1. Hard (4.43 stars, 412 notes)
2. Normal (2.05 stars, 227 notes)

sjoy wrote:

Hi from M4M
Normal:
00:55:987 (3) - change it to the 1/1 slider? nah, I don't wanna to put too much here, matches formation too
00:57:225 (4) - ^
01:57:843 (5) - NC? I wanna follow vocal phrases here with NCs, so no change for now
02:34:338 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/4dItS.jpg sure
02:57:225 (3,4) - change it to the 1/1 slider? same as before
04:18:874 (1,2) and04:20:111 (3,4) - conbine into 1/1 slider? no change for now, emphasis here is on 1/1 beats so I wanna keep it
Hard:
00:25:060 (8) - change it to the 1/1 slider? i don't wanna put too much, just a note seems good for slow part. ~ makes easier placement too
01:30:627 (3) - crtl+g? imo this way flows better cause it matches the rotation of 01:30:008 (1,2) -
02:35:884 (2) - move to 92,36? hm, I think stack it is fine. consistent too
03:23:977 (8) - I suggest delete it or 03:23:823 (7) - become 1/2 nah, rhythm here matches piano
03:36:348 (8) - I suggest NC and 03:37:122 (1) - delete NC just read it easily current way looks nicer for me, keep it ~
04:12:689 (3) - ctrl+g? in fact I'm trying to come up with another pattern here. 0.0 no change till I figure out what I'm gonna do

Nice map
good luck thanks >w<

Accel World wrote:

From M4M

[AIMOD]

04:24:150 kiai'end isn't snapped [For both diff] oops, fixed

[General]

Your Normal have widescreen support, but there is no widescreen support in Hard. fixed I think

[Normal]

Perfect for me

[Hard]

Perfect for me

Really nice map, good job and good luck! thanks for mod + star >w<

:3

Bonch0 wrote:

from M4M

NORMAL

00:28:771 - add a note imo emphasis starts at 00:29:390 - , way better to pause here for me 0.0
01:38:049 (1) - try to place it on the middle not necessary imo
01:49:802 (1) - remove New Combo no, NC here is for vocals
01:50:420 (1) - New Combo ^
01:54:750 (1) - Remove New Combo ^
01:55:369 (2) - New Combo ^
01:55:369 (2) - add finish on the beginning of the slider imo no emphasis here or nothing in the song that requires finish, no change
02:27:534 (1) - add finish on the beginning of the slider nah, no need ~
02:37:431 (3) - add finish consider
02:47:328 (1) - add finish nope same as before

Hard

00:25:060 (8) - I would rather make a slider that goes from 00:25:060 till 00:25:678 IMO I want to create a more "empty" feeling here cause this part is way softer, so I prefer to leave a pause
02:05:266 (1) - add finish imo, no need for finish here, not enough emphasis
02:27:534 (1) - add finish same as normal
02:57:225 (3) - ad finish on the end of the slider there is already 0.0
03:49:183 (1) - add finish nope same as before

I really tried to make my mod long but I can't find anything ;w;
anyway, nice map and good Luck! thx >w<
also I am a noob modder and just begun modding

K i A i wrote:

halo~ from m4m :3

[general]
264150 - Kiai'end isn't snapped! fixed already o3o

[normal]
00:26:297 (1,2) - how about make these notes place to center? -> http://puu.sh/4eA3p.png / http://puu.sh/4eA40.png sure
00:36:194 (1) - how about moving 3rd point? -> 6 grid to right, and 1 grid to up -> http://puu.sh/4eA8i.png changed
00:55:369 (1,2,3) - how about change these notes to reversing slider? keep my formation cause this is what I did in [Hard] @_@ so I wanna do less in this diff
02:15:163 (1) - how about moving 3rd point? -> 3 grid to right sure

[hard]
00:25:678 - how about adding circle note here? nah, flow here is for vocal, and I don't wanna put too much stuff here ~
00:37:122 (1) - how about here? -> x:368 y:192 consider
01:26:606 (4) - how about ctrl + g? I want jump to be at 01:26:606 - to match vocal, keep for now ~
01:29:390 (3) - (just suggestion) how about adding new control point to center? -> like this : http://puu.sh/4eAtt.png consider, originally I thought it should be straight cause it follows instrument instead of vocal, but mb I'll change later :3
01:49:183 (3) - ^
02:30:627 (1) - (just suggestion) how about moving 2nd point? -> 4~5 grid up I wanna make a rotate pattern here to fit descending vocal, keep for now
02:31:245 (2) - ctrl + g? ^
03:48:565 (5) - ^ oo literally, not sure if I should change it or not. keep for now, but I may change it later :3


that's all
nice map! good luck to you thanks for mod + star =w=

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m w

General

maybe u can find some hs more fit to the song's style, that could be better working on it
combo colors' too dark when the bg is dark as well, maybe a bit brighter ones IMO current way fits atmosphere

Hard

01:25:678 (3) - reverse? not sure how to make reverse here..
01:40:524 (3) - ^ ^
02:12:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - regular pentagon? nice
02:54:750 (1) - reverse? same
03:39:132 (4,1) - maybe a bit closer? IMO it should be easy enough to hit ~
love some of ur flow. thanks >w<

Normal

04:02:792 (1,2,1) - make these just like 04:05:266 (3,4,5) - in ? u can move red 2 to keep ds not necessary IMO, also not sure how to do it without breaking pattern

good thx :3

so slow this song is... OVQ
good luck thanks for mod ~ >w<

LKs wrote:

map is very neat and clean. nothing really worths pick out after scanning. have a star and good luck owo thanks!

btw, you can still have some custom hitsound like symphonic finishes(you can find some in my hitsound pack), which won't break the whole clean atmosphere. good idea, I'll try to add later >w<

no kd thx

AnreFM wrote:

Hi again pieguy~
M4M because you're so nice aw :3 thanks

[Normal]
00:33:719 (3,1) - Blanket them better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956810 imo current way is fine
00:39:596 (2) - NC? different rhythm good
00:42:998 (3,4,5) - Since straight pattern is somewhat dull, i think you can make this more curvy I placed 00:41:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - to form part of a pentagon, so I hope keep it is fine ~
00:53:513 (4,5) - Straight again, i'd prefer raising it by a few grid here hm, don't see problem with current way, no change
01:40:524 (1) - I think this is better if it is exactly above 01:38:049 (1) - orz, if not, the blanket can be made better :p fixed blanket
01:47:328 (4,5) - Since it is not patternal unlike 01:27:534 (4,5) - try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956830 plays better in my opinion ok
02:02:174 (2) - I really don't think NC is necessary here, remove NC there's no NC there o.o
02:10:214 (1,2) - ^ *sobs imo this gives a nice effect with vocal, no change
01:59:080 (6) - Finish on tail? this matches drums, no change
02:40:524 - Try to turn the kiai off from here, it has a better effect on the vocal between the kiais nice
03:36:812 (1,2) - Try making it like this one osu.ppy.sh/ss/958475 or something like that. plays better in my opinion ouo consider
03:41:761 - How about using the increasing volume here? maybe from 10% to 30& or so.. orz added a different fade-in
04:00:008 (4) - move Left a few grid, that straight just don't do it for me orz nice, in fact was my original intention

[Hard]
00:46:709 (4) - clap~ 0.0 here? there's no drum here, no change
01:20:730 (3) - How about adding whistles pattern at the 2nd and 4th line? sounded nice too
01:20:730 (3) - here at the tail
01:22:585 (7) - at the head
..and so on, it sounded really fit owo consider. in fact i may redo this part so i might do this owo
02:14:544 (6) - NC here instead of 02:15:163 (1) - yep
02:41:142 (1) - same as normal about kiai yep
03:21:967 (1) - wow this part is really good! I love it thx ww
03:23:823 (7) - NC here and remove the NC at03:24:286 (1) - ? different rhythm and avoid confusion by the combo division orz keep it, NC here is for pattern
03:50:111 (2) - ctrl g? jump fit with vocal and the flow is better seems good
04:18:874 (1) - to avoid too many repeating pattern, how about adding a curved one? it gives a different and a not boring pattern imo nah, strong feeling -> straight slider. this was my original intent so keep it

Yeah that's all, i really tried my best! your mapset is just so perfect and i can't find anything(as usual)
i hope that helps, and i'm sorry if it doesn't
Good Luck! have a star btw ovo/ thx for mod+star >w<

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M from your queue

[Hard]

00:31:245 (1) - Rotate -38° and move to 188||328 no, current way forms pentagon and is fine for me ~

01:00:317 (2) - Finish at start and at end start follows drums, and there's one on the end already 0.0

02:30:627 (1) - Make a blanket like this: no, here is rotate pattern to fit descending vocal ~

SPOILER

03:24:750 (3) - Clap
03:25:678 (7) - ^
03:29:699 (1,6) - ^
03:31:400 (8) - End slider clap
03:32:482 (4) - ^
03:34:647 (1) - Clap
03:35:266 (4) - End clap
03:38:668 (1) - Clap
03:39:286 (1) - Start clap ...well i don't wanna use clap in this part, sry

[Normal]

Rename in Easy? ò.o The difficult like an easy >.< no, this is 97 BPM so it's easier but for me it's still a normal


It's a very little mod.. but the map is well mapped and the song is short >.< thx for mod :3

1. Inconsistent kiai time. Add the fountain at 04:23:946 - for Normal (or remove it from hard).
2. Add a delayed break at 01:18:256 - ?

1. HP -1 ? As you said, it's a relaxing map, so people playing would probably try to relax. That means more mistakes while playing, so high HP seems contradictory.
2. 00:46:400 (2,3,4) - This triple feels out of place. This is the only triple you have for all the choruses in this song, and the chorus at the beginning is weaker than the others as well. You should probably just have 1/2 here, or make a 1/1 slider from 00:46:091 - .
3. 02:06:503 (5) - New combo for consistency.
4. 02:47:328 (1,2) - Again, feels out of place since this is the only time you use a 3/4 slider + note pattern. Imo, make it a 1/1, or shorten the slider to 1/2 works better.
5. 03:29:235 (6,1) - Swap NC for consistency.
6. 03:36:348 (1,2) - Same as above^
7. 03:39:132 (4,1) - This jump is kinda unexpected, since all jumps prior to this has been 1/2 jumps inbetween 1/4s. Since 03:38:668 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:39:286 (1) - both look like 1/4 patterns, the player, especially one that's playing just to relax, would be caught off-guard here. Similar spacing as you use at 03:39:905 (2,1) - would work much better imo.
8. 04:04:647 - These sliders reminds me of these http://osu.ppy.sh/b/31782 . I like them though.

1. 00:39:596 (1,2) - Try moving this to 220;208, so (1) doesn't stick out at the top of 00:36:194 (1) - sliderend.
2. 00:55:369 (1,2,3) - Make this a repeat slider? I think it works pretty well with the repeatslide at 01:00:317 (4) -, and it feels nicer to not have to click so much, since the chorus here is weaker than the other two.
3. 02:02:792 (3) - New combo for consistency.
4. 02:42:379 (4) - Add NC; then remove NC from 02:44:853 (1) - , same reason as above.
5. 03:39:286 (1) - Try have a volume buildup for this spinner from the beginning to 03:41:606 - , where you silence it before the finish at 03:42:379 - .
6. 04:23:237 (4,5) - Due to the song slowing down the distance between these notes are a bit too close, making it feel like an antijump. 256;368 feels better to me.

CXu wrote:

Yo. You requested a mod from my queue a century ago. Hi. o3o//

[General]

1. Inconsistent kiai time. Add the fountain at 04:23:946 - for Normal (or remove it from hard). oops
2. Add a delayed break at 01:18:256 - ? sure

[Hard]

1. HP -1 ? As you said, it's a relaxing map, so people playing would probably try to relax. That means more mistakes while playing, so high HP seems contradictory. it was for the score ._.// a few months later, this seems better. changed
2. 00:46:400 (2,3,4) - This triple feels out of place. This is the only triple you have for all the choruses in this song, and the chorus at the beginning is weaker than the others as well. You should probably just have 1/2 here, or make a 1/1 slider from 00:46:091 - . it's for pattern. not sure how to fix pattern using this rhythm
3. 02:06:503 (5) - New combo for consistency. sure
4. 02:47:328 (1,2) - Again, feels out of place since this is the only time you use a 3/4 slider + note pattern. Imo, make it a 1/1, or shorten the slider to 1/2 works better. 1/2 feels good ~
5. 03:29:235 (6,1) - Swap NC for consistency. NCs here are for pattern, so I wanna keep ~~
6. 03:36:348 (1,2) - Same as above^
7. 03:39:132 (4,1) - This jump is kinda unexpected, since all jumps prior to this has been 1/2 jumps inbetween 1/4s. Since 03:38:668 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:39:286 (1) - both look like 1/4 patterns, the player, especially one that's playing just to relax, would be caught off-guard here. Similar spacing as you use at 03:39:905 (2,1) - would work much better imo. don'tk now how to make a better pattern here >_<//
8. 04:04:647 - These sliders reminds me of these http://osu.ppy.sh/b/31782 . I like them though. thx :3

[Normal]

1. 00:39:596 (1,2) - Try moving this to 220;208, so (1) doesn't stick out at the top of 00:36:194 (1) - sliderend. ok
2. 00:55:369 (1,2,3) - Make this a repeat slider? I think it works pretty well with the repeatslide at 01:00:317 (4) -, and it feels nicer to not have to click so much, since the chorus here is weaker than the other two. ok
3. 02:02:792 (3) - New combo for consistency. ok
4. 02:42:379 (4) - Add NC; then remove NC from 02:44:853 (1) - , same reason as above. ok
5. 03:39:286 (1) - Try have a volume buildup for this spinner from the beginning to 03:41:606 - , where you silence it before the finish at 03:42:379 - . sure
6. 04:23:237 (4,5) - Due to the song slowing down the distance between these notes are a bit too close, making it feel like an antijump. 256;368 feels better to me. kk

That's it. I like the map overall. Nice and relaxing Poke me when you're done!

Sephibro wrote:

hi pieguy!

[Hard]
I would go for HP7 and AR7 on a 97 bpm Hard, maybe OD6 too - these are the settings i would use for an Insane reduced difficulty settings - don't want AR7 cause that's probably slow for most people o-o

00:21:348 (1) - http://puu.sh/5gcgB.jpg hm, current rhythm seems fine for me
00:48:256 (1) - i don't like the position of this one, i think something like this would be nicer http://puu.sh/5gcpX.jpg not sure what I should do with next sliders, if I change this
01:26:606 (4,7) - i would change the orientation of the two curves http://puu.sh/5gcxd.jpg, or maybe just ctrl+G (4) current way seems fine for me
01:37:122 (6) - http://puu.sh/5gcFr.jpg yes, but I can't make a good pattern with this rhythm > <
02:02:792 (1) - imo three 1/2 sliders which go in opposite directions would fit better than this reverse one http://puu.sh/5gcMY.jpg
02:34:957 (1) - i prefer the flow with ctrl+G current way flows better for me
02:36:812 (1,2,3,1,2) - it would be much nicer with a jump like here 00:35:575 (1,2,3,1,2) not sure how to make a good pattern again..i had both this and the other in mind when designing this map so I wanna use both ww
02:53:204 (2,3,4) - much better http://puu.sh/5gdsx.jpg I wanna make some different rhythms. this part imo fits best for this rhythm ~
03:26:915 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/5gdFJ.jpg nope, following piano here
03:30:317 (4,5,6) - i would replace with a 1/4 reverse slider http://puu.sh/5gdLL.jpg nah, imo current way is fine
03:39:132 (4,1) - reduce this spacing a bit imo can't make a good pattern >_<//
04:14:544 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this part is very nice! thx >w<//

[Normal]
00:26:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/5geai.jpg (reverse at 00:27:534 -) nah, this way follows rhythm better
00:53:513 (4) - this slider creates a really weird flow seems fine for me, it's triangle pattern 0.0
02:41:142 (1) - http://puu.sh/5geCK.jpg imo straight line with this many notes looks weird o-o

Well made, nothing else to say here

GL!

pife1 wrote:

Hi from your M4M

In Normal:
00:28:771 - In my opinión should be a note here because of Singer said "RU" but the real problem is 00:26:297 (1) this note doesn't permit the armony. I suggest replace this note and add 00:36:194 (1) with this you can fill the space of 00:28:771 - 00:26:297 (1) at same time hm, I wanna keep a more basic rhythm for easiest diff.. so I think urrent way is fine @ @

In hard:
01:48:874 (2) - Snap Distance seems fine for me
02:06:503 (5) - Could move to X:356 Y:68 nah, this way is for pattern
02:43:307 - Should be a note here because of it tends to precipite 02:43:616 (2) nah, following vocal
A thing more, at the part of piano I think that need a bit more of work seems fine for me 0.0 don't know how to improve, unless there's something specific
That's all

1. Fixed the spacing at 03:39:132 (4,1) - in hard.
2. Fixed kiai inconsistency.
3. Added "imperishable night" to tags.