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Topic Starter
alacat
@UnitedWeSin

Thank you for making nice diff :) and changed video offset :3

@Licca

Thank you for modding ! added finish sound.

Autumn

Autumn wrote:

Mod from ???

[General]
Misaka is not moe enough in this BG! yes :D I will change !

[Insane]
You may add a spinner from 00:05:182 to 00:06:432 As well as in Easy and Normal.
00:09:140 - Add a circle or use a slider seems better:
00:11:015 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Arrange like this seems better to read: (0.2x spacing)
00:28:932 (5) - Move down 3 grids or using this code if you like: ok!
SPOILER
324,336,28932,2,0,L|368:344,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:182 (7) - NC
00:53:307 (11) - Stack with 00:53:515 (1) will be nice~ ok!
You can also stack on its end if you like

00:57:682 (4) - X=432 Y=72 looks better~
00:59:244 (4) - I think the slider should start from here to fit the vocal.Remove the circle and let the slider be here:
01:01:640 (7) - You may stack it with 01:01:848 (1) Just a suggestion~ ok!
01:04:661 (5) - Umm..See if this looks better:

01:11:016 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - Ctrl+J and stack with 01:09:973 (7)
01:22:265 (2) - Ctrl+G is a good choice~
01:24:140 (4) - X=288 Y=104 to make it symmetry: ok!

[Normal]
01:22:682 - Add a Finish is nice~ ok!
[Easy]
Good

Good Luck
Star~

Thank you for modding and star :)
Gamu
゚*。(o'∀')b。*゚こんにちは♪

佐天さんかわいいね

神曲で、alacatさんなので軽くMod

[General]

●kiai time 修正済 http://puu.sh/2zZLW

[Insane]

●00:10:599 (2) - スライダー始点、S:C1-whistle欲しい。
●00:14:973 (6) - S:C1-whistle?
●00:15:807 (3) - S:C1-whistle欲しい
●00:16:432 (6) - ^
●00:21:640 (8) - ^
●00:23:307 (6) - ^
●00:23:932 (2) - S:C1-whistle追加。
●00:24:140 (3) - S:C1-whistleほしい
●00:24:765 (5) - S:C1-whistle追加。
●00:24:974 (6) - S:C1-whistleほしい
●00:29:765 (10) - スライダー始点 S:C2-whistleほしい
●01:07:266 (1,4) - 1 grid下だと思います。http://puu.sh/2A0eP

[UWS's Hard]

●00:18:307 (4) - Move (x:288 y:108).
●00:21:849 (1) - It's not a very good place. best is (x:176 y:172)
●00:23:932 (2) - add whistle?
●00:24:765 (2) - ^
●01:04:661 (3) - Ctrl+G
●01:21:328 (4) - ^

[Normal]

●00:35:182 (3) - スライダー始点と終点、S:C1-whistle追加?
●00:41:015 (2) - スライダー始点、S:C1-whistle?
●00:55:599 (4) - 始点clap外して、始点と終点にS:C2-whistleを追加します。そして、00:56:015 (5) - 中点と終点のclapも外し、始点と中点にS:C2-whistleを追加。最後に終点をfinishにする。
●01:26:015 (1) - 終点、S:C2-whistleほしい
●01:28:099 (4) - clapよりもS:C2-whistleがすき。

[Easy]

●00:35:182 (3) - 始点、S:C1-whistle?


簡単でごめんなしゃい_(:3 」∠)_
Andrea
~General~
  1. Try to resize your BG correctly, dimensions are kinda weird right now.
  2. Consider adding "UWS" to all of your tags on all the difficulties.
~Easy~
  1. 00:31:848 (3) - Unsnapped slider end, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
~Normal~
  1. 00:22:265 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:58:932 (1) - This circle is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, try to center it a bit more at least, like this.
~UWS's Hard~
  1. 00:16:015 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
  2. 00:21:849 (1) - This slider is almost going off-screen, try to move it up a bit please.
  3. 00:46:849 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  4. 01:26:015 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
~Insane~
  1. 00:38:515 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:41:848 (7) - Unsnapped slider end, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
  3. 00:50:182 (1,2) - Disable the grid snap and stack these two sliders better.
Awesome song and map, good luck.
Topic Starter
alacat
Gamu, Andrea
Thank you for modding :) all fix !

I will change this bg :3 and talk about tag ~
mochi
★I★MA★SU★GU★
UnitedWeSin
Gamu

-Gamu- wrote:

[UWS's Hard]
●00:18:307 (4) - Move (x:288 y:108).
I'm sorry I don't want to make spacing constant there. I feel that the small jump is more interesting with the vocals here and feels good imo. I did something similar at 01:16:432 (6,7,1).

●00:21:849 (1) - It's not a very good place. best is (x:176 y:172)
Putting it there sort of ruins my intended flow here. I feel that the drop downwards into symmetry is powerful with the vocals as they snap out of the long held "aaa~" from 00:21:015.

●00:23:932 (2) - add whistle?
●00:24:765 (2) - ^
Added!

●01:04:661 (3) - Ctrl+G
This I don't want to do because it makes the jump larger, and I feel that it ruins the intended pattern with 01:05:182 (1) in that all the sliders are moving downwards at the same angle.

●01:21:328 (4) - ^
Ok good idea!

Thank you so much Gamu for modding!

Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~UWS's Hard~
  1. 00:16:015 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
  2. 00:21:849 (1) - This slider is almost going off-screen, try to move it up a bit please.
  3. 00:46:849 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  4. 01:26:015 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
    I'm sorry I want to keep this NC. I feel that it makes the transition from the slow slider to the 01:26:015 (1,2,3) rhythm easier to understand. That's why I added it when doing self-modding. I don't think keeping it is a problem. -.-

All offscreen/hp bar errors fixed.

Thank you so much Andrea for modding! :3

@alacat~
Add UWS to tags if you want to. ^^ Up to you.

Also did some clean up and removed some overmap. :)

http://puu.sh/2As3g
Topic Starter
alacat
@mochi

qilliamヽ(*´∀`*)ノqilliam

@UnitedWeSin

ok! added uws =w=
Satellite
hi~

[General]
BG code had little misalignment.
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
you should change above

[Insane]
00:11:848 (1,2,3) - 汚く見えました、3の位置を動かして調整するといいかもしれない?
00:21:015 (5,6,7,8) - 音が大して上下してないのでスペーシングをほぼ統一させたほうがいいと思いました?
00:22:682 (3) - なんかバックの音強く入ってるのでFinishまで行かない?何かが欲しい感じがしました?
00:39:349 (5) - whistle追加はどうですか?何もないよりかはいいと思いました?
00:55:182 (1) - あえて抜いてるかもしれませんがFinish音はいったほうがいいかも?
00:57:682 (4,5,6) - 最初の部分では曲がってなかったのでここでも直線か最初の位置を曲げるかして統一性を出してみては?
00:59:348 (5) - 少しだけ2をフォローするようにまげてあげると綺麗に見えると思います?
01:00:182 (1) - 頭にFinish?あってもいいのでは?
01:02:578 (4) - 後ろにFinish?
01:10:182 (1) - 此方も同様メロディでは強い音が入ってるので・・?

[UWS's Hard]
00:10:182 (1) - move x252 y32 is better
00:17:890 (2,3,4) - I think that you should use the "distance snap"
00:31:432 (3) - nazi 1grid right and 1grid up is better
01:09:557 (4) - move stack is 01:09:765 (5) - here, the position of the first

[Normal]
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[Easy]
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ヽ(*´∀`*)ノ
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • Set the same tags on all diffs.
    00:58:515 (kiai) - Why only a kiai fountain here? End this kiai at 01:11:432. (or 01:11:744)

Easy

  • 00:22:265 (4) - Rotate this slider 30° anticlockwise. (don't worry, it's not offscreen)
    00:53:515 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing:

Normal

  • HP Drain Rate: 5
    Overall Difficulty: 5
    00:37:265 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
    00:41:849 (3) - Flip this slider horizzontally, rotate it 35° clockwise and move it at x:244 y:136.
    00:55:182 (3,4,5) - Try this:

UWS's Hard

  • HP Drain Rate: 6
    00:18:099 (3,4) - Why this spacing? Keep it consistent. (or do the same spacing here 00:17:890 (2,3), move (3) at x:177 y:89)
    00:23:932 (2,3) - Same thing here, if you want to have a jump then move (3) at x:118 y:85.
    00:24:765 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:557 (4) - Move this circle at x:408 y:296.
    01:16:432 (6) - Move this circle at x:335 y:277.

Insane

  • 00:09:349 (3,4,5) - Try this pattern:
    00:22:265 (2) - Try this:
    00:56:015 (5,6,7) - Reverse this stream. (ctrl + g)

Nice map, keep asking for mods and call me again after few days for a recheck.
Topic Starter
alacat
Satellite

Satellite wrote:

hi~ hi :3

[General]
BG code had little misalignment.
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
you should change above ok~

[Insane]
00:11:848 (1,2,3) - 汚く見えました、3の位置を動かして調整するといいかもしれない?
00:21:015 (5,6,7,8) - 音が大して上下してないのでスペーシングをほぼ統一させたほうがいいと思いました?
00:22:682 (3) - なんかバックの音強く入ってるのでFinishまで行かない?何かが欲しい感じがしました? whistleで!
00:39:349 (5) - whistle追加はどうですか?何もないよりかはいいと思いました? ok!
00:55:182 (1) - あえて抜いてるかもしれませんがFinish音はいったほうがいいかも? nice :)
00:57:682 (4,5,6) - 最初の部分では曲がってなかったのでここでも直線か最初の位置を曲げるかして統一性を出してみては?ok!
00:59:348 (5) - 少しだけ2をフォローするようにまげてあげると綺麗に見えると思います?ok!

01:00:182 (1) - 頭にFinish?あってもいいのでは?
01:02:578 (4) - 後ろにFinish?
01:10:182 (1) - 此方も同様メロディでは強い音が入ってるので・・? サビのfinishですが、すこし多いと感じたのでこのままにします 8-)


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ヽ(*´∀`*)ノ Thank you for modding and star !! ;)

xxheroxx

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • Set the same tags on all diffs. ok!
    00:58:515 (kiai) - Why only a kiai fountain here? End this kiai at 01:11:432. (or 01:11:744) I want to put kiai only last part. Because the last part is changed slider speed (x1.2) 01:11:849 - ;)

Easy

  • 00:22:265 (4) - Rotate this slider 30° anticlockwise. (don't worry, it's not offscreen)
    00:53:515 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing:
^ fix all

Normal

  • HP Drain Rate: 5 "5" is hard to take a little for Normal diff, imo.
    Overall Difficulty: 5 ^ again.
    00:37:265 (1,2,3,4) - Try this: fix!
    00:41:849 (3) - Flip this slider horizzontally, rotate it 35° clockwise and move it at x:244 y:136. ^
    00:55:182 (3,4,5) - Try this: no change.

Insane

  • 00:09:349 (3,4,5) - Try this pattern: no chnage.
    00:22:265 (2) - Try this: change a bit :3
    00:56:015 (5,6,7) - Reverse this stream. (ctrl + g) emm.. no ><

Nice map, keep asking for mods and call me again after few days for a recheck. hero, Thank you for modding and star :) okey, When I'm ready, I tell you :3/

Thank you for modding :)
UnitedWeSin
Satellite

Satellite wrote:

hi~ hello :3

[UWS's Hard]
00:10:182 (1) - move x252 y32 is better
Hmm alright

00:17:890 (2,3,4) - I think that you should use the "distance snap"
bleh ok ;_;

00:31:432 (3) - nazi 1grid right and 1grid up is better
Did 1 grid up. The spacing/blanket are fixed with stack leniency.

01:09:557 (4) - move stack is 01:09:765 (5) - here, the position of the first
I guess I don't really understand this mod. ;A; Do you want the 4 stacked on the 5 instead? If so, I don't want to do that, I prefer stacking the 3 and 4 here.

xxheroxx

xxheroxx wrote:

UWS's Hard

  • HP Drain Rate: 6
    Going to keep it at 5 for now. The reason is because I feel that some people will really struggle with the 1/4 slider transitions at first, and with HP6, missing 2 of them is instant death. I feel being more forgiving at this difficulty level is more fun.

    00:18:099 (3,4) - Why this spacing? Keep it consistent. (or do the same spacing here 00:17:890 (2,3), move (3) at x:177 y:89)
    The inconsistent spacing is more interesting for me, but it plays better this way.

    00:23:932 (2,3) - Same thing here, if you want to have a jump then move (3) at x:118 y:85.
    00:24:765 (2,3) - ^
    alright then fix ;_;

    01:09:557 (4) - Move this circle at x:408 y:296.
    Maybe you gave the wrong coordinates here >< That would make it more difficult to play.

    01:16:432 (6) - Move this circle at x:335 y:277.
    kk, it does play better

Thank you for modding! C:

http://puu.sh/2By1m
Diasios
I'm usually against speed bubbling/ranking but this map is really well done so there's no point in holding it back, good job!
Topic Starter
alacat
Thank you so much, hero :)
10nya
wa i'm late orz =w=
Kawayi Rika
Insane : 00:41:848 (1) - Unsnapped slider

I'll check other later :3
Topic Starter
alacat
update :!:
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Finished mod ~

No kds for this post ~

[General]


  1. Add 'season 2' in tags.

[Insane]


  1. 00:11:432 - This is 1/6, not 1/8.
  2. 00:52:682 (7) - Add new combo? looks much better.

[UWS's Hard]


  1. 00:11:432 (4) - Same as Insane.

[Normal]


  1. 00:07:682 (2) - You are forgot add whistle to here.
  2. 00:56:015 (5) - Add a repeat,sound better to me.

Really nice map and song <3
Topic Starter
alacat
all fix :D

Thank you for modding :)
spboxer3
Re-bubble
good luck~


check log
2013-04-19 00:15 spboxer3: Hello alanyan~
2013-04-19 00:16 alacat: hi :)
2013-04-19 00:16 spboxer3: :)
2013-04-19 00:16 spboxer3: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/239992 fripSide - sister's noise (TV Size) [Easy]]
2013-04-19 00:16 alacat: :o
2013-04-19 00:17 spboxer3: Umm, though it's a bug(minor) issue I still hope you can fix it (1ms snap)
2013-04-19 00:18 spboxer3: 00:11:848 (3) - & 01:10:182 (1) - spinner end
2013-04-19 00:18 spboxer3: for easy diff
2013-04-19 00:19 alacat: ok :D
2013-04-19 00:20 spboxer3: wait min, I should check all diff before you updata your map xD
2013-04-19 00:20 alacat: ok >w<
2013-04-19 00:24 spboxer3: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/239816 fripSide - sister's noise (TV Size) [Insane]]
2013-04-19 00:24 spboxer3: Insane diff
2013-04-19 00:24 spboxer3: 00:11:432 - to 00:11:849 - I guess you should resnap your green line since you change your rhythm to 1/6
2013-04-19 00:26 alacat: ok :D I think i dont need this green line xD so deleted !
2013-04-19 00:26 spboxer3: ok^^
2013-04-19 00:28 alacat: Thanks ><
2013-04-19 00:30 spboxer3: 00:41:849 ,00:48:098 (4) - ,00:49:348 (6) - ,00:55:598 (3) - ,00:56:848 (1) - ,00:58:098 (7) - ,01:10:598 (3) - still 1ms...(ry Orz...
2013-04-19 00:31 alacat: ;w; ok !
2013-04-19 00:31 spboxer3: 00:48:098 - ;w;
2013-04-19 00:32 spboxer3: mean is 1ms... just a wrong timing link at the first time lol
2013-04-19 00:33 alacat: lol resnap and check now :3
2013-04-19 00:33 spboxer3: lol
2013-04-19 00:34 spboxer3: my network only can work untill 12:57 (GMT+8) ;w;
2013-04-19 00:35 alacat: oh ;w;
2013-04-19 00:36 alacat: ok! fix all and update!
2013-04-19 00:38 spboxer3: 00:11:848 (1) - ,00:48:098 (4) - ,00:58:098 (7) - still have it Orz... (Insane)
2013-04-19 00:38 alacat: sorry ;w; fix !
2013-04-19 00:39 spboxer3: np^^
2013-04-19 00:43 alacat: update :D
2013-04-19 00:43 spboxer3: I see :3
Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks sp3 (:3 [___]
Kawayi Rika
Rechecked via irc ~ Looks fine now ~

Always nice job ~ Here you go <3


Skystar
First, congrats.
<3
Diasios
Nice, grats! :)
Chewin
good job alacat <3
MiLu
おめです!
Satellite

MiLu wrote:

おめです!
Archeage
Congrat~ alacat :D

I'll love this song~
[Epicz]
fripSide <3
gratz :3
Autumn
Oh no!
Misaka is still not moe enough! (Cry ;w;
Nichiyouki
I thourgh you can getting ranked now >w<

Congrats alacat :)
HeatKai
congrats neko \^w^/
UnitedWeSin
<3
-Neipezi
congrats~ :D
hoLysoup
wa~
omedetou aLaneko :>!
Yocake
Epic-
Congratz~~~
spboxer3
congratz~ :3
Quilt
はやい
meiikyuu
gomen.. im late ;-;
Pokie
おめでとうございますヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
yanlu
wow gratz~ :)
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