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PSY - GENTLEMAN [Osu|Taiko]

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ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


Hello Lolicakes :)
wow GENTLEMAN ~

[General]
  1. suggestion1.jpg is 1366x768, change it to 1024x768 better :)
  2. You can add a silent for slider scroll. Add it if you need :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LzUz.zip
[Normal]
Use a "Normal" value like HP4 AR5 OD4. Because it's a big gap with hard. Or you can add a Really normal.

  1. 00:07:761 (1,2) - Why use a different distance here? I suggest use a same distance in Easy or Normal, because the new player will look a place for read the time. Please change the distance to 1.0x
  2. 00:11:570 (3) - New combo here but not 00:12:046 (1)
  3. 00:18:237 (4,5) - I don't suggest stack here. Because 00:18:713 (5) is fast 1/2 slider for new player. If there stack, it's hard for read. Make a triangle here better :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LzGU.jpg
  4. 01:18:237 (1,2) - Ugly, surround it clean like this :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LA8z.jpg You can use this if you feel okay.
    224,72,78237,6,0,B|164:108|156:172|164:236|224:272,1,240
  5. 01:17:284 - Some waste placed a rhythm, You can add a Slider start at 01:17:284 and end at 01:18:237. In the fact you can move 01:18:237 (1) which I help to re-draw, and put a note at 01:18:713 and stack with 01:19:189 (3), just like this :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LAr4.jpg
  6. 01:23:475 (5) - Just a suggest. It has a weird flow here. http://puu.sh/2LAxM.jpg Okay I know I draw ugly :< But you can do smoothing better :)
  7. 01:47:761 (3,4) - Ctrl+G here and increase hit feeling at 01:48:713. Of course you can change it to three note.
  8. 02:03:951 (1) - Asymmetric. Try to move this ↑ 1 grid and click a Ctrl+J. You can see it's asymmetric. So copy a 01:18:237 (1) which I draw. Because it is symmetric.
  9. 02:05:618 (3) - Delete it because it's very fast for this difficulty.
  10. 02:09:665 (1) - You cannot add a slider which two return. It is unread for new player.
  11. 02:11:572 - Resnap, move this inherited point to 02:11:570
  12. 02:47:284 (3) - ^
  13. 02:52:761 (2) - I don't suggest add a 1/2 note in this difficulty. Balancing the difficulty because you had not add anything which 1/2. Try to add a note at 02:52:999 and instead it.
  14. 02:55:618 (1) - ^
  15. 03:01:570 (1) - Unsightly. Use it if you feel good :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LBrg.jpg
    440,176,181570,6,0,B|424:116|364:76|304:76|244:116,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  16. 03:09:665 (1) - Same thing with 00:18:237 (4,5), but you can stack with 03:07:761 (1) like this :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LBv7.jpg
[Kirino's Hard]
Strongly recommended AR7. Make a Normal and Hard closer

  1. 00:05:856 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like to stack like this. It's hard to read for me.
  2. 02:42:046 (2) - NC here like 01:01:094 and 02:03:951.
[Collab]
AR8 pls, it's no need to use AR9 really.

  1. 00:57:284 (1) - End at 00:58:713 like your Normal. And add more note at 00:59:189 better. In the fact, I think you add a slider to instead like 02:00:141 (1) is better.
  2. 01:18:237 (5,6,7) - Don't fit with 1/4 hit. Move 01:18:356 (6) to 01:18:594 and stack with 01:18:713 (1). And than fix the new combo.
  3. 01:29:546 - You can add not here if you feel good.
  4. 01:35:618 (1,2) - Ctrl+G and make some jump here.
  5. 01:36:094 (3,4,5) - Why different spacing here? I think it's a your mistake :)
  6. 01:38:713 (6) - End at 01:38:951 to fit the rhythm
  7. 01:39:665 (1,2,3) - Weird for rhythm, try this if you feel good :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LDzw.jpg
  8. 02:00:141 (1) - Very very Long for this slider. Apart them like :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LDQ2.jpg Please ignore the girl's face :) But you don't forgot to change 00:57:284 (1) if you had fixed.
  9. 02:11:572 - Resnap, move this inherited point to 02:11:570
  10. 02:26:332 (1) - May be a wrong spacing
  11. 02:27:522 (4) - I don't how to say but I think it 's don't fit. Don't stack here.
  12. 02:36:332 (1,1) - Make it like 02:00:141 (1) better :< It's very easy for now.
  13. 02:42:046 (1) - Serious!!!! It's a wrong hit sound for clap at 02:42:046 ~ 02:56:808. Look http://puu.sh/q20x or reference 01:01:094 and 02:03:951. Also you can ask a other mapper how to add a clap (I don't know who make this part :)) And I suggest check this difficulty for clap again. Because I don't know there is other same error.
  14. 02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Different spacing again and I think it's not a straight line for (2,3,4)

Okay that all.
Nice map and I hope it's can rank. But it's had a bad AR in all difficulty. Really change it.
Good Luck :)

Natsu wrote:

since i agree with AR 8 and OD 7 since the song is so slow 126 bpm and no big jumps in all the map so lolicake BATS and modders gonna say the same i really hope you think about this
This is what I want to say

Last edited by ertyukjh010 , edited 4 times in total.
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

ertyukjh010 wrote:



[Collab]
AR8 pls, it's no need to use AR9 really.

Okay that all.
Nice map and I hope it's can rank. But it's had a bad AR in all difficulty. Really change it.
Good Luck :)
since i agree with AR 8 and OD 7 since the song is so slow 126 bpm and no big jumps in all the map so lolicake BATS and modders gonna say the same i really hope you think about this
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello Lolicakes :)
wow GENTLEMAN ~

[General]
  1. suggestion1.jpg is 1366x768, change it to 1024x768 better :) 1366x768 is now allowed wide size.
  2. You can add a silent for slider scroll. Add it if you need :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LzUz.zip thanks!
[Normal]
Use a "Normal" value like HP4 AR5 OD4. Because it's a big gap with hard. Or you can add a Really normal. orz okay

  1. 00:07:761 (1,2) - Why use a different distance here? I suggest use a same distance in Easy or Normal, because the new player will look a place for read the time. Please change the distance to 1.0x Sorry, was my mistake.. lulz ;^;
  2. 00:11:570 (3) - New combo here but not 00:12:046 (1) okay
  3. 00:18:237 (4,5) - I don't suggest stack here. Because 00:18:713 (5) is fast 1/2 slider for new player. If there stack, it's hard for read. Make a triangle here better :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LzGU.jpg Nice! fixed
  4. 01:18:237 (1,2) - Ugly, surround it clean like this :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LA8z.jpg You can use this if you feel okay. I already fixed it in the last mod
    224,72,78237,6,0,B|164:108|156:172|164:236|224:272,1,240
  5. 01:17:284 - Some waste placed a rhythm, You can add a Slider start at 01:17:284 and end at 01:18:237. In the fact you can move 01:18:237 (1) which I help to re-draw, and put a note at 01:18:713 and stack with 01:19:189 (3), just like this :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LAr4.jpg Yeah, but I moved the slider to 01:17:284 - at 01:18:237 - and I created a slider here 01:18:713 -
  6. 01:23:475 (5) - Just a suggest. It has a weird flow here. http://puu.sh/2LAxM.jpg Okay I know I draw ugly :< But you can do smoothing better :) I fixed it, I don't know if I did it good
  7. 01:47:761 (3,4) - Ctrl+G here and increase hit feeling at 01:48:713. Of course you can change it to three note. okay
  8. 02:03:951 (1) - Asymmetric. Try to move this ↑ 1 grid and click a Ctrl+J. You can see it's asymmetric. So copy a 01:18:237 (1) which I draw. Because it is symmetric. Done~!
  9. 02:05:618 (3) - Delete it because it's very fast for this difficulty.Yeah, I think the same. done
  10. 02:09:665 (1) - You cannot add a slider which two return. It is unread for new player. okay orz
  11. 02:11:572 - Resnap, move this inherited point to 02:11:570 done
  12. 02:47:284 (3) - ^ Okay, was a bit hard to guess what you mean here D: but fixed
  13. 02:52:761 (2) - I don't suggest add a 1/2 note in this difficulty. Balancing the difficulty because you had not add anything which 1/2. Try to add a note at 02:52:999 and instead it. Okay
  14. 02:55:618 (1) - ^ Okay
  15. 03:01:570 (1) - Unsightly. Use it if you feel good :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LBrg.jpg Okay, thanks *3*
    440,176,181570,6,0,B|424:116|364:76|304:76|244:116,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  16. 03:09:665 (1) - Same thing with 00:18:237 (4,5), but you can stack with 03:07:761 (1) like this :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LBv7.jpg thx
Okay that all.
Nice map and I hope it's can rank. But it's had a bad AR in all difficulty. Really change it.
Good Luck :) Thanks you *^* was really useful for me!
I updated my part

Collab AR is 8 now =w=)b
Gloria Guard
2,274 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi~ Lolicakes (:3 」_)=3

From In-game PM

[General]

All diff count down letterbox uncheck please


[Normal]

00:00:142 ~ 00:07:522 I think players should be mapped in order to understand the tempo part
Is different from the first part, and it can be confusing because
00:11:570 (2,1,2) This is pattern is difficult to read by normal users, i think it more natural pattern
SPOILER
00:23:951 (3,4) ^
00:27:641 (1,1) i think this slider red note stack is better
SPOILER
00:38:713 (1) You must determine the shape of the slider, this is slider design is very strange
01:16:332 In my opinion, this part sound you hear really well i think this part add note here
01:34:546 (1,2,3) hmm.. The pattern shape can be improved a little bit more
SPOILER
01:40:618 (1,2,3) This is pattern overlap can be difficult for beginnersm and I think that it is boring to be naturally a little bit more
02:03:951 (1,2,3) hmm.. really bad pattern.. i think this pattern change (2) note move x:336 y:176
and (3) note (1) red slider head stack is better
SPOILER
02:08:237 (3) This is note by (1) slider is hidden and may be confused.
02:10:618 (1,2) This pattern is not very flow
02:49:308 (4,1,2) I don't know this overlap pattern.. i recommand pattern shape
SPOILER
02:54:427 (2,3,4) This is symmetry? really bad shape ..
02:57:641 (4,1) i think this pattern shape blanket is better
03:00:618 (1,2,3) This ispattern that can be confusing for beginners. I'd like to speak more naturally.
03:08:713 (1,1) i think this pattern stack shape is batter


[Hard]

00:07:999 (1,2) i think this pattern blanket is better
SPOILER
00:39:903 (4) hmm.. overlap is bad.. move please x:376 y:348
00:44:903 (3) i think this slider move x:408 y:84 is better
SPOILER
01:25:618 (5,1) i think this pattern shape slider blanket is better
SPOILER
01:26:570 (1,2) hmm.. really awkward beat.. change this beat and pattern shape





Good luck
Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav
i can create Easy? =3=
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

ThoomyyxD wrote:

i can create Easy? =3=
Nope, sorry
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
lepi mapped a taiko for gangnam he should make one here too wwww
eroshadow
5 posts
Joined March 2013
eroshadow
muy buena !!!!!! :)
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

newtoniorock8 wrote:

00:46:332 / 03:10:618 - end Kiai Time here ~
This should be pointed under [General].

OzzyOzrock wrote:

lepi mapped a taiko for gangnam he should make one here too wwww
Well, rules have changed now. If lepi will make one taiko, it won't be rankable. If he'd make two, there would be more GD's than the mapper made. If the mapper makes an [Easy], it would be possible. :3

Natsu wrote:

since i agree with AR 8 and OD 7 since the song is so slow 126 bpm and no big jumps in all the map so lolicake BATS and modders gonna say the same i really hope you think about this
I have to agree with this. Here's the whole collab diff updated with my hitsounds and AR8 and OD 7:
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Gentleman.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 59189
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 142,15380,30618,45856,61094,76332,93475,108713,123951,139189,162046,177284,192046,35765
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:GENTLEMAN
TitleUnicode:GENTLEMAN
Artist:PSY
ArtistUnicode:PSY
Creator:Lolicakes
Version:Collab
Source:
Tags:kpop single dakedekaane kirino kousaka gero natsu zeroarg
BeatmapID:243964
BeatmapSetID:89593

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"suggestion1.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"gentlemanv.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Gero.png",320,240
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 F,0,60380,60618,1,0
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 F,0,138951,139189,0,1
 F,0,159546,159665,1,0
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 F,0,60856,61094,0,1
 F,0,75618,75856,1,0
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 F,0,108475,108713,0,1
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Kirino.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.6
 M,0,15141,,455,385
 F,0,15141,15380,0,1
 F,0,30380,30618,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Dekaane.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.675
 F,0,77046,77999,0,0.1
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 F,0,77999,78237,0.1,1
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 F,0,177046,177284,0,1
 F,0,191808,192046,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Zeroarg.png",320,240
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 M,0,93237,,162,385
 F,0,93237,93475,0,1
 F,0,108475,108713,1,0
 F,0,161808,162046,0,1
 F,0,176570,176808,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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7761,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
14903,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
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131570,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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184427,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
184903,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
190618,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 0,64,128
Combo3 : 112,196,193
Combo4 : 255,83,83

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160,176,112999,2,0,L|232:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,113475,2,0,L|368:104,1,100
436,176,113951,2,0,L|508:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,24,114427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,114665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,114903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,104,115141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,28,115380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,104,115618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,176,115856,2,0,P|92:204|140:200,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,116332,6,0,P|280:216|296:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,344,116808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,364,117046,2,0,P|392:324|404:276,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,188,117522,2,0,P|444:196|484:236,2,100,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,118237,6,0,P|292:168|316:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,118713,2,0,P|204:96|152:100,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,56,119189,2,0,P|52:108|72:156,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,188,119665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,264,119903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,300,120141,6,0,L|256:324,24,25,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,121808,5,0,0:0:0:0:
357,247,122046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,247,122284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,99,122522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,298,122761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,122999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,168,123237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,298,123475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,99,123713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,123951,6,0,L|256:368,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,316,124665,2,0,L|156:240,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,336,125141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,240,125380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,156,125618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,124,125856,6,0,L|288:124,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,172,126332,2,0,L|372:172,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,272,126808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,272,127046,2,0,L|360:376,2,100,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,127761,5,4,0:0:0:0:
368,72,128237,2,0,P|320:120|264:128,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,132,128594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,128713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,128951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,124,129189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,64,129427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,129665,6,0,P|164:328|212:356,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,264,130142,2,0,P|292:328|244:356,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,252,130618,2,0,L|232:148,2,100,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,131570,5,4,0:0:0:0:
188,60,132046,2,0,L|304:72,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,132403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,132522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,168,132761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,216,132999,2,0,P|414:265|481:264,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,133475,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,188,133713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,133951,2,0,P|289:94|222:95,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,108,134427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,192,134665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,288,134903,2,0,L|220:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,135380,6,0,B|384:264|400:232|400:232|416:200|368:124,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,136094,2,0,L|248:68,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,136570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,320,136808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,320,137046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,244,137284,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,137522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,168,137760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,168,137998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,92,138237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,220,138475,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,92,138713,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,139189,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,132,139308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,139427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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324,280,140141,2,0,P|384:272|432:288,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,140,140618,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,140,140737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,140856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,140,140975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,140,141094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,100,141332,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,100,141570,2,0,B|120:148|120:144|132:196,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,142046,2,0,B|256:232|256:228|244:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,142522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,344,142999,6,0,B|412:348|412:348|384:336|384:336|348:356|324:360|284:344,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,143713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,143951,2,0,L|328:160,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,72,144903,6,0,P|100:148|112:188,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,312,145380,2,0,P|100:236|112:196,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145856,2,0,L|300:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,146332,5,8,0:0:0:0:
364,92,146570,2,0,P|320:72|256:120,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,292,147046,2,0,P|320:312|256:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,294,147522,2,0,L|208:296,2,50
276,92,148237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,212,148713,6,0,B|128:148|128:144|184:124,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,149189,2,0,B|291:159|291:155|303:91,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,92,149665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,92,149903,2,0,L|404:92,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,292,150618,6,0,B|352:284|352:284|300:296,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,150975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,300,151094,2,0,B|156:308|156:308|104:296,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,151570,2,8,B|96:196|96:196|44:208,2,100
308,88,152522,6,0,P|316:164|428:200,1,200
452,108,153237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,108,153356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,108,153475,2,0,L|256:220,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,154427,6,0,L|74:232,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,155380,2,0,L|437:64,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,156332,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156451,12,0,159665,0:0:0:0:
456,56,162046,6,0,P|456:164|380:240,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,162761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,276,162880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,162999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,228,163237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,228,163475,6,0,P|180:184|180:136,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,52,163951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,68,164189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,164427,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,204,164665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,300,164903,2,0,L|292:240,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,84,165380,2,0,L|248:144,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,240,165856,6,0,B|84:216|84:216|104:204|104:204|68:204|68:204|84:188|84:188|84:160|84:160|84:88,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,60,166570,2,0,L|240:60,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,60,167046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,144,167284,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,232,167522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,167761,6,0,L|396:43,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,168237,2,0,L|103:336,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,120,168713,2,0,L|108:48,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,260,169189,2,0,L|396:336,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,140,169665,5,4,0:0:0:0:
60,140,170141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,224,170380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,224,170499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,224,170618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,170856,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,228,171094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,140,171332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,171570,6,0,P|388:96|408:156,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,240,172046,2,0,P|388:240|340:208,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,140,172522,2,0,P|252:180|240:232,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,308,172999,2,0,P|144:272|144:216,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,173475,6,0,P|336:52|408:124,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,174189,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,224,174308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,174427,2,0,L|320:300,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,328,174903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,328,175141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,175380,6,0,L|56:160,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,136,175737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,116,175857,2,0,P|96:80|156:60,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,60,176213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,60,176332,2,0,L|296:60,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,176808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,177284,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,177403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,177522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,132,177761,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,156,177999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,156,178118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,156,178237,2,0,P|364:168|416:160,1,100
464,16,178713,2,0,P|476:64|468:113,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,304,179189,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,179427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,348,179546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,332,179665,2,0,P|232:336|184:320,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,308,180022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,292,180141,2,0,P|172:240|164:192,1,100
316,128,180618,2,0,P|264:140|216:132,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,181094,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,181213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,181332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,164,181571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,220,181809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,220,181928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,220,182047,2,0,P|263:233|317:222,1,100
444,180,182523,2,0,L|380:256,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,280,182999,5,0,0:0:0:0:
379,256,183237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,364,183475,2,0,P|276:368|232:352,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,172,183951,2,0,P|336:168|380:184,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,88,184427,2,0,B|223:92|223:92|234:98|234:98|244:104|244:104|228:108|228:108|206:146,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,312,184903,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,312,185022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,312,185141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,252,185380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,132,185618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,185737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,185856,2,0,P|144:144|196:144,1,100
300,36,186332,2,0,P|252:24|200:24,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,32,186808,5,0,0:0:0:0:
476,124,187046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,148,187165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,164,187284,2,0,P|404:176|352:160,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,187641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,120,187760,2,0,L|228:148,1,100
84,104,188237,2,0,P|124:132|148:176,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,188713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,188832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,188951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,280,189190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,176,189428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,176,189547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,176,189666,2,0,P|232:192|280:188,1,100
244,44,190141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,44,190261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,44,190380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,204,190618,5,0,0:0:0:0:
500,204,190856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,272,191094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,136,191332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,340,191570,2,0,P|384:354|328:360,1,100
232,356,192046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
To the other guys in [Collab]: I asked permission from Lolicakes if it is possible for me to take charge with the hitsounds. Since I fixed them, I should be the one responsible in fixing and applying mods with it, am I not correct? So do not worry about hitsounds anymore. Or in case you object, just give me a shout. lol.

As for my diff update, I'll have it on another post. :3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Hard]

00:07:999 (1,2) i think this pattern blanket is better (? O.O i don't see the image
SPOILER


WHAT THE F.... because you changed my hitsounds ._.!
Last edited by Gero , edited 1 time in total.
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Collab]
01:18:237 (5,6,7) - Don't fit with 1/4 hit. Move 01:18:356 (6) to 01:18:594 and stack with 01:18:713 (1). And than fix the new combo. /*I get your point but a triple there fits, I'll see what other people say about here and probably change.
01:29:546 - You can add not here if you feel good. /*There's no sound in background and it'd be unexpected, so I leave as it is now.
No changes in my part, thanks for taking your time.
@Kirino: as it's only for hitsounds it's ok for me
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi~ Lolicakes (:3 」_)=3

From In-game PM

[General]

All diff count down letterbox uncheck please


[Normal]

00:00:142 ~ 00:07:522 I think players should be mapped in order to understand the tempo part Nah o3o I like how it is now.
Is different from the first part, and it can be confusing because
00:11:570 (2,1,2) This is pattern is difficult to read by normal users, i think it more natural pattern why do you deleted that puush ;A;?
SPOILER
00:23:951 (3,4) ^ hum, I like this pattern and I think is not really difficulty to read
00:27:641 (1,1) i think this slider red note stack is better xwx
SPOILER
00:38:713 (1) You must determine the shape of the slider, this is slider design is very strange okay >w<
01:16:332 In my opinion, this part sound you hear really well i think this part add note here okay ><
01:34:546 (1,2,3) hmm.. The pattern shape can be improved a little bit more where are the puush ;w;?!
SPOILER
01:40:618 (1,2,3) This is pattern overlap can be difficult for beginnersm and I think that it is boring to be naturally a little bit more okay! :3
02:03:951 (1,2,3) hmm.. really bad pattern.. i think this pattern change (2) note move x:336 y:176
and (3) note (1) red slider head stack is better where is the puush </3 ashd
SPOILER
02:08:237 (3) This is note by (1) slider is hidden and may be confused. You're right
02:10:618 (1,2) This pattern is not very flow changed
02:49:308 (4,1,2) I don't know this overlap pattern.. i recommand pattern shape
SPOILER
02:54:427 (2,3,4) This is symmetry? really bad shape .. changed
02:57:641 (4,1) i think this pattern shape blanket is better nah
03:00:618 (1,2,3) This ispattern that can be confusing for beginners. I'd like to speak more naturally. I like this pattern because if I do another probably it will be boring~
03:08:713 (1,1) i think this pattern stack shape is batter I don't understand >n<
Thanks you <3
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Gero wrote:

WHAT THE F.... because you changed my hitsounds ._.!
lol. Are you against it?

DakeDekaane wrote:

@Kirino: as it's only for hitsounds it's ok for me
Thanks. :3

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]
Strongly recommended AR7. Make a Normal and Hard closer I agree, fixed. :3

  1. 00:05:856 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like to stack like this. It's hard to read for me. Changes made~
  2. 02:42:046 (2) - NC here like 01:01:094 and 02:03:951. Nice catch. :3
[Collab]
  1. 02:11:572 - Resnap, move this inherited point to 02:11:570 It's already snapped. :3
Thanks for the mod ert!~ :3

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Hard]

00:07:999 (1,2) i think this pattern blanket is better the image is broken, no change for now. =w=
SPOILER
00:39:903 (4) hmm.. overlap is bad.. move please x:376 y:348 Fixed~
00:44:903 (3) i think this slider move x:408 y:84 is better image broken but I get it, fixed~
SPOILER
01:25:618 (5,1) i think this pattern shape slider blanket is better the image is broken, no change for now. =w=
SPOILER
01:26:570 (1,2) hmm.. really awkward beat.. change this beat and pattern shape I think it's nice, no change. =w=
/me scratches head
anyways thanks for modding BGG-san!~ :3

Diff Update:
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Gentleman.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 59189
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:GENTLEMAN
TitleUnicode:GENTLEMAN
Artist:PSY
ArtistUnicode:PSY
Creator:Lolicakes
Version:Kirino's Hard
Source:
Tags:kpop single dakedekaane kirino kousaka gero natsu zeroarg
BeatmapID:245314
BeatmapSetID:89593

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
U-Updated zZz xwx
*falls sleep*
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
well is ok if kirino take care about hitsounds o3o
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Nice dance! o.o
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

WHAT THE F.... because you changed my hitsounds ._.!
lol. Are you against it?
Nup >w< is okay XD just that I was surprised when updating the diff Thanks for the new hitsounds kirino :3
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Natsu wrote:

well is ok if kirino take care about hitsounds o3o
yay~

Gero wrote:

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

WHAT THE F.... because you changed my hitsounds ._.!
lol. Are you against it?
Nup >w< is okay XD just that I was surprised when updating the diff Thanks for the new hitsounds kirino :3
okay then, that makes zeroarg the only one not yet saying anything for what I said. =w=
Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav
Offset 140
Remember Resnap Al Notes and Greenlines
Bye bye c:
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Offset 140
Remember Resnap Al Notes and Greenlines
Bye bye c:
i think the current one is better imo since i SS collab diff with current one

Edit: no changes in my part is just my flow :l
Last edited by Natsu , edited 1 time in total.
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Collab]
  1. 01:35:618 (1,2) - Ctrl+G and make some jump here. I don't want to break so much spacing.
  2. 01:36:094 (3,4,5) - Why different spacing here? I think it's a your mistake :) No mistake. Maded that on purpouse
  3. 01:38:713 (6) - End at 01:38:951 to fit the rhythm Fixed.
  4. 01:39:665 (1,2,3) - Weird for rhythm, try this if you feel good :arrow: http://puu.sh/2LDzw.jpg I prefer mine for now.
  5. 02:42:046 (1) - Serious!!!! It's a wrong hit sound for clap at 02:42:046 ~ 02:56:808. Look http://puu.sh/q20x or reference 01:01:094 and 02:03:951. Also you can ask a other mapper how to add a clap (I don't know who make this part :)) And I suggest check this difficulty for clap again. Because I don't know there is other same error. Kirino fixed hitsounds. He/she should check this.
Thanks for mod.
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Offset 140
Remember Resnap Al Notes and Greenlines
Bye bye c:
No changes.
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Zeroarg wrote:

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Collab]
  1. 02:42:046 (1) - Serious!!!! It's a wrong hit sound for clap at 02:42:046 ~ 02:56:808. Look http://puu.sh/q20x or reference 01:01:094 and 02:03:951. Also you can ask a other mapper how to add a clap (I don't know who make this part :)) And I suggest check this difficulty for clap again. Because I don't know there is other same error. Kirino fixed hitsounds. He/she should check this.
lol, this was before I updated hitsounds, and this: http://puu.sh/q20x is basic. lmao. Hitsounds are good now so don't worry people. :3

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Offset 140
Remember Resnap Al Notes and Greenlines
Bye bye c:
I think I have to agree with 140, I myself checked the timing and found that too. But it's up to the people. =w= or maybe not
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
It would be good if you move some of the SB names away from the text on the background itself. It gets all overlapped and that doesn't look good. Make the names smaller and move them somewhere else, or just move them. It looks ugly right now in my opinion.

Examples



I also encourage you to use a different font for the names. This is not necessary but it would really fit if you use a font like the one used in the background. Sounds good to me~

Well, good luck with this!
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Kei wrote:

It would be good if you move some of the SB names away from the text on the background itself. It gets all overlapped and that doesn't look good. Make the names smaller and move them somewhere else, or just move them. It looks ugly right now in my opinion.

Examples



I also encourage you to use a different font for the names. This is not necessary but it would really fit if you use a font like the one used in the background. Sounds good to me~

Well, good luck with this!
Thanks for SB suggestions, will contact the mapper and SB guys for this lol.
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax
Offset is ok as it is.

I asked a friend to play it and he had no problems with it:

Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Zeroarg wrote:

Offset is ok as it is.

I asked a friend to play it and he had no problems with it:


yup i did 99% too i think is ok
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Segundo mod para esta cancion (Aqui el primero https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2286563/). Como dije al principio del mod en ese map, lo voy a hacer en español ya que no planeo darle bubble ni nada. Solo mejorar el mapa.

[General:]

• Remueve el Letterbox During Break en Kirino's Hard y Collab por consistencia con la Normal. Ademas es innecesario ya que esas dificultades no tienen breaks.
• Tags: Agrega K-pop en los tags, alguna gente suele buscar esta clase de generos con el guion (lo digo por experiencia xD). Tambien puedes agregar Collaboration
• Yo desactivaria el Countdown, ya que en la Hard y el Collab son innecesarios, no aparecen. Y la verdad, no me gusta mucho ese tipo de inconsistencia.
• Me gusta como suena el Slider Tick Rate 2, yo lo usaria en todas las dificultades por consistencia.

[Normal:]

• El Audio lead-in es innecesario en esta dificultad, ya que tienes 7761ms de lead-in. Asi que es innecesario incrementarle a esta opcion, ponlo en 0

• Settings:
--> Este map no se merece Approach Rate 5, viendo que es la dificultad mas facil del mapset, Reduci el Approach Rate en 1 Tick (AR-1)

• 00:17:284 (3) - El cambiar la forma de los Sliders y esas cosas por asi decirlo es algo mas bien nazi, pero afecta a la estetica del mapa sin dudas. Si queres hacer tu mapa jugable y estetico la forma de los Sliders juegan un papel en esto. Por ejemplo, este slider se ve feo realmente, algo mas simple con 3 puntos arreglaria este Slider, intenta ser mas cuidadosa con los Sliders
• 00:30:618 (3,1) - Cuida el spacing entre estas dos notas, mejor si lo haces consistente (es decir de 1.0x entre ambos sliders). Por cierto, en el Slider (3) juega bien si le agregas un Reverse Arrow
• 00:34:903 (1) - Este combo por ejemplo es innecesario, eliminalo por favor.
• 00:38:713 (1,2,4,1) - Otros ejemplos de Sliders feos, no se porque te complicas agregando muchos puntos, si con los Slider circulares agregas 3 puntos y ya esta, el Slider queda pronto y dentro de todo estetico. Por experiencia te sugiero que no agregues tantos puntos a los Sliders
• 00:46:332 (T) - Que un flash Kiai termine dentro de un break esta tecnicamente mal, creo que ya se el efecto que quisiste dar, pero de todos modos esta mal. Si quieres mantener el efecto mueve esta linea verde hasta 00:45:975
• 01:14:903 (3) - Sugiero un New Combo por el cambio de voz.
• 01:15:856 (5) - En lugar de un Soft finish, agrega un Normal sampleset Hitsound, se siente mejor creo
• 01:29:189 (1) - Este Slider largo no sigue para nada bien la cancion en ningun aspecto. Te sugiero que hagas algo mas o menos asi para que siga mejor las vocales principalmente:
SPOILER
• 01:32:522 (2) - Enfatiza mejor los drums en la repeticion del Slider y los cymbals al final del Slider, si eliminas la repeticion de este Slider y en su lugar agregas una Nota en 01:33:475
• 01:49:189 (T) - Mismo concepto que en 00:46:332 - mueve esta linea verde hasta 01:48:832.
• 02:06:332 (1,2) - El spacing es inconsistente entre estas 2 Notas (es decir no es de 1.0x), lo cual es incorrecto. Manten consistente el spacing ya que es la dificultad mas facil del mapset
• 02:11:570 (3) - Sin dudas necesitas un New Combo en esta nota, enfatiza el video y ese cambio de Kiai
• 02:18:713 (3) - Como dije en el primer kiai, usa un Normal sampleset sound en esta nota
• 02:31:094 (2,3) - Reduce el spacing entre estos Sliders para hacerlo consistente.
• 02:35:856 - Agrega una Nota ahi y mueve el comienzo del Slider hasta 02:36:332 - No te olvides de disminuir el largo del Spinner luego de hacer esto.
• 02:42:999 (2,3) - Meh.. Sliders feos. Que conste que solo estoy mencionando el 10% de ellos, porque en verdad hay muchos :(
• 02:51:094 (3) - Por consistencia con todo el mapa, deberias eliminar una repeticion en este Slider y agregar una Nota en 02:52:522
• 02:53:475 (2) - Wtf? Elimina ese Clap inconsistente al comienzo del Slider
• 02:57:284 - 03:12:046 - Esto no es parte del estribillo, el estribillo termina en 02:57:284 - por eso el uso del Kiai es tecnicamente incorrecto. Elimina esta ultima seccion de Kiai por favor.
• 03:10:618 (Spin) - Este Spinner debe terminar en 03:12:106 - 1/8 mas adelante de lo que esta, en ese punto es donde la vocal termina completamente

- Ritmicamente, esta dificultad es correcta. Pero.. esteticamente tiene bastantes cosas por arreglar, chequea todos los Sliders principalmente, si empezas mejorando tus Sliders por ejemplo tu dificultad va a mejorar mucho
Otra cosa que vi, es que tus Claps son inconsistentes, intenta chequear la dificultad entera para hacer los Claps consistentes.

[Kirino's Hard:]

• A Break section is recommended in this map, because the song is pretty long and I think a Hard needs a break point in that kind of long songs

• 00:11:570 (1,2) - This 3/4 slider doesn't make sense at all, this pattern is really necessary because there is no sound over the red tick. Just make the Slider (1) in 1/1 and add a Note in 00:12:284 instead
• 00:22:999 (3) - Cymbals need to be emphasized here, so add a Finish in this Note please
• 00:29:903 (x) - A note here is pretty necessary, because it would follow the vocal properly. So, add it one in this place please.
• 00:30:141 (8) - Add a S:C2 Clap in this note for consistency
• 00:32:046 (4,5) - The spacing increase is really unnecessary, the music doesn't support a thing like this in this place. Just keep the spacing as you did before please
• 00:36:332 (3,4) - Personally, I dislike the 3/4 in this song, sometimes the 3/4 sounds fitting but in this song sounds unfitting everywhere because it's forced the vocals imo. Try another thing here, pls.
• 00:38:237 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the cymbals
• 00:42:046 (1,2,3) - I don't like how it play that kind of reversed pattern in general. I think flows better if you do something like this
SPOILER
• 00:44:903 (3) - Add a S:C2 Clap at the slider end for consistency
• 00:52:999 (1,2,3) - That kind of patterns, when you add notes over the read tick are a bit simple to read if you unstack the objects instead. So, I'd like to see all the objects unstacked.
• 00:54:903 (2,3,4,5) - (^)
• 00:57:522 (Spin) - That finish sounds noisy to me, in addition the cymbal are not acting here. If I were you, I'd remove this finish.
• 01:14:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumpy pattern is inconsistent with the previous part in 01:06:808 (1,2,3,4,5). In addition, this jump is exaggerated with the whole of the map. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing in this jump
• 01:20:141 (1,2,3) - Another reversed pattern, I'd move (3) to x:268 y:44
• 01:32:761 (x) - As I said you before (in 00:29:903 exactly), you should add a Note here
• 01:40:856 (x) - (^)
• 02:00:141 (Spin) - Remove the finish from this Spinner, as I said you in 00:57:522
• 02:17:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumpy pattern is inconsistent with the previous part in 01:06:808 (1,2,3,4,5). In addition, this jump is exaggerated with the whole of the map. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing in this jump (Copy/Pasted the previous sentence, as you did in the map :P)
• 02:47:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - For consistency, you need to increase the spacing between these objects to make a jumpy pattern (I'd increase the spacing between the notes till 1.50/1.60 around)
• 02:50:141 (2,3) - meh.. Another 3/4. Try another thing here please
• 02:55:380 (1,2,3) - As I said in 02:47:761 increase the spacing between these sliders
• 02:57:284 - 03:10:618 - Exactly the same thing as I said in Normal diff. This is not part of the chorus, so the kiai usage is technically incorrect. Would be better if you remove the kiai section here
• 03:10:618 (Spin) - This spinner should finish 1/8 forward, to follow the vocals properly.

- Not bad, but you have to finish those inconsistencies.

[Collab:]

Gero:
• 00:05:022 (4) - No aparece nada en la musica que soporte una nota ahi. Esa nota es innecesaria, deberias eliminarla. Intenta escuchar la musica a 50/25% playback cuando agregas streams y ese estilo de cosas
• 00:14:784 (3) - (^)

Kirino Kousaka:
• 00:29:903 (x) - Add a Note here, as I said you in your Hard.

Lolicakes:
• 00:31:332 (2,3,4,5,6) - Esto fluye bastante raro para mi, inclusive el pattern reversible y ese random jump entre (5,6). Intenta hacer algo mas o menos asi, el map fluira mejor.
SPOILER
• 00:38:475 (x) - Hace falta una Nota aca.
• 00:38:832 (2) - Elimina esta nota, no hay ningun sonido ahi

- Buee.. Estoy bastante cansado para seguir. Un general, no aumenten tanto el spacing entre las notas, esta cancion no merece tanto ese tipo de cosas, y fijense bien cuando ponen nota sobre los ticks azules para no abastecer el overmap :P

Buee.. Eso es todo por ahora, bastantes cosas por arreglar tienes.
Esteticamente el map podria ser mucho mejor, principalmente la Normal y el Collab.
Espero que mi mod te ayude a mejorar el mapa y buena suerte :)

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Oh.. me olvide de una cosita..

Natsu wrote:

Zeroarg wrote:

Offset is ok as it is.

I asked a friend to play it and he had no problems with it:


yup i did 99% too i think is ok
2ms en el offset no se encuentran jugando el mapa, sino testeandolo en el editor, de todos modos 2ms no afectan casi nada.
Touche
557 posts
Joined May 2012
Touche
go for the rank ;)!
Jetphase
3 posts
Joined February 2011
Jetphase
Further proof the offset is fine...

http://youtu.be/YJ5cQhR92Bc
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
Hello there, M4M from my queue!



[Normal]

Actually normal diff is really nice mapped. I think I'll just do some … General mapping. Or I'll go full arrange-nazi. Let's see...

00:09:665 (1) – Move one grid down. To 252/308
00:11:570 (1,2) – think about not stacking those, since easy and normal diff-players could find that irritating
00:14:427 (5) – Change Hitsound to Normal.
00:19:665 (1,2) - make 00:18:713 (5) - the middle of those two sliders. (move 00:19:665 (1) - to 200/264 and 00:20:618 (2) - to 320/372)
00:20:618 (2) – add clap
00:21:570 (3) - move (if you've done the other things I suggested) to 404/164
00:22:999 (1) - move to 288/192
00:23:475 (2) - move to 176/236
00:24:427 (4) - well.. actually I don't want to change that slider. But I like it, so i wanted to say that. Don't change it. It fits very well with the music and looks cute
00:28:713 (1) - make that slider a bit rounder? and change the position to 160/152 (this way it won't intersect with that circle before)
00:38:713 (1) - I don't like the shape of that slider, looks a bit messy imo
00:45:380 (2) - change sampleset to "normal"
00:46:332 - does this inheriting section need to be there?
01:09:665 (3,4) - Think about not stacking those
01:15:856 (5,6) - ^
01:19:665 (3) - give that slider a shape?
01:33:475 - what's with that Kiai-Time?
01:48:237 (4) - The artistic ChivaCookie doesn't accept that. Also known as "ArtCookie" or "Cookie of esthetics" she has to say: Since there aren't many edges in your map, you should consider making that rounder. *faints*
01:49:189 - Inheriting section not needed
02:07:284 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be confusing for newer players.
02:11:094 (2,3) - why does kiai time stope there?
02:16:808 (4) - Add clap
02:17:761 (1) - add clap
02:18:713 (3) - maybe change hitsound to normal?
02:28:713 (3) - doesn't fit with the beat imo
02:51:094 (3) - those longer repeating sliders are also confusing for newly players and not that much recommened
02:56:808 (3,4) - again that with the kiai time ? Dunno if that's okay
02:57:284 (4) - move to 432/220
03:00:618 (1,2,3) - Don't stack those


Well. The next diff isn't made by you. I'm not sure if I should map this... Well. I've got freetime today. Just do it.

[Kirino's Hard]

00:02:046 (1,2) - Consider making that two sliders a bit rounder like [ur=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746298l]this[/url]
00:04:903 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h maybe?
00:17:046 (4,5,6,7) - No lines. I don't like that! Artistical Chiva thinks, you should make it round. Round is always good.
01:05:737 - Add circle?
01:07:165 - ^
01:07:641 - ^
01:13:118 - ^
01:13:356 - ^
01:14:784 - ^
01:15:261 - ^
02:10:022 - ^
02:10:499 - ^
02:12:284 - Change this one to a repeating slider that ends here: 02:12:522

[Collab]

Actually... I can't really find anything. Take a star instead, okay? Sorry ~





Hope I was of any help.
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

2ms en el offset no se encuentran jugando el mapa, sino testeandolo en el editor, de todos modos 2ms no afectan casi nada.
puede que tengas razon en el editor me da 0ms y en el juego lo probe con od 9 e igual siempre saque la misma acc igual ahi esta e video del otro player creo q el offset esta bien xD pero igual 2ms no afectan el gameplay
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Kirino's Hard:]

• A Break section is recommended in this map, because the song is pretty long and I think a Hard needs a break point in that kind of long songs Break time added on 02:19:189 up to 02:25:856.

• 00:11:570 (1,2) - This 3/4 slider doesn't make sense at all, this pattern is really necessary because there is no sound over the red tick. Just make the Slider (1) in 1/1 and add a Note in 00:12:284 instead Fixed~
• 00:22:999 (3) - Cymbals need to be emphasized here, so add a Finish in this Note please oh lol, nice. Fixed~
• 00:29:903 (x) - A note here is pretty necessary, because it would follow the vocal properly. So, add it one in this place please. Added~
• 00:30:141 (8) - Add a S:C2 Clap in this note for consistency cool, fixed~
• 00:32:046 (4,5) - The spacing increase is really unnecessary, the music doesn't support a thing like this in this place. Just keep the spacing as you did before please Fixed~
• 00:36:332 (3,4) - Personally, I dislike the 3/4 in this song, sometimes the 3/4 sounds fitting but in this song sounds unfitting everywhere because it's forced the vocals imo. Try another thing here, pls. Made changes~
• 00:38:237 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the cymbals Fixed~
• 00:42:046 (1,2,3) - I don't like how it play that kind of reversed pattern in general. I think flows better if you do something like this Fixed~
SPOILER
• 00:44:903 (3) - Add a S:C2 Clap at the slider end for consistency cool, fixed~
• 00:52:999 (1,2,3) - That kind of patterns, when you add notes over the read tick are a bit simple to read if you unstack the objects instead. So, I'd like to see all the objects unstacked. Fixed~
• 00:54:903 (2,3,4,5) - (^) Fixed~
• 00:57:522 (Spin) - That finish sounds noisy to me, in addition the cymbal are not acting here. If I were you, I'd remove this finish. Removed~
• 01:14:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumpy pattern is inconsistent with the previous part in 01:06:808 (1,2,3,4,5). In addition, this jump is exaggerated with the whole of the map. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing in this jump Spacing between them reduced~
• 01:20:141 (1,2,3) - Another reversed pattern, I'd move (3) to x:268 y:44 moved~
• 01:32:761 (x) - As I said you before (in 00:29:903 exactly), you should add a Note here added~
• 01:40:856 (x) - (^) added~
• 02:00:141 (Spin) - Remove the finish from this Spinner, as I said you in 00:57:522 removed~
• 02:17:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumpy pattern is inconsistent with the previous part in 01:06:808 (1,2,3,4,5). In addition, this jump is exaggerated with the whole of the map. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing in this jump (Copy/Pasted the previous sentence, as you did in the map :P) Spacing between them reduced~
• 02:47:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - For consistency, you need to increase the spacing between these objects to make a jumpy pattern (I'd increase the spacing between the notes till 1.50/1.60 around) fixed~
• 02:50:141 (2,3) - meh.. Another 3/4. Try another thing here please made changes~
• 02:55:380 (1,2,3) - As I said in 02:47:761 increase the spacing between these sliders fixed~
• 02:57:284 - 03:10:618 - Exactly the same thing as I said in Normal diff. This is not part of the chorus, so the kiai usage is technically incorrect. Would be better if you remove the kiai section here kiai section removed~
• 03:10:618 (Spin) - This spinner should finish 1/8 forward, to follow the vocals properly. Now I don't understand this one, no change. lol

- Not bad, but you have to finish those inconsistencies. yay \:D/

[Collab:]

Kirino Kousaka:
• 00:29:903 (x) - Add a Note here, as I said you in your Hard. added~
Thanks for the awesome mod mancuso! :D

ChivaCookie wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]

00:02:046 (1,2) - Consider making that two sliders a bit rounder like this made changes.
00:04:903 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h maybe? nope, no change.
00:17:046 (4,5,6,7) - No lines. I don't like that! Artistical Chiva thinks, you should make it round. Round is always good. nope, no change.
01:05:737 - Add circle? No change for all additional circles.
01:07:165 - ^
01:07:641 - ^
01:13:118 - ^
01:13:356 - ^
01:14:784 - ^
01:15:261 - ^
02:10:022 - ^
02:10:499 - ^
02:12:284 - Change this one to a repeating slider that ends here: 02:12:522 not bad, changes made~
Thanks for the mod ChivaCookie!

Jetphase wrote:

Further proof the offset is fine...

http://youtu.be/YJ5cQhR92Bc
Cool video, thanks for the proof lol :D

Updates:

  1. Kirino's Hard
  2. Collab
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax
2ms de offset es impersectible y no pueden afectar en nada.
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Zeroarg wrote:

2ms de offset es impersectible y no pueden afectar en nada.
People, I want to understand what you are saying so please. ._.
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
"-2ms/+2ms offset don't affect in anything" lol I'm bad at translating ha.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M request~
General
Uncheck "Enable Countdows" since there is no countdown.
Normal
I don't follow to use many stacks in easiest diff since it's a bit difficult for newbie.
Placement
00:26:808(1,1) stack seems more beautiful
00:34:903(1) remove NC
00:38:713(1) looks weird, I suppose you can make blanket here
SPOILER
01:07:761(1,2) swap NC better since the finish hears a (2)
01:17;284(1) the spacing seems narrow, I suppose it would be difficult to expect for newbie, so just example here
SPOILER
01:19:665(3) up-curved slider seems nice to follow the flow
SPOILER
01:24:427(1,2) to be symmetrical better
SPOILER
01:36:808(1) the slider seems weird, just put simply better
SPOILER
03:08:713(3) 2 grid right better to be consistence
Rhythm
02:51:094(3) reduce 1 reverse better

Hard
Placement
00:17:046(4,5,6,7) liner placement seems weird for me, so a bit cuved better
SPOILER
01:43:475(2) move to x:256 y:132. yeah stack (1) seems more nice to be consistence.
Rhythm
02:50:141(2,3) to follow the music, I suggest this rhythm.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:52:599(1) delete finish at head, maybe add clap better
00:57:522(1) delete finish since there is no cymbal
02:00:141(1) ^

Collab
Placement
01:07:999(8,9 nazi, I suppose the notes looks better with no-touched on previous notes. like this?
SPOILER
01:32:999(2) too far imo...
01:38:713(2) well, try to make more spacing. current seems so narrow
01:52:999(2,4) Ctrl+G? maybe more nice flow.
Rhythm
00:19:189(1,2,3,4) hears weird since it doesn't fit to music, so listencarefully and more follow music better
SPOILER
00:29:427 it's the most difficult diff, so I don't follow to make many breaks.
00:35:261 add a note here since the instrumental hears.
00:38:713(1,2,3,4,5,6,) hears weird, same as above. you can follow the music more carefully
SPOILER
01:40:380 add a nite here since there is enough sound to do.
01:45:618(3,4,5) too many blanks don't seem nicely, please add notes consistently
01:56:808(2) this note doesn't follow any vocal & musics. try to pu notes consistently e.g)
SPOILER
01:58:713(2)^
02:28:237(5) too narrow spacing... please add notes previous & next red line.

already gathered many mods, so my modding may be useless. good luck with star~
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
all fixed o3o thanks for mod

SPOILER
392,292,108713,6,0,P|364:340|316:356,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,109189,2,0,P|184:276|136:284,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,352,109665,2,0,P|32:308|40:244,1,100
112,180,110141,2,0,P|156:148|176:108,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,110618,6,0,P|308:148|352:180,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,168,111094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,280,111332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,284,111570,2,0,P|264:316|244:356,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,352,112046,2,0,P|104:312|60:280,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,176,112522,6,0,L|96:104,1,100
160,176,112999,2,0,L|232:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,113475,2,0,L|368:104,1,100
436,176,113951,2,0,L|508:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,24,114427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,114665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,114903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,104,115141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,28,115380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,104,115618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,176,115856,2,0,P|92:204|140:200,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,116332,6,0,P|280:216|296:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,280,116689,2,0,P|268:332|312:376,1,100
324,368,117046,2,0,P|376:336|396:292,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,188,117522,2,0,P|444:196|484:236,2,100,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,118237,6,0,P|292:168|316:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,104,118594,2,0,P|288:72|236:68,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,88,118951,2,0,P|164:100|116:80,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,48,119427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,152,119665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,216,119903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,300,120141,6,0,L|256:324,24,25,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,121808,5,0,0:0:0:0:
357,247,122046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,247,122284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,99,122522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,298,122761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,122999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,168,123237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,298,123475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,99,123713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Zeroarg wrote:

2ms de offset es impersectible y no pueden afectar en nada.
People, I want to understand what you are saying so please. ._.
2ms offset is negligible and won't affect anything.

sorry. I usually write in both spanish and english but i was kinda busy and i forgot lol

Kei wrote:

"-2ms/+2ms offset don't affect in anything" lol I'm bad at translating ha.
Close enough.

btw will answer mod when i return home.
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
I'll upload all tomorrow.
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax

kajiyatta wrote:

Collab
Placement
01:38:713(2) well, try to make more spacing. current seems so narrow I wanted to create some kind of stack there so i won't change it

Rhythm
01:40:380 add a nite here since there is enough sound to do. I follow vocals there, not music.
01:45:618(3,4,5) too many blanks don't seem nicely, please add notes consistently I clearly follow vocalls there so there's no need to add notes.
Thanks for mod
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo

Zeroarg wrote:

2ms de offset es impersectible y no pueden afectar en nada.
Una aclaración rápida, en este caso sí tiene bastante razón, con un BPM constante como este, no afecta mucho si no es nada. Sin embargo con otros BPMs, un cambio de de 2ms si hace bastante diferencia.

Sobre el mapa, se ve bastante encaminado, un par de observaciones generales.

  1. Me parece que el C1 Whistle, no va nada bien con la canción, cada vez que suena se siente como una "interrupción"
  2. Poco antes del primer coro, deberías reducir un poco el volumen al spinner ya que no hay música en ese momento, entonces el spinner se siente muy "invasivo"
  3. En el SB, los nombres están bien, pero sugeriría otro tipo de fuente, más acorde con el arte de la canción. Podrían ser letras gruesas, blancas y con resplandor negro.
Tal vez le dé un mod con más detalle en el futuro al mapa, por ahora, suerte!
Hinsvar
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3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
I'm sure enough it's impossible to make the names not overlap with the BG's text without making them going out of the playscreen or making them smaller...

Well.

Elements: puu.sh/2RMQF.rar (Don't worry about the graphic's quality for some of them, for now...)

Script:

???
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"suggestion1.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"gentlemanv.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Gero.png",320,240
 M,0,-96,,162,385
 S,0,-96,,0.5
 F,0,-96,142,0,1
 F,0,15141,15380,1,0
 M,0,45618,,495,385
 F,0,45618,45856,0,1
 F,0,60380,60618,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Kirino.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.4
 M,0,15141,,495,385
 F,0,15141,15380,0,1
 F,0,30380,30618,1,0
 M,0,123713,,455,385
 F,0,123713,123951,0,1
 F,0,138475,138713,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lolicakes.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.5
 M,0,30380,,162,385
 F,0,30380,30618,0,1
 F,0,45618,45856,1,0
 M,0,138951,,495,385
 F,0,138951,139189,0,1
 F,0,159546,159665,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Natsubaka.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.5
 M,0,60856,,162,385
 F,0,60856,61094,0,1
 F,0,75618,75856,1,0
 M,0,108475,,495,385
 F,0,108475,108713,0,1
 F,0,123237,123475,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Dekaane.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.45
 F,0,77046,77999,0,0.1
 M,0,77284,,495,385
 F,0,77999,78237,0.1,1
 F,0,92761,92999,1,0
 F,0,177046,177284,0,1
 F,0,191808,192046,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Zeroarg.png",320,240
 S,0,-96,,0.5
 M,0,93237,,162,385
 F,0,93237,93475,0,1
 F,0,108475,108713,1,0
 F,0,161808,162046,0,1
 F,0,176570,176808,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
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Natsu
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Joined September 2012
Natsu

Gonzvlo wrote:

Zeroarg wrote:

2ms de offset es impersectible y no pueden afectar en nada.
Una aclaración rápida, en este caso sí tiene bastante razón, con un BPM constante como este, no afecta mucho si no es nada. Sin embargo con otros BPMs, un cambio de de 2ms si hace bastante diferencia.

Sobre el mapa, se ve bastante encaminado, un par de observaciones generales.

  1. Me parece que el C1 Whistle, no va nada bien con la canción, cada vez que suena se siente como una "interrupción" agree with Gonzvlo here maybe Kirino look for other whistle :o?
Tal vez le dé un mod con más detalle en el futuro al mapa, por ahora, suerte!
BTW lol Hinsvar Use a spoiler box? xD
DakeDekaane
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3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Why nobody likes my ultra-super-awesome jump ;_;
I'll change it if more people complain about it :<
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

DakeDekaane wrote:

Why nobody likes my ultra-super-awesome jump ;_;
I'll change it if more people complain about it :<
I like your SUPER AWESOME JUMP feel nice with DT :D
Hinsvar
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
I apparently quoted my previous post instead of editing it. Whoops.
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Don't mod for now pls I didn't upload the map since 1 week ago~ ;_;

EDIT:

Sorry for delay

Mancuso
Mancuso: All fixed~ :3
Thanks for your mod

ChivaCookie

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello there, M4M from my queue!



[Normal]

Actually normal diff is really nice mapped. I think I'll just do some … General mapping. Or I'll go full arrange-nazi. Let's see...

00:09:665 (1) – Move one grid down. To 252/308 Ok~
00:11:570 (1,2) – think about not stacking those, since easy and normal diff-players could find that irritating . Nah, I like this pattern.
00:14:427 (5) – Change Hitsound to Normal. you're right
00:19:665 (1,2) - make 00:18:713 (5) - the middle of those two sliders. (move 00:19:665 (1) - to 200/264 and 00:20:618 (2) - to 320/372) Yeah, you're right, but (2) I moved to 300:368
00:20:618 (2) – add clap sorry, I forget add a lot of hitsounds
00:21:570 (3) - move (if you've done the other things I suggested) to 404/164 k
00:22:999 (1) - move to 288/192 No thanks.
00:23:475 (2) - move to 176/236 No thanks.
00:24:427 (4) - well.. actually I don't want to change that slider. But I like it, so i wanted to say that. Don't change it. It fits very well with the music and looks cute Ahm, okay o3o
00:28:713 (1) - make that slider a bit rounder? and change the position to 160/152 (this way it won't intersect with that circle before)
okay
00:38:713 (1) - I don't like the shape of that slider, looks a bit messy imo I fixed it before. o3o.
00:45:380 (2) - change sampleset to "normal" okay
00:46:332 - does this inheriting section need to be there? Yes, but I moved that inheriting point to 00:45:981 -
01:09:665 (3,4) - Think about not stacking those Nah
01:15:856 (5,6) - ^ Nah
01:19:665 (3) - give that slider a shape? Nah, It fits with 01:17:284 (1) -
01:33:475 - what's with that Kiai-Time? It's just a flash.
01:48:237 (4) - The artistic ChivaCookie doesn't accept that. Also known as "ArtCookie" or "Cookie of esthetics" she has to say: Since there aren't many edges in your map, you should consider making that rounder. *faints* ok.. orz
01:49:189 - Inheriting section not needed flash
02:07:284 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be confusing for newer players. okay
02:11:094 (2,3) - why does kiai time stope there? Yeah, you're right, I'm lazy to explain~ but I fixed it

02:16:808 (4) - Add clap ok
02:17:761 (1) - add clap ok
02:18:713 (3) - maybe change hitsound to normal?ok
02:28:713 (3) - doesn't fit with the beat imo ok, changed
02:51:094 (3) - those longer repeating sliders are also confusing for newly players and not that much recommened changed with the last mod
02:56:808 (3,4) - again that with the kiai time ? Dunno if that's okay moved to 02:57:284 -
02:57:284 (4) - move to 432/220 actually looks bad.
03:00:618 (1,2,3) - Don't stack those No changes.


Well. The next diff isn't made by you. I'm not sure if I should map this... Well. I've got freetime today. Just do it.

Hope I was of any help. Thanks you~! :3


kajiyatta's mod

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M request~
General
Uncheck "Enable Countdows" since there is no countdown. done
Normal
I don't follow to use many stacks in easiest diff since it's a bit difficult for newbie.
Placement
00:26:808(1,1) stack seems more beautiful actually no, I just changed the placement. :3
00:34:903(1) remove NC fixed with mancuso's mod
00:38:713(1) looks weird, I suppose you can make blanket here okay
SPOILER
01:07:761(1,2) swap NC better since the finish hears a (2) I don't understand D.
01:17;284(1) the spacing seems narrow, I suppose it would be difficult to expect for newbie, so just example here no changes
SPOILER
01:19:665(3) up-curved slider seems nice to follow the flow okay
SPOILER
01:24:427(1,2) to be symmetrical better fixed
SPOILER
01:36:808(1) the slider seems weird, just put simply better okay
SPOILER
03:08:713(3) 2 grid right better to be consistence I changed the placement
Rhythm
02:51:094(3) reduce 1 reverse better Fixed with the last mod

already gathered many mods, so my modding may be useless. good luck with star~ Thankies :3
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Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Double post. ;_;
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
SPOILER
76,200,61094,6,0,L|156:128,1,100,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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458,192,66094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,310,66332,2,0,P|296:348|262:355,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,282,66808,5,4,0:3:0:0:
85,178,67046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,135,67165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,92,67284,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,178,67522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,135,67641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,244,69189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,133,69427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,133,69546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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502,255,70141,2,0,P|445:276|407:270,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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183,116,70856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,193,71094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,264,71332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,87,71570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,267,71808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,190,72046,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,119,72284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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50,195,73237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,195,73356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,195,73475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,86,73713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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401,60,74427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
488,171,74665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,172,74784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,171,74903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
395,276,75141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,276,75261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,276,75380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,229,75618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,90,75856,2,0,P|147:117|125:211,1,200,8|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

e_e
_nara_
71 posts
Joined September 2011
_nara_
m4m from your queue

Background image is larger than 1024*768
^ do something for this
you are using video for this map, no countdown no letterbox

pls remove this kiai? this really sucks on taiko o.O
00:45:856
01:33:475
01:48:713

also remove kiai in 02:57:522 till 03:04:903 so you can starts kiai in 03:04:903
and more good if you just stop the kiai in 02:57:284

--------------------------
it seems you dont want any mod again :v
but you can see my reason in your queue
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

_nara_ wrote:

m4m from your queue

Background image is larger than 1024*768
^ do something for this
you are using video for this map, no countdown no letterbox

pls remove this kiai? this really sucks on taiko o.O
00:45:856
01:33:475
01:48:713

also remove kiai in 02:57:522 till 03:04:903 so you can starts kiai in 03:04:903
and more good if you just stop the kiai in 02:57:284

--------------------------
it seems you dont want any mod again :v
but you can see my reason in your queue
1366x768 size is now allowed.
I fixed kiai time before x.x so... no changes sorry
Hayden_old
Hayden_old
you stole a already made beatmap
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

Hayden wrote:

you stole a already made beatmap
No, this is my own map made by me and obviously with the other participants.
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Hayden wrote:

you stole a already made beatmap
are you ok? you can see is a collab diff lol
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Normal and Hard updated.

Natsu and Kirino's part updated.

added new sb elements :3
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

kajiyatta wrote:

Hard
Placement
00:17:046(4,5,6,7) liner placement seems weird for me, so a bit cuved better Fixed~
SPOILER
01:43:475(2) move to x:256 y:132. yeah stack (1) seems more nice to be consistence. Fixed~
Rhythm
02:50:141(2,3) to follow the music, I suggest this rhythm. nope for this one. :3
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:52:599(1) delete finish at head, maybe add clap better Fixed~
00:57:522(1) delete finish since there is no cymbal I see nothing here, no change o.o
02:00:141(1) ^ I see nothing here, no change o.o

Collab
Rhythm
00:19:189(1,2,3,4) hears weird since it doesn't fit to music, so listencarefully and more follow music better Fixed~
SPOILER
00:29:427 it's the most difficult diff, so I don't follow to make many breaks. Fixed~
Thanks for the mod kajiyatta!
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hola :3

Modding in English so all can understand. (And because I feel weird modding in Spanish).

[Normal]
Mostly aesthetics stuff, beat placement looked fine. And making combo modding, because some are a pretty mess.
00:08:713 (2) - How about moving ti around x:140 y:192 and making softer the curve, it'd look nicer imo.
00:09:665 (1) - Remove NC here, this combo is pretty short imo.
00:14:427 (5) - Remove 1 repeat and add a circle in 00:15:380, it'd play better as that beat has a strong feeling to being hit.
00:19:665 (1,2) - Maybe make these sliders look symmetrical, copy (1), reverse it (Ctrl+G) and flip it horizontally (Ctrl+H), if you do move 00:18:713 (5) - to x:256 y:168.
00:21:570 (3) - Maybe make a blanket for 00:22:999 (1).
00:28:713 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:35:856 (3,5) - The overlap for these looks a bit bad, if you want to keep that shape for (2) and (3), maybe make something like this:
SPOILER
Remember fix the spacing for (6) if needed.
00:40:618 (2) - Fix spacing here.
00:44:427 (1) - Remember I told you about the whistle here, just remove the Normal sampleset from the slider (at the right side of editor), also remove the finish there, it doesn't fit too much.
00:45:380 (2) - Put that finish in the end of this :P
01:10:618 (1) - Remove NC.
01:16:332 (4,1) - Maybe fix spacing here.
01:19:665 (3) - Make the end of this lead to the next circle, like this.
SPOILER
01:25:380 (2) - I'd have the side with the reverse arrow pointing down, having a better flow imo.
SPOILER
01:31:570 (1,1) - Remove both NC
01:36:808 (4) - Maybe NC here.
01:40:141 (1) - Remove NC.
01:41:094 (2) - Put NC
01:43:951 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:903 (3) - Put NC
01:45:380 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:380 (1,2) - Also, this overlap looks very ugly imo, you really should avoid it. Maybe like this:
SPOILER
01:48:237 (4) - If you do what I pointed above, you may want to make a blanket with this.
02:07:284 (2) - Fix spacing, and maybe a blanket.
02:11:570 (3) - I'd prefer stack this with (4), fits better with vocals imo.
02:13:951 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:380 (2) - Put NC.
02:26:808 (1,2) - A blanket would be nice here.
02:32:046 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:42:046 (1,2) - Not a nice flow for an Easy imo, make (1) lead to (2).
02:52:999 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:475 (2) - Put NC
02:55:856 (1) - Maybe remove NC
02:57:284 (4,1) - Swap NC.
03:00:618 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:094 (3,1) - Swap NC
03:07:761 (1) - Remove NC
03:08:713 (3) - Put NC
03:09:665 (1) - Remove NC

[Kirino's Hard]
Not much to say here, and I won't nazi just to justify a mod here, it's a nice diff as it is now.
Use tickrate 1, tickrate should be consistent in all diffs, and tickrate 2 sounds pretty bad in this song.
00:01:094 (2,1) - This tiny overlaps that didn't look too nice for me.
02:03:475 - 02:18:713 - I can see what you did here :x
02:27:999 (2,1,2) - Tiny overlaps again
03:10:261 - And a note is missing here ;_;

[Collab]

Gero:
00:05:022 (4) - Delete this, there's no 1/4 tones in the music.
00:57:284 (1) - Finish this spinner in 00:59:189, there's no point in finishing it after the vocals. You can just put a circle in 01:00:618.

Kirino:
00:20:975 (4) - I think this circle is over nothing in the music, you should delete it.
00:29:427 - And a circle is missing here for vocals

Lolicakes:
00:38:713 - I'd use this rhythm instead, fits better with the music.

02:19:308 (1) - Snap this to the white tick x_x
02:19:546 - Maybe add a note here, fits nicely with vocals.
02:21:451 - ^
02:27:999 - I feel a note is missing here too. You put a note here in your next patterns.

Zeroarg:
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - I'd stack this triple, increase the spacing here, or align the notes correctly, looks a bit ugly imo, as it's a bit curved.
01:38:713 (6,7,8) - ^
01:40:141 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:40:380, fitting very nice with the vocals.
01:45:856 - I felt a note is missing here.
01:46:332 - And maybe here too, not needed if you're following vocals.
02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Stack, space a bit, or align, as I said above.

Natsu:
01:56:332 - I'd use this rhytm here, those sliders played a bit weird for me.

02:01:808 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I feel this is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192)

DakeDekaane:
You're awesome, I love your mapping style.

And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
DakeDekaane
[Collab]

Gero:
00:05:022 (4) - Delete this, there's no 1/4 tones in the music.Fixed
00:57:284 (1) - Finish this spinner in 00:59:189, there's no point in finishing it after the vocals. You can just put a circle in 01:00:618. Fixed
is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192)

DakeDekaane:
You're awesome, I love your mapping style. <---- AHAHAHAHAHAHHA XDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHAHAHA X'D

mancusojuanmattos
[Collab:]

Gero:
• 00:05:022 (4) - No aparece nada en la musica que soporte una nota ahi. Esa nota es innecesaria, deberias eliminarla. Intenta escuchar la musica a 50/25% playback cuando agregas streams y ese estilo de cosas Fixed
• 00:14:784 (3) - (^) Yo creo que este circle esta bien va bien con la musica



Mis Partes Del Collab Aqui (son las dos partes asi que ten cuidado xD) :

\:3/
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321,321,1094,1,0,3:0:0:0:
402,263,1332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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278,222,2522,2,0,B|225:239|191:197|191:197|133:109,1,200,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
75,192,3237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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242,372,3951,6,0,L|173:299,1,100,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,170,4427,2,0,L|256:243,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,315,4903,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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414,212,8594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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235,192,13475,5,2,2:0:0:0:
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426,192,14308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,145,14427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
346,114,14665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,97,14784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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351,210,56332,2,0,P|315:240|310:293,1,100,8|0,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
209,290,56808,2,0,P|203:239|167:209,1,100,8|0,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57284,12,4,60618,1:0:0:0:


VAMOS POR EL RANK! Buena Suerte Loli, llamame cuando hayas actualizado todo el mapa, lo modeare :P
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola :3

[Collab]

Natsu:
01:56:332 - I'd use this rhytm here, those sliders played a bit weird for me. since thos sliders fit and get alot of sense for me i gonna keep it

02:01:808 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I feel this is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192) xD that jump fit very weel imo since is easy to get it orz


And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola :3

Zeroarg:
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - I'd stack this triple, increase the spacing here, or align the notes correctly, looks a bit ugly imo, as it's a bit curved. stacked
01:38:713 (6,7,8) - ^ I don't want to stack this one. I really dislike stacks behind a slider. Did some little changes in position tho...
01:40:141 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:40:380, fitting very nice with the vocals. no plz, sounds horrible imo
01:45:856 - I felt a note is missing here. Following vocals, nothing missing there
01:46:332 - And maybe here too, not needed if you're following vocals. same as above
02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Stack, space a bit, or align, as I said above. ok, stacked.

And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
will edit with my updates in short. little busy now.

EDIT: update.

careful lolicakes, both parts are together.

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RoyaLuigi
1 post
Joined April 2013
RoyaLuigi
per favore rankate questa beatmap
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax

RoyaLuigi wrote:

per favore rankate questa beatmap
@translation: please rank this beatmap.

Yeah, I know that's pretty obvious what says there. and what? I wanted to look like a multi-language guy, baka >//<
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Zeroarg wrote:

Yeah, I know that's pretty obvious what says there. and what? I wanted to look like a multi-language guy, baka >//<
well, take this: Putang ina
/me runs

Also, I shall make my updates after Lolicakes update everything and what's left is mine. =w=
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Why you stop getting mods orz :l
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Updated~
Waiting for Kiri~
I need to fix hitsounds from my difficult x.x~
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
bato fato XD gentleman ok no XD no me se la letra =W= Star~
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Gero wrote:

bato fato XD gentleman ok no XD no me se la letra =W= Star~
gero te has hecho como tommy spam en todos lados xD
DeletedUser_1574070
DeletedUser_1574070
COOL MAP (Quick check)

Collab
00:14:427 (1,2,3,4) - I couldn't understand why you NCed here. (Just IMO. it doesn't mean you should un-NC here)
00:26:808 (1) - finish added here so I think 00:19:189 (1) - here should be added, too
00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - jump might made this map better but this is fine too
00:32:999 (2,3) - stack
00:42:046 (2) - finish (Since PSY put emphasis on 'Mal-E-ya!')
01:46:094 (4) - is this intentional points that you didn't use Ctrl + H here?
01:46:808 (5,7) - ^


Hard
00:02:046 (1,2) - not good overlap. just a bit down
02:28:713 (1) - ^

Normal
00:42:761 - rhythm suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791366
02:28:713 (3,4) - is this intentional?
02:57:284 (1,3) - stacking might be better

Great map :) hope this ranked soon!
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax

Kloyd wrote:

Collab
01:46:094 (4) - is this intentional points that you didn't use Ctrl + H here?
01:46:808 (5,7) - ^
Both are on purpouse. I follow vocals there and it's my pattern. Thanks for mod :3
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
787B
Hello there.
Mod requested ingame.

General

  • 01:33:475 - I quite don't understand why the kiai here, because this part of the song actually repeats a lot, but doesn't have kiai on all of them of course. Just pointed this out to know the idea/explanation. Everything else looks fine.

Normal

  • Will point considerable issues with combos here.
  1. 00:11:570 (1,2) - Stack here kinda ruins the flow in my opinion, would be nice if they were separated. Plus, in the actual position there's an "imaginary" straight line that the cursor plays, considering 00:09:665 (3,4,1) -, which I dislike for degrading gameplay. Here's an example of an improvement. Although, keep in mind that when changing this you might want to change the next objects 00:13:475 (3,4,5) - of course for a better placement on the grid.
    Example
  2. 00:20:618 (2,3,1) - Why the sudden change of spacing here between them? Might want to keep the 1,0x for consistency.
  3. 00:26:808 (1) - I usually follow the new ticklines for a reference when adding new combos, especially in instrumental songs. But there is vocals here of course. If you actually wanted the new combo here because of that tickline, it's fine. Though considering previous combos were following vocals, you might want to change the new combo to 00:27:284 (2) - because here's where it changes.
  4. 00:30:618 (5) - Highly suggest a new combo here instead of 00:31:570 (1) - because of the drums in the song.
  5. 00:33:475 (4,1,2) - You might want to move one of them a bit to the left or right to improve flow. The same issue of straight line here, like in 00:09:665 (3,4,1) -.
  6. 00:37:284 (5) - Hm, better find a new placement for this since it also doesn't match the 1,0x spacing. This place is actually confusing to read because of that. Remember you can always do ctrl+g in sliders to change its start position to find better places on the grid.
  7. 00:38:713 (6) - New Combo here, right?
  8. 00:40:618 (2) - Spacing.
  9. 00:42:046 (4) - Kinda optional the new combo here and deleting the current one at 00:44:427 (1) - because combos of only two objects are a bit weird to me.
  10. 01:02:046 (2,3) - Stacks here are also unnecessary to me, considering this is the kiai, you might want to have a good flow here. Here's an example of what stuff could've been.
    Example
  11. 01:12:522 (6) - A bit nazi, but it would be much better if this was at x;256 y:220 (to match with 01:09:665 (2,3) - ). Althought it's currently not possible because 01:11:570 (5) - doesn't let that happen due to the spacing, you could try decreasing its ending node a bit down to make that possible. Doing that won't affect next objects spacing by the way.
    How it is
    How it could be
  12. 01:15:856 (3,4) - A slider here would be totally awesome. Give it a try, it fits better than the stacks. Honestly.
    Pattern
  13. 01:18:713 (2) - Might want a new combo here because of the vocals. Also give a fix on them, the current pattern is a bit weird imo. Here, try this.
    Example
  14. 01:29:189 (1) - NC unnecessary. Fix patterns.
    Example
  15. 01:32:522 (1) - NC also unnecessary imo.
  16. 01:36:808 (1) - ^. Also fix the spacing here.
    Example
  17. 02:11:570 (3) - NC because of kiai.
    Example
  18. 02:28:713 (3,4) - Consider improving stack here. Which implies making both of them at the same place on the grid. Just delete (4) and place it again below (3). Make sure both of them are in x:256 y:164.
    Example
  19. 02:36:332 (1) - This spinner should end in 02:39:665 - to match with all your previous spinners patterns. This is recommended for making things consistent.
  20. 02:47:284 (3) - Might want to move this slider's ending node down on the grid for a better visuals, so it won't touch with 02:45:856 (1) - .
    Example
  21. 02:57:284 (1,3) - Nazi again, but they could've been placed on the same spot on the grid.
  22. 03:09:665 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
  23. 03:10:618 (1) - This should finish at 03:12:046 -.

Kirino's Hard

  1. 00:23:475 (4) - Might want to add the NC here, since the vocals change. I kinda wished the pattern here was a slider instead of those stacks in 00:22:999 (3,4) - though, it plays better and keeps the consistency of previous objects in my opinion.
  2. 00:53:832 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't use the blue tick for hitcircles-only here. Sliders work much better for that in my opinion. You basically followed only the vocals at this part, which I honestly think it plays a bit bad. You could've tried mixing both the vocals and instrumentals part here for a better pattern though. For reference, try checking the Collab at this part.
  3. 02:19:189 - Why no object here, just like you did in 01:14:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ? Well, I know there is break after, but I think it also fits nice for the current pattern you've used.
  4. 03:06:808 (1,2) - The stack here ruins the flow a lot. The pattern is good, but would be best if they were in different places. Here's an example.
    Example

Collab

  1. 00:17:999 - Kinda feels like an empty spot here. Would be nice if there was an hitcircle.
  2. 00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - Uhh, I'm not sure if this is a good spot for emphasis. I honestly think it would be a lot better if the combo was (1,2,3,4).
  3. 00:32:999 (2,3) - Kinda nazi, but the stack could've been improved (hitcircle (3) been placed at x:351 y:185).
  4. 00:34:427 (1) - NC here looks better.
    Example
  5. 00:37:284 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggesting another pattern for combos here. Take a look.
    Example
  6. 00:57:284 (1) - I really felt this spinner was forced a bit when I test-played it. Mostly because only in the collab the spin at this part is quite long, which I quite don't like the inconsistency. Would be nice if this was reduced to 00:57:284 (1) - or 00:58:713 - .
  7. 01:38:713 (6) - Spacing here from previous object is a bit messy. You should follow the 1,0x spacing you've used, instead of the 0,80x.
  8. 01:38:713 (6) - New Combo could've been added, so it won't let the current combo a bit long.
  9. 01:45:618 (3,4,5) - Highly suggesting adding couple objects between those notes. Especifically in 01:45:856 -, 01:46:332 - and 01:46:570 - . You can clearly hear beats there. I understand you've wanted to follow the vocals, but it feels kinda weird without adding something between them. And considering this is a Collab, you can make a good use of those notes.
  10. 01:52:522 (1,2,3,4) - You could've tried a better placement for those sliders. Honestly, this looks kinda boring to play.
  11. 02:02:522 (4) - Clap unnecessary, since well, there's actually only vocals.
  12. Here are a couple of places I would add objects, since I actually found something was missing there when test-playing: 02:11:808 -, 02:24:665 - 02:27:999 - 02:28:475 - 02:30:380 - 02:32:284 - 02:34:189 - 02:35:141 - 02:36:094 -. Give them a test and see if you agree.
Alright, wishing the best of luck for you guys.
Poke me ingame if there's something you didn't understand/want to discuss.
See ya.
Lolicakey
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Lolicakey
thanks for your mod >w</
Natsu
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Natsu

Wolf wrote:

Hello there.
Mod requested ingame.

[*]01:52:522 (1,2,3,4) - You could've tried a better placement for those sliders. Honestly, this looks kinda boring to play. Is fun when you play it with DT also if you listen to the music is kinda bored in this point too so i thing those slider fit nice that point but I gonna check more opinions about it :D
Mythiax
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Mythiax

Wolf wrote:

Hello there.

Collab

  1. 01:38:713 (6) - Spacing here from previous object is a bit messy. You should follow the 1,0x spacing you've used, instead of the 0,80x. oh, fixed.
  2. 01:38:713 (6) - New Combo could've been added, so it won't let the current combo a bit long. I don't see anything bad in having a combo up to 8 notes.
  3. 01:45:618 (3,4,5) - Highly suggesting adding couple objects between those notes. Especifically in 01:45:856 -, 01:46:332 - and 01:46:570 - . You can clearly hear beats there. I understand you've wanted to follow the vocals, but it feels kinda weird without adding something between them. And considering this is a Collab, you can make a good use of those notes. only added the first note you mentioned. I don't want to change it too much.
Thanks a lot for mod.

Lolicakes
cambios
por favor: Mueve 01:38:713 (6,7,8) - a x:344 y:56 y agrega una nota en 01:45:856 - x:264 y:200 eso es todo en mi parte.
Loooctav
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Loooctav
Need mod? e.e
Lolicakey
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Need mod? e.e
yes :33 I'll call you for a mod, I will wait for Kiri's answer
xHappy-
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xHappy-
Normal
00:07:761(1) - add finish to head slider ?
00:24:427 - Change to like this ?

00:30:618(5) - add finish to head slider ?
01:03:475 - Change to like this ?

01:25:856(2) - add finish to end slider ?
02:57:284(1) - add finish ?
Hard
00:07:761(1) - add finish to head slider ?
00:30:618(1) - ^
Collab
not bad
Kirino Kousaka
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Kirino Kousaka

DakeDekaane wrote:

Modding in English so all can understand. (And because I feel weird modding in Spanish).
^...

[Kirino's Hard]
Not much to say here, and I won't nazi just to justify a mod here, it's a nice diff as it is now.
Use tickrate 1, tickrate should be consistent in all diffs, and tickrate 2 sounds pretty bad in this song. fixed~
00:01:094 (2,1) - This tiny overlaps that didn't look too nice for me. made some changes~
02:03:475 - 02:18:713 - I can see what you did here :x no u don't. No change. =w=
02:27:999 (2,1,2) - Tiny overlaps again fixed :o
03:10:261 - And a note is missing here ;_; made changes~

[Collab]
Kirino:
00:20:975 (4) - I think this circle is over nothing in the music, you should delete it. not sure if something's wrong or if fixed it long before, no change :o
00:29:427 - And a circle is missing here for vocals same here, I think I fixed before but meh. no change I guess. o.o
Thanks for the mod DakeNanami~!

Kloyd wrote:

Collab
00:26:808 (1) - finish added here so I think 00:19:189 (1) - here should be added, too removed finish from 00:19:189 (1) since there is no cymbal sound there unlike 00:22:999 (1).
00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - jump might made this map better but this is fine too Jumps added~


Hard
00:02:046 (1,2) - not good overlap. just a bit down already fixed with Dake's mod
02:28:713 (1) - ^ already fixed with Dake's mod too
Thanks for the mod Kloyd~

Wolf wrote:

Hello there.

Kirino's Hard

  1. 00:23:475 (4) - Might want to add the NC here, since the vocals change. I kinda wished the pattern here was a slider instead of those stacks in 00:22:999 (3,4) - though, it plays better and keeps the consistency of previous objects in my opinion. Didn't do the NC, but turned 00:22:999 (3,4) into a slider, nice point you got there.
  2. 00:53:832 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't use the blue tick for hitcircles-only here. Sliders work much better for that in my opinion. You basically followed only the vocals at this part, which I honestly think it plays a bit bad. You could've tried mixing both the vocals and instrumentals part here for a better pattern though. For reference, try checking the Collab at this part. Didn't do the blue ticks, but I have to agree with the mixture of vocals and some instrumentals. Made changes~
  3. 02:19:189 - Why no object here, just like you did in 01:14:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ? Well, I know there is break after, but I think it also fits nice for the current pattern you've used. I agree, fixed~
  4. 03:06:808 (1,2) - The stack here ruins the flow a lot. The pattern is good, but would be best if they were in different places. Here's an example. Fixed~
    Example

Collab

  1. 00:17:999 - Kinda feels like an empty spot here. Would be nice if there was an hitcircle. True, fixed~
  2. 00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - Uhh, I'm not sure if this is a good spot for emphasis. I honestly think it would be a lot better if the combo was (1,2,3,4). Good point, fixed~
  3. Here are a couple of places I would add objects, since I actually found something was missing there when test-playing: 02:11:808 -, 02:24:665 - 02:27:999 - 02:28:475 - 02:30:380 - 02:32:284 - 02:34:189 - 02:35:141 - 02:36:094 -. Give them a test and see if you agree. Added on my part~
Thanks for modding Wolf~ You've got some very nice ideas, you're doing great and keep that up. :D

Peeoil555 wrote:

Hard
00:07:761(1) - add finish to head slider ? no change.
00:30:618(1) - ^ Nice catch, fixed~
Thanks for the mod Peeoil555~

I'm very sorry for this late reply, here are the updates for my diff and Collab.
Lolicakes, I will fix your diff's hitsounds soon when I come back, and recheck the hitsounds of the other two diffs if they have some hitsound infringements at the same time.
Update:
Kirino's Hard
Collab
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R.I.P Gentleman :c
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Wow, see you again in august, mappu. =w=
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Yuzeyun
It's not dead, it's sleeping beside ~
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Gero
Orz ;----; rest in peace PSY U.U
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Gero wrote:

Orz ;----; rest in peace PSY U.U
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Mythiax

Gero wrote:

Orz ;----; rest in peace PSY U.U
Lolicakey
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Lolicakey
Remapping Normal diff ( =A=)b YEAH! I'm back for now ;-;
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Gero
still alive :'D/ this is a miracle XD
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Yuzeyun

Lolicakes wrote:

Remapping Normal diff ( =A=)b YEAH! I'm back for now forever ;-;
=3=b
Mythiax
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Mythiax
It's alive!
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Natsu
:3/
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Kyouren
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Lolicakey
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Lolicakey
Someday I'll finish to map Normal diff, someday... :(
Natsu
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Natsu

Lolicakes wrote:

Someday I'll finish to map Normal diff, someday... :(
hurry up orz I wanna see this ranked soon T-T baka
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Yuzeyun
u3u.
Lolicakey
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added <3
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Natsu

Lolicakes wrote:

added <3
baka rank this :C
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Gero

Natsu wrote:

Lolicakes wrote:

added <3
baka rank this :C

This ^
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Gero wrote:

Natsu wrote:

baka rank this :C

This ^
That ^
Lolicakey
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Lolicakey
Someday I will finish to remap normal >.<
Stefan
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I think I still got an Easy Diff for this song.. that's all what I wanted to say. *wooosh*
Lolicakey
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Lolicakey

Stefan wrote:

I think I still got an Easy Diff for this song.. that's all what I wanted to say. *wooosh*
my Normal seems as an easy ;w;
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