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Mago de Oz - Xanandra [Osu|Taiko]

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Luvdic
Pls kazuki, y yo te dije que me mandaras un forum pm para acordarme de como debo cambiar tu diff name, y nunca lo hiciste, ya veo que no soy el unico con una pesima memoria!

Y gracias mancu, siempre te ame :$
Pero no lo podre revisar sino hasta como el lunes o martes, o miercoles....
-Kazu-

Xanandra wrote:

Pls kazuki, y yo te dije que me mandaras un forum pm para acordarme de como debo cambiar tu diff name, y nunca lo hiciste, ya veo que no soy el unico con una pesima memoria!

Y gracias mancu, siempre te ame :$
Pero no lo podre revisar sino hasta como el lunes o martes, o miercoles....
i <3 u
mancuso_JM_

Xanandra wrote:

Pls kazuki, y yo te dije que me mandaras un forum pm para acordarme de como debo cambiar tu diff name, y nunca lo hiciste, ya veo que no soy el unico con una pesima memoria!

Y gracias mancu, siempre te ame :$
Pero no lo podre revisar sino hasta como el lunes o martes, o miercoles....
No hay apuro Erufen xDD
btw, usa Mancuso's Muzukashii en el nombre de mi diff. entonces :P.
Verdisphena
Oni

00:00:218 (1) - D
00:00:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - d k ddd d k d sounds better
00:01:805 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
00:03:075 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^
00:05:298 (35) - K
00:06:568 (44) - ^
00:07:838 (58) - D
00:09:267 - dd
00:10:378 (70) - D
00:20:538 - D
00:58:798 (54) - D
02:26:431 ~ 02:40:402 - I don't like this part, sounds very irregular and most of the notes are just randoms dons and kats. You better remap this section

Muzu

Nada, mancu pro
-Kazu-

Verdisphena wrote:

Oni

00:00:218 (1) - D ok :3
00:00:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - d k ddd d k d sounds better ok :3
00:01:805 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ ok :3
00:03:075 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^ I changed the pattern too,but a little different,because i dont like to make this so repetitive
00:05:298 (35) - K ok :3
00:06:568 (44) - ^ok :3
00:07:838 (58) - Dok :3
00:09:267 - dd ok :3
00:10:378 (70) - Dok :3
00:20:538 - D ok :3
00:58:798 (54) - D ok :3
02:26:431 ~ 02:40:402 - I don't like this part, sounds very irregular and most of the notes are just randoms dons and kats. You better remap this section
ok :3, i thought i was a little random ,too ,so i remapped it,i think is a little better now
Thx for modding Verdis :D
http://puu.sh/3OQ5r.osu > Link
PD : ヽ(*≧ω≦)ノ ★★ ヽ(・ω・ゞ)
XinCrin
  • A special mod for Xanandra ~ :)

    General
  1. Intenta agregar mas tags al mapa , talvez con respecto a la cancion o al grupo

    Easy
  2. Deberias poner un Spinner en esta dificultad , ya sabes , para diferenciar en los puntajes
  3. 00:28:635 (4) Estoy seguro que deberias poner un NewCombo aqui , porque siguiendo tus patrones cortos y por consistencia con lo anterior debe ir uno aqui
  4. 00:33:080 (2) Intenta acomodar esta nota un poco mas arriba , ya que al momento de jugarlo , una pequeña parte del circle se sale del área . Y si la diff es jugada con HR , ese circleserá dificil de hacer clic porque estará debajo de la scorebar
  5. 00:48:956 (1) Remueve el clap que pusiste al final de este slider , no suena para nada bien en mi opinion , deja solo el whistle . Posiblemente trataste de similiar el drum que suena por ahi , pero si lo notas bien , esedrum suena a partir del downbeat que sigue
  6. 00:55:941 (1) Este NC es realmente necesario , podrias eliminarlo . Pero si deseas mantenerlo , no te preocupes . Solo una cosa , talvez un slider con tantos reverses podrias ser algo dificil para los principiantes . No se si podrias cambiarlo . Te recomendaria hacerlo de esta manera . Va a terminar mejor con la musica y será mas facil para los principiantes
  7. 00:58:481 (1) Pon un Finish en el reverse de este slider , para resaltar mejor el comienzo de este kiai time
  8. 01:17:532 (2) Para un mejor flow con (1) , deberias realizar la curva de este slider hacia abajo , moviendo el segundo sliderpoint a x:320 y:160 . Fluirá mejor con (1) y (3) en mi opinion
  9. 01:31:502 (2) Al igual que 00:33:080 (2) , intenta hacer lo contrario , muevelo mas abajo , Está por debajo del scorebar un poco
  10. 01:54:363 (1) Igual que 00:55:941 (1) . Sinceramente usaste copy/paste creo xD
  11. 01:56:903 (1) Finish en el reverse de este slider , resaltará mucho el mejor el comienzo del kiai time
  12. 03:28:346 (1) Igual aqui
  13. 03:58:827 (1) Realmente no me gusta como fluye este slider con respecto a (2) . No da un movimiento continuo al cursor , intenta moviendo el segundo slider point a x:244 y:200 . Por cierto usa Grid level 4 , es mejor :P
  14. 04:01:367 (1) Lo mismo que arriba , pero aqui mueves el segundo sliderpoint a x:372 y:272
  15. 04:03:272 (3) / 04:05:812 (3) En mi opinion , estos circles se sienten raros sin el custom clap que te encuentras usando . En mi opinion sería mejor si usas el Clap en esos dos circles tambien
  16. 04:09:940 (2) Realmente que un circle termine al costado de un slider , asi como lo hiciste en una easy sobretodo , luce muy mal . Deberias mover el circle al final del slider , osea a x:448 y:276 . Me troleaste un poco , con esos cambios de spacing
  17. El Finish suena bien aquí , ya que distingue el final de la cancion . Pero ese clap , como que opaca el Finish y lo hace sonar , deberias remover ese clap , sonará mejor

    Normal
  18. Lo mismo que en easy . Deberias poner un Spinner en esta dificultad , para diferenciar en los puntajes
  19. 00:09:902 (4) Realmente este slider influye en el flow del cursor , me gustaría que hagas la curvatura hacia abajo . Fluye mejor
  20. 00:41:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Estos objetos apilados realmente podría ser un poco dificil de leer , no es una easy . Pero seria mejor si por lo menos desapilas algunas notas , estaría mejor en mi opinion
  21. 00:45:622 (7) Este slider realmente no está siguiendo bien el ritmo , tampoco la voz ya que aqui no se logra oir eso :P . Intenta mover este slider a 00:45:781 , y hacerlo un 1/2 slider , fluira y sonara mejor en mi opinion
  22. 00:45:463 (6) Este circle suena mucho mejor sin ese Clap , remuevelo porfavor
  23. 00:46:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Como dije mas arriba
  24. 00:58:481 (1) Finish en el reverse de este slider , resaltará mucho el mejor el comienzo del kiai time
  25. 02:02:618 (2) Realmente yo disfruto mas este circle , si lo mueves a x:304 y:92 . Si deseas mantenerlo , no te preocupes :)
  26. 02:06:746 (5) Hmm . . . No haz pensado que talvez este slider con varios reverses , podria ser un poco dificil ? . Deberias intentar de hacerlo , de alguna manera mas comprensible para esta diff :P
  27. 02:35:004 (5) Sé que no es muy necesario , pero sería mejor si pones un NC aqui . Ya que siento que ese combo , está demasiado largo D:
  28. 03:13:423 (4) Me gustaria que la curvatura de este slider apunte hacia abajo . Da un mejor movimiento del cursor en mi opinion
  29. Sieg's Hard

    In my opinion OD -1 , is better . For consistency with HP
  30. 00:19:268 (1) This slider is ignoring a bit the music . Try finishing this slider in 00:19:586 and then add a 1/2 slider in 00:19:745 . It's will be better imo
  31. 00:23:555 (3,4) This pattern sincerely doesn't flow too good imo . Could you try it to do differently?
  32. 00:26:254 (x) You should add a circle here. For consistency with other places (00:23:079|00:28:476
  33. 00:36:573 (1,2,3,4,5) In my point of view , this jump is ignoring a lot of music. Maybe you tried to do something fun, but you forget the music :(
  34. 01:37:852 (7) A NewCombo, could be better in this slider. Because here the voice spreads, and a NC here , it would highlight better
  35. 01:48:013 (4) This slider is ignoring, a part that sounds great (01:48:171 ) . Try this , sounds really better
  36. 01:51:188 (6) Fix this slider please xD
  37. 04:18:036 (1) As in 00:19:268 (1)
Realmente estoy algo cansado :P .
Talvez Insane la modee despues , pero por ahora dejo el mod hasta ahi y te dejo unas cuantas estrellas. La cancion está un poco larga xD

Buena Suerte Xanandra !
Kyshiro
Hai, sorry that I took so long >: Genuinely haven't had much time
{insert more generic excuses here}

Insane
  1. 00:22:761 (1) - Would be fun if you could make a small square pattern by moving this to x:343 y:336 This makes it slightly easier to hit this jump too
  2. 01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  3. 01:34:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Sure this pattern is fun, but it's pretty much a copy paste of the previous pattern, would be great if you could make something different here
  4. 02:13:572 (4,5) - since you're following the vocals here, it'd be more appropriate to switch these, placing the slider at 02:13:572 - and the note at 02:14:049 -
  5. 03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
I love this.

Sieg's Hard
  1. 00:08:949 (5,1) - These jumps are way too hard for a hard diff imo, I don't think you'll change this but I would really like to see these jump a bit smaller (The jumps that start from the sliders are generally easier to hit so I suppose they should be fine)
  2. 00:11:489 (4,1) - ^
  3. 00:12:759 (4,1) - ^ Etc.
  4. 00:51:337 (1,2) - I'd rather see this stacked properly
  5. 01:01:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - This curve could be a lot smoother
  6. 01:31:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Try to move (1) to x:307 y:127
  7. 01:51:188 (6) - Had a hard time reading this while playing, it'd be better to read if you'd make a 1/1 slider out of this, or putting a note at 01:51:188 - and 01:51:346 -
  8. 02:17:541 - Add a note here
  9. 03:22:631 (5) - Would be cool if this slidere were symmetric, the last anchor needs to be in the center of the end circle
  10. 03:28:346 - Add note
  11. 03:28:505 - ^
  12. 03:48:349 - Same here, Maybe add a 1/1 slider instead, or 2 notes, placing the other one at 03:48:667 - ofcourse
  13. 04:10:257 (4,1) - Same thing with the jumps from here, I think it would be better if the jumps were a bit smaller
Normal
  1. 00:00:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why is this all copy paste, copying a whole pattern is a bad idea imo
  2. 00:05:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
  3. 00:31:175 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Lacks creativity, feels like you've done this just to finish it asap.
    ^This occurs more often in the song, I won't be pointing out every single thing as it's pretty obvious what's copy paste and what should be changed
  4. 01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  5. 02:54:372 (1,2) - Fix this blanket please
  6. 03:09:137 (2) - Too unexpected to have 2 repeats, Try placing 2 1/2 sliders instead
  7. 03:24:218 - add a note
  8. 03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
Easy
  1. 00:10:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - Might be a bit nazi but i'd really like to see blankets here
  2. 00:17:205 (2) - Add a finish instead of a whistle on the slider end
  3. 00:18:475 (1) - ^
  4. 00:59:751 (2) - Feels like all the 1/1 sliders like these in the kiai should be 1/1 earlier, maybe try to vary a bit more, try adding notes instead of sliders
  5. 01:58:173 (2) - This is just a copy paste of the first kiai, I don't approve of this
  6. 01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  7. 03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  8. 04:09:146 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
The normal and the easy lack creativity, I suggest you take a closer look at these diffs and consider whether copy pasting whole parts is actually necessary
Sieg
SPOILER

XinCrin wrote:

[*]Sieg's Hard

In my opinion OD -1 , is better . For consistency with HP
I prefer to rise hp better than OD6\AR8 with OD6 this will be too easy to SS
[*]00:19:268 (1) This slider is ignoring a bit the music . Try finishing this slider in 00:19:586 and then add a 1/2 slider in 00:19:745 . It's will be better imo
This is like transition to next section
[*]00:23:555 (3,4) This pattern sincerely doesn't flow too good imo . Could you try it to do differently?
changed
[*]00:26:254 (x) You should add a circle here. For consistency with other places (00:23:079|00:28:476
But they shouldn't be consistent, rhythm is a bit different.
[*]00:36:573 (1,2,3,4,5) In my point of view , this jump is ignoring a lot of music. Maybe you tried to do something fun, but you forget the music :(
I don't consider this as jump at all just extended spacing, man this 1\1 notes
[*]01:37:852 (7) A NewCombo, could be better in this slider. Because here the voice spreads, and a NC here , it would highlight better
okay
[*]01:48:013 (4) This slider is ignoring, a part that sounds great (01:48:171 ) . Try this , sounds really better
yep
[*]01:51:188 (6) Fix this slider please xD
oh, done
[*]04:18:036 (1) As in 00:19:268 (1)
same

Thanks XinCrin :3

SPOILER

Kyshiro wrote:

Sieg's Hard
  1. 00:08:949 (5,1) - These jumps are way too hard for a hard diff imo, I don't think you'll change this but I would really like to see these jump a bit smaller (The jumps that start from the sliders are generally easier to hit so I suppose they should be fine)
    yep, actually this works fine because this jump on slider
  2. 00:11:489 (4,1) - ^
  3. 00:12:759 (4,1) - ^ Etc.
  4. 00:51:337 (1,2) - I'd rather see this stacked properly
    yep
  5. 01:01:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - This curve could be a lot smoother
    changed
  6. 01:31:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Try to move (1) to x:307 y:127
    nice
  7. 01:51:188 (6) - Had a hard time reading this while playing, it'd be better to read if you'd make a 1/1 slider out of this, or putting a note at 01:51:188 - and 01:51:346 -
    aha, this slider was screwed be unknown reason
  8. 02:17:541 - Add a note here
    +
  9. 03:22:631 (5) - Would be cool if this slidere were symmetric, the last anchor needs to be in the center of the end circle
    fixed
  10. 03:28:346 - Add note
    prefer to start on 03:28:664 (1) -
  11. 03:28:505 - ^
  12. 03:48:349 - Same here, Maybe add a 1/1 slider instead, or 2 notes, placing the other one at 03:48:667 - ofcourse
  13. 04:10:257 (4,1) - Same thing with the jumps from here, I think it would be better if the jumps were a bit smaller
    same

Thanks Kyshiro :3

Topic Starter
Luvdic
XinCrin Mod
  • A special mod for Xanandra ~ :)

    Como nota general, mi estilo no se basa en lo absoluto en la fluidez que podria tener el cursor a la hora de jugarlo, o como ustedes lo llamen, quizas mis maps sean mejor si lo fuese a hacer, pero en mi opinion, no. Espero que lo respetes, y entiendas cuando no respondo a tus sugerencias relacionados a ella.

    General
  1. Intenta agregar mas tags al mapa , talvez con respecto a la cancion o al grupo
    Los tags estan para ayudar los jugadores a buscar al map, pero para maps de canciones tan poco conocidos no son necesarios, ya que si lo fueran a buscar, lo buscarian directamente con el nombre de la cancion

    Easy
  2. Deberias poner un Spinner en esta dificultad , ya sabes , para diferenciar en los puntajes
    Cuando mapie, no los vi necesario, y no hay nada peor que un spinner colocados como relleno
  3. 00:28:635 (4) Estoy seguro que deberias poner un NewCombo aqui , porque siguiendo tus patrones cortos y por consistencia con lo anterior debe ir uno aqui
  4. 00:33:080 (2) Intenta acomodar esta nota un poco mas arriba , ya que al momento de jugarlo , una pequeña parte del circle se sale del área . Y si la diff es jugada con HR , ese circleserá dificil de hacer clic porque estará debajo de la scorebar
  5. 00:48:956 (1) Remueve el clap que pusiste al final de este slider , no suena para nada bien en mi opinion , deja solo el whistle . Posiblemente trataste de similiar el drum que suena por ahi , pero si lo notas bien , esedrum suena a partir del downbeat que sigue
  6. 00:55:941 (1) Este NC es realmente necesario , podrias eliminarlo . Pero si deseas mantenerlo , no te preocupes . Solo una cosa , talvez un slider con tantos reverses podrias ser algo dificil para los principiantes . No se si podrias cambiarlo . Te recomendaria hacerlo de esta manera . Va a terminar mejor con la musica y será mas facil para los principiantes
  7. 00:58:481 (1) Pon un Finish en el reverse de este slider , para resaltar mejor el comienzo de este kiai time
  8. 01:17:532 (2) Para un mejor flow con (1) , deberias realizar la curva de este slider hacia abajo , moviendo el segundo sliderpoint a x:320 y:160 . Fluirá mejor con (1) y (3) en mi opinion Bueno, espero que con lo que dije al principio baste para los demas tambien.

  9. 01:31:502 (2) Al igual que 00:33:080 (2) , intenta hacer lo contrario , muevelo mas abajo , Está por debajo del scorebar un poco
  10. 01:54:363 (1) Igual que 00:55:941 (1) . Sinceramente usaste copy/paste creo xD
  11. 01:56:903 (1) Finish en el reverse de este slider , resaltará mucho el mejor el comienzo del kiai time
  12. 03:28:346 (1) Igual aqui
  13. 03:58:827 (1) Realmente no me gusta como fluye este slider con respecto a (2) . No da un movimiento continuo al cursor , intenta moviendo el segundo slider point a x:244 y:200 . Por cierto usa Grid level 4 , es mejor :P
  14. 04:01:367 (1) Lo mismo que arriba , pero aqui mueves el segundo sliderpoint a x:372 y:272
  15. 04:03:272 (3) / 04:05:812 (3) En mi opinion , estos circles se sienten raros sin el custom clap que te encuentras usando . En mi opinion sería mejor si usas el Clap en esos dos circles tambien
  16. 04:09:940 (2) Realmente que un circle termine al costado de un slider , asi como lo hiciste en una easy sobretodo , luce muy mal . Deberias mover el circle al final del slider , osea a x:448 y:276 . Me troleaste un poco , con esos cambios de spacing
  17. El Finish suena bien aquí , ya que distingue el final de la cancion . Pero ese clap , como que opaca el Finish y lo hace sonar , deberias remover ese clap , sonará mejor

    Normal
  18. Lo mismo que en easy . Deberias poner un Spinner en esta dificultad , para diferenciar en los puntajes
  19. 00:09:902 (4) Realmente este slider influye en el flow del cursor , me gustaría que hagas la curvatura hacia abajo . Fluye mejor
  20. 00:41:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Estos objetos apilados realmente podría ser un poco dificil de leer , no es una easy . Pero seria mejor si por lo menos desapilas algunas notas , estaría mejor en mi opinion
    Estan bien asi.
  21. 00:45:622 (7) Este slider realmente no está siguiendo bien el ritmo , tampoco la voz ya que aqui no se logra oir eso :P . Intenta mover este slider a 00:45:781 , y hacerlo un 1/2 slider , fluira y sonara mejor en mi opinion
    Es porque estas escuchando los otros intrumentos que yo no estoy siguiendo, y te enfocaste en ellos ;D
  22. 00:45:463 (6) Este circle suena mucho mejor sin ese Clap , remuevelo porfavor
    Practicamente deriva de la anterior
  23. 00:46:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Como dije mas arriba
  24. 00:58:481 (1) Finish en el reverse de este slider , resaltará mucho el mejor el comienzo del kiai time
  25. 02:02:618 (2) Realmente yo disfruto mas este circle , si lo mueves a x:304 y:92 . Si deseas mantenerlo , no te preocupes :)
  26. 02:06:746 (5) Hmm . . . No haz pensado que talvez este slider con varios reverses , podria ser un poco dificil ? . Deberias intentar de hacerlo , de alguna manera mas comprensible para esta diff :P
  27. 02:35:004 (5) Sé que no es muy necesario , pero sería mejor si pones un NC aqui . Ya que siento que ese combo , está demasiado largo D:
  28. 03:13:423 (4) Me gustaria que la curvatura de este slider apunte hacia abajo . Da un mejor movimiento del cursor en mi opinion


    Realmente estoy algo cansado :P .
    Talvez Insane la modee despues , pero por ahora dejo el mod hasta ahi y te dejo unas cuantas estrellas. La cancion está un poco larga xD

    Buena Suerte Xanandra !

Las cosas que no tienen comentarios fueron cambiadas en base a tus sugerencias! (a excepcion del comentario que hice al principio) Y gracias por tu mod!

Kyshiro
Hai, sorry that I took so long >: Genuinely haven't had much time
{insert more generic excuses here}

Insane
  1. 00:22:761 (1) - Would be fun if you could make a small square pattern by moving this to x:343 y:336 This makes it slightly easier to hit this jump too
    Well, I'm actually a big copy/paste mapper, and this pattern is actuallya copy paste of the previous one, and the fact that there's a note stacking is part of my intention!
  2. 01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  3. 01:34:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Sure this pattern is fun, but it's pretty much a copy paste of the previous pattern, would be great if you could make something different here
    They are not exact copy pastes, but imo, they are fine, since the previous one is also a copy paste of 01:29:597 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - just in a different order, as well as some other patterns around there
  4. 02:13:572 (4,5) - since you're following the vocals here, it'd be more appropriate to switch these, placing the slider at 02:13:572 - and the note at 02:14:049 -
  5. 03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
I love this.

Normal
  1. 00:00:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why is this all copy paste, copying a whole pattern is a bad idea imo
  2. 00:05:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
  3. 00:31:175 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Lacks creativity, feels like you've done this just to finish it asap.
    ^This occurs more often in the song, I won't be pointing out every single thing as it's pretty obvious what's copy paste and what should be changed
    I'm sure they are okay.
  4. 01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  5. 02:54:372 (1,2) - Fix this blanket please
  6. 03:09:137 (2) - Too unexpected to have 2 repeats, Try placing 2 1/2 sliders instead
  7. 03:24:218 - add a note
  8. 03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
Easy
  1. 00:10:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - Might be a bit nazi but i'd really like to see blankets here
    I fail at making blankets, so Ill try to avoid that :(
  2. 00:17:205 (2) - Add a finish instead of a whistle on the slider end
  3. 00:18:475 (1) - ^
  4. 00:59:751 (2) - Feels like all the 1/1 sliders like these in the kiai should be 1/1 earlier, maybe try to vary a bit more, try adding notes instead of sliders

    It might feel that way, but I believe I that in the start but didnt liked how it sounded. Anyways, the chorus is mapped as intended (at least object's placement in timeline) as in I wanted to make it very simple.
  5. 01:58:173 (2) - This is just a copy paste of the first kiai, I don't approve of this
    :(
  6. 01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  7. 03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
  8. 04:09:146 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point
The normal and the easy lack creativity, I suggest you take a closer look at these diffs and consider whether copy pasting whole parts is actually necessary

The rest were I didn't comment anything it's because I changed them based on your suggestions! And thanks a lot kyshiro!
Zare
Man this is a great and interesting map. Star for now, I'll mod it when I have the time and motivation.

[Easy]
  1. First of all, I'd raise the SV a tiny bit. If you use 0.7 SV instead of 0.6 SV but stick to current spacing, you can avoid overlaps like 00:04:028 (4,5) - and make make your map a lot cleaner that way
  2. 00:04:028 (4,1) - I'd suggest to make (4) blanket the sliderhead of (1) here. That means: Shape (4) in a perfect curve around the sliderhead of (1), like that:
  3. 00:10:854 (1) - How about making this a straight slider going upwards? You cloud blanket the next slider afterwards around it
  4. 00:14:664 (4,1) - perfect opportunity for a blanket
  5. 00:23:555 (1,2,3) - You could shape circle-circle-sliderhead into a triangle to get it more structured
  6. 00:30:699 (3,1) - I kinda dislike this flowwise, how about you change (1) like that:
  7. If you did ^ that ^ you can make 00:31:175 (1,3) - (3) balenkt (1) Sliderend like that:
  8. 00:40:859 (1) - I'd place a circle here instead and start a slider where it's current end is. Like that, you can cover the phrase of the lyrics with the slider
  9. Why do you only have sliders in the kiai? You could replace them with circles every now and then, but it looks fine aside from that
  10. 01:50:553 (2) - bend this the other way for better flow?
  11. 02:17:065 (1) - I expect a few beginners to break here because "AAH WHAT IS THAT WHY IS I DON'T EVEN *PANICCLICKSLIDERBREAK* (because it's only a 1/2 slider, by the way, this is difficult to read especially when you mainly have such long sliders in your diff before)
  12. 03:28:664 - Consider removing the slider in a way that you can place a circle here where the kiai starts. A circle always has more of an impact than a slider so it would make sense to use them for kiai transitions
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:542 (4) - I'd replace the sldier with 2 circles
  2. 02:06:746 (5) - I'd say this is pretty unexpected. One reverse arrow is okay, but multiple reverse's cannot be seen during the slider's approach phase and can cause sliderbreaks
  3. 03:39:935 (5,6,1) - sliderend-circle-sliderhead triangle?
  4. 03:58:510 (6) - same thing as before
  5. finding stuff in this diff is hard without screwing your entire mapping concept
[Sieg's Hard]
  1. 00:09:902 (2,1) - I'd avoid such overlaps
  2. 00:19:268 (1) - shorten by 1/2? you're skipping drums there =/
  3. 00:39:272 (6,7) - this looks kinda bad because the slidertrack is so close to the circle
  4. 00:56:258 - a sliderend feels kinda weak here, also, why not adding a finish like on 00:55:465 (3) -
  5. 02:10:873 (3,5) - this looks really weird, care to rearrange the pattern?
  6. 02:40:402 - why didn't you follow the guitar at all here? Would have fit much better in my opinion and less repetitive than the drums
[Insane]
  1. I'm kinda afraid of touching your patterns in this Q_Q However I'm a bit concerned about the length of some of your combos
  2. 00:38:319 (8) - NC? =/
  3. 01:17:849 (6) - NC on this?
  4. 02:08:492 (6) - NC
  5. 02:40:402 - I really hate the overmapped triplets in the part starting here. You can hear they're overmapped and don't feel well while playing. I know it's the guitar solo but meh, this feels unnecessary to me
  6. 02:55:484 - As for the stream IIRC I already told you before that this is pretty overdone IMO. This map is entirely jump based and doesn't require any streaming skills, so suddenly putting a 50-note stream is kinda bad. I'd strongly suggest you to use 1/4 sliders at this point (for example after the first two measures of circlestream), if you want, you could even place slider jumps, following the theme of your map with crazy patterns and stuff
    At least that's my opinion, others who can SS this stream most likely are going to tell you it's fine, but I who cannot stream and who will never be able to do so because of physical limitations always have to view streams in a critical way, I hope you understand that.
Tsk. I can't mod anymore recently. Either that of the maps I mod are too good.
Sieg

Zarerion wrote:

[Sieg's Hard]
  1. 00:09:902 (2,1) - I'd avoid such overlaps
    alright
  2. 00:19:268 (1) - shorten by 1/2? you're skipping drums there =/
    this is better to play imo
  3. 00:39:272 (6,7) - this looks kinda bad because the slidertrack is so close to the circle
    moved a bit
  4. 00:56:258 - a sliderend feels kinda weak here, also, why not adding a finish like on 00:55:465 (3) -
    weak? you mean strong? there is no any cymbal here in music so no finish
  5. 02:10:873 (3,5) - this looks really weird, care to rearrange the pattern?
    looks fine for me
  6. 02:40:402 - why didn't you follow the guitar at all here? Would have fit much better in my opinion and less repetitive than the drums
    I love drums
thanks Zarerion

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350,41,212791,1,6,0:0:0:0:
407,286,213109,1,12,0:0:0:0:
260,339,213426,5,6,0:0:0:0:
226,268,213585,1,12,0:0:0:0:
161,224,213744,2,0,B|32:260,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,102,214379,2,0,B|163:66,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,102,215014,2,0,B|349:66,2,130,12|6|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,258,215966,5,6,0:0:0:0:
421,207,216125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
350,173,216284,1,4,0:0:0:0:
271,175,216443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,208,216601,2,0,P|138:236|78:219,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
15,177,217078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,261,217236,2,0,P|38:311|36:379,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,379,217713,5,6,0:0:0:0:
183,343,217871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,326,218030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,336,218189,1,12,0:0:0:0:
409,362,218348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
465,308,218506,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,231,218665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,162,218824,1,12,0:0:0:0:
322,37,219141,5,6,0:0:0:0:
167,55,219459,1,12,0:0:0:0:
167,55,219618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,55,219776,1,6,0:0:0:0:
37,192,220094,1,12,0:0:0:0:
37,192,220253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
37,192,220411,1,6,0:0:0:0:
167,329,220729,1,12,0:0:0:0:
167,329,220888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,329,221046,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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296,208,222158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,252,222316,2,0,P|400:300|406:366,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,380,222793,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,329,222952,2,0,P|204:312|137:328,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,348,223428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
29,279,223587,1,6,0:0:0:0:
44,202,223745,1,4,0:0:0:0:
86,136,223904,6,0,P|112:77|78:15,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,137,224539,1,12,0:0:0:0:
267,155,224698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,126,224857,1,6,0:0:0:0:
431,251,225174,2,0,P|370:288|304:280,2,130,12|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,185,225968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
479,107,226127,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,226444,12,4,227714,0:0:0:0:
203,343,228984,6,0,B|177:291|177:291|215:261|216:221,1,130,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,70,229619,2,0,B|209:74|209:74|216:121|250:142,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,162,230254,2,0,B|381:210|381:210|336:193|301:212,2,130,12|6|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,311,231207,5,6,0:0:0:0:
389,349,231366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
315,323,231524,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,290,231683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,290,231842,2,0,P|89:301|47:345,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,163,232477,5,6,0:0:0:0:
285,36,232794,1,12,0:0:0:0:
412,221,233112,1,6,0:0:0:0:
227,348,233429,1,12,0:0:0:0:
79,301,233747,5,6,0:0:0:0:
40,234,233906,1,12,0:0:0:0:
118,234,234064,2,0,B|140:197|119:165|101:134|117:100,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,234,234699,2,0,B|372:197|393:165|411:134|395:100,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,40,235334,2,0,P|256:19|316:40,2,130,12|6|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,144,236287,5,6,0:0:0:0:
42,209,236446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,285,236604,1,4,0:0:0:0:
109,337,236763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,342,236922,2,0,P|246:314|306:331,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,349,237398,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,355,237557,2,0,P|462:292|507:242,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,164,238033,5,6,0:0:0:0:
444,117,238192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,103,238351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,131,238510,1,12,0:0:0:0:
235,179,238668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,219,238827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,222,238986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,185,239145,1,12,0:0:0:0:
124,64,239462,5,6,0:0:0:0:
275,56,239780,1,12,0:0:0:0:
222,114,239938,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,131,240097,1,6,0:0:0:0:
449,155,240415,1,12,0:0:0:0:
396,213,240573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,230,240732,1,6,0:0:0:0:
316,260,241050,1,12,0:0:0:0:
263,318,241208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,335,241367,1,6,0:0:0:0:
148,274,241685,6,0,P|172:222|240:205,2,130,12|6|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,337,242478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
30,314,242637,2,0,P|44:265|25:167,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,111,243113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,67,243272,2,0,P|128:88|227:85,1,130,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,87,243748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,63,243907,1,6,0:0:0:0:
434,86,244066,1,4,0:0:0:0:
491,140,244225,6,0,P|470:186|473:285,1,130,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,351,244860,1,12,0:0:0:0:
293,286,245019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,209,245177,1,6,0:0:0:0:
292,53,245495,2,0,P|363:52|415:93,2,130,12|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,71,246289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,137,246447,1,6,0:0:0:0:
331,153,246765,5,12,0:0:0:0:
449,255,247082,1,12,0:0:0:0:
342,368,247400,1,12,0:0:0:0:
290,309,247559,2,0,P|237:263|176:273,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,248035,12,4,249146,0:0:0:0:
93,98,249464,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,171,249622,1,6,0:0:0:0:
108,321,249940,2,0,P|136:301|173:296,1,65,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,309,250257,1,6,0:0:0:0:
351,200,250416,6,0,P|406:194|448:133,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,58,250892,1,6,0:0:0:0:
289,61,251210,2,0,P|261:73|226:67,1,65,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,42,251527,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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91,327,252480,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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497,314,253750,1,12,0:0:0:0:
423,286,253909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,296,254068,1,6,0:0:0:0:
286,164,254226,6,0,P|244:213|172:204,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,185,254703,1,6,0:0:0:0:
31,49,255020,2,0,P|63:30|95:34,1,65,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,51,255338,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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503,60,255973,1,6,0:0:0:0:
401,177,256290,2,0,P|397:217|405:249,1,65,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,311,256608,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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30,111,257560,1,12,0:0:0:0:
104,133,257719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,93,257878,1,6,0:0:0:0:
288,199,258036,6,0,P|368:195|400:87,1,195,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,258830,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Luvdic

Zarerion wrote:

Man this is a great and interesting map. Star for now, I'll mod it when I have the time and motivation.

[Easy]
  1. First of all, I'd raise the SV a tiny bit. If you use 0.7 SV instead of 0.6 SV but stick to current spacing, you can avoid overlaps like 00:04:028 (4,5) - and make make your map a lot cleaner that way
    Doing this will make some sliders 1/2 shorter... and honestly, Im too lazy to fix all of the sliders just for this.
  2. 00:04:028 (4,1) - I'd suggest to make (4) blanket the sliderhead of (1) here. That means: Shape (4) in a perfect curve around the sliderhead of (1), like that: I see, so thats what a blanket is. But I like the way it looks currently, hope you dont mind that I keep them this way, so for the rest of this that I dont comment anything will be because of this.

  3. 00:10:854 (1) - How about making this a straight slider going upwards? You cloud blanket the next slider afterwards around it
  4. 00:14:664 (4,1) - perfect opportunity for a blanket
  5. 00:23:555 (1,2,3) - You could shape circle-circle-sliderhead into a triangle to get it more structured
  6. 00:30:699 (3,1) - I kinda dislike this flowwise, how about you change (1) like that:
  7. If you did ^ that ^ you can make 00:31:175 (1,3) - (3) balenkt (1) Sliderend like that:
  8. 00:40:859 (1) - I'd place a circle here instead and start a slider where it's current end is. Like that, you can cover the phrase of the lyrics with the slider
  9. Why do you only have sliders in the kiai? You could replace them with circles every now and then, but it looks fine aside from that
    Well, wasnt my intention to use only sliders, just wanted to give it a very characteristic feel different from the rest of the map, and it just turned out this way
  10. 01:50:553 (2) - bend this the other way for better flow?
  11. 02:17:065 (1) - I expect a few beginners to break here because "AAH WHAT IS THAT WHY IS I DON'T EVEN *PANICCLICKSLIDERBREAK* (because it's only a 1/2 slider, by the way, this is difficult to read especially when you mainly have such long sliders in your diff before)
  12. 03:28:664 - Consider removing the slider in a way that you can place a circle here where the kiai starts. A circle always has more of an impact than a slider so it would make sense to use them for kiai transitions
    Made something a bit different,at least its not starting in the middle of the slider
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:542 (4) - I'd replace the sldier with 2 circles I have my own reason for this slider,to be more precise its a copy paste of the previous pattern (00:38:795 (1,2) - ) so that the two of these actually make a whole pattern
  2. 02:06:746 (5) - I'd say this is pretty unexpected. One reverse arrow is okay, but multiple reverse's cannot be seen during the slider's approach phase and can cause sliderbreaks
  3. 03:39:935 (5,6,1) - sliderend-circle-sliderhead triangle?
  4. 03:58:510 (6) - same thing as before This one wasnt necessary because I had changed the pattern a bit too much to fix the 3 reverse arrow sliders
  5. finding stuff in this diff is hard without screwing your entire mapping concept
[Insane]
  1. I'm kinda afraid of touching your patterns in this Q_Q However I'm a bit concerned about the length of some of your combos
    Well, I did say in my first post that all NC mods are more than welcome!
  2. 00:38:319 (8) - NC? =/
  3. 01:17:849 (6) - NC on this?
  4. 02:08:492 (6) - NC
  5. 02:40:402 - I really hate the overmapped triplets in the part starting here. You can hear they're overmapped and don't feel well while playing. I know it's the guitar solo but meh, this feels unnecessary to me
    They are fine...
  6. 02:55:484 - As for the stream IIRC I already told you before that this is pretty overdone IMO. This map is entirely jump based and doesn't require any streaming skills, so suddenly putting a 50-note stream is kinda bad. I'd strongly suggest you to use 1/4 sliders at this point (for example after the first two measures of circlestream), if you want, you could even place slider jumps, following the theme of your map with crazy patterns and stuff
    At least that's my opinion, others who can SS this stream most likely are going to tell you it's fine, but I who cannot stream and who will never be able to do so because of physical limitations always have to view streams in a critical way, I hope you understand that.
    I understand it, I also struggle with the streams, also, in case you havent noticed, these streams have its spacing much more reduced and most 500+ ranked players can SS it easily (while in the past, I have only seen it FCed like twice) and I did that precisely on your comment
Tsk. I can't mod anymore recently. Either that of the maps I mod are too good.
Thanks for the mod!
ignorethis
check out the AIMod, and look for a taiko BAT to confirm that your taiko diffs are rankable.

osu standard difficulties look fine for me.

btw, good job on this map.
Topic Starter
Luvdic

ignorethis wrote:

check out the AIMod, and look for a taiko BAT to confirm that your taiko diffs are rankable.

osu standard difficulties look fine for me.

btw, good job on this map.
If you mean the audio lead in stuff and the letterbox stuff, Ill have to say that its a bug, and not sure why it happens. If you use AImod for the first time: this appears:



But if you use AImod on all your diffs, and then go back to the same diff again, this will happen:



Also, just to truely proof that they are the same (just some diffs):



And yes, Ive been waiting for a taiko bat for over 1 month :(

And thanks a lot! :D
ignorethis

Xanandra wrote:

ignorethis wrote:

check out the AIMod, and look for a taiko BAT to confirm that your taiko diffs are rankable.

osu standard difficulties look fine for me.

btw, good job on this map.
And thanks a lot! :D
oh, i was never aware that it's a glitch of the AIMod. thanks for remind me :D
karterfreak
Taiko mod req from in game

[Mancuso's Muzukashii]

00:26:412 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - Just a suggestion for an alternate pattern here, try ddkd dkkddkd. It doesn't change too much and fits the vocals a bit better.

00:29:587 (145) - Remove this finisher.

00:37:843 (185) - Try moving this to 00:38:002, again to fit the vocals a bit better.

00:39:748 (193) - Move this to 00:39:589. Same reason as above.

00:47:368 (234) - This note doesn't really fit that well, suggest removing it.

00:48:638 (241,242,243,244) - delete 241, make 242/243 dk, and move 244 to 00:49:273.

01:08:959 (345) - Add a finisher here.

01:09:276 (346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353) - kdddkd d

01:47:060 (544) - Delete this note. The 1/2 streaming is a little excessive here.

01:48:330 (551,552,553,554,555,556,557) - Lets change this up a little to compliment the guitar better. Instead of this, try what it shows in the picture below:



02:37:544 (800) - This plays better as a don.

03:29:299 (5,6,7,8) - ddkd like you were doing before makes more sense.

03:39:459 (56,57,58,59,60) - ddkd, move 60 to 03:40:253.

03:45:174 (86,87) - Move 86 to 03:45:333 - and change it to a don, make 87 a kat.

03:52:794 (122) - Move to 03:52:953.

03:57:875 (145,146) - k D like you were doing previously, there's no change in pitch or anything so there's no reason to switch to a different pattern.

04:12:956 (225) - Add a finisher here.

[Zukisinx's Oni]

00:44:193 (31,32,33,34,35) - Probably fits better as a kkddk pattern

00:45:939 (47) - Imo this should be a don finisher.

00:48:003 (60,61,62) - kkd fits a bit better than dkd, but both work so your call.

01:07:848 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130) - If you delete 123 to give some space after the finisher, you could do k d kkddk k d or k d k d k k d starting from 124. Give it a shot and see if you like it.

01:29:121 (79) - Add a finisher here.

01:42:615 (176,177,178,179,180) - kkddk (like you did last time at a part similar to this) fits here better imo.

01:43:250 (182) - make this a k if you apply the above mod.

02:26:749 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - Should probably just do dK dK dK dK here, no need to switch it around.

02:28:972 (63) - Add a finisher here.

02:30:718 (77,78,79,80,81) - Doesn't matter too much here, but I think ddkkd fits better here.

02:37:703 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - Again, dK dK dK dK here.

03:07:073 (102) - Remove this, this section sounds a little awkward with it there.

03:10:883 (134) - Remove this, same reason as above.

03:27:235 (247,1) - Delete 247 and make 1 start where 247 was. It makes more sense for the spinner to start on the held guitar note than 1/2 a tick after.

03:48:984 (16) - Make this a finisher to add a little emphasis to the vocals.

This next one is a bit of a big change but bear with me on it. Delete 03:57:716 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - and copy/paste 03:56:763 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - where the old section used to be. It gives you that nice "k d d k d d k d d k d d" structure that goes along with this section of the music really well.

03:59:145 (92) - Make this a finisher to emphasize the end of this section / start of a new section.

04:15:496 (59) - Missed a finisher here.

04:19:306 (85,1) - Same as the last spinner, delete 85 and move 1 to start where 85 was.
-Kazu-

Tasha wrote:

Taiko mod req from in game


[Zukisinx's Oni]

00:44:193 (31,32,33,34,35) - Probably fits better as a kkddk pattern Nah,doesnt sounds well because this 00:44:828 (37,38,39,40,41) -

00:45:939 (47) - Imo this should be a don finisher. Why? Pitch is high because it is a cymbal..

00:48:003 (60,61,62) - kkd fits a bit better than dkd, but both work so your call. I feel it better as dkd since it emphatized the k

01:07:848 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130) - If you delete 123 to give some space after the finisher, you could do k d kkddk k d or k d k d k k d starting from 124. Give it a shot and see if you like it. Liked more the second pattern you hinted

01:29:121 (79) - Add a finisher here. oh well thx

01:42:615 (176,177,178,179,180) - kkddk (like you did last time at a part similar to this) fits here better imo. I didnt do that lol

01:43:250 (182) - make this a k if you apply the above mod. x

02:26:749 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - Should probably just do dK dK dK dK here, no need to switch it around. I really...like how it is...i will...add it if someone else tells me it should be dK dK dK ....

02:28:972 (63) - Add a finisher here. ok

02:30:718 (77,78,79,80,81) - Doesn't matter too much here, but I think ddkkd fits better here. ok

02:37:703 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - Again, dK dK dK dK here.same as before..

03:07:073 (102) - Remove this, this section sounds a little awkward with it there.

03:10:883 (134) - Remove this, same reason as above.

03:27:235 (247,1) - Delete 247 and make 1 start where 247 was. It makes more sense for the spinner to start on the held guitar note than 1/2 a tick after.
Didnt noticed it but it could be better if no finish,so i will remove it
03:48:984 (16) - Make this a finisher to add a little emphasis to the vocals.

This next one is a bit of a big change but bear with me on it. Delete 03:57:716 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - and copy/paste 03:56:763 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - where the old section used to be. It gives you that nice "k d d k d d k d d k d d" structure that goes along with this section of the music really well. Nice shot bro

03:59:145 (92) - Make this a finisher to emphasize the end of this section / start of a new section.ok

04:15:496 (59) - Missed a finisher here.ok

04:19:306 (85,1) - Same as the last spinner, delete 85 and move 1 to start where 85 was.ok
http://puu.sh/4LXc3.osu link
mancuso_JM_

Tasha wrote:

Taiko mod req from in game

[Mancuso's Muzukashii]


00:29:587 (145) - Remove this finisher. but this finisher is emphasizing perfectly the drums, I prefer to leave this as it is.

01:48:330 (551,552,553,554,555,556,557) - Lets change this up a little to compliment the guitar better. Instead of this, try what it shows in the picture below: Prefer to don't use alternate patterns in 1/4 in this diff. In addition, I'm trying to emphasize drums here not guitar, so this is the best way imo.



03:39:459 (56,57,58,59,60) - ddkd, move 60 to 03:40:253. Hmm.. no, it becomes pretty repetitive the map and I personally want to keep some of variety, and I think this is the best option.

03:52:794 (122) - Move to 03:52:953. ^
Everything else have been fixed! Thanks!

Muzu
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Topic Starter
Luvdic
So this map has gone to grave again... Well, I guess that I have a few words to say this time...

First of all, trust me that I did everything I could and yet still not going really going too far away from my own beliefs. Why I say this? Lets take a look at the current taiko BATs:

aabc271: everytime I ask her he/she is busy

HeatKai: I have asked him like 3 times, and no mod yet... and last time we talked he promised to mod my map....

KanaRin: at first he/she has a weird question queue on which Ill never be able to answer it properly, since they seem to be too japanese culture oriented, then he/she changed to a pm system explaining him/her why the map should be modded, on which I did, and I think twice... not sure.

kanpakyin: fromm what I read from his/her user page, hi/she seem to have quit?

Loctav: he's always busy, specially with taiko tournament, I dont really want to bother him too much.

mancuso_JM_: he's part of my map set

MMzz: I admit this one I havent asked, but... I guess that it is becausewe have never been online at the same time....

OnosakiHito: it's on his queue for over 2months...

spboxer3: well... his/her userpage says it all

Sync: same as MMzz

Tasha: I have tried to pm him/her several times to remind him/her to recheck my map... but so far... I have been unsuccessful, be it because he/shes too busy or other thing, anyways, it doesnt really matter in the end, and Im grateful that s/he have been able to check this map at least once

Anyways, as I say, most of the things I did it as far as my own ethics allowed me to, I'm not going to completely change my being just for this map, and I guess thats partly the fault of which I rank my own maps so slow.

I guess that for now its a farewell to this map until a taiko BAT finally decides to mod this map, and even though this map is graved, trust me when I tell you that you can mod it anytime you want, and as soon as you post, Ill revive this, this also applies for any kind of mod that this map receives.

Oh well, Ill just leave the rest to the taiko BATs and the other users that might be more interested in seeing this map ranked, cause as for me, I hae already lost interest after I have been trying to find a taiko BAT for at least 2 months, literally.
Sieg
;_;
OnosakiHito
Tasha modded this map since I had no time to mod it yet. So it's already cool that he take the time for it.
Also don't forget that everyone of us has much to mod, it's an amount you shouldn't underrestimate.
Your map is on my user-page and I wrote you a PM, so I will look through it when I have time.

Also you didn't have to wait only for us. Osu BATs are able to osu-icon this set...
Topic Starter
Luvdic
Didnt knew the existence of osu icon, in any case, ignorethis was ready to bubbe this map, but was pending a taiko icon. Just check some posts earlier.

Also please, theres no need to give excuses, i understand perfectly that you all are busy and all that stuff. Im not blaming anyone and much less the BATs, i understand that you guys dont really have to do this, since this is not a job and blah blah blah etc, i guess thats one of the reason that i dont like to pressure you guys too much, but i also have my own limits, and this is it, i dont want to keep pressuring anyone anymore. I guess this more of a notice of my laziness to keep trying.

And as I said in my earlier post, feel free to mod this map anytime, and if changes are needed ill revive it asap, so theres no need to make a drama out of this, if someone going to mod this, then good, if no one mod it, its also cool to me.

Anyways, thanks for your concern, and sorry if i made it sound like a rant that bats are useless, its not, its more like im trying to get excuses that i tried to get this ranked, and that i can get lazy now.
OnosakiHito
ignorethis could have osu icon it.
Anyway, don't worry. I know how you feel due to my 2~4 year old projects. But can't keep up that quickly atm.
HeatKai
I told you I'm busy irl too and if I didn't mod it within a week, slap me with a salmon.

placeholder, will mod it tonight. kdone

edit: i guess you forget. since you're not in a good shape when we're chatting.

[General]
  1. The bg size is kinda weird. search for another bg maybe?
  2. the artist i'm not sure since the real name got special letter of a
[Oni]
I prefer 1.4x sv for this taiko diff, the bpm is quite fast \=w=/
  1. 00:08:314 (56) - change this to k, the guitar is quite loud.
  2. 00:09:267 (63,64,65,66,67) - this stream, i prefer it starts from 00:09:108 (62) - follow the guitar. maybe adding a circle at 00:09:187 (63) - would solve the problem :3 "kkddddd"
  3. 00:11:966 (82) - k here would sound better to reflect your last patterrn. d k kdd , it's like d k k d pattern :3 the current pattern is d k ddd, doesn't really sound good.
  4. 00:45:622 (45) - change this to k?
  5. 01:20:548 (23) - k same as before ^
  6. 01:27:692 (68) - change this to d and 01:27:851 (69) - change this to k, follow the guitar right here would sound better :3
  7. 02:16:271 (9) - move this to 02:16:430 (9) - if you hear the music, there's drum here and it's follow better with the song and change it to d k
  8. 03:02:469 (67) - change this to d because guitar from the song pretty similar to 03:02:151 (65) -
  9. 03:41:364 (98) - having k here sounds really weird tbh or is it just me, but i like d here more x)
  10. 03:48:984 (16) - just to have a good start with kiai and the song why not add a finish here, even in muzu did it. :3
  11. 04:19:306 (85) - i don't really like to see spinner here, there's drum there. add a circle there and move the spinner after the circle like this maybe?
  12. 01:59:761 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Every starting of kiai/this part. the pattern sounds really weird. i think you need to check again for this part. maybe the usage of that k K doesn't sound good for me. it's really annoy me xD
  13. 01:01:815 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - ^
  14. 03:31:521 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^

[Muzu]
  1. 01:41:980 (517) - move this circle to 01:42:139 (517) -
  2. 01:48:171 (548) - change this to a k triplet. "kkk d k" that kkk follow the guitar. current ddd sounds pretty empty from the music
  3. 02:48:260 (849) - delete this circle, it's pretty random and if you hear the song it's actually 1/2 :3
  4. 03:40:094 (60) - move this circle to 03:40:253 (60) -
  5. 03:58:827 (151) - change this to k, 03:59:145 (153) - this one to d, 03:59:462 (154) - this one to K, sounds really good for me :3 try!
  6. ending put a short spinner like i suggest in oni? :3
I'm really like the oni :3 it's fun :3
pm ono for the second check after update from my mod :3 he will take care of this one :) ALL THE BEST XANANDRA WEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEW.
-Kazu-

HeatKai wrote:

- the artist i'm not sure since the real name got special letter of a
I'm here to späm.

*placeholder for mod reply
EDIT:

HeatKai wrote:

[Oni]
I prefer 1.4x sv for this taiko diff, the bpm is quite fast \=w=/ That explains a lot of things :O
  1. 00:08:314 (56) - change this to k, the guitar is quite loud. I think its a little spam of k but still modified
  2. 00:09:267 (63,64,65,66,67) - this stream, i prefer it starts from 00:09:108 (62) - follow the guitar. maybe adding a circle at 00:09:187 (63) - would solve the problem :3 "kkddddd" it is following drums
  3. 00:11:966 (82) - k here would sound better to reflect your last patterrn. d k kdd , it's like d k k d pattern :3 the current pattern is d k ddd, doesn't really sound good. fun fact: i noticed this is the only stream starting with d lol
  4. 00:45:622 (45) - change this to k? I prefer it as d,since i wanted to follow the drums
  5. 01:20:548 (23) - k same as before ^ ok
  6. 01:27:692 (68) - change this to d and 01:27:851 (69) - change this to k, follow the guitar right here would sound better :3 I applied but because it follows the drums better lol
  7. 02:16:271 (9) - move this to 02:16:430 (9) - if you hear the music, there's drum here and it's follow better with the song and change it to d k Ok :D
  8. 03:02:469 (67) - change this to d because guitar from the song pretty similar to 03:02:151 (65) - Forget the guitar,but it still sounds like following drums
  9. 03:41:364 (98) - having k here sounds really weird tbh or is it just me, but i like d here more x) I did a little change,03:41:046 (95) - it became k,03:40:888 (94) - this became d .
  10. 03:48:984 (16) - just to have a good start with kiai and the song why not add a finish here, even in muzu did it. :3 ok
  11. 04:19:306 (85) - i don't really like to see spinner here, there's drum there. add a circle there and move the spinner after the circle like this maybe?
    Sounds ok
  12. 01:59:761 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Every starting of kiai/this part. the pattern sounds really weird. i think you need to check again for this part. maybe the usage of that k K doesn't sound good for me. it's really annoy me xDRemapped
  13. 01:01:815 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - ^Remapped
  14. 03:31:521 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^Remapped


I'm really like the oni :3 it's fun :3 Thx ;w;
pm ono for the second check after update from my mod :3 he will take care of this one :) ALL THE BEST XANANDRA WEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEW.
Sorry for being late, so busy :C http://puu.sh/5tnJr.osu
HeatKai
yes that ä xD
Topic Starter
Luvdic
Sorry, a bit busy these days...

For now i can only answer the thibg about the a. Thing is that i wanted to use the normal a for sake of consistency with my other maps, but if you guys says that i should change, ill change, its no problem at all for me
Gonzvlo

Xanandra wrote:

Sorry, a bit busy these days...
Oh the irony
sjoy
M4M from your queue
[Easy]
00:09:584 100 % volume is too loud ,I think 90% is ok
00:24:190 (2) - touch the HPbar
00:56:258 drum hitsound intentionally ?
02:54:690 (2) - http://puu.sh/5oG0J.jpg
03:25:806 (1) - http://puu.sh/5oG4u.jpg
03:39:776 (2) - touch the HPbar
03:52:477 (2) - move to 456,160 for the same spacing
[Normal]
03:26:123 (4) - http://puu.sh/5oGoI.jpg
03:41:999 (3) - touch the HPbar
03:58:510 (6) - delete it
04:18:036 (4) - http://puu.sh/5oGwb.jpg
[Sieg's Hard]
01:09:753 (3,4) - ctrl+g?
01:10:388 (6,7) - ^
01:11:023 (9,10) - ^
02:30:559 (4) - why stack?move to 390,322
02:33:734 (5) - 272,288
02:35:639 (4) - 476,184
03:07:390 (6) - NC for a big jump
04:11:686 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/5oGWP.jpg
[Insane]
00:01:329 (4) - stack with 00:00:694 (2) - ?
00:13:871 (5) - http://puu.sh/5oH3g.jpg
01:15:468 (10) - NC for a new square
02:51:356 (5,6,7) - keep consistency with 02:50:880 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5oHhO.jpg
02:53:896 (2) - I think here is not good for big jump try 80,184
02:55:484 (7) - too long stream D: add some repeat sliders?
good luck
Yarissa
My kudosu disappeared ;_;
Topic Starter
Luvdic

Kaoru wrote:

My kudosu disappeared ;_;
Sorry, its my fault for not telling you that you have to savelog the chat and post it in your post.

@sjoy, been a bit busy, will get to your mod probably later tonight or tomorrow

@Gonzvlo: HOHOHOHOHOHOHOH, shut up, its a secret :>

And I wonder what happened to Anhedonia and mancuso.....
Topic Starter
Luvdic

sjoy wrote:

M4M from your queue

[Easy]
00:09:584 100 % volume is too loud ,I think 90% is ok
Using the same hitsound as normal and insane, so they should be fine

00:24:190 (2) - touch the HPbar
Lowered a bit down

00:56:258 drum hitsound intentionally ?
Yes

02:54:690 (2) - http://puu.sh/5oG0J.jpg
I dont think thats good

03:25:806 (1) - http://puu.sh/5oG4u.jpg
Okay

03:39:776 (2) - touch the HPbar
Lowered a bit down

03:52:477 (2) - move to 456,160 for the same spacing
Okay

[Normal]
03:26:123 (4) - http://puu.sh/5oGoI.jpg
I dont think that sounds better

03:41:999 (3) - touch the HPbar
Lowered a bit down

03:58:510 (6) - delete it
I dont see why I would want that

04:18:036 (4) - http://puu.sh/5oGwb.jpg
I think that the current one is better

[Sieg's Hard]

Since Sieg is kinda... not available to answer the mod post, Ill do it for him, Please if you do read this and theres something that you dont agree with me, use any means possible to you to tell me :>
(Anyways, you should anyways, how dare you going away from me just like that)


01:09:753 (3,4) - ctrl+g?
01:10:388 (6,7) - ^
01:11:023 (9,10) - ^
Okay

02:30:559 (4) - why stack?move to 390,322
02:33:734 (5) - 272,288
02:35:639 (4) - 476,184
Dont think its necessary

03:07:390 (6) - NC for a big jump
Okay

04:11:686 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/5oGWP.jpg
No need.

[Insane]

00:01:329 (4) - stack with 00:00:694 (2) - ?
Its already stacked with 00:03:234 (2) -

00:13:871 (5) - http://puu.sh/5oH3g.jpg
Its okay the way it is right now...

01:15:468 (10) - NC for a new square
Ok

02:51:356 (5,6,7) - keep consistency with 02:50:880 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5oHhO.jpg
Done, actually I feel that I wanted to do this in the past but forgot, lol.

02:53:896 (2) - I think here is not good for big jump try 80,184
Reduced a bit the jump

02:55:484 (7) - too long stream D: add some repeat sliders?
Its okay

good luck

And thanks a lot for the mod
P o M u T a
please add tag 'Finisterra' please.
No kudosu~.
jonathanlfj
alright here is the long awaited mod :3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
in Sieg's Hard there is an extra space between the tags "Sieg" and "-Anhedonia-" which is breaking AIMod, remove the space solves the issue
here is a higher quality bg with the proper dimensions for you:
[Easy]
00:40:065 (4) - the long pause between this and previous slider made it really hard to read the rhythm correctly here, i suggest something like this here: 00:50:543 (2) - another one that s a bit harder to read rhythm wise; you can try deleting this and make 00:48:956 (1) a repeat slider
00:56:893 (2) - extend the end to 00:57:370, thats where the finish actually lands in the music
01:18:643 (3) - start this slider at 01:18:484 makes more sense imo (end is still on the red line)
01:38:487 (2) - same as 00:40:065 (4)
01:47:378 (2,3) - refer to 00:50:543 (2)
01:55:315 (2) - extend to 01:55:792
02:17:065 (3) - start this one at 02:16:906 and end at 02:17:541; fits the music much better (you can swap for a repeat slider too)
02:49:927 (2) - i think a finish on the end here fits the transition of the song better
02:58:818 (3) - on windowed mode this overlaps the score meter quite a bit, move it a bit down if possible
03:11:200 (3) - put a NC here? the vocals start here
03:19:773 (3) - i would reduce a repeat here, its quite difficult for newbies to judge how many repeats there are and it will make it more confusing for rhythms afterwards; you can try something like this: 03:26:939 - unsnapped green line, snap to 03:26:917
03:54:064 (1) - forgot clap on end
04:08:987 (1) - for this one it makes more sense to start the slider on 04:09:146, since this resonates with the rhythm in the very beginning of the song
04:09:172 - unsnapped green line, snap to 04:09:146
04:18:036 (3) - since there are no spinners in this diff, you can swap this for a spinner so you get some score variations when everyone has like 4mod SS

[Normal]
this is the first time i've seen a 4 min Normal with 10mill+ score
00:28:000 (6,7) - flows better if you arrange it like this: 00:30:540 (5,6) - imo doubles positioned like this are generally hard to play for a Normal, you can consider swapping for a 1/2 slider instead; if you agree then replace it for all the doubles in the map (circle + slider is fine since sliders have a lenient hitwindow)
01:15:627 (4) - NC here, this combo is too long compared to others in this section
02:06:746 (5,6) - based on how the vocals is stressed here, the repeat slider should come after the normal slider rhythm wise
02:28:972 (5) - NC should be here instead of 02:29:924 (1)
02:50:403 (3,4,1) - i got quite confused here when test playing, you just suddenly switched from following the drums to following guitars (which actually land in 1/4 snap, if you listen carefully) and it only lasted half a measure; you can instead do what you usually do and map 1/2 sliders here to cover both:
03:10:724 (6) - NC here instead of 03:11:518 (1)
03:58:510 (6,7,8) - this might be a tad hard since its easy to screw up hitting the last circle, you can make 03:58:827 (7) into a repeat slider
04:12:956 (3) - instead of this, you can utilize the natural rhythm here: 04:19:148 (5,6) - its a lot easier to play if you swap this for a repeat slider starting at 04:18:989 to cover for the sound there
lots of unused green lines, clean those up if possible. Also it wont hurt to see if you ca fit a spinner somewhere in the diff, e.g change 02:14:842 (1,2,3,4) into a long spinner

[Sieg's Hard]
RIP Sieg, now that he is banned im assuming you will take over fixing the diff?
01:10:864 (8,9,10) - flows a bit better if you do ctrl+g so it looks like this: 01:27:851 (1,2,3) - the music here calls for a 1/1 slider instead of the constant 1/2 circle pattern, makes it also easier to play
01:48:171 (5,6,7) - the flow on this is a bit awkward; adjust it to something like this: 03:03:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm here feels off, as it should follow the slider-note-slider pattern on a different starting beat:
03:20:249 (8) - bring this to the right a few grids so the circle looks less skewed here
03:20:885 (12) - NC should be here instead of 03:21:361 (1)
03:37:078 (6,7) - minor spacing inconsistency here
diff leans to the harder side of Hard, but its very solid so i wont go further picking on that

[Insane]
00:23:079 (3,4) - have the slider before the circle; 00:23:079 is a hold guitar sound which better fits with a slider and 00:23:555 can have a click action
01:17:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - let me propose another kind of arrangement that i think flows better: 01:54:204 (1,2) - remember how i failed here the first few attempts? thats because these two notes are interfering with reading the later rhythm which comes in 3s. you should try to move this somewhere else, e.g. stack on 01:52:140 (1)
02:26:273 (2) - try stacking this on 02:26:749 (4), gives 02:26:431 (3) a more epic entrance
02:55:484 (7) - NC here to mark start of the stream (and reduce combo count)
03:18:821 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - another difficult to read pattern due to stacking, try to use the NC technique you used earlier in the map: 03:43:745 (11,1,2,3) - quite confusing rhythm wise, suggest you move 03:43:745 (11) out of stack (form a triangle jump between 03:43:587 (10,11,1), for example)
03:58:986 (4,1) - same thing here, for this you can stack 03:58:986 (4) on 03:58:827 (3)
04:09:146 (2) - missing a finish on start?
quite unique patterns, though the rhythm is a bit short on consistency the epic jumps make up for it. Definitely had a lot of fun trying to pass this

Well i would gladly push this forward for the cool higher diffs, but i advise you get some more input on the lower diffs, especially Easy which utilizes a lot of rhythms that can be too complicated for that level of game play. Get weaker players to test play, some more mods etc. and call me back when you think everything is good.
Topic Starter
Luvdic

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright here is the long awaited mod :3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
in Sieg's Hard there is an extra space between the tags "Sieg" and "-Anhedonia-" which is breaking AIMod, remove the space solves the issue
Fixed

here is a higher quality bg with the proper dimensions for you:
Changed

[Sieg's Hard]

RIP Sieg, now that he is banned im assuming you will take over fixing the diff? Yes, but I have found a way to contact him, and Ill have him verify all my actions, and undo them in he deems it necessary

01:10:864 (8,9,10) - flows a bit better if you do ctrl+g so it looks like this:
I feel like I have changed this part a bit before... but ehh... okay, done

01:27:851 (1,2,3) - the music here calls for a 1/1 slider instead of the constant 1/2 circle pattern, makes it also easier to play
They are okay since they are following more the drums... pretty much like the whole map

01:48:171 (5,6,7) - the flow on this is a bit awkward; adjust it to something like this:
I personally dont see the awkwardness in the pattern, I sometimes do these kind of things myself as well... But then again, my spatial flow is awkward and yet I love it.

03:03:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm here feels off, as it should follow the slider-note-slider pattern on a different starting beat:


03:20:249 (8) - bring this to the right a few grids so the circle looks less skewed here
Ok, hope its enough...?

03:20:885 (12) - NC should be here instead of 03:21:361 (1)
Okay

03:37:078 (6,7) - minor spacing inconsistency here
Fixed

diff leans to the harder side of Hard, but its very solid so i wont go further picking on that
And yet you cant deny that theres a huge gap between Insane and hard, so you cant really say that anything in this diff its too hard when you see the mapset as a whole.

[Insane]
00:23:079 (3,4) - have the slider before the circle; 00:23:079 is a hold guitar sound which better fits with a slider and 00:23:555 can have a click action
I know about that, but I preferred to follow this other rhythm because it fits better with the other parts.

01:17:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - let me propose another kind of arrangement that i think flows better:
Im already aware that my "spatial flow of objects" is not loved by most, but please understand that this is the way that I intend them to be, and I see them perfectly fine.

01:54:204 (1,2) - remember how i failed here the first few attempts? thats because these two notes are interfering with reading the later rhythm which comes in 3s. you should try to move this somewhere else, e.g. stack on 01:52:140 (1)
Yes, and it used to be worse, much worse, and has been modified lots of times to the point that Im finally comfortable with the amount of pass/fails Ive seen with the test plays, in fact, this very part is the part that I changed the most in the map over the course of the testplays.

02:26:273 (2) - try stacking this on 02:26:749 (4), gives 02:26:431 (3) a more epic entrance
Remember about my weird taste for my objects positions and its flow? Well, doing that would pretty much go against my "beliefs"

02:55:484 (7) - NC here to mark start of the stream (and reduce combo count)
Okay

03:18:821 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - another difficult to read pattern due to stacking, try to use the NC technique you used earlier in the map:
Made a slight modification to your suggestion, hope you agree with it

03:43:745 (11,1,2,3) - quite confusing rhythm wise, suggest you move 03:43:745 (11) out of stack (form a triangle jump between 03:43:587 (10,11,1), for example)
Never seen a problem with this in the testplays, and I guess that thats because the AR is already high enough for it to be easily read

03:58:986 (4,1) - same thing here, for this you can stack 03:58:986 (4) on 03:58:827 (3) Same as above
04:09:146 (2) - missing a finish on start?
Yes, thank you. I knew that I have some missing hitsounds while seeing other people playing, but everytime I go back to edit mode, I always forget it, Im sure theres like 2 or 3 more... Lol, but doesnt really matter.

quite unique patterns, though the rhythm is a bit short on consistency the epic jumps make up for it. Definitely had a lot of fun trying to pass this
Ehh, will finish checking the mod later... when I am more available.

EDIT:

Okay, heres the other part of my mod response:

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright here is the long awaited mod :3

[Easy]
Everything done, nice suggestions, finally a real mod for this diff.


[Normal]
this is the first time i've seen a 4 min Normal with 10mill+ score
00:28:000 (6,7) - flows better if you arrange it like this: Ehh... remember when I said something about me with weird spatial flow? Well this is it, I think for the rest of the mods, Ill just ignore these things, hope it wont offend you.

00:30:540 (5,6) - imo doubles positioned like this are generally hard to play for a Normal, you can consider swapping for a 1/2 slider instead; if you agree then replace it for all the doubles in the map (circle + slider is fine since sliders have a lenient hitwindow)
Ehhh, I think they are okay, I have seen people ranked 150k~ doing all the doubles fine (In fact, most of them got over 96% acc a the end)

01:15:627 (4) - NC here, this combo is too long compared to others in this section
02:06:746 (5,6) - based on how the vocals is stressed here, the repeat slider should come after the normal slider rhythm wise
02:28:972 (5) - NC should be here instead of 02:29:924 (1)
All done

02:50:403 (3,4,1) - i got quite confused here when test playing, you just suddenly switched from following the drums to following guitars (which actually land in 1/4 snap, if you listen carefully) and it only lasted half a measure; you can instead do what you usually do and map 1/2 sliders here to cover both:
What youre saying is right, but I dont really agree with your suggestion, changed (4) to a slider instead so it's more lenient to the hitwindow

03:10:724 (6) - NC here instead of 03:11:518 (1)
Done

03:58:510 (6,7,8) - this might be a tad hard since its easy to screw up hitting the last circle, you can make 03:58:827 (7) into a repeat slider
Dont really agree, and I also have seen test players ranked ~150k do this perfectly fine

04:12:956 (3) - instead of this, you can utilize the natural rhythm here: I refer the way it is now

04:19:148 (5,6) - its a lot easier to play if you swap this for a repeat slider starting at 04:18:989 to cover for the sound there

lots of unused green lines, clean those up if possible. Also it wont hurt to see if you ca fit a spinner somewhere in the diff, e.g change 02:14:842 (1,2,3,4) into a long spinner

Sorry, Im no perfectionist, and it will be very sad if you really want me to become such kind of person that I hate.
And about the spinners... I have a very special way to use them, I mean, I can't use them anyway as I want, but at least I can allow myself to do it the same as in the easy diff, hope thats good enough for you



Well i would gladly push this forward for the cool higher diffs, but i advise you get some more input on the lower diffs, especially Easy which utilizes a lot of rhythms that can be too complicated for that level of game play. Get weaker players to test play, some more mods etc. and call me back when you think everything is good.
Thanks, also, I admit that as for the easy diff I havent got lots of test players, maybe only 2, but thats only because I'm perfectly fine with players ranked around 150k to be able to play my maps fine (on which they are already able to, thats why I didnt ask for so much test plays in that diff), I wanted to compensate this by asking the modders to pay special attention to the easy diff, more specifically with the rhythm, but as you may see, most of the suggestions done on easy have been mostly spatial related, or the rhythm they suggested werent good enough for me (but yours was very nice, and I thank you for that)

Anyways, Ill try to get some test plays from some people ranked over 250k~ then

Oh and to answer to Pomuta's post: Xanandra does not belong to finisterra's album, it belongs to Hechizos, Pocimas y Brujerias, but I dont think its necessary to add that to the tags either.

Also, after watching these replays, I have to say that I love jonathan, now Im quite happy with my easy diff, that weird rhythm that was on that diff is gone now, and its all thanks to you :>

EDIT2: Test plays done, had 10 people ranked over 250k for this.
Its kinda hard to know what patterns are badly designed or its just because the players are still learning how to play, as in, most of them left the slider too early, or stuff like. As far as rhythm go, it seems to be okay except for 01:17:532 (2,3) - , on which it has been redesigned again, and it seems to be okay according to 3 replays. Also a general opinion seems to be that the map its too slow... lol.
Topic Starter
Luvdic
Everything should be okay now
jonathanlfj
looked through the easier diffs, seems much more intuitive to play now
glad i was of some help to you, and thanks for getting a lot of testplays so i dont have to speculate about playability in the editor

everything else seems fine, so
Circled~
Topic Starter
Luvdic
Thanks a lot jonathan!

Now have to wait for mancuso to reappear again...
Innocent Steps
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mancuso_JM_
Meh.. no tengo motivacion para hacer los cambios. Si queres los podes hacer vos (podrias pedirle a Kazu que te de una mano con eso), pero por favor, no cambien el estilo del mapa.
Probablemente si Ono modea, revise ese mod. Y perdon por demorar en responder
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