Alarido wrote:

M4M From My Queue (:
Thank you for helpful mod!

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[GENERAL - Apply for all diffs]
♥ I LOVE THE SONG ♥ And it's the FIRST time I hear it ^^
♥ Good choice ! osu! needs more Non-Japanese songs!
♥ Awesome Storyboarding ^^
♥ Awesome Skinning (and sorry if I didn't notice any fault, 'coz usually I focus on the beatmap itself)

but...
Timing feels a bit early. Probably the value of 92.010 BPM is a bit unaccurate. I recommend 92 BPM (a Integer value with NO decimals).
I changed it and felt a bit better but not all. "It's the offset!", someone said. Looking for a good offset, I felt 10867 Offset a good time
Resnap ALL notes (Timing -> Resnap All Notes) , then go to 00:10:867 , set Beat Snap Divisor to 1/2, make Ctrl+A and then snap the slider's head (the first slider of your map) to the Big White tick. It will snap ALL objects in the map just on time.
and Don't forget to resnap ALL green sections and every Kiai begin and every Kiai end.

And please make sure apply all GENERAL items on each diff before applying the specific mods, because the mods are based on the new timing.

[Easy]
Firstly, apply the General mods here.
00:17:389 (1) - Make this note at x:248 y:192
00:33:693 (3) - Although it usually confuse beginners, I don't see any solution without destroying the awesome pattern. I'm sure a BAT can help you better here on this point.
00:59:780 (3,1,2,3) - These scheme could be like http://puu.sh/33oGB.jpg (part 1) and http://puu.sh/33oI3.jpg (part 2)
Overlap head and tail of the same slider surely confuse beginners, leaving them follow a wrong slider direction and breaking a combo here. You could avoid this by making a bit larger form (keeping the diamond shape I felt you intend).
01:21:954 (1) - ^
01:32:389 (2) - ^
01:53:911 (1) - ^
02:25:215 (3) - ^
02:44:780 (1) - ^
03:07:606 (4) - ^
03:18:041 (2) - ^
and...
at 02:15:433 (5) - It's alike the prior mods on same shape, with the issue of hiding the Reverse Arrow, what Never can be hid (unless on 1/4 or 1/8 Kick-sliders with many repeats).


[Normal]
Firstly, apply the General mods here.
00:33:041 (2,3,4,5) - Could make overlap more perfectly their feet?
01:10:541 (1) - This slider feels a bit awkward with the song. Could make like http://puu.sh/33pu4.jpg ? (Look at timeline!)

[Hard]
* No specific things - just apply the General mods here

Aaaand that's it ^^

♥ Well made patterns (except by the "diamond sliders" -- I could name it Rihanna Sliders?). You should improve them a bit, more for rankability (avoid unrankable slider self-overlapping).
* I can't understand the [Hard] is 3 1/2 diff stars while [Normal] is 3 diff stars, but it's just an osu!.exe calculation to be improved by peppy. And the song seems not room for 5-note-stacks or something like.

Well, GO LUCK RANKING !!!!
Hope soon make SS on it ^^

Att.

P.S.: Take a !!!

shankishiro wrote:

a little little Mod

Tittle : Rihanna Diamonds

shankishiro wrote:

a little little Mod

Tittle : Rihanna Diamonds

shankishiro wrote:

a little little Mod

Tittle : Rihanna Diamonds

• The correct offset is 10.883. This is the most accurate I could get. (Your offset is way too early right now)

1. Sliders like 01:21:955 (1), 01:32:390 (2) or 01:53:912 (1) are unrankable. A player should always be able to see where a slider starts and where it ends. You have to change it in order to get this ranked.
2. 00:27:170 (1) - NC?
3. 00:52:605 (3) - NC
4. 00:57:170 (1) - Remove NC
5. 00:57:822 (2) - Add NC
6. 02:27:157 (4) - NC?
7. 03:15:417 (5) - Try to stack to previous circle for perfection
8. 03:18:026 (2,3) - Spacing not right
9. 03:23:896 (4,1,2) - Try to place it in the center
   Nice map, just NC inconsistency. I'm sure I didn't mention all, since I suck at NCing, sorry... orz
   I didn't mention any hitsound related things, because it's a very monotonous calm song, and I can't hitsound these.

1. 00:16:736 (1,2) - Try to place at center without changing the spacing
2. 00:44:780 (6) - NC?
3. 00:47:388 (9) - NC?
4. 00:48:693 (1) - Remove NC?
5. 00:49:997 (3) - Nc?
6. 01:08:244 (7) - NC?
7. 01:16:573 - How the hell did you make these sounds? xD
8. 02:04:005 (6) - Stack perfectly

1. 00:26:845 (3) - Stack properly
2. 00:42:171 (7) - NC
3. 01:10:867 (7) - NC
4. 01:21:301 (5) - NC
5. 01:31:736 (5) - NC
   Once again, I only mentioned the NC mistakes I immediately noticed. Please recheck them in all your Diffs

Alumetorz wrote:

Hey, from my queue~

[General]

• The correct offset is 10.883. This is the most accurate I could get. (Your offset is way too early right now)

[Easy]

1. Sliders like 01:21:955 (1), 01:32:390 (2) or 01:53:912 (1) are unrankable. A player should always be able to see where a slider starts and where it ends. You have to change it in order to get this ranked.
2. 00:27:170 (1) - NC?
3. 00:52:605 (3) - NC
4. 00:57:170 (1) - Remove NC
5. 00:57:822 (2) - Add NC
6. 02:27:157 (4) - NC?
7. 03:15:417 (5) - Try to stack to previous circle for perfection
8. 03:18:026 (2,3) - Spacing not right
9. 03:23:896 (4,1,2) - Try to place it in the center
   Nice map, just NC inconsistency. I'm sure I didn't mention all, since I suck at NCing, sorry... orz
   I didn't mention any hitsound related things, because it's a very monotonous calm song, and I can't hitsound these.

[Normal]

1. 00:16:736 (1,2) - Try to place at center without changing the spacing
2. 00:44:780 (6) - NC?
3. 00:47:388 (9) - NC?
4. 00:48:693 (1) - Remove NC?
5. 00:49:997 (3) - Nc?
6. 01:08:244 (7) - NC?
7. 01:16:573 - How the hell did you make these sounds? xD
8. 02:04:005 (6) - Stack perfectly

[Hard]

1. 00:26:845 (3) - Stack properly
2. 00:42:171 (7) - NC
3. 01:10:867 (7) - NC
4. 01:21:301 (5) - NC
5. 01:31:736 (5) - NC
   Once again, I only mentioned the NC mistakes I immediately noticed. Please recheck them in all your Diffs

Sorry that's all. All your Diffs are mapped well and clean, just find someone who checks the NCs and hitsounds.
Good luck!

...Audio Quality

Ranking Criteria wrote:

1. The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.

neonat wrote:

It is not necessary to put the album in the Source. Put it in the tags. - Maybe You Right xP

Hard

00:19:687 (1) - start at 00:20:013
01:43:165 (1) - start at 01:43:491
01:53:600 (1) - start at 01:53:926

Normal

00:18:057 (2) - repeat it once
00:19:687 (1) - start at 00:20:013
00:29:796 - add a note
00:30:122 (1) - start at 00:30:448
00:56:535 (4) - split to a circle at 00:56:535 and slider from 00:57:187 to 00:57:839
01:53:274 - add a note
01:53:600 (1) - start at 01:53:926
03:39:252 - add a note

Alarido wrote:

Please don't kudosu this post! It's NOT a mod, but just a general footnote on...

...Audio Quality

Ranking Criteria wrote:

1. The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.

I found the .mp3 file you're using is 64kbps, but I feel no need changes here unless you're willing offer a better sound experience. I found a 192kbps file, you can download it from here.

And don't worry about the BPM/Offset! I checked the file BPM/Offset (in osu!) too and be sure you don't need change anyhting else on BPM/Offset panel. Just exit osu!, change the file and start osu! newly. Doing like this, the file change will be seamless.

Sure, your project is awesome in all dimensions... why not try get a Guest Diff or a Collab as the harder one?

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue

GENERAL

I think the offest of the map is wrong, maybe change it to 11.022

EASY

00:25:369 (3) - make this more symmetric, maybe use this code

SPOILER

348,328,25369,2,0,B|308:352|308:352|308:352|308:352|256:344|256:344|200:352|200:352|160:328,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:652 (4) - maybe move this a bit down, just for esthetical reason if you want.
00:45:587 (4) - also this make it a bit more symmetric
02:11:021 (2) - ^
02:58:630 (1,2,3) - make this 3 symmetric like this

SPOILER

03:15:587 (5) - stack this with 03:13:630 (3) -
03:21:456 (1,3) - maybe move them one grid up?

NORMAL

00:11:022 (1,2,3) - make them more like this

SPOILER

00:22:109 (1,2,3,4) - make these like this

SPOILER

also try to use the same points for the sliders that I show you in the picture, so it will be better for make the two notes beeing stacked.
00:25:369 - I suggest to add a note here or make a slider from this point to this 00:26:021 -
01:10:695 (4,5,6) - maybe make them like this

SPOILER

01:12:652 (6) - try also to avoid all these reverse, delete one and add a note at 01:13:630 -
01:49:499 (7) - make this slider follow the curve of the previous note
01:58:630 (3) - delete this and copy/paste the previous slider in the same position, so the curve will be the same
02:03:195 (5) - move this one grid down
02:06:456 (1) - maybe move this slider to x:84 - y: 204 so it will follow the form of the previous one

HARD

00:22:761 (3) - make the curve of this slider follow better the curve of 00:24:065 (5) -
01:20:804 (4) - make this more symmetric
01:46:891 (4,5) - try to stack there two sliders
02:13:304 (9,2) - try tostack these two notes
02:21:456 (6) - make this slider follow better the curve of the previous one
02:23:902 - add a note here?
02:27:163 - ^
03:05:804 (1) - maybe move this to x: 48 - y:316
03:07:435 (2,3,4) - stack then these notes with these 03:04:826 (2,3,4) -
maybe in this diff, especially in the first part you should try to make it more hard, anyway it's good enough

that's all, quite good map, after fixing the offest XD anyway good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue

General
creativity in SB, skin and combo color is nice. They match with the lyrics

Hard
00:27:000 (3) - maybe (104,104)
00:57:978 (6,1) - exchange NC ?
01:08:413 (4) - NC to hint the sv changed
01:22:435 (2) - touched the HP bar, make it lower. To do this, maybe move 01:19:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - all down about 3 grid
01:25:043 (2) - a bit weird shape
01:48:195 (6,1) - exchange NC and add NC on 01:51:130 (3) -
02:06:456 (1,3) - maybe don't let them touch each other
02:23:739 (1,2,3) - oops, a bit surprising in quite a easy diff
02:55:369 - ~ 02:57:978 - why is the volume keep going up ? the music is obviously becoming quiet, and suddenly loud. also in other diffs
03:27:652 (5) - omg this is confusing, make its mid-part seperate
03:33:848 (4) - also I don't think its sulf-overlapping shape is satisfying
03:39:717 (1) - soft at end plz, also in other diffs

Normal
HP4 OD4, 5 is too much
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - not recommended to stack notes in E/N diff imo
00:20:152 (1) - this spinner is too short to be in a Normal diff. Make it end at 00:22:108 - may be ok. But I suggest you'd better remove it, also other similar ones
00:26:674 (5) - plz always obey the distance snap in E/N diff
01:14:608 (1) - ^
01:20:479 (2) - ^
01:59:934 (4) - ^
02:14:934 (3) - the overlapping is too confusing to be in a Normal diff
03:27:652 (6) - this is confusign, I already said in Hard diff

Easy
00:39:065 (1) - not recommended
02:12:978 (3) - spacing issue
02:15:587 (5,1) - ^
02:27:326 (1) - ^
02:44:935 (1) - ^
03:01:891 (4) - ^
03:13:630 (3,4) - ^
03:23:413 (3,4) - ^
03:37:435 (1) - ^

that's all
Try to make your map neat, about slider shapes, distance arranging, NC using. It's too messy currently.
Good luck

Alarido wrote:

A Free Will recheck (:

[GENERAL - This applies for all diffs]
Offset must be as Alumetorz said:

Alumetorz wrote:

The correct offset is 10.883. This is the most accurate I could get. (Your offset is way too early right now)

And it's true. I tried play but felt very awkward how notes feels later than they must be >_< and failed.
After changing the offset to 10.883, don't change it newly until a BAT (or pimpG) suggest a better one.
Whenever changing the offset, please resnap Kiai (begin and ends) times and also the 0.5x (begin and ends) green timing sections. And resnap notes, too.

[Hard]
01:48:056 (6) - Why this note feels quiet (silenced)?

[Normal]
00:26:535 (1,2,3,4) - These notes doesn't fit the rhythm imo Could make something like this? ---> http://puu.sh/3btuv.jpg and http://puu.sh/3btvO.jpg

[Easy]
00:44:796 (2,3,4) - Try unstack these notes, since stacking is not recommended at [Easy] diffs.
00:47:404 (5,6,7) - ^
01:57:839 (4,5,6) - ^
02:00:448 (7,8,9) - ^
01:21:969 (6) - Strange slider here... Suggest something like this simple ---> http://puu.sh/3btV2.jpg
02:05:665 (1) - NC?

That's all (: by now

Att.

The Ranking Criteria wrote:

The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

Alarido wrote:

Oh man... this song is so amiazing ♥

Would you accept a guest diff from me (called 'Diamond') (or a guest diff collab if jonathanlfj accept doing with me) ?

dkun wrote:

I love the SB and the map, but there's a few problems that I'd like to note.

The Ranking Criteria wrote:

The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

There's a few images in your SB folder that exceed this limit (and makes your map quite large in filesize!), namely things from SB6 -> SBalbumpic.

Also, the first beat of the song is at 600ms. Therefore, the first offset is at 600! Try it out and let me know how it goes.

Please call me back when you've fixed these two issues. I'll be more than happy to mod the rest of the map then.

Helios_Zul wrote:

Alarido wrote:

Oh man... this song is so amiazing ♥

Would you accept a guest diff from me (called 'Diamond') (or a guest diff collab if jonathanlfj accept doing with me) ?

If U Like u can make a guest diff I Will Appreciate It
Sorry Late Reply Busy!

Gonzvlo wrote:

I test-played this map, quite interesting. I have many design and composition suggestions/advices that you could benefit from, I'll make another post soon if you're interested.

This caught my attention

01:08:413 (1) - This kind of slow-down are too "harsh", try with 0.75, it should be much better. Same for the other one.

(don't kudosu this)

MathiasXII wrote:

Alright, don't count this as a mod, NO KUDOSU!!! , but...

I'm 354% sure that the offset of this song is 11 033.

I suggest you put it at that offset until someone tells you otherwise .

Alarido wrote:

Probably, some people downloaded tHis beatmap in earlier days, before .mp3 change.

MathiasXII: about 1 month ago I told him the same. Few days after, map had still untimed, but I deleted and redownloaded the map, then I found timing is correct.

That is: the older .mp3 was the problem.

Try deleting and re-downloading the map, it seems this is only way to refresh the .mp3 ...maybe due to an osu!bug that causes .mp3 never seems being autopmatically so everyone have to do it manually.

Helios_Zul wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

Alright, don't count this as a mod, NO KUDOSU!!! , but...

I'm 354% sure that the offset of this song is 11 033.

I suggest you put it at that offset until someone tells you otherwise .

I Think You Should Follow Alarido Suggestion Since She Right
But Thanks For Trying To Help My Beatmap Although

Alarido wrote:

Probably, some people downloaded tHis beatmap in earlier days, before .mp3 change.

MathiasXII: about 1 month ago I told him the same. Few days after, map had still untimed, but I deleted and redownloaded the map, then I found timing is correct.

That is: the older .mp3 was the problem.

Try deleting and re-downloading the map, it seems this is only way to refresh the .mp3 ...maybe due to an osu!bug that causes .mp3 never seems being autopmatically so everyone have to do it manually.

MathiasXII wrote:

OH AND WHAT THE HELL !!!!

I'll share my little personal touch of mapping that song .I do not have any expectations for you to include it to your beatmap! I made this for fun and I just thought it came out nicely .

Linky link to my """Insane""" difficulty ~

Alarido wrote:

Helios_Zul

The requested Guest Diff Collab is here → http://puu.sh/3w7Ab.osu ← Add and let's go forth on our osu! Journey.

Terima kasih kerana peluang saya membuat GD. (sorry if incorrect, just started learning Malay)
LoL I Understand It xP Btw Its ok

For MathiasXII and everyone else:

The glory of the joined people, when they work together within a single aim,
This glory is truly higher and superiorly majestic than the alone's work¹
Truly, jonathanlfj and me gave OUR BEST in our worthy Guest Diff Collab.
The reason of it be called "Diamond" is not just the song. There are many things here ♥ listed as follows:
Because I trusted him, and I'm sure he trusted me.
Because we are like Diamonds in the sky, sharing the glory of the work.
Because we are the Masterpiece of the Only One.
And...

That's all! LET'S RANK THIS MAP, BUDDY ^^

_________________________________________________________
¹ unless if the alone person is Sir Minelli, Gonzvlo or SapphireGhost, they are kinda Gods of Mapping.

Alarido wrote:

I'm glad of accepting our diff ♥ ......... (and also the Mathias' one, welcome him too!)

I tested it and found a object out of place (at my parts). Just fixed it (:

the Diff with fixes → http://puu.sh/3wQiS.osu

Thanks ^^

MathiasXII wrote:

Awww I didn't think you'd take it right away like that as a guest diff ^ ^ it is such an honor!

Well then, I'm gonna spend time polishing my difficulty a little (remodel the spacing so it is EXACTLY what it is meant to be, stacking notes on the same space, rounding up sliders that are not rounded up perfectly, change notes that are not intuitively placed, etc.)

Expect a severe modding of myself

Alarido wrote:

Helios_Zul
For MathiasXII and everyone else:

The glory of the joined people, when they work together within a single aim,
This glory is truly higher and superiorly majestic than the alone's work¹
Truly, jonathanlfj and me gave OUR BEST in our worthy Guest Diff Collab.
The reason of it be called "Diamond" is not just the song. There are many things here ♥ listed as follows:
Because I trusted him, and I'm sure he trusted me.
Because we are like Diamonds in the sky, sharing the glory of the work.
Because we are the Masterpiece of the Only One.
And...

That's all! LET'S RANK THIS MAP, BUDDY ^^

Giralda wrote:

Haii! Random mod~ and new to modding

[General]

Please ensure the following tags are added to all difficulties:

guest diff collab jonathanlfj alarido new album mathiasxii ► Helios_Zul, feel free to add/change the tags as well (:

(...)

[Diamond]
00:14:295 (8) - NC ► Done.
00:16:252 (1) - Remove NC ► Done.
00:16:904 (1) - NC ► Done.
01:58:480 (1) - NC? ► Done.
01:58:643 (2) - stack with 01:58:480 (1) ? It also makes a better blanket with 01:59:295 (3). Image below: ► Done.

SPOILER

01:59:458 (4) - stack with 01:58:643 (2) ► Done.

SPOILER

02:35:165 (6) - stack with 02:34:513 (5) ? ► Done.
03:31:089 (2) - was the non stack intentional? Otherwise, stack with 03:30:436 (2)

Nice mapset overall~ good luck!

Giralda wrote:

[Mathias's Insane]

Overall Difficulty -1: If you use AR7 + OD8, the map tends to be more difficult since it's slow and hard to read.

Nothing much to find in the Insane. Nicely done (:

MathiasXII wrote:

Here's the new version... several fixes :

- I removed all the slow sliders... general reaction is that people are annoyed by them. I did however left the breakdown part. I'm gonna wait for people to react to make changes.
- The spacing is a lot more stable (+ or - 0.01 of inteded spacing).
- Changed location of stacked notes on end of a slider to the beginning of a slider (as suggested by D33d).
- Made sliders and map prettier in general.

LINK TO CHANGES!!!

Here are some suggestions as well :

- Remove the "Rihanna" skin as prefered skin in song options because this does absolutely nothing than sending a warning message to players that they don't have that skin in their "skins" folder ;P. The skin will still display since it's in the beatmap's folder.
Change As Mention
- Since you made several offset changes, you should also readjust the preview point's offset to be where it's suppose to be by setting it again (the red tick? If not... woops I changed it to the red tick lol!)
Adjusted To Proper Preview Point

Also ...

Alarido wrote:

Helios_Zul
For MathiasXII and everyone else:

The glory of the joined people, when they work together within a single aim,
This glory is truly higher and superiorly majestic than the alone's work¹
Truly, jonathanlfj and me gave OUR BEST in our worthy Guest Diff Collab.
The reason of it be called "Diamond" is not just the song. There are many things here ♥ listed as follows:
Because I trusted him, and I'm sure he trusted me.
Because we are like Diamonds in the sky, sharing the glory of the work.
Because we are the Masterpiece of the Only One.
And...

That's all! LET'S RANK THIS MAP, BUDDY ^^

D'awww

Giralda wrote:

Haii! Random mod~ and new to modding

[General]

Please ensure the following tags are added to all difficulties:

guest diff collab jonathanlfj alarido new album mathiasxii Done To All Diff

[Easy]
Please resnap all notes. Go to Timing -> Resnap all Notes. Done
01:14:294 (2) - Distance snap? Done
Everything else seems to be okay. ~

[Normal]

Go to Timing -> Resnap all Notes. There are a lot of notes unsnapped in this difficulty. Done

Distant Snap the notes after Resnaping them with the correct ticks.

02:32:882 (1) - move slider end point to x:100 y:216 Done
02:33:534 (2) - move slider to x:132 y:280 (stacks with slider end from 02:32:882 (1)) Done
02:34:186 (3) - move to x:177 y:220 for better blanket. Follow image below:

SPOILER

02:43:969 (2) - move to x:279 y:308 for better blanket? Not sure if you are trying to do a blanket here or not. Done

SPOILER

03:03:208 (2) - move slider end to x:256 y:344 for a better curve with respect to 03:02:556 (1) Done

SPOILER

03:33:534 (2,3) - move both slider end points to x:248 y:220 for better curve Done

SPOILER

[Hard]

HP Drain -1: HP7 for a Hard is a little too high imo. HP6 is perfect. Ok

Overall Difficulty -1: OD7 too high for Hard diff. Done

01:18:207 (4) and 03:03:207 (1) - Unsnapped. Done
02:20:816 (5) - move slider end to x:200 y:252 ;; and middle point to x:144 y:280 for better curve with respect to 02:21:468 (6) Done
02:21:468 (6) - move slider end to x:48 y:328 for the same reason above. Done

SPOILER

03:18:370 (4) - Not needed. Sounds better imo without this note. Done

Alarido wrote:

Giralda wrote:

Haii! Random mod~ and new to modding

[General]

Please ensure the following tags are added to all difficulties:

guest diff collab jonathanlfj alarido new album mathiasxii ► Helios_Zul, feel free to add/change the tags as well (:

(...)

[Diamond]
00:14:295 (8) - NC ► Done.
00:16:252 (1) - Remove NC ► Done.
00:16:904 (1) - NC ► Done.
01:58:480 (1) - NC? ► Done.
01:58:643 (2) - stack with 01:58:480 (1) ? It also makes a better blanket with 01:59:295 (3). Image below: ► Done.

SPOILER

01:59:458 (4) - stack with 01:58:643 (2) ► Done.

SPOILER

02:35:165 (6) - stack with 02:34:513 (5) ? ► Done.
03:31:089 (2) - was the non stack intentional? Otherwise, stack with 03:30:436 (2)

Nice mapset overall~ good luck!

Thanks for your modding to, Giralda !!!
Just noticed you are from the same country of my beloved bro !!
(We're waitin' for those too ^^)

The file → http://puu.sh/3xbT1.osu

MathiasXII wrote:

Giralda wrote:

[Mathias's Insane]

Overall Difficulty -1: If you use AR7 + OD8, the map tends to be more difficult since it's slow and hard to read.

Nothing much to find in the Insane. Nicely done (:

Alright ! . Well since it's such a minor change, I'll ask sir Helios_Zul to do it!

Giralda wrote:

Haii! Random mod~ and new to modding
03:31:089 (2) - was the non stack intentional? Otherwise, stack with 03:30:436 (2)

Nice mapset overall~ good luck!

Alarido wrote:

Giralda wrote:

Haii! Random mod~ and new to modding
03:31:089 (2) - was the non stack intentional? Otherwise, stack with 03:30:436 (2)

Nice mapset overall~ good luck!

According to jonathanlfj (these notes belongs to his part), the non stack is intentional.

Nice catches, Giralda !!! Thanks in advance (:

Alarido wrote:

(For some reason I remember Cacilda when saw the name Giralda here)

Alarido wrote:

C'Mon, Modders !!!!

Let's Mod This ^^ Let's Earn Kudos

Let's Rank The Amazing Song !

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi, from my M4M! Woot mod~

[Mathias's Insane]
00:56:686 (5) - Second point ~x:193 y:327 Final point ~x:103 y:325, to match this slider with the previous two's gradual step down I don't QUITE understand the use of this but I did it anyway... It's more like a why ? Why not I guess change .
01:00:599 (1,2) - Possibly curve these more? They are the only two relatively straight ones between a lot of very curvy slidersUnless it's really a gameplay issue, these sliders were inteded to be that way to facilitate the notes placement as they are right now so I'll leave them be.
01:04:513 (4) - Blanket this over 01:05:165 (5) ? This makes an awkward flow of movement. However, I chagned the slider patterns so it's prettier.
01:16:578 (2) - y:187 to stack perfectly Fixed!
01:18:045 (6) - x:401 y:231 makes a cleaner line I think You're right! Fixed.
01:27:013 (1,2,3) - Maybe line these up so they're more like 01:27:665 (4,5,6) ? The patterns don't mesh well I don't think it's really necessary, but fixed.
01:30:599 (6) - x:236 y:119 makes a cleaner triangle, though you'll have to change the curve/notes after it to keep the distance snap Fixed!
01:52:773 (3) - x:436 y:112 ^Fixed!
02:41:686 (8) - x:112 y:127 to mirror the slider on the other side Ok... fixed.
02:58:317 (2,3,4,5) - The 5 slider is the only note here not in a line, would it be possible to add it to the line? Or make it further off the line like 03:09:241 (4) - is with its line so it doesn't look like it should have been on the line I aligned the notes better to make a pefect line and put the 5 on the other side instead to help the curve ~ so fixed ?

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi, from my M4M!

[Hard]
00:25:382 (2) - Second point x:2 y:75, Final point x:19 y:180 to make a cleaner blanket
00:28:643 (6) - Second point x:287 y:372, Third point x:293 y:264 to blanket 5 better
00:27:013 (3) - Stack on 00:25:056 (1) You'll have to adjust 00:27:339 (4) - if you do this
00:51:469 (6) - Second point x:258 y:247, Final point x:240 y:306 makes for a cleaner blanket
00:57:339 (5,6) - Either blanket these over 4 better, or mirror their shapes (like an eye, with 4 in the middle)
01:00:599 (3) - Second point x:366 y:310, Third point x:368 y:256 to blanket 2, 01:01:904 (5) - Make this mirror as well if you do this
01:25:056 (2) - Second point x:478 y:180, Final point x:437 y:189 to make this a little cleaner
01:26:034 (5) - Third point x:305 y:161, Final point: x:303 y:89 to blanket cleaner, 01:28:643 (4) - Mirror this if you do this
02:20:491 (4) - x:221 y:331 and 02:20:817 (5) - x:133 y:323 to make a cleaner pattern
02:23:752 (1,2,3) - y:84 on all of these to mirror 02:23:099 (7), 02:25:382 (5) - might have to be adjusted down to y:276 if you do this
02:31:252 (4) - I don't think this slider can be done well with just 3 points, here's my suggestion:

• 
  First point x:256 y:368
  Second point: x:208 y:386
  Third point x:140 y:381
  Fourth point: x:109 y:343
  Fifth(Last) point: x:84 y:290

03:03:208 (1) - First, move whole slider to x:224 y:215, then set First point x:224 y:223 Second point: x:276 y:242, makes a cleaner slider and blanket I think

MathiasXII wrote:

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi, from my M4M! Woot mod~

[Mathias's Insane]
00:56:686 (5) - Second point ~x:193 y:327 Final point ~x:103 y:325, to match this slider with the previous two's gradual step down I don't QUITE understand the use of this but I did it anyway... It's more like a why ? Why not I guess change .
01:00:599 (1,2) - Possibly curve these more? They are the only two relatively straight ones between a lot of very curvy slidersUnless it's really a gameplay issue, these sliders were inteded to be that way to facilitate the notes placement as they are right now so I'll leave them be.
01:04:513 (4) - Blanket this over 01:05:165 (5) ? This makes an awkward flow of movement. However, I chagned the slider patterns so it's prettier.
01:16:578 (2) - y:187 to stack perfectly Fixed!
01:18:045 (6) - x:401 y:231 makes a cleaner line I think You're right! Fixed.
01:27:013 (1,2,3) - Maybe line these up so they're more like 01:27:665 (4,5,6) ? The patterns don't mesh well I don't think it's really necessary, but fixed.
01:30:599 (6) - x:236 y:119 makes a cleaner triangle, though you'll have to change the curve/notes after it to keep the distance snap Fixed!
01:52:773 (3) - x:436 y:112 ^Fixed!
02:41:686 (8) - x:112 y:127 to mirror the slider on the other side Ok... fixed.
02:58:317 (2,3,4,5) - The 5 slider is the only note here not in a line, would it be possible to add it to the line? Or make it further off the line like 03:09:241 (4) - is with its line so it doesn't look like it should have been on the line I aligned the notes better to make a pefect line and put the 5 on the other side instead to help the curve ~ so fixed ?

Thanks for your input!

Link to changes

1. Del "rihanna" from the tags, Aritst is have.
   All diff's tags need same.
   
   SB :
   "The screen is 640 pixels wide by 480 pixels tall" ➩ osu!wiki
   some pictrue are too large. please change it smaller.

1. Don't over 5 combos in Easy diff please. (often NC to the big white line)
2. 00:37:121 (5) - NC
3. 00:37:121 (5) - not looks good for me, try this :
4. 00:39:730 (1) - add a clap for front, or some audio.
5. 00:59:947 (2,1) - blanket it better
6. 01:02:556 (2,3) - same as ^
7. 01:02:556 (2) - add a clap for the front
8. 01:22:121 (6,7) - blanket it better
9. 01:50:165 (2,3) - overlap
10. 01:57:339 (3,6) - blanket it better
11. 01:58:317 (5) - remove this note
12. 02:00:926 (8) - same as ^
13. 02:05:165 (4,1) - blanket it better
14. 02:05:817 (1,2,3) - overlap
15. 02:08:426 (3,2) - same as ^
16. 02:33:208 (1) - add clap for the front, remove the calp from the center
17. 03:15:599 (5,1) - blanket it better
18. 03:35:817 (3,1,2) - to hard for newbies.
19. 03:39:730 - add a note then spinner start from 03:39:893 - here or 03:40:056 - here

1. 00:16:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here's rhythm its a bit weird. change it.
2. 00:22:773 (4,5) - its not okay.
3. 03:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - can use star shape for this.

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-

1. Del "rihanna" from the tags, Aritst is have.
   All diff's tags need same.
   
   SB :
   "The screen is 640 pixels wide by 480 pixels tall" ➩ osu!wiki
   some pictrue are too large. please change it smaller.

-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

1. Don't over 5 combos in Easy diff please. (often NC to the big white line)
2. 00:37:121 (5) - NC
3. 00:37:121 (5) - not looks good for me, try this :
4. 00:39:730 (1) - add a clap for front, or some audio.
5. 00:59:947 (2,1) - blanket it better
6. 01:02:556 (2,3) - same as ^
7. 01:02:556 (2) - add a clap for the front
8. 01:22:121 (6,7) - blanket it better
9. 01:50:165 (2,3) - overlap
10. 01:57:339 (3,6) - blanket it better
11. 01:58:317 (5) - remove this note
12. 02:00:926 (8) - same as ^
13. 02:05:165 (4,1) - blanket it better
14. 02:05:817 (1,2,3) - overlap
15. 02:08:426 (3,2) - same as ^
16. 02:33:208 (1) - add clap for the front, remove the calp from the center
17. 03:15:599 (5,1) - blanket it better
18. 03:35:817 (3,1,2) - to hard for newbies.
19. 03:39:730 - add a note then spinner start from 03:39:893 - here or 03:40:056 - here

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-Diamond-

1. 00:16:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here's rhythm its a bit weird. change it.
2. 00:22:773 (4,5) - its not okay.
3. 03:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - can use star shape for this.

(I Will Ask Alarido For Recheck It)
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End of this mod, good luck to you !

jtd1 wrote:

I like your storyboard Thanks

General

Some of your difficulties' Kiai Times are strangely placed. Diamond has no very short Kiai Times, though.
The ones listed are the ones I think you should delete, but it's up to you.

Easy, Normal, Hard:
00:52:773 - 00:52:936 : Unnecessary Kiai Time
02:05:816 - 02:05:979 - ^
02:57:990 - 02:58:153 - ^

Mathias' Insane:
00:52:774 - 00:52:937 - ^
02:05:817 - 02:06:143 - ^
02:57:991 - 02:58:154 - ^

Easy

Your audio lead-in is different in this difficulty to all the others, and it should be the same. If you look at the Notepad files, Easy Lead-In Time is 1004, while all others are 3000. Change this to 3000.
02:15:600 (5) - Looks peculiar imo. Maybe change to a diamond shaped slider?

Normal

00:20:165 (1) - New Combo this spinner, AiMod throws up an issue as it is.

Diamond

This difficulty's preview point is different from all other difficulties. If you look in the Notepad files, Diamond's Preview Time is 70575, while all others are 70708. Change Diamond's to 70708.
Tags in this difficulty are different to the other difficulties. Look in the Notepad file, and add in to the Tags bit: 'new', 'album' and 'mathiasxii' and then remove 'YouTube' and 'wefoundlove'.

Since I see no problems with spacing and timing of notes, that's all from me. Good luck, it's getting close to being ranked.

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi, from my M4M!

[Diamond]
00:11:034 (1) - Finish on head ► Added.
00:12:828 (5) - x:256 y:192, to stack perfectly on the sliders ► Added.
00:13:643 (7) - Finish on head ► Added.
00:22:773 (4,5) - This is awkward to play, maybe just make it a repeat slider? Or delete second slider, extend first slider to second slider start, and add hit circle at second slider end ► Not changed, but silenced the (4)'s tail instead. Probably you found awkward due to slider's end's noise.
00:25:219 (9) - Possibly add note here ► Already exists.
00:46:252 (5,6,7) - This is awkward too, I suggest something like this: (***)

Pic

00:52:773 (1) - Finish on slider head ► Added.
00:55:382 (1) - ^ ► Added.
00:57:991 (1) - ^ ► Added.
01:00:273 (1,2,3) - This is not very pretty, either make 2 a perfect line into the slider, or mesh it in with the slider curve ► Fixed.
01:01:089 (4) - x:377 y:215 to stack perfectly ► Fixed in my own way.
01:01:904 (6) - x:136 y:170 ^ ► Fixed in my own way.
01:03:208 (9) - Finish on slider head ► Added.
01:05:817 (3) - ^ ► Added.
01:08:426 (1) - ^ ► Added.
01:59:295 (3,4) - This is kind of awkward and doesn't feel right with the music, I suggest this:

Pic

► Not changed because following the drums that go together with "E-ner-gy" (the first two syllables) and a "later" drum before "Gy" is sung. But silenced the slider ends (awkwardness could reside here)
03:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is a little weird... Maybe make it a star? (***)

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-

1. Del "rihanna" from the tags, Aritst is have.
   All diff's tags need same.
   
   (...)
   -------------------------------------------------
   -Diamond-
   
   1. 00:16:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here's rhythm its a bit weird. change it. ► Changed.
   2. 00:22:773 (4,5) - its not okay. ► Before the changes described at the response to the previous modder, surely wasn't. Since the sliderends were silenced, feels better now (:
   3. 03:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - can use star shape for this. (***)

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End of this mod, good luck to you !

jtd1 wrote:

I like your storyboard

General

Some of your difficulties' Kiai Times are strangely placed. Diamond has no very short Kiai Times, though.
The ones listed are the ones I think you should delete, but it's up to you.

Easy, Normal, Hard:
00:52:773 - 00:52:936 : Unnecessary Kiai Time
02:05:816 - 02:05:979 - ^
02:57:990 - 02:58:153 - ^

Mathias' Insane:
00:52:774 - 00:52:937 - ^
02:05:817 - 02:06:143 - ^
02:57:991 - 02:58:154 - ^

(...)

Diamond

This difficulty's preview point is different from all other difficulties. If you look in the Notepad files, Diamond's Preview Time is 70575, while all others are 70708. Change Diamond's to 70708.
Tags in this difficulty are different to the other difficulties. Look in the Notepad file, and add in to the Tags bit: 'new', 'album' and 'mathiasxii' and then remove 'YouTube' and 'wefoundlove'. ► Changed <3

Since I see no problems with spacing and timing of notes, that's all from me. Good luck, it's getting close to being ranked.

happy623 wrote:

Diamonds!! <3 support!

MathiasXII wrote:

There was a minor annoyance that was driving me nuts in the slow down in my difficulty... I fixed it so it annoys me less

Minor change here

jonathanlfj wrote:

http://puu.sh/3GkF2.osu
Changed everything except 00:46:252 (5,6,7) since i could not see the img example (deleted puush?), and i personally think its fine anyways

MathiasXII wrote:

I've been running a PNG optimizer software on all of the images in the beatmap folder (called pnglism... thanks to ziin for showing me this in my skin creation days) which analyses PNGs byte by byte to compress the images as much as possible with image property changes that are completely invisible to human eye.

Since this kind of filtering is so granular, it takes a while for it to execute... a week now but not because it really takes a week. It's just that I've been busy with work and all. I'm almost done.

I have chopped off a whooping 3 MB of data from the song folder so far! Will post the updated PNGs soon! I hope this will help keep this beatmap alive as well.

Well Thank You So Much MathiasXII.

MathiasXII wrote:

Here you go

Linky Link

For some reason I understood 3MB, but it chopped off less than that D:.

Just drag and drop all the files from the zip folder to the song folder and 2.5MB of your song folder will magically disappear ~ (rounding up to 10.01 MB I think).

P.S.: This WILL NOT require people to redownload the song since it's basically the same images but taking less space. You can rest assured however that the compression of these pngs are at their maximum . It makes the storyboard a tad lighter too!

Oh and in case you're going to change or use new PNGs in the future, you can download the tool here!. Just make sure the tool is extracted near the root directory (something like C:\pngslim\) because it is very picky on path names. To use it, copy the image you want to slim in that folder and then drag it over the executable... it will do the rest! Once done, just copy the image back in the song folder.

MathiasXII wrote:

:'( but it was worth iiit D:. D'aww I'm sad now.

Alarido wrote:

I hope it too MJ ^^

but if Helios give up this map, I'll take it to me, preserve Mathias' and Diamond and map the Hard and Normal (and keep Helios' Easy as a GD). Because I love this song too

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

Insane

- http://puu.sh/558dh.jpg Here are a lot of spacing mistakes. Don't know if you did them on purpose but this is a lot compared to other maps. I see a lot which also should be improve towards the normal spacing. This also fits your other difficulties better and it doesnt make the difficultie unneeded harder than it is already. No offense, but there are some jumps which you really need to fix up.

00:12:991 (6,7) - , compared to your normal spacing ( 00:11:034 (1,2) - ) this is very confusing and not recommended. You need to be aware of that this can cause a missunderstanding in playment. The players thinks; this is played that way. But then it actually is different than expected. Make it clear how to play and move the slider further away so the confusion is gone.
00:13:643 (7,1,2) - This jump from 1 to 2 is also very unexplainable. It's kind of senseless. I see the point of making a difficultie harder and more entertaining with adding jumps but they also need to make sense. You should at least make it consistant so it plays better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071845
00:21:143 (3,1) - You should stack them or else this is not very fitting due to you changing the spacing again. When you think about it; 00:22:121 (1,2) - this spacing is bigger than 00:21:143 (3,1) - . But the rythm is different. Its the opposite how it should be.
00:25:382 (9,10,11,1) - After this 00:25:382 (9,10,11) - spacing you cant make the shape complete with adding another circle in the pattern with the same spacing, when there is a whole 1/1 section between. You need to think about this. Maybe you stack it with the previous circle to fix that.
00:58:480 (2,3,4) - Its the same again, but now you have almost the same consistant spacing which is wrong. The jump from 2 to 3 is ok but then the 4 placed the same way the jump was might be considered as jump as well. Stack it or make the spacing of 4 bigger.
01:04:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing here is also wrong. Its the same again, you need to think of the rythm and placement and how it works. This can really confuse.
01:08:915 (2,3,4,5) - If you had this jump from 2 to 3 you cant have the spacing with 01:09:567 (4) - the same way. That's not good.

These mistakes are pretty much ongoing in the difficultie. Please make yourself aware of how you place elements. I am not offending and i only say this to improve the map of yours. You posted into my queue and i gave you some advice. Hope it helps you and makes you more aware for the next time you map.

Good luck with everything. (:

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

General

- Instead of the actual BG you could use somethng more dramatic for those who dont want to play with SB. Like this BG http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071801 as your actual BG. >Hrmm Its More Better With Original BG.
- Check all your tags, they are not fully consistant through the difficulties. >Fixed
- Audio Lead in was automated so you should delete them as well. >Fixed
- Filesize is pretty high, maybe you can reduce it by using smaller images? >Well I Tried It But It Will Make More Hard To Edit The SB
- Your storyboarding is a nice attempt and very cheesy. You can still improve a few things if you want.
http://puu.sh/556xM.jpg , http://puu.sh/557jm.jpg - Sometimes the text goes too close to the edge or is cut off, which looks a little unattractive. Move it to another point, them all, where it ends earlier. >Will Fix It Soon (I Don't Have Time)
Some text is extremely slow and some very fast. You should make them equal, so they are both same speed. People might want to sing to it or read it and then get ripped out of the actual movement they used to have. As in the reading rythm. Fast. Slow. Fast. > Will Fixed It Soon
You could place Rihanna (Ark.png) a little more right. The right side is very empty and with that it will be more balanced. It will sure look good too. >Done
- Last but not least. Watch your combo patterns in all difficulties. On Easy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071806 first, there is only 1 NC and the NC should be swapped anyway. NC on 5 and remove 1. 00:39:730 (1) - This is also not needed due to the combos being short and thats how it should be. Ofc not too short c(; >Done
- Skinwise, there is also a problem, a small one. Sometimes you might think http://puu.sh/557r4.jpg this is a slider tick. The left diamond. You maybe should put the diamonds onto the circle and not on the edge to avoid missunderstandings. >Yes You Right. Fixed

Easy

00:55:382 (3,4,1) - The angle of this pattern and flow is not good. The way the movement and how its played on this slider goes to the side 00:55:382 (3) - . If you place the next element under and right of the slider then the playment is not good. It can especially affect new players, due to them being only used to normal rows and not many other placements. You want to equal this 00:52:773 (1,3) - but you need to think of the playment too.>Fixed.
00:57:339 (4) - Needs to me much more left to be played good. Same with this 01:05:817 (2,3) - , 01:08:426 (4,5) - . >Done.
01:00:599 (1) - This needs to be lowered due to it touching the scores. >^
01:11:034 (1) - First of, the shape is very hard to read in general. It looks nice to have diamond shapes for this song yes, but they dont play good and can confuse because of it's shape. Maybe people dont see the start or else. You need to make this move obvious for how to play and make a better shape. This, for all shapes like that.>Fixed
Especially these 02:15:599 (2) - The repeat is not readable enough either. >Fixed
01:16:904 (2) - If you place this on the right side instead of the left then it will flow and play better. The movement is very harsh, so it should be softened. >More Better. Fixed
01:30:599 (1) - You should copy paste the same slider and make them stack. This may lead to confusion and unexpectations. It is really not expected. Find some other nice fitting slider instead. >Fixed To Other Thing.

Normal

- Your comboing is way too long. You really need to make them shorter to avoid stress for people when playing. >Fixed To Max 5 Combo Only.

00:50:165 (1) - Needs to be lower, due to it touching the HP bar. >Done

Visually you could improve this better, sometimes your placement can be better, but nice difficultie. >Thank You

Hard

00:18:860 (5) - , 00:25:382 (2) - , 01:22:447 (2) - , 03:38:099 (3,4,5) - Needs to be lower, touches the HP bar or scores.>Done
00:32:556 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Watch your comboing, due to the copy paste symmetric pattern the combo is copy pasted as well. This changes your combo patterns. Remove every 2nd to fix this. Check this on the whole difficultie to avoid mistakes. I hope this makes you aware of the copy paste mistake. >Fixed
01:15:599 (5,1) - The flow is not so good here. The long slider goes into the opposite direction where the next slider starts. This leads to lack of flow. You should move the small slider a little more up so the flow improves. Or you could simply move the curve of the long slider to the other side. >Fixed
02:03:208 (6,7,8) - I dont think this jump fits good. The spacing is pretty normal here, so this play weird. Make normal spacing and try to fix it with changing it into the normal spacing. >Okay
02:11:034 (6,1) - These could be blanket way better with that slider 02:10:382 (5) -. >Done It would look more attractive towards the player. Same here 02:18:208 (2,3) - , 02:37:121 (9,1) - >Done
02:27:176 (1) - This circle is one too much, its the start of kiai and it doesnt really fit to the start and there is nothing what relates to it either. Its also unexpected to have a double at the start of a kiai. Delete the circle to make it better. >Fixed.

These mistakes are pretty much ongoing in the difficultie. Please make yourself aware of how you place elements. I am not offending and i only say this to improve the map of yours. You posted into my queue and i gave you some advice. Hope it helps you and makes you more aware for the next time you map.

Good luck with everything. (:

Alarido wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

Insane

- http://puu.sh/558dh.jpg Here are a lot of spacing mistakes. Don't know if you did them on purpose but this is a lot compared to other maps. I see a lot which also should be improve towards the normal spacing. This also fits your other difficulties better and it doesnt make the difficultie unneeded harder than it is already. No offense, but there are some jumps which you really need to fix up.

00:12:991 (6,7) - , compared to your normal spacing ( 00:11:034 (1,2) - ) this is very confusing and not recommended. You need to be aware of that this can cause a missunderstanding in playment. The players thinks; this is played that way. But then it actually is different than expected. Make it clear how to play and move the slider further away so the confusion is gone.
00:13:643 (7,1,2) - This jump from 1 to 2 is also very unexplainable. It's kind of senseless. I see the point of making a difficultie harder and more entertaining with adding jumps but they also need to make sense. You should at least make it consistant so it plays better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071845
00:21:143 (3,1) - You should stack them or else this is not very fitting due to you changing the spacing again. When you think about it; 00:22:121 (1,2) - this spacing is bigger than 00:21:143 (3,1) - . But the rythm is different. Its the opposite how it should be.
00:25:382 (9,10,11,1) - After this 00:25:382 (9,10,11) - spacing you cant make the shape complete with adding another circle in the pattern with the same spacing, when there is a whole 1/1 section between. You need to think about this. Maybe you stack it with the previous circle to fix that.
00:58:480 (2,3,4) - Its the same again, but now you have almost the same consistant spacing which is wrong. The jump from 2 to 3 is ok but then the 4 placed the same way the jump was might be considered as jump as well. Stack it or make the spacing of 4 bigger.
01:04:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing here is also wrong. Its the same again, you need to think of the rythm and placement and how it works. This can really confuse.
01:08:915 (2,3,4,5) - If you had this jump from 2 to 3 you cant have the spacing with 01:09:567 (4) - the same way. That's not good.

These mistakes are pretty much ongoing in the difficultie. Please make yourself aware of how you place elements. I am not offending and i only say this to improve the map of yours. You posted into my queue and i gave you some advice. Hope it helps you and makes you more aware for the next time you map.

Good luck with everything. (:

@BB :: Since I've made several changes in relation with all pointed issues and also somewhere more, which made they more clear (even though that things before changing were relied on partial symmetry, I changed some to fit a bit more to the beats), it made me unable to answer point-to-point as usually I do. In fact, did the changes on my own and, also, added some beats.
Consider also that there are a lot of ranked Insanes/Extras that lacks logic too, what make me unable to pass them even with HT mods enabled, since the beats seems appear to me randomly while the session, with no path to follow.
And I felt I didn't followed a Lesjuh approach here, but relied onto some contemporary (2013) approaches, instead. Specially at Kiai sections.
This song is surely amazing, even though it doesn't made me psychedelize
Overall.....Danke.

@Helios_Zul :: since just mine parts were pointed, you can update the file?? >>>> http://puu.sh/572aN.zip <<<< The jonathanlfj parts felt perfect to BB, so she didn't pointed them. Terima kasih ^.^

Thanks! ありがとう! Köszönöm!

LET'S GO FORTH Helios!!!!!

BounceBabe wrote:

Guest Insane

00:13:643 (1,2,3,4) - After these spacings 00:14:947 (4,5) - this jump doesnt fit. I guess its a small copy paste mistake which was unwanted. Well, now you can improve it by moving the slider to how it should be. I won't. I assume at this difficulty that a little jump like this won't bother players... It plays verywell nevertheless it fits or not. I calculate my notes/jumps very carefully when I map. So if it's there, it has a purpose
00:22:121 (2) - Touches the HP bar, move it lower. Fixed
01:22:447 (5,6) - I think it would work better if you move the circle like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071831 It would make the playment and flow better due to it going straight and not to the right. I think not... I like the note being where the slider points to.
02:55:382 (1,2,3) - If you make bigger spacing when having this stair reducing spacing 02:54:078 (2,3,4,5,1) - it can be confusing and might be clicked somehow different. Maybe you could stack it and improve it that way or just make normal spacing, or find something else how you like it. I do admit I have a hard time doing that part. I changed it although I'm not sure if the change is better. so fixed ?!

Liked your difficultie a lot. The rythm was good made especially the changing which worked very good, 03:14:295 (3,4,5) - . Thanks for your input :3.

── BATs, come to meeee! ──

MathiasXII wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

Guest Insane

00:13:643 (1,2,3,4) - After these spacings 00:14:947 (4,5) - this jump doesnt fit. I guess its a small copy paste mistake which was unwanted. Well, now you can improve it by moving the slider to how it should be. I won't. I assume at this difficulty that a little jump like this won't bother players... It plays verywell nevertheless it fits or not. I calculate my notes/jumps very carefully when I map. So if it's there, it has a purpose
00:22:121 (2) - Touches the HP bar, move it lower. Fixed
01:22:447 (5,6) - I think it would work better if you move the circle like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071831 It would make the playment and flow better due to it going straight and not to the right. I think not... I like the note being where the slider points to.
02:55:382 (1,2,3) - If you make bigger spacing when having this stair reducing spacing 02:54:078 (2,3,4,5,1) - it can be confusing and might be clicked somehow different. Maybe you could stack it and improve it that way or just make normal spacing, or find something else how you like it. I do admit I have a hard time doing that part. I changed it although I'm not sure if the change is better. so fixed ?!

Liked your difficultie a lot. The rythm was good made especially the changing which worked very good, 03:14:295 (3,4,5) - . Thanks for your input :3.

Linky link

By the way, I'm so happy to see this map revived !!!

EDIT / REUPLOAD : I took the occasion to replace some of the original hitsounds that sounded better than the custom hitsounds since SOMEONE applied custom hitsounds all over my map without my conscent hmm ... ? I still kept some of the custom ones because they fitted better.

-Famous- wrote:

M4M request from my Queue

[General]

- Check AiMod.
- I can't say something about the SB, (except it looks nice) because I'm a noob with SB's.

[Diamonds]

00:16:252 (1) - Remove NC.

00:16:904 (8) - Add NC.

00:22:121 (1) - Remove NC.

00:22:447 (10) - Add NC.

00:31:904 (1) - Remove NC.

00:32:230 (6) - Add NC.

00:42:339 (1) - Remove NC.

00:42:665 (8) - Add NC and move it to x:184 ; y:36. (one box up and left)

00:44:947 (1) - Remove NC.

00:45:273 (8) - Add NC.

01:18:860 (1) - Remove NC.

01:19:186 (10) - Add NC.

02:10:708 (6) - ^

02:11:034 (1) - Remove NC.

02:12:339 (5) - Add NC.

02:22:773 (5) - ^

02:32:230 (7,8,9) - I'm not sure about this. In my opninion it doesn't fit in the mapstyle. ► Changed to a triangle form. Thanks (:

02:34:186 (3) - Move that circle to x:212 ; y:36 ► Moved. Thx.

02:35:491 (1) - Add NC.

02:42:665 (8) - ^

02:43:317 (1) - Remove NC.

02:45:926 (10) - Add NC.

03:02:882 (7) - ^

03:03:208 (1) - Remove NC.

03:05:817 (1) - ^

03:06:306 (10) - Add NC.

03:10:708 (6) - ^

03:11:034 (1) - Remove NC.

03:12:339 (5) - Add NC.

03:18:860 - Isn't slider celocity x1.5 too much? Many people will get surprised and break their combo there. ► See notice below {2}

03:31:904 (1) - Remove NC.

03:32:882 (7) - Add NC.

It's a nice mapset you made. Good luck for getting ranked.

CDFA wrote:

Shout-out to my main man Chris Brown.

Diamond:
interesting combination of collabers.
00:11:034 - hitsounds pls ► There's a finish in the head of the first slider (: and some finishes ahead (: but yes, added some claps to the start.
00:24:567 (7) - NC ► Added.
01:05:166 (6) - hitnormal pls ► ok
01:09:078 (1) - ^ ► added clap instead (souns almost the same)
01:10:382 (6) - ^. Assume this for all similar things after. ► ^
01:48:045 (1) - Why this silence tho? ► Changed to 30% vol. (now audible)
01:59:458 (4) - I've been pretty leniant about the whole silent slider things, but this is on a downbeat, so don't silence it ;w; ► Changed the six ones on this pattern to 30% volume. Now it can sound better ~
02:29:621 (7,8,9) - woah bad touch zone ► Changed a bit on my discretion (:
02:39:078 (5) - woah hey look at that momentum aaaa here's me missing the slider
03:18:860 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

uguu

CDFA wrote:

Shout-out to my main man Chris Brown.

Helios_Zul wrote:

>< I forgot to check my map before this .. Can u reupload the link since its broken
sorry for very very late reply . Busy with life ._.