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neonat
Mod queue

Normal

Just some suggestions for rhythm
00:07:939 - add a note
00:35:272 - add a note here and 00:35:439, the gap there is quite empty
00:54:606 - add a note - lead-in to the subsequent 3 notes
01:28:439 - a possible note here


Hard

00:21:439 - add a note
00:24:272 (4,5) - let the rhythm be the same as 00:22:939 (1,2,3): let 00:24:272 (4) repeat one more time till 00:24:772, move 00:24:939 (5) so that it starts at 00:25:106 and ends at 00:25:272
01:01:606 (6) - looks too close to 01:01:272 (5)


Just take a look, it's not a must to change, just suggestions. I felt that the rhythm and flow at some parts were halted sometimes, with gaps with no notes placed. Good luck on your 1st map.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

neonat wrote:

Mod queue

Normal

Just some suggestions for rhythm
00:07:939 - add a note
00:35:272 - add a note here and 00:35:439, the gap there is quite empty
00:54:606 - add a note - lead-in to the subsequent 3 notes
01:28:439 - a possible note here


Hard

00:21:439 - add a note
00:24:272 (4,5) - let the rhythm be the same as 00:22:939 (1,2,3): let 00:24:272 (4) repeat one more time till 00:24:772, move 00:24:939 (5) so that it starts at 00:25:106 and ends at 00:25:272
01:01:606 (6) - looks too close to 01:01:272 (5)


Just take a look, it's not a must to change, just suggestions. I felt that the rhythm and flow at some parts were halted sometimes, with gaps with no notes placed. Good luck on your 1st map.
thanks for mod! :) some fixed, some not, in some parts, especially in normal, i'm afraid to make it too difficoult... nayway thank you!
Yuki-kun
Star~ :p
Good luck :p
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Yuki-kun wrote:

Star~ :p
Good luck :p
oh, thanks! *___*
Yuki-kun

luxoDeh wrote:

Yuki-kun wrote:

Star~ :p
Good luck :p
oh, thanks! *___*
Actually your map is a bit square imo, but ignore it since i think it's your style :p
Poggo
Hi from my modding queue~

[General]

• For full spin skin you shound add files: spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png
• Spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 666x664)
• Plz use 30% volume, sounds much better

[Hard]

AR +1
DR +1

00:15:439(2,4) - stack it better
00:17:106 - add note here
00:26:272 - here better use triple too~ http://puu.sh/25B54 sounds more rhythmically
01:07:439 -add note here~ Sounds better for me

[Normal]

HD -2

00:12:606 - 1 grid down
00:26:939 - better remove 1 repeat and add note, or replace on 2 sliders 1/1 will be more playable
00:32:272(2,3,4) - uff better replace this notes on double slider, now it very hard to read
00:37:606 - here sounds better slider 1/1
00:39:272 - http://puu.sh/25BiV here should be this rhythm
00:42:939(4,5,6) - same on 00:32:272
00:47:439 - put this note on 00:47:272
00:52:939 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:01:606(3,1) - stack it better

Oh on this diff you have so many mistakes with rhythm~ Plz check it and better follow for music~

[Easy]

00:13:939(3,4) - it's hard to read for beginners, better replace on slider
00:14:939(1) - end slider here 00:15:606
00:16:939 - end slider here
00:25:939(1,2) - same on 00:13:939
00:32:272 - same on normal, replace on double slider
00:37:606 - here slider 1/1
00:38:939 - end on next white tick
00:41:606 - ^
00:46:939 - ^
00:48:272 - put here slider 2/1
00:49:606 - ^

oh plz check all kiai time~ Don't put and don't start or end notes and sliders on red ticks, it's not readable, and not playable for beginners~ It can confused~

Good luck~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Yuki-kun wrote:

Actually your map is a bit square imo, but ignore it since i think it's your style :p
yeah, i know, I hope to improve in my mapping style, but for now it's so... anyway thank you for the star :D
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~

[General]

• For full spin skin you shound add files: spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png
• Spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 666x664)
• Plz use 30% volume, sounds much better

[Hard]

AR +1
DR +1

00:15:439(2,4) - stack it better
00:17:106 - add note here
00:26:272 - here better use triple too~ http://puu.sh/25B54 sounds more rhythmically
01:07:439 -add note here~ Sounds better for me

[Normal]

HD -2

00:12:606 - 1 grid down
00:26:939 - better remove 1 repeat and add note, or replace on 2 sliders 1/1 will be more playable
00:32:272(2,3,4) - uff better replace this notes on double slider, now it very hard to read
00:37:606 - here sounds better slider 1/1
00:39:272 - http://puu.sh/25BiV here should be this rhythm
00:42:939(4,5,6) - same on 00:32:272
00:47:439 - put this note on 00:47:272
00:52:939 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:01:606(3,1) - stack it better

Oh on this diff you have so many mistakes with rhythm~ Plz check it and better follow for music~

[Easy]

00:13:939(3,4) - it's hard to read for beginners, better replace on slider
00:14:939(1) - end slider here 00:15:606
00:16:939 - end slider here
00:25:939(1,2) - same on 00:13:939
00:32:272 - same on normal, replace on double slider
00:37:606 - here slider 1/1
00:38:939 - end on next white tick
00:41:606 - ^
00:46:939 - ^
00:48:272 - put here slider 2/1
00:49:606 - ^

oh plz check all kiai time~ Don't put and don't start or end notes and sliders on red ticks, it's not readable, and not playable for beginners~ It can confused~

Good luck~

ook! thank you! :) quite all fixed... the spinner should be ok now... i think... and for easy diff... maybe you're right thet in some parts is not good to use red thik whit some nots but, I feel that if not there them don't follow the time... hm... i'll think on how to solve this... anyway thanks a lot! ;)
VTC
HELLO ^_^

MODDING START ~


[Easy]


00:07:606 (2) - add clap sound

00:10:234 - ^

00:20:939 (2) - ^

00:30:272 (3) - ^

00:30:272 (3) - ^ ( add on tail. )

00:46:273 (3) - ^

00:46:606 - add circle (?)

00:52:939 (1) - add clap

00:54:606 - add slider to 00:55:606 - like this - > delete ( 00:54:939 (1) - ) , ( 00:55:606 (2) - )

00:55:606 (2) - add clap

01:03:606 (2) - ^

01:06:273 (2) - ^

01:11:606 (3) - position change - > x412 y360

[Normal]

00:06:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this - >
00:09:606 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ->
pretty good

[Hard]


00:08:439 (4) - use Ctrl + G

00:23:772 (3) - ^

00:34:439 (3) - ^

00:47:773 (3) - ^

00:48:439 (5) - add clap

00:49:272 - ^

00:50:606 - ^

00:51:272 - ^

00:51:939 - ^

01:09:272 - add circle



^_^ GO FOR IT
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

VocaloidTACU wrote:

^_^ GO FOR IT

thanks for mod... qiote all fixed u.u
Natsu
General:

This folder's size is 24,5 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. o.o! im not sure if this a problem

Easy:

00:55:606 (2,4) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 this should finish here 01:17:606 if you are following vocals
01:18:939 add finish
01:26:939 this should finish here 01:28:939

Normal:

01:18:939 add finish
00:45:939 add circle so weird pause
00:52:939 overlap with spinner hitburst move it to other place
01:01:606 (3,1) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 same as easy

Hard:

00:14:939 (1,2) - distance error i dont know if you do this on purpose but i feel weird when i play it

Nice map :3
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Natsu wrote:

General:

This folder's size is 24,5 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. o.o! im not sure if this a problem

Easy:

00:55:606 (2,4) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 this should finish here 01:17:606 if you are following vocals
01:18:939 add finish
01:26:939 this should finish here 01:28:939

Normal:

01:18:939 add finish
00:45:939 add circle so weird pause
00:52:939 overlap with spinner hitburst move it to other place
01:01:606 (3,1) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 same as easy

Hard:

00:14:939 (1,2) - distance error i dont know if you do this on purpose but i feel weird when i play it

Nice map :3
thanks for mod! fixed the most. and in hard diff it was on purpose u.u
Aurele
Easy
The easy is pretty good as it is. Further work by yourself can be done.

Normal
  1. 00:17:606 (1,3) - These sliders are not aligned, make sure to make them aligned.
  2. 00:33:272 - A clap should be added here to keep the consistency with the previous upbeats sounds, which are claps.
  3. 00:37:606 (2) - Reverse the sounds from the beginning to the end, the clap is supposed to be placed on an upbeat, not a downbeat.
  4. 01:02:939 - I think a finish would sound better here to emphasize the louder sounds in this part of the song.
Pretty nice difficulty.

Hard
  1. 00:11:939 (8,1) - You've placed a slider on an upbeat and finishes on a downbeat, but on 00:12:106 there's a strong noise and you're missing it. I am suggesting you to make something else like, replace the slider (8) by two circles and a slider that will start on 00:12:272 and finishes on 00:12:606, also delete the slider (1) and add circles to 00:12:772 and 00:13:106
  2. 00:24:772 (5) - It would be looking better if this circle was making a curve with the previous/next objects. Right now, it's looking.. straight and since the next object is a curved slider, I think it would fit better. Move this circle to x:232 y:208
  3. 00:25:939 (3,1) - You've added a clap on the circle 1, which you shouldn't since most of your claps were added on upbeats, to keep the consistency, it's preferred if you delete it. Also, It would be sounding better if these circles were replaced by a simple slider.
  4. 00:26:939 (4,6) - Are they supposed to be aligned? If yes, make sure to make them aligned on the same x:axis.
  5. 00:53:772 - Since you have added a clap on 00:56:439, I think you could bbe adding one here too.
  6. 01:04:106 (5) - You should be moving this slider one grid up, to make sure to align it with the end of the previous slider.
  7. 01:09:272 - I think you're missing a clap here to keep the consistency with your previous upbeats sounds.
  8. 01:22:939 (4,5,6,7) - This is sounding and playing awkwardly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider 4 and delete these three triplets since they aren't fitting the music and it's the only place where you've added triplets. Also, by doing this, you could be adding a slider that starts on 01:23:272 and finishes on the next white line. For an example, like this
  9. 01:25:106 - You aren't keeping the polarity in here, which makes it sounds weird. Add an object to 01:25:106, for an example, stack a circle with the next circle or delete the circle (3) and replace it with a slider, replace the slider (2) with a slider, you can do anything here.
  10. 01:27:772 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here to make it fit with the background sounds.
This map is pretty solid, get some more mods and try to look at the whole mapset by yourself, when you really think it's worthy to be bubbled, catch me.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Gabe wrote:

Easy
The easy is pretty good as it is. Further work by yourself can be done.

Normal
  1. 00:17:606 (1,3) - These sliders are not aligned, make sure to make them aligned.
  2. 00:33:272 - A clap should be added here to keep the consistency with the previous upbeats sounds, which are claps.
  3. 00:37:606 (2) - Reverse the sounds from the beginning to the end, the clap is supposed to be placed on an upbeat, not a downbeat.
  4. 01:02:939 - I think a finish would sound better here to emphasize the louder sounds in this part of the song.
Pretty nice difficulty.

Hard
  1. 00:11:939 (8,1) - You've placed a slider on an upbeat and finishes on a downbeat, but on 00:12:106 there's a strong noise and you're missing it. I am suggesting you to make something else like, replace the slider (8) by two circles and a slider that will start on 00:12:272 and finishes on 00:12:606, also delete the slider (1) and add circles to 00:12:772 and 00:13:106
  2. 00:24:772 (5) - It would be looking better if this circle was making a curve with the previous/next objects. Right now, it's looking.. straight and since the next object is a curved slider, I think it would fit better. Move this circle to x:232 y:208
  3. 00:25:939 (3,1) - You've added a clap on the circle 1, which you shouldn't since most of your claps were added on upbeats, to keep the consistency, it's preferred if you delete it. Also, It would be sounding better if these circles were replaced by a simple slider.
  4. 00:26:939 (4,6) - Are they supposed to be aligned? If yes, make sure to make them aligned on the same x:axis.
  5. 00:53:772 - Since you have added a clap on 00:56:439, I think you could bbe adding one here too.
  6. 01:04:106 (5) - You should be moving this slider one grid up, to make sure to align it with the end of the previous slider.
  7. 01:09:272 - I think you're missing a clap here to keep the consistency with your previous upbeats sounds.
  8. 01:22:939 (4,5,6,7) - This is sounding and playing awkwardly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider 4 and delete these three triplets since they aren't fitting the music and it's the only place where you've added triplets. Also, by doing this, you could be adding a slider that starts on 01:23:272 and finishes on the next white line. For an example, like this
  9. 01:25:106 - You aren't keeping the polarity in here, which makes it sounds weird. Add an object to 01:25:106, for an example, stack a circle with the next circle or delete the circle (3) and replace it with a slider, replace the slider (2) with a slider, you can do anything here.
  10. 01:27:772 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here to make it fit with the background sounds.
This map is pretty solid, get some more mods and try to look at the whole mapset by yourself, when you really think it's worthy to be bubbled, catch me.
thank you very much for mod! I see you also changed your profiule image XD (penguins :3 ) anyway all fixed! I'll get some more mods and then I'll call you back as you sayd! thanks!! :D
japan0413
nice song :)
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
*____* oww! I'm really happy you played my map! :D :D
jyu
Hi ^^ m4m from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General
The audio lead-in is unnecessary, imo, since you didn't map the intro

Hard
OD +1

00:25:939 (1) - remove nc
00:26:939 (6) - add nc (big white line)
00:30:272 (7) - move up one grid

Normal
00:08:272 (4) - move up one grid

this diff is great ^^

Easy
00:54:606 (1) - i found this kinda weird, imo. How about this

anyway this diff is also great =w=

useless bonus

this was my second try actually because i forgot to export my first replay fkhjdk

if you bother to download the replay http://puu.sh/2hwZd

Anyway, star!!
Good luck with your ranking~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi ^^ m4m from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General
The audio lead-in is unnecessary, imo, since you didn't map the intro

Hard
OD +1

00:25:939 (1) - remove nc
00:26:939 (6) - add nc (big white line)
00:30:272 (7) - move up one grid

Normal
00:08:272 (4) - move up one grid

this diff is great ^^

Easy
00:54:606 (1) - i found this kinda weird, imo. How about this

anyway this diff is also great =w=

useless bonus

this was my second try actually because i forgot to export my first replay fkhjdk

if you bother to download the replay http://puu.sh/2hwZd

Anyway, star!!
Good luck with your ranking~
thank you very much! :D also for the star and the replay (so happy ^.^) :3 I'll mod your map today but before I have some school stuff to do too DD: (sad story :( )
Entreal
OMG M4M QUEUE FROM YOURS LETS GO, caps :D

Easy
00:08:272 - Put this slider in symmetry in the y-axis
00:21:606 - Move to 324|204, makes it to the middle of those two circles
00:32:772 - Clap here, just like the the way you did in the previous
00:38:106 - ^
Overall, Pretty good.

Normal
00:32:772 - Clap, just like the way you did in the previous
00:46:939 - Move a pixel down, makes it look symmetric to previous note


Hard
00:25:939 - Clap, following the pattern you're doing
00:26:606 - ^

Dang, i don't feel like theres anything more that i need to say. Good map. and Good luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Entreal wrote:

OMG M4M QUEUE FROM YOURS LETS GO, caps :D

Easy
00:08:272 - Put this slider in symmetry in the y-axis
00:21:606 - Move to 324|204, makes it to the middle of those two circles
00:32:772 - Clap here, just like the the way you did in the previous
00:38:106 - ^
Overall, Pretty good.

Normal
00:32:772 - Clap, just like the way you did in the previous
00:46:939 - Move a pixel down, makes it look symmetric to previous note


Hard
00:25:939 - Clap, following the pattern you're doing
00:26:606 - ^

Dang, i don't feel like theres anything more that i need to say. Good map. and Good luck!
thank you for mod! :) all fixed exept for the claps on easy and normal... i don't feel they follow the ritch :/ aniway I'll mod you map now ;)
AsprikaQ
I'm not really good at this but okay I'll try my best! :)

All suggestion! Overall map is well done so sorry if my mod is too less.

[Easy]

HP and AR both -1 (?)

00:08:272 (3) - Switch clap from reverse to tail
00:30:272 (3) - Add Clap (?)
00:30:939 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
00:48:273 (3) - Clap looks awkward here
00:54:606 (1) - Start at 00:54:939 (1) - is better
01:11:606 (3) - 1 Grid to right
01:12:273 (4) - Make 2/1 slider is better http://puu.sh/2npSU

[Normal]

Normal with 4 star is enough. Try CS: 3 HP: 3 AR: 4 OD: 3

00:10:606 (4) - How about make it like this http://puu.sh/2npms
00:45:939 (3) - Maybe move to x:464 y:356
00:47:273 (1) - Switch clap from tail to head
00:50:273 (1) - For normal, imo, start too fast. At least, start from 00:50:439 (1) please.
00:53:272 (2) - Add note (?)
00:54:772 (4) - Add note (?)
00:55:939 (4) - Add note (?)
01:02:939 (1) - Stack here is not really good. I suggest move below (4) with vertical slider.
01:09:939 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/2npGw (?)


[Hard]

00:10:106 (3) - Clap slider head (?)
00:10:772 (5) - Clap slider tail (?) and remove Clap from head
00:17:606 (1) - Add Finish slider head (?)
00:27:606 (3) - All clap at reverse (?)
00:33:606 (1) - Add Finish (?)
00:36:272 (1) - Finish on slider head (?)
00:43:439 (6) - Clap (?)
00:43:773 (8) - Clap (?)
00:46:106 (6) - Clap (?)
00:46:439 (8) - Clap (?)
01:10:106 (6) - Better add 1/1 slider here and delete 01:10:273 (6)
01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about move to the centre so it looks more beautiful.

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-)
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

AsprikaQ wrote:

I'm not really good at this but okay I'll try my best! :)

All suggestion! Overall map is well done so sorry if my mod is too less.

[Easy]

HP and AR both -1 (?)

00:08:272 (3) - Switch clap from reverse to tail I prefere leave the hitsound as they are, I think they are ok in this way
00:30:272 (3) - Add Clap (?)
00:30:939 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
00:48:273 (3) - Clap looks awkward here
00:54:606 (1) - Start at 00:54:939 (1) - is better this is ok, also other people suggested this
01:11:606 (3) - 1 Grid to right ok
01:12:273 (4) - Make 2/1 slider is better http://puu.sh/2npSU I prefere leave it as it is

[Normal]

Normal with 4 star is enough. Try CS: 3 HP: 3 AR: 4 OD: 3 that's good

00:10:606 (4) - How about make it like this http://puu.sh/2npms not bad, but I'll keep it as it is
00:45:939 (3) - Maybe move to x:464 y:356 that's ok
00:47:273 (1) - Switch clap from tail to head here too, I prefere leave hitsounds as they are, but sometimes there are good suggestions ^.^
00:50:273 (1) - For normal, imo, start too fast. At least, start from 00:50:439 (1) please. ok
00:53:272 (2) - Add note (?) I prefere to don't add more notse, I don't want to make it more difficult
00:54:772 (4) - Add note (?)
00:55:939 (4) - Add note (?)
01:02:939 (1) - Stack here is not really good. I suggest move below (4) with vertical slider. I don't really understand this
01:09:939 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/2npGw (?) good suggestion, I'll change it if someone other say it


[Hard]

00:10:106 (3) - Clap slider head (?) for hitsounds the same as normal
00:10:772 (5) - Clap slider tail (?) and remove Clap from head
00:17:606 (1) - Add Finish slider head (?)
00:27:606 (3) - All clap at reverse (?)
00:33:606 (1) - Add Finish (?)
00:36:272 (1) - Finish on slider head (?)
00:43:439 (6) - Clap (?)
00:43:773 (8) - Clap (?)
00:46:106 (6) - Clap (?)
00:46:439 (8) - Clap (?)
01:10:106 (6) - Better add 1/1 slider here and delete 01:10:273 (6)
01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about move to the centre so it looks more beautiful. ok, let's see if it's ok like this

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-) hm... I don't really know how to change this XD

thank you for modding! :) I'll mod your map as soon as possible ;)
AsprikaQ

luxoDeh wrote:

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-) hm... I don't really know how to change this XD
Same with when you add custom hitsound. :D

http://puu.sh/2nQu8 : Add this file to your song's folder (I adjusted the name already so just simply add it)

No KD please.

P.S. if you want to used it in kiai time too, change Inheriting Section to Normal Custom 2 and then make one more of the file i gave you and rename it to normal-sliderslide2
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AsprikaQ wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-) hm... I don't really know how to change this XD
Same with when you add custom hitsound. :D

http://puu.sh/2nQu8 : Add this file to your song's folder (I adjusted the name already so just simply add it)

No KD please.

P.S. if you want to used it in kiai time too, change Inheriting Section to Normal Custom 2 and then make one more of the file i gave you and rename it to normal-sliderslide2
Oh! thank you very much! :D I'm still not sure if keeping it or not, maybe I only have to get familiar with the new sound XD I'll see also what other people say u.u Anyway it will be very usefull also for other maps, so, thank you! :)
buhei
hi luxoDeh~ from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:939 (1,2,1,2,3) - the rhythm is so strange, add a note at 00:54:606 ?
00:59:772 - add a note
i think kiai part need revising..

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1,2) - don't look good
add a note at 00:39:606 or 00:39:772 plz
00:53:272 - add a note
add a note at 00:54:606 or 00:54:772
the same as Easy

[Hard]
00:15:439 (2) - keep the spacing
00:34:439 (3) - Ctrl+G and let it be farther from (2)
add notes at 00:53:939 , 00:54:272 , 00:56:939 and 00:57:439
kiai part can be harder than other parts so don't be afraid to add notes

good luck~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

buhei wrote:

hi luxoDeh~ from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:939 (1,2,1,2,3) - the rhythm is so strange, add a note at 00:54:606 ? hm... I'll keep it
00:59:772 - add a note that's ok
i think kiai part need revising..

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1,2) - don't look good no, I'll keep it as it is
add a note at 00:39:606 or 00:39:772 plz I changed this
00:53:272 - add a note ok
add a note at 00:54:606 or 00:54:772 I tryed something
the same as Easy

[Hard]
00:15:439 (2) - keep the spacing no, it was ok this way
00:34:439 (3) - Ctrl+G and let it be farther from (2) ok
add notes at 00:53:939 , 00:54:272 , 00:56:939 and 00:57:439 hm... I prefer leave it as it is or the spacing and pattern will be too different :/
kiai part can be harder than other parts so don't be afraid to add notes

good luck~
thank you for mod! I'll mod your map as soon as possible ;)
MillhioreF
testplay as requested in my queue~

[General]
* The whole map seems overly quiet compared to most of the songs in osu!. I'd double the MP3's volume and raise the hitsounds to 80%.
* The spinner graphic doesn't have a clear indicator of where the center is, I'd suggest adding a little marker in the middle.

[Easy]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* I actually don't have any... very solid Easy diff, nice pattern/time variety and good flow!

Awesomeness:
* 00:30:939 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This blanketing is really nice

[Normal]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 00:09:606 (1,2) - This is the only time in the map notes are completely stacked... nothing wrong per se, but it stood out to me. Perhaps you can design around it.

Awesomeness:
* Really nice blanketing throughout the map. 00:57:273 (1,2,3) and 01:00:273 (1,2,3) really stood out as being awesome.

[Hard]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 01:19:939 (3,4,5,6) - These notes felt somewhat out of place when I was playing; the music it's mapped to is very subtle, and the note pattern feels strange on it.

Awesomeness:
* 00:20:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole combo flows really nicely, it was a blast to play.
* 01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern <3


Great map, great mapping! I could definitely see this being ranked with not much change.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

MillhioreF wrote:

testplay as requested in my queue~

[General]
* The whole map seems overly quiet compared to most of the songs in osu!. I'd double the MP3's volume and raise the hitsounds to 80%. I thought a lot about that. in reality I tryed to find a better mp3 file but I failed every time :( I don't know if there is a way to double the mp3 volume without changing it.
* The spinner graphic doesn't have a clear indicator of where the center is, I'd suggest adding a little marker in the middle. that's right, I always noticed it and always forget it XD now it's time to add this center (the new osu graphic also changed something of this custom spinner and I think in some way made it a bit worse anyway :/)

[Easy]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* I actually don't have any... very solid Easy diff, nice pattern/time variety and good flow!

Awesomeness:
* 00:30:939 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This blanketing is really nice

[Normal]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 00:09:606 (1,2) - This is the only time in the map notes are completely stacked... nothing wrong per se, but it stood out to me. Perhaps you can design around it. tryed to change this

Awesomeness:
* Really nice blanketing throughout the map. 00:57:273 (1,2,3) and 01:00:273 (1,2,3) really stood out as being awesome.

[Hard]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 01:19:939 (3,4,5,6) - These notes felt somewhat out of place when I was playing; the music it's mapped to is very subtle, and the note pattern feels strange on it. I listened to it carefully and the notes fit with the music, I tryed to make something different but I always ended up with something that made me change also part of the following pattern :/ so I kept it as it is

Awesomeness:
* 00:20:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole combo flows really nicely, it was a blast to play.
* 01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern <3


Great map, great mapping! I could definitely see this being ranked with not much change.
thanks a lot for testplaying my map :) good suggestion anyway. the only thing is the mp3 volume, I really don't know how to change it :/ . anyway, I hope to find a mat soon for this map, but it's very difficult :(
787B
Ciao!
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
Careful when following the vocals. I'd recommend to emphasize both instrumental and vocal parts. I was very uncomfortable when playing the kiai's in Easy and Normal, since there aren't much notes to hit.

Easy
00:28:272 (1) - Consider moving a grid up to match with 00:26:939 (2) - .
00:38:939 (2) - Hm, I would change the slider to improve flow, doesn't play good since they are on a straight line imo. Something like this.
01:12:273 (4) - Add an arrow to match with vocals? http://puu.sh/2uXGl.

Normal
00:47:773 (2) - Highly suggest ctrl+g here to improve flow.
01:12:273 (3) - Move a grid up to match with 01:10:939 (1) -
01:13:022 (4) - Move a grid left to be on center with 01:10:939 (1,2,3) - .
01:19:439 (2) - Try placing this circle a bit more below, so it will improve flow with previous slider 01:18:939 (1) - http://puu.sh/2uY9X

Hard
00:18:939 (4,5,6) - Try to avoid placing triplets this way. How about something like this?
00:20:272 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:272 (7,8,9) - ^
00:25:939 (3) - Is there by any change you can lower this slider on the grid in specific? Even though it's not a problem when playing, it still feels quite harsh to play.
01:04:106 (5) - You should replace this slider for exact same copy of 01:03:606 (4) - to improve visuals. http://puu.sh/2uYIz
Nice ending here.

Good luck there!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Wolf wrote:

Ciao!
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
Careful when following the vocals. I'd recommend to emphasize both instrumental and vocal parts. I was very uncomfortable when playing the kiai's in Easy and Normal, since there aren't much notes to hit.

Easy
00:28:272 (1) - Consider moving a grid up to match with 00:26:939 (2) - . I keep it as it is because then the previous slider is not symmetric, if someone other tell me this I'll change it
00:38:939 (2) - Hm, I would change the slider to improve flow, doesn't play good since they are on a straight line imo. Something like this. good
01:12:273 (4) - Add an arrow to match with vocals? http://puu.sh/2uXGl. that's ok

Normal
00:47:773 (2) - Highly suggest ctrl+g here to improve flow. I prefere keep it as it is
01:12:273 (3) - Move a grid up to match with 01:10:939 (1) - ok
01:13:022 (4) - Move a grid left to be on center with 01:10:939 (1,2,3) - . I changed it
01:19:439 (2) - Try placing this circle a bit more below, so it will improve flow with previous slider 01:18:939 (1) - http://puu.sh/2uY9X that's good

Hard
00:18:939 (4,5,6) - Try to avoid placing triplets this way. How about something like this? in this one is ok
00:20:272 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:272 (7,8,9) - ^ I tryed to change this but I felt strange with flow, so I kept is as it is
00:25:939 (3) - Is there by any change you can lower this slider on the grid in specific? Even though it's not a problem when playing, it still feels quite harsh to play. maybe but I leave this as it if for now
01:04:106 (5) - You should replace this slider for exact same copy of 01:03:606 (4) - to improve visuals. http://puu.sh/2uYIz
Nice ending here. thank you! I didn't replaced it well some time ago, now i got the problem XD I'm stupid XD

Good luck there!
thank you for good mod! ;)
kajiyatta
M4M from your queue
General
almost suggetions
Easy
Placement
00:10:272(2,1) I suppose you can stack these notes, and it is more expectable for newbie
Rhythm
00:14:939(1,2) a bit weird for me, to follow the vocal is one of the mapping styles, but in case I suppose to follow the music seems more clearly

00:30:606 add a note here to follow the vocal since already did at 00:35:606 and so on
00:40:606 ^
00:46:939(1,2) sounds a bit weird, I dunno why the slider stopped at 00:47:439 since there is no instrumental heard. so just simpley put better
01:10:606(1) it is useless note I suppose since the note doen't follow any music or vocal. just example here
Hit Sonud
just opinion in KIAI TIME, it doesn't fit to music to add Normal-whistle.
01:02:939(1) add finish

Normal
Placement
00:09:6060(1,2) put at center line better
00:13:939(4,5) stack at slider's end seems difficult for Normal, put away better.
00:17:606(1,1) stack better
01:01:272(2,4)^
01:07:606(4,5,1,2,3) I suppose you can put more beautiful, like this?
Rhythm
01:18:939(1) a bit difficult for Normal I suppose. maybe like this?
Hit Sonud
00:38:939(2) add finish at head

Hard
Placement
00:30:939(1) move like this to make a tetragon
00:37:939(6,7) move like this?
Rhythm
00:14:772 add a note here? to follow the vocal. it is Hard diff so I suppose player will expect it
Hit Sonud
01:02:939(1) add finish

some tiny things you should consider still need to be worked, but overall fine. support your 1st Rank, star :D
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your queue
General
almost suggetions
Easy
Placement
00:10:272(2,1) I suppose you can stack these notes, and it is more expectable for newbie that's ok

Rhythm
00:14:939(1,2) a bit weird for me, to follow the vocal is one of the mapping styles, but in case I suppose to follow the music seems more clearly
I prefere leave it as it is
00:30:606 add a note here to follow the vocal since already did at 00:35:606 and so on better not because I don't want to make this diff too hard...
00:40:606 ^ ^
00:46:939(1,2) sounds a bit weird, I dunno why the slider stopped at 00:47:439 since there is no instrumental heard. so just simpley put better fixed
01:10:606(1) it is useless note I suppose since the note doen't follow any music or vocal. just example here fixed
Hit Sonud
just opinion in KIAI TIME, it doesn't fit to music to add Normal-whistle. hm... don't know XD
01:02:939(1) add finish ok

Normal all fixed
Placement
00:09:6060(1,2) put at center line better
00:13:939(4,5) stack at slider's end seems difficult for Normal, put away better.
00:17:606(1,1) stack better
01:01:272(2,4)^
01:07:606(4,5,1,2,3) I suppose you can put more beautiful, like this?
Rhythm
01:18:939(1) a bit difficult for Normal I suppose. maybe like this?
Hit Sonud
00:38:939(2) add finish at head

Hard
Placement
00:30:939(1) move like this to make a tetragon ok
00:37:939(6,7) move like this? fixed
Rhythm
00:14:772 add a note here? to follow the vocal. it is Hard diff so I suppose player will expect it I tryed it but I think it's better not
Hit Sonud
01:02:939(1) add finish ok

some tiny things you should consider still need to be worked, but overall fine. support your 1st Rank, star :D thank you!! ^.^
thanks for mod! very usefull! I'll mod your map as soon as possible!! :)
Melophobia
[General]
Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko Metro Orchestra
Artist Unicode: やくしまるえつこメトロオーケストラ
Title Unicode: 少年よ我に帰れ (TV Size)
Source: MAWARU-PENGUINDRUM
Combo color 3 is too bright and brended sometimes with the video. So you should change it to another color.
The center circle of spinner-background isn't centered correctly. You can tell just by looking at this.
The file size of the video is too large considering its quality. I think it should be around 10MB so everyone can enjoy the video.

[Hard]
I suggest AR7 because this difficulty is the highest one but still "Hard". AR8 is a bit too fast imo. Also BPM is fast enough but the song and your rhythm feels unfitting with AR8 I think. And considering Hard difficulties are commonly played with DT AR7 is more suitable imo.
00:13:939 (5) - I find it weird that this slider is shaped in a different way from 00:14:939 (1) - ; It's currently a bit too curved imo. How about doing sometime like this?
00:15:439 (2,4) - Please stack them properly.
00:36:272 (1,2) - I'm thinking it's better to use the same slider shape for (1,2).
00:51:439 (4) - Finish does fit with the emphasis and is feeling good to me.
00:51:939 - How about removing this finish and adding a clap instead? I think that way the emphasis at 00:52:272 - will be more emphasized and sounds better to me.

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1) - Move this slider to x:304 y:128 so the (4,5,1) makes a perfect triangle.
00:20:272 (1) - Keep 1/1 rhythm here to keep hitsounds constant.
00:22:606 (4) - Use the same shape as (3). It currently looks a bit awkward to me.
00:25:939 (2,3) - I personally dislike this 1.5 rhythm usage.. I think you can replace (2) with 1/2 slider for a better rhythm.
00:43:439 - It may be just me but feels kinda empty here, how about adding a clap here?
00:44:939 - Rather than leaving this beat empty, I would like to extend (1) by 1/1 beat because of the long vocal.
01:01:606 (3,1) - Please stack them properly.
01:21:606 (1) - Remove the whistle from the slider path. As it is being inconsistant with the other patctern and difficulties, I assume that's your mistake.
01:26:939 (1) - ^

[Easy]
00:32:772 - Missing clap here?
00:38:106 - ^
00:50:606 (1) - The following notes appear too soon after a spinner and this slider itself doesn't fit well with this part. Remove it and remap here.
01:10:939 (4) - Add a newcombo here for the sake of consistency - Your all other newcombos are coming every 2 downbeats but this.

There are a lot of 1.5 rhythms in this difficulty. Yes, I know it's pretty hard to map this song without them, but I think many patterns can be simplified and currently this difficulty is too hard to be called "Easy" to be honest. So I'd suggest reworking on it and find more mods afterward. Hard and Normal are pretty good and ready for ranking imo so I'll leave this star icon. Good luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko Metro Orchestra ok
Artist Unicode: やくしまるえつこメトロオーケストラ ok
Title Unicode: 少年よ我に帰れ (TV Size) ok
Source: MAWARU-PENGUINDRUM hm... I saw also another mawaru ranked map and it's different :/
Combo color 3 is too bright and brended sometimes with the video. So you should change it to another color. ok, tryed another king of grey
The center circle of spinner-background isn't centered correctly. You can tell just by looking at this. fixed
The file size of the video is too large considering its quality. I think it should be around 10MB so everyone can enjoy the video. I tried this but I don't know if I would be able to reduce it, maybe I'll ask to someone other

[Hard]
I suggest AR7 because this difficulty is the highest one but still "Hard". AR8 is a bit too fast imo. Also BPM is fast enough but the song and your rhythm feels unfitting with AR8 I think. And considering Hard difficulties are commonly played with DT AR7 is more suitable imo. ok
00:13:939 (5) - I find it weird that this slider is shaped in a different way from 00:14:939 (1) - ; It's currently a bit too curved imo. How about doing sometime like this?
00:15:439 (2,4) - Please stack them properly.
00:36:272 (1,2) - I'm thinking it's better to use the same slider shape for (1,2).
00:51:439 (4) - Finish does fit with the emphasis and is feeling good to me.
00:51:939 - How about removing this finish and adding a clap instead? I think that way the emphasis at 00:52:272 - will be more emphasized and sounds better to me.
all fixed!

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1) - Move this slider to x:304 y:128 so the (4,5,1) makes a perfect triangle. fixed
00:20:272 (1) - Keep 1/1 rhythm here to keep hitsounds constant. hm... I'll leave it as it is
00:22:606 (4) - Use the same shape as (3). It currently looks a bit awkward to me. fixed
00:25:939 (2,3) - I personally dislike this 1.5 rhythm usage.. I think you can replace (2) with 1/2 slider for a better rhythm. that's ok
00:43:439 - It may be just me but feels kinda empty here, how about adding a clap here? fixed
00:44:939 - Rather than leaving this beat empty, I would like to extend (1) by 1/1 beat because of the long vocal. good idea
01:01:606 (3,1) - Please stack them properly. I tryed my best... but it's a bit strange...
01:21:606 (1) - Remove the whistle from the slider path. As it is being inconsistant with the other patctern and difficulties, I assume that's your mistake. ok ^.^
01:26:939 (1) - ^

[Easy]
00:32:772 - Missing clap here? yes XD
00:38:106 - ^
00:50:606 (1) - The following notes appear too soon after a spinner and this slider itself doesn't fit well with this part. Remove it and remap here. hm... maybe I'll leave it as it is
01:10:939 (4) - Add a newcombo here for the sake of consistency - Your all other newcombos are coming every 2 downbeats but this. ok

There are a lot of 1.5 rhythms in this difficulty. Yes, I know it's pretty hard to map this song without them, but I think many patterns can be simplified and currently this difficulty is too hard to be called "Easy" to be honest. So I'd suggest reworking on it and find more mods afterward. Hard and Normal are pretty good and ready for ranking imo so I'll leave this star icon. Good luck!I tryed something here for easy diff, let's see if it's good u.u
thank you for mod!! very usefull!
Aurele
Basically, it is not "MAWARU-PENGUINDRUM"
as seen on http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mawaru_Penguindrum
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Gabe wrote:

Basically, it is not "MAWARU-PENGUINDRUM"
as seen on http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mawaru_Penguindrum
that's right! :) I kept it as it was: as "Mawaru Penguindrum"
Haya
Uff... So it seems that it has already been modded quite a lot. Let's see what I can find!

[General]
Clear!

[Easy]
00:20:272 (1,2,3) - Place these symmetrically on the X Axis. http://puu.sh/33KT0.jpg
00:38:606 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:939 (2) - NC
01:00:273 (1,2) - Place these symmetrically on the Y Axis. http://puu.sh/33KXl.jpg
01:04:106 (3) - This one could be hard for Easy Players, since the rhythm changes so suddenly. Maybe fix it like this: http://puu.sh/33KZx.jpg
01:06:606 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:09:606 (1,2,3) - I personally don't recommend using 1/2 circles on any Normal Diff since it's pretty hard for these players to press/react this fast. http://puu.sh/33L6x.jpg
00:11:939 - Add a circle here.
00:23:106 (1) - It's getting confusing here. Try this: http://puu.sh/33Lbc.jpg
00:29:939 (3) - Move the circle 1 grid up
00:34:106 (2,3) - It's pretty hard here to find the right rhythm so just go with a slider. http://puu.sh/33LhN.jpg
01:00:272 (1,3) - Do the curves wider so it looks better with the circle in the middle. http://puu.sh/33LnO.jpg
01:10:939 (1,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:19:439 - Add a circle.
00:20:772 - Add a circle.
00:53:106 - Add a circle.

Couldn't find anything else. Nice map and good luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Haya wrote:

Uff... So it seems that it has already been modded quite a lot. Let's see what I can find!

[General]
Clear!

[Easy]
00:20:272 (1,2,3) - Place these symmetrically on the X Axis. http://puu.sh/33KT0.jpg ok
00:38:606 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:38:939 (2) - NC ^
01:00:273 (1,2) - Place these symmetrically on the Y Axis. http://puu.sh/33KXl.jpg ok
01:04:106 (3) - This one could be hard for Easy Players, since the rhythm changes so suddenly. Maybe fix it like this: http://puu.sh/33KZx.jpgI prefere to leave it as it is
01:06:606 (3) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:09:606 (1,2,3) - I personally don't recommend using 1/2 circles on any Normal Diff since it's pretty hard for these players to press/react this fast. http://puu.sh/33L6x.jpg maybe it's true but it's better leave it as it was imo
00:11:939 - Add a circle here. better not
00:23:106 (1) - It's getting confusing here. Try this: http://puu.sh/33Lbc.jpg ok, tryed this
00:29:939 (3) - Move the circle 1 grid up ok
00:34:106 (2,3) - It's pretty hard here to find the right rhythm so just go with a slider. http://puu.sh/33LhN.jpg not fixed
01:00:272 (1,3) - Do the curves wider so it looks better with the circle in the middle. http://puu.sh/33LnO.jpg ok
01:10:939 (1,3) - ^ here is not necessary imo

[Hard] nothing fixed
00:19:439 - Add a circle.
00:20:772 - Add a circle.
00:53:106 - Add a circle.

Couldn't find anything else. Nice map and good luck!
thank you for mod! :) I'll mod your map as soon as possible!
Andrea
~Easy~
  1. 00:40:939 (3,2) - These two sliders could be stacked better together if you disable grid snap.
~Normal~
  1. 00:48:939 (4) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:54:606 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
~Hard~
  1. 00:14:939 (1,2) - Why different spacing here? It doesn't look so good to me.
  2. 00:16:606 (4) - Stack this slider better under the previous one without using the grid snap.
  3. 00:48:939 (8,1) - New combo should go on (8), since the music actually changes there.
Pretty simple but good map.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~
  1. 00:40:939 (3,2) - These two sliders could be stacked better together if you disable grid snap.
~Normal~
  1. 00:48:939 (4) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:54:606 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
~Hard~
  1. 00:14:939 (1,2) - Why different spacing here? It doesn't look so good to me.
  2. 00:16:606 (4) - Stack this slider better under the previous one without using the grid snap.
  3. 00:48:939 (8,1) - New combo should go on (8), since the music actually changes there.
Pretty simple but good map.
thanks for mod, all fixed :)
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