Lanturn wrote:

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Lanturn wrote:

Random info mod here because I <3 Sailor Moon

When you get all this fixed and such, and feel confident your map is ready to go. Give me another shout and I'll come mod it. I would also be happy to do a GD (Normal I guess since you have an Easy/Hard and I hate Insanes) as well if you want.

[General]

Mp3 File: The mp3 file you use is extremely low quality. Try using the direct rip from the offical CD instead of from a youtube rip. -> http://puu.sh/7qIxn.mp3 Should be fixed/color]
Try about a 207 offset. I haven't tested it but it should be pretty close to correct.

Video File: Your video file is a wmv (avi or flv is required) and has sound. Please use this one: http://puu.sh/7qKDk.avi [color=#00FF00Should be fixed[/color]
I'm not sure of the offset for this since I haven't tested, but it shouldn't be hard to figure out.

Title: Sailor Moon Theme <-- This is honestly the name of the song. Moonlight Densetsu is the Japanese version this song is based off of but it isn't called it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Sa ... _TV_Series Changed

Tags:
Tetsuya Komoro (Composer, and a very important person to all of the English Sailor Moon soundtrack) | http://puu.sh/7qJCq.jpg
Bob Summers (He mixed this song, basically the arranger and also preformed it.) | see screenshot above.
Opening (Opening to the Anime)
Songs from the Hit TV Series (Album name)

Consider adding stuff like Bishoujo Senshi and Moonlight Densetsu to the tags as well since this show is originally from Japan.
Added

Also consider changing your preview point to where "Fighting Evil by Moonlight" is as it makes more sense in the preview to start there.Changed

One final thing. You will probably have to change your difficulty names to something easier to understand. Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Moon. All these diffs can be arranged in any order so it won't pass because people won't be able to understand at a glance what is the hardest difficulty. Simple Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane will be your best bet unless you can come up with a theme that can be understood easily what the easiest and hardest difficulties will be.Changed

Lanturn wrote:

Alright let's fix this a bit.

For now, Adjust the offset to 230 so all your notes get set properly to white and red ticks instead of blue.

In your Tags, Delete them all, and use the following: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn | Do not put commas to seperate them and a few other things such as the Artist/Title/Source shouldn't be in the tags as they're duplicates. Anime/English which is what the song will be classified as, shouldn't be in it as well. So just copy/paste the bold, and you're set

My difficulty can be found here. Right click from this page, save as, and save it into the song's folder.

My difficulty should be mostly ready. Stuff like the Kiai time can be sorted out after.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi there o/ Modding this because you modded mine :> I'm still a new modder so I might not spot much. Wow, thanks for the mod, I didn't even ask for one in return!

General

No problems found awesome

Easy

00:22:482 (3,4) - Move to x:192 y:336 Moved x to 192, but moved y to 340 instead. For the easy diff, I want the beginner to know that there is more circles after the slider, and a stack may make it too hard for them to notice
00:23:446 (1) - I really don't think this spinner is necessary, since you can still hear the vocals. I think it fits as is.
00:30:829 (4) - Move to x:144 y:152 Fixed
00:37:248 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:960 (1) - and shorten it to 00:40:458 (1) I think it's fine how it is atm
00:41:314 (2) - Beginners might not know when to let go of this slider. Fixed it in a way that's hard to put in words
00:58:219 (4) - Move to 00:58:432 (4) -
01:01:429 (2) - ew reposition this so it's not right in front of the slider track. Fixed

Hard

00:20:344 (1) - Move this further Fixed
00:32:861 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Turning this into a stream would be much better, Went with Knott's idea of a repeating slider
00:44:310 (1) - Move this further away from 00:43:025 (5) - because the overlap is very ugly Fixed
01:09:345 (2) - Consider turning this into a nice looking pattern rather than just a stack of sliders Fixed
01:14:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn this into stream? Went with Knott's idea again

Well that's it. Good luck with getting this ranked and have fun~ Thanks! Good luck to you, too!

Knotts wrote:

Here from my modding queue.

[General]

1. Disable widescreen support on the Insane and Easy difficulties since you don't have a storyboard. Fixed

[Easy]

1. I can't really mod this difficulty as it is now. You need to have constant DS throughout this difficulty. Don't really see what you mean by not having a constant DS here.

[Hard]

1. 00:10:073 (1) - end this slider on the white tick. Fixed
2. 00:27:405 (6) - ^ ^
3. 00:32:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this streams too long for a hard. you could use a repeating slider instead? Yep, fixed
4. 00:34:466 (3) - make this a slider that extends to the white tick? Fixed
5. 00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead of stacking these on top of each other, you should space them out to make it more enjoyable to play and more attractive Fixed
6. 00:40:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
7. 00:46:021 (5,6,7) - 00:46:021 00:46:021 indeed? I have no clue what you mean, I'm assuming you didn't finish what you were going to put for 5,6,7
8. 00:48:161 (1,2,3) - you could use blankets for better flow and to make it look nicer. Fixed it essentially the way you did, but made 3 a bit different
   
   screenshot

   
9. 00:50:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much stacking, hard to read. Spread them out. Fixed
10. 00:56:720 (6) - End slider on the white tick Fixed
11. 00:58:218 (1,2) - I think it sounds better like this I think it sounds like it should be fixed, so I did fix it
    
    screenshot

    
12. 01:08:703 (1,2) - this isn't really good flow. Too much stacking. Use curved sliders more. Fixed
13. 01:12:127 (1) - remove nc? Fine as is
14. 01:14:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really hear a stream here. You should replace with sliders. Fixed
15. 01:21:542 (6) - remove NC and start it at 01:21:756 (1)? Fine as is
16. 01:22:184 (2) - move this a little so its not touching (1)? Fixed
17. 01:24:538 (6,1,2,3,1,2) - Hard to read and play, spread them out.Fixed

Good luck

Knotts wrote:

For your easy you're constantly changing the distance spacing. An example of this would be at 00:21:628 (2). Here you have 0.23x instead of your usual 0.4x.


I have no idea what I was writing for 00:46:021 (5,6,7), lol sorry about that.

pishifat wrote:

played this map and easily found things that needed fixing so i thought i would give you a free mod Thanks!

as usual, if you don't want to change something, you don't need to. my mod is just lots of suggestions (many of which will be mentioned by other modders too i think )

Easy

- the distance spacing would be a lot better if it were larger. 0.7x would be best (or 0.6x if you don't want to change as much). it's nice to have some space between notes that are placed on white spaces, otherwise it feels like you're not even moving your mouse/pen, which is pretty boring. for an easy difficulty, it's highly recommended that you follow the distance spacing teh whole time, so if you do change the multiplier, you'll have to pretty much re-arrange your whole map (sorry) Was planning to dothis anyways
00:21:628 (2) - start this on 00:21:414 red tick to keep consistency with the previous 2 times something like this played in the song Fixed
00:27:405 (2) - ends on an awkward note. it would be better to not have this be a reverse slider and instead do something else. the slider shape itself is also pretty unappealing -- this could help with that: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194 Fixed
00:46:021 (1) - it's also highly recommended that you don't include reverse sliders of 1/2 length which include multiple reverses on easy difficulties. new players have terrible reaction time and can't tell when the note is going to end like this Fixed
00:49:445 - include a note here. when the same rhythm played in the song prior there was a note every time Fixed
00:53:083 (4) - don't overlap notes like this on easy difficulties (standard stacking excused) Fixed
00:58:432 (4) - not a great slider again, although better than the other one Attempted fix
01:00:358 - a note should definitely be here to introduce that part with the guitar. it's too empty otherwise Fixed
01:05:279 (1,2) - what i said about the reverse sliders earlier Replaced with spinner
01:12:127 (1) - i don't think that was meant to end on a blue tick No it was not, fixed
01:12:769 (2) - would be better if this ended on 01:13:411 Sounds much better
01:17:262 (3,4) - blanket these better with 01:16:192 (2) like this. notice how it's the same distance from both ends of the slider and approach circle is sort of wrapping around the slider Should be slightly fixed now, not entirely exact though

nsfw

01:25:180 (1) - thing about reverse sliders again Fixed

it may also be good to include the spinner at the end so the difficulties all end at the same time Maybe will consider later

Insane

00:10:715 (2,3) - these 2 don't auto-stack very well since slider stuff is stupid. it would work better like this: Fixed
00:21:414 (2) - this also doesn't stack very well automatically so you should change it accordingly yourself Fixed
00:26:549 (2,3,4) - these would be better if not on top of (5) since they're each 1/4 apart and (5) is 1/2 apart Fixed
00:27:405 (6) - could be blanketted with (5) better like Actually ended up doing that cause of the fixed mod above. Fixed
00:32:113 (1) - blanket this with (2) just like above Slightly fixed
00:34:252 (2) - doesn't stack very well automatically (it's underneath the slider entirely) so i'd suggest making that stack better manually Fixed
00:35:964 - feels like a note is missing here. just add a circle or something Not really any missing note, and the circle didn't really fit in imo.
00:47:733 (1) - remove NC. would be consistent with normal that way [color=#FF000]I think the NC fits as is. If they need to stay consistent, we could change the NC on Normal[/color]
00:53:083 (6) - auto-stacks right underneath the slider. would be better if manually stacked Fixed
00:57:362 (7) - could blanket better with (6) Fixed
00:58:432 (2) - stack the end of this slider with the beginning 00:57:362 (7) like this Fixed
01:04:424 (7) - stack this with (4) earlier in the combo Fixed
01:08:703 (1,2) - blanket these like you did at 01:12:127 (1,2) Fixed
01:11:699 (1) - remove NC (same reasoning as earlier) That's understandable, fixed.
01:15:978 (1) - remove NC for not the same reasoning as before Fixed
01:23:254 (4) - stack this with (2) earlier in the combo Fixed
01:26:891 (4) - add NC since the rest of the difficulties did so for the separating of "she was the one" and "sailor moon" in the song lyrics Fixed

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have fun with all of that. lantern should teach you how to make those sexy sliders I shall try to learn his magical ways...

Ringating wrote:

random bg mod

people who play on 16:9 get a zoomed in, blurry image when the image is 4:3, so I upped x-res to 1366, and added a sort of "improved letterboxing," i.e. not just ugly black bars. People that play at 4:3 aren't affected by this change, since it's cropped off. I also gave the image a smoothing filter to reduce the artifacting from the original image's compression.

improved bg

you obviously don't have to use this if you don't want to, but imo just the smoothing alone is a pretty noticeable improvement

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hullo, mod as requested.

[Easy]
00:13:924 (1) - Consider adding a quiet finish here, for the cymbal crash in the music. Done
00:21:414 (2) - Extend the tail to 00:22:055, so it hits that beat at 00:22:055 in the music and the vocals saying 'from'. Sounds much better
00:22:482 (3) - Add finish here to. Fixed
00:27:405 (2) - Move to 00:27:619, the timing difference here is inconsistent because it's too close to 00:26:977 (1) - . The previous note was 1 1/2 beat away from 00:26:977 (1) - , and suddenly having the next object (00:27:619 (2) - ) a beat away from 00:26:977 (1) - sounds odd, and will certainly catch players off guard.Fixed, it's much better now
And also add a finish on 00:27:619. Fixed
00:41:314 (2) - Double click on the head of the slider on the timeline shown above, and add a finish. Fixed, also added claps to the slider
00:51:585 (1) - Add finish Fixed
00:53:083 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:55:009 (1) - The sliders body is really far out of the board, you need to remodel this. Fixed
00:58:432 (4) - ^ and New combo. Fixed
01:01:856 (4) - NC Fixed
01:05:279 (1) - Add finish Fixed
01:08:704 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:15:550 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
00:13:924 (1) - Add finish on the head. Fixed
00:28:689 (9,10) - Fix the blanket here, otherwise don't bother trying to make a blanket here at all. Fixed
00:32:112 (1,2) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Removed blanket
00:41:314 (2) - Add finish on the head. Fixed
00:42:598 (5,6) - Fix blanket. Fixed
00:55:009 (2) - NC instead of 00:54:473 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear in Kai time. Aslo adda finish here for emphasis.Fixed it
00:56:720 (6,7) - Fix blanket. Should be fixed
01:01:856 (1) - Add finish Fixed
01:08:703 (1,2) - Fix blanket. I think its fine as it is

Good luck. Thanks!

zorefire wrote:

From queue
[Easy]
Slider Velocity is too fast i recommend using 0.80 I think its fine.
00:19:060 (4,5) - that doesn't look presentable do something different Agreed, fixed
00:23:446 (1) - slider doesn't belong thereSpinner*, Fixed
00:26:977 (1) - doesn't sound rightSounds fine
00:37:248 (1) - again no slider map out with sliders and circlesFixed
00:50:943 (5) - take out Fixed
00:55:008 (1) - at least make it straight like aligned properly its all slanted Fixed
00:55:008- insert break please Fixed
01:12:127 (1,2,3) - see this is good more of this please like map it this style
01:16:192 (2) - end the it here 01:16:834 and turn it the other way ctrl + h is the command to do it Fixed
01:18:225 (1) - nope Fixed
01:21:757 (1) - ^ mapping it out would be better sounds like a lazy job was done here no offense Fixed
I would seriously recommend doing this difficulty over.
[Normal]
Beautiful! Yes this Difficulty is done!
[Hard]
00:32:861 (3) - no sounds bad Fixed it in my own way
01:09:987 (3) - fix the overlap Fixed
[Overall]
I feel as if Easy should be revamped completely
Normal is harder than Hard itself well not harder but it has more note patterns and Hard needs alot of work too.
Best difficulty over all was Normal
Lot of work needs to be Done on this map I wish you good luck!

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi.

Returning the favor :3 :3

[General]
I think I should address this before going further, the SV in the three diffs doesn't go in a progresive way, there's nothing wrong with it tho. But I suggest to do any of these two ways, making the SV of all diffs 1.40, or going 1.20-1.30 for Easy, keeping Lanturn's at 1.50 and using 1.60 for Hard, this would make the spread somehow better. This is not a must, the spread is fine as it is now. I think it's fine as is

[Easy]
00:15:637 (4) - *nazi* Move the last point to x:344 y:168, this will improve the blanket considerably. I <3 nazi mods since they are so pessimistic, so it's fine that it's a nazi thing. Fixed
00:19:916 (5) - Maybe move the points in a way to accentuate the curve as in the previous slider. Alternatively, you could copy previous slider and rotate it around 70° anticlockwise. Copypastad previous slider and rotated, fixed
00:23:553 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this one or move it to the next white tick, it'd match better the music imo. Moved it one tick
00:26:335 (1,1) - These circles are quite tricky as they aren't following the strongest/most catchy rhythm. I suggest to remove both and put a circle in 00:27:191 and maybe one more in 00:26:763.
00:30:401 (3,4) - Although this is following vocals correctly, beginners may be a bit lost when they have to hit the next slider due the irregular rhythm you're using, I suggest you to snap this in the next white tick, so this rhythm stick to the main beats and being more beginner friendly. Also put NC in (3). fixed
00:33:825 (1,2) - I'd suggest to avoid 1/2 patterns like this in an Easy as beginers would likely hurry to hit the next circle and likely miss. Remove the ci fixed
01:16:192 (2,3,4) - The spacing D: fixed
01:19:616 (2) - Move this to the next white tick. fixed
01:21:756 (1,2) - Same as in 00:33:825. fixed
01:26:891 (2) - Remove NC, this still belongs to the previous part. fixed
01:27:961 - Put a spinner here as you have in the other difficulties :p fixed

[Lanturn's Normal]
I suggest you to put your combos for vocals, given you mapped mostly on them.
01:25:180 (2) - Maybe this would look better with the reverse pointing down instead up.
I can't nitpick stuff anymore, so this would be all here >.<

[Hard]
Not a bad diff rhythmically, so I'll give a few placement suggestions.
00:10:073 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest to space this properly or at least move (3) away from the stack to improve readability. fixed
00:17:990 (3,4) - I suggest you to stack (4) in the tail of (3) or move it away keeping the spacing consistent. fixed
00:29:117 (10) - Use a blanket for this, like you did in 00:26:977 (5,6), so this looks better. Attempted better blanketing
00:30:829 (2) - Try to accentuate the curve of this more, so it leads better to the next circle, like in the screenie. fixed in own way

SPOILER

00:42:598 (5) - Put NC. Fixed
00:43:026 (6) - Maybe use a 1/2 slider with one repeat, to follow vocals better, you did it in Easy :p I think i'll keep it as is
00:46:021 (5) - Put NC. Fixed
00:51:585 (3) - I'd suggest you to move it around x:256 y:264, the spacing will be more intuitive for the next note (the spacing is the same, but not the time) and you'll keep the jumpy feeling. Fixed
00:53:938 - Add a triple in 1/4 here, you have mapped this in other spots but not here. Fixed
00:54:473 (2) - This should begin in the previous red tick. Fixed
00:56:720 (5) - Maybe end this in the previous white tick along with the guitar.soz, i think its gud as of right now
01:19:402 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing here. adjusted a bit
01:24:538 (6,1,2,3) - The NC should be in (6) imo. Fixed
01:26:890 (1) - Remove NC. Fixed
01:30:315 (1) - I suggest you to remove this slider as it doesn't feel good to end the map, as the main music faded out, instead, end the spinner here. fixed

That'd be all from my part here, good luck :3 u too :3

Erina wrote:

[Normal]
It's kinda weird how your slider velocity for normal is higher than hard, but I guess that's okay yeah. Mostly my fault I think. I looked at easy's SV and raised it by 0.1 and forgot to check hard XD
00:27:619 (2) - Add NC
00:28:475 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:117 (2) - Add NC not sure what happened here, but fixed.
Those above three I think make your NCs more consistent
00:43:026 (2) - Slider looks kind of weird, try making it more curved, it still seems kind of sharp when it transitions from straight into curved
01:17:690 (2) - Same with this slider, the curves look too sharp stretched it out and angled it a bit.
01:26:891 (2) - Perhaps add a finish at the end of this slider Added a drum samplehit here. and to the note before it. Sound better now.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sailor Moon Opening (English) -HD-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.536

[Metadata]
Title:Sailor Moon Theme
TitleUnicode:Sailor Moon Theme
Artist:Nicole & Brynne Price
ArtistUnicode:Nicole & Brynne Price
Creator:xVirtualNinjax
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:Sailor Moon
Tags:Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BeatmapID:385013
BeatmapSetID:140903

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,79,"Sailor Moon Theme.avi"
0,0,"sailor moon bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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152,268,70415,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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Erina wrote:

From my voice for mod queue! Great, now I have to sing. The things I do for mods

[Hard]
00:10:073 (1) - Consider slowing slider velocity on this slider or make it so it moves slower, I think that'd be a nice addition Meh, its fine as it is
00:11:785 (4) - Add NC (consistency with parts like 01:21:543 (6,1) - ) Fixed
00:18:631 (4) - I'm pretty sure you could just put this note directly under the previous slider and osu would stack the note for you Osu's a douche, it won't let me auto stack it
00:27:405 (6) - Add NC (consistency with parts like 01:21:543 (6,1) - ) Fixed
00:27:405 (6,7,9) - Same as 00:18:631 Same as 00:18:631
00:33:824 (1) - Move the slider end up to x:121 y:200 so it blankets better with the next slider, looks better imo Should be fixed due to how I moved the two sliders when I bumped SV
00:52:441 (5,6) - I'm pretty sure you could just put this note directly under the previous slider and osu would stack the note for you Same as 00:18:631...
01:00:359 (5) - Consider adding NC Added
01:09:345 (2) - Move to x:119 y:117, i think it looks better with previous slider Should be fixed from when I rearranged stuff
01:16:192 (3,4) - I don't really like this positioning, looks bad Should be fixed

[Normal]
It's kinda weird how your slider velocity for normal is higher than hard, but I guess that's okay I raised Hard's SV to 1.6. No complaining 4 u

[Easy]
Slider velocity seems a bit too high for easy For easy difficulties, I would recommend maybe 1.0x slider velocity and 1.0x distance snap. It's best of the velocity is the same as the spacing because that's easier to play Finally did it
00:32:326 (3) - Consider moving down by one grid mark Fixed
00:37:248 (1,3) - It would be kind of cool if you could blanket the first slider in the curve of the third one Tried to blanket
00:44:309 (1) - A clap hitsound work work well at the end of this slider Fixed
00:55:008 (1) - This slider isn't exactly symmetrical, it'd be pretty hard to make symmetrical though Fixed

Nice map, contact me later so you know when to sing! Shooting a PM right now. Well, at least it's Kin-iro Mosaic

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi, Sorry for late ;w;

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
00:19:916 (5) - Add finish at the end slider. Purposely didn't do that.
00:52:441 (3) - Finish at the head slider. Purposely didn't do that.
00:55:008 (1) - Add finish. Doesn't sound too great on default hitsounds with that.
01:01:856 (1) - Looks little ugly, try make it more rounded for example.

SPOILER

Was completely revamped from Erina's mod, soz
01:15:550 (1) - Add finish. nope.avi
01:17:262 (3,4) - Move to x:224 y:130 for better blanket. Ninja'd again
01:21:970 (1) - Finish at the end slider. added
01:23:896 (3) - Add finish.
01:25:180 (1) - add finish at the end slider.
01:26:891 (2) - ^. Added this and the two above
01:27:533 (1) - Maybe you make spinner like in the normal diff? Got ninja'd

[Hard]
00:11:784 (4) - Add NC, also add finish at the head slider. Added NC
00:12:640 (6) - Finish here. Changed to 2 claps
00:17:990 (3) - Move to x:318 y:24 for better blanket. All of these ninjas btw are because of me changing the map because of bumping the SV to 1.6. Soz. Ninjad
00:20:344 (1) - Instead clap add finish. I think its fine
00:22:483 (6,7) - ^. Added finish to 7 but kept claps
00:27:405 (6) - NC Added NC at 5
00:29:117 (10) - Move to x:330 y:136. Ninjad
00:48:803 (2) - Move to x:300 y:270. Ninjad
00:53:082 (6) - Make perfect stack with end slider. Fixed, but next time you could possibly elaborate on a "perfect stack", since it's a bit vague (no offense). I did what I saw was a perfect stack
01:00:359 (5) - NC. Ninjaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa'd
01:27:533 (1) - Same suggestion about spinner as easy. Got ninja'd again

Good luck~