Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size) · forum

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-13T15:45:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月29日 at 下午 10:54:31

Artist: Sako Tomohisa
Title: Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)
Source: Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags: 絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen-T mintong89
BPM: 110
Filesize: 15228kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.49 stars, 88 notes)
Hard (4.83 stars, 206 notes)
mint's Normal (3.77 stars, 112 notes)

Download: Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)
Download: Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
佐香智久 --- 僕たちの歌
絶園のテンペスト Ending 2
いつの日か　君と「ほら運命だったね」って
一緒に　笑えるといいな
-----
Easy - by me
mint'normal - by mintong89
Hard - by me

Last edited by Xinchii 2016-02-12T18:20:53+00:00, edited 67 times in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-13T16:07:28+00:00

求给做Normal GD

Offset 是 1,239 哦~

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-13T17:02:46+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
求给做Normal GD

Offset 是 1,239 哦~

喔喔~~Ok喔~~

不過我還是作圖新手
Rank可能會比較慢點

不介意的話歡迎喔~

ShiauKe

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ShiauKe 2013-02-14T04:48:48+00:00

尼最好是新手

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-14T06:18:06+00:00

ShiauKe wrote:
尼最好是新手

Last edited by Xinchii 2013-02-14T12:27:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RealCuT

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RealCuT 2013-02-14T11:31:11+00:00

gogo

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-14T12:27:08+00:00

121561995 wrote:
gogo

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-15T02:04:23+00:00

做完了 0 0

http://puu.sh/22Il6

哦对了还有一些要更改的~ (全部diff包括我的)

1. Lean-in Seconds 不放？
2. Countdown 和 Letterbox during breaks 去掉吧~

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-15T03:44:22+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
做完了 0 0

http://puu.sh/22Il6

哦对了还有一些要更改的~ (全部diff包括我的)

1. Lean-in Seconds 不放？
2. Countdown 和 Letterbox during breaks 去掉吧~

感謝~

Lean-in Second 每個 Diff 我都插入1秒了
countdown 和 Letterbox during break 也去掉了 (雖然不太清楚 Letterbox during break 是什麼

)

Pending~

EmPao

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EmPao 2013-02-19T18:38:35+00:00

卡位射星之後補mod

Flask

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Flask 2013-02-20T13:06:59+00:00

潛力圖 =w= 丟星 !

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-20T23:34:45+00:00

EmPao wrote:
卡位射星之後補mod

先感謝star囉~~~

Flask wrote:
潛力圖 =w= 丟星 !

wow大器丟星星

感謝~

qkenan

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qkenan 2013-02-26T06:00:32+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

Tags: ending Shounen
~~另外Easy和Hard的Tag里多了个空格（强迫症犯了无视就好~~

Easy

00:11:602 (3) - 首尾的锚点水平对齐
有些地方不是很齐，Grid level缩小点比较好做形状，快捷键G。或者干脆关了Grid snap

mint's Normal

01:05:875 (3) - 在这组NC里，直的slider比较好看

Hard

排列细节都还好，但是总体放不开，Ctrl+A一看，紧紧的一团notes……打起来也挺拘束。
ar8在目前的排列下有点略快，-1试试？
od-1，hpd感觉还成
00:07:239 (3) - NC
00:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形摆的不是很标准，关掉Grip Snap修排列
00:29:875 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不要stack会好一些
01:02:875 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:557 干脆再加一个circle做成长串，不过可能排列要动不少，所以随意吧
01:12:966 (4) - 改成直的？

Nice mapset，Good luck

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-26T07:07:38+00:00

qkenan wrote:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General
Tags: ending Shounen
~~另外Easy和Hard的Tag里多了个空格（强迫症犯了无视就好~~

fix~ ~~真的有空格耶lol~~

Easy
00:11:602 (3) - 首尾的锚点水平对齐
有些地方不是很齐，Grid level缩小点比较好做形状，快捷键G。或者干脆关了Grid snap

Ok~ fix~

mint's Normal
01:05:875 (3) - 在这组NC里，直的slider比较好看

Hard
排列细节都还好，但是总体放不开，Ctrl+A一看，紧紧的一团notes……打起来也挺拘束。
ar8在目前的排列下有点略快，-1试试？ fix~
od-1，hpd感觉还成我覺得OD6頗剛好耶0.0
00:07:239 (3) - NC fix
00:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形摆的不是很标准，关掉Grip Snap修排列 fix
00:29:875 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不要stack会好一些 fix
01:02:875 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fix
01:06:557 干脆再加一个circle做成长串，不过可能排列要动不少，所以随意吧這邊就沒修了
01:12:966 (4) - 改成直的？我覺得有一點點弧度比較漂亮w

Nice mapset，Good luck

Thanks your mod~~~

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-26T08:19:00+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ED2N.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokutachi no Uta (TV size)
TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
BeatmapID:220705
BeatmapSetID:78854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"01.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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thanks~

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-26T08:57:34+00:00

update~

qkenan

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Joined October 2010

qkenan 2013-02-27T03:48:07+00:00

少年T的歌一直都这么治愈呢~

Starrrr~

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-02-27T18:54:53+00:00

qkenan wrote:
少年T的歌一直都这么治愈呢~

Starrrr~

超喜歡他>w<

感謝星星~~~

Cloudchaser

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Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-03-01T02:07:09+00:00

[General]

Is this "絶園のテンペスト." necessary in tags?

[Hard]

00:46:239 (5) - decrease distance please.

[mint's Normal]

00:46:784 - at 00:48:420 - add a little breaktime I suggest ^^ ~

[Easy]

00:13:784 - add a note with clap

Good enough ovó)b
Sorry for my short mod, im a little busy

Xinchii

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Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-02T08:22:18+00:00

-Cloudchaser wrote:

[General]
Is this "絶園のテンペスト." necessary in tags?
will think about it.......

[Hard]
00:46:239 (5) - decrease distance please.
fix~

[mint's Normal]
00:46:784 - at 00:48:420 - add a little breaktime I suggest ^^ ~
[Easy]
00:13:784 - add a note with clap
fix~

Good enough ovó)b
Sorry for my short mod, im a little busy

That's ok

thanks your mod~

ShiauKe

53 posts

Joined November 2012

ShiauKe 2013-03-04T12:16:47+00:00

irc mod

07:48 ShiauKe: 00:13:784 (4,5,6,7) - 可以往右下角移
07:49 ShiauKe: 可以解決有點擠and 6,7有點hid noteㄉ問題
07:50 ShiauKe: 這首bpm110 .0.
07:50 ShiauKe: 可以2,3,4等距
07:52 ShiauKe: 00:33:694 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 有點擠
07:53 ShiauKe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639561
07:53 ShiauKe: 像這樣
07:54 ShiauKe: 00:59:875 (3) - 有點hid note
07:54 ShiauKe: 可以試試左上角
07:55 ShiauKe: 雖然我知道你要用三角形拉XDD
07:55 ShiauKe: 也可以00:59:329 (1,2,3) - 換ㄍ位置
07:55 ShiauKe: 這樣能保持你ㄉ三角形
07:57 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - 這要把Grid Level調成4才能對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 可以用http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425 製作完美對稱的Slider Σ(=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ這個技巧看有沒有對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 其實也可以不用對稱拉只是說說XDD 因為我處女座ww
08:00 ShiauKe: 應該沒啥問題了我來看看音效o_O
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:09:966 (1) - finish
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:29:330 (4) - 長白線finish
08:02 ShiauKe: 哦對了 00:35:875 (2) - 聽起來像3連拍看你要不要改
08:02 ShiauKe: 00:38:330 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:42:693 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:49:239 (1) - ^
08:04 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - ^
08:05 ShiauKe: end.
08:06 ShiauKe: 你把紫色1.2.3選起來把3對到3
08:07 ShiauKe: 要是我的話我會把3個三角形的3都用在同一點
08:07 ShiauKe: 給你參考._.
08:08 ShiauKe: 囧
08:09 ShiauKe: 我覺得00:24:966 (1,2,3,4) - 有點擠XD
08:10 ShiauKe: 恩

kelvinli

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Joined April 2011

kelvinli 2013-03-10T14:46:15+00:00

Hi again, from queue
[General]
01:06:693 - I suggest to make a re-kiai here.That means the kiai is cut and then re-added
[Hard]
00:02:875 (1,2) - swap NC
00:07:239 (1) - Maybe a finish @the end of the slider?
00:26:057 (4,7) - this overlap is weird, try something like this?
00:32:330 (4) - the deceleration is pointless IMO, and it still goes well without it; http://puu.sh/2fgXQ
00:33:694 (3,4) - You might want to move them to the left so it looks naturally with the slider
00:47:057 (1,4) - Finish?
00:49:239 (1) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, so I think breaking it up into a slider+circle would be better
00:55:511 (1) - pointless deceleration
01:14:057 (3) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, you could try this: http://puu.sh/2fhgE
01:16:239 (6) - finish?

A nice diff

[mint's Normal]
00:22:239 (1,2,3,4) - I don't dislike this, but this somehow looks better and smoother flow
00:26:057 (1) - end on 00:28:239?
00:57:966 (2) - This is nothing in the music to support the existent of the note.Delete it?
01:16:239 (2) - finish@the head?
01:24:966 (1) - starts on 01:24:284 like in Easy?

[Easy]
00:24:693 (3,4) - not a perfect blanket: http://puu.sh/2fhwr
00:31:784 (3,4) - you can make (3) curved then put (4) bottom-right to (3) so its flow is better: http://puu.sh/2fhA6
01:15:966 (3) - Finish@the end?

Nothing else to complain.Good Luck!~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-11T03:49:37+00:00

kelvinli wrote:
Hi again, from queue Hi see you again~~ :3
[General]
01:06:693 - I suggest to make a re-kiai here.That means the kiai is cut and then re-added Fix~
[Hard]
00:02:875 (1,2) - swap NC Fix
00:07:239 (1) - Maybe a finish @the end of the slider? Fix
00:26:057 (4,7) - this overlap is weird, try something like this? Fix
00:32:330 (4) - the deceleration is pointless IMO, and it still goes well without it; http://puu.sh/2fgXQ Umm......reserve This suggestion. I will think about it
00:33:694 (3,4) - You might want to move them to the left so it looks naturally with the slider Fix~
00:47:057 (1,4) - Finish? Because I want make this part no hitsound , so I have not add finsh
00:49:239 (1) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, so I think breaking it up into a slider+circle would be better I
follow sound of durm here......but I will reserve This suggestion. I will think about it
00:55:511 (1) - pointless deceleration Reserve This suggestion too.
01:14:057 (3) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, you could try this: http://puu.sh/2fhgE This part I think I will not fix , sorry. because there is no sound of durm , I feel .........
But I will look about it too.
01:16:239 (6) - finish? Fix~

A nice diff

[mint's Normal]
00:22:239 (1,2,3,4) - I don't dislike this, but this somehow looks better and smoother flow
00:26:057 (1) - end on 00:28:239?
00:57:966 (2) - This is nothing in the music to support the existent of the note.Delete it?
01:16:239 (2) - finish@the head?
01:24:966 (1) - starts on 01:24:284 like in Easy?

[Easy]
00:24:693 (3,4) - not a perfect blanket: http://puu.sh/2fhwr
00:31:784 (3,4) - you can make (3) curved then put (4) bottom-right to (3) so its flow is better: http://puu.sh/2fhA6
01:15:966 (3) - Finish@the end?

Easy diff all fix.

Nothing else to complain.Good Luck!~

Thanks your nice mod~~

Last edited by Xinchii 2013-03-11T04:39:40+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-11T03:59:52+00:00

ShiauKe wrote:
irc mod
07:48 ShiauKe: 00:13:784 (4,5,6,7) - 可以往右下角移
07:49 ShiauKe: 可以解決有點擠and 6,7有點hid noteㄉ問題
07:50 ShiauKe: 這首bpm110 .0.
07:50 ShiauKe: 可以2,3,4等距
07:52 ShiauKe: 00:33:694 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 有點擠
07:53 ShiauKe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639561
07:53 ShiauKe: 像這樣
07:54 ShiauKe: 00:59:875 (3) - 有點hid note
07:54 ShiauKe: 可以試試左上角
07:55 ShiauKe: 雖然我知道你要用三角形拉XDD
07:55 ShiauKe: 也可以00:59:329 (1,2,3) - 換ㄍ位置
07:55 ShiauKe: 這樣能保持你ㄉ三角形
07:57 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - 這要把Grid Level調成4才能對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 可以用http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425 製作完美對稱的Slider Σ(=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ這個技巧看有沒有對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 其實也可以不用對稱拉只是說說XDD 因為我處女座ww
08:00 ShiauKe: 應該沒啥問題了我來看看音效o_O
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:09:966 (1) - finish
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:29:330 (4) - 長白線finish
08:02 ShiauKe: 哦對了 00:35:875 (2) - 聽起來像3連拍看你要不要改
08:02 ShiauKe: 00:38:330 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:42:693 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:49:239 (1) - ^
08:04 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - ^
08:05 ShiauKe: end.
08:06 ShiauKe: 你把紫色1.2.3選起來把3對到3
08:07 ShiauKe: 要是我的話我會把3個三角形的3都用在同一點
08:07 ShiauKe: 給你參考._.
08:08 ShiauKe: 囧
08:09 ShiauKe: 我覺得00:24:966 (1,2,3,4) - 有點擠XD
08:10 ShiauKe: 恩

三角型窩決定不fix了w

這樣感覺也很U fu ._.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-03-14T05:58:53+00:00

fixed some

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Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-14T16:58:17+00:00

Update~

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-03-15T02:31:13+00:00

Hi from my Queue

General

Clean

Easy:

00:03:420 (3) - try to make it more curved for better blanck with (2) actually look really bad
If you want the code:
```
208,192,2875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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435,219,4784,6,0,P|363:171|331:83,1,180
```
00:09:966 add finish like you did in the other diffs
00:11:602 x:219 y:273 for better flow
00:19:784 x:262 y:247 to be perfect in line with previous slider (nazi)
00:20:875 x:423 y:147 to fix distance error
00:24:693 x:219 y:229 for be in line with previous and better blank with nex and to fix a little distance too
00:29:602 Finish fit with music
00:33:966 ^
00:33:966 (1,2,3,4) - distance is a little wrong here fix it plz
00:38:329 add finish like you did in the others diffs
00:42:693 ^
00:42:693 (1,2,3) - distance is a little worng here
00:45:966 this can be confuse for easy maybe delete one repeat and add a circle or convert it in 2 sliders?
00:49:239 add finish here like the others diff
00:57:966 finish fit better imo
01:02:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - fix distance plz
01:06:693 add finish since kiai start here
01:14:602 (1,2,3) - a little distance error
01:22:511 can you map that part cuz is realy confuse a new playyer can think all finish here 01:21:148
01:21:148 finish in the tail
spinner should finish here 01:26:875

Mint Normal:

00:42:693 add finish fit good with music
01:02:329 finish fit better here
00:18:693 (1,2) - make they in perfect line?
00:20:602 (3,4,1) - distance is not the same here
00:28:784 too early after spin imo
01:22:511 i think should map this part
well no much to mod here map dessign is nice but i dint understand your hitsound pattern maybe im baka T-T

Hard:

00:29:602 add finish fit with music
00:30:148 (2,3,4) - this part look better in this way:
SPOILER
00:33:966 finish
00:57:966 finish fit better imo
01:00:966 (3,1) - i think the distance here is too long just my opinion
01:02:329 finish like the other diffs
01:21:420 finish i the tail
spinner should finish here 01:26:875

Nice map hope i help you in something

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-15T05:24:10+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi from my Queue

General
Clean
Easy:
00:03:420 (3) - try to make it more curved for better blanck with (2) actually look really bad
If you want the code:
208,192,2875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,299,3420,2,0,B|278:298|303:232|303:232|330:262|358:280,1,180
435,219,4784,6,0,P|363:171|331:83,1,180
Fix~
00:09:966 add finish like you did in the other diffs Fix~
00:11:602 x:219 y:273 for better flow Fix~
00:19:784 x:262 y:247 to be perfect in line with previous slider (nazi) Fix~
00:20:875 x:423 y:147 to fix distance error Fix~
00:24:693 x:219 y:229 for be in line with previous and better blank with nex and to fix a little distance too Fix~
00:29:602 Finish fit with music Fix~
00:33:966 ^ ^
00:33:966 (1,2,3,4) - distance is a little wrong here fix it plz Fix~
00:38:329 add finish like you did in the others diffs Fix~
00:42:693 ^ ^
00:42:693 (1,2,3) - distance is a little worng here Fix~
00:45:966 this can be confuse for easy maybe delete one repeat and add a circle or convert it in 2 sliders? change to 2 slider~~
00:49:239 add finish here like the others diff Fix~
00:57:966 finish fit better imo Fix~
01:02:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - fix distance plz Fix~
01:06:693 add finish since kiai start here Fix~
01:14:602 (1,2,3) - a little distance error Fix~
01:22:511 can you map that part cuz is realy confuse a new playyer can think all finish here 01:21:148 Fix~
01:21:148 finish in the tail Fix~
spinner should finish here 01:26:875 Fix~
Mint Normal:

00:42:693 add finish fit good with music
01:02:329 finish fit better here
00:18:693 (1,2) - make they in perfect line?
00:20:602 (3,4,1) - distance is not the same here
00:28:784 too early after spin imo
01:22:511 i think should map this part
well no much to mod here map dessign is nice but i dint understand your hitsound pattern maybe im baka T-T
Hard:

00:29:602 add finish fit with music Fix~
00:30:148 (2,3,4) - this part look better in this way:
SPOILER
Fix~
00:33:966 finish Fix~
00:57:966 finish fit better imo Fix~
01:00:966 (3,1) - i think the distance here is too long just my opinion
I make this part step-by-step distance , but I think here is not too far to hit.
01:02:329 finish like the other diffs Fix~
01:21:420 finish i the tail Fix~
spinner should finish here 01:26:875 Fix~
Nice map hope i help you in something

awesome mod.

Help a lot , thanks~~~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-03-16T04:12:48+00:00

fixed thanks

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
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ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
BeatmapID:220705
BeatmapSetID:78854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"01.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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MineC24

1,072 posts

Joined May 2010

MineC24 2013-03-16T08:24:59+00:00

Modding queue~
(Sorry. I'm late

)

Easy

OD - 1

00:20:875 (4) - remove slider point
00:26:466 (1) - spin start change (00:26:466 -> 00:26:602 )
00:47:057 (1) - add spin (00:47:057 ~ 00:48:148 )
01:24:284 (1) - spin start change (01:24:284 -> 01:24:420 )

mint's Normal

00:47:057 ~ 00:47:875 - add note or slider...

Hard

00:40:784 (1) - remove NC

Nice map

GL

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-16T10:13:55+00:00

MineC24 wrote:
Modding queue~
(Sorry. I'm late )

Easy
OD - 1

00:20:875 (4) - remove slider point
00:26:466 (1) - spin start change (00:26:466 -> 00:26:602 )
00:47:057 (1) - add spin (00:47:057 ~ 00:48:148 )
01:24:284 (1) - spin start change (01:24:284 -> 01:24:420 )
All fix~
mint's Normal
00:47:057 ~ 00:47:875 - add note or slider...

Hard
00:40:784 (1) - remove NC
Fix~
Nice map
GL

Thanks your mod~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-16T10:14:41+00:00

Update~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-03-26T00:17:30+00:00

@MineC24: nope, it need break

没变 ~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-26T05:18:38+00:00

Add video ~

Yuki-kun

568 posts

Joined December 2010

Yuki-kun 2013-03-26T09:52:18+00:00

Hi~
From my queue.~

General

Nothing here~ :3

My Mod

[mint's normal]
00:30:693 (4,5) - You can improve this part for better flow like this (example)

SPOILER

00:45:420 (2) - Boring pattern

01:05:602 - Add note here. I feel somehow it's so empty
01:24:148 (1) - Change into a slider and end at 01:24:693

[Hard]
00:38:330 (3,4) - Wrong distance

00:49:239 (1,2) - Bad flow. Try to make it better.

[Easy]
00:17:057 - Add a note.
00:22:511 - ^
00:51:966 (4) - Reapeat one more
01:09:420 (4) - ^

Nice song. Good luck~ <3

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-03-26T11:08:48+00:00

fixed thanks

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ED2N.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokutachi no Uta (TV size)
TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
BeatmapID:220705
BeatmapSetID:78854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"01.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Bokutachi no Uta.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-03-27T11:23:29+00:00

Yuki-kun wrote:
Hi~
From my queue.~

General

Nothing here~ :3

My Mod

[mint's normal]
00:30:693 (4,5) - You can improve this part for better flow like this (example)

SPOILER
00:45:420 (2) - Boring pattern
01:05:602 - Add note here. I feel somehow it's so empty
01:24:148 (1) - Change into a slider and end at 01:24:693

[Hard]
00:38:330 (3,4) - Wrong distance
00:49:239 (1,2) - Bad flow. Try to make it better.

[Easy]
00:17:057 - Add a note.
00:22:511 - ^
00:51:966 (4) - Reapeat one more
01:09:420 (4) - ^

Nice song. Good luck~ <3

All fix~

Thanks your mod ~

DingGGu

305 posts

Joined January 2011

DingGGu 2013-04-06T02:09:05+00:00

Hello, From DingGGu's Modding Queue!

[General]

[Easy]

Very Good! no more mod

[mint's Normal]

01:22:511 - No more Circle? why not add any beats try to long slide

[Hard]

00:12:421 (1) - NC
00:34:512 (6) - copy 00:33:966 (5) -
00:40:511 (2) - I Think Add note will be better
00:51:420 (5,6,7,8) - try it like this

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-08T14:22:57+00:00

DingGGu wrote:
Hello, From DingGGu's Modding Queue!

[General]

[Easy]
Very Good! no more mod
[mint's Normal]
01:22:511 - No more Circle? why not add any beats try to long slide

[Hard]
00:12:421 (1) - NC a little bit strange , so not fix here
00:34:512 (6) - copy 00:33:966 (5) - fix
00:40:511 (2) - I Think Add note will be better fix
00:51:420 (5,6,7,8) - try it like this seens little strange on rhythm.......

Thanks your mod ~

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-04-20T14:08:32+00:00

hi, from my modding queue,
<EASY>
Perfect ^^
<NORMAL>
00:13:511 (5) - Add a circle ( rhythm is sensible as I think)
00:36:148 (4) - No need NC
00:24:966 (7) - Can you make as: http://puu.sh/2DCLL.jpg
01:21:693 (4,1) - Why does between them have a empty? Add note ( I see it isn't good here)
<HARD>
00:03:421 (2) - No NC
00:48:420 (1,2,3) - Please, distance snap
01:08:602 (5) - In the same lyrics, so No NC
01:22:784 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap

I like this map very much. I hope it will rank soon! Shoot a star!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,535 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-04-21T04:27:55+00:00

Some minor suggestions

Hard

00:35:875 (2) - make it 1/4 beat rhythm?

SPOILER

00:42:557 - add a note
01:10:102 - ^
01:22:239 - ^

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-21T06:41:53+00:00

Loki-san wrote:
hi, from my modding queue,
<EASY>
Perfect ^^

<HARD>
00:03:421 (2) - No NC I remove 00:02:875- 's NC seens easier to read
00:48:420 (1,2,3) - Please, distance snap deliberately here
01:08:602 (5) - In the same lyrics, so No NC Fix~
01:22:784 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap OK~

I like this map very much. I hope it will rank soon! Shoot a star!

Glad you like it . and thanks star ~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-21T06:47:20+00:00

neonat wrote:
Some minor suggestions

Hard

00:35:875 (2) - make it 1/4 beat rhythm? Umm.....seens a little sudden on this part's rhythm , so not fix here sorry....
SPOILER
00:42:557 - add a note fixing
01:10:102 - ^ fix here
01:22:239 - ^

fix~

Xinchii

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Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-21T06:48:26+00:00

neonat wrote:
Some minor suggestions

Hard

00:35:875 (2) - make it 1/4 beat rhythm? Umm.....seens a little sudden on this part's rhythm , so not fix here sorry....
SPOILER
00:42:557 - add a note fixing
01:10:102 - ^ fix here
01:22:239 - ^ fix~

Thanks your suggestions

creampuff

438 posts

Joined August 2012

creampuff 2013-04-21T21:51:04+00:00

Yo~ Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Make the overall volume higher. I can barely hear anything :<

[Easy]
00:26:329 - 00:26:602 (5,1) I wouldn't recommend doing this. If you're going to place a spinner at this point, remove 00:26:329 (5) and place the spinner there instead. End the spinner at 00:28:511.
00:37:784 - Place a note here? It feels empty.
00:42:148 - ^
00:53:057 - ^
01:00:966 - 01:01:784 (1,2) This is quite unfitting. Try something like this instead.

SPOILER

01:05:057 (4) Also unfitting. Just remove the repeat.
01:06:148 - Add note here
01:10:511 - ^
01:24:420 (1) Make this spinner silent.

[mint's Normal]
Hey~
00:26:057 (1) End spinner at 00:27:420 instead?
01:23:602 - Add note here?
01:24:966 (1) Like in the easy, make this silent.

[Hard]
00:09:966 - 00:11:057 (1,2,3) Flow's not good here. Flip 00:11:057 (3) horizontally so it flows better with 00:09:966 (1)
00:58:784 - Ctrl + H
01:14:057 (3) Try to stack the tail with 01:12:966 (4) 's tail. It'll look better
01:16:784 - 01:17:329 (1,2,3) Again, doesn't flow very well. Flip 01:17:329 (3) horizontally.
01:25:102 (1) Silent

I love this song~ So good luck!

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2013-04-26T10:22:35+00:00

Hi! mod from my queue

EASY

00:07:239 (3) - move this one grid right to be alligned with 00:06:420 (2) -
00:53:057 - maybe add a note here or make something like this

SPOILER

01:24:420 (1) - make this silent

NORMAL

00:26:057 (1) - maybe make this spinner end at 00:28:239 -
00:47:057 - maybe add a spinner here? like in easy diff

HARD

00:01:239 - in this first part of the diff I feel strange with hitsounds, maybe use soft sound somewhere is better
00:25:921 (3) - maybe delete this note, in my opinion it sounds better
00:50:057 (2,3,4) - maybe try to do something like this if you want

SPOILER

00:50:875 (4) - make this slider end at 00:51:420 -
00:58:784 (3) - maybe move the last pont of the slider one grid down to make it be in the middle of the two notes

that's all. well the map is good and good luck for rank ^.^ I'll also give you a star

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-27T09:05:44+00:00

Tsusuko wrote:
Yo~ Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Make the overall volume higher. I can barely hear anything :<

[Easy]
00:26:329 - 00:26:602 (5,1) I wouldn't recommend doing this. If you're going to place a spinner at this point, remove 00:26:329 (5) and place the spinner there instead. End the spinner at 00:28:511.
00:37:784 - Place a note here? It feels empty.
00:42:148 - ^
00:53:057 - ^ here not fix
01:00:966 - 01:01:784 (1,2) This is quite unfitting. Try something like this instead.
SPOILER
01:05:057 (4) Also unfitting. Just remove the repeat.
01:06:148 - Add note here
01:10:511 - ^
01:24:420 (1) Make this spinner silent.

Other all fix ~

[Hard]
00:09:966 - 00:11:057 (1,2,3) Flow's not good here. Flip 00:11:057 (3) horizontally so it flows better with 00:09:966 (1) Here not fix , sorry
00:58:784 - Ctrl + H This part is deliberately , so I did'n fix here , but a little adjustment
01:14:057 (3) Try to stack the tail with 01:12:966 (4) 's tail. It'll look better
01:16:784 - 01:17:329 (1,2,3) Again, doesn't flow very well. Flip 01:17:329 (3) horizontally.
01:25:102 (1) Silent

Other all fix~

I love this song~ So good luck!

Thanks your mod ~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-04-27T09:49:51+00:00

久等了！！

fix some thanks~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokutachi no Uta (TV size)
TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
BeatmapID:220705
BeatmapSetID:78854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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Video,0,"Bokutachi no Uta.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-28T09:07:51+00:00

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! mod from my queue

EASY

00:07:239 (3) - move this one grid right to be alligned with 00:06:420 (2) -
00:53:057 - maybe add a note here or make something like this
SPOILER
01:24:420 (1) - make this silent

Easy all fix ~~

HARD

00:01:239 - in this first part of the diff I feel strange with hitsounds, maybe use soft sound somewhere is better
00:25:921 (3) - maybe delete this note, in my opinion it sounds better
00:50:057 (2,3,4) - maybe try to do something like this if you want
SPOILER
00:50:875 (4) - make this slider end at 00:51:420 - Here not fix.
00:58:784 (3) - maybe move the last pont of the slider one grid down to make it be in the middle of the two notes

Hard others are all fix.

that's all. well the map is good and good luck for rank ^.^ I'll also give you a star

Thanks your mod and star ~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-04-28T09:08:29+00:00

Update~

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-01T07:45:24+00:00

m4m frorm your queue :3

[Easy]

01:14:057 (4) - add finish
01:18:420 (3) - ^
01:19:784 - maybe add note here and add finish

[mint's Normal]

00:19:784 (2) - up 1 grid please
01:12:966 (5,1) - I think make it like this is more flow http://puu.sh/2KBan.jpg
01:14:457 (2) - add finish
01:19:784 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:16:784 (7,1) - swap NC
01:14:057 (3) - add finish here
01:18:420 (1) - ^
01:19:784 (3) - ^

Good Luck ><

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2013-05-02T09:22:01+00:00

Easy:

00:01:239(1)(3) 滑条还是做成单一的吧不规则的应该不适合easy里

00:47:067 转盘会不会太短不适合新手吧？

Normal:

米桶神mapper 可以不看 o.o

Hard:

00:22:784(6)(7) 调换

00:23:602 note ？

想着M4M一个的 , 不过没啥问题就不必了 , 不用给Kudosu , 你参考一下就好 , 加油>w<

787B

769 posts

Joined November 2010

787B 2013-05-03T17:45:22+00:00

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.
Huge sorry for the delay, I was taking a break from modding since I had to focus a bit on my college for exams. I should've pm'd you something, but here I am.

General

Second kiai should end in 01:21:966 - .

Easy

00:58:784 (1,1) - I honestly think there's no need to emphasize them. If you keep in mind something like 00:06:420 (2,3) - in which you didn't emphasized, I would make something similar to those circles I'm showing up here. The whole combo 00:57:420 (1,1,1,1) - looks kinda bad with them in my opinion. But if you have your reasons to keep, it's fine.
00:29:057 - I think the beat here is quite strong to leave it without an object, and it's not a problem with the previous spin. Consider adding a circle here somewhere. You can also extend 00:26:329 (1) - to that point to give you an other idea.
00:47:057 (1) - Quite a short spin isn't it? Consider extending to 00:48:693 -, since previous two sliders makes the gameplay a bit harsh. You can also try deleting the spin and leaving without anything, just like in Normal.
01:24:148 (2,1) - I don't think placing a spin after (2) is recommended, since it requires fast reaction from players to process this, which isn't recommended in an easy. In my opinion the spin should've started in 01:24:148 - . But since they are the last notes of the diff, that's not a huge problem. It's up to you.

Mint's Normal

00:16:511 (1) - New Combo here is not necessary in my opinion. Would be best if you let the combo flow a bit more, which is totally fine, since the previous whole-combo there are only two objects.
00:23:057 (1) - New Combo?
00:29:602 (3) - ^. Although I think adding here is more recommended than above because of the drums and white tick.
01:24:966 (1) - Consider placing the spin in 01:24:693 - to 01:26:875 - for improving gameplay. It's currently kinda bad the way it is because feels there's something missing between 01:24:148 (2,1) - . Which of course, you can also place a slider here.
Example 1

Example 2

Hard

Looks very clear to me, good job.

Great job so far, good luck!

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-05-04T14:58:57+00:00

P A N wrote:
m4m frorm your queue :3

[Easy]

01:14:057 (4) - add finish
01:18:420 (3) - ^
01:19:784 - maybe add note here and add finish

[Hard]

00:16:784 (7,1) - swap NC
01:14:057 (3) - add finish here
01:18:420 (1) - ^
01:19:784 (3) - ^

Good Luck ><

Fix some ~
Thanks your mod :3

Xinchii

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Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-05-04T15:08:50+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
Easy:

00:01:239(1)(3) 滑条还是做成单一的吧不规则的应该不适合easy里這邊是覺得特殊的形狀似乎會多點趣味www

00:47:067 转盘会不会太短不适合新手吧？

Normal:

米桶神mapper 可以不看 o.o

Hard:

00:22:784(6)(7) 调换

00:23:602 note ？

想着M4M一个的 , 不过没啥问题就不必了 , 不用给Kudosu , 你参考一下就好 , 加油>w<

修改了些,感謝mod ~~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-05-04T15:31:36+00:00

Wolf wrote:
Hi.
From my Modding Queue.
Huge sorry for the delay, I was taking a break from modding since I had to focus a bit on my college for exams. I should've pm'd you something, but here I am.

General

Second kiai should end in 01:21:966 - .
Easy
00:58:784 (1,1) - I honestly think there's no need to emphasize them. If you keep in mind something like 00:06:420 (2,3) - in which you didn't emphasized, I would make something similar to those circles I'm showing up here. The whole combo 00:57:420 (1,1,1,1) - looks kinda bad with them in my opinion. But if you have your reasons to keep, it's fine. Umm... I keep this part temporarily. and I will see how to change will be better.
00:29:057 - I think the beat here is quite strong to leave it without an object, and it's not a problem with the previous spin. Consider adding a circle here somewhere. You can also extend 00:26:329 (1) - to that point to give you an other idea. fix~
00:47:057 (1) - Quite a short spin isn't it? Consider extending to 00:48:693 -, since previous two sliders makes the gameplay a bit harsh. You can also try deleting the spin and leaving without anything, just like in Normal. I fix this spin extending to 00:48:693 - make it longer
01:24:148 (2,1) - I don't think placing a spin after (2) is recommended, since it requires fast reaction from players to process this, which isn't recommended in an easy. In my opinion the spin should've started in 01:24:148 - . But since they are the last notes of the diff, that's not a huge problem. It's up to you.
Umm... according to this suggstion , I started spin in 01:24:148 -

Hard
Looks very clear to me, good job.
ok ~ :3

Great job so far, good luck!

Thanks your detailed mod ~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-05-06T14:24:23+00:00

Wolf wrote:
Hi.
From my Modding Queue.
Huge sorry for the delay, I was taking a break from modding since I had to focus a bit on my college for exams. I should've pm'd you something, but here I am.

General

Second kiai should end in 01:21:966 - . i will let this for leon
Mint's Normal
00:16:511 (1) - New Combo here is not necessary in my opinion. Would be best if you let the combo flow a bit more, which is totally fine, since the previous whole-combo there are only two objects. hmm ok
00:23:057 (1) - New Combo? nope, it's follow vocal. and if always white tick or drum, it weird.
00:29:602 (3) - ^. Although I think adding here is more recommended than above because of the drums and white tick.
01:24:966 (1) - Consider placing the spin in 01:24:693 - to 01:26:875 - for improving gameplay. It's currently kinda bad the way it is because feels there's something missing between 01:24:148 (2,1) - . Which of course, you can also place a slider here.
Example 1

Example 2

exm 1 : nope, it's follow vocal.
exp 2: umm... i think this is quite hard for normal player, so no.
Great job so far, good luck!

P A N wrote:
m4m frorm your queue :3

[mint's Normal]

00:19:784 (2) - up 1 grid please
01:12:966 (5,1) - I think make it like this is more flow http://puu.sh/2KBan.jpg
01:14:457 (2) - add finish
01:19:784 (1) - ^

Good Luck ><

thanks for mod :3

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Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-05-06T17:37:41+00:00

Upload~

(and fix the kiai time)

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-05-19T07:25:23+00:00

here's your ticket

[General]
offset is wrong, it need to be 1231(-8) ~ 1223(-16). due to the low BPM, I'm not sure which one is the best, you'd better to find some timing pro to check this(I recommen Charles445)

[Easy]
01:26:875 - why not use default soft hitnormal sound here?

[mint's Normal]
01:12:966 (5,1) - how about change them in to 1 slider? will fit the song better imo
01:26:875 - same as Easy

[Hard]
01:22:239 (3) - I suggest not to stack this note under a slider end when the slider has speed changing, or the rhyme is kinda hard to read
01:26:875 - same as Easy

nothing else, call me back then

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-05-19T12:35:27+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket

[General]
offset is wrong, it need to be 1231(-8) ~ 1223(-16). due to the low BPM, I'm not sure which one is the best, you'd better to find some timing pro to check this(I recommen Charles445) i will let this for leon

[mint's Normal]
01:12:966 (5,1) - how about change them in to 1 slider? will fit the song better imo changed
01:26:875 - same as Easy ^

nothing else, call me back then

thanks!

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vipto

716 posts

Joined May 2011

vipto 2013-05-19T16:04:16+00:00

Mapper Help Team

Timing check

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-05-19T17:08:08+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket

[General]
offset is wrong, it need to be 1231(-8) ~ 1223(-16). due to the low BPM, I'm not sure which one is the best, you'd better to find some timing pro to check this(I recommen Charles445)
ok , I will ~

[Easy]
01:26:875 - why not use default soft hitnormal sound here? ok , fix ~

[mint's Normal]
01:12:966 (5,1) - how about change them in to 1 slider? will fit the song better imo
01:26:875 - same as Easy

[Hard]
01:22:239 (3) - I suggest not to stack this note under a slider end when the slider has speed changing, or the rhyme is kinda hard to read
01:26:875 - same as Easy
Hard all fix ~

nothing else, call me back then

Thanks ~~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-05-19T17:16:17+00:00

vipto wrote:
Mapper Help Team

Timing check

Thanks for time check ~

mix wcx's mod , so I set it on 1,231 close to 1,233 first .......

lol

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-06-02T13:58:29+00:00

I think you forgot to resnap all objects..

Xinchii

1,240 posts

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Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-06-02T14:37:43+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
I think you forgot to resnap all objects..

I forgot , so baka ............... ;w;

fix now , sorry

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-06-10T06:01:31+00:00

bubbled
edit: after fixing the title, checked and rebubbled

Xinchii

1,240 posts

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Xinchii 2013-06-10T06:35:32+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
bubbled

Thanks wcx ~ ;w;

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-06-10T12:09:03+00:00

哦哦恭喜！

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-06-10T16:11:54+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
哦哦恭喜！

謝謝mint~ ><

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-06-11T06:31:04+00:00

Haha, Go Go! Congratz!!

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-06-11T07:18:03+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Haha, Go Go! Congratz!!

Ohh! Thanks Oyatsu ! >w<

Tsumetaku

732 posts

Joined May 2012

Tsumetaku 2013-06-11T11:56:19+00:00

呼呼基測完好閒~
恭喜嚕~~

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Xinchii 2013-06-11T12:27:00+00:00

Tsumetaku wrote:
呼呼基測完好閒~
恭喜嚕~~

期末考好忙;w;

謝謝~~XD

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-17T06:12:32+00:00

Not a huge issue, but the "size" in TV size should be capitalized, so the full title is "Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)"

Like you can just rebubble it afterwards but like capitalization is important and shit

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-06-17T12:32:29+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Not a huge issue, but the "size" in TV size should be capitalized, so the full title is "Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)"

Like you can just rebubble it afterwards but like capitalization is important and shit

Ok!

I fixed this

Thanks~

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-26T01:05:11+00:00

[General]

I know you're trying to put in the tag as "shounen t" but that "t" doesn't really effects in the searching. please remove it.
The volume at kiai please increase by 10, the kiai is the fun part starts let people hear a louder hitsounds too since the normal one is 30.

[Hard]

the starting sounds really empty with just whistle on the white tick.why don't you add whistle at this place, sounds better and no more feel emptiness from the music.
1. 00:02:049 (2) - add at the starting
2. 00:02:867 (3) - add here
3. 00:04:231 (2) - add at the starting
4. 00:05:049 (3) - ^
5. 00:06:413 (2) - ^
6. 00:07:231 (1) - ^
00:18:140 (5) - i would make it curve at the other side so it can become blanket for the next circle.
SPOILER
00:32:321 (4) - missing clap at the starting?
00:48:412 (1,2,3) - I like it more if you use a normal spacing and make a curve. the song flow is good with a curve pattern ~>w<~
SPOILER
01:18:412 (1) - add finish at the starting, sounds good with the high pitch vocal

[mint's Normal]
HP drain rate and OD -1
This diff really lack of hitsounds. Please check all of this hitsounds suggestions.

00:01:231 (1,2) - why don't you make it like this? it flows better and use more space rather than your current one.
SPOILER
00:15:412 (2) - add clap at the end to follow the music and make the hitsound consistent
00:17:594 (5) - ^
00:20:594 (3) - fix this shape a little bit. it shouldn't be that curve lol.
SPOILER
00:19:776 (2) - add clap at the end to follow the music and make the hitsound consistent
00:22:231 (1) - ^
00:24:685 (6) - ^
If you follow or hear the song carefully, there should be a clap at the end of 00:39:140 (3) - and 00:40:231 (5) - and 00:40:503 (1) -
00:42:685 (1) - add a clap at the end.
00:43:776 (3) - ^
00:45:412 (2,3) - can add some hitsound based on the song/drum
Same goes to after kiai and after kiai. you must check it. here
00:50:867 (4) -
00:51:958 (6) -
00:56:321 (6) -
01:19:776 (1) - move it lower, so it doesn't touch the hp bar. just to keep it safe :p because in my skin it is really close to the hp bar.

[Easy]
All of this are for consistency

00:15:958 (3) - why didn't add clap at the starting?
00:22:503 (6) - add clap for consistency?
00:37:776 (5) - ^
00:42:140 (5) - ^
00:51:958 (4) - add clap at the starting.
00:52:776 (1) - add clap at the ending.
01:00:958 (1) - ^
01:02:867 (1) - add clap at the starting.
01:09:412 (4) - ^
01:10:503 (5) - add clap
01:11:049 (1,2) - make both of this as a curve like this so it flows better.
SPOILER

since mostly it just a hitsound mod, you can call me anytime after this. I really wish that you will make the volume louder at the kiai.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-06-26T10:46:17+00:00

fixed all thanks~

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
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ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
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228,80,42687,6,0,P|276:96|356:80,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,56,43505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,120,43778,2,0,P|400:156|404:272,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,288,44596,6,0,P|304:268|188:272,1,130
160,232,45414,2,0,L|116:168,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,120,45960,2,0,L|112:56,2,65,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,46778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,48,48414,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,100,48687,2,0,P|324:136|324:176,1,65
332,224,49233,6,0,P|272:240|200:224,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,50051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,50323,2,0,P|96:284|112:328,1,65
144,348,50869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,312,51142,2,0,P|252:304|328:312,1,130
384,276,51960,2,0,P|368:224|376:132,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,104,52778,2,0,P|416:60|408:32,2,65
320,192,53869,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,54142,2,0,P|228:224|188:220,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,184,54687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,54960,2,0,P|80:256|88:296,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,55505,2,0,P|184:356|252:340,1,130
292,292,56323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,228,56596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,100,57142,6,0,P|248:68|252:28,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,152,57960,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,136,58233,2,0,P|112:168|96:260,1,130
204,312,59323,2,0,P|240:280|256:188,1,130
220,80,60414,2,0,P|276:56|340:72,1,130
412,180,61505,2,0,P|408:216|416:244,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,292,62051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,62323,6,0,P|344:352|276:336,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,63414,2,0,P|264:224|332:240,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,268,64233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,64505,6,0,P|440:176|432:140,1,65
396,108,65051,2,0,P|360:88|328:84,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,65869,6,0,L|188:204,2,65
316,160,66687,2,0,P|380:144|440:160,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,208,67505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,67778,2,0,P|452:300|428:320,1,65
368,304,68323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,332,68596,2,0,P|264:308|168:308,1,130
132,268,69414,6,0,P|156:224|156:128,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,88,70233,2,0,P|208:60|248:40,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,172,71323,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,196,71596,2,0,P|360:228|360:264,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,320,72142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,352,72414,2,0,P|244:356|212:352,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,328,72960,6,0,P|116:288|104:136,1,195,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,108,74051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,74323,2,0,P|232:132|272:128,1,65
324,100,74869,2,0,P|356:96|396:100,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,75414,6,0,P|456:200|436:264,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,296,76233,2,0,P|328:312|256:296,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,248,77051,2,0,P|176:244|148:248,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,296,77596,6,0,P|68:292|-4:232,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,204,78414,2,0,P|36:144|52:80,1,130
116,76,79233,2,0,P|160:84|196:72,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,79778,6,0,P|308:36|368:52,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,112,80596,2,0,L|404:248,1,130
352,280,81414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,240,81687,2,0,L|288:168,1,65,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83596,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84142,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84960,12,0,86869,0:0:0:0:

@leon: 感觉可以Shounen T -> ShounenT
@HeatKai: i think ShounenT would be better should yeah.

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-26T11:55:02+00:00

it's whether "shounenT" or "shounen_t" or "shounen-t" I'll discuss later.
I guess it can be "shounen-t" based on this

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-06-26T13:01:56+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
[General]
I know you're trying to put in the tag as "shounen t" but that "t" doesn't really effects in the searching. please remove it.
The volume at kiai please increase by 10, the kiai is the fun part starts let people hear a louder hitsounds too since the normal one is 30.
[Hard]
the starting sounds really empty with just whistle on the white tick.why don't you add whistle at this place, sounds better and no more feel emptiness from the music.
00:02:049 (2) - add at the starting
00:02:867 (3) - add here
00:04:231 (2) - add at the starting
00:05:049 (3) - ^
00:06:413 (2) - ^
00:07:231 (1) - ^
00:18:140 (5) - i would make it curve at the other side so it can become blanket for the next circle.
SPOILER
00:32:321 (4) - missing clap at the starting?
00:48:412 (1,2,3) - I like it more if you use a normal spacing and make a curve. the song flow is good with a curve pattern ~>w<~
SPOILER
01:18:412 (1) - add finish at the starting, sounds good with the high pitch vocal
[Easy]
All of this are for consistency
00:15:958 (3) - why didn't add clap at the starting?
00:22:503 (6) - add clap for consistency?
00:37:776 (5) - ^
00:42:140 (5) - ^
00:51:958 (4) - add clap at the starting.
00:52:776 (1) - add clap at the ending.
01:00:958 (1) - ^
01:02:867 (1) - add clap at the starting.
01:09:412 (4) - ^
01:10:503 (5) - add clap
01:11:049 (1,2) - make both of this as a curve like this so it flows better.
SPOILER
since mostly it just a hitsound mod, you can call me anytime after this. I really wish that you will make the volume louder at the kiai.

Thanks alot , and fixed all

Then I set Shounen T -----> Shounen-T to HeatKai's suggestion first. lol

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-06-26T13:12:55+00:00

http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/ShounenT

but whatever. i think both are ok~

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-26T16:41:00+00:00

Recheck again.
Mint's diff got different offset, change it to 1,231
for title unicode in easy and hard, caps the "S" in (TV Size) follow the normal title (TV Size) as CDFA said.
and I wonder can you change the combo 2 into purple or darker blue? since combo 2 and combo 3 doesn't have much different.

SPOILER

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-06-26T17:44:28+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
Recheck again.
Mint's diff got different offset, change it to 1,231
for title unicode in easy and hard, caps the "S" in (TV Size) follow the normal title (TV Size) as CDFA said.
and I wonder can you change the combo 2 into purple or darker blue? since combo 2 and combo 3 doesn't have much different.
SPOILER

Ok~ all issue fixed. :3

Umm , I set combo color 2 into purple like:

SPOILER

to make color 2 and 3 more different.

Thanks ~

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-26T18:58:41+00:00

okay. lets go rebubbled!

all the best >w<b

so sweet ;w;

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NoHitter 2013-06-29T08:16:48+00:00

[General]
- Add a space between 佐香 and 智久in the Artist area. It should be 佐香智久.

[Easy]
- 01:18:412 (3) - Move this note so that it follows the end of the slider. Like this. Looks better.

[mint's Normal]
- 00:23:049 (3) - [nazi] Move this down by two grids for better flow.

[Hard]
- 00:05:049 (3) - I recommend making this into notes instead since it looks and flows better. Like this.
- 00:26:595 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency with your combo pattern.
- 00:28:776 (1) - Spacing here is similar to previous combo (1/2) but is really (1/1). It may throw people off since IMO. Why not stack it on 00:28:231 (4) instead?
- 00:33:686 (3) - Inconsistent spacing here when compared to that of 00:33:140 (1,2).
- 00:33:686 (3,4,5) - Stack these instead? The current pattern looks not-so-good aesthetically IMO.
- 00:42:958 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
- 01:09:958 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:33:686 (3,4,5).

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-06-29T12:47:39+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
[General]
- Add a space between 佐香 and 智久in the Artist area. It should be 佐香智久.

I think there's no need to add a space between佐香and 智久
Here is the confirmation with melo:

~

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-06-29T14:59:13+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
okay. lets go rebubbled!
all the best >w<b

so sweet ;w;
Happiness guys >///<

ohh~ I was not here for a time , btw thanks Heatkai :3

NoHitter wrote:
[General]
- Add a space between 佐香 and 智久in the Artist area. It should be 佐香智久.

[Easy]
- 01:18:412 (3) - Move this note so that it follows the end of the slider. Like this. Looks better.

[mint's Normal]
- 00:23:049 (3) - [nazi] Move this down by two grids for better flow.

[Hard]
- 00:05:049 (3) - I recommend making this into notes instead since it looks and flows better. Like this.
- 00:26:595 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency with your combo pattern.
- 00:28:776 (1) - Spacing here is similar to previous combo (1/2) but is really (1/1). It may throw people off since IMO. Why not stack it on 00:28:231 (4) instead?
- 00:33:686 (3) - Inconsistent spacing here when compared to that of 00:33:140 (1,2).
- 00:33:686 (3,4,5) - Stack these instead? The current pattern looks not-so-good aesthetically IMO.
- 00:42:958 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
- 01:09:958 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:33:686 (3,4,5).

All fixed.

Artist issue I keep no changing according to kanpakyin's post first. ._.

kanpakyin wrote:
NoHitter wrote:
[General]
- Add a space between 佐香 and 智久in the Artist area. It should be 佐香智久.
I think there's no need to add a space between佐香and 智久
Here is the confirmation with melo:

~

Thanks NoHitter and kanpakyin

@mintong:

NoHitter wrote:
[mint's Normal]
- 00:23:049 (3) - [nazi] Move this down by two grids for better flow.

這條我就先幫你下移兩格了,如果有其它打算再跟我說吧lol

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-06-29T16:47:22+00:00

Ranked!

Sorry about the confusion regarding the artist name.

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-06-29T16:50:18+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
Ranked!

Sorry about the confusion regarding the artist name. Don't mind

Oh~~~

My first rank ;w;

Thanks NoHitter

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Konei 2013-06-29T17:09:37+00:00

congratz :3

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-29T17:13:34+00:00

woooooooo!

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Tsumetaku 2013-06-29T17:23:19+00:00

咕噢噢噢噢噢噢噢~~~~~~~~~~~

恭喜喜喜喜喜喜喜喜喜!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xDDDDDD

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spboxer3 2013-06-29T17:33:35+00:00

恭喜阿難得看到有台灣新人Ranked圖

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-06-29T18:59:10+00:00

Love this song omgggg congrats <33

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UnderminE 2013-06-29T19:31:30+00:00

;_;

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Flask 2013-06-29T23:00:17+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
恭喜阿難得看到有台灣新人Ranked圖

還不來rank

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-06-30T00:00:59+00:00

lol 恭喜rank

关于那个只是nazi所以没关系lol

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2013-06-30T01:05:11+00:00

strange hitsound..

RealCuT

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RealCuT 2013-06-30T02:20:19+00:00

恭喜:DDDDDDDD

是不是該唱首歌來聽聽了//

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-06-30T03:19:25+00:00

Woa, Congratz for first ranked! Sorry I'm late ^^

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-06-30T15:51:53+00:00

Oh ~ Thank everyone ;w;

Since I am new mapper , so I got maaaaaany helps from other.

And thanks to those who ever helped me or gave me suggestion.

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