1. alacat's Normal (3.97 stars, 128 notes)
2. Easy (2.56 stars, 89 notes)
3. Hard (4.81 stars, 176 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 300 notes)

Quilt wrote:

1st
good song

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

oo!

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

oo!

1. This diff will be played better if AR is bumped +1. Try it and you'll see. ^^
2. 00:29:961 (1,2,3,4) - It would be much better if you could make a perfect beat blanket with these sliders for better gameplay in terms of visuals. XD
3. 00:34:470 (1) - Some parts of this slider's end is overlapping with the previous slider which looks a bit ugly (for me :O). Try to find a way to avoid it.
4. 00:43:304 - I think it's better to add a circle here instead and make the spinner start on 00:43:488 instead. It plays better for me.
5. 00:54:347 (2) - This slider is not going with the combo flow and doesn't really make sense in the music to me. I suggest you remove the reverse instead and add a circle with a new combo on 00:55:083 and remove new combo on 00:55:451.
6. 00:58:028 (1) - Add a finish hit sound at the start of this slider. This suggestion also implies on 00:59:500. (:

1. 00:16:710 (3) - I think you can still improve this wave slider. It would be better if wave is bigger and parallel. This suggestion also includes the slider in 00:22:599 (3).
2. 00:43:304 - I think it's better to add a circle here instead and make the spinner start on 00:43:488 instead. It plays better for me.
3. 01:05:758 (4,6) - Increasing the volume of the finish hit sounds here sound better imo.
4. 01:27:660 (3) - Perhaps try adding a new combo here? All the other diffs have new combos on this part.

1. 00:13:029 (2) - I don't if it's just me but this slider's end don't look good. Using 3 slider points would be better imo.
2. 01:17:169 (1,2) - Gameplay would be better if you would perfect the blankets on these sliders.

1. 00:11:004 (1) - It would be better if you could make the circular flow in this slider a bit larger. Also, you might wanna avoid the overlap of the circle with the next circle for better gameplay? XD
2. 00:47:353 (1) - I don't think a new combo is necessary on this circle. Remove it please?

1. 標題Tv Size不括弧大丈夫?
2. tags上ending

1. 00:02:722 (2) - 感覺去一個reserve然後補1/1 slider比較合音樂 因為從00:03:458 - 這裡開始音樂就不跟00:02:722 - 相干了 還是獨立下
   
2. 00:16:342 (2) - 建議頭疊在(4)下面 看起來比較舒服orz
3. 00:18:918 (2) - (end) finish? 音樂有個音 ._.
4. 01:11:279 (2) - DS超那麼多大丈夫?

1. 00:12:293 (1) - (end) finish? other diffs add finishes here ._.
2. 00:19:655 (3) - finish? There's a sound in the music orz
   I love this diff~

1. 00:19:655 (4) - finish 原因同Easy
2. 00:50:666 (1,2) - 試這個 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/520447
   
   code

   172,56,50666,6,0,P|128:20|48:48|44:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   72,176,51218,2,0,P|116:212|196:184|200:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   ^ 忘了把(2)的clap刪了 = =
3. 00:58:028 (1,2,5) - 如果不懶的話可以複製下上面的形狀代替這個

1. 00:04:563 (4) - (begin) 忘了clap
2. 00:38:151 (1,2,1) - 這spacing能不能統一 實在有點像00:31:709 (4,5) - 這種1/2 orz
3. 00:56:556 (7,1) - Swap NC, 然後我會建議 (6,7)之間擺00:55:451 (3,4) - 這種跳比較對稱
4. 01:02:997 (2,3,4) - 等邊三角型
5. 01:06:494 (1,3) - 聽起來應該swap nc才對的上vocal

1. looks fine

1. 00:29:325 - unsnapped
2. 00:40:359 (1) - it will be looks more beautiful if you change to this~ http://puu.sh/1zaTN
3. 00:43:120 (4) - stack on 00:42:383 (2) -
4. 00:47:821 - unsnapped
5. 01:07:231 (5) - stack on 01:06:126 (3) - head

1. DR+1 cuz no jump and no stream
2. 01:14:776 (4) - i think its looks doesnt beautiful... X/ can you change to other forms?

1. nothing to say

1. 00:59:500 (1) - touch HP bar, 1grid down
2. 01:12:752 (1) - same, 01:12:752 (1,2,3,4) - 2grid down

NoHitter wrote:

I honestly can't believe this is actually an ED. This song reminds me more of classical music and waltz 00:30:053 -> 00:38:887 especially. yea that's why it's so awesome because of how unique it is

[General]
Resnap all notes in all diffs. Some notes are unsnapped by 1ms. (example hitobjects at 00:56:556 should be at 00:56:555) strange.. I resnapped everything again
Are you sure the title uses ~TV size~ instead of (TV Size) Well actually I can't verify this anywhere, so I'll just stick with the brackets

[Easy]
- 00:04:563 (3) - Add a whistle at the end here. It matches with the music. done
- 00:25:912 () - Add a note with a finish here, so it won't break your hitsounding pattern. The next slider also plays kind of oddly at least IMO without this note. done
- 00:52:874 (3) - The overlap with 00:51:034 (4) really doesn't look that good. Reposition the combo? done
- 00:52:138 (1) - Add finish here to emphasize the music here. sry I don't really like adding finishes in the middle of kiai phrase, so I just added whistle pattern on all the strong white ticks
- 00:56:556 (3) - Add finish at the start of this slider. It's to continue the pattern of finishes you started at 00:53:610 (1) and 00:55:083 (1). ^same as before
- 01:01:341 (2) - The overlap with 00:59:500 (1) doesn't look good. Though I suppose it would be difficult to find a good way to reposition this... yea.. this one's kinda hard so I dont' think i'll move anything. plus it doesn't block the visibility
- 01:02:445 (3) - Add finish to emphasize the music. ^same as before
- 01:27:660 (1,2) - You might want to reposition these? They look so similar with 01:25:451 (4), and it would be better to change it up a bit. Maybe like this? done

[Hard]
- 00:04:563 (4) - Add a whistle at the end here. It matches with the music. done
- 00:46:985 (1) - This slider feels out of place here. I would suggest just extending the spinner to the slider end or lowering the volume, because atm it's loud. ok i'll lower the volume. I just wanna vary things up from normal to Insane. so between 1 large spinner and nothing mapped, I'll use this slider
- 00:52:138 (1) - Add finish here to emphasize the music here. ^same as before
- 00:56:556 (1) - Same as above. ^same as before
- 01:02:445 (3) - Add finish to emphasize the music. ^same as before

[Insane]
- Considering adding a spinner here to get score variation. well maybe not here.. can't find a good place
- 00:04:563 (3) - Add a whistle at the end here. It matches with the music. done
- 00:05:851 (1) - The new combo here is redundant. No need for it. done
- 00:11:004 (1) - You can rotate this so that it doesn't overlap with (2). Like this. done
- 00:48:090 (1) - The new combo here is redundant. No need for it. done
- 00:52:138 (1) - Add finish here to emphasize the music here. well same reasons as above~
- 00:56:556 (1) - Same as above. ^same as before
- 01:02:445 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the music. ^same as before
- 01:27:660 (1,2,3,4) - Was kind of expecting a jump or at least an increase in spacing for this combo given that it's the end of the song and the previous combo was jumpy. well this is the end of the song so I figured we don't have to be that jumpy anymore. Plus it's mimicking over here: 00:05:115 (1,2,3,4) both the music and the map


Bonus: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521801
you keep dc-ing so I couldn't spec!

merchat7 wrote:

Wakeshima = surname
Kanon = firstname

So according to the ranking criteria for eastern artist name, the artist is correct. Checked this through several sources.

Also good luck on rank holysoup!

1. You must set slider tick 2 in the easy diff

1. 00:13:397 (2) - Finish to match the clash in the cymbals
2. 00:59:500 (1) - This slider touches HP bar, move it else where
3. 01:19:377 (2) - There should be a finish on the slider head, as I told you for 00:13:397 (2)

1. To be honest I think the current SV is too high for a normal diff. You really should decrease it.
2. 00:24:808 (2,4,5) - I can hear cymbals sound in the music. What about to add some finishes on (2)'s tail, (4) circle and (5)'s arrow?
3. 00:26:280 (5) - If I was you, I would remove the repeat here adding a circle on the downbeat 00:27:017 with new combo
4. 00:30:421 (1) - This slider is too soon after the spinner for a normal
5. 00:38:519 (1) - ^ remove circle?
6. 01:19:377 (2) - Finish on the tail, to keep consistency with 00:24:808 (2) of my suggestion

1. 01:00:420 (5) - Honestly I don't like this whistle on the body, I would remove it

1. 01:00:420 (1) - Same of hard
2. 01:16:433 (4) - (nazi) To keep symmetry with 01:16:801 (5) move this on x:206 y:150 (without grid snap)
3. 01:24:531 (7) - There should be new combo here according to previous patterns

Chewin wrote:

hi

~General~

1. You must set slider tick 2 in the easy diff

well this is actually intentional. If you set the tickrate to 2 in [Easy], you'll realize it doesn't fit the song at all with all the long sliders. In fact, it makes it extremely noisy and out of place for the music. Throughout the map, I have put hitsounds on the tickrates and along with tickrate 1, it works out perfectly. If I change it to tickrate 2, the extra ticks during long sliders makes the song sound random because sometimes it will fit, most of the time it's out of place. The ranking rules list different tickrates as a guideline and not a rule so it's not enforced. Thus, the reason I chose to leave it at tickrate 1 is because it does not play well with the map and song, not because of other reasons. You can see right from the start of the map, 00:00:514 (1) - with tickrate 2 here, it sounds very strange
~Easy~

1. 00:13:397 (2) - Finish to match the clash in the cymbals fixed
2. 00:59:500 (1) - This slider touches HP bar, move it else where fixed
3. 01:19:377 (2) - There should be a finish on the slider head, as I told you for 00:13:397 (2) this one I didn't add because I feel the song already has 3 finish sounds there's no need to amplify it, also it's not on a downbeat so it sounds weird to me

~Hard~

1. 01:00:420 (5) - Honestly I don't like this whistle on the body, I would remove it

fixed

~Insane~

1. 01:00:420 (1) - Same of hard fixed
2. 01:16:433 (4) - (nazi) To keep symmetry with 01:16:801 (5) move this on x:206 y:150 (without grid snap) fixed
3. 01:24:531 (7) - There should be new combo here according to previous patternsfixed

I can't rank this mapset now because of wrong slider tick in the easy diff. Ask NoHitter for a rebubble and I will rank ;3

hoLysoup wrote:

わいいいいいいい!!

Sekai-nyan wrote:

lol bakasoup

1. the artist name should be Kanon Wakeshima since this is which she chooses to use
   
   her offical website
   
   and some album covers
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   i know it may be looked weird a bit, but since the name she selected is "Kanon Wakeshima" but not "Wakeshima Kanon", we must respect to her choice.

Scorpiour wrote:

[General]

1. the artist name should be Kanon Wakeshima since this is which she chooses to use
   
   her offical website
   
   and some album covers
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   i know it may be looked weird a bit, but since the name she selected is "Kanon Wakeshima" but not "Wakeshima Kanon", we must respect to her choice.

Scorpiour wrote:

Real name is not equal to Artist name, that's why it must be changed.

like we will use Lady Gaga but not Stefanie Joanne Angelina Germanotta as artist name, right?

respect to artist's choice please.

ps: that star icon is used for rebubble.

Chewin wrote:

Well, I apologize, you can call me back after alacat has fixed her diff and I will rank