1. Easy (1,27 stars, 163 notes)
2. Hard (0 stars, 1 notes)
3. Hope (5,17 stars, 260 notes)
4. Normal (0 stars, 1 notes)

This song.. I just love it and i'll share it with you all. ♥

Easy

Xenath3297 wrote:

Ok, so first of all, the song is good. The rythmn is good, but notes are too far. Get them closer, as the song's speed alone is enought to make it hard to play. Look at how auto plays it you can't even see it moving. Try reducing the notes' approach rate. Insane songs are cool only if they are possible to play

1. 00:15:231 - Pourquoi ignorer les notes en 1/8 ici alors qu tu les joues à 00:07:612 (2). Il faut que la logique de mapping soit consistante donc soit vire 00:07:612 (2) soit fait un truc similaire ici.
2. 00:32:150 - Je pense que tu devrais commencer le break ici parce que la cassure dans l'intensité de la chanson est ici et pas à 00:34:054 sur le son bizarre qu'on entend dans la chanson (et qu'on retrouve aussi à 00:35:959 en plein milieu de ton break) mais qui n'est pas sur une cassure dans la chanson.
3. 01:09:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Assez surprenant de te voir utiliser 8 notes avec un spacing constant alors qu'avant tu utlisais 4 sliders 1/2 avec des jumps. En plus, je trouve leur placement pas très joli ici.
4. 01:50:482 (2) - Le son que suit le slider ne s'arete pas la mais beaucoup plus loin. Si tu le met jusqu'au bout c'est sur ue ca sera pas pratique pour jouer mais au moins met-le jusqu'à 01:50:840.
5. 02:15:006 - Comme pour 00:32:150.
6. 03:28:099 (1) - Après 03:29:289 il n'y a plus rien, plus de voix, plus de musique RIEN. Donc le slider n'a pas de raison de continuer. Donc réduit le slider de moitié. Par contre augmente un peu sa vitesse car là c'est ridiculement bas!

1. 00:02:850 (5,6,7,8) - 8 est mal aligné avec 5,6 et 7... En supposant que tu voulais aligner. Si ce n'était pas ton intentionalors bouge un peu 6 et 7 car ce quasi-alignement donne un sentiment "d'imperfection" (pas sur que je m'exprime bien là)
2. 00:07:612 (2) - C'est unrankable. Tu n'as pas le droit de doubler localement le SV comme ça sans raison valable. En plus ca fait passer le slider 1/8 pour du 1/4 ce qui est trompeut et impossible a savoir sans y avir joué au moins une fois donc unrankable.
3. 00:08:326 (1,3) - Mauvais stack.
4. 00:15:945 (1,2,3,4) - Les jumps progressifs c'est une très bonne idée et ça correspond pas mal à la chanson mais je trouve que t'y est allé un peu fort sur le jump. Je pense que tu devrais réduire leur difficulté un petit peu (pas trop non plus). Un truc bien plus dur que 00:31:183 (1,2,3,4) mais moins dur que ce qu'il y a actuellement. Une difficulté plus dans le genre de 01:24:530 (1,2,3,4).
5. 00:23:564 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 00:26:183 (3,1) - Autant ce genre de pattern lorsque il y a un slider 1/4 au-dessus ça se fait autant ça, ça ne se fait pas vraiment....
7. 00:29:040 (3,1) - Je conseille fortement de CTRL+G le slider 3. En général c'est comme ça que ce pattern est mappé, c'est la tête des sliders qui se stackent (a vrai dire je n'ai jamais vu de map faisant comme tu fais) un peu comme tu fais pour 00:31:064 (4,1) (et les autres) mais avec des reverse sur le slider. Et du coup c'est assez bouleversant de voir ça dans une map. D'autant plus que c'est un changement de mapping assez brusque parce que avant tu mappais ce pattern differement (00:04:040 (2,3) - 00:11:659 (2,3) - 00:14:755 (7,1)). Du coup... Je sais pas trop mais je te conseille vraiment le CTRL+G. Et ca vaux aussi pour tout les autres pattern similaire dans la map (je ne vais pas tous les pointer)
8. 00:46:911 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi des anti-jump? La chanson ne justifie pas vraiment des anti-jump. Au contraire la musique augmente en intensité c'est des jumps qu'il nous fait.
9. 00:49:649 (2,3) - Deja que le spacing est assez bas pour cette partie (imo) mais si en plus tu le réduit ça va encore moins. Ne déscend pas en dessous de x1 c'est pas la peine dans cette partie là.
10. 00:50:721 (5,6,7,8) - Il faut des jumps ici pour être cohérent avec 00:52:625 (5,6,7,8) - 00:54:530 (5,6,7,8) - 00:56:435 (8,9) - 00:58:340 (6,7) etc...
11. 01:03:102 (2,3) - Spacing pas en-dessous de x1!!!!! On peut le confondre facilement pour du 1/2 avec un bpm aussi haut, même en AR9!
12. 01:07:149 (3,1) - Comme pour 00:26:183.
13. 01:13:816 (7,1) - etc..
14. 01:15:721 (3,4) - Je pense que tu peux améliorer le flow ici.
    
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15. 02:08:816 (5,6,7,8) - Pourquoi mettre des anti-jump alors que PARTOUT avant tu mettais des jumps? Les deux ne sont pas interchangeable!
16. 02:41:553 (8) - Deplace-le à x=268 y=16, ca flow mieux.
17. 02:42:981 (1) - CTRL+G? Non parce que là ca piège le joueur en lui faisant croire qu'il y a un reverse de plus.
18. 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4) - D'habitude tu mettais des jump dans ces endroits-là.
19. 02:59:172 (3,4) - blanket? (fallait bien que j'en sorte une ^^)
20. 03:35:360 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ce pattern est pas très agréable a lire. Tu passes d'un stack de 1/2 a unstack de 1/1 qui ensuite stacke du 2/1...
21. 03:41:670 (3,4) - SPACING!!!!!
22. 03:50:241 (1,2) - mal stack.
23. 04:14:527 (3,1) - ^
24. 04:08:336 (1,2) - ^
25. 04:27:146 (3,4,1) - Essaye de pointer ce slider dans une direction qui flow mieux.
    
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26. 04:20:241 (2,3,4,5) - Comme pour 02:41:553.
27. 04:28:098 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Si t'as envie de te faire détester par 95% des joueurs alors tu peux conserver ce pattern!

1. 00:43:578 (1) - Pas vraiment de raison pour un combo solitaire.....
2. 04:12:622 (1) - Retire le NC.
   Bon, c'est que 2 remarques mais j'ai pas trop apprécié les NC de ta diff en général, je trouve que tu en mets beaucoup trop!

Lumina wrote:

Sinon ma SB à pas le droit a un mod ? ^^

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hello, As your request =3

Flemme de mod en français xD

Extreme - AR10

00:12:136 (4,5) - Try to make better curve ? Fixed, hopefully...
00:19:636 (2) - x:360 y:156 Fixed
00:26:183 (3) - Stack properly on (1) Fixed
00:37:388 (3) - I think this slider is unrankable, you should make a normal slider / curve slider J'ai laissé tel que car je sais que vu comment j'ai fait ce/cette slider c'est pas unrankable, et c'est lié au son de piano assez surprenant et grave.
01:02:625 (1,2) - Larger distance snap ? Fixed
01:26:792 - Add 01:26:316 (3)'s symmetrical circle Fixed
02:28:219 (5) - Stack it on (1) Fixed
04:00:598 (2,1,2) - Not logical about Distance Snap Fixed
04:09:170 (3) - Same problem as above (Try a normal slider) Fixed

Aussi je pense que tu peux changer le "Set Current Position as Preview Point" à quelque chose comme 02:45:243 Non, celui que j'ai mis, introduit le joueur direct dans la partie la plus forte de la musique, et c'est mieux comme ça selon moi.

Sinon l'offset et le timing me paraissent très bien =3
(J'ai regardé les autres diff. et tout me parait correct)

Bref, Good Luck =D

1. 00:51:673 (2,1,2) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/7htVa.jpg
2. 00:56:197 (7) - Decrease one repeat?
3. 01:40:244 (4,1,2,3,1) - Simplify the rhythm here, to flow more with the music and make it more eazy
   
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4. 02:28:338 (1) - Decrease 2 repeats, i think it is not good for a eazy diff.
5. 02:56:910 (3,4) - A good suggestion:
   
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   02:58:814 (5) -
   
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   02:59:767 (1,2) -
   
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   Or choose a placement of your prefference.

1. 00:17:850 (3,4) - Blanket?
   
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2. 01:02:149 (7) - Delete this and : http://puu.sh/7hvKa.jpg
3. 01:54:530 (4) - Blanket better plz
4. 02:00:721 - Add a note
5. 02:02:149 (4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/7hvYc.jpg
6. 02:04:768 - Add a note
7. 02:05:006 (3) - Move to 02:05:244 - and delete repeat
8. 02:29:767 (2) -
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1. 00:08:088 (5) - I think less confusing :
   
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   Thats all

LucyS wrote:

M4M

[Eazy]

1. 00:51:673 (2,1,2) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/7htVa.jpg No.
2. 00:56:197 (7) - Decrease one repeat?No, the flow turns bad if i do.
3. 01:40:244 (4,1,2,3,1) - Simplify the rhythm here, to flow more with the music and make it more eazy No, because this is already enough easy
   
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4. 02:28:338 (1) - Decrease 2 repeats, i think it is not good for a eazy diff. No, because it makes the 2 last notes being empty and doesn't sounds good.
5. 02:56:910 (3,4) - A good suggestion:
   
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   No.
   02:58:814 (5) -
   
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   No.
   02:59:767 (1,2) -
   
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   Still No.
   Or choose a placement of your prefference.

[Normal]

1. 00:17:850 (3,4) - Blanket? I kinda made a straight slider like that : http://puu.sh/7nreO.jpg. But i can't make a blanket with a curve, because the spacing would break and it's not my goal for a normal diff, sorry.
   
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2. 01:02:149 (7) - Delete this and : http://puu.sh/7hvKa.jpg No. This slider is fine.
3. 01:54:530 (4) - Blanket better plz It was a fine blanket anyways uuuhhh... Well, i moved it with a medic accuracy.
4. 02:00:721 - Add a note Yes.
5. 02:02:149 (4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/7hvYc.jpg No, this is fine like that.
6. 02:04:768 - Add a note Yes.
7. 02:05:006 (3) - Move to 02:05:244 - and delete repeat No.
8. 02:29:767 (2) -
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No. Spacing Issue.

[Hard]

1. 00:08:088 (5) - I think less confusing :
   
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   There is nothing confusing here sorry.
   Thats all

Sorry for this poor mod, but I'm a little busy today. Good Luck!

Pjecoo wrote:

M4M

First of all: I'm not so experienced modder, so I can probably overlook some mistake.
Second thing: I don't know if it's just me, but I can see some parts from pictures in SB, when it's black.

[ Easy ]
00:27:850 (3) - Better put it below 00:26:421 (2) - No because it makes a triangle and a blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/7rCHJ.jpg
00:28:326 (1) - Make slider like this, it looks better imo. As I said just before, this slider is a part of the blanket, so i'm not changing it.

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01:30:244 (4) - Put this one near 01:28:578 (3) - I just moved it to the right of the screen, also i can't put it just below the previous slider, it's gonna be confusing about spacing and not looking good for an easy difficulty
02:02:863 (5) - Make stack here with 02:04:054 (2) - Fine.
03:55:241 (4,1) - Move it, where 03:53:813 (3) - ends. Half-Fixed, i moved it just better
04:03:098 (3) - Make stack with 04:01:194 (4) - Not really needed since 3 and 4 are enough spaced

[ Normal ]
00:29:755 (2) - If you put it between end of (1) and begining of (3), I think it'll be good. I tried that already but the 2 goes out of grid and i can't place it, so i'm sorry but i need to follow the spacing here, we're at a normal difficulty
03:31:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about the placements of this circles. It looks bad for me. If you can put 03:31:194 (1,2,3) in the corners, it'll be good imo. But it's up to you. Theses are fine, no need to change their placements
03:48:336 (6) - Make this slider like this. I... Tried... But SPACING IS REALLY IMPORTANT AND I'M NOT BREAKING IT! >>> http://puu.sh/7rDJU.jpg

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[ Hard ]
00:05:112 (5) - Put it below 00:04:874 (4) - Nope. It makes a weird flow

I'm not good at moding Insanes/Extras...Sorry :/ - Anyways, hope this helps.

2014-04-21 00:53 Kazuya-sama: but 1 idea. Easy: 00:56:197 (4) -  Multi repeat slider little hard for beginners. ^-^;
2014-04-21 00:54 Kazuya-sama: & 01:04:530 (2) -  HP bar. Look: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1532220
2014-04-21 00:55 Kazuya-sama: It's unranked.
2014-04-21 00:55 Kazuya-sama: 01:15:959 (1) - triple repeat slider. little "hard" for beginners. ^-^;
2014-04-21 00:55 Lumina: your hp bar is bigger than the original, don't count it
2014-04-21 00:57 Kazuya-sama: defaul t hp bar: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1532232
2014-04-21 00:58 Lumina: i don't think that will make the players missing this slider
2014-04-21 00:59 Kazuya-sama: 02:28:338 (1) - triple repeat. little hard for beginners.
2014-04-21 01:01 Kazuya-sama: 04:12:146 (4) - ^
2014-04-21 01:01 Lumina: changing these things breaks the spacing :( it's so important for an easy
2014-04-21 01:01 Lumina: multiple reverses are not hard into an easy, since the sliders are long enough
2014-04-21 01:03 Kazuya-sama: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/355396 MuryokuP - Story of Hope [Normal]]
2014-04-21 01:03 Kazuya-sama: Press CTRL+SHIFT+A
2014-04-21 01:03 Kazuya-sama: "Check distance snap" function, and refresh.
2014-04-21 01:03 Kazuya-sama: Distance problems(?)
2014-04-21 01:04 Lumina: i tried everyting with theses, aimod is buggy
2014-04-21 01:04 Kazuya-sama: okay.
2014-04-21 01:04 Lumina: even reducing over and over, it still quotes me spacing error
2014-04-21 01:04 Kazuya-sama: Distance snap 1.0x ?
2014-04-21 01:04 Kazuya-sama: because: 00:57:863 (3,1) - 
2014-04-21 01:04 Lumina: and there is no errors
2014-04-21 01:04 Lumina: as always
2014-04-21 01:04 Kazuya-sama: 00:58:816 (1) - it's too far
2014-04-21 01:07 Kazuya-sama: 00:58:816 (1,2) - near
2014-04-21 01:07 Kazuya-sama: 00:59:530 (2) - 
2014-04-21 01:07 Kazuya-sama: 01:02:149 (7) - little distance error.
2014-04-21 01:08 Kazuya-sama: 02:00:721 (2,3) - 
2014-04-21 01:08 Kazuya-sama: 02:01:197 (3) - too near
2014-04-21 01:14 Kazuya-sama: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351257 MuryokuP - Story of Hope [Hard]]
2014-04-21 01:14 Kazuya-sama: 00:48:816 (5,5) - Replace: Two 1/2 slider?
2014-04-21 01:14 Kazuya-sama: 00:52:625 (9) - 
2014-04-21 01:15 Kazuya-sama: 00:54:530 (5) -  ^ ?
2014-04-21 01:15 Lumina: about the normal, i just did all replaces and refreshed aimod and it still displays them, so i'm leaving it as it is
2014-04-21 01:15 Kazuya-sama:  /savelog
2014-04-21 01:16 Lumina: what ?
2014-04-21 01:16 Kazuya-sama: bad irc commands T_T
2014-04-21 01:16 Lumina: fail cmd
2014-04-21 01:16 Kazuya-sama:  /me
2014-04-21 01:16 Kazuya-sama: XD
2014-04-21 01:16 Kazuya-sama: wait. My internet is shit.restart net
2014-04-21 01:17 Kazuya-sama: Okay pm saved :3
2014-04-21 01:17 Kazuya-sama: 1 sec
2014-04-21 01:19 Kazuya-sama: re.
2014-04-21 01:19 Kazuya-sama: Idiot mobile net -_-
2014-04-21 01:20 Lumina: my normal is broken now :(
2014-04-21 01:20 Lumina: i'm restoring how it was, that's better
2014-04-21 01:21 Lumina: i don't count what aimod says about theses errors, tehre's no errors about my spacing, every note i check is 1,000x spacing, because i use it always as 1,00x
2014-04-21 01:21 Kazuya-sama: little or big distance errors = unranked
2014-04-21 01:21 Lumina: not exactly
2014-04-21 01:21 Lumina: in a normal, you are allowed to do a very slightly cap of distance
2014-04-21 01:22 Lumina: like 0,05
2014-04-21 01:23 Kazuya-sama: Okay. ^^
2014-04-21 01:26 Kazuya-sama: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351257 MuryokuP - Story of Hope [Hard]]
2014-04-21 01:26 Lumina: theses sliders are fine
2014-04-21 01:26 Lumina: on the hard
2014-04-21 01:26 Lumina: nothing to chage on them
2014-04-21 01:26 Lumina: change*
2014-04-21 01:28 Kazuya-sama: 03:21:671 - 03:24:052 Replace parts here: http://puu.sh/8gPfF.png (timeline)
2014-04-21 01:29 Kazuya-sama: 03:36:908 (1) - and remove spinner, map these parts? : 03:36:908 -03:38:574 ?
2014-04-21 01:29 Lumina: not necessarry about the picture
2014-04-21 01:29 Lumina: speed is lowered down a bit, so i'd avoid doing horrible overlaps
2014-04-21 01:31 Lumina: i mapped it into the insane and extra, and here i'm in a hard, so don't need to map everything.
2014-04-21 01:31 Lumina: this spinner stays
2014-04-21 01:31 Lumina: hard is already enough hard, if you count the players that will use DT and such
2014-04-21 01:32 Kazuya-sama: :'D
2014-04-21 01:32 Kazuya-sama: Okay, Extra = Extra o_o Insane = insane. Ok. I'm baka & shit modder ^-^;
2014-04-21 01:33 Kazuya-sama: Sorry, it's too perfect XD
2014-04-21 01:33 Kazuya-sama: but extra diff: little fast sliders x'D
2014-04-21 01:33 Lumina: nothing is perfect not even my map
2014-04-21 01:35 Lumina: i designed the extra to mess with high rank players. :p
2014-04-21 01:36 Lumina: otherwise, there are the insane diff
2014-04-21 01:36 Kazuya-sama: :'D
2014-04-21 01:36 Lumina: done with hard ?
2014-04-21 01:36 Kazuya-sama: yes ^-^;
2014-04-21 01:37 Lumina: insane next .
2014-04-21 01:38 Kazuya-sama: 00:43:578 (1) - delete ? 
2014-04-21 01:38 Kazuya-sama: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/354505 MuryokuP - Story of Hope [Insane]]
2014-04-21 01:39 Lumina: no, it hits a deep piano sound
2014-04-21 01:40 Kazuya-sama: 00:51:554 (2,3) - ctrl + G ? & 00:51:911 (4,5) - ctrl + g? ^-^
2014-04-21 01:41 Lumina: renders weird but..
2014-04-21 01:41 Lumina: i did the 1st but soing the second looks weird for the flow
2014-04-21 01:41 Lumina: doing*
2014-04-21 01:42 Kazuya-sama: 01:08:935 (6) - remove repeat and move here: 01:08:816 (6) - and put 1/2 slider here: 01:09:054 (7) -  ?
2014-04-21 01:43 Lumina: hm..
2014-04-21 01:43 Kazuya-sama: 01:33:578 (2) - move here: 01:33:459 and put circle here: 01:33:816 (3) - ?
2014-04-21 01:44 Lumina: i'll think
2014-04-21 01:44 Lumina: ^^
2014-04-21 01:45 Kazuya-sama: 01:33:578 : http://puu.sh/8gQsz.jpg
2014-04-21 01:45 Kazuya-sama: Vocal ?
2014-04-21 01:45 Kazuya-sama: (Timeline picture)
2014-04-21 01:46 Kazuya-sama: 01:35:482 (2) - move here: 01:35:363 (2) - and put circle here 01:35:721 (3) -  ? (vocal)
2014-04-21 01:47 Lumina: mainly i follow the music, it's a bit more intense
2014-04-21 01:48 Lumina: vocals seems low for me
2014-04-21 01:48 Lumina: i mapped it when i could
2014-04-21 01:50 Lumina: that makes an harder rythm
2014-04-21 01:50 Lumina: and it doesn't land on the kick into the music
2014-04-21 01:54 Kazuya-sama: 03:38:574 (11) -  put circle here ? or delete 03:38:336 (10) -  circle and put 1/1 slider here: 03:38:336 (10) -  ?
2014-04-21 01:56 Kazuya-sama: Insane checked~ ^-^;
2014-04-21 01:56 Lumina: this slider follow the vocal
2014-04-21 01:56 Lumina: i can't delete it like that
2014-04-21 01:58 Lumina: extra is the most worked diff
2014-04-21 01:58 Lumina: if i can say
2014-04-21 01:59 Kazuya-sama: Very extreme o_o XD
2014-04-21 01:59 Lumina: that's why i made it
2014-04-21 01:59 Lumina: to mess with braggers :p
2014-04-21 02:00 Lumina: as did scorpiour with image material
2014-04-21 02:02 Lumina: also, there's a huge hitsound work on this diff from me
2014-04-21 02:04 04:32:146 (1) - *-* beautiful slider. :3
2014-04-21 02:05 Lumina: did my best and wasted half an hour doing it ^^
2014-04-21 02:06 Kazuya-sama: Okay but
2014-04-21 02:06 Kazuya-sama: Red point:
2014-04-21 02:06 Kazuya-sama: x: 264 y: 132?
2014-04-21 02:06 Lumina: ar10 i guess ?
2014-04-21 02:07 Kazuya-sama: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/318289 MuryokuP - Story of Hope [Extra]]
2014-04-21 02:07 Kazuya-sama: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1532370
2014-04-21 02:08 Kazuya-sama: very very very little better
2014-04-21 02:08 Kazuya-sama: ^-^;
2014-04-21 02:08 Lumina: done
2014-04-21 02:08 Kazuya-sama: Oki. :3 Good luck XD
2014-04-21 02:09 Kazuya-sama: Sorry, i'm shit modder. :C

Kiiwa wrote:

from #modreqs ~

[Extra]

1. Tick Rate two suits best because of the SV changes.
2. 00:07:612 - 1/8 slider here would match the song. Fine, but i've set a timing with a 1,25x to see a bit more the reverse, is it okay ?
3. 00:07:136 (7) - 00:07:850 (2,3,4,5) - These parts are actually 1/8 in the song.Done.
4. Well, there is actually quite a few 1/8 parts in the beginning, I don't see a reason to not map them in an Extra!
5. 00:14:993 (1,1) - These sliders are too long, they should end earlier to match the song.Done.
6. 01:17:387 (5) - New combo would help.Done.
7. 02:15:006 (1) - Change it to soft sample set to match with 00:32:135 (1) - Done.

[Insane]

1. Tick Rate two suits best because of the SV changes.
2. OD+1 so it fits the mapset better.Done.
3. 01:17:387 (7) - New combo for SV change. Done.
4. 02:15:006 (1) - Change it to soft sample set to match with 00:32:135 (1) - Done.
5. 02:33:100 (5) - Add some hitsounds here would be good. Soft Whistle, done.

Good luck~