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Hatsuki Yura - Yoiyami Hanabi

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x847606653
524 posts
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x847606653
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月27日 at 0:57:50

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: Yoiyami Hanabi
Tags: raririn seifuumeigetsu drop yoiyami rensou kitan
BPM: 115
Filesize: 8825kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.54 stars, 484 notes)
  2. Insane (4.98 stars, 763 notes)
  3. raririn's Normal (2.98 stars, 296 notes)
Download: Hatsuki Yura - Yoiyami Hanabi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal by raririn

modder:Nichyouki,Xincrin,Amamiya Yuko,Jauiplay,Star Stream
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Flash,Strawberry,Shiro,lkx_shore,jesse7419,ykcarrot
Last edited by x847606653 , edited 47 times in total.
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
占座
Edit:赶紧找张bg这么大一个恶俗看着不累么
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
x847606653

raririn wrote:

占座
Edit:赶紧找张bg这么大一个恶俗看着不累么
求找QAQ，找不到啊教练
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
找鸭子要？
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, x847606653

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

raririn

  1. 00:14:376 (1,2) - Add repeating of their slider, would be more suitable for rhythm.
  2. 00:20:637 (4) - Make to slider curve?
  3. 00:24:028 (4) - Move slider last point to up 3 grids be better.
  4. 01:22:202 (5,6) - It may makes players are surprise. I suggest that remove (6), then repeat slider of (5).
  5. 02:38:376 (1,2,3) - Notes isn't follow the rhythm of song. Maybe change is slider start since here until 02:39:159.
  6. 02:49:072 (2) - Slider start at 02:49:333.
  7. 02:57:777 - Unsnapped a green line. Please resnap to 02:57:681

Hard

  1. 00:35:246 (5) - Add NC. By you can be observe from the rhythm of song.
  2. 00:56:115 (1,2) - I feel strange when compared to rhythm of song. Make to this, would be more suitable for rhythm.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:43:072 (3,4) - The rhythm isn't appropriate to be able to stack it. Please try move (4) don't stack with slider end of (3).
  4. 02:57:777 - Unsnapped a green line. Please resnap to 02:57:811 or 02:57:778
  5. 03:18:420 (2,3) - Spacing is too far which it too hard for this diff. Please fix it.
  6. 04:21:681 (6) - Add NC?

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
x847606653

nich95 wrote:



Hi, x847606653

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Hard

  1. 00:35:246 (5) - Add NC. By you can be observe from the rhythm of song. fix
  2. 00:56:115 (1,2) - I feel strange when compared to rhythm of song. Make to this, would be more suitable for rhythm. I can't see this picture.:(
    SPOILER
  3. 01:43:072 (3,4) - The rhythm isn't appropriate to be able to stack it. Please try move (4) don't stack with slider end of (3).fix
  4. 02:57:777 - Unsnapped a green line. Please resnap to 02:57:811 or 02:57:778 fix
  5. 03:18:420 (2,3) - Spacing is too far which it too hard for this diff. Please fix it. no change
  6. 04:21:681 (6) - Add NC?
OK

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
Thanks for your mod,nich._.
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki

x847606653 wrote:

  1. 00:56:115 (1,2) - I feel strange when compared to rhythm of song. Make to this, would be more suitable for rhythm. I can't see this picture.:(
Oops, I forget put picture in this. Sorry for my mistake :?
SPOILER
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
x847606653

nich95 wrote:

x847606653 wrote:

  1. 00:56:115 (1,2) - I feel strange when compared to rhythm of song. Make to this, would be more suitable for rhythm. I can't see this picture.:(
Oops, I forget put picture in this. Sorry for my mistake :?
SPOILER
no change :3
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
http://puu.sh/1h58L

nich95 wrote:


[notice]

raririn

[list][*]00:14:376 (1,2) - Add repeating of their slider, would be more suitable for rhythm.ok :>
[*]00:20:637 (4) - Make to slider curve?i think it's fine now ...
[*]00:24:028 (4) - Move slider last point to up 3 grids be better.i dont see the difference but done
[*]01:22:202 (5,6) - It may makes players are surprise. I suggest that remove (6), then repeat slider of (5).ok done~
[*]02:38:376 (1,2,3) - Notes isn't follow the rhythm of song. Maybe change is slider start since here until 02:39:159.sorry no change :/
[*]02:49:072 (2) - Slider start at 02:49:333.^
[*]02:57:777 - Unsnapped a green line. Please resnap to 02:57:681oops,my fault,fixed
Thank for your mod :D

diff名字真是球球
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hi sorry for the latest

[General]
•In my opinion you should cut the audio as it is very long the song, I'm sure this little modding
[Normal]
•00:05:507 - Move the Break here
•More simetrycal please maybe so:
SPOILER
•00:31:072 (1) - Move this slider here : x:136 y:264 looks much
better that way because if you put it at the beginning of the
slider as it looks a bit ugly
•00:43:594 (3,4) - listening to this part in a 25% speed is not about the
pace of the song I would recommend doing so:
SPOILER
•00:45:941 (2) - removes this circle that part sounds good
•01:00:289 (5) - put a new combo here's a voice change
•01:12:811 (3) - removes the clap, it sounds much better
•03:13:855 (1) - NC
•03:18:028 (1) - This slider is too difficult for newbie since this diff diff
only counts as more basic than normal, try to bring it closer to the center of
the spinner
•04:08:376 (2) - Move the circle here x:192 y:144 and manages the place especially
in other notes

Only diff mod the normal since the map is very long but not so bad the map.

good Luck :)
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
http://puu.sh/1ic4m
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
Don't click this
15:22 x847606653: 性液求mod
15:23 AmamiyaYuko: ..........................
15:23 AmamiyaYuko: 只支持IRC mod >_>
15:23 x847606653: 好
15:23 x847606653: 现在么
15:24 AmamiyaYuko: 看看啥圖
15:24 *x847606653 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/183138 Hatsuki Yura - Yoiyami Hanabi]
15:25 AmamiyaYuko: 臥槽看到只有hard熱情頓時沒了九成
15:25 x847606653: 瞎
15:25 x847606653: 我是善良的孩子
15:25 AmamiyaYuko: stress Lunatic也可以善良的啊
15:25 x847606653: 0.0
15:25 AmamiyaYuko: hao
15:25 AmamiyaYuko: 一進來就被神圖嚇尿了
15:26 AmamiyaYuko: 開頭幹嘛break time
15:26 AmamiyaYuko: 這不是找蛋疼嗎
15:26 x847606653: 节奏适合就这么做了
15:26 AmamiyaYuko: 怎麼聽都不覺得有break time啊 orz
15:26 AmamiyaYuko: 轉盤更想吐槽...
15:27 x847606653: 那就音实在不想下note orz
15:28 AmamiyaYuko: 00:56:115 (1,2) - 違和君你好
15:28 x847606653: 果然是维和么
15:28 AmamiyaYuko: 這必須違和啊/.\
15:28 x847606653: 那我还是下蓝线算了orz
15:28 AmamiyaYuko: 01:10:724 (2,3) - 這種節奏我經常這麼下 不過上次wcx吐槽我:這麼下很奇怪 蛤蛤蛤
15:29 AmamiyaYuko: 哦我說的是用slider下這種節奏
15:29 AmamiyaYuko: 不對應該是slider+note混合的這種 orz
15:29 x847606653: orz
15:30 AmamiyaYuko: 01:33:159 (6,1,2,3) - 這spacing實在是confusing
15:31 x847606653: 按spcing实在是不好看
15:31 AmamiyaYuko: 待我打一遍
15:31 x847606653: 哦好
15:31 x847606653: 送分:D
15:31 AmamiyaYuko: 咦我的板子怎麼傲嬌了
15:31 AmamiyaYuko: 臥槽
15:31 x847606653: 扔了换新的
15:32 AmamiyaYuko: hao 等我重啟下 你記得幫我留savelog...orz
15:32 x847606653: 没问题
15:38 AmamiyaYuko: 你好我從地獄回來了
15:38 x847606653: 瞎
15:38 x847606653: 这里是天堂
15:44 AmamiyaYuko: 鬼畜你好
15:44 x847606653: 瞎
15:44 x847606653: 这么送分
15:45 AmamiyaYuko: 這還hard...
15:45 AmamiyaYuko: 那1/4都全屏飛了...
15:45 x847606653: 就一个
15:48 AmamiyaYuko: 唔
15:48 AmamiyaYuko: 我想說
15:49 x847606653: 啥
15:49 AmamiyaYuko: 1/4那些梗挺好玩
15:49 AmamiyaYuko: 但是SV太低的原因
15:49 AmamiyaYuko: none玩起來很怪
15:49 x847606653: 额
15:49 AmamiyaYuko: 就跟我給thou bad做的那個gd差不多蛤蛤蛤
15:49 x847606653: 噗
15:49 x847606653: 不是re了么
15:49 AmamiyaYuko: 不過我那個sv好歹還比你高點
15:49 AmamiyaYuko: re了還是坑爹
15:50 x847606653: 当初做的时候没考虑这么多
15:50 x847606653: orz
15:50 AmamiyaYuko: DT起來是很爽 不過圖嘛肯定是以none下考慮的
15:50 AmamiyaYuko: 02:59:246 (1,2) - 你好違和
15:51 x847606653: o.o
15:51 AmamiyaYuko: 圖整體不錯 就是1/4和1/2的spacing太亂
15:52 AmamiyaYuko: 和我當初一樣...orz
15:52 x847606653: 233
15:52 x847606653: spacing什么的
15:52 AmamiyaYuko: 03:51:420 (1) - 還有這裡開始 如果是我的話肯定要提高點sv
15:52 AmamiyaYuko: 畢竟突然燃起來了
15:52 x847606653: SV是固定的呀。。。
15:53 AmamiyaYuko: 就是綠線×一下1.2甚麼的啊www
15:53 x847606653: 是加了呀。。
15:53 AmamiyaYuko: 沒啊這不還是1.0麼
15:54 x847606653: 1.2。。。
15:54 x847606653: 不过不怎么明显
15:55 AmamiyaYuko: 我是說sv不是ds...lol
15:55 x847606653: lol
15:55 x847606653: 不太懂
15:55 AmamiyaYuko: 就是f6裏面那個啊
15:56 AmamiyaYuko: 滑條速度啊!! orz
15:56 x847606653: 0.0
15:56 x847606653: 瞎
15:56 x847606653: 瞎
15:56 x847606653: 瞎
15:56 AmamiyaYuko: 不過現在要你改SV和那些spacing好像不可能了 一改就是動全局然後等於remap...
15:56 AmamiyaYuko: 嘛不過我相信XAT們肯定會吐槽的 尤其是spacing
15:56 x847606653: 嘛
15:57 x847606653: spacing什么的，hard以上不怕吐槽>_>
15:57 AmamiyaYuko: >_>嗯 我再檢查點細節
15:58 AmamiyaYuko: 01:06:550 (4) - 你好
15:58 x847606653: NC
15:58 AmamiyaYuko: 突然x0.5啥的不加個nc?
15:58 x847606653: 忘了
16:00 AmamiyaYuko: 02:54:550 (7,1) - overlap你好
16:00 x847606653: 。。
16:00 AmamiyaYuko: 02:57:159 (2) - 突降SV建議NC
16:00 AmamiyaYuko: 哦我蠢了這個可以無視
16:01 x847606653: 噗
16:01 AmamiyaYuko: 03:04:463 (4) - 這個...好吧算了orz
16:01 AmamiyaYuko: 03:09:681 (4) - 這個肯定要NC了吧
16:01 x847606653: 嗯
16:01 x847606653: 其实因为本身slider速度慢
16:02 AmamiyaYuko: 所以不容易斷?
16:02 x847606653: 嘛
16:02 AmamiyaYuko: 我知道啊 不過某些XAT可不這麼覺得ww
16:02 x847606653: 反正我有点蠢<_<
16:02 AmamiyaYuko: 好像沒了
16:02 x847606653: 哦好
16:02 AmamiyaYuko: 渣mod結束TAT
16:03 x847606653: TAT
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
对不起 来晚了

[General]
貌似ok

[Normal]
00:15:420 (2) - 为啥不repeat
01:07:333 (2) - 还是换成一个note和一个在01:07:594开始的slider好点
01:22:202 (5) - 头的clap可以去掉
01:30:289 (6) - 被前面遮挡得有点厉害
01:33:681 (3,4,5,1,2) - 感觉稍微乱了点 而且我觉得中间没必要nc啊...
01:41:246 (1) - 在01:42:028开始
02:13:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 对新手有点狠
02:48:811 (1,2) - 稍微有点违和
03:01:333 (1,2) - 先slider再circle
03:02:376 (3,4) - ^
03:19:072 (2,3) - 略误导
04:06:028 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 好坑
04:14:376 (1,1) - 间隔有点短 而且我觉得扔个spinner并不合适
我觉得无疑做难了...

[Hard]
00:05:507 - break拉到后面长白线
00:37:072 (1) - 我觉得可以不用要 而且前面可以不静音
00:41:507 (2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏非常奇怪 假设现在的节奏是xxoxxox 实际上应该是xoxxoxx 并且00:42:420 (7)可以去掉
00:56:637 (2) - 最好提前1/4结束
01:01:463 - 加圈
01:11:246 - ^
01:33:159 (6) - 最好提前1/4结束
01:56:376 - 加圈
02:02:376 - ^
02:38:376 (1,2,3,4) - 至少3和4的间距搞一下
03:00:159 - 加圈
03:54:550 (3) - Ctrl+G
04:12:289 (1,2,3) - 节奏略奇葩

另外强烈建议加个这种颜色的combo color
Nice job.
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
x847606653

JauiPlaY wrote:

对不起 来晚了

[General]
貌似ok

[Hard]
00:05:507 - break拉到后面长白线 好
00:37:072 (1) - 我觉得可以不用要 而且前面可以不静音 感觉有点怪，未改
00:41:507 (2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏非常奇怪 假设现在的节奏是xxoxxox 实际上应该是xoxxoxx 并且00:42:420 (7)可以去掉 感觉怪，未改
00:56:637 (2) - 最好提前1/4结束 玛德怎么都是感觉怪。。。
01:01:463 - 加圈 好
01:11:246 - ^ ^
01:33:159 (6) - 最好提前1/4结束 未改
01:56:376 - 加圈 好
02:02:376 - ^ 好
02:38:376 (1,2,3,4) - 至少3和4的间距搞一下 嗯
03:00:159 - 加圈 好
03:54:550 (3) - Ctrl+G 好
04:12:289 (1,2,3) - 节奏略奇葩 要结束了，来点

另外强烈建议加个这种颜色的combo color 虽然加了个color，嘛有点像这个颜色P_Q
Nice job.
Star Stream
2,031 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From my queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:594 - there's no reason to blank here imo, could you map this part
  2. 00:15:420 (2) - missing arrow? it has pretty weird rhythm now imo
  3. 00:37:333 (1) - too far from center, it would be a bit hard to play for beginners
  4. 00:42:550 (2) - it bohters by overlapping HP bar too much, maybe 2 grid down plz?
  5. 01:06:811 (1) - it brokes your rhythm imo, i know there's the sound for it, just try putting a circle only at 01:07:072 - instead
  6. 02:00:028 - add a circle here?
  7. 02:13:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - too busy for this diff, i recommend you to remove the beat from 02:14:115 - and 02:15:159 -
  8. 02:21:159 (6,7) - combine as a slider? would make sense imo
  9. 02:38:898 (2) - wrong rhythm here, try adding a slider from 1 to 02:38:768 - and add an arrow for that
  10. 02:39:420 - slider from here to 4?
  11. 03:35:768 (2) - all the sliders like this.. why don't you remake them like this? they look not so good now
    SPOILER
  12. 04:08:376 (2,3) - don't overlap, looks not so good..
  13. 04:08:637 (3,6) - same as 02:13:333 (1,2,3,4,5) -, too busy
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:507 (2) - hidden by the pre notes, fix it plz
  2. 00:37:072 (1) - too hard to read, delete it and expand the spinner to here
  3. 02:21:159 (8) - make a slider to 02:21:681 - , fits very well with music imo
  4. 02:40:202 (1) - confusing with the sound at 02:39:941 - , i recommend you to put a slider from 02:39:941 - to 02:40:463 -
  5. 02:59:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - really weird rhythm, expand 4 to 03:00:028 - and delete 5 would make good rhythm
  6. 03:34:724 (1,2) - it's a bit hard to read. combine them as a slider, would be easier to read
  7. 03:51:028 (11,12) - doesn't make sense at all for me, if you want to put notes for there, put a slider from 03:50:898 - to 03:51:159 -
  8. 04:24:289 (8,1) - same as 02:21:159 (8) -
same issue with Normal diff.. plz make your weird sliders like this
SPOILER


Sorry but i should say 'You need 1 more "Hard" diff', current one is actually 'Insane' Diff. But I'm not saying the diff is terrible, it's well made diff imo.
well Good luck with rank then~
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
x847606653

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[Hard]
  1. 00:29:507 (2) - hidden by the pre notes, fix it plz fix
  2. 00:37:072 (1) - too hard to read, delete it and expand the spinner to here OK
  3. 02:21:159 (8) - make a slider to 02:21:681 - , fits very well with music imo no
  4. 02:40:202 (1) - confusing with the sound at 02:39:941 - , i recommend you to put a slider from 02:39:941 - to 02:40:463 - no
  5. 02:59:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - really weird rhythm, expand 4 to 03:00:028 - and delete 5 would make good rhythm no
  6. 03:34:724 (1,2) - it's a bit hard to read. combine them as a slider, would be easier to read fix
  7. 03:51:028 (11,12) - doesn't make sense at all for me, if you want to put notes for there, put a slider from 03:50:898 - to 03:51:159 - no
  8. 04:24:289 (8,1) - same as 02:21:159 (8) -
no
same issue with Normal diff.. plz make your weird sliders like this
SPOILER


Sorry but i should say 'You need 1 more "Hard" diff', current one is actually 'Insane' Diff. But I'm not saying the diff is terrible, it's well made diff imo.
well Good luck with rank then~ I think it's not hard to player becanse it's 115bpm.
Thanks for your mod,star stream:D
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
[General]
Offset:1,845


[Normal]
00:05:501 - Dragging break to this place cant give a better sense to me
00:50:892 (3) - Bending too much.
03:47:240 (1) - ^
01:29:762 (5,6) - Why choose to stack them under the slider?
01:41:109 (1) - Why spinner here?!=A= Please start the spinner at 01:44:109 ,dont be lazy.
02:38:892 (2) - It should start at 02:38:762 (1/4 ahead), not on the white tick...
02:49:066 - There isnt any sound ,so why you start the slider here?
03:30:935 - ^
04:14:370 (1) - This spinner makes no sense, map here with circles and sliders ,dont be lazy thanks.


[Hard]
00:06:028 - Why you drag the break here? Imo,you should only delay the break when the background music suddenly start or volume up at this timing
00:37:453 (2) - Should not be a note here, remove it, (right now!)
02:40:584 (3) - ^
03:26:497 (3) - ^ (sounds so bad imo)
01:48:801 (3) - WTF!!! So large jump suddenly? Are you sure that this is a *hard* diff? Even though this is a insane diff, I'll give you 差评，这什么蠢跳...
02:05:497 (3) - ^
02:09:671 (3) - ^ (23333 还接连不断...)[不过话说回来如果是个恶俗mapper的话这个其实可以不用改]
02:57:149 (2) - Why not extend the slider to 02:57:671?
03:51:018 (11) - You could remove this note.(feel better)
04:12:801 (2) - A circle is enough ,slider here is useless and sounds not good since it should be no sound at 04:12:931.
04:13:062 - hmm..You can add a note at 04:13:062 instead.
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Nice Mapset :3
GL
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
Hi from my mod queue ~

Normal :

00:37:333 (1) - add finish at begin ?
02:38:376 (1,2) - change to something like this ? http://puu.sh/1kxtl

Hard :

01:01:855 (7) - clap
02:02:376 (3) - ^
02:21:159 (8) - ^
03:03:420 (1) - move one grid bot, I think it's look better (grid lvl4)
03:08:115 - clap
03:08:637 (3) - 2nd point at x296 y328, look better for me
03:30:550 (5) - last point 1 grid top, for better blanket on 6
04:10:724 (1) - clap

That all I can find .__.
Nice map

good luck with rank ~
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Snowy Dream

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
[General]
Offset:1,845 fix

[Hard]
00:06:028 - Why you drag the break here? Imo,you should only delay the break when the background music suddenly start or volume up at this timing
00:37:453 (2) - Should not be a note here, remove it, (right now!)
02:40:584 (3) - ^
03:26:497 (3) - ^ (sounds so bad imo)
01:48:801 (3) - WTF!!! So large jump suddenly? Are you sure that this is a *hard* diff? Even though this is a insane diff, I'll give you 差评，这什么蠢跳...
02:05:497 (3) - ^
02:09:671 (3) - ^ (23333 还接连不断...)[不过话说回来如果是个恶俗mapper的话这个其实可以不用改] 233,这里没有改。。
02:57:149 (2) - Why not extend the slider to 02:57:671?
03:51:018 (11) - You could remove this note.(feel better)
04:12:801 (2) - A circle is enough ,slider here is useless and sounds not good since it should be no sound at 04:12:931.
04:13:062 - hmm..You can add a note at 04:13:062 instead.
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Nice Mapset :3
GL

others all change,thanks,Snowy:3

Kin

Kin wrote:

Hi from my mod queue ~

01:01:855 (7) - clap
02:02:376 (3) - ^
02:21:159 (8) - ^
03:03:420 (1) - move one grid bot, I think it's look better (grid lvl4)
03:08:115 - clap
03:08:637 (3) - 2nd point at x296 y328, look better for me
03:30:550 (5) - last point 1 grid top, for better blanket on 6
04:10:724 (1) - clap

That all I can find .__.
Nice map

good luck with rank ~
All change,thanks Kin._.
alacat
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Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●ok

[Normal]
●

it is unnecessary >.<
●HPDrain Rate-1. it's too hard ><
●00:01:845 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think looks better
●00:02:462 - mm... move to this line at here? 00:02:366 -
●00:05:497 - put on dwonbeat ? 00:06:018 -
●00:10:975 (2) - 1 grid up(tiny). Because you should make the spacing equal here00:10:192 (1,2,3) -
●00:12:279 (4) - hmm...change in shape clean ?
●00:15:410 (2) - add slider's reverse ? I think it needs sound here.00:15:931 -
●00:23:497 (2) - remove note? overmap here >_<
●00:35:236 (1,1) - I still think the following notes appear too early considering the level of this difficulty.and you should move to center this note of next spinner
●00:51:931 (4) - I want a sound here.00:52:453 - and add finish or whistle .so remove one slider , and add some slider and note :3
●00:57:149 (1) - add whistle at the end instead of clap? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●01:06:279 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern?
●01:08:627 (3) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing.
●01:10:714 (1) - remove clap from the head .put applause with constant rhythm >_<
●01:12:801 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ?
●01:27:671 (2) - remove note? overmap here
●01:34:714 (5,1,2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:236 (1) - try this ?
●01:56:627 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●02:49:062 (2) - move to slider start to here.02:49:323 -
●03:01:062 - add note here ?
●03:01:323 - hmm it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●03:20:105 (3,4) - maybe confusing many beginners.. try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/478994
●03:25:323 (5) - move to x:364 y:168 it's looks better and spacing equal
●03:54:540 (7) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? Aim for the start of 03:55:584 (1) -
●03:56:366 (2) - remove note? overmap here
●04:07:062 (5) - hmm... make more spacing..?
●04:21:671 (3) - 1 grid dwon(tiny).

[Hard]
●00:06:018 - start to break at here ? same as Normal diff
●00:18:018 (8) - 1 grid right.
●01:20:627 (6) - move to x:256 y:320 ?
●01:30:540 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make more the spacing equal here.it looks better :3
●01:41:236 (2) - add new combo ? like this your pattern at here.03:10:975 (1,2,3) -
●02:03:931 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G ? you should turn to the left a little more, the flow is good :3
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479006
●02:21:671 - I think dont need kiai here ._.
●02:59:366 (2) - 1 grid up. make a straight line here
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479011
●03:03:931 - add note ? I think need clap sound here !
●03:50:366 (6) - add new combo ?
●04:01:845 (1) - ctrl+G ?

nice diff :3

good luck ~ :)
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