Natsu wrote:

Mmmm i think the correct tittle is Distance ~In your love~

http://www.tunesbaby.com/dm/?x=x8sbe0
http://blademp3.com/mp3/d1dc66_DISTANCE-In-Your-Love.html
http://www.lastfm.es/music/AOYAMA+MISAO/_/Distance+~In+Your+Love~

Im not very sure... but i think is the correct

kosiga wrote:

Natsu wrote:

Mmmm i think the correct tittle is Distance ~In your love~

http://www.tunesbaby.com/dm/?x=x8sbe0
http://blademp3.com/mp3/d1dc66_DISTANCE-In-Your-Love.html
http://www.lastfm.es/music/AOYAMA+MISAO/_/Distance+~In+Your+Love~

Im not very sure... but i think is the correct

maybe your link is correct in Distance ~In your love~. but It is different from Distance.

Distance ~In Your Love~ = Arrangement version of Distance. this⇒ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42122 ( My old map lol )

Distance = Original Song from slot machine "Osu! Banchou" Misao Big Bonus BGM. Play screen ⇒ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4bqsbt5p3A

These are separate songs!!

but the Internet seems to have some wrong information. It is necessary to listen, and to judge it by oneself about them.

and Kodora> Tags: playstation 2 ps2 - I thought that these were not necessary. because originally slot machine is not a game to play on the screen. ( ps2 etc. is a game to simulate ) It is a machine to play with the coin of actual. 　for ex slot machine play video　⇒ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjXJABwZsSc

1. 00:44:533 (1) - New combo unnecessary. Following your combo pattern before where you follow lyrics, this slider is still part of the previous word. If you're using new combo to denote slider velocity change, don't. Slider ticks and intuition should be enough to tell the difference; unless this is built like this to be consistent with another part of the map, please point that out.
2. 00:45:636 (1,2,3,4) - Much, much too loud. Considering the fact that your Kiai, the emphasized section of the song, is only 50%, this certainly shouldn't be any higher.

Kodora wrote:

fixed everything~

1. 00:18:724 (3,4,5,6) - the beat here is weird a bit due to the drum at 00:18:944 - , i would like to choose this:
   
2. 00:21:812 (1,2) - how about 3/4 + 1/2 sliders?
   
3. 00:28:871 (1,2,3,4) - try this shape?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:29:864 - and i think you can start the spinner from here
5. 01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks too narrow > >

1. 00:36:812 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g to (6,7), and then stack (8) to 56:120 for better flow?
2. 01:05:709 (1,2) - i suppose sliders are more suit to the white ticks here:>
   

1. 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the placement is too odd&linear here
2. 01:16:518 (1,2,3) - ^

Scorpiour wrote:

[alacat's Hard]

1. 00:36:812 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g to (6,7), and then stack (8) to 56:120 for better flow? ok~ nice :3
2. 01:05:709 (1,2) - i suppose sliders are more suit to the white ticks here:> put a sound here. 01:06:150 - like my pattern at 01:19:827 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:18:724 (3,4,5,6) - the beat here is weird a bit due to the drum at 00:18:944 - , i would like to choose this:
   yes, sounds better, applied
2. 00:21:812 (1,2) - how about 3/4 + 1/2 sliders? sorry, i prefer leave 1 long slider with loud tick because it sounds better for me (i focused on guiter here). And those change will take a lot of placement work >_>
   
3. 00:28:871 (1,2,3,4) - try this shape? hm, sorry, no, it may confuse imo because they have same distance between not same beats
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:29:864 - and i think you can start the spinner from here good, applied
5. 01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks too narrow > > usual 2 notes, whats wrong here o.o

[Normal]

1. 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the placement is too odd&linear here hhhh. really do not want remake it but fixed >_>
2. 01:16:518 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Kodora ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:15:636 - The stream sound really noisy,50% volume is fine IMO. decreased to 65%, this stream must be highlighted
2. 00:15:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit ugly,try make more curved. fixed
3. 00:19:386 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary. fixed
4. 00:20:268 (1) - ^ fixed
5. 00:31:959 - Remove finish and Add clap to here,sound much better. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:32:400 - You are forgot Add finish to here. added
2. 00:52:253 - Add a note,soumd much better. added added
3. 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this.
   

FINALLY best suggestion for this part, applied

Nor bad map for beginner, Call me back ~

Miya wrote:

Advice to Kodora : Next time, be sure to dont forget set your SV on your Insane