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Aldwych

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Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2013-03-21T19:46:36+00:00

Sandwich's Normal

Je te déteste! :'<

Why everybody call me Sandwych?

(Oui le 'y' fait mieux.).

Ok tout fix, même la diff de Sandwich, vu que je le vois rarement en ligne, s'il veut il pourra rechanger plus tard.

J'essairerais de fixer les probs si il y a besoin, je joue pas trop à Osu! par manque de temps, si jamais ca tarde n'hésite pas à m'envoyer un message.

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-04-04T19:50:14+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• Video offset: -300ms
• Tags: add "Aldwych"
• Don't use pink as a combo color, it doesn't really fit with the orange sliderborder, use this: 115,85,200

Aldwych's Normal

• Try to be almost always consistent with your patterns, for example 00:53:697 (1,2,3) here you mapped with 1/1 sliders and here 01:00:140 (1) with a long slider, it would be awesome if you could make connections between similar parts of the song, just keep using the same rhythm but try different spacing.
• 00:15:040 (1) - Try this for a better flow:
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• 00:23:899 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here, delete it and add some sliders.
• 00:29:133 (2) - Rhythm here is kinda hard to read for someone that never listened this song and this is the easier diff so it would be better to make it more intuitive, try this pattern:
SPOILER
• 00:35:576 (2,3) - Try this:
SPOILER
• 00:40:811 (1,2) - Delete (2) and end (1) 1/1 later.
• 00:50:476 (1,2) - Remove whistle from the body of these sliders, it doesn't fit imo.
• 00:58:328 (3) - End this slider 1/1 earlier and add a circle at 00:58:932.
• 01:04:771 (4) - Try this:
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• 01:16:248 (1) - ^
SPOILER
• 01:42:019 (1,2) - Remove whistle from the body of these sliders.
• 02:15:845 (3,1) - Why 1,20x spacing here? Keep it consistent.
• 02:17:858 (2) - Try this pattern:
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• 02:53:295 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 02:54:503.
• 03:00:946 (1,1) - This is the easier diff so try to avoid putting circles/slider right after spinners, try to do something like this:
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• 03:22:691 (x) - Add a circle.
• 03:25:107 (4) - Try this:
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Hard

• 00:20:677 (3) - Move this slider at x:85 y:219.
• 00:38:395 (3) - Add a whistle.
• 00:38:597 (4/end) - ^
• 00:45:442 (5) - Convert this slider in 2 1/2 circles, then add a new combo on the second one.
• 00:50:476 (3,4) - Same as before, you should always add whistles here, they fit sooo much, it's kinda stupid to leave some circles/sliders without them imo.
• 00:57:925 (4,5) - Try this:
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• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Why no whistles here? I just noticed that you stopped adding them even on next similar patterns, why?
• 01:11:617 (4) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:12:422.
• 01:24:503 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier.
• 01:49:469 (4,5) - Try this:
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• 02:03:160 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 02:03:966.
• 02:16:046 (1) - Same thing here.
• 02:23:899 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it.
• 02:52:691 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier.
• 03:10:006 (x) - Add a circle.

Insane

• HP Drain Rate: 7
• 00:40:711 (16,1) - Try to make spacing here 0,50x, also try to make this stream flow better:
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• 00:51:281 (3) - Remove whistle from the body of this slider, it doesn't fit imo.
• 00:52:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Uh, I don't like how this stream flows, try to make it like a ~?
• 01:30:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - These boobs could be better:
SPOILER
• 01:58:026 (16,1) - Same as before, reduce spacing a little.
• 02:10:912 (16,1) - ^
• 02:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Try to make this stream like the one at 01:30:744.

I probably forgot to add something else, I'm sorry, anyway get a few more mods and call me again for a recheck~

Best part of the video

Kurai

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7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

Kurai 2013-04-04T20:12:46+00:00

Okay I've fixed almost everything (I haven't changed the shape of the streams since I like themthe way they are, also it was supposed to looks like boobs, but like a mustache awa).

Waiting for Sandwich's reply.

Thank you ~~~

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2013-04-04T23:10:50+00:00

Oh haï! ¦3

Aldwych's Normal

• Try to be almost always consistent with your patterns, for example 00:53:697 (1,2,3) here you mapped with 1/1 sliders and here 01:00:140 (1) with a long slider, it would be awesome if you could make connections between similar parts of the song, just keep using the same rhythm but try different spacing. Ok, i change the first part with a same slider.
• 00:15:040 (1) - Try this for a better flow: Ok, why not (even if i prefer to have coordinates of the points. ).
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• 00:23:899 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here, delete it and add some sliders. Really? Mah! Change in 3 sliders and 1 circle
• 00:29:133 (2) - Rhythm here is kinda hard to read for someone that never listened this song and this is the easier diff so it would be better to make it more intuitive, try this pattern: Ok
SPOILER (click to toggle)

• 00:35:576 (2,3) - Try this: ok
SPOILER (click to toggle)

• 00:40:811 (1,2) - Delete (2) and end (1) 1/1 later. ok
• 00:50:476 (1,2) - Remove whistle from the body of these sliders, it doesn't fit imo. ok
• 00:58:328 (3) - End this slider 1/1 earlier and add a circle at 00:58:932. I prefer not to have little sliders and 1/2 patterns here.
• 01:04:771 (4) - Try this: Ok for the delete, but for the second one, there's no really rason to do this
SPOILER (click to toggle)

• 01:16:248 (1) - ^ Ok but it was hard to make change here
SPOILER (click to toggle)

• 01:42:019 (1,2) - Remove whistle from the body of these sliders. ok
• 02:15:845 (3,1) - Why 1,20x spacing here? Keep it consistent. No it doesn't exist. :< (fixed)
• 02:17:858 (2) - Try this pattern: Hu the fuck, where is number two? xD Well well i fixed the distance problem i made something simimar
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• 02:53:295 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 02:54:503. The reverse will be ugly
• 03:00:946 (1,1) - This is the easier diff so try to avoid putting circles/slider right after spinners, try to do something like this:
SPOILER (click to toggle) Mah it's Kurai's fault he puted the spinner, I swear! :'( (Don't blame me Kurai! )

• 03:22:691 (x) - Add a circle. Is it really usefull? We have a long pattern without pause.
• 03:25:107 (4) - Try this: Tried
SPOILER (click to toggle)

Thanks for star and mooding!

Rofl the best picture!

Kurai

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Topic Starter

Kurai 2013-04-05T12:42:20+00:00

Updated ~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2013-04-13T21:42:39+00:00

Herrow thar fellow mapper!
Let's start ~

[General]
Delete "normal-sliderslide.wav" since you aren't able to customize sliderslides anymore.
Perhaps you could add a "normal-slidertick2" http://puu.sh/2zszM
03:03:764 - I am not sure whether silent hitsounds are rankable or not. Raise the volume to ~30%

[Aldwych's Normal]
00:36:382 (3) - This slider does not fit too well with the beat. Something like this fits better: http://puu.sh/2zsFe
00:52:086 (3) - Looks better as a blanket. http://puu.sh/2zsNy
00:53:697 (1) - Shape this one more symmetrically to the X-Axis
00:57:724 (2,3) - Rather than following the lyrics, I would follow the melody. So continue with the 1/1 sliders.
01:03:764 - Add a note here
01:13:026 (1,2) - To keep the flow I would suggest you to arrange the circles downwards. http://puu.sh/2zsY9
01:27:523 (4) - This one is kinda an anti flow

01:30:744 (1) - How about making the Finish Hitsound more quiet? Do it about ~50% because it's going to interrupt the following vocals.
01:42:019 (1) - Shape this one curvy!
01:51:684 (2) - Place it more left, so it's symmetrical to the Y-Axis.
02:15:845 (3) - The end of the slider has to be 1 grid to the left.
02:22:288 (3) - Please move this slider so it's symmetrical to the X-Axis.
02:24:704 - Add a note here.
02:27:120 (1) - This one is also an anti flow :[
02:56:113 (1) - This slider is supposed to be upside down!
03:04:167 - Add a note here.
03:11:415 (2,3) - Waaaaaah the overlap is reaaaally ugly! Try spacing them a bit
03:28:328 (1) - End this Spinner with a Finish Hitsound.

[Hard]
Wow. You aren't paying attention at the Distance Snap at all in the beginning :/ Try adjusting them a bit more.
00:19:872 (1,2) - After you go through that star-shape it get's boring, so put those two circles somewhere else.
00:35:576 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
00:40:811 (1) - Flip this slider.
00:55:308 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:01:751 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:03:362 (1) - Shape this slider curvy!
01:04:570 - You should probably add a note here.
01:07:590 - Add a note here.
01:10:811 (3) - Move this slider some grids to the left so they fit more to the previous slider.
01:11:617 - Add a note here.
01:15:845 (5) - If you move the circle here: http://puu.sh/2ztNf you get a cool starshape :3
01:16:248 (1) - Flip this slider like this: http://puu.sh/2ztPZ
01:38:798 (1) - Flip this slider and move it here: http://puu.sh/2ztYF
01:46:852 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:53:295 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:54:906 (1) - Shape this slider curvy!
02:16:046 - Add a note here.
02:18:664 (1) - Shape this slider curvy!
02:31:852 - Add a note here.
02:55:308 (3) - Flip the slider (CTRL + H) so it matches with the following notes.
02:56:919 (3) - Move the slider to the right to mantain the flow (you can also make it curvy) http://puu.sh/2zuet
02:57:321 - Add a note here.
03:00:140 (2) - Flip the slider (CTRL + H) so it matches with the following notes.
03:00:543 - Add a note here.
03:13:429 (5) - If you move the circle here: http://puu.sh/2zuk4 you get another cool starshape like in the beginning!
03:13:832 (1) - Flip this slider! (CTRL + H,J,G)
03:14:435 - Add a note here.
03:17:053 (1) - Flip this slider (CTRL + H) to get flow through the following notes.

[Insane]
00:36:180 (3) - Flip this slider (CTRL + J) to match it with the previous note.
00:41:617 (4,5) - Switch the order of these two sliders to create more flow for the following notes!
00:42:623 (2) - Turn this one into a kickslider.
00:51:281 (3) - Not sure if you are doing this anti-flow on purpose...but if not you can solve it by turning the slider into a kickslider.
00:53:295 (13) - End the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
00:59:939 - Add a note here.
01:00:342 - Add a note here.
01:02:355 (2) - This shape... lolwut
01:06:180 - End the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
01:07:187 (3) - Flip the sliderends (CTRL + G) and remove the clap at the beginning of the slider!
01:12:825 - Add a note here.
01:15:442 - Add a note here.
01:21:885 - Add a note here.
01:22:691 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like overlaps, so I don't know if you want to arrange them in another way or not.
01:30:350 - Add a note here.
01:32:355 - Lower the volume of the hitsounds to ~50%! Also: dat moustache.
01:40:207 - Add a note here.
01:42:825 (2) - Flip this slider so it matches with the flow (CTRL + G)
01:44:838 - End the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
01:49:268 (3) - Turn this slider into a kickslider to get more flow in the following notes!
01:57:724 - Once again end the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
02:00:342 (5) - The player gets confused about the distance, since it was jumpy before. You could add a note here 02:00:152 - or turn this one 01:59:939 (4) - into a slider.
02:03:563 - Add a note here.
02:04:368 - Add a note here.
02:08:999 - Add a note here.
02:11:013 (1,2,3) - Woah this jump is big o_o
02:14:234 (1,2,3) - The overlap in this one is not that good looking. Try adding more distance.
02:17:456 (1) - The distance in comparison to the previous notes is way too large. Consider decreasing the distance or placing the 02:17:254 (5) - upwards.
02:30:946 - Add a note here.
02:32:959 (3) - Turn this slider into a kickslider.
02:35:979 (9) - New combo here so the stream doesn't go over 16 combos.
02:36:784 (17) - Add a Finish Hitsound here
02:53:899 (3) - Increase the distance here to let the player know that there's a 1/1 break between those 2 sliders.
02:56:919 (3) - Turn this slider into a kickslider.
02:58:328 - Add a note here.
03:06:180 - Add a note here.
03:06:784 (6) - Increase the distance here.
03:08:597 - Add a note here.
03:09:603 - Add a note here.
03:10:409 - Add a note here.
03:18:865 (4) - You could place this slider to where the 03:18:261 (1) - was.
03:20:275 (1,2,3) - The overlap doesn't look that good imo. Increase the distance.
03:29:133 (9) - New combo here so the stream doesn't go over 16 combos.

Good luck with the map ~

Kurai

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7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

Kurai 2013-04-14T12:39:45+00:00

Haya wrote:
Herrow thar fellow mapper!
Let's start ~

[General]
Delete "normal-sliderslide.wav" since you aren't able to customize sliderslides anymore.
Perhaps you could add a "normal-slidertick2" http://puu.sh/2zszM uh what, since when ?
03:03:764 - I am not sure whether silent hitsounds are rankable or not. Raise the volume to ~30% It's totally fine to silence endpoints of spinners.

[Hard]
Wow. You aren't paying attention at the Distance Snap at all in the beginning :/ Try adjusting them a bit more. Uh, I do, I'm just using 1.0x instead of 1.2x o.o
00:19:872 (1,2) - After you go through that star-shape it get's boring, so put those two circles somewhere else.
00:35:576 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
00:40:811 (1) - Flip this slider.
00:55:308 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:01:751 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:03:362 (1) - Shape this slider curvy! Why, it's nice as it is.
01:04:570 - You should probably add a note here. Why ?
01:07:590 - Add a note here.
01:10:811 (3) - Move this slider some grids to the left so they fit more to the previous slider.
01:11:617 - Add a note here. why ?
01:15:845 (5) - If you move the circle here: http://puu.sh/2ztNf you get a cool starshape :3
01:16:248 (1) - Flip this slider like this: http://puu.sh/2ztPZ Nope, I like it as it is.
01:38:798 (1) - Flip this slider and move it here: http://puu.sh/2ztYF nope
01:46:852 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:53:295 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
01:54:906 (1) - Shape this slider curvy! Nope
02:16:046 - Add a note here. Why ?
02:18:664 (1) - Shape this slider curvy! Nope
02:31:852 - Add a note here. Why ?
02:55:308 (3) - Flip the slider (CTRL + H) so it matches with the following notes.
02:56:919 (3) - Move the slider to the right to mantain the flow (you can also make it curvy) http://puu.sh/2zuet
02:57:321 - Add a note here. Why ?
03:00:140 (2) - Flip the slider (CTRL + H) so it matches with the following notes. I did that on purpose :/
03:00:543 - Add a note here. Why ?
03:13:429 (5) - If you move the circle here: http://puu.sh/2zuk4 you get another cool starshape like in the beginning!
03:13:832 (1) - Flip this slider! (CTRL + H,J,G) :(
03:14:435 - Add a note here. Why ?
03:17:053 (1) - Flip this slider (CTRL + H) to get flow through the following notes.

[Insane]
00:36:180 (3) - Flip this slider (CTRL + J) to match it with the previous note. Nooo, that looks so bad D:
00:41:617 (4,5) - Switch the order of these two sliders to create more flow for the following notes! That would actually break the flow o.o
00:42:623 (2) - Turn this one into a kickslider.
00:51:281 (3) - Not sure if you are doing this anti-flow on purpose...but if not you can solve it by turning the slider into a kickslider. Did it on purpose.
00:53:295 (13) - End the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH What ? that'd just kill the flow of the stream.
00:59:939 - Add a note here. Not adding any note here, that's actually not needed.
01:00:342 - Add a note here.
01:02:355 (2) - This shape... lolwut
01:06:180 - End the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
01:07:187 (3) - Flip the sliderends (CTRL + G) and remove the clap at the beginning of the slider!
01:12:825 - Add a note here.
01:15:442 - Add a note here.
01:21:885 - Add a note here.
01:22:691 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like overlaps, so I don't know if you want to arrange them in another way or not. These overlaps are nice
01:30:350 - Add a note here.
01:32:355 - Lower the volume of the hitsounds to ~50%! Also: dat moustache.
01:40:207 - Add a note here.
01:42:825 (2) - Flip this slider so it matches with the flow (CTRL + G)
01:44:838 - End the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
01:49:268 (3) - Turn this slider into a kickslider to get more flow in the following notes!
01:57:724 - Once again end the stream here and continue with 1/2. http://puu.sh/2zuGH
02:00:342 (5) - The player gets confused about the distance, since it was jumpy before. You could add a note here 02:00:152 - or turn this one 01:59:939 (4) - into a slider.
02:03:563 - Add a note here.
02:04:368 - Add a note here.
02:08:999 - Add a note here.
02:11:013 (1,2,3) - Woah this jump is big o_o Big big yeah
02:14:234 (1,2,3) - The overlap in this one is not that good looking. Try adding more distance. It's nice D:
02:17:456 (1) - The distance in comparison to the previous notes is way too large. Consider decreasing the distance or placing the 02:17:254 (5) - upwards.
02:30:946 - Add a note here.
02:32:959 (3) - Turn this slider into a kickslider.
02:35:979 (9) - New combo here so the stream doesn't go over 16 combos. A stream with < 20 combo is totally fine
02:36:784 (17) - Add a Finish Hitsound here
02:53:899 (3) - Increase the distance here to let the player know that there's a 1/1 break between those 2 sliders.
02:56:919 (3) - Turn this slider into a kickslider.
02:58:328 - Add a note here.
03:06:180 - Add a note here.
03:06:784 (6) - Increase the distance here.
03:08:597 - Add a note here.
03:09:603 - Add a note here.
03:10:409 - Add a note here.
03:18:865 (4) - You could place this slider to where the 03:18:261 (1) - was.
03:20:275 (1,2,3) - The overlap doesn't look that good imo. Increase the distance.
03:29:133 (9) - New combo here so the stream doesn't go over 16 combos.

Good luck with the map ~

I have fixed many things (Answered with a blue comment to things I haven't fixed, or didn't answered if I already refused something similar once).
Thank you !

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2013-04-14T13:53:11+00:00

Those "Add a note here" keep the player in the flow or they follow the rhythm.
Also, having curvy sliders make the map better looking (in the most cases)

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2013-04-14T16:17:51+00:00

Plop! =3

Aldwych's Normal
00:36:382 (3) - This slider does not fit too well with the beat. Something like this fits better: http://puu.sh/2zsFe Ok why not, I added a circle 1 white tick after too. But this mad a large pause then.
00:52:086 (3) - Looks better as a blanket. http://puu.sh/2zsNy Yes, but after it's too close to conitinue patterns.
00:53:697 (1) - Shape this one more symmetrically to the X-Axis Ok
00:57:724 (2,3) - Rather than following the lyrics, I would follow the melody. So continue with the 1/1 sliders. Ok
01:03:764 - Add a note here ok
01:13:026 (1,2) - To keep the flow I would suggest you to arrange the circles downwards. http://puu.sh/2zsY9 Circles will be hide by hit point score
01:27:523 (4) - This one is kinda an anti flow Tried to resolve it
01:30:744 (1) - How about making the Finish Hitsound more quiet? Do it about ~50% because it's going to interrupt the following vocals. Ok to 50%
01:42:019 (1) - Shape this one curvy! ok
01:51:684 (2) - Place it more left, so it's symmetrical to the Y-Axis. Ok
02:15:845 (3) - The end of the slider has to be 1 grid to the left. ok
02:22:288 (3) - Please move this slider so it's symmetrical to the X-Axis. ok
02:24:704 - Add a note here. ok
02:27:120 (1) - This one is also an anti flow :[ Tried to resolved it
02:56:113 (1) - This slider is supposed to be upside down! Ok, i changed the patterns before
03:04:167 - Add a note here. ok
03:11:415 (2,3) - Waaaaaah the overlap is reaaaally ugly! Try spacing them a bit Change the pattern
03:28:328 (1) - End this Spinner with a Finish Hitsound.

Ok

Thank you! =)

Sorry kurai i don't have media fire on this computer!

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
15040,402.684563758389,4,1,1,80,1,0
27925,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
31147,-100,4,1,2,60,0,0
32858,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
40811,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
66583,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
79419,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
79469,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
90744,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
92355,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
118127,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
130962,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
131013,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
143899,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
183764,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
184167,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
197003,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
197053,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
209939,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,236,0
Combo2 : 255,43,149
Combo3 : 53,209,255
Combo4 : 241,128,14
SliderBorder : 255,69,0

[HitObjects]
432,200,15040,6,0,B|460:100|368:64,2,160
388,268,17053,2,0,B|320:332|244:272,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,116,18664,6,8,B|128:56|60:120,1,160
100,188,19872,2,0,B|76:228|97:264,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,20677,2,0,B|192:264|170:227,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,21482,6,0,B|284:276|228:356,2,160
348,72,23899,6,0,P|392:60|432:88,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,24704,2,0,P|444:192|400:212,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,25509,2,0,P|303:171|307:123,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,136,26315,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,27925,6,0,P|160:244|96:152,1,240
176,160,29536,2,0,P|272:108|336:200,1,240
324,276,31147,2,0,P|280:328|192:344,2,160
460,84,34368,6,0,B|444:128|392:140,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,144,35576,2,0,B|220:192|252:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,300,36382,2,0,L|376:248,2,120
184,260,37993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,200,38395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,40811,6,0,B|460:252|420:152,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,204,42825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,124,43227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,220,44033,6,0,B|184:300|96:280|80:240,2,160
144,192,46046,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,144,46449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,47254,6,0,B|276:220|368:204,1,160
344,128,48462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,108,48865,2,0,B|252:204|172:224,1,160
260,360,50476,6,0,B|304:336|311:301,1,80,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,352,51281,2,0,B|404:312|380:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,52086,2,0,B|468:160|460:104|400:56|312:80,1,240
248,84,53697,6,0,B|129:101|129:101|61:177|129:241|129:241|248:256,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,300,56113,2,0,L|396:264,1,80
396,184,56919,6,0,B|344:192|312:152,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,57724,2,0,P|248:124|240:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,58529,2,0,P|148:236|104:236,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,59335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,59737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,56,60140,6,0,B|372:88|372:88|440:152|372:228|372:228|256:256,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,236,62556,2,0,B|179:196|223:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,63362,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,100,63764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,68,64167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,160,64771,2,0,B|176:160|176:308|288:308,1,280
340,252,66583,6,0,B|376:232|380:188,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,67791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,248,68194,2,0,B|208:216|204:168|220:128|248:104|284:96|312:100|344:120,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,69805,6,0,B|400:216|388:268,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,252,71013,2,0,B|264:272|232:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,71818,2,0,B|290:132|341:117,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,132,73026,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,204,73429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,236,73831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,164,74234,2,0,B|76:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,75039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,92,75442,2,0,B|180:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,244,76248,6,0,P|150:247|114:227,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,296,77053,2,0,L|148:352,1,80
216,340,77858,2,0,P|352:312|372:228,1,240
336,156,79469,6,0,B|384:160|416:120,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,100,80677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,156,81080,2,0,B|156:160|132:96,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,76,82691,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,64,83093,2,0,B|336:52|368:92,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,84301,2,0,B|331:179|375:167,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,85509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,204,85912,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,280,86315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,224,86717,2,0,B|292:264|272:312,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,260,87523,2,0,B|412:224|392:156,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,180,89133,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,89536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,224,89939,2,0,B|176:220|164:172,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90744,12,4,92355,0:0:0:0:
192,160,98798,6,0,B|200:72|292:76|312:96,2,160
272,164,100811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,224,101214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,102019,6,0,P|136:296|88:288,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,216,102825,2,0,B|92:180|116:140,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,60,103630,2,0,B|232:60|160:192|304:192,1,240
360,236,105241,6,0,B|308:268|316:340|316:340|240:288|164:340|164:340|172:268|120:236,1,400,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,107657,2,0,B|36:288|44:236,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,172,108462,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,132,108865,2,0,B|108:88|60:92,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,124,110073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,111281,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,336,111684,2,0,B|324:304|332:232|332:232|256:284|180:232|180:232|188:304|136:336,1,400,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,260,114100,2,0,B|88:296|40:304,1,80
40,224,114905,5,0,0:0:0:0:
108,180,115308,2,0,B|80:136|36:144,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,116516,2,0,B|284:308|284:128|388:224,1,240
424,152,118127,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,108,118529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,104,118932,2,0,B|224:104|208:144,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,96,119737,2,0,B|112:32|36:40,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,121348,6,0,B|100:200,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,152,122154,2,0,B|200:232,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,122959,2,0,B|304:280,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,124570,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,68,124972,2,0,B|192:48|152:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,112,125778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,152,126180,2,0,B|104:212|40:172,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,127791,6,0,B|272:264,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,128999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,88,129402,2,0,B|224:32|304:36|360:92|320:176,1,240
296,240,131013,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,260,131415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,204,131818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,132221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,180,132623,2,0,B|336:92,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,216,134234,6,0,B|344:176|400:188,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,135442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,212,135845,2,0,B|160:244|176:300,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,137053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,192,137456,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,137858,2,0,B|276:76|228:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,138664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,128,139066,2,0,B|72:96|92:24,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,140677,6,0,B|180:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,172,141482,2,0,B|276:220,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,142288,2,0,B|392:292|392:100|240:100,1,320
168,72,144301,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,88,144704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,164,145107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,240,145509,2,0,B|144:224|144:148,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,300,147120,6,0,B|52:336|112:320,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,147925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,148328,2,0,B|256:240|256:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,340,149133,2,0,P|336:304|328:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,150342,6,0,B|300:56|260:52,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,151550,2,0,B|208:180|132:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,248,152556,2,0,B|168:247|204:303,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,153563,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,224,153966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,180,154368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,154972,12,0,156784,0:0:0:0:
232,252,169670,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,196,170073,2,0,B|340:188|340:128,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,252,171281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,196,171684,2,0,B|124:188|124:128,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,172892,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,173295,2,0,B|284:32|196:36,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,174905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,232,175308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,175711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,292,176113,6,0,B|232:340|176:344,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,260,177321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,260,177724,2,0,B|96:192|160:164|212:192,1,160
240,116,178932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,96,179335,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,179737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,204,180140,2,0,B|356:228|320:216,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,180946,12,0,183764,0:0:0:0:
264,100,184167,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,36,184570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,108,184972,2,0,B|132:116|120:168,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,216,185778,2,0,B|44:200|24:136|68:104,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,160,187388,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,196,187791,2,8,B|256:232|256:232|240:280|284:320,1,160
332,256,188999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,200,189402,2,8,B|353:162|305:178|305:178|269:118,1,160
332,68,190610,6,0,P|300:36|256:40,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,76,191415,2,0,P|184:112|192:152,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,192221,2,0,B|36:128|8:204,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,224,193831,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,260,194234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,316,194637,2,0,B|264:280|248:236,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,180,195442,2,0,B|259:135|191:159|191:159|231:103|179:51,1,240
128,112,197053,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,197456,2,0,B|40:72|48:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,188,198261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,188,198664,2,0,B|52:248|104:296,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,228,200274,6,0,B|188:252|228:228,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,201080,2,0,B|328:228|308:276|272:300,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,203093,6,0,B|140:36,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,203899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,164,204301,2,0,B|136:128|92:144,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,205107,2,0,B|156:268|208:224|236:256,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,206717,6,0,B|160:80,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,152,207523,2,0,B|264:88,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,208328,12,4,209939,0:0:0:0:

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-04-14T16:24:39+00:00

Updated ~

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-04-15T18:36:08+00:00

General

• Why didn't you change the video offset? Just look 01:16:248 ~ 01:17:858 for example, -300ms is much better imo. Also, make it consistent between your diffs, right now in Normal is -475ms and in Hard/Insane is -775ms.

Aldwych's Normal

• 00:35:576 (2,3) - Move these sliders 1/1 earlier and add a circle at 00:37:590.
• 00:38:999 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:40:409.
• 01:13:831 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Spacing here is kinda messed up, try to make a more natural flow:
SPOILER
• 01:27:523 (4) - Try this pattern:
SPOILER
• 01:45:241 (1) - You added a whistle here so you should add one at the previous sliders too to keep a consistency. (00:53:697 (1) and 01:00:140 (1))
• 01:50:476 (x) - Start a slider here and end it 1/1 later. (or just add 2 circles)
• 02:29:133 (4) - Add a repeat. (or add a circle at 02:29:939)

Hard

• 01:03:362 (1,2) - You made this jump on purpose? If I were you I'd keep spacing consistent here. (if you want to keep it then avoid this ugly overlap D:)
• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Keep doing the same whistle pattern as before (00:37:590 (1,2,3,4) and 00:50:476 (1,2,3,4)), this apply to all the next similar patterns as well (01:16:248 (1,2), 01:29:133 (1,2,3,4), 01:42:019 (1,2,3) and so on). If you don't want to add these whistles then remove the one placed on previous similar patterns too.
• 01:06:583 (1) - You added a single combo for the "sha sha sha", good idea, but if I were I'd add a single combo to the next similar patterns to keep a contistency. (01:13:026 (3), 02:04:570 (4), 02:17:456 (4) etc.)
• 02:49:670 ~ 03:00:744 - If I were you I'd add a new combo every 8 white ticks, all these combos are not necessary imo.

Insane

• 00:40:711 (16,1) - Meh, try this spacing?
SPOILER
• 00:41:214 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, try to make this pattern better:
SPOILER
• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing I wrote about Hard diff.
• 01:30:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - "it was supposed to looks like boobs, but like a mustache", ok, but make this stream simmetrical at least, right now it looks really weird.
• 02:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Same thing here.
• 03:29:133 (9,10) - Uh... what? It's a bug, I suppose, fix this spacing.

That's all, enjoy this nazi mod! o3o/
Call me again after your fixes.

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-04-16T11:48:03+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
General

• Why didn't you change the video offset? Just look 01:16:248 ~ 01:17:858 for example, -300ms is much better imo. Also, make it consistent between your diffs, right now in Normal is -475ms and in Hard/Insane is -775ms. Urgh I thought I fixed it.
Hard

• 01:03:362 (1,2) - You made this jump on purpose? If I were you I'd keep spacing consistent here. (if you want to keep it then avoid this ugly overlap D:) what the hell is this slider doing here o.o fixed
• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Keep doing the same whistle pattern as before (00:37:590 (1,2,3,4) and 00:50:476 (1,2,3,4)), this apply to all the next similar patterns as well (01:16:248 (1,2), 01:29:133 (1,2,3,4), 01:42:019 (1,2,3) and so on). If you don't want to add these whistles then remove the one placed on previous similar patterns too. Done I guess
• 01:06:583 (1) - You added a single combo for the "sha sha sha", good idea, but if I were I'd add a single combo to the next similar patterns to keep a contistency. (01:13:026 (3), 02:04:570 (4), 02:17:456 (4) etc.) Done
• 02:49:670 ~ 03:00:744 - If I were you I'd add a new combo every 8 white ticks, all these combos are not necessary imo. Done.

Insane

• 00:40:711 (16,1) - Meh, try this spacing? Done
SPOILER
• 00:41:214 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, try to make this pattern better: The spacing becomes too big then D:
SPOILER
• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing I wrote about Hard diff. ~
• 01:30:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - "it was supposed to looks like boobs, but like a mustache", ok, but make this stream simmetrical at least, right now it looks really weird. It's already symmetrical o.o
• 02:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Same thing here. This one wasn't xD
• 03:29:133 (9,10) - Uh... what? It's a bug, I suppose, fix this spacing. Fixed ...

That's all, enjoy this nazi mod! o3o/
Call me again after your fixes.

Thank you, waiting for Aldwych to fix his diff. :3

Aldwych

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Aldwych 2013-04-16T19:52:39+00:00

Plop! ¦3

Aldwych's Normal

• 00:35:576 (2,3) - Move these sliders 1/1 earlier and add a circle at 00:37:590. ok
• 00:38:999 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:40:409. Ok
• 01:13:831 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Spacing here is kinda messed up, try to make a more natural flow: Ok, thanks!
SPOILER (click to toggle)

• 01:27:523 (4) - Try this pattern: Ok, why not, but i don't see why i must change here? Anti-flow?
SPOILER (click to toggle)

• 01:45:241 (1) - You added a whistle here so you should add one at the previous sliders too to keep a consistency. (00:53:697 (1) and 01:00:140 (1)) OK
• 01:50:476 (x) - Start a slider here and end it 1/1 later. (or just add 2 circles) Tried to make a nice pattern
• 02:29:133 (4) - Add a repeat. (or add a circle at 02:29:939) Prefer circle

Thank you!

La boââte!

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Diasios

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Diasios 2013-04-17T15:14:02+00:00

Hard

• 01:45:241 (1,2,3) and 01:51:684 (1,2,3) - Why here 00:53:697 (1,2,3) and here 01:00:140 (1,2,3) you didn't add whistles? Keep hitsounds consistent.
• 03:10:610 (3) - Add a new combo like you did in the previous kiai.
• 03:18:261 (2) - ^

Insane

• 01:07:187 (3) - Remove clap from start and add it at the end.
• 01:30:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Well, select all these circles and spam ctrl + h, as you see this stream is not perfectly simmetrical, but if you want to keep it like this then np, you barely notice this misalignment while playing.
• 02:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
• 03:10:610 (1) - Reverse this slider. (ctrl + g)

Also, set the same combo colors in all diffs.

Last edited by Diasios 2013-04-17T15:33:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kurai

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Topic Starter

Kurai 2013-04-17T15:24:16+00:00

Fixed everything !

Diasios

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Diasios 2013-04-17T15:30:56+00:00

Aldwych

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Aldwych 2013-04-17T18:14:07+00:00

Wiiii <3

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-04-17T22:06:42+00:00

no.

Gabe was supposed to mod it.

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-04-18T03:22:07+00:00

Hi Kurai chan ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

00:24:704 (1,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
02:18:664 (1) - Use curved slider? looks much better to here,like this.
Screenshot

[Aldwych's Normal]

AR-1 is better IMO.
Add finish on these point,sound much better.
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