1. Easy (2,7 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (4,67 stars, 174 notes)
3. Insane (4,96 stars, 229 notes)
4. Irre's SPLASH (4,89 stars, 242 notes)
5. Normal (4,31 stars, 128 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hello! I'm here to mdo your map!

Here are some suggestions:

Easy:
I'm unsure if the spinner is placed at the right time, since its end doesn't fit in with that double clap. Move spinner at 00:14:886 to 00:13:715 - 00:15:590 instead. That way, you can place a 1/2 slider at 00:16:761 for that double clap sound in the music. Nah, it's supposed to go with the vocals.
00:19:105 - Switch whistle with a finish sound effect instead You'll see, I used whistles on every diff because a finish would be too strong
00:22:855 - ^ Saame
00:38:090 - Add a clap to the head of the slider Hue, sounds pretty loud, I prefer not to add it.
00:43:715 - Add whistle? No, I don't like how it emphasizes something that is not there.


Normal
00:02:465 - 00:13:246, though there's more notes, the placements of all these objects are pretty much the same with Easy mode. Try changing it's format a bit? No, Easy - Normal is not a very big gap, that's why I did this on purpose.
00:16:996 - Add in a hit circle? Would be too sudden after the Spinner.

Hard:
01:18:636 - Add a finish to the tail of this slider instead No, would be too much with the following finish
Looks perfect in my standards aw, thanks xD

Insane mode:
Spice up that stream at 01:18:168 by creating a sound pattern.
You could try placing in a whistle sound effects on the hit circles at: quite true, I changed them to Normal sampleset.
01:18:285
01:18:519
01:18:754

hope these suggestions helps!

Raose wrote:

trying for M4M hope my suggestions are helpful~

[General]
Your tags in Insane conflict with the tags in the other diffs LOL. Is this song the opening or the ending? LOOL, fixed
Also, Insane has countdown enabled while the other diffs don't. Fixed, LOL
Maybe you should put in the full title of the anime as the source, which is "Free! - Iwatobi Swim Club" Naah, I think Free! is more correct according to the Anime sites.
01:27:074 - how about a gradual fade out here? Meaning have sections of decreasing volume, like 75%, 60%, and so on until 5%? hmm, no, I actually considered this while mapping, but I didnt like it.

[Insane]
00:31:761 (1,2) - make the slider straight and center these? Nope, I like current flow way more.
01:01:058 (3) - how about adjusting the 2nd part of the slider so it doesn't look quite so hunched over? Sure

SPOILER

01:06:683 (2,3,4) - make these symmetrical maybe No, I dont like how it flows.
01:14:418 (3) - isn't completely stacked on 01:12:308 (2) Fixed.
01:15:121 (6,7) - I think the circle jump pattern would flow better if you switched these since the pattern's already going CCW from the previous circles True xD fixed.
01:18:285 (6,10) - I knwo you wanted to make a stream, but even listening on 25% I can't hear anything in the music for these notes You can hear an 1/4 beat o.o Hueee..
01:22:386 (4,5,6) - make these a more even triangle shape? Adjusted lol.
01:26:136 (1,2) - like in the beginning make the slider straight and center these? Same

[Hard]
00:13:011 (1,2,1) - the blanket here can be improved a bit Sure
00:30:121 (5,1) - same here, don't forget to fix the symmetry on the next slider if you change this Sure
01:03:636 (1,2) - center these? Naah, I dont think this will be neccesarry.

[Normal]
00:34:340 (1) - maybe too soon after the spinner? I think it's fine, BPM is pretty low and the Spinner long enough.
00:50:277 (3) - move 2nd node to x:196 y:63 for better blanketing Sure

[Easy]
01:18:168 - maybe put a slider to match the "yeaaaah" vocals? Ok, cool :>
That's it really

goodluck! I love this anime lol same huehue

Yasora wrote:

maybe swiming in tags should be swimming o3o

Weez wrote:

This song is soo damn catchy .__.
From #modreqs

[General]
- I don't know if its just me but the video and the music don't seem to be synced perfectly. The start with the claps and foot tap don't seems to mesh properly.... True, added -160 on the video offset.
- Add "Iwatobi Swim Club" to the tags since the English ver has it in the name. Sure

[Insane]
00:13:011 (1,2) - Not very good that its touching the HP bar, please move them down a bit. Fixed
00:24:261 (4,5,6) - This jump could flow better if you try this:

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basically at the ends of the 3 previous sliders. Fixed
00:37:152 - Why isn't this part mapped? You mapped this part 00:44:652 (4,5,6,7) why not have them the same.You can do a nice little jump here :O Alright ~
01:03:402 (7) - Add a circle here to complete the stream. No, I feel like the music ends where my stream ends xD
01:09:730 (6,1,2) - Fits the vocals much more better if you hit ctrl+G here and fix up the new combo, placement and hitsounds. So it should be like this: I prefer my version :>

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Best insane I've seen in awhile ._. nice Thanks a lot :3

[Hard]
00:37:152 - Same thing here just like the insane diff. Fixed!
01:01:761 (1) - I feel the spinner breaks the transition to the kiai time section. Consider changing this up please. Two possible solutions could be: Fixed ~

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or

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(go with the first one )

[Normal]
01:01:761 (1) - Make this start 1/1 later and place a circle at 01:01:761 Fixed

SPOILER

[Easy]
01:18:168 (3) - Consider adding a slider here to bridge the 2 parts together and to follow the "yeah" in the lyrics. Already fixed from above mod.

SPOILER

Thats all. You got an awesome mapset here and good luck with it too!!

Megurine Luka wrote:

M4M.

[General]

1. The official name is "SPLASH FREE" which as the video showed: Yow, fixed.
   
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   And I actually checked the capital letter is not due to the font as you can see:
   
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2. Why not add all five singers in the tag? You can copy mine XD Naah, maybe later xD I dont think it'll be helpful.
3. Insane diff has different countdown setting and tags. Check and fix Ooops I see you fixed it.

[E]

1. 00:09:965 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary. Used it in the other diffs aswell for the sake of color haxing.
2. 00:20:043 (2) - I think this can prolong to 00:20:746 sure
3. 00:23:793 (2) - ^ sure
4. 00:27:543 (2) - ^ sure
5. 01:04:340 (1) - too close to the spinner and I think it's not suitable for Easy players yea, true, fixed.
6. 01:27:074 (1) - spinner start from 01:26:840 Nope, it should be consistent through difficulties.

[N]

1. 01:27:074 (1) - same as E Same as for Easy.
   Nothing else to poke at

[H]

1. 00:21:215 (1) - I think a straight slider might be better I'll keep the curve for sake of flow.

[I]

1. 00:24:730 (6) - this hitsound sound strange for me :< I'd like to keep it since I hear the beat gets stronger here.
2. 00:31:996 (2) - It seems better if you move right a little bit true, fixed~
   
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3. 01:07:386 (5) - would be better if sure~
   
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4. 01:09:027 (3,4,5,6,1) - make a better star? Adjusted~
5. 01:11:136 (4) - this jump from 3 to 4 is too large imo I like the emphasize it gives for the KIAI, also I made it for the claps :>
6. 01:26:371 (2) - same as previous yep

done

YunoFanatic wrote:

DAMMIT ! FREE IS FOR GIRLS XD and they blushed...and i was like ....it will be fun too watch they say.. LOL, ok

Generals:
Circle colors should be preferable atleast like blue,light blue,dark blue, and (your choice) because it needs an matching with the tv sized map since its water (almost water) swimming anime i prefer this.. I made the colors to fit the video, I used the blue colors when the video starts to get related to water. But I adjusted the blue colors a bit.

Easy
If this going to be ranked i suggest easy has 1 or 2 stars atm..
00:30:121 i prefer deleting the NC because there is a spinner up a head it should work perfectly... That would not be consistent with the previous spots.
00:52:368 - 00:52:855 why u no insert an note atleast an slider For the sake of keeping the rhythm as easy as I can ;__;
00:56:136 - 00:56:605 ^ this clap sound is the best and why no notes.. Same

Non other less this is an okay diff! i like it

Normal
again if this going to be ranked i suggest normal has 3- 3.25 star I can't change this lol, but it's even shown as Normal, so it's fine :>
-i don like modding normal its just a waste and never be helpful

Hard
00:04:105 remove the slider and make it an spinner which ends in 00:05:277 Would be way too sudden in my opinion
00:37:152 (4) (5) remove it its better when a silent on that time.. I prefer to keep this, but I adjusted volume.
-wow i didnt expec this! i like your hard! Thanks!

Insane
i like your insane vewy much! looks like its ready for ranking! Thanks xD

Gabe wrote:

OMG ITS FREE

yes, it's free. gratuit. gratos.

MMzz wrote:

STARS FOR THE SWIMMING

RikiH_ wrote:

m4m \o/

Easy

00:47:465 (1) - Whistle in the end? good, added~
01:01:527 (3) - Clap? There's a clap in the song... I prefer to keep the upbeat pattern consistent since every beat sounds like a clap on this part.

Normal

00:23:793 (2) - Whistle+clap in the end like you did in 00:27:543 (2) (end) ? oops, added
00:48:636 (6) - Whistle? sure
01:01:527 (2,3) - Clap on both Same reason as above.

Hard

From 00:02:465 (1) to 00:17:465 - I'd put some whistles in this part, they would be nice to hear - This can be applied on Insane diff as well I didn't use many hitsounds on this part on purpose since I wanted to make it sound softer than the rest, I think this is good.
00:39:965 (1) - Clap at the beginning? Nope, I can't hear it in the music.
00:48:636 (7) - 256|228 and it will be in the perfect center fixed~
From 00:49:340 (1) to 00:56:371 - This part completely lacks of hitsounds... I used hitnormals like claps LOL, maybe this is why you think so.

Insane

00:11:371 (4) - Ok, jumps are allowed in Insanes but this is really odd imo... I'd put this in 428|112 hmm no, current plays more than fine

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I can't find major mistakes, your map is really good and should be bubbled

1. What? Kyoto Animation should be in tags, since you use their animation. You know, give some respect to these guys!
2. Some of your colours are too bright and may hurt players eye! Try to fade Colours 3,4 and 7 a bit. I think it will work better.
3. Video is a little bit late, isn't it? Just a little bit, I guess15-20ms ;_;

1. Reduce your HP Drain or add more beats to begining. So, HP Drain won't kill players even if they miss two beats. Really, those looong gaps will confuse beginners. And since rhythm is pretty hard for beginners (something different from 1/1 and 2/1 rhythm, you could reduce HP as well!)
2. 00:20:746 - 00:24:496 - 00:28:246 - I'd place here a circle. It may be a little bit hard for an [Easy] diff, but it will make rhythm more consistent and it fits here really good! Probably you should add claps on these beats.
   
   Pretty good diff, I don't really like your rhythm here but it's just me. You've made a great diff! it's hard to like something when you look at these guys in the swimming pool ._.

1. Well, same as on [Easy]! Reduce your HP Drain to make that intro/first part/whatever it is more passable. It's really hard to pass it if you make one or two miss and HP Drain s making me crazy like OMGIDON'TWANNAFAILHERE
   
2. 00:26:605 (1,2,3) - take a look at the video now. It'll be better we'll follow his moves! See what I've got. Sounds much better to me.
3. 00:44:652 - probably, you could place a slider here. That'd with with "feel the future" (or whatever they sing here) pretty good. Ignoring this part is fine, too but I think it's better to map it.
   
   Pretty hard for a [Normal], but that's fine. I like that diff!

1. 00:11:371 (3,4) - nazi - i know, that you're doing it for a cute triangle here, but it doesn't flow good. How about making something smoother here? I'm sure that you can make your flow much smoother by using somethnh like this.
2. 00:26:605 (1,2,3,4) - if yu agrred with my suggeastion on [Normal, you can apply the same rhythm here. If you didn't, try to use that pattern here. It will work pretty good, I promise!
3. 00:36:918 (3,4) - that distance is too low to be jump and too big to be regular spacing. Try to keep regular spacing here, since this par isn't jumpy at all or make DS bigger to make jump more jumpy understandable. o3o
4. 01:09:027 (3,1) - nazi - I'd change this slider to a better blanket-slider or make it something

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  Wow! Nothing to say! Really good job!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

[General]

1. What? Kyoto Animation should be in tags, since you use their animation. You know, give some respect to these guys! Sure
2. Some of your colours are too bright and may hurt players eye! Try to fade Colours 3,4 and 7 a bit. I think it will work better. Naah, I like them all :<
3. Video is a little bit late, isn't it? Just a little bit, I guess15-20ms ;_; Hmm, it's perfect for me xD

[Easy]

1. Reduce your HP Drain or add more beats to begining. So, HP Drain won't kill players even if they miss two beats. Really, those looong gaps will confuse beginners. And since rhythm is pretty hard for beginners (something different from 1/1 and 2/1 rhythm, you could reduce HP as well!)
2. 00:20:746 - 00:24:496 - 00:28:246 - I'd place here a circle. It may be a little bit hard for an [Easy] diff, but it will make rhythm more consistent and it fits here really good! Probably you should add claps on these beats. I know what you mean, but I don't want to use too much 1/2 rhythm here ~
   
   Pretty good diff, I don't really like your rhythm here but it's just me. You've made a great diff! it's hard to like something when you look at these guys in the swimming pool ._.

[Normal]

1. Well, same as on [Easy]! Reduce your HP Drain to make that intro/first part/whatever it is more passable. It's really hard to pass it if you make one or two miss and HP Drain s making me crazy like OMGIDON'TWANNAFAILHERE
   
2. 00:26:605 (1,2,3) - take a look at the video now. It'll be better we'll follow his moves! See what I've got. Sounds much better to me. Adjusted the pattern a bit :3
3. 00:44:652 - probably, you could place a slider here. That'd with with "feel the future" (or whatever they sing here) pretty good. Ignoring this part is fine, too but I think it's better to map it. I ignored the echo on purpose because I always did that on the easier diffs.
   
   Pretty hard for a [Normal], but that's fine. I like that diff!

[Hard]

1. 00:11:371 (3,4) - nazi - i know, that you're doing it for a cute triangle here, but it doesn't flow good. How about making something smoother here? I'm sure that you can make your flow much smoother by using somethnh like this. Sure, I like
2. 00:26:605 (1,2,3,4) - if yu agrred with my suggeastion on [Normal, you can apply the same rhythm here. If you didn't, try to use that pattern here. It will work pretty good, I promise! Sure, adjusted a bit ~
3. 00:36:918 (3,4) - that distance is too low to be jump and too big to be regular spacing. Try to keep regular spacing here, since this par isn't jumpy at all or make DS bigger to make jump more jumpy understandable. o3o True, fixed~
4. 01:09:027 (3,1) - nazi - I'd change this slider to a better blanket-slider or make it something alright

[Insane]

• 
  Wow! Nothing to say! Really good job! Whew, awesome. Thanks~

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Have your well-earned star! ~

Good luck!

LunarSakuya wrote:

SWIMMING

Gabe wrote:

why are you so fast o.o

LunarSakuya wrote:

Rebub, i want to go swim in a bathtub

UnderminE wrote:

slow down

Tsusuko wrote:

go go. i want more gay swimming this ranked

Konei wrote:

Tsusuko wrote:

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GAY SWIMMING