Hi~
[General]
* Too sexy BG, please change to an unsexier one
* How about adding a Slidertick? Some parts in the Normal feel lacking of claps imo
* I'm not really sure, but I feel like Audio lead in 500 is enough~
[Normal]
00:04:156 (4) - NC because of the strong voice?
00:14:419 (2) - How about making this Slider on timeline like http://puu.sh/1c35Y and add finish to all places? It sounds really nice I think and fits better than a long Slider
00:50:893 (2) - I kinda feel like this note would be playing better stacked with 1 due to the fact of moving your mouse on this spot in music doesn't really feel good imo
00:57:367 - I really think it's not a good idea to ignore this downbeat, it's too strong to ignore it. Making this http://puu.sh/1c3c5 could be better. Or just change in another way, but I really would place a note on this downbeat :3
00:59:735 (1) - default finish on start? Sounds really nice here
01:52:946 (1) - Same about this downbeat as before~
01:55:314 (1) - default finish on start?
01:57:367 (1) - I don't think you should use a Slider here. Kiai time starts again and it's weird seeing it poping again while holding a Slider. So changing to circles may be better~
02:17:577 (1,2,3) - Doesn't play good and could look better. 3 is in a strange position and playing it breaks the flow a bit. I would prefer something like this http://puu.sh/1c3kf
02:38:419 (1) - Stack with 6 feels better with the slow SV
02:47:103 (3) - NC? The music changes really noticeable here~
02:48:367 (1) - I think you missed a finish on start~
02:50:735 (3) - I don't really understand what this Slider follow on music. I think it doesnt follow drums and it doesn't follow vocals. So I would prefer something like http://puu.sh/1c3q0
02:56:103 (2) - Nazi, move a bit for better blanket? http://puu.sh/1c3rS
[Hard]
02:53:577 (5) NC?
[Pain]
00:46:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be nicer, as I don't see what you try to do here, I would recommend a star or something~ http://puu.sh/1c3DP
01:06:051 (5) - Add NC and remove on 1?
01:12:682 - I think you should remove this break as you didn't have it in the other diffs and this is one of the most difficult ones~
01:38:893 (1) - remove NC and add on 3?
01:47:735 (1) - Space this out a bit, it's really hard to read like this imo~
02:01:314 (4) - NC?
02:19:314 (2,4) - This overlap is a bit untidy, try to clean it up a bit? :3
02:32:893 (7) - NC?
02:38:261 (1,2) - reduce this jump a bit? It's a bit uncomfortable to play in a so long song~
That's all I got~ :3
Awesome Song and Map :3 Here another Star <3~
Good luck o/
[General]
* How about adding a Slidertick? Some parts in the Normal feel lacking of claps imo
* I'm not really sure, but I feel like Audio lead in 500 is enough~
[Normal]
00:04:156 (4) - NC because of the strong voice?
00:14:419 (2) - How about making this Slider on timeline like http://puu.sh/1c35Y and add finish to all places? It sounds really nice I think and fits better than a long Slider
00:50:893 (2) - I kinda feel like this note would be playing better stacked with 1 due to the fact of moving your mouse on this spot in music doesn't really feel good imo
00:57:367 - I really think it's not a good idea to ignore this downbeat, it's too strong to ignore it. Making this http://puu.sh/1c3c5 could be better. Or just change in another way, but I really would place a note on this downbeat :3
00:59:735 (1) - default finish on start? Sounds really nice here
01:52:946 (1) - Same about this downbeat as before~
01:55:314 (1) - default finish on start?
01:57:367 (1) - I don't think you should use a Slider here. Kiai time starts again and it's weird seeing it poping again while holding a Slider. So changing to circles may be better~
02:17:577 (1,2,3) - Doesn't play good and could look better. 3 is in a strange position and playing it breaks the flow a bit. I would prefer something like this http://puu.sh/1c3kf
02:38:419 (1) - Stack with 6 feels better with the slow SV
02:47:103 (3) - NC? The music changes really noticeable here~
02:48:367 (1) - I think you missed a finish on start~
02:50:735 (3) - I don't really understand what this Slider follow on music. I think it doesnt follow drums and it doesn't follow vocals. So I would prefer something like http://puu.sh/1c3q0
02:56:103 (2) - Nazi, move a bit for better blanket? http://puu.sh/1c3rS
[Hard]
02:53:577 (5) NC?
[Pain]
00:46:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be nicer, as I don't see what you try to do here, I would recommend a star or something~ http://puu.sh/1c3DP
01:06:051 (5) - Add NC and remove on 1?
01:12:682 - I think you should remove this break as you didn't have it in the other diffs and this is one of the most difficult ones~
01:38:893 (1) - remove NC and add on 3?
01:47:735 (1) - Space this out a bit, it's really hard to read like this imo~
02:01:314 (4) - NC?
02:19:314 (2,4) - This overlap is a bit untidy, try to clean it up a bit? :3
02:32:893 (7) - NC?
02:38:261 (1,2) - reduce this jump a bit? It's a bit uncomfortable to play in a so long song~
That's all I got~ :3
Awesome Song and Map :3 Here another Star <3~
Good luck o/