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Shimotsuki Haruka - Kibou no Sora

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happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Hana
ok, I suck maybe a little bit but it took me like 5 tries to pass this map because of confuseness :?
ok.. 6 times
wait wha-aa- that speed up in chorus what ;___;

the hp-drain is so high and the some parts are verry confusing and overmapped.
Im talking about the speed-up sliders and the 3/4 sliders. you should both avoid them

okay I played it with no-fail now...
are you serious >.>
this is overmap because you wanna overmap, sorry i can't give any suggestions for this.

chenwu's Insane
the pacing in the slow parts is too fast.
you should slow down there, both in spacing but also in rhythm. Use fewer beats and make the sliders slower.
I had problems with the speed-up sliders. they showed up out of nothing and for nothing it felt like.
also there were a few 3/4 sliders followed by circles that didn't make much sense to me.

The spacing is a bit messy in this diff. some anti-jumps felt out of place
the hitsounds were a bit silent in the chorus.
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Hana
ok, I suck maybe a little bit but it took me like 5 tries to pass this map because of confuseness :?
ok.. 6 times
wait wha-aa- that speed up in chorus what ;___;

the hp-drain is so high and the some parts are verry confusing and overmapped. Maybe there should be more nc?
Im talking about the speed-up sliders and the 3/4 sliders. you should both avoid them I'll change the shape or position to make it more clearly.

okay I played it with no-fail now...
are you serious >.> Actually...not much (slaped
this is overmap because you wanna overmap, sorry i can't give any suggestions for this.
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

happy30 wrote:

chenwu's Insane
the pacing in the slow parts is too fast.
you should slow down there, both in spacing but also in rhythm. Use fewer beats and make the sliders slower.
I had problems with the speed-up sliders. they showed up out of nothing and for nothing it felt like.
also there were a few 3/4 sliders followed by circles that didn't make much sense to me.

The spacing is a bit messy in this diff. some anti-jumps felt out of place
the hitsounds were a bit silent in the chorus.
changed some parts and hitsounds.Thanks
http://puu.sh/2kKEf
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Hi From My Queues~



[Easy]
00:23:231 (1) - Long slider to change the
00:24:651 (3) - ^
00:48:793 (1) - Remove and 00:48:793 - Add Note
00:54:474 (1) - ^ 00:54:474 - ^
01:07:610 (2,3) - why the spacing between them is different from normal spacing?
01:16:131 (1) - Remove Nc
01:16:486 (1) - ^
01:16:841 (1) - ^
01:17:196 (1) - ^

[Normal]
AR High.... -1 plz..
00:23:241 (1,2,3) - Hard Fatren... fix plz
00:24:661 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:59:809 (1) - Remove nc
01:00:164 (1) - ^
01:04:780 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:16:141 (1,1,1,1) - ^


[Hard]
00:11:880 (3) - Repeated once to reduce 00:12:945 - Add Note

[chenwu's Insane]
None

[Hana]
None

Good Luck~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi From My Queues~



[Easy]
00:23:231 (1) - Long slider to change the will consider

01:16:131 (1) - Remove Nc no~

[Normal]
01:04:780 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:16:141 (1,1,1,1) - ^ no~
Ohters all fixed. Thanks for modding!
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
hi
[Hana]
感觉炫酷
00:04:602 finish
接下来附一张图http://puu.sh/2oqqz
说下为什么要这样改，原来这个排列http://puu.sh/2oqtL，7、8的联系就和之前的note不好，不太像同一个整体
00:07:886 取消NC
00:09:040 改成匀间距，太坑
00:14:365 放的太下了
00:19:691 这个太上了
00:21:466 NC
00:35:135 放远点
00:36:200 和前面的1挤到一块去了
00:45:608 clap
00:47:028 clap
00:48:448 不如放到上面去，距离拉大做一个预警
00:57;146 http://puu.sh/2oriY
后面过于炫酷mod不能

[chewu's insane]
00:07:975 http://puu.sh/2ortf
01:22:709 delete

[Hard]
01:00:933 这个note应该在01:10:815
01:13:655 换成slider

[Normal]
SV感觉有点高，感觉节奏处理上有点问题

[Easy]
00:33:527 add a note
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

angelfix wrote:

[chewu's insane]
00:07:975 http://puu.sh/2ortffixed
01:22:709 delete no
Thanks
http://puu.sh/2oGPO
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
Please re-full submitt your map, the osz doesn't work. Told me to mod your map when you're done.
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

angelfix wrote:

hi
[Hana]
感觉炫酷 233
00:09:040 改成匀间距，太坑 no
00:57;146 http://puu.sh/2oriY 改了三连 五连还是算了
后面过于炫酷mod不能 233333333

[chewu's insane]
00:07:975 http://puu.sh/2ortf
01:22:709 delete

[Hard]
01:00:933 这个note应该在01:10:815 没搞懂说的是哪个note……
谢谢mod 其他的都改了
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

eldnl wrote:

Please re-full submitt your map, the osz doesn't work. Told me to mod your map when you're done.
Submitted.
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
[Easy]
1.个人认为Easy还是以鼓点为主就OK
2.NC加得有点乱,想改的话自己改一下吧
3.Spacing不统一,你自己一个一个Check
00:23:241 (1,2,3,4) - 觉得略难
00:30:164 (4) - ^
01:03:004 (1,2) - 读图问题 而且这种真心不好看
01:20:756 (1,2,3) - 略难..感觉真心和2星不相称

[Normal]
Spacing还是有点小问题,这里的要控制在0.95-1.05之间
00:21:821 (6) - 折返最好以一次为主,前面两个短的倒无可厚非,这里就有读图问题了
00:50:401 (4) - 这里觉得有两种改法,一个是直接把两次折返变成一次,要不然就是改下滑条方向在 00:51:288 这里再加一个Note
00:53:241 (7) - ^
01:20:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 鬼畜,而且2345和6的位置也不好看

[Hard]
00:17:561 (2) - 感觉如果Ctrl+G会舒服一点,不过这样的话后面几个Note也要移动位置,你自己看看要不要改
00:30:697 (6) - 差评
00:51:821 (2,7) - 差评
01:10:105 (6,7,8) - 排列略坑

[chenwu's Insane]
这NC是乱加的?
00:09:040 (1,2,3,4) - 违和
00:25:194 (4,5) - 和2关于中间的竖线对称就好w
01:04:247 (3) - 和前面的跳对不上
01:09:750 (8) - Ctrl+G,然后后面几个Note处理一下
01:15:608 - 加Note
01:16:851 (4,5) - 前面几个放慢我觉得很不错,但是(4)的时候应该加快了,改成这种感觉


[Hana]
SV3.1无法直视
00:25:549 (5) - 移到(4)上
00:48:803 (1,1) - 宁可把节奏弄快一点也不喜欢这样
00:57:146 (1,2,3,4) - 空太多,改成这样
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128,276,58034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,208,58212,2,0,P|86:170|144:166,2,116.250004434586
44,208,58922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,276,59099,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,312,59188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,340,59277,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,352,59365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,348,59454,6,0,P|304:344|340:360,1,77.5,8|0,0:0|
01:00:164 (1) - ......orz
01:04:425 (3) - 再怎么说也不能那么快啊..这变速太多了
01:22:354 (5,6) - 都移到(4)上面

就这样了..orz
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Normal

01:14:898 - add a note
01:16:141 (1,1,1,1) - don't need the NCs

Hard

00:52:531 - add a note
00:54:306 - ^

That's about it for me. Good luck.
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

buhei wrote:

[Easy]
1.个人认为Easy还是以鼓点为主就OK 会考虑
2.NC加得有点乱,想改的话自己改一下吧 算了

00:23:241 (1,2,3,4) - 觉得略难 no

[Hard]

00:30:697 (6) - 差评
01:10:105 (6,7,8) - 排列略坑 no

[chenwu's Insane]
等mapper来看

[Hana]
SV3.1无法直视 其实是2.07
00:48:803 (1,1) - 宁可把节奏弄快一点也不喜欢这样 no
00:57:146 (1,2,3,4) - 空太多,改成这样 让人休息一下吧
01:00:164 (1) - ......orz
01:04:425 (3) - 再怎么说也不能那么快啊..这变速太多了 挺好的不是么
01:22:354 (5,6) - 都移到(4)上面 no

就这样了..orz
剩下的都改了
Last edited by Fushimi Rio , edited 2 times in total.
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

buhei wrote:

[chenwu's Insane]
这NC是乱加的?
00:09:040 (1,2,3,4) - 违和
00:25:194 (4,5) - 和2关于中间的竖线对称就好w 这里没动
01:04:247 (3) - 和前面的跳对不上
01:09:750 (8) - Ctrl+G,然后后面几个Note处理一下
01:15:608 - 加Note 换成滑条了
01:16:851 (4,5) - 前面几个放慢我觉得很不错,但是(4)的时候应该加快了,改成这种感觉
剩下的都改了.谢谢
http://puu.sh/2r9jQ
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

neonat wrote:

Normal

01:14:898 - add a note ok
01:16:141 (1,1,1,1) - don't need the NCs no

Hard

00:52:531 - add a note ok
00:54:306 - ^ no

That's about it for me. Good luck.
Fia
Fia
Hi :) gd normal from PM
话说你这图不是做了normal么
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Kibou no Sora
TitleUnicode:Kibou no Sora
Artist:Shimotsuki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:Shimotsuki Haruka
Creator:Eggache0
Version:Pinkheart's Normal
Source:Kimi e Okuru, Sora no Hana
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Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

Hi :) gd normal from PM
话说你这图不是做了normal么
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怀疑人性 normal太翔了
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello

General:

Easy:
00:21:821 (4,5,1) - this overlap look not so great, consider to change pattern to remove this overlap.
00:23:241 (1,2,3) - ^ oh, this DS is a pain 1x will work much better on this diff
00:30:697 (1,2,3,4) - 4 circles in a row not a good choice for easy
01:00:164 (1) - also SV change may be a bit confusing
01:04:425 (3) - this slider plays bad, I mean you can make something to play not just 3 repeat slider
01:09:573 (2,3) - no, 1/2 is not comfortable for easy players especially on 169bpm, make this
01:15:786 (1,1,1,1,1) - this nc spam is not necessary

Pinkheart's Normal:
00:25:549 (5) - 252:92 to make blanket?
00:29:809 (3,4) - this overlap looks not so good
01:04:247 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is little bit confusing

Hard:
00:44:543 (4) - this is strange shape, maybe http://puu.sh/2tHqt
01:03:537 (4,5) - ok, to make perfect stack under slider you need to turn off grid snap http://puu.sh/2tHvm
01:04:247 (6,1,1,1,1,1) - o_O idk, this pattern starts from circle or so many sliders in 1 point or nc spam, but this is a strange spot
01:15:608 (5,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

chenwu's Insane:
nice insane, didn't see and big issues here

Hana:
00:08:507 (3,4,5) - don't really like this spacing, please use DS if you not going to make a jump
00:20:401 (1,2) - turn off grid snap and stack them better
00:22:886 (6,7,1) - jump to 6 is ok, but again because of this spacing on 7 this plays really bad
00:36:910 (6,7,8) - no, http://puu.sh/2tHOP why such a placement? I suggest you 256:276
01:10:460 (6,7) - ^
00:48:803 (1) - omg, this was suddenly, I don't see a reason to increase SV by 100% here, and this slider is going offscreen
00:54:484 (1) - ^
00:57:146 (1,2,3) - also, I don't see a reason why you rise SV here
01:00:164 (1) - ^
01:11:525 (1) - ^
01:04:425 (3,1,1,1,1) - this will fit reanrd's 220bpms song but not here definitely
01:15:786 (3,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:22:354 (5,6) - why you need such offscreen? they plays bad
You should really think of removing this changes to 4+SV

That's all. Good Luck!
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Sieg wrote:

Easy:
00:21:821 (4,5,1) - this overlap look not so great, consider to change pattern to remove this overlap. fixed
00:23:241 (1,2,3) - ^ oh, this DS is a pain 1x will work much better on this diff fixed lol
00:30:697 (1,2,3,4) - 4 circles in a row not a good choice for easy consider changing
01:00:164 (1) - also SV change may be a bit confusing ...it's fine
01:04:425 (3) - this slider plays bad, I mean you can make something to play not just 3 repeat slider ok
01:09:573 (2,3) - no, 1/2 is not comfortable for easy players especially on 169bpm, make this oops....
01:15:786 (1,1,1,1,1) - this nc spam is not necessary ok

Hard:
00:44:543 (4) - this is strange shape, maybe http://puu.sh/2tHqt ok
01:03:537 (4,5) - ok, to make perfect stack under slider you need to turn off grid snap http://puu.sh/2tHvm
01:04:247 (6,1,1,1,1,1) - o_O idk, this pattern starts from circle or so many sliders in 1 point or nc spam, but this is a strange spot
01:15:608 (5,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ made a change on this part

Hana:
00:08:507 (3,4,5) - don't really like this spacing, please use DS if you not going to make a jump ok
00:20:401 (1,2) - turn off grid snap and stack them better already turned off lol
00:22:886 (6,7,1) - jump to 6 is ok, but again because of this spacing on 7 this plays really bad ok
00:36:910 (6,7,8) - no, http://puu.sh/2tHOP why such a placement? I suggest you 256:276 good
01:10:460 (6,7) - ^ no
00:48:803 (1) - omg, this was suddenly, I don't see a reason to increase SV by 100% here, and this slider is going offscreen hint of jumping after that
00:54:484 (1) - ^
00:57:146 (1,2,3) - also, I don't see a reason why you rise SV here
01:00:164 (1) - ^
01:11:525 (1) - ^
01:04:425 (3,1,1,1,1) - this will fit reanrd's 220bpms song but not here definitely since no one play the whole slider...you mean renard?
01:15:786 (3,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:22:354 (5,6) - why you need such offscreen? they plays bad not so bad
You should really think of removing this changes to 4+SV

That's all. Good Luck!
thanks for mod
Fia
Fia

Sieg wrote:

Pinkheart's Normal:
00:25:549 (5) - 252:92 to make blanket? not necessary
00:29:809 (3,4) - this overlap looks not so good fixed
01:04:247 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is little bit confusing fixed
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax
Hi~ First of all. I apologize for the huge delay. Being terribly busy at work lately D:

Mod from my queue.

Red: Unrankable
Blue: You should fix this.
Green: Opinion, curiosity or just something that deserved to be mentioned.
Black: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this.

[General]
  1. Artist should be: 霜月はるか
    Romanized should be: Haruka Shimotsuki
  2. Song title should be:キボウのソラ
    Your romanized is ok: Kibou no Sora
[Easy]
  1. 00:35:845 (5,6) - So much repetition can easily confuse begginer players. I suggest this pattern wich can solve this problem and also exploit the x2 slider tick rate.Look:
    Here is the code:
    284,92,35845,2,0,B|344:92|384:132|384:184|360:208,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,236,36910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:57:324 (1,1) - Spinner must be a unique combo. Add New combo to it and to the following note.
  3. 01:21:466 (3,4) - Same problem that in 00:35:845 (5,6) - and also a similar solution:
    Here is the code:
    348,312,81466,2,0,B|268:312|240:280|240:216,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,220,82354,1,0,1:0:0:0:
[Pinkheart's Normal]
  1. 00:33:715 (3,7) - Nice stack but the hitburst of 00:33:715 (3) - is covering the follwing notes and is covering the 00:34:780 (7) - slider's reapiting arrow wich is unrankable:
    You have to change this and also fix spacing with following notes too.
    00:44:543 (2) - This slider overlaps itself and his shape is ugly too. Please change it.
  2. 00:50:756 (6,2) - Another stack problem. Please change this stacks.
  3. 00:53:419 (6,1) - same here ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:099 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks very ugly. It's a not easily readable and the flow isn't the best. Try this:

    Here is the code:
    56,296,29099,2,0,P|96:312|132:348,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    96,212,29632,2,0,P|132:192|172:192,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,220,29987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    212,300,30164,2,0,P|282:299|351:261,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    396,344,30697,2,0,P|428:272|428:200,3,150,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|3:3,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:34:070 (5) - Remove this note. Doesn't fit where it is.
  3. 00:45:431 (5) - Move this note to 00:45:253 - and add a note at 00:45:608 - It fits better with vocals and it's more intuitive while playing.
  4. 01:15:608 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - Try using the same order like in 01:04:247 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - for concistency.
[chenwu's Insane]
  1. I'm bad modding insanes but i can't find anything wrong here.
[Hana]
  1. OAO I can't mod this.Too hard for me. I'm sorry.
Quiet song. Nice. Good luck with it and again, sorry for the huge delay.Any doubts, ask me in-game. Bye~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Zeroarg wrote:

[General]
All fixed. Thanks a lot for tag modding!

[Easy]
All fixed. Good suggestions.

[Hard]
All fixed.

Quiet song. Nice. Good luck with it and again, sorry for the huge delay.Any doubts, ask me in-game. Bye~
Thx for modding.
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
From my Queue!

Legenda wrote:

:!: Unrankable = Must fix
:idea: Tips & Tricks to improve your map/make it better
* Just comments (no mods)
Naked Lines = normal mods
[Easy]
:!: 00:18:981 (1,2) - This pattern makes a (unwanted?) jump between the prior note (5) and the (1) repeating slider.
It could be adjusted this form:
SPOILER

:idea: 00:48:093 (4) - Move it 1 grid left to perfect pattern of notes (1,2,3,4).-- yeah, I make use of Math classes too c:

:idea: 01:09:573 (2,3,1) - This pattern could look a bit + natural:
SPOILER

[Pinkheart's Normal]
00:14:720 (1) - Move the 2nd dot to x:240 y:340 and the 3rd dot to x:276 y:336 to a perfect blanket with the further slider(2).

00:18:981 (3) - Move the 2nd dot to x:92 y:360 and the 3rd dot to x:124 y:328 to better blanket with the note (2).

00:19:513 (4) - Move just the 1st dot to x:144 y:284 for adjust spacing undone due to prior mod, and move the 2nd dot 1 grid up and 1 grid right to avoid get the slider shorter than its current lenght.

00:25:549 (5) - Move to x:252 y:92 to perfect blanket with (4).

[Hard]
00:03:359 (1,2,3,4,5) - A pattern suggestion. Move 00:03:359 (1) to x:272 y:124 and make the sliders look as below.
SPOILER

[chenwu's Insane]
00:30:342 (5) - Move 1 grid up to improve blanket (:

[Hana]
* PERFECT *.*

That's it ^^

Very Perfect map (: Good luck for Rank :D

Att.
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

cFiszpan wrote:

[chenwu's Insane]
00:30:342 (5) - Move 1 grid up to improve blanket (:
fixed :)
http://puu.sh/2x9O5
Fia
Fia

Zeroarg wrote:

[Pinkheart's Normal]
  1. 00:33:715 (3,7) - Nice stack but the hitburst of 00:33:715 (3) - is covering the follwing notes and is covering the 00:34:780 (7) - slider's reapiting arrow wich is unrankable:
    You have to change this and also fix spacing with following notes too. fixed
    00:44:543 (2) - This slider overlaps itself and his shape is ugly too. Please change it. fixed
  2. 00:50:756 (6,2) - Another stack problem. Please change this stacks. fixed
  3. 00:53:419 (6,1) - same here ^ fixed

cFiszpan wrote:

[Pinkheart's Normal]
00:14:720 (1) - Move the 2nd dot to x:240 y:340 and the 3rd dot to x:276 y:336 to a perfect blanket with the further slider(2). fixed

00:18:981 (3) - Move the 2nd dot to x:92 y:360 and the 3rd dot to x:124 y:328 to better blanket with the note (2). fixed

00:19:513 (4) - Move just the 1st dot to x:144 y:284 for adjust spacing undone due to prior mod, and move the 2nd dot 1 grid up and 1 grid right to avoid get the slider shorter than its current lenght. fixed

00:25:549 (5) - Move to x:252 y:92 to perfect blanket with (4). fixed
Thanks for mods.
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: kimisora_op_short.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2007
PreviewTime: 59434
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Kibou no Sora
TitleUnicode:キボウのソラ
Artist:Haruka Shimotsuki
ArtistUnicode:霜月はるか
Creator:Eggache0
Version:Pinkheart's Normal
Source:Kimi e Okuru, Sora no Hana
Tags:cabbit chenwu galgame opening pinkheart
BeatmapID:229971
BeatmapSetID:83095

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",1,1
Video,0,"kimisora-opmv.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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512,376,66555,6,0,P|472:328|456:256,1,125,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,208,67087,2,0,P|420:140|368:100,1,125
356,164,67620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,136,67797,2,0,P|231:126|174:144,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,228,68507,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,228,68685,2,0,P|152:252|212:252,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,69217,2,0,P|340:228|412:248,1,125
448,276,69750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,276,69928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,88,70460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,70815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,336,71170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,274,71525,6,0,P|256:280|212:260,1,125,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,376,72235,2,0,P|150:317|158:252,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,263,72768,2,0,P|231:203|320:112,1,187.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,73655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
218,263,74010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,256,74188,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,256,74365,2,0,P|124:196|132:128,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,74898,2,0,P|200:108|216:84,2,62.5,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,75786,5,8,0:0:0:0:
501,180,76141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,244,76496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,129,76851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,252,77206,1,12,0:0:0:0:
232,332,77916,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,320,78271,2,0,P|44:296|8:248,2,125,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,79158,2,0,P|172:252|148:204,1,125,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,79868,2,0,P|58:228|92:296,1,187.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,80756,6,0,P|220:149|328:155,1,187.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,187,81466,1,8,2:0:0:0:
368,248,81643,1,0,2:0:0:0:
306,254,81821,1,0,2:0:0:0:
280,198,81998,1,8,2:0:0:0:
328,84,82354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82886,12,4,85726,0:0:0:0:
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

cFiszpan wrote:

[Easy]
All fixed. Good ideas.

[Hard]
All fixed.
Thanks for mod.
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
from my queue
for M4M :roll:
既然选了mod种类 就针对点的mod了
[Easy]
00:03:359 (1) - x:56 y:152
00:06:200 (1) - x:212 y:80 如果更改的话 00:07:442 (2) - 这个需要微调
略微的调整了无意义的遮盖
顺便把三个尾巴对齐了点
SPOILER

00:18:271 (1) - x:8 y:252
3→ 4→ 1→ 2的锐角转折太明显了
SPOILER
00:21:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这块鼠标移动显的慢了 拥挤在了中间 换点其他摆法
00:35:845 (5) - 三点的slider就可以了 弯的不好看, 移动方向平行向右就好
SPOILER
00:51:644 (1) - 类似这种slider出现在easy里太难了
01:00:164 (2) - NC下会好 刚进kiai 而且是个变速slider
01:09:750 (2,3) - ^ 出现在easy太难了
01:14:365 (6) - 移动方向太奇怪 和5擦边也不美观 重新想点主意
01:19:513 (3) - 长白线结束更好
01:21:466 (3) - 三点滑条就可以了 blanket没做好
SPOILER
[Pinkheart's Normal]
00:05:667 +1 note 开头的节奏保持住相同的停顿时间会好点
SPOILER
00:24:661 (3,4) - 玩起来不顺畅的节奏 重音没抓好 改成这样如何
SPOILER
00:43:123 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏显得空了 前面的节奏很丰富 这转折没必要
01:20:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个圈转的太丑了...
[Hard]
00:40:283 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳不顺手
没啥大问题 不过也没什么亮点
类似于00:07:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) 00:13:300 (1,2,3) 这种地方的flow不错 可以多用用
尝试多用ctrl+H ctr+J一类的slider对称摆法会更好
[chenwu's Insane]
00:06:200 (4) - x:56 y:256如何 (虽然跳的还是不太顺手 不过看起来会好点)
SPOILER
00:20:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - 完全叠加的连打会产生偏移的 要考虑进去
00:42:058 (1,2,3) - 有点拥挤了 slider的头放在上一个的中点如何(我顺便把2的开头对齐在00:44:543 (3)的尾巴上 图里没有看到 )
SPOILER
00:59:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这摆法没有任何渐进的感觉 5要离4更远 1~4的ds要更小点
01:21:999 (6) - 移动很诡异 3456在一个弧上会更好
SPOILER
[Hana]
00:09:040 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 太整齐了 完全一样的排列 一般选择左右对称 或者旋转对称
00:15:431 (7,8,9) - 重新绕回到00:15:075 (6) 的尾巴是不错 但考虑到拥挤感 还是不绕回去好 试着其他的排列
后面太鬼畜了 并不适合这么抒情的歌曲 :o

就这些 goodluck
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

wantuole wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:359 (1) - x:56 y:152
00:06:200 (1) - x:212 y:80 如果更改的话 00:07:442 (2) - 这个需要微调
00:18:271 (1) - x:8 y:252
00:21:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这块鼠标移动显的慢了 拥挤在了中间 换点其他摆法
00:35:845 (5) - 三点的slider就可以了 弯的不好看, 移动方向平行向右就好
00:51:644 (1) - 类似这种slider出现在easy里太难了
01:00:164 (2) - NC下会好 刚进kiai 而且是个变速slider 以上fixed
01:09:750 (2,3) - ^ 出现在easy太难了 不知道怎么改……先放着
01:14:365 (6) - 移动方向太奇怪 和5擦边也不美观 重新想点主意
01:19:513 (3) - 长白线结束更好 以上fixed

[Hard]
00:40:283 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳不顺手 改了个五角

[Hana]
想来想去决定删diff._.

就这些 goodluck
Thx for mod.
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

wantuole wrote:

[chenwu's Insane]
00:06:200 (4) - x:56 y:256如何 (虽然跳的还是不太顺手 不过看起来会好点)没改
SPOILER
00:20:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - 完全叠加的连打会产生偏移的 要考虑进去
00:42:058 (1,2,3) - 有点拥挤了 slider的头放在上一个的中点如何(我顺便把2的开头对齐在00:44:543 (3)的尾巴上 图里没有看到 )
SPOILER
00:59:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这摆法没有任何渐进的感觉 5要离4更远 1~4的ds要更小点
01:21:999 (6) - 移动很诡异 3456在一个弧上会更好
SPOILER
剩下的都改了.thanks
http://puu.sh/2zaJL
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Because you posted in my modding queue but I see it is perfect. So I won't mod.
Too nice map!! Good ranked soon!
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Loki-san wrote:

...anyway, thanks.
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
Modding queue~

Easy
00:24:661 (3) - Blanket plz->
00:35:845 (5) - Grid up please..?
If you accept ^ mod, 00:36:910 (6) - move around(DS 0.9)
00:50:223 (4) - move right (avoid 00:48:803 (1) please...)
00:59:454 (1) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/714848

Pinkheart's Normal
imo, AR - 1

00:17:206 (5) - Grid up (avoid 00:15:963 (3) please...)
00:20:046 (5,6) - use slider plz..? (1/2 note -> hard..)
00:34:780 (7) - remove 1 reverse (follow vocal)
01:07:620 (3) - how about this? ->

Hard
AR - 1

00:52:709 (3,4,5,6) - So confuse pattern... change plz

chenwu's Insane
00:05:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks bad... change plz..
00:21:466 (3) - stack by 00:22:176 (2) - plz
00:25:194 (4,5) - ctrl + J plz

GL :)
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~


chenwu's Insane
00:05:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks bad... change plz..
00:21:466 (3) - stack by 00:22:176 (2) - plz
00:25:194 (4,5) - ctrl + J plz
all fixed.thanks for modding
http://puu.sh/2Fleu
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Hi, Eggache

Mod request from Fumika & Nichiyouki's Modding Queue

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Change artist is "Shimotsuki Haruka" because japanese name in wiki is "霜月はるか", which "霜月" means "Shimotsuki" and "はるか" means "Haruka".
  2. "lighting@2x.png" file isn't use in your map. You must delete it.
  3. I see that you have "Hana diff", but it doesn't title name. I don't sure that you want add it in your map or not? If you don't want, please delete it, but if you want it yet, please add title name, too.
  4. Add "(Short Ver.)" in title name, since I already find this song full version: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zwwnMQCO6eQ

Easy

  1. 00:07:442 (2) - I feel weird when I have compare with the rhythm. So I think that change into by this picture will be fit the rhythm.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:11:525 - You can add a circle here.
  3. SPOILER
  4. 00:53:774 (4) - Move to x:220 y:352. It will be able to flow naturally more.
  5. 00:59:454 (1) - Move to x:244 y:284 will be more beautiful.
  6. 01:09:750 (2,3) - It doesn't follow the rhythm for my think. However, I want this to follow the vocal by change slider (3) into a circle, which I suggest that move at 01:10:460. Then move slider end (2) at 01:10:105 instead.
  7. 01:20:756 (2) - Move slider end at 01:21:111 instead, since 1/4 beat is too hard for this diff.

Pinkheart's Normal

  1. 00:15:963 (3,4,5) - I don't want (3,5) is overlapping, which I suggest that move (4) to up 3 grids and left 1 grid, and move (5) to x:312 y:32.
  2. 00:24:661 (3) - If you add NC here will be better imo, since I see (3,4) stack, which it may cause the players are confusing.
  3. 00:34:425 (5,7) - I suggest that add NC on (5). Then add note by this picture will fit with the rhythm.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:36:022 (1,2,3) - Change these into a slider 1/4 beat. Then repead slider 1 time by this picture
    SPOILER
  5. 00:37:087 - You can add a note to follow the rhythm.
  6. 00:39:928 - ^
  7. 00:52:167 (3) - This note may necessary to add it. So you can remove it.
  8. 00:54:484 (1) - Change this slider to natural flow by this picture , since it cause me confused
    SPOILER
  9. 01:21:466 (2,3,4,5) - Change into the slider will be easier to play.

Hard

  1. 00:03:892 (2) - Add clap on slider begin to follow the rhythm.
  2. 00:08:241 - You can add a note here, since I hear the rhythm here.
  3. 00:19:691 (3) - I think that using stream slider is no good idea to use here. Please change it into slider 1/4 beat. Then repeat this slider 1 time.
  4. 00:30:697 (6) - It will be better of you remove repeat slider 1 time. Then add a circle at 00:31:762 instead.
  5. 00:40:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please increase the spacing, since these are a mess.
  6. 00:52:176 (2,3,4,5,6) - These cause me confused. I will suggest that use Ctrl+G on (3,4). Then may move (5,6) by this picture (Circle (5) is stack with (4).), which think that will be better than to read.
    SPOILER
  7. 00:55:194 (2,3) - Spacing is too close to read. Please increase spacing about 1.2x
  8. 01:09:573 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - These may cause me confused, too. So I suggest that make by there pictures will be reduce confusion.
    SPOILER


  9. 01:21:999 (4,5) - I think these aren't natural flow when I try to play. Please make it to natural flow than this.

chenwu's Insane

  1. 00:03:892 (2,3) - Insrease the spacing at least 1.0x will be better to flow.
  2. 00:05:312 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It cause me confused to read. If you want to be better to read and play. Maybe make by this picture ((6) stack with (1)). Then add NC on 00:06:200 (4).
    SPOILER
    200,64,5312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,64,5667,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,180,5845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    100,100,6022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    84,212,6200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    112,280,6377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,304,6555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:07:975 (2) - Whistle hitsound isn't fit to put in slider begin. Please remove it.
  4. 00:14:365 (7,8,9,1) - I can't play these note naturally. I will suggest that reduce spacing of stream note (7,8,9) about 1.0~1.2x will be better?
  5. 00:18:626 (2) - Use Ctrl+G will be better to play imo.
  6. 00:40:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - I want to play neturally by use the spacing to equal or nearby, since I think these aren't fitting to play.
  7. 00:59:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  8. 01:15:608 (1,2,3) - These are anti-jump. You should remove NC on (1). Then add NC on (2) and (3) instead. It will be reduce confusing to read from using anti-jump.
  9. 01:19:868 (6) - Add NC here, since you have reduced SV from 1.25x into 0.75x here.
  10. 01:20:756 (1) - Although you have increased SV here, but It isn't problem about confusing to play. So please remove NC here.
  11. 01:21:288 (2,3) - I want to add NC on (3) to reduce confusing, since you have increased SV here as well, but you should reduce spacing between (1,2) by move (2) first.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
Azer
World Cup Organiser
1,107 posts
Joined December 2012
Azer
chenwu's Insane
  1. 00:04:247 (4,5,6) - Fix distance
  2. 00:10:460 (4,5) - Space these apart
  3. Honestly the distance on the entire intro is confusing on the first play, I would reposition many things to make things clearer here.
  4. 00:18:626 (2) - Turn this slider around (start the slider where the end starts right now)
  5. 00:36:555 (4,5,6) - Confusing distance again, hard to read on the first play which isn't something you want.
  6. 00:57:146 (1,2) - Stack these or put them close together.
  7. 00:59:454 (1,2,3,4) - Fix distance
  8. 01:04:247 (1,2) - Put these closer to eachother.
  9. I'll be honest here, this was very uncomfortable to playtest and mod, you HAVE to know this map prehand to do good on it because the distances are so inconsistant, I don't think i've actually experienced legitimate discomfort playing this game before, and that's not a good thing. Lots of change has to happen here. It's nothing personal, don't get me wrong but I hope you understand I heavily disliked playing/modding this map and that's not something you want.
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi Eggache0 (:3 」_)=3

From my m4m queue :)

[General]

Hana diff not artist and title and title conflicts
add artist, title please
Video dimensions must not exceed 854x480 for the 16:9 format
Your change video size


[Easy]

This is difficulty x1.0 spacing recommended to use because this map overlap pattern and distance here
-> http://puu.sh/2GtPk which I saw in the section, I really recommend it.

00:16:141 (2) This is slider unbalance i think this slider shape i recommand -> http://puu.sh/2GtCw
00:49:513 (3) move x:160 y:100 i think 3 stream shape better
00:57:324 (1) Spinner is too short for beginners i think this spinner remove long slider shape add here
00:59:454 (1,1) This is pattern blanket please -> http://puu.sh/2GtIb
01:20:046 (3,1,2) This pattern is a symmetrical shape? i think this pattenr symmetrical is better


[Normal]

00:17:206 (5) This is note 00:15:963 (3) note overlap here move x:320 y:36 please
00:34:780 (7) This is 1/2 slider one repeat remove
00:50:578 (5,6) hmm.. i think this pattern beat 2 note remove and 1 slider one repeat
01:02:649 (5,1,2) Normal user is hard to read, difficult pattern.
It is recommended that the natural flow in order to change -> http://puu.sh/2Gugw
01:06:908 (2,3,4) This pattern can be improved by gently -> http://puu.sh/2Guk0
01:14:010 (5,1,2) Same -> 01:02:649 (5,1,2)


[Hard]

00:34:957 (3) This is slider one repeat remove
00:40:638 (1,2,3,4,5) I don't understand why you did this, keep a constant distance between the notes.
-> http://puu.sh/2GuYa
01:11:909 (1,2) This is pattern blanket is shape better
01:22:886 (5) This is song end part add NC


[Chenwu's Insane]

00:29:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I think this beat awkward i recommand beat -> http://puu.sh/2GveA
00:32:472 00:32:472 (1,2,3,4) You sound thing is based on the beat?
seems to have improved beat.-> http://puu.sh/2Gvib
00:43:123 (1,2) An improvement in the flow pattern may be 1 slider Ctrl+G and 2 slider same
00:50:578 (5,6,7,8,9) The beat is awkward. I recommend that you change the tempo, because you have used belong to the sound of the beat,
I can't understand i recommand beat -> http://puu.sh/2GvsZ
00:57:058 (1,2) I think this pattern blanket
01:01:762 (3,4) I think that this part to change the symmetry
01:03:537 (2,3) probably think it blanket.




Good luck ~
chenwu
50 posts
Joined August 2010
chenwu

Nichiyouki wrote:

chenwu's Insane

  1. 00:03:892 (2,3) - Insrease the spacing at least 1.0x will be better to flow.fixed
  2. 00:05:312 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It cause me confused to read. If you want to be better to read and play. Maybe make by this picture ((6) stack with (1)). Then add NC on 00:06:200 (4).
    SPOILER
    200,64,5312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,64,5667,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,180,5845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    100,100,6022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    84,212,6200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    112,280,6377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,304,6555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:07:975 (2) - Whistle hitsound isn't fit to put in slider begin. Please remove it.fixed
  4. 00:14:365 (7,8,9,1) - I can't play these note naturally. I will suggest that reduce spacing of stream note (7,8,9) about 1.0~1.2x will be better?ok
  5. 00:18:626 (2) - Use Ctrl+G will be better to play imo.ok
  6. 00:40:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - I want to play neturally by use the spacing to equal or nearby, since I think these aren't fitting to play.fixed
  7. 00:59:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^fixed
  8. 01:15:608 (1,2,3) - These are anti-jump. You should remove NC on (1). Then add NC on (2) and (3) instead. It will be reduce confusing to read from using anti-jump.
  9. 01:19:868 (6) - Add NC here, since you have reduced SV from 1.25x into 0.75x here.ok
  10. 01:20:756 (1) - Although you have increased SV here, but It isn't problem about confusing to play. So please remove NC here.ok
  11. 01:21:288 (2,3) - I want to add NC on (3) to reduce confusing, since you have increased SV here as well, but you should reduce spacing between (1,2) by move (2) first.ok

Azer wrote:

chenwu's Insane
  1. 00:04:247 (4,5,6) - Fix distance
  2. 00:10:460 (4,5) - Space these apart
  3. Honestly the distance on the entire intro is confusing on the first play, I would reposition many things to make things clearer here.
  4. 00:18:626 (2) - Turn this slider around (start the slider where the end starts right now)
  5. 00:36:555 (4,5,6) - Confusing distance again, hard to read on the first play which isn't something you want.
  6. 00:57:146 (1,2) - Stack these or put them close together.
  7. 00:59:454 (1,2,3,4) - Fix distance
  8. 01:04:247 (1,2) - Put these closer to eachother.
  9. I'll be honest here, this was very uncomfortable to playtest and mod, you HAVE to know this map prehand to do good on it because the distances are so inconsistant, I don't think i've actually experienced legitimate discomfort playing this game before, and that's not a good thing. Lots of change has to happen here. It's nothing personal, don't get me wrong but I hope you understand I heavily disliked playing/modding this map and that's not something you want.
all fixed

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Chenwu's Insane]

00:29:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I think this beat awkward i recommand beat -> http://puu.sh/2GveAok
00:32:472 00:32:472 (1,2,3,4) You sound thing is based on the beat?
seems to have improved beat.-> http://puu.sh/2Gvibok
00:43:123 (1,2) An improvement in the flow pattern may be 1 slider Ctrl+G and 2 slider sameok
00:50:578 (5,6,7,8,9) The beat is awkward. I recommend that you change the tempo, because you have used belong to the sound of the beat,
I can't understand i recommand beat -> http://puu.sh/2GvsZ
00:57:058 (1,2) I think this pattern blanket
01:01:762 (3,4) I think that this part to change the symmetry
01:03:537 (2,3) probably think it blanket.
Thanks for modding.
http://puu.sh/2GOZq
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Gloria Guard wrote:

[General]
Video dimensions must not exceed 854x480 for the 16:9 format
Your change video size[/color]
I'll change after tests.


[Easy]

This is difficulty x1.0 spacing recommended to use because this map overlap pattern and distance here
-> http://puu.sh/2GtPk which I saw in the section, I really recommend it.

00:16:141 (2) This is slider unbalance i think this slider shape i recommand -> http://puu.sh/2GtCw Hmm...no
00:49:513 (3) move x:160 y:100 i think 3 stream shape better
00:57:324 (1) Spinner is too short for beginners i think this spinner remove long slider shape add here fixed
00:59:454 (1,1) This is pattern blanket please -> http://puu.sh/2GtIb fixed
01:20:046 (3,1,2) This pattern is a symmetrical shape? i think this pattenr symmetrical is better[/notice] actually not

[Hard]

00:34:957 (3) This is slider one repeat remove
00:40:638 (1,2,3,4,5) I don't understand why you did this, keep a constant distance between the notes.
-> http://puu.sh/2GuYa
01:11:909 (1,2) This is pattern blanket is shape better
01:22:886 (5) This is song end part add NC All fixed

Nichiyouki wrote:

[General]
All fixed. "Short ver"will be added after finish fixing.

Easy

00:07:442 (2) - I feel weird when I have compare with the rhythm. So I think that change into by this picture will be fit the rhythm. fixed
01:09:750 (2,3) - It doesn't follow the rhythm for my think. However, I want this to follow the vocal by change slider (3) into a circle, which I suggest that move at 01:10:460. Then move slider end (2) at 01:10:105 instead.
Since changed the ds to 1.0, some mods didn't fix.

[Hard]

00:03:892 (2) - Add clap on slider begin to follow the rhythm.
00:08:241 - You can add a note here, since I hear the rhythm here.
00:19:691 (3) - I think that using stream slider is no good idea to use here. Please change it into slider 1/4 beat. Then repeat this slider 1 time.
00:40:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please increase the spacing, since these are a mess.
00:55:194 (2,3) - Spacing is too close to read. Please increase spacing about 1.2x
01:21:999 (4,5) - I think these aren't natural flow when I try to play. Please make it to natural flow than this. All fixed
00:52:176 (2,3,4,5,6) - These cause me confused.
01:09:573 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - These may cause me confused, too. changed the note
Thanks for modding.
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
Uh, just saying Nichiyouki will get to help you with the video.
Don't wory therefore.
Nichiyouki
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Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Okay, I found the better quality video from Konei's request. Please click this link below to download.

http://puu.sh/2JDzP.avi

Note: Don't give a kudo to me please.
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