Rita - Alicemagic ~TV animation ver.~ · forum

Heanday

Joined December 2012

Heanday 2013-05-12T20:03:48+00:00

* Suggestion

Hi

[Normal]

Nothing to say, perfect hitsong too *-*

[pkhg's Hard]

00:41:121 (4) - I think a little sldier sounds better http://puu.sh/2S8IL.jpg

02:30:097 (1,2) - Well, i like all of you're patern, but this one, no *-*

03:25:398 (5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly

( not uncomfortable to play ! just Ugly

)

Wonderful map, good job *-*

[Insane]

! ! !

00:05:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yeah ! I like it, but i almost fall off my chair ! What about change it 00:05:699 (2,3) - By a slid ?

01:40:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I LOOOOVEEE this part, just something wrong ( for me ) 01:43:109 (1,2) - this *-*, the position of the second slider is uncomfortable for me ( and i played it a lot

)

02:46:362 (2,3) - What about put the circle n°2 on the slid n°4, their sounds are differents, seems strange for me to pack them

04:07:506 (3) - it don't deserve to be packed too !

Well short mod, but nothing to say, perfect map, love Frostmourne

Star~

Mythol

1,420 posts

Joined March 2011

Mythol 2013-05-13T02:35:08+00:00

Hi Frost ^^

[Normal]
I think you should remove all the whistles where you have whistle + finish, the finish sounds clouded and unclean for the normal diff ;_;
00:28:470 (2) - How about change 2 and 3 like this?

I feel it fits much better

00:47:988 (3) - Shorten it? I think it should end on the drum beat instead (add clap on end if you do)
00:55:579 (3,1) - lol what is this so weird

try this ._.

00:59:554 (3) - The repeat here doesn't follow anything in the song, so remove the repeat and add a 1/1 slider after it? (on the big white tick)
01:03:350 - Add 1/1 slider here
01:17:988 (2) - Extend it to the white tick? follows the drums and voice this way o:
02:21:422 (2,1) - Use slider here? I think 2 notes like this is hard to hit
02:43:289 (1) - Start this on 02:43:470 instead? I think it fits the vocals better (shorten it too of course)
02:48:892 (1,2) - Same as before change it to a slider, but maybe players know the beat now
03:04:976 (2,3) - Should follow the main guitar here, so try remove 2 + 3 and add 1/1 slider from 03:05:157
03:10:759 (2) - Remove it and add repeat on 03:09:856 (1) follows the guitar much better
03:38:229 (1) - End it on 03:38:771

I think rhythm needs some work ;_; but this should help a lot

[Hard]
00:29:735 (4) - Try clap instead of whistle? sounds nice

00:39:494 (3) - Whistle on start
00:52:145 (2) - Clap start
00:53:229 (1) - Change the whistle to a finish!
00:55:217 (5) - Remove whistle start?
01:04:795 (1) - Change whistle to finish?
01:07:326 (1) - ^ for repeat
01:10:398 (4) - Remove the whistle
01:40:940 (3) - Finish
02:03:530 (7) - Clap
02:10:579 - I want some kind of beat here

02:14:554 (6,7) - Where did hitsounds go!? clap on start of 6 and whistles on 7 start + end

02:15:639 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
02:27:205 (1) - ^
02:30:097 (1) - ^
02:32:807 (1) - ^
02:35:880 (6) - ^ also NC
03:03:350 (1) - ^
03:03:711 (2) - Finish
03:08:048 (8) - Change the end to a clap
03:08:952 (1) - Finish not clap
03:17:627 (3) - Finish
03:20:518 (1) - Finish
03:22:868 (8) - Finish
03:25:398 (5,6,8) - Change this to a 5 note stream? its so weird now ._.
03:26:121 (9) - Clap
04:01:181 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
04:11:844 (7) - Change whistle to clap?

Great~

[Insane]
00:30:097 - Change it to 45% or 50% volume here its so quiet ._.
01:16:542 (1) - Try stacking it on 01:17:446 (2) for jump

01:52:506 - 45%/50% vol
02:26:482 - Why ignore this beat? make triple here D: it doesn't follow vocal or drum.. I'm not sure why its not a triple ._.
02:48:350 (1) - Whistle?
03:18:169 - Add something here D:
03:32:988 (3) - Remove NC
03:37:506 (2) - NC here instead of that note before

Also great~

Go henthai Frost /o/

yoshilove

yoshilove 2013-05-13T19:25:06+00:00

[regenz's Easy]
02:25:753 (3) - slider end 02:26:476

1

A rhythm is somewhat difficult.

[Normal]
00:52:500 - Add circle???? (I think that it is intentionally. )
02:14:910 - ^
02:34:066 - ^

[pkhg's Hard]
03:02:440 (6,7,8) - Is it intentionally? (03:02:530 (7) prev:0.22x next:0.31x)

1

2 (no gridsnap)

Please use, if good.

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[Insane]
nice~

nice mapset!
ganbatte~

Alicemagic <3

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

Frostmourne 2013-05-13T20:46:36+00:00

Done !
Thank you Heanday, Mythol, yoshilove \:D/

Normal was remapped already ._.

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-05-14T03:57:11+00:00

http://puu.sh/2T5oT.rar

ทำไมภาพเป็นโคมาริไปละจิ๊บ
คิดว่าไอ้ข้างบนไม่น่ามีเสียงผิดละนะทวนไปสามรอบละ
มีม๊อดเข้าก็เรียกละกันถ้าไม่ว่างยาวๆจะให้แก้เองโลด เดี๋ยวบอกเอง

no fix were made in previous modder ( I think it's fit more If it's blanket)

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

Frostmourne 2013-05-14T11:45:26+00:00

regenz wrote:
http://puu.sh/2T5oT.rar

ทำไมภาพเป็นโคมาริไปละจิ๊บ
คิดว่าไอ้ข้างบนไม่น่ามีเสียงผิดละนะทวนไปสามรอบละ
มีม๊อดเข้าก็เรียกละกันถ้าไม่ว่างยาวๆจะให้แก้เองโลด เดี๋ยวบอกเอง

no fix were made in previous modder ( I think it's fit more If it's blanket)

ภาพโคมาริสวยกว่ามาก เลยเอามาแทนริน (ถ้าพี่บอมมีภาพรินแนวๆนี้ส่งมาโลด ต้องการอย่างด่วน ขอเป็นอนิเมเวอร์ชั่นด้วย)
กำพี่บอมตลก แล้วเอาดิฟ pkgh มาให้ผมทามมายย

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-05-14T14:47:43+00:00

อ้าวหรอ 555 กดคลิกผิดดิฟ

osu file format v12

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Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-05-14T15:08:45+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• I don't really like your BG, is too simple and "empty", I'm sure that you can find a better one to use.
• Combo color 1 and 3 are almost identical, replace the first one with a light green/yellow/blue.
• Sometimes volume gets too low, try to not reduce it too much. (keep it always <40%)

regenz's Easy

• HP Drain Rate: 2 (or 3)
• 00:04:067 (1) - If I were you I'd end this spinner at 00:06:958 like frost did in Normal.
• 00:24:307 (1,2) - Make the same previous pattern to keep a consistency:
SPOILER
• 00:30:813 (1,2) - Try this: (you can also add a circle at 00:30:813 if you want to)
SPOILER
• 00:39:488 (2) - Start this slider 1/1 earlier.
• 00:47:801 (1,2,3) - Delete all this stuff and add a 1/1 repeating slider like you did at 00:42:018.
• 00:50:332 (1) - End this spinner at 00:53:223.
• 01:16:356 (4,1) - I don't really like this pattern, try to make a better flow:
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• 01:20:512 (1) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 01:20:332.
• 01:21:777 (2,1) - End (2) 1/1 earlier and add a repeat, then start (1) 1/2 later.
• 01:38:042 (4) - Delete this circle and start the next spinner here.

Normal

• HP Drain Rate: 4
• 00:09:850 (1) - End this slider 1/1 earlier and add a repeat, such a long slider doesn't really fit here imo. (I noticed that you did this not only here but in some next patterns as well, why? You can feel that something is missing, the rhythm you are using is "weird")
• 00:11:657 (3,4,5) - Try this:
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• 00:53:223 (1) - This new combo is not really necessary, remove it.
• 00:55:934 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier.
• 01:03:344 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:03:886.
• 01:20:512 (1,2) - Try this pattern:
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• 02:15:633 (1) - Same as 00:53:223.
• 02:25:753 (x) - Same as 01:03:344.
• 02:34:066 (x) - Add a circle.
• 02:35:874 (2) - Delete this circle and start the next spinner here.
• 03:13:826 (1) - Start this slider 1/1 later and add a circle at 03:13:826.
• 03:15:091 (1) - Uh... why this spinner? Delete it.
• 03:36:777 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 03:37:139.

pkhg's Hard

• 00:29:187 (3) - Convert this slider in 3 1/2 circles.
• 00:52:681 (5) - If you want to use 1/4 at 00:52:139 (2,3,4) then use 1/4 here too to keep a consistency.
• 01:17:259 (1) - Move this circle at x:356 y:60.
• 02:37:500 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier like you did at 01:15:000 (1).
• 04:23:946 (8,9) - Don't stack these circles, move (9) at x:152 y:144.

Insane

• HP Drain Rate: 7
• Why you didn't add any breaks? I know that this is an Insane but should add at least 1, it allows a bit of recovery and hand repositioning.
• 00:37:320 (5) - Why are you using these red slider points? This slider right now looks horrible D:
• 01:58:283 (1,2) - I don't like this pattern, try a different spacing:
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Hard and Insane are both really nice, however Easy and Normal can be improved a lot more.

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

Frostmourne 2013-05-14T17:21:37+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• I don't really like your BG, is too simple and "empty", I'm sure that you can find a better one to use. Thing is I can't ;_; because I want to make it simply and fit the name "Alicemagic" , something moe with many girls there wouldn't fit the music much. Also this BG fits well with the song technically if you see the ED of this song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cBnOdtuvokI
• Combo color 1 and 3 are almost identical, replace the first one with a light green/yellow/blue. I don't really want to distract the feeling with the BG (like something too bright on the evening sky) I hope you understand me for it orz.. and I think these colors are really easy to be read in dim100%
• Sometimes volume gets too low, try to not reduce it too much. (keep it always <40%) I'm going to fix them all now \:D/
Normal
For this diff, I mainly focus on vocal so they might look bad sometimes but if as you see, they follow music strictly, I hope some points that I didn't fix because I don't want to lose the general idea "mainly follow vocal"
Another thing is I dare to follow vocal because Easy diff exists, I think some people might enjoy playing the normal in this way.
So it won't be anything confusing after some retries because it follows the music \o/.
• HP Drain Rate: 4 done
• 00:09:850 (1) - End this slider 1/1 earlier and add a repeat, such a long slider doesn't really fit here imo. (I noticed that you did this not only here but in some next patterns as well, why? You can feel that something is missing, the rhythm you are using is "weird")
yeah, I hope I improved something right now for the first part here to 00:30:091 (1) -
• 00:11:657 (3,4,5) - Try this: I don't understand the screenshot, nvm me orz... btw, I improved something so it might be legit now
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• 00:53:223 (1) - This new combo is not really necessary, remove it. done
• 00:55:934 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier. done , and fixed some stuffs after that too
• 01:03:344 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:03:886. would like to reject because it against the way I follow the vocal sorry xxheroxx ._.
• 01:20:512 (1,2) - Try this pattern:
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I changed accordingly
• 02:15:633 (1) - Same as 00:53:223. done
• 02:25:753 (x) - Same as 01:03:344. same..
• 02:34:066 (x) - Add a circle. ^ same as above since I tried to avoid following other things than vocal, hope you understand me D:"
• 02:35:874 (2) - Delete this circle and start the next spinner here. I made something different , I ended the slider at 02:36:597 and add a spinner on 02:37:320 (1) - to follow the vocal
• 03:13:826 (1) - Start this slider 1/1 later and add a circle at 03:13:826. I think the current is fine :\ because it follows the drum with guitar perfectly. What I'm trying to do here is to avoid some gap to make it less confusing or I did change but I forgot, probably
• 03:15:091 (1) - Uh... why this spinner? Delete it. Guitar leading \:D////////////////////////////
• 03:36:777 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 03:37:139. would like to avoid it because of the same mentioned thing. I would like to follow the vocal much more hope you understand ;_;'
Insane

• HP Drain Rate: 7
• Why you didn't add any breaks? I know that this is an Insane but should add at least 1, it allows a bit of recovery and hand repositioning.
These two things are being balanced each other, I use HP 6 because the song has no break. That's my personal logic hehe
• 00:37:320 (5) - Why are you using these red slider points? This slider right now looks horrible D: NOOOOO.. but fixed in my way (it will correspond with 00:37:862 (6) - )
• 01:58:283 (1,2) - I don't like this pattern, try a different spacing: did reshape a bit but won't bother changing spacing because it's the way I intentionally did it.
SPOILER
Hard and Insane are both really nice, however Easy and Normal can be improved a lot more.

Thank you xxheroxx for modding very much \:D/ !!!!!!! updated

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-05-14T17:22:43+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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regenz's Easy

• HP Drain Rate: 2 (or 3) use 2
• 00:04:067 (1) - If I were you I'd end this spinner at 00:06:958 like frost did in Normal. done and remove return form slider
• 00:24:307 (1,2) - Make the same previous pattern to keep a consistency: i don't want it duplicate pattern so often
SPOILER
• 00:30:813 (1,2) - Try this: (you can also add a circle at 00:30:813 if you want to) < It'll be same as next pattern if i did
SPOILER
• 00:39:488 (2) - Start this slider 1/1 earlier. < same as above i want made it varies and this song is 4 min plus+
• 00:47:801 (1,2,3) - Delete all this stuff and add a 1/1 repeating slider like you did at 00:42:018. < same as above
• 00:50:332 (1) - End this spinner at 00:53:223. < end at 00:52:500 instead
• 01:16:356 (4,1) - I don't really like this pattern, try to make a better flow:
SPOILER
< change but not same
• 01:20:512 (1) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 01:20:332. < I want to start the slider at cymbal sound.
• 01:21:777 (2,1) - End (2) 1/1 earlier and add a repeat, then start (1) 1/2 later.< same as above
• 01:38:042 (4) - Delete this circle and start the next spinner here.
the current sound better sorry

Red Not fix don't agree
Blue Fix totaly agree
Green Partial fix , Fix some but not all not same

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 02 - Alicemagic.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77259
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Alicemagic
TitleUnicode:Alicemagic
Artist:Rita
ArtistUnicode:Rita
Creator:Frostmourne
Version:regenz's Easy
Source:Little Busters!
Tags:pkhg regenz key
BeatmapID:251446
BeatmapSetID:82612

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
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[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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256,192,192018,12,4,194729,0:0:0:0:
68,188,203585,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,56,204127,2,0,P|164:80|196:136,1,140,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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344,100,207922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,208645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,56,210813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,184,211536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,208,213524,2,0,L|300:208,1,175,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,44,215151,6,0,L|264:44,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,84,216416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,172,216777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,252,217139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,324,217862,6,0,P|332:344|388:320,1,105,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,218765,2,0,P|376:192|360:116,2,140
244,148,220753,6,0,L|128:148,1,105,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,221657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,320,222380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,300,223103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,44,225994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,136,226717,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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316,308,228524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,248,228886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,236,231054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,356,231777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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372,276,236657,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,188,237018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2013-05-14T22:28:03+00:00

I guess this title is wrong.

http://www.litbus-anime.com/visual/

from wikipedia

title: Alicemagic ～TV animation ver.～
romanised title: Alicemagic ~TV animation ver.~

"Alicemagic" is original song title and that come from visual novel. so should add ~TV animation ver.~.

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-14T22:31:56+00:00

Thank you NewRulerNA , I was worried about it too , gonna change it accordingly

EDIT: changed

indyinyou

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indyinyou 2013-05-17T02:29:16+00:00

Hi xD

[Normal]

Try add slidertick like this http://puu.sh/2V156

ตามจริง มีสไลติก ก้น่าจะลองใช้สักหน่อยนะ

เสียง soft-hitwhistle3 ผมไม่ได้ใช้ของจิ๊บนะ ผมว่าลองใช้อันนี้ดีกว่า

(ไม่ได้ทำเต็มเพลงนะ ลองวิชาเฉยๆ ทำแค่ ไคเดียว เพิ่่งไปเห็นว่าโน๊ตตามเสียงร้องกลัวมันไม่เข้า

)

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-18T14:09:20+00:00

indyinyou wrote:
Hi xD

[Normal]

Try add slidertick like this http://puu.sh/2V156

ตามจริง มีสไลติก ก้น่าจะลองใช้สักหน่อยนะ

เสียง soft-hitwhistle3 ผมไม่ได้ใช้ของจิ๊บนะ ผมว่าลองใช้อันนี้ดีกว่า

(ไม่ได้ทำเต็มเพลงนะ ลองวิชาเฉยๆ ทำแค่ ไคเดียว เพิ่่งไปเห็นว่าโน๊ตตามเสียงร้องกลัวมันไม่เข้า )

ผมว่ามันแปลกๆนะ แต่ก็ขอบคุณครับ

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

pkhg's Hard

• 00:29:187 (3) - Convert this slider in 3 1/2 circles. used 1 slider and 1 note
• 00:52:681 (5) - If you want to use 1/4 at 00:52:139 (2,3,4) then use 1/4 here too to keep a consistency. no need imo because it's somewhat awkward feeling in Hard diff, not all stream must exist in the place for hard diff
• 01:17:259 (1) - Move this circle at x:356 y:60. for?... as I saw it was arranged well in every point so I am not going to change this
• 02:37:500 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier like you did at 01:15:000 (1). done
• 04:23:946 (8,9) - Don't stack these circles, move (9) at x:152 y:144. done

I fix'd hard diff by myself because pkhg is busy.

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-05-19T07:36:47+00:00

[General]

Nothing to point out

[Easy]
What's the point of having this green line if it just a spinner?
03:02:803 -
03:02:984 -

00:40:575 (3) - the slidertick hitsound should be at the second tick to make it consistent and follow the song. N:C2 at 00:40:936 - N:C1 at 00:41:117
01:09:490 (3) - make a better blanket here.
SPOILER
01:21:779 (2) - ^
SPOILER
01:31:538 (1) - ^
SPOILER
03:03:346 (1) - this slider doesn't looks smooth and it's kinda ugly x) try change shape?
the last kiai seems more quiet then the other kiai.it feels like you didn't map it like before, get bored or something? xD

[Normal]
What's the point of having this green line if it just a spinner?
03:02:803 -
03:02:984 -

01:27:020 (1) - make it curve so it flows well with the direction.
SPOILER
03:15:093 (1) - delete this spinner ? just let the break starts from here would be better

[Hard]

01:34:430 (8) - make it curve,so it will be good with the flow to the next slider.
SPOILER
03:07:141 (5) - add a circle to follow the guitar
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:15:454 (5) - this is covered by the hitburst.it's kinda hard to notice. :3
01:08:948 (4,1) - this combination sounds weird actually x)
01:31:538 (4) - move it here so it will be a star? current star looks a little ugly
SPOILER
02:53:587 (2) - move 2 left grid,become better star pattern.
SPOILER
03:14:822 (1) - delete and let break starts here would be better i think

Metro

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Metro 2013-05-19T14:32:09+00:00

feed me kudosu I'm a hungry kudosu monster

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-19T14:35:06+00:00

Metro wrote:
feed me kudosu I'm a hungry kudosu monster

log

20:24 Metro: spacing is always 1x
20:24 Metro: I don't need to check it right
20:24 Frostmourne: yea
20:24 Frostmourne: maybe just some complicated rhythm
20:24 Frostmourne: but I tried to follow vocal
20:24 Frostmourne: on every point as much as possible
20:25 Metro: that's fine I saw how it's mapped
20:25 Frostmourne: it's what I keep in mind it's music game
20:25 Metro: personally
20:25 Metro: I believe that
20:25 Metro: easy and normal diff
20:25 Metro: are just introductory to the game
20:25 Metro: so in easy and normal diff
20:26 Metro: which shouldn't have a difficulty gap
20:26 Metro: my standards are no return sliders with more than 1 return because players will fuck up
20:26 Metro: and if possible no stacking at all
20:26 Frostmourne: your 1st standard
20:26 Frostmourne: is same as me
20:26 Frostmourne: I won't make any that return slider
20:26 Frostmourne: if it's not long enough
20:26 Frostmourne: I mean when it's long, it's easier to read
20:26 Metro: yeah I saw all return sliders are with 1 return
20:27 Metro: so they're ok
20:27 Frostmourne: but for stacking , sometimes I struggled to find out solutions
20:27 Frostmourne: better positions, somehow I don't want to stack though
20:27 Frostmourne: it's confusing
20:27 Metro: if you don't want to stack
20:27 Metro: you can abuse sliders
20:27 Metro: 00:23:406 (4,5) -
20:27 Metro: convert to slider
20:28 Frostmourne: for 1/2 stack, do you think it's ok ?
20:28 Frostmourne: like it can be guessed easier
20:28 Frostmourne: more than 1 beat stack
20:28 Frostmourne: because it's what people might be used to it
20:28 Metro: personally I don't agree with stacking anything
20:28 Metro: in easy normal
20:29 Metro: my reasoning is
20:29 Metro: ppl who are new to the game but new to rhythm games
20:29 Metro: will probably need to play easy
20:29 Frostmourne: yea
20:29 Metro: and ppl who have some experience in other games might just go straight to normal
20:29 Metro: so these two diffs should have no complexity at all
20:29 Metro: they're just meant to be introductory
20:29 Frostmourne: I get your point totally
20:29 Metro: when they want to get better they play hards
20:30 Frostmourne: hard is pleasant, Insane is somehow exhausting
20:30 Frostmourne: because it has no break , that's what I am worried
20:30 Metro: ok we'll see about insane later
20:30 Metro: can you work something in 00:23:406 (4,5) -
20:30 Frostmourne: it should be fine actually
20:30 Metro: just make a slider
20:31 Frostmourne: done
20:33 Metro: 00:36:237 (1,2,3) -
20:33 Metro: this pattern might be a bit too hard
20:34 Frostmourne: I'm thinking of another solution here too
20:34 Metro: I would make 1 2 a small slider
20:34 Metro: without connecting it to 3
20:34 Metro: 1-2 same slider as 3
20:35 Frostmourne: should be something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764872
20:36 Metro: n
20:36 Metro: sec
20:36 Metro: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764876
20:36 Metro: 00:38:767 (1,2) - small slider
20:37 Metro: 00:47:442 (1,2) - small slider
20:38 Frostmourne: done
20:38 Metro: 01:09:671 (3) - no return and 01:10:755 (1) - small slider
20:39 Metro: 01:17:984 (2) - convert to circle and 01:18:526 (3) - small slider
20:39 Metro: 01:29:550 (1) - convert to circle and 01:30:093 (2) - small slider
20:40 Metro: 01:33:888 (3) - no return and 01:34:792 (1) - small slider
20:40 Metro: no
20:40 Metro: forget it
20:40 Metro: next one can't do that
20:40 Metro: lemme think
20:41 Metro: well
20:41 Metro: you can do that and then stack will stay
20:41 Metro: it's a little bit less stacks that way
20:41 Metro: but the next one01:36:237 (6,7) -
20:41 Metro: can't do anything about it
20:41 Metro: must stay as it is to follow vocals
20:42 Frostmourne: I think people will learn
20:42 Frostmourne: because it's based by music
20:42 Metro: eah
20:42 Metro: 01:38:587 (3) - delete
20:42 Frostmourne: won't feel empty ?
20:42 Metro: and make 01:37:864 (2) - longer
20:42 Frostmourne: or end the slider at that circle
20:42 Frostmourne: ohhh
20:42 Metro: you added difficulty there
20:42 Metro: as in your insanes
20:42 Metro:

20:43 Frostmourne: done
20:43 Metro: when modding normal I always try to tone everything down
20:43 Metro: 01:50:876 (1) -
20:43 Metro: here
20:43 Metro: I know you didn't map right after spinner due to difficulty
20:43 Metro: which I agree
20:43 Metro: but maybe you could make spinner shorter
20:44 Metro: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764887
20:44 Metro: end it in the tick I'm standing at
20:44 Metro: and then start mapping to the vocals?
20:45 Metro: somethign like this
20:45 Frostmourne: ehh..
20:45 Metro: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764891
20:45 Metro: only look at top, didn't place object properly
20:45 Frostmourne: for that one , maybe it's the end of guitar and it has clash sound
20:45 Metro: you can remove clash sound
20:45 Frostmourne: so that's why I don't want to lose it
20:45 Frostmourne: somehow
20:46 Frostmourne: oh
20:46 Frostmourne: that might work
20:46 Frostmourne: let me try it
20:46 Metro: go
20:46 Frostmourne: ok
20:46 Frostmourne: it works
20:46 Frostmourne: done
20:47 Frostmourne: actually finish can start on the point you are standing too
20:47 Frostmourne: 01:57:924 (5) - done unstacking this btw
20:48 Metro: ok
20:48 Metro: after spinner
20:48 Metro: I would do this
20:48 Metro: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764897
20:48 Metro: 01:57:924 (5) - unstack
20:48 Metro: move somewhere else
20:48 Metro: 02:01:177 (1,2) - convert to slider
20:49 Frostmourne: done
20:49 Metro: mmm
20:49 Metro: 02:20:334 (3) -
20:49 Metro: looking at this part
20:50 Metro: thinking that here we can't get out of circle+slider
20:50 Metro: but thinking that maybe
20:50 Metro: in this part and the ones before we couldn't get out
20:50 Metro: instead of stacking
20:50 Metro: we could have circle+slider but with ds 1.0
20:51 Frostmourne: all done
20:51 Metro: great
20:51 Metro: 02:26:478 (2) - here I'm concerned about flow
20:51 Metro: why not
20:51 Metro: ctrl+j
20:52 Frostmourne: fixed
20:53 Metro: this is what concerned me the most
20:53 Metro: 02:48:888 (1,2,3) -
20:53 Metro: first
20:53 Metro: I just noticed 3 has wrong spacing
20:54 Frostmourne: use 1 2 as a slider instead?
20:54 Frostmourne: and then 1.0x on 3 and 4
20:54 Metro: well
20:54 Metro: 1.0x on 3 and 4 yes
20:54 Metro: but not sure about 1 2 as slider
20:54 Metro: it's 2 1/2 circles
20:54 Metro: good to change style a little bit
20:54 Metro: seems that what bothered me is the spacing
20:55 Metro: 02:55:394 (2,3) -
20:55 Metro: convert to slider
20:55 Metro: 02:55:394 (2,3) - 02:58:647 (3,4) - 1.0 ds
20:56 Frostmourne: maybe
20:56 Frostmourne: keep stacking
20:56 Frostmourne: as 01:34:792 (1,2,3,4) - do?
20:56 Frostmourne: people might recognize it in this way
20:56 Frostmourne: and this is consistent
20:56 Frostmourne: just only this one
20:56 Frostmourne: I mean, the very end of the kiai
20:57 Metro: oh you left those stacked
20:57 Frostmourne: yea
20:57 Frostmourne: just only that
20:57 Frostmourne: others were done
20:57 Metro: its ok
20:57 Frostmourne: maybe it's what we should spice up
20:57 Frostmourne: just slightly
20:57 Metro: 03:04:068 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is too hard
20:57 Metro: this is what worried me
20:57 Frostmourne: I think so
20:57 Metro: I'd convert 2 3 to slider
20:57 Frostmourne: it's what didn't present through the song so far
20:57 Frostmourne: done
20:57 Metro: yup
20:58 Metro: 03:10:755 (2,3) - same
20:58 Metro: 03:23:587 (1) -
20:59 Metro: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764923
20:59 Frostmourne: done
20:59 Metro: 03:27:562 (2,3,4,5) -
20:59 Metro: I would
20:59 Metro: 2 3 small slider 4 5 small slider with repeat
21:00 Metro: tail of 03:28:466 (5) - would be a circle
21:01 Metro: want picture?
21:02 Frostmourne: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764932
21:02 Frostmourne: this one alexs?
21:02 Metro: yes
21:04 Metro: 04:20:334 (4,5) - ds 1.0
21:04 Metro: and we're done
21:05 Frostmourne: done
21:06 Metro: update so I can take a look
21:06 Frostmourne: updated
21:07 Frostmourne: sorry alexs
21:07 Frostmourne: update again
21:07 Metro: 00:10:575 (2) -
21:07 Metro: missing a circle
21:07 Frostmourne: I did something wrong
21:07 Frostmourne: yea
21:07 Metro: it's alex btw
21:07 Frostmourne: forgot..
21:07 Frostmourne: I don't know
21:08 Frostmourne: why I got that "s"
21:08 Frostmourne: sry
21:08 Metro: np
21:08 Metro: ok circle still missing in this v
21:08 Metro: make sure u add it
21:09 Metro: 00:47:803 (2,3) - ds 1.0
21:10 Frostmourne: k
21:13 Metro: 04:07:683 (2,3) -
21:13 Frostmourne: hard right?
21:13 Metro: maybe the positioning of these 2 circles is boring
21:13 Metro: make them more rounded
21:13 Frostmourne: ohh
21:13 Metro: no
21:13 Metro: like 3 below 2
21:13 Metro: a bit more down
21:13 Metro: so it's curved
21:14 Metro: 04:09:309 (5,6) - ds 1.0
21:14 Metro: and done
21:15 *Metro is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/251446 Rita - Alicemagic ~TV animation ver.~ [regenz's Easy]]
21:15 Metro: 00:18:888 (2) - NO
21:15 Metro: 00:21:779 (2) - NO
21:15 Frostmourne: that's guest diff
21:15 Frostmourne: can't do anything
21:15 Metro: he's your friend tell him no more than 1 repeat ESPECIALLY in easy
21:15 Metro: or do you want me to write a post
21:15 Frostmourne: dw
21:15 Frostmourne: I will tell him
21:15 Frostmourne: to almostly remap
21:15 Frostmourne: or something
21:16 Metro: no
21:16 Metro: map is not bad
21:16 Metro: but no more than 1 repeat
21:16 Frostmourne: I see
21:17 Metro: 00:42:020 (2) -
21:18 Frostmourne: how was that
21:18 Frostmourne: btw, I will speak to him
21:18 Metro: same
21:18 Frostmourne: so no worry about it
21:18 Metro: repeat slider
21:19 Metro: 00:59:008 (1) -
21:19 Metro: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764970
21:19 Metro: much better
21:20 Metro: 01:09:490 (3) - 2 repeat
21:20 Frostmourne: don't worry alex
21:20 Frostmourne: I will clear these out
21:20 Frostmourne: I may ask hime
21:20 Metro: ok
21:20 Frostmourne: him* for a permission first
21:20 Frostmourne: and then I will slightly remap
21:21 Metro: 01:31:538 (1) -
21:21 Metro: this slider makes no sense
21:21 Metro: musically
21:21 Frostmourne: I am ok with it
21:21 Frostmourne: first hits the guitar
21:21 Frostmourne: 2nd hits finish
21:21 Frostmourne: 3 hits clap
21:21 Frostmourne: but that makes a bit strange
21:22 Metro: I don't like it
21:22 Metro: it's correct but I just don't like it
21:22 Metro: 3 return sliders in a row
21:22 Frostmourne: oh.. I see
21:22 Frostmourne: 3 return sliders is something I really like
21:22 Frostmourne: maybe different taste
21:23 Metro: 02:11:297 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764979
21:23 Metro: but after that you need to add some circle/s
21:23 Frostmourne: that's what I will do too
21:23 Frostmourne: yea I see
21:23 Frostmourne: it follows vocal
21:23 Frostmourne: much better
21:25 Metro: 02:37:322 (2) -
21:25 Metro: see this part
21:25 Metro: after that note
21:25 Metro: there's a spinner
21:25 Metro: but the notes after it are too close
21:25 Metro: 02:37:322 (1) - I would make this a spinner
21:26 Frostmourne: actually deleting this note 02:40:575 (1) -
21:26 Frostmourne: still sounds fine
21:26 Metro: 02:39:671 and start mapping from there
21:26 Metro: this is the same as in ur normal
21:26 Metro: so vocals can be mapped
21:26 Metro: feels really weird when vocals are not mapped
21:26 Frostmourne: oh
21:26 Frostmourne: I get your point now
21:27 Frostmourne: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/764987
21:27 Frostmourne: similar to this?
21:27 Metro: yes
21:27 Metro: bridge part very well mapped
21:28 Metro: 03:27:924 (2,3) -
21:28 Metro: 03:30:815 (2,3) -
21:28 Metro: why did he start mapping so boringly
21:28 Metro: instead of just doing the same as he did
21:28 Metro: this part is so boring
21:28 Frostmourne: for the sake of reducing the difficulty I guess
21:28 Frostmourne: it should be something like this on easy one
21:28 Metro: at the end of the map? :/
21:29 Metro: ok
21:29 Frostmourne: I will conclude
21:29 Metro: 03:56:659 (2,3) - too hard rhythm
21:29 Frostmourne: and tell him about it
21:29 Metro: 03:57:562 (4,1,2) -
21:29 Metro: too hard rhythm
21:29 Frostmourne: use that
21:30 Frostmourne: as a short slider
21:30 Frostmourne: fine?
21:30 Metro: sure
21:30 Metro: but rhythm can be mapped differently and that's it
21:30 Frostmourne: yea
21:30 Metro: done

Metro, I really appreciate you so much ! , really thank you for awesome modding for normal diff

~~gonna check HeatKai mod~~

HeatKai wrote:
[General]

[Normal]
What's the point of having this green line if it just a spinner? They were copied from Insane when it has notes, removed
03:02:803 -
03:02:984 -
01:27:020 (1) - make it curve so it flows well with the direction. It doesn't feel better imo , having a linear slider and then curved slider would look better to me
SPOILER
03:15:093 (1) - delete this spinner ? just let the break starts from here would be better many mods complained about it so ok, removed
[Hard]
01:34:430 (8) - make it curve,so it will be good with the flow to the next slider. done
SPOILER
03:07:141 (5) - add a circle to follow the guitar if I added this , this one should be added too 03:05:695 for consistency so I still keep it because it's now following on drum
SPOILER
I have a permission to fix this for pkhg so I did for him.

[Insane]
[list][*]00:15:454 (5) - this is covered by the hitburst.it's kinda hard to notice. :3 it's not that hard since that direction would be the most intuitive point as I can think of really
[*]01:08:948 (4,1) - this combination sounds weird actually x) but I guess it follows drum accordingly
[*]01:31:538 (4) - move it here so it will be a star? current star looks a little ugly I think it's fine actually , players can't even notice with while playing with such bpm I think
SPOILER
[*]02:53:587 (2) - move 2 left grid,become better star pattern. done
SPOILER
[*]03:14:822 (1) - delete and let break starts here would be better This is insane diff , not hard nor normal nor easy so I still can find it fine because it follows guitar well[ /list]