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NO NAME - Kono Namida wo Kimi ni Sasagu (TV Size)

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Sylphi
osu! Alumni
3,298 posts
Joined February 2012
Sylphi
Hi, BeatofIke.

[General]
- Video's dimensions must not exceed 854*480 when video is widescreen. How about use this video file? http://puu.sh/2KL0t.zip

[Easy]
- This is perfect! i can't mod this difficulty >~<

[Normal]
00:13:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Hmm... i think it would be better to change rhythm to this.
00:42:821 - Add note to follow vocal.

[Collab]
00:29:802 (2) - How about change to this? i think that is better than 1 / 1 slider.
00:54:283 - Add note to follow similar part in prev [00:47:349 (5,6,1) -, 00:49:330 (5,6,1) -]. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/732776
01:12:396 - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/732795
00:53:293 ~ 01:00:651 - I think you forgot some hitsound in this part.
00:53:293 (3) - Add whistle
00:53:859 (5) - Add clap.
00:55:557 (3) - Add whistle on slider head.
00:56:123 (4) - Add clap on slider head.
00:57:821 (2) - Add whistle.
00:58:387 (4) - Add clap.
01:00:085 (2) - Add whistle.
01:00:651 (3) - Add clap.

[Nich's Insane]
01:22:444 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is a little awkward. How about change to this?
SPOILER


356,132,82444,2,0,L|312:128,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,52,82868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,52,83009,2,0,L|209:41,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,28,83576,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Nice beatmap! Good luck >~<
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hi~

[General]
  1. mapset
    Easy HP2 AR3 OD2
    Normal HP3 AR5 OD3
    Hard HP5 AR7 OD5
    Insane HP7 AR8 OD7 is better?
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:576 (4) - I think try "Ctrl+G" is Clean flow?
  2. 01:09:708 (4) - move x256 y268 is better.
  3. 01:14:236 (4) - ^
good

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:576 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  2. 00:30:651 (5) - add note ( and my idea )
    00:27:255 (1,2,3,4) - this note and slider ctrl+H move x120 y208
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
good

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:198 (1) - 1grid down is better. nazi sorry
  2. 00:19:330 (3) - and 2grid up? ( If you modify the above )
really awesome!

[Nich's Insane]
  1. 00:20:462 (1) - 1grid up is fit nazi sorry
  2. 01:08:010 (8) - add Nc
  3. 01:08:859 (1) - remove Nc ( If you modify the above )
  4. 01:10:274 (9) - add Nc ( If you modify the above )
  5. 01:11:406 (1) - remove Nc ( If you modify the above )
  6. 01:12:538 (7) - add Nc ( If you modify the above )
  7. 01:13:387 (1) - remove Nc ( If you modify the above )
  8. 01:14:802 (9) - add Nc ( If you modify the above )
    ~~~~~After much in the same interval Newcombo should be Fix it~~~~~
    I think I am strange NewCombo
but, you're map is really good :)

good luck star~ ;)
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
o3o/ Ike (ノTДT)ノ

General

  1. Try to set audio lead-in 1.5~2 seconds later. it will give to players lingering imagery.
  2. Video's resolution and size is too big. (size is 1280x720) you should reduce both it. your BG is 4:3. so, I recommend 800x600 and under 13MB

Easy

  1. 00:43:104 (1) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734702 and add volume 5% 00:45:085 this point. it will be good to before kiai time

Normal

  1. 00:47:066 - Add 1 circle?

Hard

  1. 00:15:934 (1) - How about this? if you're following vocals, look at this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734718
  2. 00:53:859 (5) - Add clap
  3. 00:56:123 (4) - ^
  4. 00:56:689 (1) - Ctrl + G? how about makes symmetry 00:58:953 (1) this slider?
  5. 01:12:396 - Add 1 circle. it will be better about vocal sound. like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734724
  6. 01:14:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - How about makes more hexagon? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734728
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    192,304,74802,6,0,P|264:280|332:304,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    403,345,75651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    403,345,75793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    403,345,75934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    473,305,76217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    473,223,76500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    402,181,76783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    330,223,77066,6,0,P|294:219|262:195,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:26:547 (2,4) - Clear finish sound or add low volume on 01:26:123 this point. it is a little bit noisy. like 40~60% is fit well.

Nich's Insane

  1. 00:44:519 (4,5,6) - How about this? it will be better to downbeat sound. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734738
  2. 01:18:198 (7) - Overlap looks a little bad. at least move to x:184, y:148, it will be better to moving.
  3. 01:26:123 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap?
AKB <3 sry. this mapset is too perfect. I can't mod well. take my star ~
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Thanks for the mod everyone. I owe you guys!
Waiting for Nichiyouki's fix before moving on.
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Thank you everyone for mod :)

but sorry that I didn't say the reason that I will fix or not, since so many modder that I have to check.

http://puu.sh/2LUWG.osu
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Updated!
I still need to fix the video dimensions and a few things.

EDIT: Fixed video dimensions.
_Azusa_
144 posts
Joined September 2010
_Azusa_
Random mod~

I love this song so much <33

[General]

Looks clean to me

[Easy]

00:56:123 (4,1): Move (4) to x:264 y:263 to align better with (1)?

SPOILER

01:01:217 (1,2): Maybe try move (1) to x:324 y:212 and (2) to x:256 y:78? Pattern will look better imo.

SPOILER

01:21:029 (2): Try move this note to x:268 y:36

01:21:595 (1): You can extend this slider to 01:23:859, imo this will fit more.

Wow this easy is pretty good! Very clean.

[Normal]

00:31:783 (4): I think a 1/1 slider looks better imo.

SPOILER

00:32:632 (6): ^

00:34:047 (4): ^

00:36:028 (3,1): Move this note to (3) to align better with (1):

SPOILER

Good i like it ^^

[Hard]

00:24:708 (4): Well i didn't like it the way this note was positioned, but is just my opinion because current position works too, but imo this note looks better stacked with (3).

00:39:425 (2): Imo a 2/2 slider works better.

01:01:217 (1,2,3,4): I think this rhythm works and fits better with the song:

SPOILER

01:23:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4): Just a comment, this is my favourite part of this diff *---*

[Nich's Insane]

00:01:217 (3,4): Current fits music good, but i think this rhythm will follow better the piano sound:
SPOILER

00:04:613 (1,2): A 1/4 slider don't sounds good here, maybe try this rhythm:

SPOILER

This diff is very nice!

Excellent map i really liked it! :D

Good Luck!
orioncomet
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Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- There's 2 .mp3 flies, please remove "NO NAME -Yume wa Nando Demo Umarekawaru.mp3" since it's not used.
- Do you mind reducing the video size a bit? 17MB video flie is a bit too big for 1:30mins song, (.osz is 20.3MB even if you remove that extra .mp3 flie) imo.

[Easy]
- This may be a bit repetitive, maybe try to use different beat sometimes. but since it's easy diff, it should be easy, so i guess it's fine~

[Normal]
fine ~

[Hard]
- Honestly, I don't really like random jumps on Hard diff. but since song is slow, it looked neat~

[Nich's Insane]
01:22:585 (4,5) - Is this intend? It's kinda hard to tell spacing because it's using same spacing as 01:21:595 (1,2) with different beat.
01:23:576 (6) - ^ same spacing as 01:22:585 (4,5) with different beat.

fine mapset!~
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Do you mind reducing the video size a bit? 17MB video flie is a bit too big for 1:30mins song, (.osz is 20.3MB even if you remove that extra .mp3 flie) imo.
Hi. If you need help with this, just tell me. I have a 15MB (no quality loss) and a 9MB (significant loss) copy of the vid in .flv format. Just say yes and I'll upload it.
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Yes Please and thanks in advance! :D

P.S: I never noticed the extra mp3 file lol
jockeytiyan
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Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
http://www.mediafire.com/?cyclw4ykp8kzsn7

This is the 9MB copy. Somehow, MF won't let me upload the 15MB but if you don't like the quality of this one, I'll try my best to upload it. Also, same vid offset methinks.

EDIT: Sorry in advance if there's a problem in the resolution. I have no idea how to check the exact amount but I'm a bit sure this is 800x600.
Last edited by jockeytiyan , edited 1 time in total.
BeatofIke
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Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Ah I see, try Sendspace that's a good one. :3

EDIT: You know what, i prefer my video, so I'm keeping it!
Updated!
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ghr5yy

Here's the 15MB version. Sorry late reply.
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
I'm still sad about my 1337 post :< it didn't last as much as I wanted lol

  • General
  1. Missing video in Hard, Normal and Easy. Please fix this.
  2. "AKB0048 next stage" o.o what is this source, may i ask? i'm just curious~ and it looks like.. random lol. :p
  • [Easy]

    Pretty solid difficulty. I agree with orion about this difficulty, but I think it's fine for a slow song!
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:13:387 (4) - This note doesn't flow good imo. If you move it more over here it will have much better flow with 00:13:670 (1). :3
    SPOILER
  2. 00:30:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh? Why so many notes all of a sudden? You can use sliders to follow the voice or something, that would be better imo. For example at 00:34:047 (4,5). These two notes can be replaced by a slider to follow more the music.
  3. 01:21:312 (4) - A bit nazi :P consider moving this note a tad up for a slightly better flow. Like this:
    SPOILER

    Personally didn't like too much some 1/2 sliders at red tick (the short ones with repeat) but I guess they're fine.
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:09:991 (3) - This pattern would flow muuuch better if you move this note down, to x256 y176. Please try it out!
  2. 00:49:330 (5) - Similar to above. This would flow better if you rotate this slider slightly up, to end up with a pattern like this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:55:274 (2) - This "jump" is so small.. it irks me everytime I see it. It doesn't look good nor fitting with the music imo so I suggest you to stick with DS here. You have to move 00:54:425 (1) a bit up (exactly at x132 y348), 00:55:274 (2) will hve to be placed a bit more to the left (i placed it at x48 y188) and then adjust the other three next sliders. You should end up with this:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:02:066 (2) - Perhaps move this note where 01:03:198 (4) is placed for better flow?
  5. 01:08:576 (2) - Again o3o for better flow with 01:08:010 (1)'s curve I suggest you to arrange 01:08:576 (2,3,4) with a more "curved shaped" pattern. Like this:
    SPOILER
  6. 01:11:972 (4) - This slider flows bad imo. Please consider moving it up, like this for much better flow with 01:11:406 (3) and 01:12:538 (1). In the screenshot it looks like offscreen/touching the HP bar but it isn't. Just in case, if you agree with this try to move 01:11:406 (3) a bit down or to the right to avoid getting too close to the HP bar. This is just a example. :3
    SPOILER

    Like orion said again, I don't like too much jumps on hard diffs but the ones you made fit with the music and with the slow melody of it, that's why it plays good.
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:16:076 (2) - This triplet sounds kinda overmapped. Please consider removing this note.
  2. 00:35:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those hitfinishes sound too loud and unfitting. The song is still calm here, so my suggestion is removing them. They don't fit here imo.
  3. 00:53:576 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. I think this slider would flow slightly better with the previous notes and 00:54:425 (5) if you move the final of it a bit down. Like this:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:02:632 (4) - Similar as above. I think this note doesn't flow good with 01:01:642 (2,3). It would flow much better if you move it over here imo. Please try it out and check :3
    SPOILER

    Good. I personally don't like so many jumps for a slow song, but at the same time most of them were fun to play. :)
    _______________
Call me back!
BeatofIke
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Topic Starter
BeatofIke

Kei wrote:

I'm still sad about my 1337 post :< it didn't last as much as I wanted lol

  • General
  1. Missing video in Hard, Normal and Easy. Please fix this.
    Feedback: Yes, that's becuase I was still changing the video file when you were modding it! :P
  2. "AKB0048 next stage" o.o what is this source, may i ask? i'm just curious~ and it looks like.. random lol. :p
Feedback: It's from an anime, called "AKB0048" ("AKB0048 next stage" is season 2).
  • [Easy]

    Pretty solid difficulty. I agree with orion about this difficulty, but I think it's fine for a slow song!
Feedback: Yay! :)

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:13:387 (4) - This note doesn't flow good imo. If you move it more over here it will have much better flow with 00:13:670 (1). :3
    SPOILER
    Feedback: Yes and Fixed!
  2. 00:30:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh? Why so many notes all of a sudden? You can use sliders to follow the voice or something, that would be better imo. For example at 00:34:047 (4,5). These two notes can be replaced by a slider to follow more the music.
    Feedback: I did just that and rearrange the notes for better spacing. Fixed!
  3. 01:21:312 (4) - A bit nazi :P consider moving this note a tad up for a slightly better flow. Like this:
    Feedback: Thanks, but I'm going to keep it as it is for now.
    SPOILER

    Personally didn't like too much some 1/2 sliders at red tick (the short ones with repeat) but I guess they're fine.
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:09:991 (3) - This pattern would flow muuuch better if you move this note down, to x256 y176. Please try it out!
    Feedback: It was here originally, but someone told me to change it to here instead XD. Since you said so, Fixed!
  2. 00:49:330 (5) - Similar to above. This would flow better if you rotate this slider slightly up, to end up with a pattern like this:
    Feedback: Decided to do something else o.o!
    SPOILER
  3. 00:55:274 (2) - This "jump" is so small.. it irks me everytime I see it. It doesn't look good nor fitting with the music imo so I suggest you to stick with DS here. You have to move 00:54:425 (1) a bit up (exactly at x132 y348), 00:55:274 (2) will hve to be placed a bit more to the left (i placed it at x48 y188) and then adjust the other three next sliders. You should end up with this:
    Feedback: Fixed hopefully o.o!
    SPOILER
  4. 01:02:066 (2) - Perhaps move this note where 01:03:198 (4) is placed for better flow?
    Feedback: Decided to do something else o.o!
  5. 01:08:576 (2) - Again o3o for better flow with 01:08:010 (1)'s curve I suggest you to arrange 01:08:576 (2,3,4) with a more "curved shaped" pattern. Like this:
    Feedback: Fixed!
    SPOILER
  6. 01:11:972 (4) - This slider flows bad imo. Please consider moving it up, like this for much better flow with 01:11:406 (3) and 01:12:538 (1). In the screenshot it looks like offscreen/touching the HP bar but it isn't. Just in case, if you agree with this try to move 01:11:406 (3) a bit down or to the right to avoid getting too close to the HP bar. This is just a example. :3
    Feedback: Again, fixed hpefully!
    SPOILER

    Like orion said again, I don't like too much jumps on hard diffs but the ones you made fit with the music and with the slow melody of it, that's why it plays good.
Thanks for the mod Kei! I remapped some parts to increase flow! :)
BeatofIke
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Topic Starter
BeatofIke
I own Flashlight! 8-)

Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki

azu-nyan14 wrote:

[Nich's Insane]

00:01:217 (3,4): Current fits music good, but i think this rhythm will follow better the piano sound: I think it's fine.
SPOILER

00:04:613 (1,2): A 1/4 slider don't sounds good here, maybe try this rhythm: It isn't weird sound for me

SPOILER

orioncomet wrote:

[Nich's Insane]
01:22:585 (4,5) - Is this intend? It's kinda hard to tell spacing because it's using same spacing as 01:21:595 (1,2) with different beat. Yes, I intend :P to have fun.
01:23:576 (6) - ^ same spacing as 01:22:585 (4,5) with different beat. I felt it's no problem to read and play imo.

Kei wrote:

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:16:076 (2) - This triplet sounds kinda overmapped. Please consider removing this note. I will move at 00:16:359 instead, since I heard the rhythm here.
  2. 00:35:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those hitfinishes sound too loud and unfitting. The song is still calm here, so my suggestion is removing them. They don't fit here imo. nope, since I heard something in the music here, and I think that it's fine to use finish.
  3. 00:53:576 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. I think this slider would flow slightly better with the previous notes and 00:54:425 (5) if you move the final of it a bit down. Like this: It doesn't flow naturally on 00:53:293 (1,2). So no change.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:02:632 (4) - Similar as above. I think this note doesn't flow good with 01:01:642 (2,3). It would flow much better if you move it over here imo. Please try it out and check :3 Okay, and I will fix pattern on (5) to easier to read.
    SPOILER

    Good. I personally don't like so many jumps for a slow song, but at the same time most of them were fun to play. :) yep, thank you for your comment :3
    _______________
Thank you everyone for mods :)

http://puu.sh/2SuHc.osu
BeatofIke
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Topic Starter
BeatofIke
and.......Updated!
Thanks everyone for mod! :3
P.S: Nichiyouki's 1200th post! o.o
Kei
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Joined May 2010
Kei
Deleted my unnecessary previous post to avoid doubleposting.

Well, we had a IRC recheck. Here's the log.

Chatlog
22:45 Kei: are you busy? because I want to point out a small thing about Hard
22:52 BeatofIke: No, I'm free :D
22:53 Kei: Well, its a very.. simple thing
22:54 BeatofIke: okay o.o
22:54 Kei: 00:38:576 (1) - This newcombo is strange :< it is not needed. It would be better if you remove it and add nc to 00:39:991 (3), then remove nc of 00:40:840 (1), and add it to 00:41:689 (2) ~but it's up to you
22:55 Kei: it may be unconsistent or something. I dont understand too much your nc pattern xD
22:56 BeatofIke: Wow, those combos XD
22:56 BeatofIke: I didn't meant to put them there D:
22:56 Kei: and here: 01:27:396 (4) - i think you used too many hitfinishes o3o my suggestion is replacing this hitfinish with a hitnormal :>
22:56 Kei: haha!
22:57 BeatofIke: Okay :3
22:59 Kei: w-what
22:59 Kei: how i didnt notice htis
22:59 Kei: this*
22:59 Kei: well better late than never LOL
22:59 Kei: I think you should add a green line here without kiai
22:59 Kei: 01:01:217 (1) -
23:00 Kei: 01:05:746 - then another green line with kiai :D
23:00 Kei: the music is calm there, the chorus stops for a moment
23:00 Kei: :p
23:01 BeatofIke: Nice! Now that's looks more consistent :D
23:01 Kei: i was going to overlook that lol lucky me :3
23:03 BeatofIke: Well thank you :3
23:03 Kei: Np :D
23:04 BeatofIke: Fixed everything so far!
23:04 Kei: Remove bookmarks of the Easy diff, and then submit :D
In conclusion: we changed the kiai time, removed useless bookmarks in [Easy], changed a hitcombo pattern in [Hard] and also a hitsound of that difficulty.

Everything looks ready to go now. Good luck!

BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Thank you Kei! :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Checked and nothing to say ~

Relax map/song ~ Here you go <3

jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
yeahh gratz~
scanter
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Joined July 2012
scanter
Gratz \o/ so pretty map !
Natsu
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Natsu
congratz
Dino99
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Dino99
Congratz!!~ :D
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Congratz~
alacat
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alacat
yay :)
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Wow~
This map is ranked

Congrats too, BeatoIke :)
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Ninja Ranked! XD
Thanks everyone! :D

Also, this is most likely my last ranked map for a while. I'm planning to take a break from ranking my maps. This doesn't mean that I retire or quit mapping. I'm still going to make more maps, but it most likely won't be for ranking. I'm only going to map via guest difficulty request, and only mod maps upon request.
ritsu-tanaika
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ritsu-tanaika
Oh great, I would like to ask you to do some guest difficulties for me, if you dont mind :)
Satellite
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Satellite
congratz!!
[Maid] NekoRyo
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[Maid] NekoRyo
it's good that this map is ranked :D

congratulation!
Kei
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Kei
*-* perfect bubble. That was fast. Grats Ike!
BeatofIke
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Thanks Kei! :)
Loooctav
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Congratz~
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grats
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