Nwolf wrote:

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[Lucid]

00:32:173 (5) - New combo Q'ed :3
00:53:694 (3) - Move the slider somewhere else, I think this is not that good for a Normal.^ I also thought this was awkward...
00:59:999 (4) - NC Q'ed
01:13:912 (6) - NC ^
01:18:586 (4,5) - Make a slider out of this, too hard to play Changed also
02:23:477 (4,5,6) - Move to a spot where they are easier to play Yes
02:32:173 (8) - NC Q'ed
02:39:129 (1,2) - Overlapping sliders are not good Changed @_@
02:49:564 (7) - NC Q'ed
03:17:933 (2) - How does this one fit to the music It's the second part of a perceivable counter-melody

[Euphoria]

OD 5 Change-ed
01:37:281 (4) - Move to a more visible place Fixed
02:16:086 (4) - Make it go the other direction Went with flow changes (fixed)
03:07:390 (3,4,5) - Doesn't fit the music Changed (but might be changed again...)


Insane being too insane for me It's too insane for me too:3


like the maps, gl for rank^^ Nahhh rank is just a plus. I just want to create a good looking map is all

fergas wrote:

Hello! Random dice here.

Lucid
00:07:281 (5) - never use blue ticks on easy/normal. Off beats are extremly hard place for newbies. >.< I wish I'd known that sooner
00:08:042 (1) - ^
00:08:694 (2) - ^
00:09:564 (4) - well, this is possiable
00:10:433 (5) - but this it isn't
00:12:499 (3) - ^ from now all blue ticks i will just mark with "blue tick"
00:15:977 (8) - blue tick
00:16:520 (1) - same. rly hard spinners for 3 stars. Delating previous sliders and making spinner on 00:16:086 - would be better Got rid of spinner completely and filled with notes. I felt that trying to work a spinner in there was awkward with this difficulty
00:25:216 (1,2,3) - jsut visual this sliders lie in bad combo. make it more symmetric Done and done <3
00:43:477 (6) - may be casuse it's voice part I don't understand @_@
00:36:955 - puse/spinner? Filled
00:39:999 (2) - blue tick if end of slider lands on white tick i would be ok Did not change (but might in the future) It's a voice part and I'm still not sure what to do with it.
00:41:738 (5) - strange slider on 100% speed it got no sounds(make it starts on 00:41:955 (5) - or just add osu finish sound) Added sound :3
00:42:607 (6,7) - in your palce i would make something like that I did change

idea

00:43:477 (7) - btw blue tick
00:44:346 (9) - need something here or nvm Partially filled
00:47:173 (4) - spinner/pasue Filled with slider
00:46:303 (2) - blue tick u dont need amazing perfect time. Make this slider ends on white tick and check how better it sounds done
00:50:868 (4) - spinner/pasue Filled with slider
00:54:129 (4) - ^ ^
00:58:694 (1,2) - distance Check @_@
01:00:868 (2) - blue tick and voice starts on the end of slider - it isnt good fixed

idea

guess this one combo sounds a bit better. Try to imagine soemthing other

01:04:346 (2) - ^
01:11:303 (2) - ^
01:12:173 (3) - just blue tick
01:15:107 (4) - blue tick and voice starts on the end of slider
01:15:651 (1) - well its possiable, but still sounds good if slider end on white tick
01:18:586 (4,5) - u knwo what i want to say Actually I don't... As soon as I heard "blue ticks are bad" I immediately started remapping a lot of it. So either it's fixed, partially fixed, or stayed the same ^^; But if it was a blue tick then it's fixed
01:21:738 (2) - ^
01:24:564 (1,2,3) - ^
01:36:520 (5,6,7) - u got same part earlier. Why did u move end of sliders on red ticks? Btw u know need a bit more betyfull slider here Fixed :3
01:51:303 (2) - blue tick
01:54:999 (6) - blue tick make it starts on red tick
02:15:651 (2) - guess its ok. Ask more skilled modder about this.
02:19:999 (7) - guess need a bit sofer sound done
02:24:346 (5) - blue tick
02:28:912 (3,4,5) - blue ticks everywhere
02:32:390 (2,3,4) - ^
02:36:194 (1,2) - ^
02:43:803 (2) - ^
02:46:086 (1,2) - ^
02:50:433 (2) - ^
02:57:716 (4) - ^
03:04:346 (2,3) - ^
03:07:825 (2) - ^
03:15:107 (2) - ^
03:17:933 (2,3) - ^
03:20:868 (1,2) - ^
In 2nd chorus same problems as in 1st - in a lot of places where blue ticks voice starts at the time when slider ends I fixed the majority of the blue ticks while trying to be careful of taking away the song's rhythm. I kept a very few amount of blue ticks because some of them just sound right to me (blue tick vocal, melodic structure)

It's rly hard diff i want to say. Toooo hard for normal. I will try to cathc some testpalys and sen it itno pm to explain u

Ufff....
TIPS
02:51:303 (3) - use more red dots it will make your map looks more beautiful Noted <3

idea

2nd part need more circular sliders for beauty

Imho to match kiai time. Ask more ksilled modder about this. I will ask

I will say true - was dissapointed in 2nd part so didnt check disstance. But want to say I am in your palce would change distance to 1.2 and use grid level 3 fro better distnace setting.

Final shoot - imho hard song for 1st map. I don't want to say its bad. But beats is rly diffucult to work with. Want to rank it? Spam into PM to skilled modders. This song need a tons (I'm willing to put tons more work into it ) of time. But i want to say. I love it <3

I am done thought it would take less time.
Want anouther mod form me? Rework your maps. no prob
Later i will send test plays for Euphoria( and maybe if i will end forArcane)

UP

Was too late and forgot to write:
DR+1 done
OD+1 ^

Sometime u can use osu sounds louder than music cause its hard catch the beat here, osu may help.

Prob u will "u are hater". (Hater? o3o no I appreciate you taking time on this)I will answer:u underestimated complexity of the blue ticks. (I did. It went with the song so I figured it was ok to put it in an easy/normal difficulty) At the momnet is kind of unbelivable for news. Wll they can but only after hours practicing. Naw. I just wasn't too aware that blue ticks were bad ^^ Now I know. I will be updating shortly and most of the blue ticks in this mode will be gone and replaced with more simple rhythms. The map also will have more red dots and a bit more symmetry

Good luck!
Edit: Man it really doesn't help that the melodic structures of this song are like based off of blue ticks though @_@

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, random mod! Oh! How unexpected! :O

[Lucid]
Circle size - 1. so it matches up with the Approach rate better (Usually, if the AR is lower then 5, the circle size would be 3).
00:07:825 (7) - New Combo
00:14:781 (6) - ^
00:17:825 (1) - Remove New combo, should be on 00:18:260 (2) - instead so it corresponds with that finish hitsound.
00:21:738 - Add a note here for consistency with 00:19:999 (4) - A space here feels weird.
00:22:390 (6) - NC
00:32:173 (5) - ^
00:43:477 (7) - Add a finish on the tail.
00:53:042 (6) - NC
01:01:738 (4) - Remodel to this please:
I dislike how its side is crowded with 01:00:868 (2,3) -
01:06:955 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:43:477 (1) - ^
01:50:433 (1) - ^
01:55:651 - 01:57:390 A spinner here with a finish would sound nice Try it!
02:13:042 (1) - Remove NC
02:21:738 (2) - Add finish on the head.
02:27:390 (1) - Comes in way to early after the spinner, not recommended in Easy/Normal diff. Instead, shrink the slider and move it to 02:27:825, and ending it at 02:28:260
02:32:390 (2) - Should be starting at 02:32:607 instead, so the spacing in timing for your objects are consistent. This is the only thing I didn't do. I widened out the sliders and circles for this part though.
02:35:868 (6) - NC
02:56:520 (3) - ^
02:59:564 (1) - Remove finish, this hitsound should be on the head of 02:59:999 (2) -
03:13:912 (2) - Add finish on the head.
03:20:868 (6) - ^ And NC

Some of your sliders can use some re-modeling.For instance, sliders 01:05:651 (4,5) - are curled wayy to much, to the point where its tail is hard to see. Curve them less please. Same with 02:29:999 (3) - and many other sliders.

[Euphoria]
Why is the Slider velocity the same as Lucid diff?You really should have the SV increasing as the diffs get harder. Increase the slider velocity in this diff please (I'm assuming it's hard mode?) Having it as 1.00 makes the sliders look too small.
I suggest using 1.60 or 1.80
After you do that, make sure to 'Recalculate slider lengths' as shown below;

However, keep note that some of your sliders may still be off timing a bit, so you'll have to remodel them manually
It's going to take awhile, but I know you can fix it

Hope this helps~! ^^

This does help I was planning to remap Lucid and Arcane. the new SV for Euphoria really helps because I have tons more ideas (that came from other maps) that I can now apply. I'm remapping Lucid because I did a lot of bad things while making it >.< Remapping Arcane because... It's just a mess and it has too high SV. Originally I was going to leave it to the graveyard and come back to it later... But I feel I can remap these maps and make them decent ("I can do better than this"). I'm going to put this back in WIP until I've remapped Lucid and reworked Euphoria.