1. God knows... (4.99 stars, 286 notes)
2. I know... (1.33 stars, 84 notes)
3. Shinki knows... (4.22 stars, 166 notes)

1. If you added a skin, Maybe at least complete it ></ Read here

1. 00:13:251 (2) - it's way down there >< maybe move up one grid?
2. 00:33:251 (1) - move this last sliderpoint one grid left looks better now with blanket~
3. 01:06:584 (2) - maybe add a finish on the start of this slider, sounds better with last one :3

1. 00:45:473 (6) - I dont think finish fits here so remove it, on the end of the slider i mean ><
2. 00:49:362 (1) - ^ but on the note
3. 00:54:917 (3) - ^
4. 01:03:528 (6) - remove this whistle because it's on red tick and it's sounds off to me~
5. 01:29:362 (1,3) - switch the finishes sounds better like this ><
6. 01:48:806 (1) - remove finish on this spinner sounds a lot nice without it ...

1. You should add an SC:2 slidertick with the same sound of SC:1 finish for parts like these: (in the easy) 01:04:362 (1) (on the second slidertick), same for 01:06:584 (2). You need to do this adding some green lines to keep an hitsound consistency.

1. 00:10:473 (4) - I can hear a sound similar to a whistle here, add it on the slider's head?
2. 00:34:362 (2) - Considering the the previous 1/1 rhythm you used before this slider could confuse the player because the rhythm should be this one instead. It'd be more intuitive to play for beginners:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:473 (4) - What about to remove these finishes adding on each part a whistle instead? I mean on (4)'s head, tail and reverse arrow. Whisltes fit much better in this part IMO
4. 01:11:167 Remove break time because arrows appear during the player is still playing and it's pretty confusing
5. 01:25:473 (4) - Add whistle, it sounds pretty nice together with 01:24:362 (2)'s one
6. 01:39:917 (1) - This slider is asymmetric, use this code to make it symmetric instead:
   

   192,327,99917,6,0,B|220:316|240:352|240:352|260:316|288:324,2,120,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   Also, in addition to this, you could try to center it in the grid to make everything more flowing
7. 01:43:251 (4) - You know, same of 01:25:473 (4) for consistency

1. 00:13:251 (1) - Whistle on the slider's head
2. 00:33:251 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/4 because there should be a clap on the white tick. Or maybe you could add a circle with clap on 00:33:806, because as I can see you are following the vocal sound here
3. 00:41:028 (1) - Remove new combo using it on 00:42:140 (3) instead
4. 00:43:806 (1) - According my suggestion above remove new combo from this slider
5. 00:49:917 (3) - (nazi) Improve the overlap with 00:48:251 (4)'s head
6. 01:05:612 (4) - Clap on the slider's tail
7. 01:07:834 (4) - Same to keep consistency
8. 01:21:306 (3) - Why have you used finish on this slider's tail? It sounds really bad imho, I suggest you to remove it or the 01:22:140 (1)'s finish wouldn't be emphasized as it should be.
9. 01:37:417 (3) - To keep hitsound consistency with the previous finishes pattern you should use finish here and on 01:38:528 (2)
10. 01:48:806 (1) - From here remove the useless and unused green lines please

1. 00:02:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really don't understand why you used all these 1/2 overmapped sliders. Doing so you have also skipped every white line where there should be some custom claps.
2. 00:08:945 (2) - What this circle follows? The stream should end on the previous downbeat so you don't need to use this circle here. Or maybe, what about to use this rhythm instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:11:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same of the first point
4. The next part is fine to me, except for stuffs I mentioned above :\

• General
  ● I think correct offset is 2130 (-10)

• I know...
  >Settings
  ● Good
  >Mapping
  ● 00:13:251 (2) - i think it's too low for esy diff's...please up it :3
  
  ● 00:31:862 (3) - nc?
  ● 00:59:362 (5) - maybe move on x:443 y:109 looks more accuracy
  ● 01:03:806 (4) - ^ x:14 y:275 (distance 1.20)
  ● 01:13:806 (2) - ^ x:307 y:273
  ● 01:36:862 (2,3,4) - hm, maybe change this part on this...sounds more pretty good :3
  -->
  - if you change it, add clap on 01:37:417 (3) :3
  ● 01:19:084 (2,3) - ^
  ● 01:47:140 (3) - change this part to:
  
  - if you change it, add finish on 1:48:806
  >Hitsounds
  ● 01:08:806 (1) - maybe add finish, and add timing section vol 50% on 01:10:890
  
  __________________
  Pretty nice relax diff's

• Shinki knows...
  >Settings
  ● Good
  >Mapping
  ● 00:24:362 (1) - maybe move it on center? ^^'
  ● 00:35:473 (2) - please move little down this note...health line is too close
  ● 00:49:917 (3) - hm....not smooth :3 overlap for 00:48:251 (4) I think you need to move 00:48:251 (4) - on x: 327 y:96
  -->
  ● 01:01:862 (2,3,4,5,6) - again as ^ just move 01:03:251 (5) on x:192 y:88 and 01:03:528 (6) - on x:152 y:161
  -->
  ● 00:58:980 (2) - x:460 y:216
  ● 01:01:202 (5) - x:366 y:101
  >Hitsounds
  ● 00:19:084 (3) - add clap on end? :3
  ● 00:19:640 (3) - ^
  ● 00:37:140 (2) - add clap on 00:37:417? :3 sounds good
  ● 00:39:917 (1) - remove clap
  ● 00:40:473 (2) - add clap on end
  ● 00:41:028 (1) - remove clap -> add on end slider
  ● 00:42:140 (3) - ^
  ● 01:32:695 (4) - add clap
  ● 01:34:917 (4) - ^
  ___________________
  I like this diif's

• God knows...
  
  >Settings
  ● Good
  >Mapping
  ● 00:31:028 (2) - nc?
  >Hitsounds
  ● Nice beat
  ___________________
  Looks really good o.o

Beautiful song and nice map.
Good luck then

1. fine

1. tick rate 1 怎麼樣>_>
2. 01:06:584 (2) - (begin)finish? 既然(1)都有了這裡下finish也不差嘛
3. 01:48:945 (1) - whistle? 感覺不錯聽 不過這裡好像沒什麼聲音就orz

1. 00:11:862 (2) - (nazi)感覺這樣会好点 http://puu.sh/1lyzV
2. 00:49:362 (1) - 這裡有finish我有点嚇到 真心覺得不太好聽._.
3. 01:29:362 (1) - clap+finish略吵 去finish?反正這裡不加也沒什麼影響
4. 01:30:751 (4) - 換成這種節奏怎么樣? 這么一來也能在downbeat上個finish
   
5. 01:48:806 (1) - whistle怎么樣(?
   音效略難懂 骨子+1

1. 01:11:028 (5) - 換finish 感覺比較合
2. 01:50:751 (1) - whistle(?
   怎麼覺得有点像Insane orz

congaan wrote:

btw,what is "shinki"?

• fine

1. 00:17:556 - Sounds empty here.Add a note?
2. 00:44:362 (1) - I think whistle is better than clap here?
3. 00:49:362 (1) - I can't really understand why you add a finish here...
4. 01:03:528 (6) - A clap here would sound better with 5.
5. 01:05:195 (3) - Add a clap at the tail?
6. 01:07:417 (3) - ^

• also fine~