I did know it, but your suggestion leads to sliderticks being incorrectly placed on the sliders. Also, once you did it with a certain slider, you can't touch it anymore, otherwise it will return to its initial length. Moreover, when I was in the same trouble, I contacted some BATs, and they said that I better refrain from notepad hax and do it via editor.popner wrote:
TicClick: Now you know, this is one of the few occasions that you can directly edit .osu file.
For a multi bpm song, additional timing point makes the timing complex. If you use 1/1 and 1/2 sliders at same point in different diff, you need to add different red line to fix it and then the timing becomes inconsistent and this is unrankable.
I can reject your requestI don't like this song that much
BounceBabe wrote:
Hi from the Queue!
General
The blue combo colour is not readable enough with the BG, make it brighter or use another colour! Ok, I made it brighter
Easy
00:24:428 (1) - NC should be at 00:25:858 (3) - not here 00:24:428 Ok
00:27:763 (1) - Remove NC should be here 00:29:669 (3) - then remove NC again on 00:31:564 (1) - Done
01:13:452 (1) - Nc really needed? This long slider need a NC I guess, because it is covering a big part of the song
01:28:694 (1) - Remove NC Ok
02:58:224 (1) - NC really needed? Yes, why not. Remark the Vocal change
Normal
01:42:033 (3) - This is a huge spacing mistake and shouldnt be in this diff. The pattern is consistant and then suddenly there is this antijump which is unexpected. Move this further away to match the spacing that was not intentional.. Nice catch :3. Fixed.
02:27:502 (1) - Remove NC and add hre 02:28:692 (3) - Alright.
Hard
00:25:619 (5) - NC added
00:29:192 - Add a circle for better flow I don't agree.. I decided to follow just the Vocal here.
Insane
00:22:047 (4) - Onthe following jumps you did there is the last jump with normal spacing except from here, change this and move the next slider closer to (4) to match up to the others (00:29:669 (3,4) - )
02:58:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole pattern confused me totally when playing and i couldnt manage to get this done without breaking my combo. In some places there is a too close spacing and makes it hard to play these. Also i would delete this circle 02:59:176 (7) - and this one 02:59:771 (9) - this would play much better. 03:00:128 - Add a circle here then to make a better transisiton and flow, and then move this pattern 03:00:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - closer[/color]
Something like this would be nice: I used Normal spacing in the whole of the pattern, it is not hard to be followed.. I could do it easiley and I'm not a good standard player. It is fine in my personal point of view, so I'll not change anything.
Everything else is fine! Good luck
Wolf wrote:
Hi ♪Ai se eu te pego
From my Modding Queue.
Been busy with some stuffs, sorry to keep you waiting. Sorry for my late response :/
General
Seems alright.
Easy
00:21:094 (4,5) - Would be nice if between them was a full blanket. Something like this. I prefer my way, I find it more fluent.
01:38:222 (4) - In my opinion, the whistle on the reverse arrow should be moved to the slider's end, you can clearly hear how on that specific part is a drum beat, therefore, whistle here sounds bad. And don't forget to let 01:39:651 (5) - without hitsound if considered suggestion. Follow my hitsounding properly in this section, I match the drums with the Normal Hitsound + Soft whistle, it sounds better to me. I'll keep it as it is for now.
02:21:552 (2) - Could've been made a blanket with 02:20:600 (1) -
02:22:980 (4) - Same here, would be nice a blanket with 02:23:932 (1) - I'm not searching any good blanket in there :/
02:30:596 - Why no object here, just like you did with 02:28:692 (1,2) - ? Hmm.. Okei.
02:42:992 (4) - Could be moved to x:176 y:28 to be symmetric with 02:41:564 (2) - I was searching that xD. Fixed.
Normal
I couldn't find anything here, pretty clear to me.
Hard
00:32:754 (3,4,1,2) - Hmm, (3,1) and (4,2) could've been made aligned with each other, something like this. Fixed a bit.
00:43:940 (2) - Can you manual move this slider until it matches with 00:41:798 (2) - fading spot? I dunno, it would be better imo. Nah.. it is ok as it is.
01:15:118 (4) - Would be nice if this was moved to the grid's vertical line: http://puu.sh/1TAZ9 I want a blanket with (3) here.
Insane
00:04:171 (6) - That slider up there doesn't look nice, specially considering the fact that is the beginning of the song. I don't found anything wrong with that.
01:55:133 (1,2) - Could've been made a blanket. The flow is much more important than a blanket I guess..
Won't add much stuff here either, it's pretty solid to me.
Good luck in there!
Thanks a lot for your mod Koka! Updated!!Kokatsu wrote:
Hey my friend.
I'm here for your request from Loctav's and p3n's crowded modding queue.General
That BG-quality just hurts, I can literally see the pixels. Try to find something with a better quality. I don't find anything wrong with the BG sincerely.. I'm ok with it, really.
SliderTickRate 2 is just irritating and it doesn't fit the song. You should be fine with STR 1. In my opinion, STR 2 fits better here, cover more places in the song.
The Hitsounds you use (I mean the one's you've swapped to "Normal") are too loud. If you run 70% Vol. on Soft, that's fine, but if you use these Normal-samples inbetween, they just are too noisy. Generally lowering the vol. by 10% in those sections would do, otherwise, change vol. manually by adding greenlines. The Normal Hitsound sound at the same volume as Custom Clap (that I used in other maps), in my opinion sounds properly.
You could use a Kiaiflash/Kiairefresh in the Chorus, since it sounds like it's always twice the same part there. E.g. you could stop Kiai at 01:03:694 and start it again at 01:03:932. (same goes for other Kiais aswell) I don't want flash kiai here, well.. In general I don't use flash kiai in my maps, I don't find it really fitting in this song.
Unsnapped stuff (they are because of a different offset from the weird timing; sliders ending on a redline):
Easy: 02:18:225 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
Normal: 02:18:225 (1) - Unsnapped sliderend.
Hard: 00:31:336 (5) - Unsnapped sliderend.
02:19:892 (6) - Unsnapped sliderend. Fixed all of them.Easy
It's just my impression, but AR3 feels kinda high for that slow song, it felt like being in a hurry while playing. AR2 fits the song better IMO. Is not that low imo, SV 1.20 in a 126BPM fits fine with AR3
00:42:988 (2,3,4) - This felt weird for me, even if (4) is spaced, I thought it would be earlier, maybe because of the sliderend of (2) being inbetween both notes. Just wanted to mention that.
02:36:546 (1) - Are you sure that you want to keep this slider? It's really on a bad position for new players: The break after the spinner and on red ticks. In this case I think that it is easier than putting the slider on a White Tick, because the Vocal start at this point and in general newbies try following Vocal closely.Normal
01:32:029 (4) - You've forgotten to use whistle on Sliderend. Added.
01:42:986 (4,5) - The stack for 1/1 notes on Normal seems unfitting, I would recommend you to unstack these. Hmm.. Why? I don't use stacked notes to remark 1/2 in this kind of difficulties (for example), this fit properly in my opinion.
02:11:558 (4,1) - If you want to use the cutslider (1), then you should use a regular 3-point slider for (4). It looks weird at the moment. I like how it looks the overlap.
02:42:040 (3,4,5) - You may want to add a curve in the flow of this three notes, like you did b4. FixedHard
00:19:665 (3,4) - Same as in Normal, use a 3-point Slider here. I like how it looks the Slider (4).. really.
00:22:047 (1) - It looks..weird. Maybe try to smooth it? Like that:Fixed.
00:25:619 (1,3,4) - And again, I would recommend the simple slidershape for the cutslider. Moreover, you could add a blanketing slider for (4). I really like how it flows this pattern.. I really prefer to keep it as it is.
01:58:944 (5,6) - Would look better if (5)'s end would cover the trail of (6) completely. Like this:Done.
That Hard is awesome.Insane
OD +1, I am a miserable Accuracy player and I nearly SS'd this on my first try. If you say so.
00:06:317 (4,5,6) - It's just an impression but you space this pattern wider later in the song and you use different hitsounds than usually here. For these reasons I would like to see this (and similar) patterns in an own combo. (NC on first note/NC on following note). I will mention the similar patterns.
00:13:945 (1,2,3) - ^
00:18:236 (1,2) - Why not just mirror (1)? Alright
00:21:570 (2,3,4) - See above.
00:25:381 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:192 (1,2,3) - ^ I get it.. Fixed all these points.
01:58:944 (1,2) - They look loose together. I would shape them similar. Yes.. I used the shape of (2) because flow much better.
02:14:892 (3,5) - derp cutsliders. Same as always.
02:23:932 (1,2,3) - It totally looks like a 1/4 stream. If you want to keep them on a lower space, stack them directly under (1)'s ending.
02:25:598 (5,6) - This doesn't look good here, since it's the only pattern like this. Stack (6) on (5) or space it. Meh.. both stacked.
02:46:324 (1,2,3) - Why customstack? It's just 100% like osu! would stack it on it's own, lol. It is exactly the same during the gameplay xD.
02:50:370 (1,2,3) - The jump, combined with the reversed direction than b4 (you have to move up/left to catch (1) but have to go right to get the streamnotes) make this harder to play than other patterns you use. I'd recommend to just ctrl+g this three notes. Ok
Awesome mapset, I love your mapping. <3 Thanks :3
Good luck with rank.
Thanks for this mod TVO. Updated!!TheVileOne wrote:
Sorry for such a long wait. It hasn't been the best time to mod lately.
Easy
00:12:515 (3,4) - Small, but for this kind of pacing, very tiny changes in spacing are noticeable while playing. If you turned grid snap off, you can get this 1.00 on both sides of 4. This is really nazi, doesn't affect the Gameplay in any way. It is the same if I fix it or not, I'll keep it as it is.
00:16:329 (3,4) - I was debating whether I should mention this. But is this 0.97 intentional here? It's plays fine as 0.97 and 1.00, so flow is not a problem. i just noticed that you had perfect spacing here 00:46:320 (5,1) -. You don't need to change it, just noting that it's different in case you weren't aware. lol. Fixed anyways
00:19:188 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about this approach. You made 2,3,4 lopsided, so that you could have a blanket with 5, but IMO you could have a pattern that uses a double blanket that doesn't need such a steep angle into 4. I came up with http://puu.sh/1ZYPf < Notice the reduced angle. I only changed the position of 4 and then changed 5 to achieved the double blanket. 5 could be blanketed with 4 instead. I don't recommend such a steep angle into 4, but you could achieve a double blanket by rotating 4 to be parallel with x axis. Let me just mention that the end part of the combo needs polishing too and my solution creates a much better transition. http://puu.sh/1ZZ37 k
00:28:716 (4,1) - Just better to have a perfect blanket here. I don't want a perfect blanket here, sincerely.
01:32:505 (2) - I suggest moving slightly to the left to increase the distance between the edge of the repeat of the next slider and the body of this slider. Currently I think it's slightly too close and about a 1 unit change would help. Of course there are other ways to fix this too. I don't think so, sorry.
01:40:127 - Feels empty to me, but it plays alright without it. I would prefer it mapped if possible, because gaps erase the beat. Not saying it's hard at all to pick back up, but it feels like an artificial lull in the beat. I feel it good, because in this part I'm following especially the Drums, so the vocal it is in a 2nd place, and a little stop here fits fine for beginners in my opinion.
02:10:130 (3,4,5) - I don't like your chosen angles here. The angles don't match the notes in between the transition and doesn't match the angle going into 3. I suggest rotating the pattern by 6 degrees and adjusting spacing. Okey.
02:42:992 (4,5) - 1.00 exactly? So little man, so little. It is completely unnecesary, let me keep the Grid Snap usage here.
Normal
This map was a lot of fun to play.
00:18:236 (1) - Maybe move this to a more favorable position. I kind of like how it plays with increased spacing (because it transverses a red line), so what do you think about placing on the vertical line for symmetry. Or another option that retains distance snap is moving it to x 238 y 297. The flow seems to be better when the note is placed here. I don't want to increase the Spacing just for symetry. I'll keep it as it is.
00:20:856 (4,5) - A lot of whistles to be placing on red ticks IMO. Removed 2 Whistles from this pattern.
00:26:810 (5,6,1,2,3) - I find it unusual on both a technical and flow standpoint that you switch to the much simpler beat right after fully mapping the vocals at the start. How about a timeline like this http://puu.sh/2043P or you could try placing the notes in a more appealing way, but you should try to incorporate more of the vocals here. Actually all the notes are following properly the Vocal, I don't find the necesary to change this pattern, I want to follow the vocal here and this pattern is doing that.
00:32:992 (3,1) - Not straight.Meh.. done.
00:35:610 - Drum sample usage sounds too loud. Perhaps adjust so that more closely follows the music. I'm referring to all the drum usage in this section. You didn't change the volume when the louder kiai time started, so listen to the blending here 00:51:794 - . Adjust so that the drums blend the same way to the part before the kiai. In my opinion they follow the Drums properly.
00:55:602 - Okay this one in particular sounds louder than the beat. Maybe a slight tweak to this, might not be necessary.
00:59:172 (3,4,5) - Equal spacing. Done.
01:10:596 (2,3) - Doesn't look right. Please make them look like they go together. Okey.
01:11:548 (3,4,5) - Maybe it would sound better if the drums were volume adjusted. The second slider sounds especially off, since the start of the slider and the end of it have greatly different volumed sounds but the drum sound is the same volume.Fixed.
01:22:978 (1,2,3) - Exactly 1.00/01 would be better than 0.98 I can't find the difference. Anyways fixed.
01:32:029 (4) - Forgot a Normal sampleset here Oh.. true. Added
01:55:133 (3,4) - 1.00/01 is better here. It would allow you to more closer follow the curve of 2. Try moving the note to x 189 y 215 Okey (but same as before :/)
02:14:415 (3,4) - Make blanket better? Hmm.. Okey.
02:16:320 (1,2,3) - Carries unusual flow compared to the rest of the map so far. It might be better if 02:16:558 - wasn't skipped. I guess it's fine the way it is though.
02:24:170 (2) - I rather like how it plays without this note. Removed.
Hard
00:31:802 (1,2,3) - could be lined up a lot better. Fixed.
00:48:700 (1,2) - Improve blanket? I find the blanket well.
00:57:982 (1) - So crooked >.< Make it not crooked? I don't find it crooked :/
01:13:452 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest a smoother curve. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605769 Done.
01:29:409 (3,4,5) - I don't like how this plays. I like having the slider 01:29:885 - instead. What do you think? I like your way. fixed.
01:47:273 (3,4) - Doesn't look parallel to me and should be. Fixed
02:04:423 (4,1,2,3) - It would be better if you cleaned up this spacing. Make it all as close to 1.00 as you can get it. Alrighty.
02:07:272 (2,3) - Could you make this look better? I think that actually looks better but the flow could be better in my opinion.. But the flow is not the best. I made a more fluent pattern, plays better now.
02:14:415 (1,2) - Misaligned. It's not a terribly big deal, but it would be better if it were perfect. I know the placement after this part are limited, so if you can make it work, then fine. It is almost the same thing. I think that it is not a problem if I leave it as it is.
02:29:406 (6,7,8) - Please fix this spacing here. Meh.. Ok.
02:33:928 (3,4) - Not accurately following the beat or perhaps not the beat i expected. It's awkward. you should do something else here. Actually follow the vocal properly. The first note (3) is following the word 'medio', especially the last syllable and (4) it is following the word 'del'.
Insane
The flow got a bit random towards the end IMO.
00:18:950 (2) - Doesn't look that great under 1, but the options are limited. I'm fine with it.
00:24:667 (5) - Move down 1 unit? I feel it's better there. Move the blanketed note down a unit as well? Okey.
00:27:287 (5,6,7) - Weird flow here. 5,6 doesn't sound like an ideal place for a jump IMO. It's playable, but not very fitting. Not sure what you should do instead though. I think that the jump fit properly with the vocal.
00:28:001 (7,8) - Perfect blanket here would just be better.
00:29:907 (4,5) - Please line this up better. ok
00:33:706 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Awesome part! <333 Thanks :3
01:14:404 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Pattern is simple compared to other patterns you are using. It seems out of place. Perhaps sneak a slider in there to make it more interesting. Hmm.. Nah..
01:55:133 (1,2) - If you increase the snap here, you could create a better proximity. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605816 k
02:19:177 (3,4,5) - I would prefer that this have more form. How about a triangle here? I think that it is ok as it is.
02:37:984 (4,5) - Not much form to these sliders. I'll just leave that as a comment, I'm not sure if they should be changed.
02:48:228 (2,1) - For some reason this doesn't play right at 1.7 snap. ._. reduced a bit.
Conclusion
Future BAT... lol.. Thanks :3
464,112,140600,6,0,P|492:60|483:1,1,120,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
369,38,141552,2,0,P|341:90|349:148,1,120,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
Pokie wrote:
Request from Forum PM
Feel free to ignore everything since they're 100% suggestionsEasy
01:38:222 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - uhh.. I can't find out any changes from music. Is it intentional to place whistles with claps here? I'd say suspecting these are misplaced at the moment. xD
01:45:844 (3,4,1,2) - ^, These too. I can listen a particular sound that fits properly a Whistle and at the same time I have to follow the 2-4 consistent clap pattern, for this reason I'll keep that as it is.02:30:596 (4,5) - How about a blanket for these notes? I prefer to keep the symetry here.
- - Actually you can ignore ^these^ two lines, just saying I'd like placing hitsounds with a consistence way. xD
02:49:656 (2) - (slider's reverse) I'd say Normal-hitnormal fits better than drum-clap here xD I don't agree with that, sorry.
[/list]Normal
- 00:14:898 (1,2,3,4) - hmmm...These whistles are on 1,3 beats. I don't know if you feel like to keep consistency with 00:10:608 (1,2,3,4) - If yes, put them to 2,4 beats properly? But this is not the way, actually it doesn't sound properly and the sound in the music is not the same.
01:38:698 - Well again clap+whistles orz... Same response as before.
02:15:606 (4) - (slider's head) hmm, imo this whistle should be placed on 02:14:415 (3) - 's slider's tail instead. Especially when you're using whistles on only 1,3 beats constantly. Sorry, but I prefer my hitsounding here.Hard
- Drum hitsounds are placed randomly on my sight orz...That makes me feel sad. I can listen the drums over the red ticks, It was all checked before to add the hitsounding
Insane
- For those stacks you've did them manually: Keep them in same spacing which auto-stack did?
00:33:706 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 00:55:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Just saying, there are plenty choices of pattern instead of placing these stacks in a random place >_<!! I have to repeat that, IT IS NOT RANDOM!! In addition, a lot of people loves this kind of patterns, so this is part of personal opinions, just that.
For Insane: Personally thought that it's lack of consistency of patterns and jumps, plus those manual stacks are quite confusing when they have a similar spacing with 1/4 streams orz... In general, I didn't use a lot of jumps, the jumps placed in general are following the combo changes and drum sounds, so I think that I can't be inconsistent if I do that :/
Overall: Hitsoundings may need some improvement.
That's all I can do atm >_< Good luck mancuso!
Chewin wrote:
General
- Honestly I would change the actual BG because the singers' heads are cut by osu! resolution and it looks bad in my opinion: http://puu.sh/23Xtc o.o As I said before, it is okey in my way :/.
- (In all your diff) I would set the last spinner's end on 03:01:794 , it looks more logical imo (don't forget to snap the kiai time end here as well, if you agree) I don't agree with that, I want to finish the map in the last little sound, so I'll keep it as it is.
Easy
- 00:13:945 (5) - I don't like drum addition on this circle. This element is still going on the previous combo: 00:10:608 (1,2,3,4) - and so I would keep hitsound consistency using soft default whistle on it. I suggest you it also because it sounds bad together with drum addition you set on 00:14:422 (1) - to be honest. Then it would be better to set and start the drum hitsound from 00:14:422 (1) - where you have used that new combo, it sounds much better and it also looks more logical. I like how it sounds, it follow properly the sound in the music imo.
Normal
- 00:38:228 (6) - I like this slider lol lol. Thanks xD
Hard
- 02:21:552 (4) - This slider would flow better if you decided to CTRL + G it. Nah.. Actually flows better imo.
Insane
- HP -1? Ugh. I think that the HP is coherent in this diff.
This diff can still be improved. I don't like those random jumps and spacings, to be honest.. Well, I fix your mod and did some other changes by myself. I think that it is much better now (anyways I didn't touch the diff that much
That's it, good luck with this mapset, mancuso. :3
)Thanks for this mod, Natsu. Sorry for the late responseNatsu wrote:
Hi from my QueueGeneral
- Just the bg i thing is not really good maybe get other? I'll try to find a better bg as soon as I can.
- Maybe lower the volume clap heard annoying It sounds fine for me
Easy:
- fine for me
Normal:
- 01:51:560 add circle reason is you add one here 00:46:796 add it (01:51:560) or remmove (00:46:796) But.. it is not exactly the same. I don't have any sound at this place but in 00:46:796 I have the breath singer if you listen properly
02:36:546 remove clap and add whistle like insane Sure
02:45:848 this touch hp bar with hardrock better move it to other place It is ok for me.Hard:
- 00:29:907 add whistle here like you did it on insane Alrighty
00:58:696 why no make it like 00:57:982 Because I want to experiment other things
01:22:978 add finish better after break start the song stronger is better imo (if you do this add it on all diffs) Okas
01:51:560 add circle reason is you add one here 00:46:796 add it (01:51:560) or remmove (00:46:796) same as insane Same as Normal
02:09:415 move it a little down since almost touch hp bar wut? it's ok for me this
02:36:546 remove clap and add whistle like insane Done.Insane:Thats all hope i help in something
- 00:02:979 i fee weird start the song without hitsound maybe add a whistle here? if you do add it on al diffs Sounds fine without hitsounds.
00:09:654 according to your pattern whistle should be in the tail of the slider but really sound good in the start maybe add it both sides Okas
00:18:236 (1,2) - this 2 whistles in the head of the slider sound a little hight imo maybe lower volume in that part?
00:21:570 (1,2,3) - this should have the same distance maybe move 00:22:047 to x:484 y:204 for fix the distance and better flow with 00:22:285 Sure thing
00:26:572 here maybe you can move it to x:432 y:368 for be perfect with 00:25:858 this is nazi but i think look better Okas xD
00:38:942 (7,1) - when i play this i feel weird since they are not in line maybe can you make a perfect line there? Hmm.. Plays fine for me as it is.
01:15:356 why new combo here? other diffs dont have it better remove it :Truestory: Removed
01:51:560 add circle reason is you add one here 00:46:796 add it (01:51:560) or remmove (00:46:796) Same as previous diffs.
02:28:216 unstack it since i feel bad flow here just my opinion Done.
03:01:794 Add whistle since i feel weird end the song without a hitsound if you do this add it on all the diffs And.. Added
. Updated!spam spam . .Gabe wrote:
yay, it's back
xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General
- • 00:18:236 ~ 00:33:468 - Volume is too high here imo, reduce it a little. (40% should be fine) Ok. Reduced
Easy
- • 00:18:712 (1) - Move this circle at x:256 y:228. In my opinion flows a bit better as it is.
• 00:20:617 (3) - ^ (^)
• 02:01:088 (1) - I don't really like this slider, try to make it like this: Could you give me a code? I always had problems making that kind of Sliders
• 02:30:596 (4,5) - Move (4) at x:256 y:76 and (5) at x:200 y:188. Sure.
Normal
- • 00:40:846 (3) - Move this circle at x:256 y:33. To me flows better as it is.
• 01:13:452 (1) - Use a simple ~ slider here, it fits better imo. Meh.. Ok
• 01:57:277 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:300 y:164. Good idea. Added.
Hard
- • 00:09:654 (5) - If I were you I'd end this slider 1/2 later to better follow the music. I prefer to leave it as it is. I think that follow better the instrumental in my way.
• 00:27:287 (4) - Flip this slider horizontally for a better flow. I flipped (3) horizontally instead. It provides a similar effect
• 00:31:802 (1,2,3) - Ugly spacing, try this:
• 01:02:266 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, try to make a more natural flow. Ok, I did something similar as you showed me in both cases
Insane
- • 00:33:706 (1,2,1,2,1,2 and next similar patterns) - I don't really like this spacing, it doesn't really fit the song imo, if you want to keep it then use this kind of spacing more often, right now it seems random, for example 00:55:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) if you want to use this spacing here then use it in the next kiai as well. (01:59:897, 02:41:802) I changed a bit those patterns.
That's all, solid mapset, call me after your fixes for a recheck.
Lizbeth wrote:
Hello Hi :3
I didnt find anything unrankable but here are some suggestions
I noticed you placed new combos on big white ticks but I think it splitted some patterns and made your map look messy. Maybe you wanna consider group the objects by pattern. Like if you do a wavy pattern with circles from one side of the screen to the other, dont put a new combo in the second note just because there s a big white tick there. I hope you get my point.
[Insane]
00:06:317 (1,2,3) - Maybe increase the space between them would be a good idea <": I thought so too, but a lot of people complain me about that, so i decided to reduce the spacing between the objects
00:09:654 (8) - I think that this with a slow down fits good. Would be good, but I like the way as it is now.
00:13:945 (1,2,3) - keep these 3 in a individual combo Oh.. yes. Fixed
00:18:236 (1,2) - Maybe move the bottom slider to the right so it looks like this http://puu.sh/2J3DD.jpg Done
00:25:381 (1,2,3) - I think you should put the 3 circles as you did before Oh, sure.
00:29:192 (1,2,3) - again with keeping these in an individual combo Alright.
00:34:658 (1,2,3) - I didnt like how the last note isnt stacked... I changed a bit this pattern.
00:35:372 (1) - delete and add note here: 00:35:610 -
00:38:942 (7) - delete this note and put the next object farther I prefer to leave these 2 points as they are.
00:46:796 (1) - Delete it This note is following the singer breath if you listen the music properly
[Hard]
00:05:363 (1,2) - aww i wanted to see the three notes like insane, not in jumps ofc, buttttt disappointed you didnt use that pattern for hard aswell. Meh.. It is following the same these Slider, let me leave them pls
00:23:952 (1) - I think this should be part of previous combo Okas
00:32:754 (3) - move this up a bit to make the circle pattern more smoothy Fixed on xxheroxx's mod
00:43:464 - hmmm I think is better to use single notes instead of custom sound the slider tick. maybe shorten slider by half beat and add a repeat I reduced the Slider length in 1/2 and I added a Note after that
00:46:796 (1) - same has insane, delete it Same thing
00:58:696 (2) - Do same shape as slider before Nah.. I wanted to experiment different things.
01:06:074 (1) - same i mentioned before ...
01:12:500 (3) - delete Okas
01:29:647 - I think here is missing a note, maybe short slider by half beat and add a repeat Yes!
02:03:470 - same i mentioned before (same for other like this) hehe But in this case it is following the 'Yoooo' in the vocals. So, I'll leave this one.
02:17:511 (3,4) - I think these should be part of next combo Oh.. Totally agree.
[Normal]
01:08:692 (6) - I think this should be part of next combo set Agree.
01:23:930 (4,1) - These looks messy, i know you re placing new combos on big white tick, but sometimes can turn messy splitting patterns like this. I got your point here
01:25:836 (2,3,1,2,3) - another example of that. (^)
[Easy]
00:16:805 (4) - Sounds odd, maybe you should shorten by half beat and then add a repeat It follows fine the Instrumental I guess.
00:46:796 (1) - same as above And the vocals in this case.
01:13:452 (1) - make that the bottom peek matched with the normal hit <": ?
01:22:978 to 01:35:840 - I didnt like this whole thing for the same reason i meantioned before of the customized slider tick, why not place a beat on those? But in this case I follow the vocals properly, but if I didn't add those claps on the Slider ticks the pattern would sound weird. I think I did a good mixture here
Star cuz i liked the map, and extra star for spanish songs taking over
byeeee~~
4 days ago :cGabe wrote:
IIHHHHHHH. If it's still not ranked tomorrow, I would like to give it a shot. :3
Yeah.. I am sorry.Makyu wrote:
4 days ago :cGabe wrote:
IIHHHHHHH. If it's still not ranked tomorrow, I would like to give it a shot. :3
Useful, really useful.. I think my Insane works much better nowGonzvlo wrote:
|General||Easy|
- Tags: En realidad los generos no deberían ir en los tags, los tags son para las cosas relacionadas a la canción, pero bueno si realmente quieres dejar "punk", estaría bien. Prefiero dejarlo, viendo que es una funcion de Punk Rock, de alguna manera tiene algo que ver con la cancion xD. Ademas, de que Punk no va en el genero de la cancion
- Background: La imagén está bien pero está un poco borrosa, especialmente cuando lo ves en una resolución más grande que 800x600. El 99% de los nuevos mapas rankeados tienen BGs que se ven bastante bien en Full Screen, sería mucho mejor si encuentras la misma imagen en una mejor calidad, o en defecto otra imagen. Mucha gente me sugirio esto. AYUDAME PLS!
- Hitsounds: Los hitsounds en los ticks eh... no están tan mal, pero no es algo que deberías usar otra vez en tus futuros mapas D: Me vuelven loco, alguna gente me dice que los use y otras que no. Igual como he dicho en otros maps, no me gustan mucho, pero los senti bien en esta cancion
- Timing: En test no encuentro mayores problemas, a veces un par de ms pero las líneas me parecen un poco extrañas, en especifico como hay un cambio de BPM en el segundo coro pero no en el primero. Voy a verlo más en detalle o si podrías, sería bueno que alguien más lo confirme Vere lo que puedo hacer.
|Insane|
- 00:41:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Este combo dura mucho para un Easy, lo complica aún más que hay mucho espacio entre las últimas notas. Intenta dividirlo.
- 00:56:316 (1,2,3,4) - Aqui sucede lo mismo ^
- 01:22:978 (1,2,3,4,5) - El combo se extiende demasiado ^
- 01:30:600 (1,2,3) - Este lo tienes que juntar con el último slider del anterior y dejar el último slider de este para el próximo combo. ^ Todo listo hasta aca.
- 02:28:692 (1,2,3) - El ritmo que sigues no es muy intuitivo, si deseas dejar algunos espacios sugiero algo así Listo, pero con distinto ritmo
- 02:36:546 - No está bueno que comienzes después de un spinner en offbeat, incluso si usas un slider. Sugiero algo más intuitivo como esto. Ok, Ok.
Stuff mentioned in |Insane| is mostly inconsistencies and suggestions that should improve the map, the stuff mentioned in |Easy| are some issues that should be fixed.
- 00:07:032 (1,2,3,4) - Todo este conjunto de sliders debería comenzar 1/2 antes . A lo que me refiero a que el "hold" de la guitarra/bajo comienza en un tick blanco y termina en el rojo, tu empezaste los sliders en el rojo, es decir en un "offbeat", dejando los "holds" sin mappear. No sé si entiendes lo que digo, pero basicamente debería ser así Escucha 00:07:270 - en 25% y entenderás lo que digo. Bueno, esto se puede arreglar fácilmente si corres todos los sliders 1/2 atrás o adelante, pero tendrías que ajustar alguno de los objetos que van antes o despues de los sliders. Wee.. Arregle esto a mi manera..
- 00:10:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Este patrón está mucho mejor, solo hay un slider que comienza en 1/2 que en realidad está aceptable. Ok, lo dejo asi entonces haha xD.
- 00:14:660 (1,2,3) - Esto es basicamente el mismo ritmo que este anterior pero comenzaste los sliders en el offbeat :c. No digo que exactamente todos comienzen en 1/1 en la canción pero la mayoría sí. Fixed.
- 00:33:706 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - No encuentro muy bueno que hayas usado está técnica en esta parte, especialmente luego de ese patrón de "jumps". En realidad te sugiero que vuelvas a los jumps o intentes otra cosa, no me parece que va bien aqui. Si aún así decides mantenerlo, esta técnica de saltos en pares va de arriba a abajo para que el "flow" sea bueno, el último "par" (en este caso, trio) está al revés, debería ser así. (Realmente creo que no deberías usarlo aqui : x) Uh.. me gusto esta sugerencia, me gusta como fluye, lo pude hacer tranquilamente la primera vez que lo jugue despues de hacer el cambio
- 00:55:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - En esta parte me parece que está bien, ya que estos saltos siempre se usan cuando hay un ritmo 1/2 constante, como aquí. Sin embargo, el último par de nuevo está al revés, creo que intentas usar una variante de la técnica original, pero no va muy bien. Mejor dale reverse al último par. Buenoo.. :3
- 01:04:884 - Siguiendo tu patrón, aqui deberían haber saltos. Esto es importante, los jumps están bastante bien y debería mantener la consistencia. Incremente un poco el espacio, pero no tanto
- 01:53:466 - Fue notable la ausencia de tus jumps en este coro LOL, no quiero mas jumps ahi xD
- 02:44:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Por el stacks, los cambios de spacing de 1/2 en este coro están un poco confusos, sugiero que todos usen el mismo espacio entre notas, puedes mantener el espacio usado para 3,4,5 o 5,6,7 ambos estarían bien pero que sea el mismo para todos. Use 1.0x entre todas las Notas.
- 02:32:024 (1,2,3) - Esto no debería tener NCs? Creo que entendi
- Sobre tus jumps de 3 notas, están bien, me gustan. Sin embargo, noté que a partir del 1er coro comparten el combo con otro patrón, mientras que antes los jumps eran un solo combo. Sería mejor si mantuvieras la consistencia en donde los jump ocupan un solo combo. Estuve arreglando algunos de ellos.
Also, sorry Gabe! mancuso asked me to check this. Anyhow, it'd be great if you could check the map anyway.
Edit:
I was reading through the previous mods and I've noticed that the BG issue has been mentioned a lot, thus, this is a must (mwhahaha). Don't worry, talk to me in-game and we'll see what we can do about it.
