1. Hard (4.49 stars, 85 notes)
2. Insane (4.88 stars, 144 notes)
3. Normal (2.75 stars, 65 notes)

AkagamiNamikaze wrote:

Eru :3

[General]

Offset: 15632 (-5)
Ok

me suena mejor, idk. El BPM está bien, lo revisé a 25%.

[Normal]

Técnicamente perfecta.

[Hard]

00:27:184 (1,2,3,4) - El jump está sexy, pero no concuerda mucho con la canción; de hecho, es algo un poco raro. Considera reducir el spacing.
Estan ahi justamente estackeando los slider ends del pattern anterior

00:32:958 (5,6,7,8) - Finish en (7) y (8); suena hermoso así, o al menos así yo escucho yo lol
Solo agregue el finish en 7

Es todo, suerte :3

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue... wait, what am I saying? this map is perfect!
Star

1. First of all, disable letterboxes and widescreen support. You don't have any breaks and widescreen SB. Therefore, keeping these things enabled makes no sense.
2. Well, Normal/Light/Hard mapset sounds really strange. How about some alternative diff names to make it sound a bit better. Average/Intermediate/Advanced sounds much better, imo.
3. ErufenRito should be in tags. It's quite clear why. Because your fans will be able to find your maps faster.

1. 00:15:632 (1,2) - nazi - tail of the slider is TOO close. Some beginner-players may mistakenly hit it. Try to make your flow a little bit more intuitive, this is the easiest diff of the mapset!
2. 00:54:892 (1) - as long as you don't have a new combo on 00:35:262 (3) - you shouldn't have a new combo on 00:54:892 (1) - to keep consistency.
   
   Nice diff. I like your style <3

1. Try to use AR6, it fits here and it makes the mapset more balanced. I really do like it more with the AR6.
2. 00:38:726 (1) - nazi - it feel a little bit putof your regular pattern. Something like this or stack would flow better here, i think.

1. Diff itself is really nice. But it doesn't feel like a [Hard]. It something between [Hard] and [Insane]. I''d recommend you to rename it. (see my suggestion in [General] part)
2. 00:15:632 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - didn't like these overlaps. But i can't think of anything better. So, feel free to keep them as they're.
3. 00:32:231 (2,3,4) - players will be confused by this stack. Red combo colour on red background makes it even harder to read. Try to unstack (4) to make it more, much more playable!
   
   Nothing else to say. Seems pretty good to me. I'd ask for more opinions about this jumps, because they kinda bug me. But as long as they fit, you're free to keep them!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested. Sorry aout the delay, I'm having a hard time irl, atm.

[General]

1. First of all, disable letterboxes and widescreen support. You don't have any breaks and widescreen SB. Therefore, keeping these things enabled makes no sense.
2. Well, Normal/Light/Hard mapset sounds really strange. How about some alternative diff names to make it sound a bit better. Average/Intermediate/Advanced sounds much better, imo.
   Hmm will ask around some people about what they think, I dont really like the light diff name either, I prefer using the standard easy/normal/hard/insane, but thats just me
3. ErufenRito should be in tags. It's quite clear why. Because your fans will be able to find your maps faster.
   I have my reasons to not add erufenrito to tags, and Id prefer it to be that way, sorry.
   

[Normal]

1. 00:15:632 (1,2) - nazi - tail of the slider is TOO close. Some beginner-players may mistakenly hit it. Try to make your flow a little bit more intuitive, this is the easiest diff of the mapset!
2. 00:54:892 (1) - as long as you don't have a new combo on 00:35:262 (3) - you shouldn't have a new combo on 00:54:892 (1) - to keep consistency.
   I dont see why theres the need to keep consistency between the two, they sound very different, and in fact, if I take out the new combo, it wont be consistent with the following patterns...
   
   Nice diff. I like your style <3

Thanks!

[Hard]

1. Diff itself is really nice. But it doesn't feel like a [Hard]. It something between [Hard] and [Insane]. I''d recommend you to rename it. (see my suggestion in [General] part)
   
2. 00:15:632 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - didn't like these overlaps. But i can't think of anything better. So, feel free to keep them as they're. Ill leave them as they are for now
3. 00:32:231 (2,3,4) - players will be confused by this stack. Red combo colour on red background makes it even harder to read. Try to unstack (4) to make it more, much more playable! I added a new combo in 00:32:664 (1) - , combo count is too high anyways.... lol
   
   Nothing else to say. Seems pretty good to me. I'd ask for more opinions about this jumps, because they kinda bug me. But as long as they fit, you're free to keep them!

Nice map! Hope to see it ranked soon!

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Best of luck!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

Normal

00:22:560 (3) - Move this a little lower or else its touching the scores too much. Same with 00:31:798 (3) - , try to move the 2nd slider point a little right then its fine. Same here 00:42:190 (6,1) -
Okay

00:40:747 - , 00:49:985 - Add a note here, would fit good.
I prefer the way it is

00:50:274 (4) - Put a NC here, its a very long pattern.
Okay

Hard

00:51:717 (3) - Rotate the slider so it doesnt touch the HP bar.
I know that this is not my diff, but in Nemis's defense: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1075600 it doesnt touch the hp bar?

Insane

00:16:209 (2,3) - How it overlapps currently looks clustered and not well looking. Try to make it not overlap.
Actually, I love the way it overlaps.

00:17:941 (1,2) - This jump is too big and doesnt relate to something in the song. Its too big when the music is not even really dramatic like later. You should decrease it.
Imo, and from what Ive seen from testplays, the amount of jump in here its not important, whats important here its the spatial position of these objects in relation to the other objects to make its own pattern, and imo, that fits perfectly well to the music.

00:23:715 (4) - , 00:46:232 (2) - Same again, rotate it a little so it doesnt touch the scores.
Same

00:32:664 (1) - , 00:52:006 (1) - NC is not needed here, remove it.
Musically speaking, they are not needed, but gameplay wise, it helps to make them more noticeable and easier to be sightread, remember, this is a game afterall!

00:39:015 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Combo spam. Reduce it a little.
Ok

00:52:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - , 00:54:892 (1,2,3) - I cant hear anything in the song relating to this stream. I strongly advise to change it and remap this section to something in the music. This is ongoing from here 00:52:294 - to 01:05:862 - . Please explain this to me.
If you meant the note located at parts such as 00:53:593 - or 00:55:903 - or 00:58:212 - etc I would understand you perfectly, but youre not! In case you havent noticed, the whole map has been mapped to the instruments, and this part is no exception, being this part specially mapped to the guitars, the reason that I added that extra note on the spots mentioned before its because its easier to be played in that way, and trust me, I tested it and it does.

Good luck with this.

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
00:34:107 - why not start kiai here and end it at 00:52:583 - or 01:08:749 - or somewhere you want Dont think its necessary
I suggest that you add a muted soft-sliderslide file cause some long sliders apply some unftting sound imo Dont think its necessary either, Im happy with them as they are right now

Insane
00:18:518 (2) - I would say that the distance change is quite sudden and unexpected,as the music doesn't have big changes
They are fine, never ever seen someone miss in here, besides, this is not about how the music flows with the DS, but rather how the music flows with the pattern

00:30:066 (2,3) - a bit boring to stack all these here, I don't get the meaning to stack them from the music, also for the latter ones
Tried to make it flow with the music... according to how I interpret it. Anyways, its a boring song, so a boring map its expected

00:49:119 (3,1) - seems they are not in the same prase of music, but why are they so similar (too coherent) in the map? maybe 00:49:696 (1) - should go elsewhere, to not make 00:49:119 (3,1) - look like a pair of sliders
Because the map has been mapped more to the music. In this case the guitars

for this diff, I think you should try to combine sliders and circles into some structures, not only symmetry . Try not to use all sliders 00:34:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - and all circles 00:39:015 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but mix them together, that would make your map more interesting
They are fine...

Hard
why you used a different way to add hitsounds in this diff? You used soft whistle soft clap(normal-hitnormal) for your Insane while normal clap for your Hard diff. I think you'd better make them consistent
Cause its another mapper... Anyways, will leave the rest of this to Nemis


Normal
00:32:664 (4) - is the finish at end really needed? I don't think it fits as good as the one on head
00:33:530 - useless green line here
01:01:821 (1,1,1) - I think the whistles are not needed, consider to remove them

That's all
Good luck

aonkub555 wrote:

Hello m4m

why have not kiai time in all diff? Dont think its necessary.

Normal

00:58:357 can be Symmetry with 00:56:047 Why simmetry?

Insane

00:23:570 (3,4,5) i fell not flow enoguh when play , try to improve better etc. http://puu.sh/5hZ3A.jpg
They are fine as they are right now

00:25:158 (1, 2) may be reverse slider to this http://puu.sh/5hXOA.jpg and move note 1 at to start silder make flow better
Hmm... no...

01:07:017 why not this note stack 01:05:862 slider end?
Hmm... no...

01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) the pattern have space between note not equal a bit
Hmm...

that's all sorry my able can only mod just that much because i'm just a new mapper

hope it help you

P.M my map will post in your modding queues~

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello
[Normal]
looks good


[Insane]
00:30:643 (4) - NC I think they are okay the way they are right now
00:43:056 (4,5,6) - move to x:260 y:181 seems better Hmm.. moved a bit...
00:50:562 (4) - NC I think they are okay the way they are right now
00:54:026 - add a note hear (?)
00:54:604 - ^
00:56:913 - ^
00:58:645 - ^
00:59:223 - ^
00:58:645 - ^
00:59:223 - ^
01:01:532 - ^
01:03:264 - ^
01:03:842 - ^
No, it will just confuse players.

• 
  [General]

1. add tag 'finisterra' please. album name.

• 
  [Normal]

1. Try AR+1. Normal diff AR3 is bit low. you use stack part and 1/2 part.I think fit AR4 this map.
2. 00:29:488 (1) - slider end 1grid up.spacing good and very under is not bigginer place.
3. 00:33:819 (4) - remove NC. and, 00:34:107 (2) - add NC. broken NC pettern. change better.
4. 00:43:345 (2) - remove Clap slider head, and add finish slider head please.
5. 00:52:583 (1) - remove clap please. clap and finish is loud sound. this part finish fitting.
6. 00:54:892 (1) - not need finish imo.
7. 00:57:202 (1) - remove finish. idk why this part finish. clap only very fit.
8. 00:59:511 (4) - ^ again.
9. 01:04:130 (1) - ^
10. 01:06:440 (1) - very loud this part. remove whistle and clap. finish only fit.
11. 01:07:595 (3) - remove clap.
12. 01:08:749 (5) - ^
    but, if my suggestion dislike, your taste hit sound please :3. map is fine!

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  [Hard]

1. 00:49:119 (3) - you use 00:47:964 (1) similar slider? (i mean not straight slider)
2. 01:08:172 (4,1) - Do you like this sound? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1131858 change reverse slider and add finish slider end. and, spinner start 01:08:894, end time is same. i like this.
   great map :3

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:32:664 (1) - i don't like this stack. move (x:307 y:301)? 00:32:953 (2) - symmetry :^).
2. 00:39:015 (1,2) - i confused this stack circle. change perfect stack?
3. 01:08:749 (1) - why not star? move (x:369 y:87) better.

AlexaBM wrote:

Hi~ m4m
[General]
00:52:583 - Maybe add here a kiai time? 01:08:749 - end, or you can make fountains.
Dont think its needed.

[Normal]
AR +1?
Okay
can't find anything, sry

[Hard]
00:34:107 (1) - Delete this point in the middle of a slider, it's unnecessary here

img

omg, perfect diff

[Insane]
AR +1?

It's all I can find, sorry, it's beautiful c:
good luck~

P o M u T a wrote:

hi m4m your queue!!

• 
  [General]

1. add tag 'finisterra' please. album name.

Dont think its needed, tags are in there to make people find this map easier, and im very sure that no one is going to search for this map with the album's name (even if they ever search for this song... on which by itself its already pretty rare)

• 
  [Normal]

1. Try AR+1. Normal diff AR3 is bit low. you use stack part and 1/2 part.I think fit AR4 this map.
   Okay
   
2. 00:29:488 (1) - slider end 1grid up.spacing good and very under is not bigginer place. Ok
   
3. 00:33:819 (4) - remove NC. and, 00:34:107 (2) - add NC. broken NC pettern. change better. As broken as it may be if we look at the song's perspective, its better this way in the perspective of the pattern.
   
4. 00:43:345 (2) - remove Clap slider head, and add finish slider head please.
   Finish added, clap stays
   
5. 00:52:583 (1) - remove clap please. clap and finish is loud sound. this part finish fitting.
   
   
6. 00:54:892 (1) - not need finish imo.
7. 00:57:202 (1) - remove finish. idk why this part finish. clap only very fit.
8. 00:59:511 (4) - ^ again.
9. 01:04:130 (1) - ^
10. 01:06:440 (1) - very loud this part. remove whistle and clap. finish only fit.
11. 01:07:595 (3) - remove clap.
12. 01:08:749 (5) - ^
    The rest of the suggestions on hitsounds are declined because they has a pattern itself, and I would hate to break it.
    
    but, if my suggestion dislike, your taste hit sound please :3. map is fine!

• 
  
  [Insane]

1. 00:32:664 (1) - i don't like this stack. move (x:307 y:301)? 00:32:953 (2) - symmetry :^). I prefer it this way
2. 00:39:015 (1,2) - i confused this stack circle. change perfect stack? If I make it shorter, they might confuse it even more with 1/4ths (note that some lower skilled player already does so)
3. 01:08:749 (1) - why not star? move (x:369 y:87) better. It already makes a star starting with the slider end

That's all !! good luck this map

1. I'd reduce HP and OD by 1 tick at least, they're too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:31:798 (1,2,3) - These sliders could be stacked better together if you disable the grid snap.

1. AR feels a bit too low to me, I'd increase it by 1 tick at least.

1. 00:51:717 (1) - 00:52:294 (1) - These two combo colours somehow blend together on this part and they feels confusing, I'd suggest to change colour on the second combo.
2. 00:54:892 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this pattern, I think it would be nicer if you put more short sliders instead of these with repeats here.
3. 00:59:511 (1,2,3) - Same as above.

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~

1. I'd reduce HP and OD by 1 tick at least, they're too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset. Okay

~Insane~

1. AR feels a bit too low to me, I'd increase it by 1 tick at least. Okay

1. 00:51:717 (1) - 00:52:294 (1) - These two combo colours somehow blend together on this part and they feels confusing, I'd suggest to change colour on the second combo. Hmm... took out the NC from 00:52:006 -
2. 00:54:892 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this pattern, I think it would be nicer if you put more short sliders instead of these with repeats here.
3. 00:59:511 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
   Hmm... they are okay, I prefer them as they are currently...

Irreversible wrote:

Mod request by Zarerion, but I modded the wrong one. . LOL Well, now I'm here and it Looks pretty good.

[Normal]

01:08:749 (5) - You put a NC here on Insane, why not here as well? Consistency I guess. Or delete the one in Insane, up to you. Added NC

[Insane]

00:38:149 (2,3,4) - This was the only unconfortable part I could find in this Insane, because of this spacing, I rushed way too much to 00:39:015 (1,2) - this one, thinking it’s ¼ too. I’d really be happy if you could change the spacing in any way. (I kinda thought of stacking the ¼ with the end of slider 4) http://puu.sh/6bLGL.jpg
Done, I originally made this in this way for sake of consistency with the later oarts, but doesnt really matter much, specially if it helps with the reading (when having it hard to read was not my intention)


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