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Nardoxyribonucleic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月19日 at 21:57:27

Artist: Infinite Stratos Cast
Title: BEAUTIFUL SKY (TVSIZE 5nin ver.)
Source: Infinite Stratos 2
Tags: Taiko インフィニット・ストラトス IS Ending JUDYDANNY Shinonono Houki 篠ノ之 箒 Hikasa Youko 日笠陽子 Cecilia Alcott Seshiria Orukotto セシリア・オルコット Yukana ゆかな Huang Lingyin Fan Rin'in 凰 鈴音 Shimoda Asami 下田麻美 Charlotte Dunois Sharurotto Dunoa シャルロット・デュノア Hanazawa Kana 花澤香菜 Laura Bodewig Raura Bodevihhi ラウラ・ボーデヴィッヒ Inoue Marina 井上麻里奈
BPM: 180
Filesize: 2464kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.2 stars, 178 notes)
  2. JuDa's Oni (3.96 stars, 521 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.49 stars, 106 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.77 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Oni (3.9 stars, 484 notes)
Download: Infinite Stratos Cast - BEAUTIFUL SKY (TVSIZE 5nin ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 - Taiko mapset
BG - 100%
Kantan - 100%
Futsuu - 100%
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%
JuDa's Oni -100% (by JUDYDANNY)
FrzR
Good luck~ :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Fr33z3R wrote:

Good luck~ :D
Thank you~ www
Asagi Mutsuki
Taiko M4M~
[Kantan]
00:01:398 - maybe delete d add add slider from 00:01:398 to 00:02:398 ? the drumming in the background doesn't sound well with a circle/note
00:02:731 - add finish? vocal feels accented (plus muzu + oni has finish :P)
00:09:731 - ...i can understand why you put note here, but it's pretty hard for beginners to catch the beat (lol), move to 00:10:064 ?
00:32:731 - move to 00:34:064?
01:06:064 - delete to give players some time to rest?
01:08:064 - swap with 01:08:564?

Quite hard as a Kantan overall, but still a nice map :D

[Futsuu]
00:01:398 - same as kantan
00:02:731 - ^
00:05:398 (6,7) - add finish? got heavy cymbal crash (?) sound in background
00:43:898 - delete finish? i know there's accent in music, but its a bit hard to hit with two hands :)
00:45:231 - ^
00:46:731 - change to D? vocal pitch is low
01:08:231 - add k ? obvious sound in music
01:19:898 - same as 00:43:898
01:25:231 - ^
01:27:398 - add k? sounds better imo

[Muzukashii]
00:01:398 - same as kantan
00:09:231 - add finish? there is accent in music
00:12:231 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - change to k k d k k d D to follow pitch the pitch of vocal?
00:15:898 (56,73,85) - why not add finish to be consistent with 00:18:564 (67,79) - ?
00:42:898 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - change to d d d k k k D to follow pitch the pitch of vocal? 词穷;_;
00:45:648 - add k ? there is a sound in the music which fits it :)
00:47:564 - add k ? to fit vocal and to be consistent with 00:49:898 (88,89,90)
01:27:648 - add d to fit guitar?

[Oni]
00:01:398 - look ss below (to fit drumroll in music)
00:10:731 - look ss below (im following drumroll in background...ignore if you aren't :roll: )
(P.S the change starts from 00:10:731 so you need to look a little forward >.<)
00:23:648 - add d and 00:23:814 - add k? following music
00:45:648 - add d? obvious drum sound in music
00:47:564 - same as muzu
01:03:648 - add d and 01:03:814 - add k? the 1/4 sound in music is until 01:03:898
01:18:148 and 01:18:314 - add d? same. 1/4 sound hasn't ended yet

FINALLY Done~
Good luck getting this ranked!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Taiko M4M~
[Kantan]
00:01:398 - maybe delete d add add slider from 00:01:398 to 00:02:398 ? the drumming in the background doesn't sound well with a circle/note fixed
00:02:731 - add finish? vocal feels accented (plus muzu + oni has finish :P) retained to make it similar to 00:05:398
00:09:731 - ...i can understand why you put note here, but it's pretty hard for beginners to catch the beat (lol), move to 00:10:064 ? I added a don at 00:10:064.
00:32:731 - move to 00:34:064? fixed
01:06:064 - delete to give players some time to rest? no change
01:08:064 - swap with 01:08:564? fixed

Quite hard as a Kantan overall, but still a nice map :D

[Futsuu]
00:01:398 - same as kantan no change
00:02:731 - ^ ^
00:05:398 (6,7) - add finish? got heavy cymbal crash (?) sound in background fixed
00:43:898 - delete finish? i know there's accent in music, but its a bit hard to hit with two hands :) I want to build tension here, so no change
00:45:231 - ^ ^
00:46:731 - change to D? vocal pitch is low fixed
01:08:231 - add k ? obvious sound in music good idea~
01:19:898 - same as 00:43:898 no change
01:25:231 - ^ ^
01:27:398 - add k? sounds better imo added a don here.

[Muzukashii]
00:01:398 - same as kantan I added some notes instead.
00:09:231 - add finish? there is accent in music retained to make a contrast to 00:10:564
00:12:231 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - change to k k d k k d D to follow pitch the pitch of vocal? changed to k k k k d k D.
00:15:898 (56,73,85) - why not add finish to be consistent with 00:18:564 (67,79) - ? added finish at 85
00:42:898 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - change to d d d k k k D to follow pitch the pitch of vocal? 词穷;_; changed to d k d d k k D
00:45:648 - add k ? there is a sound in the music which fits it :) remain unchanged for simplicity.
00:47:564 - add k ? to fit vocal and to be consistent with 00:49:898 (88,89,90) again, I want to make some contrast here.
01:27:648 - add d to fit guitar? added finish at 01:27:731 instead.

[Oni]
00:01:398 - look ss below (to fit drumroll in music) I changed to d ddk kkd
00:10:731 - look ss below (im following drumroll in background...ignore if you aren't :roll: ) no change
(P.S the change starts from 00:10:731 so you need to look a little forward >.<)
00:23:648 - add d and 00:23:814 - add k? following music fixed
00:45:648 - add d? obvious drum sound in music fixed
00:47:564 - same as muzu fixed
01:03:648 - add d and 01:03:814 - add k? the 1/4 sound in music is until 01:03:898 nice~
01:18:148 and 01:18:314 - add d? same. 1/4 sound hasn't ended yet Here I want to map the 1/2 sounds.

FINALLY Done~
Good luck getting this ranked!
mingmichael
mods come as nardo request. 你好~! :3

Kantan
  • okay well~ c:

Futsuu
  1. 00:13:064 (22,23) - these notes aren't recomended for futsuu. o O with 1/2 beat snap divisor is quite hard for futsuu diff. much better change them to be small notes or you can delete 00:13:064 - to keep the big notes at 00:13:231 -
  2. 00:43:898 - and 00:45:231 - have a same problem like ^ . avoid to use finsiher after a 1/2 beat snap divisor note o O.
  3. 00:54:398 - add a note (don) at here
  4. 01:04:064 - remove the finsiher, there's not any reason to use it at here
  5. 01:14:731 - this too ^ . remove the finisher
  6. 01:19:731 - and 01:19:898 - have a same problem too like the first and second mods. but, at here i think delete 01:19:731 - to keep the finsiher is the best way
  7. 01:25:064 - and 01:25:231 - same too

Muzukashii
  1. 00:29:064 (11) - kat here? it follows the vocal sound there too
  2. 00:30:731 (15) - don here, it should be consistent like the first time like 00:25:398 -
  3. 00:34:731 (28) - remove the finisher here. it's not really recomend to use finsiher in the middle at the notes like you put before. o o O o o o << this pattern is quite hard for the muzukashii diff, but if you do that at oni diff, it's not problem
    move 00:36:898 (39) - to 00:36:564 - and change 00:36:231 - to be don and 00:36:398 (37) - kat. i changed them all to make it consistent like 00:38:731 (45,46,47) - d d k. it will be same like 00:36:064 (35,36,37) - d d k too if you use my mods. it should be same pattern because they have a same part of song D: so, much better to use a same pattern and notes
  4. 00:47:564 - add note here (kat). much better to follow the vocal sound, like the previous patterns too you followed them
  5. 00:50:064 - and 00:50:231 - don kat. i changed them because the vocal sounds become higher at 00:50:231 - , not at 00:50:064 - :c
  6. 00:51:731 - kat here?
  7. 01:11:731 - kat here? to follow the vocal sound like 01:12:064 - ; 01:12:398 ; and 01:12:731 -
  8. 01:27:564 - kat. i changed them because they will follow the electric guitar sounds which is getting higher (little higher) at 01:27:564 - , so i changed to be kat there.

Oni
  1. 00:11:731 (40) - don and 00:11:898 (41) - big kat? i changed them to make it mirror pattern like 00:12:898 (47,48,49) - d k d . so at 00:11:564 (39,40,41) - will be k d k c:
  2. 00:25:564 (2) - don? kat isn't fit well :c
  3. 00:26:398 (5,6) - kat don. just follow the kat pattern at the white strike
  4. 00:28:231 (16) - don too if you change 00:25:564 - to be don too
  5. 00:29:064 (19,20) - kat don too if you change 00:26:398 (5,6) - to be kat don too
  6. 00:31:731 (33,34) - ^
  7. 00:36:231 (55) - don too, the reason same like the previous mods
  8. 00:40:064 - add don here, because it feels empty without any notes :c and add dons at 00:40:148 - and 00:40:314 - and remove don at 00:40:648 - << so it'll be ddddk d d k c:
  9. 00:43:398 - ; 00:43:481 - and 00:43:564 - kkd triplet is much better than ddk c:
  10. 00:50:064 - don and 00:50:231 - kat. because the vocal sound becomes higher at 00:50:231 - , so i changed it to be kat
    you forgot finisher at 00:52:064 - D:
  11. 01:15:898 - finisher here. you should be consistent like 01:14:731 ; 01:17:231 ; 01:18:564 which you used it :c

JuDa's Oni
  1. 00:02:564 - add don here. much better to still follow the vocal sound here c:
  2. 00:11:564 - and 00:11:648 - katkat. so it'll be kkd triplet. much better than ddd triplet, too monotonous
  3. 00:19:898 - finisher here. you should be consistent with finsiher pattern which you put at the ends of the notes before they have a little break. like 00:18:564 (1) - , 00:21:231 (17) - , and 00:22:564 (25) -
  4. 00:31:231 - delete this note. you just followed the beat right? why you added this note too?
  5. 00:36:398 (3) - kat and 00:36:731 (5) - don. you put a wrong pattern there. the kat pattern starts at 00:36:398 (3) - not at 00:36:731 (5) - . you can look at 00:39:064 (21) - which you put kat at there too
  6. 00:57:314 - delete this note. there's not any reason to use it ;~; the sound stops at 00:57:231 - and there's not any sounds again until 00:57:564 -
  7. 00:57:148 (10,11) - kat don if you use my previous mod ^ . so the stream will be ddkkd
  8. 00:58:564 - add a note (don) here. it feels awkward to give a little break at there =~=
  9. 01:09:064 (35) - remove the finsiher here. there's not any reason to use it. tell me why if you still use this
  10. 01:19:065 (3) - don here? k d kkd ddk d pattern sounds better :D
  11. 01:21:231 (1) - finsiher here. you should be consistent again with finsiher pattern which you put them at 01:22:565 ; 01:25:231 ; 01:26:564
  12. 01:27:231 (12,13,14) - try kkd pattern here
goodluck then~ :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

mingmichael wrote:

mods come as nardo request. 你好~! :3

Kantan
  • okay well~ c:

Futsuu
  1. 00:13:064 (22,23) - these notes aren't recomended for futsuu. o O with 1/2 beat snap divisor is quite hard for futsuu diff. much better change them to be small notes or you can delete 00:13:064 - to keep the big notes at 00:13:231 - deleted 00:13:064
  2. 00:43:898 - and 00:45:231 - have a same problem like ^ . avoid to use finsiher after a 1/2 beat snap divisor note o O. removed the finishes
  3. 00:54:398 - add a note (don) at here added a kat here.
  4. 01:04:064 - remove the finsiher, there's not any reason to use it at here fixed
  5. 01:14:731 - this too ^ . remove the finisher fixed
  6. 01:19:731 - and 01:19:898 - have a same problem too like the first and second mods. but, at here i think delete 01:19:731 - to keep the finsiher is the best way fixed
  7. 01:25:064 - and 01:25:231 - same too fixed

Muzukashii
  1. 00:29:064 (11) - kat here? it follows the vocal sound there too retained.
  2. 00:30:731 (15) - don here, it should be consistent like the first time like 00:25:398 - here I want to map the guitar sound using kat, so no change.
  3. 00:34:731 (28) - remove the finisher here. it's not really recomend to use finsiher in the middle at the notes like you put before. o o O o o o << this pattern is quite hard for the muzukashii diff, but if you do that at oni diff, it's not problem fixed
    move 00:36:898 (39) - to 00:36:564 - and change 00:36:231 - to be don and 00:36:398 (37) - kat. i changed them all to make it consistent like 00:38:731 (45,46,47) - d d k. it will be same like 00:36:064 (35,36,37) - d d k too if you use my mods. it should be same pattern because they have a same part of song D: so, much better to use a same pattern and notes fixed some~
  4. 00:47:564 - add note here (kat). much better to follow the vocal sound, like the previous patterns too you followed them fixed
  5. 00:50:064 - and 00:50:231 - don kat. i changed them because the vocal sounds become higher at 00:50:231 - , not at 00:50:064 - :c fixed
  6. 00:51:731 - kat here? fixed
  7. 01:11:731 - kat here? to follow the vocal sound like 01:12:064 - ; 01:12:398 ; and 01:12:731 - umm, the pitch is lower than the three points...
  8. 01:27:564 - kat. i changed them because they will follow the electric guitar sounds which is getting higher (little higher) at 01:27:564 - , so i changed to be kat there. The note has the same pitch as 01:27:231 - so no change.

Oni
  1. 00:11:731 (40) - don and 00:11:898 (41) - big kat? i changed them to make it mirror pattern like 00:12:898 (47,48,49) - d k d . so at 00:11:564 (39,40,41) - will be k d k c: I followed the instrument here, and k d k is a bit not fitting the sounds.
  2. 00:25:564 (2) - don? kat isn't fit well :c fixed
  3. 00:26:398 (5,6) - kat don. just follow the kat pattern at the white strike I followed the vocal there.
  4. 00:28:231 (16) - don too if you change 00:25:564 - to be don too no change
  5. 00:29:064 (19,20) - kat don too if you change 00:26:398 (5,6) - to be kat don too ^
  6. 00:31:731 (33,34) - ^ ^
  7. 00:36:231 (55) - don too, the reason same like the previous mods I followed the sound effect there.
  8. 00:40:064 - add don here, because it feels empty without any notes :c and add dons at 00:40:148 - and 00:40:314 - and remove don at 00:40:648 - << so it'll be ddddk d d k c: changed to d ddk ddd d k
  9. 00:43:398 - ; 00:43:481 - and 00:43:564 - kkd triplet is much better than ddk c: As the vocal pitch at 00:43:564 is higher than that at 00:43:398 - I used ddk.
  10. 00:50:064 - don and 00:50:231 - kat. because the vocal sound becomes higher at 00:50:231 - , so i changed it to be kat
    you forgot finisher at 00:52:064 - D: fixed
  11. 01:15:898 - finisher here. you should be consistent like 01:14:731 ; 01:17:231 ; 01:18:564 which you used it :c fixed

goodluck then~ :D
Thanks for your mod Michael, 謝謝~! :3
JUDYDANNY

mingmichael wrote:

mods come as nardo request. 你好~! :3

JuDa's Oni
  1. 00:02:564 - add don here. much better to still follow the vocal sound here c: fixed~
  2. 00:11:564 - and 00:11:648 - katkat. so it'll be kkd triplet. much better than ddd triplet, too monotonous fixed~
  3. 00:19:898 - finisher here. you should be consistent with finsiher pattern which you put at the ends of the notes before they have a little break. like 00:18:564 (1) - , 00:21:231 (17) - , and 00:22:564 (25) - ok... changed~ :3
  4. 00:31:231 - delete this note. you just followed the beat right? why you added this note too? fixed~.. miss note lol
  5. 00:36:398 (3) - kat and 00:36:731 (5) - don. you put a wrong pattern there. the kat pattern starts at 00:36:398 (3) - not at 00:36:731 (5) - . you can look at 00:39:064 (21) - which you put kat at there too changed ~ ddkdd
  6. 00:57:314 - delete this note. there's not any reason to use it ;~; the sound stops at 00:57:231 - and there's not any sounds again until 00:57:564 -
  7. 00:57:148 (10,11) - kat don if you use my previous mod ^ . so the stream will be ddkkd
    changed ddkkd
  8. 00:58:564 - add a note (don) here. it feels awkward to give a little break at there =~= sorry nope;w;
  9. 01:09:064 (35) - remove the finsiher here. there's not any reason to use it. tell me why if you still use this yeap
  10. 01:19:065 (3) - don here? k d kkd ddk d pattern sounds better :D sorry . keep because 00:12:231 (1,2,3,4) - is used kkkk.
  11. 01:21:231 (1) - finsiher here. you should be consistent again with finsiher pattern which you put them at 01:22:565 ; 01:25:231 ; 01:26:564 hm.... added
  12. 01:27:231 (12,13,14) - try kkd pattern here changed by me :3:3
goodluck then~ :D
Thanks for mod! ・ω・/
Almost Fixed! >w<
plz update ;)
http://puu.sh/50VLm.zip
toara_fict
Nardo~ ~w~/

Modding

[Kantan]
  1. good(-ω-✿)
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:398 (2) - Remove ?
  2. 00:40:398 (77) - d
  3. 00:51:731 (104) - I Think add k
  4. 01:26:064 (169,170) - hmm Del big ...?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:231 (68) - Change k ?
  2. 00:19:398 (73) - ^
  3. 00:58:231 - add d or 00:58:398 (126) - remove ?
  4. 01:14:064 (187) - d ? ( 01:14:398 (188) - is (177) more high pitch )
[Oni]
  1. 00:04:231 (6) - 00:06:898 (16) - re BIG
  2. 00:10:898 (34,35,36) - kkd ?
  3. 00:12:564 (44,45,46) - dkd
  4. 00:17:981 (72) - d
  5. 00:20:898 (86) - k
  6. 00:27:981 (14) - re
  7. 00:30:648 (28) - d ?
  8. 00:38:481 (71) - re or 00:38:481 (71,72) - dk
  9. 00:39:398 (76,77,78,79) - kddk ( 00:39:731 (78,79) - I think dk is hit sound )
  10. 00:42:481 (98) - re
  11. 01:02:148 (202) - move 01:02:314 (203) -
  12. 01:03:648 (213) - re
JuDa's Oni IRC
17:54 toara_fict: それではいきましょうかね・。・
17:54 JUDYDANNY: ai
17:55 toara_fict: 00:04:898 (1,2,3,1,2,1) -
17:55 toara_fict: Re って選択肢はない?
17:55 toara_fict: それか 1 3 1 とか
17:56 toara_fict: 00:04:981 - ここreがいいかなぁって
17:56 JUDYDANNY: 最初は大のみだけだっや
17:56 toara_fict: うん たしか
17:56 toara_fict: 加速感がすごいなぁ・・・ って思ったかなぁ
17:57 JUDYDANNY: ここの連打?
17:57 toara_fict: うん
17:57 JUDYDANNY: ちょっと待ってね~
17:58 toara_fict: なんか 3連2つじゃなくてもいいんじゃないかなぁ・・・って感じです
17:58 JUDYDANNY: それを意識させたかったんだけどね~
17:58 toara_fict: あっ・。・;
17:58 JUDYDANNY: 00:04:898 (1) -
17:58 JUDYDANNY: ここは
17:58 JUDYDANNY: あ、理由いいますね
17:59 JUDYDANNY: ここはdddかDでいきたい
17:59 JUDYDANNY: で、
17:59 JUDYDANNY: 00:05:231 (1) - と00:05:398 (1) - は
17:59 JUDYDANNY: 音の高さが違うから
17:59 toara_fict: うん
17:59 JUDYDANNY: 何かしらの変化が欲しい
17:59 toara_fict: 2つめは自分でもddk にすると思うんだ
18:00 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:00 JUDYDANNY: で、全部D D Kで行くなら
18:00 JUDYDANNY: 大でいくとその後の流れについていけない
18:01 toara_fict: うん 確かに
18:01 JUDYDANNY: で、考えたのは
18:01 JUDYDANNY: D * ddk d kの形
18:01 JUDYDANNY: だけどDが目立ちすぎるこれだと
18:01 toara_fict: だね・・・
18:01 JUDYDANNY: なのでddd ddk d kでいいと尾も増す
18:01 JUDYDANNY: 思います
18:02 toara_fict: BIGよりかは安定してると思うそのほうが
18:02 JUDYDANNY: ここだけに1時間かけたから
18:02 JUDYDANNY: ;;
18:02 toara_fict: わあ;;
18:02 toara_fict: 2つめー
18:02 JUDYDANNY: はい
18:03 toara_fict: 00:11:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
18:03 toara_fict: 俺だったら kkd ddk or kdd ddk
18:04 toara_fict: 00:11:731 (8,1) - ここのピッチ(?)高いからそうおくかなぁ・・・って
18:05 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:05 JUDYDANNY: ここも不安定でまだ困ってる
18:05 JUDYDANNY: まず、00:11:898 (1) - のKだけど
18:05 JUDYDANNY: このKはDにしないでいいと思うんです
18:06 toara_fict: ですね
18:06 toara_fict: ここはK
18:07 JUDYDANNY: で
18:07 JUDYDANNY: 00:11:564 (6,7,8) -
18:07 JUDYDANNY: 結局のとこ
18:07 JUDYDANNY: ここで全てがきます
18:07 JUDYDANNY: きまる
18:07 JUDYDANNY: k Kのつなぎの方がいい?
18:07 toara_fict: あぁ
18:07 toara_fict: そこは思ったけど
18:07 toara_fict: うーん
18:07 JUDYDANNY: じゃあ
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 00:11:398 (5,6,1) -
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 00:11:398 (5) -
18:08 JUDYDANNY: から
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 1/2で置くなら
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 同置く?
18:09 toara_fict: d k
18:09 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:09 JUDYDANNY: はい、そういうことです
18:10 toara_fict: はい。
18:10 JUDYDANNY: ming's modの時は
18:10 JUDYDANNY: kkdがdddでしたが
18:10 JUDYDANNY: "ming's modが来る前は"
18:10 JUDYDANNY: まぁここならkddでも
18:10 JUDYDANNY: いけるかな
18:11 toara_fict: ほうほう・。・
18:11 JUDYDANNY: kddとkkdならどっちがいいかな?
18:11 toara_fict: 俺はkkd
18:11 JUDYDANNY: おk
18:11 JUDYDANNY: じゃあkkdのままで
18:11 toara_fict: hey
18:13 toara_fict: 00:24:064 (37,1) - この間はノーツ置かないでね
18:14 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:14 JUDYDANNY: ここはサビ手前でよく使う抑揚と一緒でってことで
18:14 toara_fict: 00:37:064 (6) -
18:14 toara_fict: ここのClapはわざと?
18:14 toara_fict: Whisle じゃなくて Clapになってるんだよね・。・
18:15 JUDYDANNY: うーん、、まぁここclapっていうのは
18:16 JUDYDANNY: ドラムの高い音とってるってことでいいのかな
18:16 toara_fict: 自分も時々わざと変えるからあれだけどどういう理由か聞きたかった って感じです
18:16 JUDYDANNY: ;;
18:16 toara_fict: 変えなくていいとは思う!
18:16 JUDYDANNY: ^^;
18:17 toara_fict: 01:16:565 (4) -
18:17 toara_fict: ここはWhisleに変えたほうがいい気が
18:18 JUDYDANNY: clapー>whisle?
18:18 toara_fict: いyes
18:18 JUDYDANNY: なおした
18:20 JUDYDANNY: 00:55:231 (10,11) -  kdに直した
18:20 toara_fict: マジでこれぐらいしか思うのはないんだよねぇ・・・
18:20 toara_fict: 00:55:398 (11) -  d っぽい気がするからいいと思う!
18:21 JUDYDANNY: ・。・
18:21 JUDYDANNY: 01:03:564 (18,19,20,21,22,23,1) -
18:21 JUDYDANNY: kkddkdkってどう思いますか
18:21 toara_fict: んー
18:22 toara_fict: ddkkddkじゃない?
18:22 JUDYDANNY: んー
18:22 JUDYDANNY: じゃあ
18:22 JUDYDANNY: kdkkd * kは?
18:23 toara_fict:* 思ったけどここは7がいいと思うんだよなぁ・・・
18:24 JUDYDANNY: !?
18:24 JUDYDANNY: ddk ddkkdd* ってこと?
18:26 toara_fict: 最初のまま?
18:26 toara_fict: がいいと思う
18:26 JUDYDANNY: まぁいいか・・・ここは保留でnochangeにしときます
18:26 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:27 JUDYDANNY: これでいいかな!
18:27 toara_fict: サビに関してはテンポ取りやすいから好きだし指摘点ないから
18:27 toara_fict: これぐらいしかないです;;
18:27 JUDYDANNY: 01:06:731 (17,18,19,20) -
18:28 JUDYDANNY: k ddkー>kkd kに試しに変えた
18:28 JUDYDANNY: はい^^
18:28 toara_fict: kkd k いいね!
18:28 toara_fict: ではお疲れ様です!

Good Luck (◡‿◡✿)
JUDYDANNY

toara_fict wrote:

Nardo~ ~w~/
JuDa's Oni IRC
17:54 toara_fict: それではいきましょうかね・。・
17:54 JUDYDANNY: ai
17:55 toara_fict: 00:04:898 (1,2,3,1,2,1) -
17:55 toara_fict: Re って選択肢はない?
17:55 toara_fict: それか 1 3 1 とか
17:56 toara_fict: 00:04:981 - ここreがいいかなぁって
17:56 JUDYDANNY: 最初は大のみだけだっや
17:56 toara_fict: うん たしか
17:56 toara_fict: 加速感がすごいなぁ・・・ って思ったかなぁ
17:57 JUDYDANNY: ここの連打?
17:57 toara_fict: うん
17:57 JUDYDANNY: ちょっと待ってね~
17:58 toara_fict: なんか 3連2つじゃなくてもいいんじゃないかなぁ・・・って感じです
17:58 JUDYDANNY: それを意識させたかったんだけどね~
17:58 toara_fict: あっ・。・;
17:58 JUDYDANNY: 00:04:898 (1) -
17:58 JUDYDANNY: ここは
17:58 JUDYDANNY: あ、理由いいますね
17:59 JUDYDANNY: ここはdddかDでいきたい
17:59 JUDYDANNY: で、
17:59 JUDYDANNY: 00:05:231 (1) - と00:05:398 (1) - は
17:59 JUDYDANNY: 音の高さが違うから
17:59 toara_fict: うん
17:59 JUDYDANNY: 何かしらの変化が欲しい
17:59 toara_fict: 2つめは自分でもddk にすると思うんだ
18:00 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:00 JUDYDANNY: で、全部D D Kで行くなら
18:00 JUDYDANNY: 大でいくとその後の流れについていけない
18:01 toara_fict: うん 確かに
18:01 JUDYDANNY: で、考えたのは
18:01 JUDYDANNY: D * ddk d kの形
18:01 JUDYDANNY: だけどDが目立ちすぎるこれだと
18:01 toara_fict: だね・・・
18:01 JUDYDANNY: なのでddd ddk d kでいいと尾も増す
18:01 JUDYDANNY: 思います
18:02 toara_fict: BIGよりかは安定してると思うそのほうが
18:02 JUDYDANNY: ここだけに1時間かけたから
18:02 JUDYDANNY: ;;
18:02 toara_fict: わあ;;
18:02 toara_fict: 2つめー
18:02 JUDYDANNY: はい
18:03 toara_fict: 00:11:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
18:03 toara_fict: 俺だったら kkd ddk or kdd ddk
18:04 toara_fict: 00:11:731 (8,1) - ここのピッチ(?)高いからそうおくかなぁ・・・って
18:05 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:05 JUDYDANNY: ここも不安定でまだ困ってる
18:05 JUDYDANNY: まず、00:11:898 (1) - のKだけど
18:05 JUDYDANNY: このKはDにしないでいいと思うんです
18:06 toara_fict: ですね
18:06 toara_fict: ここはK
18:07 JUDYDANNY: で
18:07 JUDYDANNY: 00:11:564 (6,7,8) -
18:07 JUDYDANNY: 結局のとこ
18:07 JUDYDANNY: ここで全てがきます
18:07 JUDYDANNY: きまる
18:07 JUDYDANNY: k Kのつなぎの方がいい?
18:07 toara_fict: あぁ
18:07 toara_fict: そこは思ったけど
18:07 toara_fict: うーん
18:07 JUDYDANNY: じゃあ
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 00:11:398 (5,6,1) -
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 00:11:398 (5) -
18:08 JUDYDANNY: から
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 1/2で置くなら
18:08 JUDYDANNY: 同置く?
18:09 toara_fict: d k
18:09 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:09 JUDYDANNY: はい、そういうことです
18:10 toara_fict: はい。
18:10 JUDYDANNY: ming's modの時は
18:10 JUDYDANNY: kkdがdddでしたが
18:10 JUDYDANNY: "ming's modが来る前は"
18:10 JUDYDANNY: まぁここならkddでも
18:10 JUDYDANNY: いけるかな
18:11 toara_fict: ほうほう・。・
18:11 JUDYDANNY: kddとkkdならどっちがいいかな?
18:11 toara_fict: 俺はkkd
18:11 JUDYDANNY: おk
18:11 JUDYDANNY: じゃあkkdのままで
18:11 toara_fict: hey
18:13 toara_fict: 00:24:064 (37,1) - この間はノーツ置かないでね
18:14 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:14 JUDYDANNY: ここはサビ手前でよく使う抑揚と一緒でってことで
18:14 toara_fict: 00:37:064 (6) -
18:14 toara_fict: ここのClapはわざと?
18:14 toara_fict: Whisle じゃなくて Clapになってるんだよね・。・
18:15 JUDYDANNY: うーん、、まぁここclapっていうのは
18:16 JUDYDANNY: ドラムの高い音とってるってことでいいのかな
18:16 toara_fict: 自分も時々わざと変えるからあれだけどどういう理由か聞きたかった って感じです
18:16 JUDYDANNY: ;;
18:16 toara_fict: 変えなくていいとは思う!
18:16 JUDYDANNY: ^^;
18:17 toara_fict: 01:16:565 (4) -
18:17 toara_fict: ここはWhisleに変えたほうがいい気が
18:18 JUDYDANNY: clapー>whisle?
18:18 toara_fict: いyes
18:18 JUDYDANNY: なおした
18:20 JUDYDANNY: 00:55:231 (10,11) -  kdに直した
18:20 toara_fict: マジでこれぐらいしか思うのはないんだよねぇ・・・
18:20 toara_fict: 00:55:398 (11) -  d っぽい気がするからいいと思う!
18:21 JUDYDANNY: ・。・
18:21 JUDYDANNY: 01:03:564 (18,19,20,21,22,23,1) -
18:21 JUDYDANNY: kkddkdkってどう思いますか
18:21 toara_fict: んー
18:22 toara_fict: ddkkddkじゃない?
18:22 JUDYDANNY: んー
18:22 JUDYDANNY: じゃあ
18:22 JUDYDANNY: kdkkd * kは?
18:23 toara_fict:* 思ったけどここは7がいいと思うんだよなぁ・・・
18:24 JUDYDANNY: !?
18:24 JUDYDANNY: ddk ddkkdd* ってこと?
18:26 toara_fict: 最初のまま?
18:26 toara_fict: がいいと思う
18:26 JUDYDANNY: まぁいいか・・・ここは保留でnochangeにしときます
18:26 JUDYDANNY: うん
18:27 JUDYDANNY: これでいいかな!
18:27 toara_fict: サビに関してはテンポ取りやすいから好きだし指摘点ないから
18:27 toara_fict: これぐらいしかないです;;
18:27 JUDYDANNY: 01:06:731 (17,18,19,20) -
18:28 JUDYDANNY: k ddkー>kkd kに試しに変えた
18:28 JUDYDANNY: はい^^
18:28 toara_fict: kkd k いいね!
18:28 toara_fict: ではお疲れ様です!

Good Luck (◡‿◡✿)
Thanks~~ _(:3 」∠)_
http://puu.sh/51LST.zip
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

toara_fict wrote:

Nardo~ ~w~/

Modding

[Kantan]
  1. good(-ω-✿)
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:398 (2) - Remove ? nope.
  2. 00:40:398 (77) - d fixed
  3. 00:51:731 (104) - I Think add k fixed
  4. 01:26:064 (169,170) - hmm Del big ...? fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:231 (68) - Change k ? fixed
  2. 00:19:398 (73) - ^ Good~
  3. 00:58:231 - add d or 00:58:398 (126) - remove ? added d.
  4. 01:14:064 (187) - d ? ( 01:14:398 (188) - is (177) more high pitch ) I changed 01:13:731 to k for balance.
[Oni]
  1. 00:04:231 (6) - 00:06:898 (16) - re BIG fixed
  2. 00:10:898 (34,35,36) - kkd ? fixed
  3. 00:12:564 (44,45,46) - dkd fixed
  4. 00:17:981 (72) - d fixed
  5. 00:20:898 (86) - k no change
  6. 00:27:981 (14) - re fixed
  7. 00:30:648 (28) - d ? removed
  8. 00:38:481 (71) - re or 00:38:481 (71,72) - dk no change
  9. 00:39:398 (76,77,78,79) - kddk ( 00:39:731 (78,79) - I think dk is hit sound ) ^
  10. 00:42:481 (98) - re ^
  11. 01:02:148 (202) - move 01:02:314 (203) - fixed
  12. 01:03:648 (213) - re fixed
Good Luck (◡‿◡✿)
Thanks for your mod toara~ > <
JUDYDANNY
Hi Nardo~~:3:3
as a modreq from you.
I begin to mod for suggestions!

[General]

  • None.

    “+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
[Kantan]
  1. 00:01:398 (1) – change slider end ―> 00:02:064 - too short break time. 00:02:398 – ~ 00:02:31 –
  2. 00:11:898 (13) – add fini? Or 01:18:564 (99) – rem fini?
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:731 (3) – add finish?
  2. 00:11:898 (20) - ^?
  3. 00:55:731 (111,112) – too hard I think… try to change other patterns?
  4. 00:56:731 (114) – add note
  5. 01:19:398 (160) - ^?
  6. 01:23:064 (167) - ^?
  7. 00:11:398 (20) - ^?
  8. 00:16:398 (29) - ^?
  9. 01:02:064 (127) –k
  10. 01:12:731 (150) -^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:08:898 (167) – add d
  2. 01:24:898 (233) – k
  3. 01:18:064 (204) – k?
  4. 00:11:398 (38) – k?
[Oni]
  1. 00:17:981 (72) – k
  2. 00:34:231 (42) – add note?
  3. 01:04:648 (220) – add note?
  4. 01:04:481 (218) – del?
  5. 01:11:731 (265) – k
That’s all! Sorry I can’t find more suggestions… ._.;;

I found to misstake my diff.
plz update one more.. ;w;http://puu.sh/52J1F.zip

Good Luck! :) :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi Nardo~~:3:3
as a modreq from you.
I begin to mod for suggestions!

[General]

  • None.

    “+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
[Kantan]
  1. 00:01:398 (1) – change slider end ―> 00:02:064 - too short break time. 00:02:398 – ~ 00:02:31 – fixed
  2. 00:11:898 (13) – add fini? Or 01:18:564 (99) – rem fini? added finish at 13
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:731 (3) – add finish? fixed
  2. 00:11:898 (20) - ^? nope.
  3. 00:55:731 (111,112) – too hard I think… try to change other patterns? removed the finish of 112.
  4. 00:56:731 (114) – add note fixed
  5. 01:19:398 (160) - ^? fixed
  6. 01:23:064 (167) - ^? fixed
  7. 00:11:398 (20) - ^? no change
  8. 00:16:398 (29) - ^? fixed
  9. 01:02:064 (127) –k fixed
  10. 01:12:731 (150) -^ ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:08:898 (167) – add d fixed
  2. 01:24:898 (233) – k fixed
  3. 01:18:064 (204) – k? fixed
  4. 00:11:398 (38) – k? fixed
[Oni]
  1. 00:17:981 (72) – k fixed it back.
  2. 00:34:231 (42) – add note? fixed
  3. 01:04:648 (220) – add note? Nice~
  4. 01:04:481 (218) – del? I'll hold this first.
  5. 01:11:731 (265) – k fixed
That’s all! Sorry I can’t find more suggestions… ._.;;

I found to misstake my diff.
plz update one more.. ;w;http://puu.sh/52J1F.zip OK~

Good Luck! :) :)
Thanks for your mod and star, JuDa~ :)
Dainesl
Taiko mod via request.

General

all okay~

Kantan

00:17:731 (19) - not sure if this is following anything...maybe place it on 00:18:064 - if it's not.

01:18:064 (98) - move this to 01:17:731 - unless you're trying to follow something

Futsuu

00:09:064 (14,15) - 00:10:398 (17,18) - maybe get rid of the 1/2 notes 'cause this is a Futsuu with a relatively high BPM (180)

00:43:731 (86,87) - 00:45:064 (90,91) - same with these 'cause there's a finish on the 2nd one of each, i don't think that beginners will be able to react to this in the right way...

Muzukashii

00:58:564 - Maybe add a note here to follow the vocals better, since it's very clear~ you did it 01:00:231 (132,133,134,135) - here

01:04:564 - ^

Oni

nothing, it's a brilliant diff :)

Juda's Oni

Maybe you should remove a lot of the bookmarks 'cause that might end up increasing the file size or something

00:45:231 (59) - Make this a finish to remain consistent.

and that's it really. apologies for short mod :(
JUDYDANNY

Dainesl wrote:

Taiko mod via request.

Juda's Oni

Maybe you should remove a lot of the bookmarks 'cause that might end up increasing the file size or something
deleted.
00:45:231 (59) - Make this a finish to remain consistent.
fixed~~

and that's it really. apologies for short mod :(
Thanks for mod~! ・ω・/
plz update ;)
http://puu.sh/5724V.zip
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Dainesl wrote:

Taiko mod via request.

General

all okay~

Kantan

00:17:731 (19) - not sure if this is following anything...maybe place it on 00:18:064 - if it's not. no change

01:18:064 (98) - move this to 01:17:731 - unless you're trying to follow something no change

Futsuu

00:09:064 (14,15) - 00:10:398 (17,18) - maybe get rid of the 1/2 notes 'cause this is a Futsuu with a relatively high BPM (180) remain unchanged.

00:43:731 (86,87) - 00:45:064 (90,91) - same with these 'cause there's a finish on the 2nd one of each, i don't think that beginners will be able to react to this in the right way... removed finishes on the 2nd notes.

Muzukashii

00:58:564 - Maybe add a note here to follow the vocals better, since it's very clear~ you did it 01:00:231 (132,133,134,135) - here fixed

01:04:564 - ^ Good

Oni

nothing, it's a brilliant diff :) Thanks~

and that's it really. apologies for short mod :(
Thanks for your mod Dain~ :3
Snowy Heart
MY mod~~~Nardo~

k=small blue
K=Big Blue
d=small red
D=Big Red


Kantan
01:03:398 (75) - k??
01:14:064 (92) - ^

Futsuu
00:26:064 (46) - k??
00:47:898 (96,97) - d d???

Muzukashii
00:21:231 (82) - K?
00:49:398 (88) - K???
01:23:564 (229) - k?
01:26:064 (240,241,242) - d d k??

Oni
00:11:064 (36) - k?
00:15:898 (61) - k??
00:17:898 (71,72,73) - ddk?
01:08:398 (244) - k?

Oni2(juda's)
00:02:731 (11) - K?
00:17:564 (1,2,3) - kdk?
00:29:564 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as00:26:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ?
01:08:564 (31,32,33,34,35) - kdkkd?
听着那个音效好蛋疼= =
I think it's OK~
JUDYDANNY

Snowy Heart wrote:

MY mod~~~Nardo~

k=small blue
K=Big Blue
d=small red
D=Big Red

Oni2(juda's)
00:02:731 (11) - K?
00:17:564 (1,2,3) - kdk?
00:29:564 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as00:26:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ?changed by me surrounding patterns (to use kkd) .
01:08:564 (31,32,33,34,35) - kdkkd?
听着那个音效好蛋疼= =
I think it's OK~
thanks for mod~!・ω・/
plz update ;)
http://puu.sh/5i54T.zip
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Snowy Heart wrote:

MY mod~~~Nardo~ Hello Snowy~

k=small blue
K=Big Blue
d=small red
D=Big Red


Kantan
01:03:398 (75) - k?? nope.
01:14:064 (92) - ^ used k at 01:13:731 (91)

Futsuu
00:26:064 (46) - k?? low pitch here, no change
00:47:898 (96,97) - d d??? no change

Muzukashii
00:21:231 (82) - K? nope.
00:49:398 (88) - K??? low pitch here, no change
01:23:564 (229) - k? used k at 01:23:398 (228) instead
01:26:064 (240,241,242) - d d k?? fixed

Oni
00:11:064 (36) - k? fixed
00:15:898 (61) - k?? no change
00:17:898 (71,72,73) - ddk? no change
01:08:398 (244) - k? fixed

听着那个音效好蛋疼= =
I think it's OK~
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Evening
d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Italic = Optional

Nardo Again :3
o/ *wave*

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems!

BPM

No Problems!

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:22:564 (96) - k > K ( Emphasis on High pitched guitar )
00:47:898 (126,127) - k > K ( Needs more emphasis )
00:50:564 (136,137) - k > K ( Same Reason )
00:57:231 (173,174,175) - d,k,k > D,K,K ( Same Reason )

How about having the Kiai Time 90% volume while the rest 70%?

Kiai Time Check

No Problems!

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems!

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

JuDa's Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:10:564 (1) - D > K ( High pitched vocal )
00:21:231 (19) - D > K ( High pitched guitar )
00:22:564 (27) - D > K ( Same Reason )
00:47:898 (9,10) - d > D ( More emphasis )
00:50:564 (19,20) - d > D ( Same Reason )
01:17:231 (1) - D > K ( High pitched vocal )
01:26:564 (8,17) - D > K ( High Pitched Guitar )
I suggest you end with a spinner since Nardo's Diff. ended with a spinner also

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

It is more of an Inner Oni in my opinion :\ , I guess it's fine with Oni if you want to keep it at oni

Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:29:564 (13,14) - k > d ( low pitched vocal )
01:02:064 (141) - d > k ( medium - high pitched vocal )
01:11:731 (180) - d > k ( You made a pattern of kat every 2 bars, I think you missed out on here )
01:17:231 (203) - D > K ( high pitched vocal )

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems!

Futsuu
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:21:231 (38) - d > k ( high pitched guitar )
00:22:398 + k ( high pitched guitar ) < I don't know if this will be too hard for futsuu :c >
00:57:898 (118) - k > K ( More emphasis )
01:26:898 + k ( high pitched guitar )

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Lazy mod kantan :3
JUDYDANNY

lZenxl wrote:

JuDa's Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:10:564 (1) - D > K ( High pitched vocal ) nope. following back sounds 00:08:064 (1,1,1,1) - .
00:21:231 (19) - D > K ( High pitched guitar ) changed surrounding notes' color.
00:22:564 (27) - D > K ( Same Reason ) nochange.
00:47:898 (9,10) - d > D ( More emphasis ) changed (8) k > K instead of your suggestion :3:3
00:50:564 (19,20) - d > D ( Same Reason ) ^
01:17:231 (1) - D > K ( High pitched vocal ) same 00:10:564 -
01:26:564 (8,17) - D > K ( High Pitched Guitar ) nochange.
I suggest you end with a spinner since Nardo's Diff. ended with a spinner also keep ...

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

It is more of an Inner Oni in my opinion :\ , I guess it's fine with Oni if you want to keep it at oni

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:22:564 (96) - k > K ( Emphasis on High pitched guitar )
00:47:898 (126,127) - k > K ( Needs more emphasis )
00:50:564 (136,137) - k > K ( Same Reason )
00:57:231 (173,174,175) - d,k,k > D,K,K ( Same Reason )

How about having the Kiai Time 90% volume while the rest 70%?
Thanks for mod~ ・ω・/
Nardo~, if you changed volume, plz change same my diff ;)

.osu code
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Creator:Nardoxyribonucleic
Version:JuDa's Oni
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Tags:インフィニット・ストラトス 8bit Ending JUDYDANNY
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qoot8123
抱歉來遲了><

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. none~
[ Kantan]
SPOILER
  1. 00:10:064 (11) - 這裡你有放note,所以我建議加個k在00:12:731 -
  2. 00:11:398 - 同上
  3. 00:15:064 (16) - 這個我建議移到00:15:398 - 跟吉他的音
  4. 00:17:731 (19) - 同上^
  5. 00:20:398 (22) - ^
  6. 00:23:731 - 這裡加個note?跟背景音樂
  7. 01:21:731 (102) - 同00:15:064 (16) -建議移到01:22:064 -
  8. 01:04:731 (77,78,79,80) - 這裡應該可以加個note,不然感覺有點空

Comment
Kantan做得很好~希望能繼續保持

[ Futsuu]
SPOILER
  1. 00:15:731 - 這裡應該跟00:14:398 (24,25) - 差不多,建議加note
  2. 00:48:231 (97) - ,00:50:898 (103) - 建議刪掉,這一段我覺得跟vocal會比較好
  3. 00:11:398 - ,00:11:731 - ,00:12:731 - ,00:13:064 - 建議加個note,比較有層次感

Comment
整體來說做得不錯,不過kiai 的部份的難度感覺跟kantan有點接近,建議改難一點點

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:48:231 (83,93) - 同futsuu,建議刪掉,然後00:47:898 (82,92) - 改成大K
  2. 00:52:231 (97) - 這裡的vocal和00:52:064 (96,98) - 相較之下感覺比較弱一點,建議把00:52:231 (97) - 刪掉
  3. 00:53:064 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - 同上,把vocal比較弱的地方刪掉

Comment
很多地方你跟vocal下,雖然跟vocal不是全然都不好,但我覺得盡量分辨出vocal的輕重音在下note會比較好

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:38:564 (71) - 移到00:38:148 - 然後00:38:481 (70) - 移到00:38:564 - ,因為vocal在00:37:898 (65) - 停頓
  2. 00:42:064 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - 這一段我建議改成 OOO O OOO 這種pattern,跟vocal比較合
  3. 00:45:981 (117) - 建議移到00:46:314 - 比較能加強這三個音00:46:398 (120,121,122) -
  4. 00:48:231 (127,137) - 同muzu
  5. 01:03:814 (213) - 這個note建議刪掉,然後01:03:314 (208) - 移到01:03:648 - ,聽起來比較舒服
  6. 01:05:898 - 這裡突然停頓感覺有點違和,建議加個note,不然就是修改01:05:398 (226,227,228,229) - 這個pattern

Comment
做得不錯~繼續加油 :)


[ JuDa's Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:09:898 (4) - the vocal here is less powerful than 00:09:731 (3,5) - so i suggest remove it
  2. 00:46:564 (4,5,6) - change to ddd?the pitch on 00:46:398 - is higher than 00:46:564 -
  3. 01:07:314 - add note,and 01:08:314 (29) - move to 01:07:981 - and 01:07:564 - change to d to make OOO O OOO O pattern
  4. 01:14:481 (21) - i suggest remove this note to strengthen these 01:14:398 (20,22,1) - three notes

Comment
Generally good diff! but i think you could put notes to follow the music's stress might be better :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Nardo~, if you changed volume, plz change same my diff ;) changed ;)

lZenxl wrote:

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Italic = Optional

Nardo Again :3 Hello Zenx~ :3
o/ *wave*

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems!

BPM

No Problems!

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:22:564 (96) - k > K ( Emphasis on High pitched guitar ) fixed~
00:47:898 (126,127) - k > K ( Needs more emphasis ) remain unchanged~ I think it is not strong enough to use finishes.
00:50:564 (136,137) - k > K ( Same Reason ) ^
00:57:231 (173,174,175) - d,k,k > D,K,K ( Same Reason ) ^

How about having the Kiai Time 90% volume while the rest 70%? keep kiai 90% and the remaining changed to 75%

Kiai Time Check

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General

Ranking Criteria Check

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AiMod

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Title Check

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Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:29:564 (13,14) - k > d ( low pitched vocal ) I mapped the background sound there, no change
01:02:064 (141) - d > k ( medium - high pitched vocal ) changed at 139 instead.
01:11:731 (180) - d > k ( You made a pattern of kat every 2 bars, I think you missed out on here ) I want to emphasize the kats later on, so I used d here.
01:17:231 (203) - D > K ( high pitched vocal ) fixed

Kiai Time Check

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General

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AiMod

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Title Check

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Futsuu
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:21:231 (38) - d > k ( high pitched guitar ) fixed
00:22:398 + k ( high pitched guitar ) < I don't know if this will be too hard for futsuu :c > Yes. A bit hard if used too much 1/2 notes
00:57:898 (118) - k > K ( More emphasis ) no change, refer to Oni
01:26:898 + k ( high pitched guitar ) Good idea, but I prefer not to use 1/2 notes repeatedly in just a small time interval.

Kiai Time Check

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General

Ranking Criteria Check

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AiMod

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Title Check

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Lazy mod kantan :3
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

qoot8123 wrote:

抱歉來遲了><

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. none~
[ Kantan]
SPOILER
  1. 00:10:064 (11) - 這裡你有放note,所以我建議加個k在00:12:731 - fixed
  2. 00:11:398 - 同上 fixed
  3. 00:15:064 (16) - 這個我建議移到00:15:398 - 跟吉他的音 這裡的結他音比起後面兩個沒那麼明顯, 所以不改動這個
  4. 00:17:731 (19) - 同上^ 這建議不錯~
  5. 00:20:398 (22) - ^ ^
  6. 00:23:731 - 這裡加個note?跟背景音樂 fixed
  7. 01:21:731 (102) - 同00:15:064 (16) -建議移到01:22:064 - 同上
  8. 01:04:731 (77,78,79,80) - 這裡應該可以加個note,不然感覺有點空 加了個k在01:05:731

Comment
Kantan做得很好~希望能繼續保持 謝謝 :oops:

[ Futsuu]
SPOILER
  1. 00:15:731 - 這裡應該跟00:14:398 (24,25) - 差不多,建議加note fixed
  2. 00:48:231 (97) - ,00:50:898 (103) - 建議刪掉,這一段我覺得跟vocal會比較好 fixed
  3. 00:11:398 - ,00:11:731 - ,00:12:731 - ,00:13:064 - 建議加個note,比較有層次感 同意~ 但改了後這段會變比較密

Comment
整體來說做得不錯,不過kiai 的部份的難度感覺跟kantan有點接近,建議改難一點點 做了些改動~

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:48:231 (83,93) - 同futsuu,建議刪掉,然後00:47:898 (82,92) - 改成大K 感覺不錯~
  2. 00:52:231 (97) - 這裡的vocal和00:52:064 (96,98) - 相較之下感覺比較弱一點,建議把00:52:231 (97) - 刪掉 fixed
  3. 00:53:064 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - 同上,把vocal比較弱的地方刪掉 有點想保留這裡的三連音, 我先留著

Comment
很多地方你跟vocal下,雖然跟vocal不是全然都不好,但我覺得盡量分辨出vocal的輕重音在下note會比較好 嗯 我會多注意的

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:38:564 (71) - 移到00:38:148 - 然後00:38:481 (70) - 移到00:38:564 - ,因為vocal在00:37:898 (65) - 停頓 fixed
  2. 00:42:064 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - 這一段我建議改成 OOO O OOO 這種pattern,跟vocal比較合 改成ddd k dkd
  3. 00:45:981 (117) - 建議移到00:46:314 - 比較能加強這三個音00:46:398 (120,121,122) - 不錯~
  4. 00:48:231 (127,137) - 同muzu fixed
  5. 01:03:814 (213) - 這個note建議刪掉,然後01:03:314 (208) - 移到01:03:648 - ,聽起來比較舒服 fixed
  6. 01:05:898 - 這裡突然停頓感覺有點違和,建議加個note,不然就是修改01:05:398 (226,227,228,229) - 這個pattern 加了個note串連起來

Comment
做得不錯~繼續加油 :) 謝謝~ ;)
感謝qoot~~ :)
JUDYDANNY

qoot8123 wrote:

抱歉來遲了><

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. none~
[ JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:09:898 (4) - the vocal here is less powerful than 00:09:731 (3,5) - so i suggest remove it
  2. 00:46:564 (4,5,6) - change to ddd?the pitch on 00:46:398 - is higher than 00:46:564 -
  3. 01:07:314 - add note,and 01:08:314 (29) - move to 01:07:981 - and 01:07:564 - change to d to make OOO O OOO O pattern
  4. 01:14:481 (21) - i suggest remove this note to strengthen these 01:14:398 (20,22,1) - three notes
Comment
Generally good diff! but i think you could put notes to follow the music's stress might be better :D
Thanks! All fixed, and I remade some receiving your comments :oops:


Sorry to late,,,;;; I didnt noticed your modding :(
Thanks for mod~!・ω・/
plz update ;)

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128,64,68731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,68814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,68898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,69064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,69231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,69398,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,160,69730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,69897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,69980,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,70064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,70397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,70730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,70980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,71064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,71230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,71397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,71564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,71648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,71730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72064,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,72897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,74064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,74731,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,128,75065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,75231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,75314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,75398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,75565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,75731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,128,75898,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,128,76231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,76398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,128,76564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,76648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,128,76731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,76898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,76981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,77065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,352,77231,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,288,77565,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,77648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,77731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,288,77898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,224,77981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,160,78065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,78231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,96,78398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,64,78565,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,64,79065,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,96,79231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,64,79314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,64,79398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,79564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,79648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,79731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,128,79898,5,4,0:0:0:0:
480,32,80231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,64,80398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,0,80731,5,0,0:0:0:0:
480,32,80898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,32,81065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,32,81231,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,81565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,81731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,82065,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,82231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,82398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,82564,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,32,82898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,83065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,83231,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,83398,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,83481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,83565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,83731,5,2,0:0:0:0:
0,224,83898,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,83981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,256,84065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,352,84231,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,320,84315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,288,84398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,84565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,256,84648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,224,84731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,84898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,85065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,96,85231,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,96,85564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,86064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,86231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,86564,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,96,86898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,86981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,87064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,87231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,87314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,87398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,87564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,87731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,87898,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated~
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kantan]
00:05:731 - I think add one more d, since the drum hit is very loud here

[Futsuu]
00:15:898 (32) - d? since all the rest are d

the other diffs I find okay~

nice map~
good luck for rank~
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kantan]
00:05:731 - I think add one more d, since the drum hit is very loud here the current pattern has a better flow as Kantan imo.

[Futsuu]
00:15:898 (32) - d? since all the rest are d changed 00:10:564 to k for similar pattern.

the other diffs I find okay~

nice map~
good luck for rank~
Thanks for your mod~
Lundlerol
hi.
Nardo's mod req via my mod queue.
[Kantan]
I mod in consideration of newbie player.
00:01:398 - delete? I think that as unnecessary slider.and It is kind to newbie when you consider these.
00:11:398 - delete? It is necessary to remove this note to push big note in the next timing,imo. It is kind to newbie when you consider these.
00:18:064 - same as above.
00:26:064 - I think that you should delete.because it is same as a later part,imo. It is an image to increase notes.
00:28:731 - same as above.
00:34:064 - delete? I think that as unnecessary note.
00:35:564 - same as above.
01:00:398 - delete or d? I think that the one that doesn't let kantan confuse k with d is kind to newbie player.
01:03:064 (74,75) -  k k? I think that the one that does'nt not let kantan confuse k with d is kind to newbie player.
01:05:731 (79,80) - d d? I think that the one that does'nt not let kantan confuse k with d is kind to newbie player.
01:11:064 - same as above.
01:14:064 - same as above.
01:18:064 - delete. same as above.

[Futsuu]
00:01:398 - delete? Only in the case of d, there is sense of incongruity here.
00:06:064 - delete? I think that you should delete it in consideration of easiness of playing. It is kind to newbie when you consider these.
00:09:064 - move to 00:08:731 - and change to d
00:10:398 - delete? I think that as unnecessary.
00:11:731 - dk kd is difficult for the newbie player who cannot play both hands well. I suggest to d d or k k
00:14:398 - delete? I think that as unnecessary.
00:18:398 - same as above.
00:24:064 - remove finisher? This don't fit a sound.
00:32:064 - move to 00:32:231 - ? It is easy to play when you unify rhythm.
00:35:064 - delete. I think that you should delete it in consideration of easiness of playing. It is kind to newbie when you consider these.
00:43:898 - k?You should not let you confuse k and d. It is kind to newbie when you consider these
00:45:064 - d? ^same as above.
00:55:731 - k?^ same as above.
01:21:064 - d?^same as above.

[Muzukashii]
00:23:564 - add d? i think that, same as this sound 00:22:898 -
00:35:898 - umm...I understand that you follow a drum.but,I think that ddd don't fit it because cymbal here are strong,imo.
00:51:398 - Finisher? I suggest follow a cymbal.
00:57:231 - 00:57:564 - 00:57:898 - same as cymbal.

[Oni]
00:25:564 - del?I think that as unnecessary note.
00:36:981 - del?I think that ddddk does not fit a quiet part.
00:38:314 - del? same as above.
00:57:231 - 00:57:564 - 00:57:898 - Finisher?
01:01:398 - kkd?I suggest follow a vocal. and I suggest that I let notes incline to KIAI.
01:01:731 - same as above.
01:06:064 - ddddk? same as these vocal sounds 01:05:398 -
01:08:564 - Finisher? I suggest follow a crash cymbal
01:12:064 - same as above.
01:12:398 - same as above.


[JuDa's Oni]
00:19:898 - ここは大音符置き忘れかな?d D d Dの流れなら大音符じゃなくてもいいと思いますがD d D D Dだったのでこの部分だけ違和感感じました。
00:47:398 - remove finisher? シンバル音もボーカルの強調する部分もないんで軽く考えるとここちょっとうるさいんじゃないですかね?
00:50:064 - ^same as above.
00:54:398 - スプラッシュシンバル系の音がするんで個人的にこの部分こそ大音符おきたいです。00:55:898 - こっちでは大音符で置いてるので尚更ですね。
01:00:898 - remove to 01:01:064 - ? ドラムの音とってこの様に区切ったんですかね・・・?ドラムに沿っていたとしても移動先にもドラムの音が拾える上にボーカルに沿えるので一石二鳥だと思います。こういう部分はボーカルで区切ってボーカルで始めたほうが自然な気がします。区切る部分がスネア系で音が際立つ様であれば話は別ですが・・・。例えばこの部分のスネア01:05:064 - こういう感じで区切るなら自分もやります。
01:01:064 - ^の提案を採用したとしてどう埋めるかですね。この部分からkdkやkkdを置くのがお勧めです。
01:02:564 - ここはボーカルの長音に合わせてkkddkに変更とかどうでしょうか。01:02:898 - 丁度この部分のボーカルのアクセントに合わせてkも置けます。
01:08:231 - k? 01:08:064 - ここの音が非常に強いので同じ音がする01:08:564 - この部分と共にkに変更した方が良さげ。3連はkdk or kkd で5連はkkkkd や kkddd等。kで統一した連打ならそちらにお任せします。
01:13:231 - 上記と同じ理由でkkddk等。
01:27:481 - add k? 音拾って5連にしても面白み増す気がします。どちらにせよ自分は5連置きたいです。

done.
以上です。
good luck
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Lundlerol wrote:

hi.
Nardo's mod req via my mod queue.
[Kantan]
I mod in consideration of newbie player.
00:01:398 - delete? I think that as unnecessary slider.and It is kind to newbie when you consider these. fixed
00:11:398 - delete? It is necessary to remove this note to push big note in the next timing,imo. It is kind to newbie when you consider these. fixed
00:18:064 - same as above. retained because of pairing with 00:20:731
00:26:064 - I think that you should delete.because it is same as a later part,imo. It is an image to increase notes. OK
00:28:731 - same as above. no change
00:34:064 - delete? I think that as unnecessary note. fixed
00:35:564 - same as above. no change
01:00:398 - delete or d? I think that the one that doesn't let kantan confuse k with d is kind to newbie player. ^
01:03:064 (74,75) -  k k? I think that the one that does'nt not let kantan confuse k with d is kind to newbie player. fixed
01:05:731 (79,80) - d d? I think that the one that does'nt not let kantan confuse k with d is kind to newbie player. fixed
01:11:064 - same as above. no change
01:14:064 - same as above. ^
01:18:064 - delete. same as above. umm... I think kiai part needs more notes imo..

[Futsuu]
00:01:398 - delete? Only in the case of d, there is sense of incongruity here. fixed
00:06:064 - delete? I think that you should delete it in consideration of easiness of playing. It is kind to newbie when you consider these. It follows the vocal suitably imo
00:09:064 - move to 00:08:731 - and change to d fixed
00:10:398 - delete? I think that as unnecessary. moved this to 00:10:064 - and changed to d
00:11:731 - dk kd is difficult for the newbie player who cannot play both hands well. I suggest to d d or k k changed to k k
00:14:398 - delete? I think that as unnecessary. changed to d instead.
00:18:398 - same as above. ^
00:24:064 - remove finisher? This don't fit a sound. fixed
00:32:064 - move to 00:32:231 - ? It is easy to play when you unify rhythm. fixed
00:35:064 - delete. I think that you should delete it in consideration of easiness of playing. It is kind to newbie when you consider these. OK
00:43:898 - k?You should not let you confuse k and d. It is kind to newbie when you consider these fixed
00:45:064 - d? ^same as above. fixed
00:55:731 - k?^ same as above. ^
01:21:064 - d?^same as above. ^

[Muzukashii]
00:23:564 - add d? i think that, same as this sound 00:22:898 - fixed
00:35:898 - umm...I understand that you follow a drum.but,I think that ddd don't fit it because cymbal here are strong,imo. I see your point. Changed to ddk to avoid incongruity.
00:51:398 - Finisher? I suggest follow a cymbal. fixed
00:57:231 - 00:57:564 - 00:57:898 - same as cymbal. fixed

[Oni]
00:25:564 - del?I think that as unnecessary note. fixed
00:36:981 - del?I think that ddddk does not fit a quiet part. fixed
00:38:314 - del? same as above. The background sound here is worth a pentaplet imo
00:57:231 - 00:57:564 - 00:57:898 - Finisher? fixed
01:01:398 - kkd?I suggest follow a vocal. and I suggest that I let notes incline to KIAI. Good idea~
01:01:731 - same as above. fixed
01:06:064 - ddddk? same as these vocal sounds 01:05:398 - fixed
01:08:564 - Finisher? I suggest follow a crash cymbal fixed
01:12:064 - same as above. ^
01:12:398 - same as above. ^

done.
以上です。
good luck
Thanks for your mod~ :)
JUDYDANNY

Lundlerol wrote:

hi.
Nardo's mod req via my mod queue.
[JuDa's Oni]
00:19:898 - ここは大音符置き忘れかな?d D d Dの流れなら大音符じゃなくてもいいと思いますがD d D D Dだったのでこの部分だけ違和感感じました。
00:47:398 - remove finisher? シンバル音もボーカルの強調する部分もないんで軽く考えるとここちょっとうるさいんじゃないですかね?
00:50:064 - ^same as above.
:arrow: 全てごもっともです・w・ fix.

00:54:398 - スプラッシュシンバル系の音がするんで個人的にこの部分こそ大音符おきたいです。00:55:898 - こっちでは大音符で置いてるので尚更ですね。周辺を少し変えました。 Bigの位置は提案通りに変えてました。
01:00:898 - remove to 01:01:064 - ? ドラムの音とってこの様に区切ったんですかね・・・?ドラムに沿っていたとしても移動先にもドラムの音が拾える上にボーカルに沿えるので一石二鳥だと思います。こういう部分はボーカルで区切ってボーカルで始めたほうが自然な気がします。区切る部分がスネア系で音が際立つ様であれば話は別ですが・・・。例えばこの部分のスネア01:05:064 - こういう感じで区切るなら自分もやります。少し迷いましたが。。。 確かにここの部分には合いませんでしたね。 再度流れる同様の部分も繋ぎを変更しました。
01:01:064 - ^の提案を採用したとしてどう埋めるかですね。この部分からkdkやkkdを置くのがお勧めです。kkdで置きました。
01:02:564 - ここはボーカルの長音に合わせてkkddkに変更とかどうでしょうか。01:02:898 - 丁度この部分のボーカルのアクセントに合わせてkも置けます。 Good!
01:08:231 - k? 01:08:064 - ここの音が非常に強いので同じ音がする01:08:564 - この部分と共にkに変更した方が良さげ。3連はkdk or kkd で5連はkkkkd や kkddd等。kで統一した連打ならそちらにお任せします。 この辺の連打をkkddkに変えて kkddk ddkkd k k という繋ぎに変えました。
01:13:231 - 上記と同じ理由でkkddk等。kkddkに変更。
01:27:481 - add k? 音拾って5連にしても面白み増す気がします。どちらにせよ自分は5連置きたいです。 そうですね。 構成の流れ的にに無難なdを置きました・w・

done.
以上です。
good luck
Thanks Lundle~~ :) :)
ALL Fixed!!
自分なりにも数か所変更しました。
plz update~ ;)
http://puu.sh/6q0Zo.zip
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated :3
Senritsu
hi nardo and juda~ /o/
request from queue
sorry for being late, i was sick yesterday >3>

[Kantan]
00:18:064 (19,20) - and 00:20:731 (22,23) - swap them? the cymbal is at 20 and 23, and to make it the same pattern with 00:14:564 (15,16) -
01:01:398 (70) - , 01:04:064 (75) - , 01:12:064 (88) - , 01:14:731 (93) - add finish there? to make them powerful :3
01:08:064 (81,82) - add finish there too? because the drum sounds loud there

[Futsuu]
OD 3? OD 4 with 180 bpm is too hard.. probably
00:09:231 (14) - change to k to suit it with the music
00:49:064 (101) - change to d? the vocal is getting lower and lower, imo kdd suits well
00:51:398 (105,106,107) - dkk? almost same reason as above

[Muzu]
00:16:898 add d here? following the drum :3
01:20:898 (214) - change to k? following the pattern you made before at the beginning if i'm not wrong
diff spread between futsuu and muzu seems a bit far.. idk how about the other modders think o_o

[Oni]
00:06:898 (16) - change to k? sounds better imo
00:11:731 (40,41) - swap? to empashize the 00:12:231 (42) -
00:15:398 (58,61) - k there?
01:12:731 (271) - add finish here? you added finishes before this k owo

[JuDa's Oni]
00:05:564 (2) - change to k for following the cymbal?
00:08:898 (4) - change to k?
00:48:564 if i hear correctly, you are following the vocal here. if yes, change to ddk k k d d (1/4)
00:58:564 add k here? it's empty here, sounds weird because the vocal is there
01:26:564 (8) - change to K? it sounds higher than the note before

sorry for the short mod ;w;
hope it helpful
good luck for rank~ ><
don't kd me if it's not helpful pls ;3;
JUDYDANNY
Red :arrow: Fix and Change as your suggestion.
Blue :arrow: No change. because there are other reasons put my patterns.
Green :arrow: Keep , or Changed by me giving your suggestions.

Senritsu wrote:

hi nardo and juda~ /o/ hihi~ senritsu~~ o//
request from queue
sorry for being late, i was sick yesterday >3> :o . I hope you have a good rest... ><
[JuDa's Oni]
00:05:564 (2) - change to k for following the cymbal?
:arrow: no change. I wont ignore bass drums. just 1/2 k k k hits sound is not good to follow bass. ;w;
00:08:898 (4) - change to k?
:arrow: nope. this is my strategy to make a difference.~00:09:231 (1) - almost ignore the vocal. but 00:09:731 (3) - is strong vocal, so since 00:09:731 (3) - ~added to follow the vocal.
00:48:564 if i hear correctly, you are following the vocal here. if yes, change to ddk k k d d (1/4)
:arrow: no change. following backsound.
00:58:564 add k here? it's empty here, sounds weird because the vocal is there
:arrow: no change. only drums are strong 00:58:398 (15) - . i want to make a break. ;w;
01:26:564 (8) - change to K? it sounds higher than the note before
:arrow: yeap :3:3 fixed!!
sorry for the short mod ;w;
hope it helpful
good luck for rank~ ><
don't kd me if it's not helpful pls ;3;
Thanks for mod, Senritsu :D :D
http://puu.sh/6FUSb.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Senritsu wrote:

hi nardo and juda~ /o/ hi~ :33
request from queue
sorry for being late, i was sick yesterday >3> take care~

[Kantan]
00:18:064 (19,20) - and 00:20:731 (22,23) - swap them? the cymbal is at 20 and 23, and to make it the same pattern with 00:14:564 (15,16) - fixed
01:01:398 (70) - , 01:04:064 (75) - , 01:12:064 (88) - , 01:14:731 (93) - add finish there? to make them powerful :3 fixed 75 and 93
01:08:064 (81,82) - add finish there too? because the drum sounds loud there no change because of difficulty

[Futsuu]
OD 3? OD 4 with 180 bpm is too hard.. probably umm... no change
00:09:231 (14) - change to k to suit it with the music 11, 14, 17 and 21 are notes of ascending pitch, I prefer keeping 14 as don
00:49:064 (101) - change to d? the vocal is getting lower and lower, imo kdd suits well no change, to follow the cymbal
00:51:398 (105,106,107) - dkk? almost same reason as above ^

[Muzu]
00:16:898 add d here? following the drum :3 no change. 00:14:231 is blank also.
01:20:898 (214) - change to k? following the pattern you made before at the beginning if i'm not wrong um.. no change
diff spread between futsuu and muzu seems a bit far.. idk how about the other modders think o_o The diff spread is acceptable imo

[Oni]
00:06:898 (16) - change to k? sounds better imo no change
00:11:731 (40,41) - swap? to empashize the 00:12:231 (42) - fixed
00:15:398 (58,61) - k there? fixed 61
01:12:731 (271) - add finish here? you added finishes before this k owo fixed

sorry for the short mod ;w;
hope it helpful
good luck for rank~ ><
don't kd me if it's not helpful pls ;3;
Thanks for the mod Senritsu~ :3

And updated!
Nofool
Hi', Nardo's mod req n_n
I tried to explain my suggestions this time õ_o

[Kantan]
  • 00:19:398 add k ? It sounds well with the melody and with both d k before and after (Just as you did between 01:23:398 and 01:26:564 but with another melody).
    00:30:731 (33) k instead of d ? It fits a bit better with the voice intonation (to me).
    00:59:398 (66) K instead of k ? It feels like the voice’s intensity is the same than for the previous D.
    01:10:064 (84) ^
[Futsuu]
  • 00:11:731 (20) d instead ok k ? Sounds better with the melody (to me).
    00:14:398 (27) k instead of d ? ^
    00:15:731 (30) d instead of k ? ^
    00:31:398 (62) k instead of d ? Fits better with the voice (to me).
    00:33:231 (66) ^
    00:45:231 (94) k instead of d ? (melody again).
    00:59:398 (121) and 01:10:064 (146) as in the Kantan.
    01:21:064 (170) k instead of d ? (melody again).
[Muzukashii]
I suggested only changes that sound better with the voice there (to me ofc).
  • 00:31:398 (17) k instead of d ?
    00:37:231 (41) ^
    00:47:231 (79,30,31) d k d instead of d d k ?
    01:16:731 (197,198,199,200) d k d k instead of d d k k ? (fits better with both voice and melody there I think).
[Oni]
Too lazy to write more than voice and melody there... sorry (x)=> fits more with x to me
  • 00:11:898 (41) K or D instead of k ? just as you did at 00:08:064 (22) and 00:09:231 (27) and 00:10:564 (33) since it sounds similar.
    00:16:731 (64,65,66,67) k k d k instead of k d k d ? (melody)
    00:25:731 (2,3) d k instead of k d ? (voice)
    00:29:064 (17,18) k d instead of d k ? Sounds well.
    00:32:898 (35) d instead of k ? (voice)
    00:36:398 (54,55) d k instead of k d ? ^
    00:53:731 (49,50) maybe k d instead of d k ? (voice), d k sounds already well with the low melody though.
    00:58:398 (173,174) d k instead of k d ? (voice)
[JuDa's Oni]
  • 00:19:398 (5,6,7) kkd instead of ddd ? Sounds well.
    00:21:731 (19,20,21,22) d kdk instead of k kkd ? Fits better with the song at this moment (to me).
    00:34:398 (6) d instead of k ? (personnal random pref ;_;)
    00:41:731 (38,39,40) d d k instead of k k d ? ^
    00:54:731 (6) D instead of d ? Sounds even higher than at 00:54:398 (5) where you placed a K.
    00:57:148 (10) maybe delete this one to change the next d with D at 00:57:231 ?
    01:04:731 (6) k instead of d ?
    01:15:398 (5) ^
JUDYDANNY

Nofool wrote:

Hi', Nardo's mod req n_n
I tried to explain my suggestions this time õ_o
[JuDa's Oni]
  • 00:19:398 (5,6,7) kkd instead of ddd ? Sounds well.
    :arrow: nope. 00:18:564 (1) - ~ follow bass guitar & drums, bassguitar pitch is low yet.
    00:21:731 (19,20,21,22) d kdk instead of k kkd ? Fits better with the song at this moment (to me).
    :arrow: nope. 00:21:731 (19) - hits Snea(a percussion instrument that sounds high pitch ). wont change (19)... ;w;
    00:34:398 (6) d instead of k ? (personnal random pref ;_;)
    :arrow: nope. backsound change 00:34:564 (7) - . not 00:34:398 (6) - .
    00:41:731 (38,39,40) d d k instead of k k d ? ^
    :arrow: nope. vocal pitch changes high to low. and 00:41:731 (38) - hits snea .
    00:54:731 (6) D instead of d ? Sounds even higher than at 00:54:398 (5) where you placed a K.
    :arrow: ... ._. ? I dont think its important to follow the bass pitch on this point. and 00:54:731 (6) - is not louder than00:55:898 (1) - .
    00:57:148 (10) maybe delete this one to change the next d with D at 00:57:231 ?
    :arrow: Nice~~ , sounds good !! fixed~
    01:04:731 (6) k instead of d ?
    :arrow: nochange. vocal isnt up. (6) hits bass drum.
    01:15:398 (5) ^
    :arrow: nope. 01:14:731 (1) - ~~impress to follow drums part.
Thanks for mod,Nofool :)
please Update ~~ ;)
http://puu.sh/6K125.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

Hi', Nardo's mod req n_n
I tried to explain my suggestions this time õ_o

[Kantan]
  • 00:19:398 add k ? It sounds well with the melody and with both d k before and after (Just as you did between 01:23:398 and 01:26:564 but with another melody). Though it is nice, I don't add it because of difficulty.
    00:30:731 (33) k instead of d ? It fits a bit better with the voice intonation (to me). same pitch of vocal as 00:28:064 - no change
    00:59:398 (66) K instead of k ? It feels like the voice’s intensity is the same than for the previous D. In terms of background sounds, the previous is more stressed, so I don't use finish here.
    01:10:064 (84) ^ ^
[Futsuu]
  • 00:11:731 (20) d instead ok k ? Sounds better with the melody (to me). kat fits more imo ;w;
    00:14:398 (27) k instead of d ? ^ fixed
    00:15:731 (30) d instead of k ? ^ fixed
    00:31:398 (62) k instead of d ? Fits better with the voice (to me). The voice is descending @@
    00:33:231 (66) ^ ^
    00:45:231 (94) k instead of d ? (melody again). I considered the difficulty aspect again, d d is easier to be read
    00:59:398 (121) and 01:10:064 (146) as in the Kantan. no change
    01:21:064 (170) k instead of d ? (melody again). fixed
[Muzukashii]
I suggested only changes that sound better with the voice there (to me ofc).
  • 00:31:398 (17) k instead of d ? same as Futsuu
    00:37:231 (41) ^ It's a variation of the next pattern at 00:39:898 - no change
    00:47:231 (79,30,31) d k d instead of d d k ? fixed
    01:16:731 (197,198,199,200) d k d k instead of d d k k ? (fits better with both voice and melody there I think). no change
[Oni]
Too lazy to write more than voice and melody there... sorry (x)=> fits more with x to me
  • 00:11:898 (41) K or D instead of k ? just as you did at 00:08:064 (22) and 00:09:231 (27) and 00:10:564 (33) since it sounds similar. A bit monotonous to use all the way finish...
    00:16:731 (64,65,66,67) k k d k instead of k d k d ? (melody) fixed
    00:25:731 (2,3) d k instead of k d ? (voice) no change. the current pattern fits the voice imo
    00:29:064 (17,18) k d instead of d k ? Sounds well. ^
    00:32:898 (35) d instead of k ? (voice) ^
    00:36:398 (54,55) d k instead of k d ? ^ no change in order to fit the snare
    00:53:731 (49,50) maybe k d instead of d k ? (voice), d k sounds already well with the low melody though. Yeah, so no change www
    00:58:398 (173,174) d k instead of k d ? (voice) k d is for the snare sound
Thanks for the mod Nofool~ :)

Updated!
ts8zs
[Juda]
01:05:231 - d
>01:04:898 (7,8,9) - kddk
GJ
[Oni]
00:18:898 (77,78) - dd
00:20:231 (83,84) - kk
>00:19:898 (82) - k
00:20:898 (86) - k
01:02:398 (203,204) - kk
>01:08:898 (247,248,249) - kkk
>>01:18:898 (311) - k
[Muzu]
00:53:564 (102) - k
01:02:064 (138) - k
>01:02:898 (141) - d
[Fut]
00:45:231 (94) - k
[kat]
none:3
JUDYDANNY

ts8zs wrote:

[Juda]
01:05:231 - d
>01:04:898 (7,8,9) - kddk
:arrow: sorry, no change :? vocal sounds,yees but My strategy is 01:04:064 (1) - ~ make a impress to follow drums.
GJ thx>w<
Thanks for mod ts//
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
00:18:898 (77,78) - dd no change. d k could follow the snare better
00:20:231 (83,84) - kk I see your point of reflecting the increase in pitch of background sound, but I tend to follow the snares for consistency.
>00:19:898 (82) - k fixed
00:20:898 (86) - k nope. It seems that k k appears too many times in this part.
01:02:398 (203,204) - kk fixed
>01:08:898 (247,248,249) - kkk changed to d k k instead.
>>01:18:898 (311) - k fixed
[Muzu]
00:53:564 (102) - k fixed
01:02:064 (138) - k fixed
>01:02:898 (141) - d fixed
[Fut]
00:45:231 (94) - k fixed
[kat]
none:3
Thanks for your mod~ :)
kaji_
Hiya! Mod as requested in my queue.
d: don | k: kat | D: big don | K: big kat

[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:731 (1) - D (add finisher)
  2. 00:05:398 (4) - ^ (These two notes seem to be stressed in the same way as 00:03:898, 00:04:231, etc. If you want to differentiate between the bass guitar notes, you could make 00:03:898 (2, 3) and 00:06:564 (5, 6) K.
  3. 00:34:731 (37, 38) - D k (the second synth note is higher)
  4. 00:57:898 (64) - k (personal suggestion as the end of the bridge section)
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:11:064 (18) - d (vocal pitch drop)
  2. 01:17:731 (163) - ^ (If you decide to change one, please be sure to change the other as well; otherwise, you could leave both notes as is.)
  3. 01:19:398 (167) - k?
  4. 01:22:398 - add d (parallel structure with 00:15:731 (30))
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:53:398 (101, 102) - kd
[Oni]
  1. 00:59:898 (185, 186, 187) - kkd? (accounting for the vocals here)
  2. 01:10:564 (260, 261, 262) - ^
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:47:898 (9, 10) - D D
  2. 00:50:564 (19, 20) - ^ (I think it'd be nice to emphasize the four notes here because this section is less dense to begin with.)
  3. 01:03:898 (23) - d (I'm guessing this section is going to the background synth.)
  4. 01:27:398 (14) - d?
Nice mapset; I didn't find that many things that needed pointing out :P Hope this helped anyway!
Good luck!
JUDYDANNY

kjwkjw wrote:

Hiya! Mod as requested in my queue.
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:47:898 (9, 10) - D D  :arrow: :?  nope... this part is a little cool down phrase.I think finisher doesnt fit as music. ._.
  2. 00:50:564 (19, 20) - ^ (I think it'd be nice to emphasize the four notes here because this section is less dense to begin with.) :arrow: same. no change.
    :arrow: but changed the finisher =>00:46:731 - ,00:49:398 - instead of your suggestion.
  3. 01:03:898 (23) - d (I'm guessing this section is going to the background synth.) :arrow: no change. 01:03:731 (21,22,23) - backbase pitch up
  4. 01:27:398 (14) - d? :arrow: nope. 01:27:231 (12,13,14) - guitar pitch up. and 01:26:898 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ~~ 1/2.... k k d d d k d? i think k k d k d k d is better... ._.
Nice mapset; I didn't find that many things that needed pointing out :P Hope this helped anyway!
Good luck!
Thanks for mod ,kjwkjw :oops: :oops:
sorry, puush doesnt work... /w\
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128,288,38064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,38231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,38398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,38564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,38731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,38898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,39064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,288,39231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,39398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,39731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,288,39898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,40064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,40231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,40398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,40731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,224,40981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,41064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,224,41231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,41314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,41398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,41731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,256,41898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,288,42064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,42231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,42398,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,256,42564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,42648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,42731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,256,43564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,43731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,288,43898,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,256,44231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,256,45231,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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128,192,45648,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,96,46231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,46398,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,96,47398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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96,192,48648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,64,49064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,49231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,256,49398,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,256,49898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,50064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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288,160,50898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,51398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,224,51898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,288,51981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,320,52064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,52231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,52398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,256,52564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,52731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,52814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,52898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,384,53064,1,6,0:0:0:0:
0,288,53231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,53314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,53398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,256,53564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,53731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,53898,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,96,53981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,96,54064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,54231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,0,54398,1,6,0:0:0:0:
128,32,54731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,55231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,55398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,55648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,55731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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32,96,56231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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160,224,56564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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224,256,56731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,320,56981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,57064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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480,192,57564,1,6,0:0:0:0:
512,32,57898,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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192,32,58398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,58898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,32,59398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,59481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,59564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,59731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,59898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,59981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,60064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,60231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,60314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,60398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,60564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,32,61231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,61398,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,61898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,63398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,32,63981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,64064,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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224,64,64648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,0,66398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,96,66731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,160,66814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,96,66898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,67064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,67231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,67398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,67564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,32,67731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,32,67814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,68231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,96,69481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,69564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,69730,1,6,0:0:0:0:
128,32,69897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,70064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,70148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,70397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,70730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,70897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,70980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,71064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,71230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,71397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,71730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,71898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,72230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,73230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,73481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,32,73730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,73897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,74064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,74148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,74564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,74731,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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128,64,75231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,75314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,128,76731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,76898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,76981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,77065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,352,77231,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,288,77565,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,77648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,32,77731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,288,77898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,224,77981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,160,78065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,78231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,96,78398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,64,78565,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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32,224,83981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

kjwkjw wrote:

Hiya! Mod as requested in my queue.
d: don | k: kat | D: big don | K: big kat

[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:731 (1) - D (add finisher) um... The current pattern looks fine, so no change.
  2. 00:05:398 (4) - ^ (These two notes seem to be stressed in the same way as 00:03:898, 00:04:231, etc. If you want to differentiate between the bass guitar notes, you could make 00:03:898 (2, 3) and 00:06:564 (5, 6) K. ^
  3. 00:34:731 (37, 38) - D k (the second synth note is higher) fixed
  4. 00:57:898 (64) - k (personal suggestion as the end of the bridge section) fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:11:064 (18) - d (vocal pitch drop) I followed the background sound more in this part.
  2. 01:17:731 (163) - ^ (If you decide to change one, please be sure to change the other as well; otherwise, you could leave both notes as is.) ^
  3. 01:19:398 (167) - k? no change. A bit odd to use k here, plus at the end of the kiai.
  4. 01:22:398 - add d (parallel structure with 00:15:731 (30)) fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:53:398 (101, 102) - kd nice~ fixed
[Oni]
  1. 00:59:898 (185, 186, 187) - kkd? (accounting for the vocals here) fixed
  2. 01:10:564 (260, 261, 262) - ^ fixed
Nice mapset; I didn't find that many things that needed pointing out :P Hope this helped anyway! Thanks~
Good luck!
Thanks for your mod kjw~ :)

And Updated~ :3
Groumiezi
ohai
from queue~

[General]
  1. AudioLeadIn?
  2. No problem~
[Kantan]
  1. 00:09:731 (9,10) - this beat is so late with music, even a vocal in a big white tick is ignored. so i think you should add a circle at 00:09:231 with a finisher?
    00:17:231 (18) - add kat?
    00:22:564 (24,25) - kd would be nice here, mean swap on it since (24) higher pitched than (25)
    00:31:398 (34) - add kat?
    00:36:731 (40) - ^
    00:46:731 (51) - add finisher since cymbal is here?
    00:55:898 (62) - ^
    01:01:398 (70,71) - add kat so the vocal is so high
    01:12:064 (88,89) - ^
    01:16:731 (96) - i don't know why, a single beat in a white tick instead finisher then add kat ooowww add kat?
[Fuutsu]
  1. 00:09:231 (14) - add kat since vocal higher?
    00:18:564 (37) - ^ since bass/guitar is higher? pattern flow is good tho
    00:25:398 (48,49) - What pitchmapping do you use here? if you following vocal, kat these.
    00:32:564 (64) - add kat?
    00:37:731 (75) - delete kat, then add kat here 00:38:064 (76) -
    00:51:398 (105,106,107) - kkd?
    01:02:064 (127) - Delete kat according to song it's "U" following to the down pitch vocal, but (125) and (156) have "O" following to the high pitch vocal
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:231 (13) - Add kat?
    00:11:398 (38,39,40,41) - dkkd?
    00:25:398 (1,2) - add kat? vocal is higher.
    00:31:398 (17) - ^ according to vocal
    00:32:564 (21) - add kat
    00:32:898 (22) - delete kat?
    00:40:564 (53) - add kat?
    01:27:564 (244) - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:05:231 (11) - Delete kat
    00:05:398 (12,13) - add kat
    00:06:064 (14) - delete kat
    00:06:564 (15) - Finisher with a kat?
    00:06:898 (16,17,18,19) - kddk
    00:25:398 (1) - add kat?
    00:30:731 (26,27,28) - Swap? make them kkd
    00:48:814 - add a note?
    00:49:898 (130) - add kat
    00:49:981 - add a note?
    00:51:398 (134) - delete kat but there was a cymbal ;w; you sure want to ignore the cymbal? pitch should be on.
    01:26:898 (355) - add kat
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:12:731 (4,5,6,7) - if you don't mind, make it like this (orz resolution)
    00:19:398 (5,6) - kat?
    00:21:898 (20,21,22) - swap?
  2. i don't know why, this diff should be inner oni because so hard. this beatmap not should have 2 oni(s).
Good luck!
JUDYDANNY

Groumiezi wrote:

ohai
from queue~

[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:12:731 (4,5,6,7) - if you don't mind, make it like this (orz resolution) :arrow: Make a impress to 00:13:064 - splash sound. and 00:12:814 (5) - is unncesarry (also no put 00:12:648 -) . if I put this, I have to change the strategy :?
    00:19:398 (5,6) - kat?
    00:21:898 (20,21,22) - swap?
    :arrow: ddd=>ddk=>kkd these variation arent good? you said? ...no change. backbase pitch becomes pitch up to up.and guitar pitch also becomes up to up. this vatiarion is good for me...
  2. i don't know why, this diff should be inner oni because so hard. this beatmap not should have 2 oni(s).
Good luck!
Thanks for mod, but sorry nochange :?
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Groumiezi wrote:

ohai
from queue~

[General]
  1. AudioLeadIn?
  2. No problem~
[Kantan]
  1. 00:09:731 (9,10) - this beat is so late with music, even a vocal in a big white tick is ignored. so i think you should add a circle at 00:09:231 with a finisher? Concerning difficulty as Kantan, it is not good to add a big note at 00:09:231 - it would be too crowded at the beginning of the song.
    00:17:231 (18) - add kat? no change
    00:22:564 (24,25) - kd would be nice here, mean swap on it since (24) higher pitched than (25) I followed the synthesizer rather than electronic guitar there.
    00:31:398 (34) - add kat? the vocal pitch experiences a drop there. No change
    00:36:731 (40) - ^ ^
    00:46:731 (51) - add finisher since cymbal is here? It would be a bit noisy using finish here
    00:55:898 (62) - ^ fixed
    01:01:398 (70,71) - add kat so the vocal is so high changed 70 to k
    01:12:064 (88,89) - ^ changed 88 to k
    01:16:731 (96) - i don't know why, a single beat in a white tick instead finisher then add kat ooowww add kat? no change
[Fuutsu]
  1. 00:09:231 (14) - add kat since vocal higher? There is no vocal... Don fits the melody, as 00:10:564 (17) gets even higher.
    00:18:564 (37) - ^ since bass/guitar is higher? pattern flow is good tho no change
    00:25:398 (48,49) - What pitchmapping do you use here? if you following vocal, kat these. Here I considered both the vocal and background sounds. D d d results in softer hitsounds than k k d, fitting the relatively silent background more.
    00:32:564 (64) - add kat? no change
    00:37:731 (75) - delete kat, then add kat here 00:38:064 (76) - No change - to follow the snare. Vocal drops at 00:38:064 (76) - not good to use kat, and doing so would break the three 1/1 pattern
    00:51:398 (105,106,107) - kkd? It is already k k d... 0.0
    01:02:064 (127) - Delete kat according to song it's "U" following to the down pitch vocal, but (125) and (156) have "O" following to the high pitch vocal fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:231 (13) - Add kat? fixed
    00:11:398 (38,39,40,41) - dkkd? no change
    00:25:398 (1,2) - add kat? vocal is higher. same as Futsuu
    00:31:398 (17) - ^ according to vocal Vocal pitch decreases here...
    00:32:564 (21) - add kat no change. Don is used to make a contrast to 00:32:898 (22,23) - which are kats
    00:32:898 (22) - delete kat? ^
    00:40:564 (53) - add kat? nope. Same pitch as 00:40:231 (52)
    01:27:564 (244) - ^ no change
[Oni]
  1. 00:05:231 (11) - Delete kat no change. I want to produce similar pattern like 00:03:898 (5,6)
    00:05:398 (12,13) - add kat ^
    00:06:064 (14) - delete kat nope.
    00:06:564 (15) - Finisher with a kat? Here I want to keep the consistent D patterns.
    00:06:898 (16,17,18,19) - kddk changed to k k d k instead.
    00:25:398 (1) - add kat? no change. This is a stressed note with low pitch of vocal, which is not strong enough to use K.
    00:30:731 (26,27,28) - Swap? make them kkd nope.
    00:48:814 - add a note? I do not want to use 1/4 in this part. Not very natural imo.
    00:49:898 (130) - add kat Again. It is a vocal issue.
    00:49:981 - add a note? ^
    00:51:398 (134) - delete kat but there was a cymbal ;w; you sure want to ignore the cymbal? pitch should be on. I do not want to ignore the cymbal so the kat is kept.
    01:26:898 (355) - add kat no change
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod~
wasonz
:) :) :) :) Little Mod ~ :) :) :) :)

Muzukashii
01:02:064 (138) - d

oni
01:11:398 (266) - k

Good Map set , Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

:) :) :) :) Little Mod ~ :) :) :) :)

Muzukashii
01:02:064 (138) - d No change. 01:01:398 (136,137,138) - are having the same high-pitch.

oni
01:11:398 (266) - k The vocal pitch is going down, so d could fit better.

Good Map set , Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ No change atm.
koko6162006
hope for M4M T_T too hard to find modding
May I?
futsuu
00:17:231 (34) - K?
00:18:564 (37) - D
Muzukashii
00:05:064 (12) - d
00:12:231 (42) - ^
00:12:731 (45) - ^
00:28:064 (8) - ^
00:29:064 (11) - k
00:30:398 (15,16,17) - d k d
00:32:231 (22,23) - k k 放慢聽下 o_o
00:33:231 (25) - maybe d
00:39:898 (53) - d or 00:39:731 (52,53) - ctrl g
01:01:064 (136,137,138) - I think d k d or d k k
01:13:731 (187) - d
01:15:898 (196) - D
Oni
00:01:481 (1) - add d
00:02:231 (1) - may be k?
00:04:231 (6) - D
00:05:064 (10) - d
00:10:064 (30,31,32,33) - d k k d or k k k d
00:11:231 (37,38) - ctrl + g
00:11:898 (41) - maybe d?
00:15:898 (61) - K
00:16:898 (65) - d
00:27:814 (11) - k
00:28:731 (16,17,18,19) - d k k d ? (姐係00:28:898 (17) - add d and 00:29:064 (18,19) - ctrl g)
00:33:564 (40) - add d
00:33:898 (42) - ^ 聽落係要linking
00:36:398 (55) - d
00:36:814 (58) - move to 00:36:648 (57) - ?
00:39:898 (77) - maybe d
00:41:398 (87) - ^
00:48:231 (126) - add K
00:48:564 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - try ddk k d k d
00:50:898 (138) - add K
00:51:231 (139,140,141) - ddk
00:52:814 (149) - maybe k?
00:59:398 (187,188,189,190,191) - may be ddddk will more fit with the melody
01:02:564 (211) - d
01:07:731 (247,248,249) - d k d or k k d ?
01:08:314 (251) - maybe k
01:10:064 (261,262,263,264,265) - 推前 同 01:09:898 (261) - 粒d掉轉位置
01:11:731 (274,275,276) - d k D?
01:13:398 (283) - add d
01:16:564 (305) - k?
01:18:898 (319) - d
JuDa's Oni
AR → 5? I don't know whether it will affect the map here , it should be 5 in general :P
00:01:481 (2) - add d , (one note should be here when u turn to the 25% speed and listen again)
00:02:231 (9) - maybe k ?
00:04:898 (15,16,17) - maybe kkd
00:05:731 (3) - d
00:10:314 (7) - add k ?
00:11:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - to match with the music ,maybe a long stream here as ddkdkkkkd
00:12:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddk k d
00:17:314 (2) - del and 00:17:231 (1) - D
00:17:564 (3,4,5) - ddk
00:19:398 (5,6,7) - kkd / kdd
00:20:898 (15,16) - ctrl + g or k k
00:41:064 (34) - k?
00:52:564 (31,32,33,34,35) - kkddd
00:59:648 (8) - d
01:01:064 (18,19,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try d k d kkd kkd
01:03:981 (24,1) - CTRL + G
01:08:064 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - should be D D _ D ddddkkkkd or K K _ D ddddkkkkd
01:10:314 (45) - add d
01:12:897 (8) - k?
01:14:064 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - kdkkddk
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

koko6162006 wrote:

hope for M4M T_T too hard to find modding
May I?

futsuu
00:17:231 (34) - K? fixed
00:18:564 (37) - D no change, as 00:18:398 (36,37) - is paired with k k at 00:21:064 (41,42) -

Muzukashii
00:05:064 (12) - d nope, since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:02:398 (5) - , it'd be better to keep the note as k
00:12:231 (42) - ^ similar reason as ^, pitch mapping for the identical vocal at 00:12:231 (42,43,44,45) -
00:12:731 (45) - ^ ^
00:28:064 (8) - ^ nope, as it has the same pitch as 00:28:398 (9) -
00:29:064 (11) - k fixed
00:30:398 (15,16,17) - d k d changed to k k d
00:32:231 (22,23) - k k 放慢聽下 o_o It'd be better to keep 00:32:231 (20,21,22,23) - as d d k k, since the latter two notes have higher pitches than the former.
00:33:231 (25) - maybe d ^
00:39:898 (53) - d or 00:39:731 (52,53) - ctrl g changed 00:39:731 (50,51) - to d k
01:01:064 (136,137,138) - I think d k d or d k k changed to d k k
01:13:731 (187) - d nope, 01:13:731 (185,187) - have the same vocal pitch.
01:15:898 (196) - D d is better for better emphasis on the K at 01:17:231 (200) -

Oni
00:01:481 (1) - add d The sound at 00:01:481 - is not so obvious compared to those nearby.
00:02:231 (1) - may be k? no change, as it has a lower pitch than 00:02:398 (1,2) -
00:04:231 (6) - D fixed
00:05:064 (10) - d fixed
00:10:064 (30,31,32,33) - d k k d or k k k d changed to d k k D
00:11:231 (37,38) - ctrl + g retained d k as I can't find any reason to swap.
00:11:898 (41) - maybe d? I would like to keep the k for the instrument sound.
00:15:898 (61) - K fixed
00:16:898 (65) - d fixed
00:27:814 (11) - k fixed
00:28:731 (16,17,18,19) - d k k d ? (姐係00:28:898 (17) - add d and 00:29:064 (18,19) - ctrl g) I tend to make it identical to the previous pattern at 00:26:064 (3,4,5) -
00:33:564 (40) - add d The music is quite quiet there...
00:33:898 (42) - ^ 聽落係要linking ^
00:36:398 (55) - d k is better for following the snare imo
00:36:814 (58) - move to 00:36:648 (57) - ? OK
00:39:898 (77) - maybe d The pitch of the vocal is high there, no change
00:41:398 (87) - ^ nope, vocal goes down from 00:41:398 - to 00:42:564 -
00:48:231 (126) - add K fixed
00:48:564 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - try ddk k d k d OK
00:50:898 (138) - add K fixed
00:51:231 (139,140,141) - ddk no change, k is used for the high-pitched instrument sound occurring at 00:51:398 (134) -
00:52:814 (149) - maybe k? umm... kdd is better imo
00:59:398 (187,188,189,190,191) - may be ddddk will more fit with the melody kkddk is better with respect to the high-pitched vocal.
01:02:564 (211) - d fixed
01:07:731 (247,248,249) - d k d or k k d ? k d k could fit the snares in a way better.
01:08:314 (251) - maybe k no change for this atm, as both are okay imo.
01:10:064 (261,262,263,264,265) - 推前 同 01:09:898 (261) - 粒d掉轉位置 refer to 00:59:398 (187,188,189,190,191) -
01:11:731 (274,275,276) - d k D? no change. 01:12:064 (273,274,275) - should be identical imo
01:13:398 (283) - add d fixed
01:16:564 (305) - k? fixed
01:18:898 (319) - d fixed
Thanks for your mod~ :)
HabiHolic
go go Ranked! Nardo!!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

HabiHolic wrote:

go go Ranked! Nardo!!
Thank you~ I'll try my best.
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