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Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-01-07T12:57:46+00:00

http://up.ppy.sh/files/niconicochorus-s ... oonanimexx)[rainbowxregou].osu

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-01-09T09:14:34+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Remove the audio from video to reduce file size. Also, the quality of the video could be better in my opinion.
• Try to use these combo colors, 6 are way too much imo.
SPOILER
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 70,186,255
Combo2 : 44,243,184
Combo3 : 196,136,255
```
• Remove "Nico Nico" from tags.

Easy

• HP Drain Rate: 3
• 00:12:458 (1,2) - Delete these circles and add a slider like the one before.
SPOILER
• 00:23:569 (2) - Delete this circle.
• 00:27:273 (1) - Make this slider a bit more fluid and circular.
• 01:35:421 (1) - Delete this spinner, it doesn't follow anything.
• 00:39:866 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) and (4). End (2) at 00:41:347 then add a circle at 00:41:718 and another one at 00:42:088.
• 02:05:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part.

Normal

• Overall Difficulty:4
• Approach Rate: 5
• 01:35:421 (1) - Delete this spinner.
• 02:05:000 (x) - Uhh why there's so much empty space here? Try to use 1/1 sliders here.
SPOILER
• 02:08:000 (x) - ^
• 02:11:000 (x) - ^

Just some small thoughts on the easier diffs.

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2013-01-14T09:58:26+00:00

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)

you must make video offset identical
I guess you forget change it to SC1 lol (for all)

Easy

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:27:273 (3) - for this pattern, you can make it layout better imo. that's why I give you a code:
code&photo
```
346,168,27273,6,0,P|256:27|165:168,2,400
```
00:47:644 (1,2,1) - spacing issue, why do you make x0.8 before but x1.0 here? it's intentional?
01:04:310 (3,4,1) - actually, this pattern is fine, but not really good. you can make it more interrelated, x276,y304 is possible solution imo.(notice: if you accept this pattern, it will affect 01:06:532 (2,3,1,2,3) - pattern)
01:34:310 (3,4) - spacing issue, I just find this: x0.81->x0.72. it's intentional?

02:24:310 (1) - regulate slider shape:

code & photo

411,192,144310,6,0,B|330:216|148:192|107:59|256:-46|404:59|363:192|181:216|100:192,2,600,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

02:29:495 (1,2) - switch newcombo, 02:30:236 (2) - NC add at paragraph(downbeat) is more suitable.

Normal

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)

00:34:310 (2,3) -

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:26:532 - used additions: Drum?

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

Umm... general is fine, but your slider shape is too awkward. for example: 00:28:755 (1) - ,00:34:681 (3) - ,00:45:051 (4) - ,01:26:532 (1) - ...etc. you should check mapset by yourself again.

00:45:051 (4,1) - exchange new combo.
00:56:903 (3,1) - ^
01:01:903 (2,1) - it's a rigid pattern, you should notice it when you mapping next map.

02:12:273 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - not sure but I guess you want make it straight.

40,48,132273,5,2,0:0:0
40,48,132458,1,6,0:0:0
116,140,133014,1,2,0:0:0
116,140,133199,1,2,0:0:0
200,224,133755,6,2,B|236:260,1,49.9999952316285,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,316,134310,1,0,0:0:0
352,368,134681,2,2,B|428:292,1,99.999990463257
364,244,135421,6,2,B|288:320,1,99.999990463257,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,264,136162,1,2,0:0:0
164,308,136532,1,2,0:0:0
100,264,136903,1,4,0:0:0

02:55:977 (2) - move to x292,y176 make interrelated shape.

The pattern is lack relation. you should pay attention next time.

Hard

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

02:05:051 - remove this break.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:19:866 - sound is overmapping rhythm.
00:51:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm issue. in fact, I can't follow your sense which one do you followed. drum or vocal? anyway. I suggest you can make rhythm like this:
00:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^
start at: 00:55:977 (4) -
01:48:384 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^
02:38:384 (3,4) - too large spacing in Hard... it's too hard :<
02:49:125 (1,2,1) - awkward slider shape (about overlaps, object stack, slider arc...etc ) :<

for this diff. you should notice rhythm set, it's major issue for the map.

Rainbow x Regou

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

fine

this map still need some work, good luck

Deni

Deni 2013-01-25T20:10:11+00:00

General

normal : should fix
italic : suggestion
red: unrankable, have to fix

From ★ ~ Deni 's Modding Queue ~ ★ ! (＾∇＾)
Nico Nico Chorus!! (＾∇＾)

Folder seems to be fine!

Overall you can fix some overlaps and make sliders a bit more symmetrical..

Easy

00:39:125 (1,2) - I would try to avoid using stacks in Easy since they are often too confusing for beginners..
00:44:681 (2,3) - Same here ! ^
00:46:718 (2) - and head of 00:47:088 (3) - -> I would use a whistle on these because the voice is the same ("na na na") and the whistles would fit good on them too!
01:09:495 (1) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody and just and them to the head and the bottom of the slider, sounds better imo.
01:10:977 (2) - Same here, but of course keep that finish on the bottom of the slider...
02:04:310 (1) - I don't like the shape of this slider... Better use a normal symmetrical one, like that:

Example

02:58:014 (2) - Move the last point of the slider a bit to the right so that the blanketing looks better like this:

Example

03:05:792 (1) - I think the finish is too loud here! Inherited Point with 40% volume is fine imo.

Normal

01:22:458 (2) - What about adding a whistle to the head of this slider? Sounds better imo!
01:53:755 (1) - Consider adding a curve to this slider, it looks a bit too simple..
02:45:051 (1) - Same as above!
02:46:903 (4,1) - They are overlapping, consider moving (1) a bit to the left!
03:02:088 (1) - Try to improve this slider a bit, so that the curve at the head of the slider and the curve at the end of the slider look alike!
03:05:792 (1) - same as in Easy!

Hard

00:12:458 (1) - This slider is too loud imo, Inherited point with 40% fits better!
00:56:162 (5,1,2,3) - (5) is overlapping with everything! ;_; Try to use a different pattern and avoid overlaps! They don't look and don't play well!
00:59:495 (3) - Again this slider looks very plain / boring, add a curve to fix that!
01:04:310 (6) - ^ same as above!
01:05:792 (1) - This slider looks very strange, you should use a symmetrical one...
02:15:421 (5) - The reverse arrow on this slider doesn't fit to the rhythm/voice of the music imo, maybe just make a normal slider like this:

Example

03:05:792 (1) - Same as in Easy / Normal!

Rainbow x Regou

00:30:236 (1) - Why did you use this shape? A normal-symmetrical slider looks better imo.
02:18:384 (1) - I think you wanted to make this slider symmetrical, create a new slider with the new symmetrical-slider-system, it will look better!
03:02:829 (1) - same as above! ( You can make a lot of sliders a bit more symmetrical if you use the new slider system, but I only mentioned the sliders that don't look so good)

I liked this difficulty most!

That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2013-01-29T19:35:10+00:00

Hai OwO

[General]

offset -2 or -3 from current (3568)
too big SV jump between 'Hard' and 'Rainbow x Regou' and don't recommend same SV in 3 diffs.
remove 'Vocaloid' in Tags. you already have 'Vocaloid2' in Tags. and if you use 'Collaboration' in Tags, remove 'Collab'

[Easy]

00:15:051 (1) - try use 1/1 slider instead current. this slider is suddenly fast than whilom beat flow. so Easy players can be confused by this slider's beat. IMO
00:39:866 ~ maybe i think suddenly increase difficult from this section. 00:41:718 (3) - like this. players will be confuse
01:35:421 (1) - this spinner too long for Easy players. they can be tired by this spinner.
nothing special. good map. but I think ... some part of this map's beat looks like Normal.

[Normal]

01:35:421 (1) - same reason as Easy. remove or reduce

[Hard]

00:18:940 (1,2,3) - well.. i think you try make hard as use this pattern. but it breaks quiet flow.
00:36:069 (2) - remove this circle and respacing
01:17:458 (2) - why don't you end this slider at 01:17:829 - here? that's so weird feel when playing. if you change that, put 3 hit repeat 1/2 slider. IMO
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - this notes too. weird feel. if you remove 01:21:995 (2) - this circle. and respacing - I recommend stack each note -
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - it's not good for play. try use two 1/2 sliders. that flow more good for pla. IMO
02:29:403 (1) - i really recommend remove this circle. because players may not see that when playing. you can ignore this. it's just suggestion.

[Rainbow x Regou]

00:41:532 (5,6,7) - awkward and weird feel for play. 00:41:625 (6) - remove this circle and respacing. if you keep this, players can think 00:45:607 (2,3) - 'this is stream too'.
00:49:495 (2) - remove this note? i think that more appropriate for music than current
01:24:310 (3) - maybe .. this beat is useless. use 1/2 like others.
01:41:718 - try insert Break Time. players may failed at this section when playing while watching screen.
good map. but end of KIAI TIME too harder than before.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-02-02T14:04:52+00:00

yo~ Mod as your req. sorry for delay~

[Easy]

00:56:903 (1,1) - (head) maybe this can stack it?
00:58:384 (2,2) - (head) ^
01:33:570 (2,3,4) - try this?

SPOILER

02:04:310 (1) - i think this slider it seem little ugly...

[Normal]

fine~

[Hard]

01:04:125 (1) - NC?

[Rainbow x Regou]

不愧是神麻婆

Poor Mod sorry. well great job~
Good luck~

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-02-02T18:07:47+00:00

All fixed.
Thank you for your mods ~ >w<

Aoko

1,053 posts

Joined June 2011

Aoko 2013-02-03T04:13:05+00:00

Rank this already D: A year has passed for this map. QwQ

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-02-03T04:19:19+00:00

;_________________;
I wish it could get ranked soooooonnn, but I guess it's just not ready yet D;

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-02-03T15:32:33+00:00

Hi

Easy:

00:09:495 (1) - Delete Whistle at the end for consistency?
00:21:347 (1) - ^
00:31:718 (3) - Whistle+Finish didn't sound well for me. Try only Finish instead,,
00:41:718 (3) - 1 Grid left
00:49:310 (1) - I didn't like this rhythm of the slider. Replace by following the vocals "La la la~~" as what you did at 00:46:347 (1,2,3)
01:09:495 (1) - Finish instead Whistle? (at the end)
02:52:458 (1) - Decrease 1/2, to follow the vocal. Also, in this case, replace this slider.
02:54:125 (1) - If you fixed above, you'll have space at 02:53:940. Start at this point, and end at 02:55:977. This way sounds better with the vocal.

Normal:

00:22:088 (2,3,4) - According your pattern, Whistle should be at only (3)
00:34:681 (3) - Delete Whistle at the end?
00:37:273 (2) - ^?
01:05:421 (2) - ^
01:30:977 (3) - Whistle at start
01:34:866 (1) - Imo, Whistle sounds better at the end, rather than in the reverse
02:35:236 (4) - 1 Grid left for distance of (1,2,3,4)
03:03:940 (2) - Distance..?

Hard:

-- This diff feels quite an old style..

00:06:532 (1) - Delete Whistle at the reverse
00:12:458 (1) - Whistle at the end?
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - Though this fits the song, prediction for 1/4 was quite hard, imo. So I suggest to place just a 1/2 beat
00:45:607 (2,3) - Distance?
00:50:792 (6) - 1 Grid down
01:02:736 (2) - Delete please. 1/4 doesn't fit here
02:52:458 (4) - 1 Grid up

Rainbow X Regou:

00:18:755 (8) - Delete Whistle?
00:38:755 (6) - NC
00:42:458 - Here feels empty
03:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - Imo, this wasn't the perfect place for an anti-jump
03:28:014 (1) - Start at 03:27:921?

Improve your S-shaped sliders. They didn't looked perfectly to me.

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-02-04T02:45:23+00:00

I think This Map is already to rank,Find MAT to bubble it.

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-02-17T17:21:41+00:00

Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

Sorry for the long wait
Re-modding time as your request

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

Clear

Easy

00:44:681 (3) - Try don't stack with (2), and make to curve slider will be better.
01:16:162 (3) - Try don't stack with (1). It may cause the confusion, since it is hidden in (1).
01:33:569 (2,3,4) - On (3,4), these may too hard for this diff imo. I suggest you may make to this be better.
01:56:718 (1) - Move it at 01:56:532. Then repeat this slider one more time to follow the rhythm.
02:04:310 (1) - Remove NC?
02:12:458 (1) - Change repeat slider to normal slider 1/1 beat. It will be better.
02:19:125 (2,3) - Slider tail which have reverse picture is overlap. You must avoid overlapping of both slider tail.
02:33:199 (1,1,2) - Spinner is too short for this diff. I suggest remove slider of 02:36:162 (1). Then move spinner end to replace, and don't forget add NC on 02:37:273 (2).
02:38:775 (3) - Same as 01:16:162 (3).
02:49:125 (1) - Remove NC here because it is not necessary.
02:52:485 (3) - Slider end at 02:53:569 to follow the rhythm.
03:02:829 (2,3) - I suggest that change these to a slider 1/1 beat, and add finish in slider begin and end. It will be easier for playing.

Normal

00:37:644 (1) - Change whistle to finish be better?
00:47:088 (4) - Change this slider is a circle on here and a slider 1/2 beat on 00:47:273. It will be better.
00:48:569 (2,3) - I suggest that stack it be better.
00:50:421 (4,5) - It may too hard for this diff imo. I suggest you start the slider 1/4 on 00:50:607 then repeat slider 1 time.
01:07:273 (5) - Move to right and down 1 grid to reduce a little spacing.
01:23:569 (1,1) - Slider (1) is appear too fast after spinner end. I suggest spinner end at 01:25:607.
01:34:310 (4,5) - You can change 2 circles to a slider 1/4 beat. It will be better.
01:34:866 (1) - Remove NC here because it is not necessary.
02:04:125 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:50:421 (4,5) on these by change 3 circles to a slider.
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and try to make (4) to same as 02:04:681.
02:20:927 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:48:569 (2,3).
02:53:940 (1,1,2) - Spinner is too short for this diff. You should remove slider (1), but spinner end on here instead. After fix it, add NC on slider after this spinner.

Hard

00:12:458 (1) - I really do not like that here. So you try to make it more smooth. If you have no idea, you can use slider 1/2 which repeat it 1 time by this picture.
SPOILER
00:13:490 (2) - Move to stack with 00:11:718 (2) to increase spacing, but isn't necessary to move 00:15:051 (3) because you have added NC on this note.
00:16:162 (1,2,3,4) - If you have observed the rhythm on next combo color, you should fix these rhythm by I suggest make to this, and if you fixed to same this picture, add whistle on (2) and slider end of (4), too.
SPOILER
00:30:236 (3) - This slider tail which have reverse picture is obscured by another slider. I suggest move slider tail to down.
00:36:225 (1,1) - I think you should end slider at 00:39:125 (1) which have to remove this circle, and change whistie on 00:39:125 (1) to finish instead.
00:39:681 (2) - Add NC here to follow the rhythm.
00:51:718 (2,3,4,5,6) - This map is weird sound for me. Maybe make to this will be better.
SPOILER
00:55:977 (4,5) - Switch both notes will be follow the rhythm more than.
00:59:495 (3) - I suggest you should change here and 00:59:681 to circles. Then use slider 1/2 beat on 00:59:866 to follow the rhythm.
01:04:310 (2) - I think that use curve slider be better imo.
01:53:199 - Add a circle and finish here, but you have to remove finish on note previous.
01:54:886 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like these. Trying to fix it to make it more beautiful.
02:57:644 (3) - Stack with (2) be better.

Insane

00:33:940 (1) - Ctrl+G will be better.
00:57:273 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm is weird for me. I suggest remove (2), then move (3,4,5) to 00:57:273 (instead of (2)), and maybe add circle on 00:58:384, too.
01:25:144 (1) - Spinner start at 01:25:051. It doesn't follow the rhythm.
01:27:829 (7) - I don't sure add NC or not? but it will be able to reduce the confusion.
01:52:644 (6) - Add NC here to easy to playing imo.
01:55:607 (5) - ^
01:58:904 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1), but add it on (2) instead, but if you don't change those, please reduce spacing be better.

Comment: I feel Normal, and Hard diff should want more mod. However, Easy diff isn't problem more than this. For Rainbow X Regou diff, I really prefer it.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

Note: You can give kudo to me, if this mod is useful to give it.

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2013-02-18T05:10:09+00:00

hi there
omg another spica on my pc

General
02:56:810 - delete the kiai end

just that i can see ;w; very lazy mod today

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2013-02-19T08:34:05+00:00

Hi~ From qkenan's queue

only 2 diffs? XD

[General]

I think this map is almost ready for rank

But still some notes are not in exact place.
Some are negligible, while some do matter.
I suggest you use low Grid level (2 or 3), or use "Ctrl + Shift + D" to create polygon when you want to make specific patterns.

[Easy]

It's fine

02:05:051 - Break time is not starting from 02:04:681. This is on purpose?

[Normal]

01:10:236 (3) - move to (252, 276)
02:47:273 (5) - move to (60, 356)
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - This looks better? (1) end at(480, 160), (3) end at(480, 12)

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:53:014 (5) - (64, 256)
01:03:569 (3) - (52, 288)
01:48:384 (3,4) - x = 348

[Rainbow x Regou]

01:02:273 (4) - (312, 228)
01:02:458 (5) - (312, 82)
01:02:644 (6) - (226, 110)
01:02:829 (7) - (226, 200)
03:05:236 (1) - (256, 40)

Good luck for rank

Bass

1,846 posts

Joined January 2009

Bass 2013-03-05T21:38:48+00:00

oh hey

[General]

First off, artist should be NicoNico Chorus.
Toku-P should go off from source and go to tags.
"Headphone-Tokyo" should be added to tags since it's the author of original "SPiCa"

BGs in Normal and Hard aren't related to that song, it's just my opinion but I think it would be nice put some BG related to that song.
Offset: 3581

[Easy]

00:05:062 (2) - for nicer look, would make it symmetrical with (1)
00:06:543 (1,2) - same should go here then, basically it will create square
00:15:062 (1) - It's not good idea to do slider with repeat on easy diff, change it into simple 1/1 slider
00:36:173 (1) - Rhythm of that slider sounds really odd there. I'd suggest trying something different like this:
00:46:358 (1,2,3) - Would suggest better rhythm for that . I strongly suggest to avoid 1/2 sliders in easy diff that's why(also depends from BPM, in that case, it's too high for doing these)
00:47:655 (1,2,1) - spacing there is inconsistent. I understand that you wanted to make blanket with (1). That can be done with same spacing and resulting with better neatness, look:
SPOILER
01:03:580 (2) - Make symmetrical with (1)
01:08:766 (3,4) - To fit more with vocal, you should try this
01:19:877 (4,1) - on chorus you started more complicated rhythm, which is nice, there it calms down but it shouldn't. Feels really empty. That plays much better
01:29:506 (1) - Move 3rd point of slider 1 tick left
01:34:321 (3,4) - Sudden usage of 1/2 sliders there and as I've mentioned before, strongly not suggested. Change into this
01:48:395 (2,3) - Now just for each 1/2 happening I will show you image how it should look:
01:50:618 (1,2,3,4) - Try similar rhythm like before:
01:53:581 (1,2,3,4) - you have many possibilities to arrange this pattern nicely, like
SPOILER
01:56:729 (1,2) -
02:03:951 (x) - add note?
02:12:469 (1) - single 1/1 slider will sound better here
02:30:247 (1) - again chang into 1/1 slider, fits better with vocal
03:02:840 (2,3,1) - change to:

[Normal]

00:25:792 (2,3) - Try this? sounds better
00:28:755 (5) - you can improve this slider shape, here is code(delete current slider before):
```
120,204,28755,2,0,B|223:268|289:177|356:85|491:145,1,400
```
00:31:718 (8) - slider would look much better if you used tree points formula
00:34:310 (2) - Move it away from slider a bit to avoid overlap
01:02:829 (1) - You can remake this slider with new formula to make it look like:
SPOILER
01:26:532 (1) - next slider to improve, just remove current, and paste this code into .osu file
```
376,188,86532,6,0,B|275:206|248:120|224:30|130:53,2,300
```
01:53:940 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 forward and add circle at 01:53:755, sound much better
01:55:607 (2,3) - then after delete these and change into
02:04:495 (3) - would prefer to remove that note, it might be too much
02:07:458 (3) - same
02:24:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Be more creative there, notes in placed at one line going right left aren't nice to play and feels a bit boring
02:38:014 (2) - Move last point of slider a bit down, that overlap doesn't look nice
02:57:644 (2) - spacing error

03:02:088 (6) - next slider to improve:

400,188,182088,2,0,B|304:268|232:188|160:112|16:188,1,400

03:04:495 (8,1,2,3) - try this rhythm, sounds much better:

This is just beggining, will continue tomorrow

E: I'm so slow ;_; but don't worry, more to come

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2013-03-08T00:19:56+00:00

Finish your mod, Bass.

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2013-03-12T20:47:37+00:00

Red - Unrankable
Blue - I highly recommend you to fix this
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Use this sliderslide sound, because it feels bad when there is such weird sound on every slider. Mute is even better for this song. http://puu.sh/2gyLE

[Rainbow x Regou]

Slider Tick Rate: 1 (To be consistent with other diffs and it's not needed here though)
AR -1. Currently it's really high for this BPM.
00:12:458 - What about adding whistle on every place like is this, maybe you hear that bell in the music, I think it could be always followed with whistle. I mean some of these: 00:11:718 , 00:13:199 and more..
00:14:125 (5) - Move it somewhere, but not under this slider, because it has repeat and it feels bad to play when it's on repeat's place, maybe move it on 398;199 or something like this.
00:18:199 (7) - You know... this pattern simply doesn't look well because this slider is just random, unnecessary shape change and weird rotation. Maybe try this suggestion.

SPOILER

00:25:792 (6) - 1/2 slider follows vocals better, this feels a bit poor.
00:24:866 (3) - This circle breaks flow, but you can still make an awesome pattern from this by moving it on 7;68 so 00:24:866 (3) will follow 00:24:310 (2)'s shape and the flow will be just better and clean.

SPOILER

00:35:977 (3,4,5) - This pattern has totaly bad blanket, just look on 00:35:977 (3) - It touches with 00:36:162 (5) and overally stream looks weird with this overlap, also spacing between tham is maybe too high. Consider stacking these notes with 00:36:162 (5)
00:45:051 - 00:51:347 - You just broke flow by changing snap so unnecessary. I recommend you to use normal snap, not lower, not higher than usual.
01:02:829 - The break is imo unnecessary.
01:17:088 (4,5,1,2) - I don't understand this time-placement, it totally doesn't fit music. Consider something like moving 01:17:273 (5) on 01:17:458, then adding note on 01:17:273, removing 01:17:829 (1) and adding 1/2 slider on 01:18:014.

SPOILER

01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^ Bad, really bad overmapping.
01:51:532 (3) - Move its center point on 457;225 to make it symmetrical.
02:39:495 (3) - Move its end on 33;190 because it blankets and fits really more with 02:38:940 (1)
02:42:088 (1) - It's unsymmetrical, make new slider with one point, since slider style was a bit changed and makes automaticly symmetrical shapes.
02:53:014 (3) - Center point on 101;33 for symmetry.
02:55:977 (4) - Same as 02:42:088 (1) but now it's not so visible.
03:25:051 (1) - ^ but it's even more visible.

[Hard]

00:28:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use some non-linear shapes? This is really poor.
00:41:532 (6) - Copy 00:39:866 (2), then CTRL+H, CTRL+J and move it there instead of this slider. These unnecessary inconsistent shapes are really annoying.

SPOILER

02:12:458 (2) - Move on 257;304 for perfect stack
02:15:421 (5) - The same as 00:41:532 (6)
02:59:681 (2) - THIS! Well... I really hate it. Slider under slider is the worst thing you can make in a map. You totaly break flow by doing it and it's also really weird to play and doesn't look well. Move it down or totally change this pattern. - I would say this could be, or maybe is unrankable.

[Normal]

00:51:718 (1) - Just my opinion, but I'd change the shape. Just don't like it, nothing more, not important.
01:20:607 (1) - I think better way is making 2 sliders instead of ton of repeats. It's really hard to understand by new players if it's such short slider.
01:59:125 (1,2) - ^ Well... this part is calm so it's easier to react on these repeats, but I'd still make 2 sliders from it to be sure.
02:31:718 (1) - Make it symmetrical, I suggest you to make new 1 point slider because of new slider system which makes sliders symmetrical.
02:42:088 (3,2) - Use the same rotation just to make it more aesthetic and symmetrical

[Easy]

00:54:681 (3) - Use this slider, without any rotation, just with CTRL+G. But I still think it will confuse new players, because slider under slider is just hard to react.
01:23:014 (2) - Probably will be hard to hit for newbies.
01:59:125 (1) - Make it symmetrical.
02:02:088 (1) - Move its end on the same line as its start for symmetry.

It's not bad map. It's good, but I miss there some consistency, quality hitsounds, patterns and there is just a ton of linear sliders which would fit even more if it had any shape. Good luck with a map~

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2013-03-23T03:41:55+00:00

Fixed some, Thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:SPiCa
TitleUnicode:SPiCa
Artist:NicoNico Chorus
ArtistUnicode:NicoNico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration Toku-P Headphone-Tokyo
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Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-03-23T15:05:30+00:00

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Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration
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368,180,158199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,180,158384,2,0,B|164:168,1,119.999996423721,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,220,158940,6,0,B|88:252|112:284,1,60.0000022888184,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,248,159310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,304,159495,2,0,B|4:248|28:180,1,120.000004577637,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,188,160236,5,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,160421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,160607,2,0,B|212:96|248:104,1,59.9999982118607,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,112,160977,2,0,B|360:132|436:120,1,119.999996423721,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,60,161532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,161718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,304,161903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,304,162088,6,0,B|444:264|356:264|288:312|288:384,1,239.999992847443,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,364,163199,5,8,0:0:0:0:
120,296,163384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,163569,2,0,B|40:176,1,59.9999982118607,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,156,163940,2,0,B|124:88,1,59.9999982118607,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,164310,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,56,164403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,68,164495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,96,164588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,136,164681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,180,164773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,228,164866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,276,164958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,165051,6,0,B|388:356|328:356,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,165421,2,0,B|248:204|304:204,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,340,165792,2,0,B|80:368|32:328|0:280|32:208,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,166347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,166532,6,0,B|248:192|244:136,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,166903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,236,167088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,220,167273,2,0,B|392:180|456:176|512:204|532:260,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,288,167829,6,0,B|220:248|216:184|244:128|300:108,1,207.99999628067,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,220,168384,2,0,B|380:268|372:336,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,288,168755,2,0,B|144:344|64:228,1,207.99999628067,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,169310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,169495,6,0,B|424:156|480:148,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,169866,2,0,B|192:64|124:64|76:112,1,155.999997210503,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,140,170236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,212,170421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,170514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,170607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,340,170699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,376,170792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,224,171532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,172088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,164,172273,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,224,172458,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,280,172644,2,0,B|180:324|108:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,173569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,324,173755,2,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,108,174310,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,100,174403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,96,174495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,96,174588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,174681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,120,174773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,140,174866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,164,174958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,175421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
36,72,175607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,68,175792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,96,176532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,24,176718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,177273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,356,177458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,178199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,264,179681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,179866,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,256,180051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,180236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,180421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,68,180977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,200,181162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,28,182273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,182458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,168,182644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,183384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,183477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,183569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,368,183940,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,184125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,184310,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,220,184495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,200,184681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,180,184866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,40,185236,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,185421,2,0,B|256:148|316:128,1,103.999991941452,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185792,12,2,186903,0:0:0:0:
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,176,187644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,187829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,188569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,172,189403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,189495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,190051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,190792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,365,191347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,316,191532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,192273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,192736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,192829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,92,193014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,92,194125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,194218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,194310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,68,194403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,80,194495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,144,195236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,144,195607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,195792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,196532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,352,196718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,196810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,197644,5,2,0:0:0:0:
164,160,197829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,180,198014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,64,198755,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,199681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,200236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,120,200421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,316,201903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,24,202644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,152,203384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,308,203940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,206162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
119,149,206347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,164,206532,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,100,206718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,206903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,48,207088,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,324,207644,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,328,207736,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,332,207829,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207921,12,0,213940,0:0:0:0:

Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2013-04-26T12:13:56+00:00

Let's test out this new ranking system

[General]
Just a suggestion but I would love to see slider speeds used more in this map. The starting speed is pretty good but when the song starts to become more intense the slider speed still drags on in the same way as it would if it was slow.
Making it faster from 00:39:866 would be the best way to achieve this and having it that fast during the rest of the song except for the slowdown.

[Easy]
01:53:569 (5) - New combo
02:19:125 (2,3) - For how neat this might look I think it would be better if the end point on this didn't overlap completely with each other, it can be quite confusing for new players.

Normal and Hard is fine

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:13:014 (2) - Slider end point on this slider is hidden, Sure it's pretty obvious that there is no repeat slider here but it's better if you move the slider end somewhere else.
02:04:310 (3) - Same^
01:35:607 (1) - Boy is this spinner long for an Insane, It's even more annoying because there is two circles just after it, can't you map something else here, the song doesn't even lend itself that well towards a spinner at that part anyways.

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-10T14:57:02+00:00

well. m4m from your queue

[Rainbow X Regou]

01:31:810 (2) / 01:32:366 (2) - delete note? I think its don't fit the song
01:50:144 (6,7) - 56|348 , 40|352? more smooth to play
02:15:421 (1) - down 1 grid
02:44:403 (2) - up 1 grid
02:48:384 (2) - more curve for blanket (3)

[Hard]

00:18:940 - the current one don't fit the song. maybe try http://puu.sh/2QznP.jpg
00:34:681 (3) - right 2 grid? or maybe http://puu.sh/2Qzs9.jpg
00:41:162 (5) - left 2 grid
01:05:792 (1) - this shape a bit weird D: try this http://puu.sh/2QzEL.jpg it can be triangle and blanket too
01:09:866 (2) - right 1 grid up 1 grid
02:38:384 (3,4) - make 3 stack with 1, make 4 stack with 2 because the spacing is kind of far for hard and match with 02:40:977 (3,4)
03:04:310 (2,3,4,5) - I think its a bit weird shape. try square like http://puu.sh/2QA4O.jpg or something

[Normal]

02:00:607 - put the slider and end at 02:01:347 instead?
02:07:644 - reomve repeat and end it at 02:08:014?
02:10:051 (1) - remove 1 repeat and add note at 02:10:607 instead? I think many repeat make player confuse
03:02:088 (6) - NC?

[Easy]

00:37:644 (2) - move the head's POINT to the left 1 grid
00:56:532 - add note
01:22:088 - try this http://puu.sh/2QABL.jpg the current one is distance error too. if and u use this shape u still can do this http://puu.sh/2QAFw.jpg

432,212,82088,6,0,P|396:136|328:92,1,150
256,52,83014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,98,83384,2,0,P|116:136|80:212,1,150

01:31:718 - try this http://puu.sh/2QASf.jpg

288,168,91718,6,0,P|396:196|448:264,2,200

01:54:310 (2) - left 1 grid

Good Luck!

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2013-05-10T15:03:45+00:00

m4m
[General]
Insane seems much more difficult than hard...

[Easy]
00:36:162 (1,2) - try this

332,44,37644,2,0,P|320:144|352:248,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:39:125 (1) - move nc to thr next slider
01:05:051 (4,1) - please keep the ds on 0.8
01:22:088 (1) - ^
01:50:607 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:23:569 (1) - spinner is too close to 3. try

01:31:718 (4) - fix the blanket plz
02:01:718 (1) - ds should be 0.8 not 1.0 here

[Hard]
02:30:792 (4,5) - I suggest not to stack to 3
02:56:903 (1,2,3) - feels bad

[Insane]
00:38:755 (1) - stack to another circle plz
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - confused move is further or decrease the distanse between them
01:34:310 (2,3,4,1) -

only suggestion
01:41:440 - I think it's fine to add a spinner here
02:05:236 (1) - move nc to the previous slider
02:07:088 (1) - move nc to the next circle
02:40:236 (1) - ？

Last edited by Fushimi Rio 2013-05-11T04:05:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xivaxi

133 posts

Joined November 2011

Xivaxi 2013-05-10T17:03:37+00:00

Hi, from your m4m queue~

This are mostly rhythm changes so the notes fit with the music and vocals\ better- hopefully they are helpful! (sorry if they are long/hard to read

)

Rainbow X Regou

00:06:532 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern I suggest the following changes:
00:06:532 (7) - Unrepeat this slider
00:07:088 (8) - Add circle
00:07:273 (2) - Add a 1/2 slider
00:07:644 (3) - Remove slider, add circle here instead
00:08:014 (4) - Remove slider
00:07:829 (4) - Add a 1/2 slider
00:08:384 (5) - Remove note
00:08:199 (5) - Add a 1/2 slider
00:08:569 (6) - This slider is OK, at the very least I would unrepeat this and put a circle 1/2 after it (see next note). I changed it in the picture to 2 1/2 sliders but you don't have to.
00:09:125 (7) - Add circle (only if you unrepeated the last slider)
00:09:310 (8) - Add circle
00:09:403 (9) - ^ This triple puts more emphasis on the next down beat, I would stack them on top of it.
Picture (your original on top): http://puu.sh/2QBwH.png
00:07:458 (1) - Picture centered on this note
---
00:11:162 (1,2,3,1) - This pattern I suggest the following changes: no picture because these are straight forward
00:11:162 (1) - Make this 2 circles instead
00:11:903 (3) - Remove this
00:11:532 (2) - Extend this slider 1/2
00:12:088 (3,4) - Put two circles here
---
00:13:014 (2,3) - Swap these two on the timeline, so the circle comes before the slider
---
00:16:718 (3,4) - Change these into 2 1/2 sliders (These notes didn't sync with the vocals like all the others, making it very confusing)
---
00:18:940 (1) - Remove this slider, instead:
00:18:940 (9) - Add circle
00:19:125 (10) - Add 1/2 slider
---
00:19:495 (3,4,5,6,7) - Remove these, instead:
00:19:495 (3) - Add circle
00:19:681 (4) - Add 1/2 slider
00:20:051 (5) - ^
00:20:421 (6) - ^
00:20:792 (7) - ^
---
00:21:347 (1,2) - Remove these, instead:
00:21:347 (9) - Add full beat slider
---
00:25:792 (6) - Remove this, instead:
00:25:792 (6) - Add circle
00:25:977 (7) - Add 1/2 beat slider
---
00:39:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - For this pattern:
00:39:495 (2) - Remove slider
00:39:125 (1) - Repeat this slider
00:39:681 (2) - Add circle
00:39:866 (3) - Unrepeat this
00:40:421 (4) - Add circle
~~00:40:607 (5) - ^(This one is optional)~~ Don't do this, it is weird

00:41:532 (6,7,8) - Remove these
00:40:792 (6) - Add a full beat slider here that repeats once
00:41:718 (6) - Add circle
00:41:903 (7) - ^
00:41:995 (8) - ^
Picture for what the timeline should look like when done: http://puu.sh/2QCpj.png
---
00:42:829 (2) - Make this slider shorter and repeat it (it should still last the same duration)
---
00:43:755 (3,4) - Make these 2 1/2 sliders instead (again because the player wasn't clicking down along with the vocals, making it confusing)
---
00:46:347 (1,2) - Make these 2 1/2 sliders as well (same reason ^)
---
00:49:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would suggest using the same rhythm patter as the previous na-na-na-na section, to vocals are mirrored, so it feels better if the map is mirrored as well
00:49:310 (1,2,3,1) - Make these 2 1/2 sliders
00:50:051 (6) - Add circle
00:50:607 (8) - Remove this
00:50:607 (8) - Add 1/2 slider
00:50:977 (9) - Add circle, keep the rest before the next combo
---
00:51:532 (1,2) - Swap these two on the timeline, so the circle comes before the slider
---
00:54:681 (2,3) - This feels better as a 1/2 slider
---
00:56:162 (5) - Remove this slider, instead:
00:56:347 (5) - Add full beat slider
00:56:903 (7) - Add circle
00:56:810 (6) - OPTIONALLY, add another circle here to create a triple, it puts more emphasis on the finish here.
---
00:59:310 (3,1,2) - Remove these, instead:
00:59:310 (3) - Add circle
00:59:495 (4) - Add 1/2 slider
00:59:866 (5) - Add full beat slider
01:00:607 (7) - Add 1/2 slider (or a full beat slider and remove the note after it)
---
01:29:866 (5) - This is a little awkward, why not just make it a 1/2 slider?
---
01:54:866 (1) - The jump after this is too big
01:55:051 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern is weird. It doesn't include the note before it (which it should), and the emphasis doesnt' fit the pattern. Triangles are good at emphasizing the first note of the triangle, but the vocals here emphasize every other note, I'd suggest back and forth or ladder instead of triangle. Something like this : http://puu.sh/2QDpA.png
---
Rest of the map is quite nice~ maybe some of the triples don't fit so well as others... but they're fine for the most part I think.

Hard

00:18:940 (1,2,3) - This section seems too fast for the rest of the pattern it's in
00:28:569 (5) - Add note
00:55:792 (4) - Add note here maybe?
---
00:56:718 (1) - Remove this, instead:
00:56:718 (7) - Add circle
00:56:903 (8) - Add 1/2 slider (so they player clicks down on the big finish here)
---
00:59:495 (3) - This is awkward, I would suggest putting circles in here to fit with vocals better, but it might increase difficulty too much~ your choice.
00:59:495 (3) - Circle here
00:59:681 (4) - ^
00:59:866 (5) - Make slider start here instead
---
02:22:088 (4) - Make this slider end at the big white tick, and:
02:23:199 (5) - Add circle
---
02:29:403 (1,2) - This little double might be too hard to read/play for hard diff ~
---

These next are all optional, they may increase difficulty too much - but the long sliders feel too slow/empty for this chorus section. You can use whatever you want as beats, circles/sliders/whatever, just so that there's a beat on the vocals
02:49:125 (1) - Replace this with 5 circles on the vocal beats, or make it a 1/2 slider that repeats for all the beats. It feels empty as just a long slider.
02:50:236 (13) - Same here, put circles/repeat sliders here in place of this long slider
02:50:792 (14) - Add circle
02:53:384 (6) - Same here, put beats instead of a long slider
02:58:384 (5) - Here too
02:59:681 (2) - And here

Normal

I am not very good at mapping normal/easy difficulties, all of these suggestions might be terrible, but here they are anyway!

00:51:718 (1) - Maybe put some notes in here instead of a very long slider? It feels too empty, maybe something like:
00:52:458 (2) - End slider here
00:52:829 (3) - Add circle
00:53:199 (4) - ^
00:54:681 (1) - Here too, same pattern as above works
01:14:681 (1) - These long sliders in the chorus also feel empty, especially because it is the chorus, maybe put some notes in like above sliders, something like:
01:16:162 (2) - Make the repeat slider end here
01:16:532 (3) - Add circle
01:16:903 (4) - ^
01:17:644 (1) - Same as above
01:17:644 (1) - ^
---
01:47:644 (1) - This slider and
01:50:607 (1) - This slider also feel slow, maybe make them more like
01:53:755 (1,2,3) - This pattern. This pattern feels nice~
---
02:39:125 (1) - Repeat this slider like you did with
02:36:162 (1) - This one
---
03:02:088 (6) - Another empty feeling slider, shorten/repeat it, or shorten/add some circles.

Easy

I can't map easy this well orz

have a star

I really liked the song, and mapsets were nice

GL with ranking!

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-05-10T17:06:20+00:00

Thank you for your mods ~
I'll check them and mod your maps soon! >w<

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-11T03:11:29+00:00

hi. come to recheck :3
no kds please, thanks.

[Easy]

00:54:681 (3) - it does'nt stack with slider (1) - enough. so copy 00:51:718 (1) and paste. then ctrl+G and remove newcombo.
00:56:903 (1) - this shape look weird. try this http://puu.sh/2QZdd.jpg it can blanket (4) as well too.
00:58:384 (2) - move tail right 1 grid

GL

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2013-05-13T14:37:58+00:00

Hello~
Recheck for mod this : http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246598

no kds this post

just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]

。 EZ&NM‘'s using in finish is bad o/ \o and maybe same as hard diff.-

[Easy]

00:42:088 (3) - 00:45:051 (3) - 00:47:644 (1) - 00:53:940 (2) - I think the using of finish is bad
01:31:718 (1) - sounds awkward
01:48:384 (2) - 01:49:310 (3) - 01:52:088 (3,4) - follow the red line maybe awkward

I suggested to remap this diff D:

[Normal]

00:50:051 (3,4,5) - rythem not good, change to - mod1
02:52:273 (1) - ^ - mod2
00:54:046 (2) - ctrl g?
01:14:888 (3) - add

[Hard]

00:19:681 (3) - change to 1/1 slider instead if using 1/2 repeating-slider
00:52:829 (4,5) - here's so many notes.. it's boring to hard diff, i suggested change somes to slider, also like 02:48:199 (4,5,6,7) - I've not pointed out all of them
01:35:236 (3) - delete finish 01:33:940 (2) - and add a finish in the beginning

[Rainbow x Regou]

01:17:273 (5,1,2) - （类似这种没有全部举出）由于kiai部分这音效建议放个slidertick.wav?
01:24:681 (4) - 我感觉这DS不妥既然
01:34:681 (3,4) - 改成 - MOD3 然后spinner从01:35:421 (6) - 到 01:40:421 (1) - （也就是往前拉1/2)
02:10:051 (2,3,4,5) - 最好DS小一点然后345重合
02:17:088 (2) - add

hmmm.... I felt it's worse than half a year??? It seems two guest mappers cordinated not so good in that highest diff, and I think the rainbow's insane in previous time is better than it.
Of course, you can talk with me if you think I'm wrong Fin.

Last edited by Chloe 2013-05-14T11:03:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2013-05-14T07:23:56+00:00

rainbow GJ

Megurine Luka

2,579 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2013-05-21T01:16:37+00:00

Hi M4M

[G]

Nope

[E]

00:15:051 (1) - move to x=348 y=248 and make it shorter. Stop at 00:15:236
00:21:347 (1) - try

00:27:273 (1) - try

00:54:681 (3) - I suggest you NC cuz new Babies would not recognize this is a brand new slider
01:07:273 (3) - Move left about three grids (Level 4 grid)

[N]

00:15:051 (1) - same as easy, stop at 00:15:236
00:28:755 (5) - NC
00:48:569 (2,3) - I suggest you change to a slider. Start from a red line and only two circles are two difficult for new players
00:58:384 (2) - add whistle on both beginning and end of the slider
01:05:792 (3) -

seems have a better flow
01:34:310 (4,5) - same as before
01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:10:051 (1) - I suggest you put somewhere far from the previous slider. Cuz new players would not recognize there is a pause btw these two sliders
02:12:273 (1,2,3,4) - same as before
02:21:347 (3) -

looks better

I strongly suggest you not change slider velocity in Normal diff. Cuz SV would cause spacing change which is unrecognizable for new babies.

[H]

01:25:607 (4) -

looks better
02:00:236 (4,5,6) - make a straight line?

[RG]

都是华人我就用中文了？

00:18:199 (7) - 这里最好用00:17:458 (5) - 一样的形状
00:23:940 (1) - 开口向上似乎好点
01:28:940 (1,2,3) - 用和前面一样的spacing比较好
01:34:681 (3,4) - 正好把应该重点突出的su pi ca 三个音节给slider掉了...有种应该狠狠重音的地方突然被憋住了的感觉-。-

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-05-25T02:05:12+00:00

Athena Tennos wrote:
rainbow GJ

No Rainbow is Regou GL

And Fixed Some Mod THX>W<

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2013-05-25T22:20:27+00:00

[I]
00:03:570 - 00:14:681 I don't think it's a good idea that you put so many objects here.Neither the music or the vocal is strong here
00:40:792 (4,5) - make them father?
00:45:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why reduce distance here?
00:59:310 (3) - ^
01:14:681 - 24clap is enough imo
02:39:495 (3,1) - mistake?
one of you must improve your mapping skill...I mean the first part

[Hard]
00:17:644 (3) - whistle
00:17:644 (3) - you destoryed the parttern here...
00:28:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight sliders seem not fit here
00:34:681 (3) - ctrl+g
01:28:755 (5) - distance
01:41:625 delete the break is ok
hmm still need some work?

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-06-01T13:44:50+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
[I]
00:03:570 - 00:14:681 I don't think it's a good idea that you put so many objects here.Neither the music or the vocal is strong here
00:40:792 (4,5) - make them father?
00:45:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why reduce distance here?
00:59:310 (3) - ^
01:14:681 - 24clap is enough imo
02:39:495 (3,1) - mistake?
one of you must improve your mapping skill...I mean the first part

[Hard]
00:17:644 (3) - whistle
00:17:644 (3) - you destoryed the parttern here...
00:28:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight sliders seem not fit here
00:34:681 (3) - ctrl+g
01:28:755 (5) - distance
01:41:625 delete the break is ok
hmm still need some work?

能求个中文吗/.\

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-13T10:01:25+00:00

sorry for delay u,u
as requested ~

[General]
add "スピカ" in tittle and SPiCa in Romanised tittle

[Easy]
HP-1 to same spread with Normal diff? actually HP 3 too much big in easy
00:16:903 (2) - nazi, 1 grid left?
00:27:273 (1) - 332,152. avoid spacing 0,87x in 00:30:977 (2) -
00:45:051 (3) - 188,316. for diagonal in 00:42:829 (1,2,3) -
00:53:940 (2) - remove finish?
00:56:532 (2,1) - why spacing increase in here? i prefer use normal spacing actually
01:05:792 (1,2) - try this rhythm?
01:18:384 (2) - 296,84? better branket imo
01:29:495 - finish?
01:52:088 (3) - spacing issue (1,06x)
02:33:199 (1) - whistle?
02:42:088 (5) - just minor, NC for consistency?
03:02:829 (2,3) - spacing? why increase in here?

[Normal]
00:31:718 (4) - whistle in head?
00:41:718 (2) - spacing issue 0,86x , my solution : 132,192
01:05:792 (3) - remove whistle in body? it's better imo
01:55:792 (3) - 220,148?
02:20:607 (3) - 336,212? better branket with 02:21:347 (3) -
02:41:718 (2) - 1 grid down, straight with 02:40:977 (2) -
02:41:347 (1) - spacing issue (0,86x)
02:45:051 (1) - remove whistle body?

~~kinda tired, will edit soon ~~~

[Hard]
AR+1?
hmm, actually you need higher SV in Hard. Normal 1,00 SV, Hard 1,00 SV, Insane 1,6 SV. not balance, better Hard 1,30 SV for balance spread ~_~
00:18:940 (1) - spacing?
00:47:644 (1) - actually i don't really like overlap =w=
00:50:607 (5) - 252,328?
00:59:125 (2) - intentional spacing?
01:06:903 (2) - 296,292 to avoid spacing issue?

[Insane]
you need Collab mapper's name so we can know part of collab
01:02:829 (7) - just minor, NC for consistency
01:03:014 - 01:14:495 - you must map this part, easy normal hard mapped in this part, why insane not? kinda odd to me
Insane seems fine

GL :3

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-06-14T21:46:47+00:00

Fixed all except for the sv in the hard diff.
Thank you ~

OEvil

299 posts

Joined December 2012

OEvil 2013-06-15T09:53:59+00:00

Hi Mod Request Via PM

[Easy]

Edits:
- 00:33:199 (2) - Remove this circle.
- 00:33:940 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:33:199 - Add a slider from here until 00:33:939.

[Normal]

Edits:
- 01:12:458 (2) - Remove this circle.
- 01:12:458 - Add a slider from here until 01:12:828.
- 01:13:199 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 01:13:199 - Add a slider from here until 01:13:754.
- 02:26:903 - Add a circle at {x:315 y:192}.
- 02:27:273 (1) - Move to {x:315 y:251}.
- 02:28:014 (2) - Move to {x:209 y:193}.
- 02:28:755 (3) - Move to {x:209 y:313}.
- 02:29:495 (1) - Move to {x:142 y:213}.
- 02:29:866 (2) - Move to {x:202 y:213}.
- 02:30:236 (3) - Move to {x:261 y:213}. Remove the circle and make it a slider until 02:30:607
- 02:30:977 (4) - Move to {x:381 y:213}.
- 02:31:718 (1) - Move to {x:424 y:101}.

[Hard]

Edits:
- CS -1
- Everything else it nice IMHO

[Rainbow x Regou]

Edits:
- 01:58:940 (2) - Add NC

I hope you like my mod

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-06-16T04:04:25+00:00

Haai~
some suggestions -

[Easy]
01:33:570 (2,3) - spacing error
01:50:977 (2,3) - ^
01:52:088 (4,5) - ^
02:19:125 (2,3) - ^
00:37:644 (2) - move slider's end point on one grid left. So you make a clean slider.
00:56:903 (1) - move on one grid op, for correct spacing
01:29:495 (1) - maybe change your shape on This?

SPOILER

01:51:718 (3,4) - in easy diff shouldn't be a stacked notes.
02:21:347 (3) - hidden repeat...
03:00:977 (4) - move on one grid up.

[Normal]
01:31:718 (4,5) - spacing error
02:02:088 (2,3) - ^
00:41:718 (2) - change your shape on this -

SPOILER

00:50:792 (5) - remove slider and add note on 00:50:977 with finish
01:01:162 (1) - remove NC
01:09:495 (1) - move NC on 01:10:977(4)
01:11:718 (1) - remove NC
01:22:088 (1) - ^
02:39:125 (1) - please, make a clear slider
02:39:125 (1) - remove NC
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - This point is difficult to read. it may be worth to come up with something else? for example -

[Hard]
00:18:940 (1,2,3,4) - I think that they should move to the right by 2 ticks before the downbeat, because due to the fact that they are located on the weak beat, they are difficult to read.
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - maybe stack this notes?
01:05:792 (1) - remove NC
01:09:495 (1) - ^
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - stack with (3) please
01:34:866 (1,2,3) - like this?

SPOILER

03:04:310 (2,3,4,5) - bad flow, I recommend place them in a different way.

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:35:977 (3,4,5) - stack with (5)
03:18:199 (4) - make a clear slider

That's all. I hope this can help you~

Kinomi

1,221 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-06-24T00:01:08+00:00

Hi~Hi~
reply to mod req

general

210 posts
I think too mainy mods can not improve your mapper a lot but can destroy your map. So I just do a simple mod.
I think Hard dose not have a popular mapping style.

Easy

01:51:718 (3) - no stack

click

add sth at 02:45:421 - 02:45:792 imo

Normal

01:34:310 (4,5) - better to stack

01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard

00:35:977 (1,2,3) - general distance is 1.0 but stream's distance is 0.8,I think it's confusing and hard to read

00:54:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - snack is not good....
and there are too many similar parts in this dif ,I think you can change them ,other shapes,jump or overlap,many better ways to choose

02:58:384 (5,1,2) - this overlap is ... not very good imo

Rainbow x Regou

01:05:792 why break....

03:05:236 (1,2) -

01:19:218 (5) - delete

01:31:810 (2) - ^ I know it will break the shape ;w;

02:50:699 (7) - delete

03:09:681 (5) - no clap

03:11:718 (1) - ^

03:12:829 (5) - ^

03:27:273 try this

that's all

good luck

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-06-30T04:29:16+00:00

still not ranked :< good luck
/me cri

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-06-30T04:51:26+00:00

;A;
Thank you!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-07-01T03:31:32+00:00

mod4mod + Re-check

I read a really fucked up fanfic about Hatsune Miku once and I can get these weird pictures out of my mind whenever I see her.

Overall:
Storyboard the collaber's name in there? Um I can do it if you need someone to.

Insane:
The collaber's styles are so different. The first one has a very me-esque (Captain Narcissus to the rescue) style of mapping, where everything flows and there's not too many jumps, while the other mapper is heavily based on patterns and jumping and all. In a collaboration sense, this can confuse the player heavily.

00:14:310 (6) - The end of this slider seems really out of place.
00:18:940 (1,2) - Make this "Note, 1/1 slider, 1/2 slider" rather than "1/1 slider 1/2 repeat slider". This fits the words so much better.
00:26:532 (1) - Make this hitnormal (and remove whistle) so it matches the change in the dynamic of the song
00:27:273 - I feel this slowed down section would look a lot better with 1.0x sliders and having pretty patterns and stuff. You could put so many big pretty sliders here and stuff, and the speed adds to the impactfulness
00:59:310 (3) - This spacing is so misleading in the worst way possible ;A;
01:23:940 (2) - Have this go the other way so it doesn't overlap with previous notes when it appears?
01:31:718 (1,2) - Leave these as hitnormals
01:55:051 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Like the pattern is good and all but it's like why is this so far from (1) and creating such a huge jump when the music doesn't call for it.
01:58:940 (2) - NC and remove NC from next note
02:55:792 (3) - Like the jumps are totally ok but like it's really weird how like (1) to (2) is so big and then it changes dramatically from (2) to (3) with no real reason in the music
03:09:681 (5) - y this clap tho
03:11:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:25:051 (5) - NC

Hard:
00:32:458 (7) - NC
00:33:199 (1) - Remove NC
00:51:718 (2,3,4,5,6) - It might play a lot more natural just fitting in with the words
01:05:792 (1) - U-Uuuaaa!~ Try not making the curve so soon if you don't want it to be a regularly curved slider
02:05:051 - Do something here pls lol
02:22:088 (4) - Lower 1st sliderpoint immensely (Like almost in line with the beginning of the slider
02:52:273 (3,4,5,6) - For a hard diff, this may be a bit confusing
02:57:458 (2,3,4) - This is so hidden lol

Normal:
00:39:866 (1) - Remake this with new slider structure
00:42:829 (2) - ^
01:02:829 (1) - Have less repeats on this ouo
02:05:421 - Do something here lol
02:08:384 - ^
02:10:977 - ^
02:38:014 (2) - Avoid the overlap on this

Easy:
00:51:718 (1) - Make it look more like this ~
00:54:681 (1) - ^

Moe desu.

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-07-02T02:37:55+00:00

The collab diff is split into half so I don't really know if a name sb is needed owo
~~You can do it if you want though, I don't mind o3o~~
Sun Rainbow said that he will do it owo

Last edited by Kanari 2013-07-03T01:26:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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No_Gu wrote:

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