this time its ok ) no changes
02:01:429 (1,2,3) - too hard changed
02:17:941 (2) - start it 02:17:726 (2) - and make longer fixed
02:22:375 (6) - new combo ^

hard
00:54:097 (3) - remove replaced by a slider
01:24:976 (1,2,3) - there is no need of using blue tics changed a little. I want to keep the offbeat
01:32:266 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i see why you did this, but plasing them in stacks it not good and deleting 01:32:696 (5) - makes it more playable changed with sliders
01:34:197 (2) - del fixed!
01:36:127 (4) - one circle ^
01:43:203 (6,8) - del ^
01:47:063 (7) - ^ ^
01:55:855 (7,1,2,3) - ? its like copypasted on wrong beat) try to remap this place until 02:00:144 (4) remapped.
02:02:288 (1) - its ok that kiai overmapped a litle, but i think from now it nedds to be more calm ^
thats all for now )
mb a litle more in the future )
and try to give more attention on flow, in this map its very important : try to make notes follow simple lines, one by one(00:29:651 (4,1) - not like this, or this 00:33:082 (5,1) - 00:36:514 (5,1) - ) - remapped a little for some parts.

and for me hitsounds its just to make some beats and melody sound more clear, placing them on every second beat is kind too easy way (play this map or listen insane in editor https://osu.ppy.sh/b/23461 )
ps i need some time to respond for your mod - im a little busy on work for now

Gordon123 wrote:

[General]
all good but BPM : 70,00 No. It was 70 before, but the end was desynchronized (try by yourself)
[Normal]
00:42:088 (2) - replace slider > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787347 (In rhythm)

for this slider

The slider velocity alteration is too brutal for an easy diff, I think. Modified by another way.
[Hard]
good job
P.S. good luck Thank you!

Gaia wrote:

Heya~

[General]
Remove the slider sound? I think it'd sound a lot better - removed! yeah, it sounds better :3
A lot of straight sliders, would be more fun if you had more curves imo

[Easy]
00:27:506 (1,2) - looks like an awkward blanket should be fine
00:37:799 (1,2) - blanket better fixed
00:37:799 (1) - 00:40:270 - not stacked properly yep
00:41:230 (1,2) - blanket no, I like how it's placed now
00:54:954 (5) - to not overlap and blanket http://puu.sh/9ZUTO/867d71437f.jpg fixed by another way (for AiMod)
01:12:109 (7) - down instead of left so blanket? remapped.
01:24:546 (8,1) - aren't lined up now they are
01:32:266 (3) - weird whistle sound and I don't think you can use 1/4 for easy ^
01:35:268 (3) - Don't think you can reverse more than once in easy yes but kiai time. I'll see with the next modders.
01:42:130 (4) - ^ ^
01:43:417 (5,6) - not lined up now they are
01:43:846 (6,1) - try not to overlap I want to keep it Let's see what the other modders will say
01:49:850 (7) - same as above same
01:53:281 (5,1) - not stacked perfectly now they are~
01:57:569 (4,5,6) - blanket these okay but a little

[Hard]
Slow song like this, CS4 (maybe even less) sounds better to me will be too easy for a Hard diff D: but okay
00:15:497 (2,3) - line up straight fixed
00:16:784 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:20:214 (2,3) - both a little bit to the left yep!
00:39:514 (3,5) - not straight ^
00:41:980 (2) - not very sure about the 8th here. it should be fine
01:23:152 (4) - ^ ^
01:35:267 (2) - stack on 01:33:552 (1) - ? why ?
01:51:135 (1,3) - line up straight yep
02:10:863 (2,3) - blanket fine
02:20:299 (6,7,8,9) - not perfect square moved
02:22:375 (1,2) - not lined up straight ^

Nice and relaxing ^^ Great song~
GL from now on!! Thank you!!

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Easy

1. 00:18:071 (3) - this curve is a bit too sharp fixed with a blanket
2. 00:28:364 (2) - blanket here? remapped a little.
3. 00:39:944 (3) - spacing should be constant remapped all because of this stupid AiMod
4. 00:45:519 (5,1) - bad Blanket I don't see the problem with this blanket
5. 00:47:663 - add note not on the easy diff
6. 01:07:820 (7) - move the end a bit lower to avoid stack with 01:06:104 (5) - yep
7. 01:31:837 (2,3,4,5) - this is extremly hard to read changed
8. 01:57:569 (4,5) - bad blanket why ?
9. 02:07:862 (4) - copy this and flip and and snap it, looks way better yep!

Hard

1. 00:31:365 (2) - fix spacing ok
2. 00:30:508 (1,2,3) - isnt correctly lined up can't see
3. 00:34:367 (1,2,3) - incease spacing by 0,1x or 0,2x to avoid stack? fixed
4. 00:35:225 (3) - blank ? hm no
5. 00:35:225 (3,4,5) - incease spacing by 0,1x or 0,2x to avoid stack? no stacking here...?
6. 00:53:238 (1) - Fix spacing fixed
7. 01:13:824 (3) - move more to the right for a better looking spacing ok
8. 01:20:685 (3,4,5) - ^the same with left yeah
9. 01:23:152 (4,5) - space or blanke them, it looks like 1/4 unstacked
10. 01:27:977 (5) - move a bit lower for better spacing yeah!

• pretty good man,this diff is very suit to play for beginners.

1. Don't use too many circles in your map,create some sliders instead of them.If you always look the ranked maps,you ll see slider is very important object. Lost my pieces is a good example.The map ll be emptiness without sliders.00:15:497 (2,3) - you can use the slider instead of there two circles.etc...
2. 00:26:219 (2) - you can change it into a slider.
3. 00:29:221 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
4. There are just a little bit examples,you can find more and fix in your diff.

pandorawindy wrote:

At your request,i come here mod your map for M4M;
First things first,I am a guy who can give you some suggestions to improve your overall quality.I don't concern the maps' rankability.
[Easy]

• pretty good man,this diff is very suit to play for beginners. Thanks

[Hard]

1. Don't use too many circles in your map,create some sliders instead of them.If you always look the ranked maps,you ll see slider is very important object. Lost my pieces is a good example.The map ll be emptiness without sliders.00:15:497 (2,3) - you can use the slider instead of there two circles.etc...
2. 00:26:219 (2) - you can change it into a slider.
3. 00:29:221 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
4. There are just a little bit examples,you can find more and fix in your diff.

I don't think I'm overusing circles and I don't want to use more sliders because they make the beatmap too easy and I want to use them to emphasize the rythm.
However, I replaced some circles by sliders in the whole song, where I think some sliders should be placed.
I also am a fan of the soft music,so i love your song,i trust you can make your map better.

Jaltzu wrote:

GENERAL
I'm pretty sure you can change 69,95 BPM to 70. Noo I cant, try by yourself and listen the last 15 seconds of the song with 25%speed.

EASY

00:20:216 (4,5) - Don't stack notes in easy diff. Low BPM and good visibility. It should be fine if it's rankable.
00:47:234 (6,7) - Continue the slider till 00:48:306 and delete the circle. fixed
01:49:850 (5) - This multislider doesn't fit in the music in this position. fixed
02:01:000 (6) - New combo of course
02:03:574 (8) - Do not stack this circle under the slider tail. okay
02:13:009 (3,4,5) - Replace with: http://puu.sh/agOkM/fe2c201b02.jpg yeah
02:18:155 - http://puu.sh/agOum/5c825fcef8.png no

HARD

00:54:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this part doesn't fit the music well. It's not bad at all when played, but I would still map this the same 'calm' way as everything else till this point in the map. Fixed by removing some elements.
Nothing else to point out. Love this.

Really lovely map. Good luck for getting it ranked. Thank you~

Jaltzu wrote:

GENERAL
I'm pretty sure you can change 69,95 BPM to 70.
it really becomes offbeat - i tried it

NORMAL

00:50:236 (6) - Continue this slider till 00:51:094. Delete circle 00:51:094 (7)
but i did it same about 2-3 times before (cos it sound same to me) and changing only this place? no/ and i think 00:51:094 (7) - must be playable so - circle here, or slider, not slider end.
01:35:267 - You could add something like: http://puu.sh/agOPI/d74f02e468.png
i intentionally avoided 1/4 sliders (just 2-3 here) they too short and overlap eachover - so no changes (it sound good and really fits, but i follow to another melody, not this ringbells - only in the end once..)
01:42:129 - ↑↑
01:48:991 -↑↑
01:55:853 -↑↑
02:11:293 (5) - NC
02:13:866 (1) - Delete NC
02:14:724 (2) - NC
02:15:152 (1) - Delete NC i want mark those sliders more...
02:23:164 (1) - ↑↑
im truing to follow melody not down beats here, but i splitted some long combos

mb we fix this star raiting issue later...

Really lovely map. Good luck for getting it ranked.

1. You haven't Break time, so not need 'Letterbox during breaks' check.
2. Not need 'Widescreen Support'. you not use SB.
   

1. 00:14:640 (1,2) - try blanket?
2. 00:48:949 (1) - spacing is so far. try 1.00 around spacing. beginner player confuse!
3. 01:35:267 (3) - maybe this slider confuse beginner player. (hard) 1/2 reverse slider more better imo.
4. 02:13:008 (3,2) - overlaps is looks bad. try change better.
5. this diff some stack notes. bit hardly play.

1. 00:39:943 (4) - add clap. i think fit.
2. 01:38:269 (5) - add whistle slider head?
3. 01:55:424 (6) - ^
4. 02:16:010 (2) - why use red point? (slider).
   

1. OD8 is too big. i prefer 7.
2. 01:34:410 (1) - remove NC. nothing mean imo.
3. 02:23:164 (2) - add whistle. because strong piano sound.

P o M u T a wrote:

hi

[General]

1. You haven't Break time, so not need 'Letterbox during breaks' check. Uh, okay, even if I don't think it will really change something
2. Not need 'Widescreen Support'. you not use SB. Already not checked.

[Easy]

1. 00:14:640 (1,2) - try blanket? okay, a large one
2. 00:48:949 (1) - spacing is so far. try 1.00 around spacing. beginner player confuse! Yeah! Didn't noticed that.
3. 01:35:267 (3) - maybe this slider confuse beginner player. (hard) 1/2 reverse slider more better imo. It's kiai time, and it's not soo hard I think.
4. 02:13:008 (3,2) - overlaps is looks bad. try change better. changed
5. this diff some stack notes. bit hardly play. I think it's okay, but I'll see with the next mods.

[ego_17's Normal]

1. 00:39:943 (4) - add clap. i think fit.
2. 01:38:269 (5) - add whistle slider head?
3. 01:55:424 (6) - ^
4. 02:16:010 (2) - why use red point? (slider).

[Hard]

1. OD8 is too big. i prefer 7. yeah why not
2. 01:34:410 (1) - remove NC. nothing mean imo. okay.
3. 02:23:164 (2) - add whistle. because strong piano sound. Nope. I like the current sound.

sorry. short mod.
good luck

handsome wrote:

m4m~

combo 1 and 2 are too alike modified a little

[HARD]
interesting, but its very linear and compressed. try to make full use of the playing field. i do acknowledge the challenges encountered due to the low bpm though. try to do more blanketing and curved sliders. also, keep ds constant, its much neater.

00:15:497 (2) - ds? for one pixel? yeaaaah, if you want, here's your pixel. xD
00:34:796 (2,3) - can be blanketed yep
00:52:380 (4) - NC here, remove NC after hm yeah why not
01:05:246 (7) - pretty ugly overlap, try to have the sliders perpendicular to the flow nope, I tried but AiMod disagrees.
01:08:248 (5) - too close yeah
01:11:465 (4) - incorporating 1/4 sliders into a stream is very confusing to the fingers. try having 5 and 6 stacking below the slider. no, I think it should be fine like this - and it's a Hard diff
01:23:152 (4,5) - too close no.
01:26:690 (4) - ^ centered
01:33:552 (1,3) - stack? yeah of course!
02:07:861 (3) - blanket yeah a little.
02:10:863 (2,3) - can be blanketed better, here's a guide (i havent changed it) with a REAL guide it's better. x_x"

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[img]02:10:863%20(2,3)%20-[/img]

[NORMAL]

00:23:646 (1,2,3) - this portion is staggered weirdly, fix it
00:25:790 (5) - either blanket or let it flow regualrly
00:27:506 (1) - blanket

umm i'm falling asleep, its too slow for me, i tried though, :p

P o M u T a wrote:

hi

i rechecked hitsounds as promised to Neil

[ego_17's Normal]

1. 00:39:943 (4) - add clap. i think fit. added
2. 01:38:269 (5) - add whistle slider head? added
3. 01:55:424 (6) - ^ added
   
   and, added another hitsounds at kiai
   
4. 02:16:010 (2) - why use red point? (slider). listen to the song - there is some sort of bells ringing
   
   thanks !

/////////

handsome wrote:

m4m~

[NORMAL]

00:23:646 (1,2,3) - this portion is staggered weirdly, fix it intentionaly - they placed at curved line and so flow more natural, at oval form/
00:25:790 (5) - either blanket or let it flow regualrly i dont like blankets - that it changes ?
00:27:506 (1) - blanket ^

umm i'm falling asleep, its too slow for me, i tried though, :p

Blue Dragon wrote:

TO THE MOON YES GET THIS RANKED

theramdans wrote:

Hello!
random mod-overall not bad for first map but i found some issues here lol
You can make the bpm exact 70.00