ohoh i love you for mapping this <3 orz >A<

Sekai-nyan wrote:

ohoh i love you for mapping this <3 orz >A<

Lol, thanks :3

SkyDevil wrote:

ohaiyo /o/

Misery
02:31:129 (1) - Uh,, I don't like this alot, its following nothing in the vocals, neither in the background :c Make something else out of it? Not sure, I kind of like this, I'll keep this is mind.
02:32:843 (5) - ^ ^
02:37:450 (1) - ^This does follow the music though
02:59:414 (4) - New combo here and no new combo at 02:59:629 (1) - because 4,1,2,3,4 is a pattern It is a pattern yes, but the this way it fits the music.

nich95 wrote:

Kyshiro's Misery

1. 01:40:130 - 03:27:701 Unsnapped. Please resnap all note. Fixed
2. 00:20:201 (7) - Move to right 1 grid.Okay
3. 01:06:273 (6) - Remove finish be better. Not really
4. 01:37:343 (8) - Remove a circle, but start spinner here instead? No
5. 03:19:771 (3) - Move 2nd and 4th point to right 1 grid.

Fixed

Thanks for the mods :3

[Weakness]
Various unsnapped circle. Just do "Resnap all notes" to fix it.


[Mistake]
Various unsnapped circle. Just do "Resnap all notes" to fix it.
That's just a suggestion. I think that it give more emphasis to the map that way.
00:44:415 (2) - New combo
00:51:700 (2) - New combo
00:58:129 (2) - New combo
01:40:986 (2) - New combo
01:48:271 (2) - New combo
01:54:700 (2) - New combo
02:04:557 (7) - Remove new combo
02:06:700 (2) - New combo
02:08:414 (2) - New combo
02:09:700 (5) - New combo
02:10:129 (6) - New combo
02:11:414 (1) - Remove new combo
02:13:557 (2) - New combo
02:15:271 (2) - New combo
02:16:557 (5) - New combo
02:16:986 (6) - New combo
02:18:271 (1) - Remove new combo
02:20:414 (2) - New combo
02:22:129 (2) - New combo
02:23:414 (3) - New combo
02:23:843 (4) - New combo
02:59:843 (2) - New combo (optional)
03:00:271 (3) - New combo (optional)

Download this file to see how it seems.
Download


[Fault]
Tricky diff
Various unsnapped circle. Just do "Resnap all notes" to fix it.
02:51:700 (3,4) - Since it's mapped with 1/6 divisor, I suggest to stack (4) with 02:52:557 (1) -, that way should be more easy to get the rithm.


[Kyshiro's Misery]
I suggest HP Drain Rate 7 and Overall Difficulty 7 or HP Drain Rate 8.
01:51:270 (1) - End of this spinner is unsnapped.
02:39:270 (1) - End of this slider is unsnapped.
02:51:486 (2) - Repeat of this slider is unsnapped.
02:51:486 (2) - End of this slider is unsnapped.
03:27:700 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner?

Very nice mapset. Hope this will get ranked

Why..? It's the third time I am saying this now: I don't have ANY unsnapped note. I just asked a friend to check it, too, and he doesn't have, too. So where do you find those unsnapped notes? Please, tell me...
I didn't accept any NC-suggestion, and the thing with the stacking neither.
Waiting for Kyshiro's diff updated~

Edit: Hell yeah, 1240 objects Normal and Hard still waiting for me to be resnapped, even if they aren't unsnapped, because I can't see the unsnapped ones. I love the editor so much.. Busy for the next hour(s)~
Baka me, all resnapped.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Kyshiro's Misery]
I suggest HP Drain Rate 7 and Overall Difficulty 7 or HP Drain Rate 8. Made both of them 7
01:51:270 (1) - End of this spinner is unsnapped. Fixed everything.
02:39:270 (1) - End of this slider is unsnapped.
02:51:486 (2) - Repeat of this slider is unsnapped.
02:51:486 (2) - End of this slider is unsnapped.
03:27:700 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner?

Very nice mapset. Hope this will get ranked

Thanks for the mod :3

I'm here to save the day!

Hi, here's my mod from my modding queue~
This song is amazing and it's remembering me alot of things. Also, I love calm song and I like your mapping style. So this is perfect ♥

The beatmap is actually pretty well-made. This is some suggestion but some things that I am saying on every difficulty should be fixed.

[Weakness]
•00:47:415 (1,2) - This pattern could be improved by doing almost the same thing with the previous combo. I feel that this 00:49:558 is pretty empty because the vocal there is actually louder. So, move the slider at 00:48:272 and add a circle at where the slider was before.
•00:56:415 (3) - Since you're playing a bit with the timing points of the volume, I really think this is too loud. The volume for the next point should be more louder than this one.
•01:43:986 (1,2,3) - As I said for the point above.
•01:52:986 - Like I said for 00:56:415
•02:38:843 (1) - With the song itself, this circle should be in the Normal set, not soft. When she sings "You", it's sounds more louder
•03:06:271 (1,2) - Hm, I really think these notes should be reversed to gives a better sound.
•03:16:557 (4,1) - Between these objects, it shouldn't be empty. I mean't, you could add a little break here since it gets some times before we hit the other note. Beginners will sometimes thinks it will end at this point when it doesn't. Actually it happens to me when there's nothing for some times. So, it's better to add a break here to avoid beginners to be confused.

[Mistake]
•00:56:415 (5) - Like I said for the other difficulty.
•01:52:986 (4) - As I said for the volume for this part on Weakness. "Since you're playing a bit with the timing points of the volume, I really think this is too loud. The volume for the next point should be more louder than this one."
•02:38:843 (1) - As I said for the volume for this circle on Weakness. "With the song itself, this circle should be in the Normal set, not soft. When she sings "You", it's sounds more louder"

[Fault]
•00:56:415 (1,2,3) - Like I said for the other difficulties.
•01:52:986 (1,2,3) - Like the other difficulties.
•02:38:843 (1) - As said for previous difficulties.

[Kyshiro]
Pattern are flowing well. The hitsounds and the volume are consistent. I really love this difficulty. Nice job.
01:25:129 - I recommend you to add a finish here. The vocal stop there for a while and it could also keep the consistency with your previous finish at 01:18:272

Sincerely, I really love this beatmap, hope it gets ranked soon!

Thanks for the mod =)

Gabe wrote:

I'm here to save the day!

Hi, here's my mod from my modding queue~
This song is amazing and it's remembering me alot of things. Also, I love calm song and I like your mapping style. So this is perfect ♥

The beatmap is actually pretty well-made. This is some suggestion but some things that I am saying on every difficulty should be fixed.

[Weakness]
•00:47:415 (1,2) - This pattern could be improved by doing almost the same thing with the previous combo. I feel that this 00:49:558 is pretty empty because the vocal there is actually louder. So, move the slider at 00:48:272 and add a circle at where the slider was before. That sounded weird, so I added a circle after the slider instead, which sounds better imo
•00:56:415 (3) - Since you're playing a bit with the timing points of the volume, I really think this is too loud. The volume for the next point should be more louder than this one. Not really. She raises her voice for the "Because of", not for the "You" (Kyshiro aggrees with me), so it's fine this way.
•01:43:986 (1,2,3) - As I said for the point above. ^
•01:52:986 - Like I said for 00:56:415 ^
•02:38:843 (1) - With the song itself, this circle should be in the Normal set, not soft. When she sings "You", it's sounds more louder Since there is a finish on it, it'll stay soft-sampleset. I increased the volume by 10% instead
•03:06:271 (1,2) - Hm, I really think these notes should be reversed to gives a better sound. For a better sound, the slider should be replaced by 3 1/2 circles, but that's too much, so I'll keep it.
•03:16:557 (4,1) - Between these objects, it shouldn't be empty. I mean't, you could add a little break here since it gets some times before we hit the other note. Beginners will sometimes thinks it will end at this point when it doesn't. Actually it happens to me when there's nothing for some times. So, it's better to add a break here to avoid beginners to be confused.

[Mistake]
•00:56:415 (5) - Like I said for the other difficulty. Same thing here
•01:52:986 (4) - As I said for the volume for this part on Weakness. "Since you're playing a bit with the timing points of the volume, I really think this is too loud. The volume for the next point should be more louder than this one." ^
•02:38:843 (1) - As I said for the volume for this circle on Weakness. "With the song itself, this circle should be in the Normal set, not soft. When she sings "You", it's sounds more louder" Same as in Easy

[Fault]
•00:56:415 (1,2,3) - Like I said for the other difficulties. Like I answered for the other diffs
•01:52:986 (1,2,3) - Like the other difficulties. ^
•02:38:843 (1) - As said for previous difficulties. Same here

[Kyshiro]
Pattern are flowing well. The hitsounds and the volume are consistent. I really love this difficulty. Nice job. Big thanks from Kyshiro
01:25:129 - I recommend you to add a finish here. The vocal stop there for a while and it could also keep the consistency with your previous finish at 01:18:272 Added it (I post for him)

Sincerely, I really love this beatmap, hope it gets ranked soon!

Ylinestra44 wrote:

•03:16:557 (4,1) - Between these objects, it shouldn't be empty. I mean't, you could add a little break here since it gets some times before we hit the other note. Beginners will sometimes thinks it will end at this point when it doesn't. Actually it happens to me when there's nothing for some times. So, it's better to add a break here to avoid beginners to be confused.

You can have a point here, but not so easily.
Anyways, as we said (both modders), it can be confusing for beginners since there's a note and then, nothing for a while. The player may thinks it ends at this point so he gets his hands off of his keyboard/mouse and then "Hey! I'm a circle and I'm ruining your play." So I don't know, you should talk to more BATs about it.

Kelly Clarkson - Me and My White Girl Problems

[Kyshiro's Misery]

• 00:04:558 (5) - This slider does not match the music at all thus it does not play well. I suggest something like this or this.
• 01:37:343 (8,1) - The spinner starts a little later than it should. You should fix this by deleting (8) and making the spinner start on 01:37:343 -.
• 01:51:271 (1) - This spinner does not seem effective and quite lazy. I recommend mapping through it.

[Fault]

• 02:33:271 (4) - This note is really unnecessary, it seems as though it's there just to be an anti-jump. Remove it please.

[Mistake]

• 00:46:558 (4,1) - The gap in between these two is really odd and should be filled by a note.
• 00:59:415 (5,6) - ^ Maybe you could sub these two notes for one long slider?
• 01:55:986 (5,6) - ^

Fixed those four things about my diffs. Waiting for Kyshiro.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Kyshiro's Misery]

• 00:04:558 (5) - This slider does not match the music at all thus it does not play well. I suggest something like this or this. To be honest I don't see why this doesn't fit the music, combined with the note after it, it's mapped to the vocals
• 01:37:343 (8,1) - The spinner starts a little later than it should. You should fix this by deleting (8) and making the spinner start on 01:37:343 -. I made the spinner start 1/4th earlier, didn't remove (8) because there's definitely a note necessary over there according to her vocals
• 01:51:271 (1) - This spinner does not seem effective and quite lazy. I recommend mapping through it. I agree, mapped it

Thanks for your mod and.. sorry for the (cough3monthslate) reply >:

http://puu.sh/1SYEW

Hi Yli. Mod Time :3

[Weakness:]

• 00:11:844 (4): I feel this Note unnecesary, it doesn't make a lot of sense adding a Note to follow a Note in a section where you have especially just the piano. To follow just the piano, I'd remove this Note
• 00:15:701 (2): I'd move this Note to the middle (x:256 y:256), in my opinion looks better than before and makes a better transition
• 00:38:844 (1): I'd add a Whistle here to emphatisize the Piano
• 00:49:558 (3,4): The sentence 'Because of you' it is the most important in the song (well, this is the name). So, in my personal point of view this sentence should be 100% followed with beats. To don't make a difficult pattern to new players (meh.. anyways the BPM is low ), transform (3,4) in a 1/2 slider and after that add a Note in 00:50:415
• 02:03:271 (2,3): Actually flow better if you do a Ctrl + J in these objects and then move it to x:220 y:268
• 02:47:414 (4): Add a Whistle at the beginning to follow the piano and the Vocal properly
• 02:51:700: Add a Normal hitsound here instead of that Whistle
• 03:16:557 (4): The Whistle at the end is really unnecesary you don't have anything to remark at this point. Remove it please
• 03:17:629: I have to do agree with Gabe about that, the difference between (4,1) is preety high and the New players will not know what to do. I suggest you a little break here, at least this makes the player put more attention in my opinion

[Mistake:]

Settings:
--> I feel the approach rate a bit high for this difficulty, I'd reduce it by 1 Tick instead (AR-1)

• 00:11:844 (7): Nothing to remark at the Slider end.. Remove this Whistle please
• 00:33:701 (3): You should follow the Vocal and piano nearer since it is a Normal, I don't how it plays the repetition in this Slider either.. Try a pattern like this to follow the music better
• 00:52:558 (4): This Slider looks weird looking the flow, Could you rotate it 180º Clockwise + Flip Horizontally then?
• 02:51:700: As I said in Weakness, you should add a Normal hitsound instead of a Whistle
• 03:16:557 (5): Remove the Whistle at the end as I said in Weakness

[Fault:]

• 00:13:129 (1): Remove the Whistle from this Note as I stated in Mistake
• 00:18:915 (3,4): Wait.. I didn't understand this jump, it feels really unnecesary. With a Flip Horizontal (Ctrl+H), the pattern will look more fluent (Re-arrange the spacing a bit after to do that)
• 00:29:844 (3): Listen properly the music (I'd say in 25% playback), the Slider end is not following anything in the music. Just replace this 1/4 Slider to a Simple Note in here to follow the music properly
• 00:33:487 (4): To follow properly the Vocal, make this Slider 1/4 longer
• 00:43:558 (4,1): Increase the distance between these Notes to 2.0x, if you let the distance in 1.0x between these Notes the flow won't be the best because actually when you play the map you can feel an unnecesary stop after to the 2.0x jump between the previous (2,3,4).
• 01:05:843 (2,3): Hmm.. I didn't understand this antijump, the antijumps should follow just the sentence 'Because of you' I guess, just keep the 1,0x between these Notes.
• 01:17:415 (5,1): This overlap looks preety bad. If I were you, I'd move this Note to another place, you can maybe move to x:184 y:160
• 01:40:129 (3): Hmm.. Add a New Combo here to make the pattern Antijump - Jump more readable
• 01:40:557 (5,1): Increase the Spacing between these notes to 2.0x as I explained in 00:43:558
• 02:02:414 (2,3): Keep the 1.0x between these Notes, the antijump is really unnecesary here
• 02:31:343 (x): Add a Note here to follow the Vocal properly
• 02:51:700 (3,4,1): Since this is in 1/6, the Spacing increase could be Hard to be read. If you want to increase the spacing here, is ok, but I suggest you to reduce it a bit. At least make the spacing between these Notes around 1.6x or 1.7x
• 03:10:986 (6,7): Again this unnecesary antijump, please avoid that here please
• 03:13:986 (1,2,3,4,5): The pattern 'Antijump - Jump' plays bad here, the Drums are acting here, and when you have Drums acting you use jumps instead.. Use the 1.0x between (1,2,3), then the jump pattern fit perfectly
• 03:16:557 (5): Remove the Whistle at the end as I mentioned in the previous diffs.
• 03:25:129 (3,1): Swap the Whistle placement in these Notes, the whistle sounds much more reasonable if you add in (3) because will remark the piano
• 03:26:843 (4): Add a Whistle at the Slider beginning
• 03:29:414 (3): The symetry is not that important. This Slider doesn't fit really well here, instead of that use 2 single Notes in 03:29:414 and 03:30:271 (with NC and finish this one), because those places are the only to add beats.

[Kyshiro's Mystery:]

• 00:02:630 (7): This Slider doesn't sound fitting, I recommend you to listen the music in 25% playback. I'm sure that you don't have anything to be followed at the beginning of it, so remove this Slider and add a Single Note in 00:02:844
• 00:04:558 (5): I have to do agree with Kiddo about this point. This slider doesn't fit with the music, the Vocal is not placed on a Blue tick.. Hmm.. Kiddo's idea is much better than yours (sorry), you should change that please, and break this 'border', because the rhythm is much more important than a simple border
• 00:10:772 (2): Again you are not following the music properly (25% playback please), change this Slider to a simple Note in 00:10:987, to follow the piano
• 00:21:701 (4): Replace the Whistle in a Finish instead, the Piano becomes highest in this place
• 00:28:558 (5): Add a Finish in this note, same reason as above
• 01:37:343 (8): The long Vocal starts here, this note is really unnecesary. Would be better if you remove the Note from here and then the Spinner starts here and finish in 01:38:843. This kind of musics with low BPM are not like the others with higher BPM where you can add a Note 1/4 before and the spinner sounds properly, if you want to do this kind of things you should add a Note + a Spinner 1/8 later and NOT 1/4
• 02:31:129 (1): Listen that in 25% playback, you don't have anything in 1/8 to follow. Change this in 1/4 please, because this is consider an overmap
• 02:32:843 (5): (^)
• 02:38:629 (6,7): Add a Soft finish in (7) and remove it from (6)
• 02:39:057: I'd add a break till here to 02:44:414, it is a really long map to don't have any break. At least a little would be good to give a little respite to players

And that's about it.. Well done difficulties.
The biggest problems are in Fault, but anyways are not that big xD
Call me back for a recheck after to check my mod!

Since it has been a Long time, I can't absolutely remember what I added, and what not. But well, updated my diffs.
Kyshiro isn't satisfied with his diff anymore, waiting for him to remap

Again revived, but deleted Kyshiro's Diff from the mapset, because he didn't like his Diff anymore (added it instead to the Information), and renamed all Diffs.

From my modding queue~

Everything I say are all suggestions, please keep that in mind!

Sorry for the late reply btw. ;-;
Hard

• 
  00:07:344 (2) - I really think that removing this whistle would sound better .u. To give a greater emphasis on the last piano note of that measure.
  
  00:10:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not an even star jump? :/ I would suggest reducing the spacing between these notes though, tbh. I think a jumps about half the size of the ones you have now would do this part some good..
  
  00:16:129 (3) - Reverse this slider horizontally?
  
  
  So it looks like this

  
  
  01:07:986 (1) - Add a finish?
  
  01:31:129 (2) - Kinda nazi, but move this slightly to x:244/y:208?
  
  01:31:343 (3) - Likewise with ^, move to x:288/y:180
  
  01:35:843 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+G for slightly better flow?

;-; Sorry for super short mod! Don't need to KD this unless you want to, but I really couldn't find much wrong with the map also how to mod easy/normals x_x...

Good luck with the map! Kelly Clarkson is so nice :0

Thanks for the mod =)

Haneure wrote:

From my modding queue~

Everything I say are all suggestions, please keep that in mind!

Sorry for the late reply btw. ;-; No Problem =)
Hard

• 
  00:07:344 (2) - I really think that removing this whistle would sound better .u. To give a greater emphasis on the last piano note of that measure. Instead I increased the volume of the (3) by 5%, should work, too
  
  00:10:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not an even star jump? :/ I would suggest reducing the spacing between these notes though, tbh. I think a jumps about half the size of the ones you have now would do this part some good.. I will leave it for now, but keep it in mind
  
  00:16:129 (3) - Reverse this slider horizontally? Done
  
  
  So it looks like this

  
  
  01:07:986 (1) - Add a finish? Sounds not good, since it's very quiet there
  
  01:31:129 (2) - Kinda nazi, but move this slightly to x:244/y:208? This makes no sense somehow
  
  01:31:343 (3) - Likewise with ^, move to x:288/y:180 ^
  
  01:35:843 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+G for slightly better flow? Before the first Kiai I have those small jumps, too, so I'll keep it.

;-; Sorry for super short mod! Don't need to KD this unless you want to, but I really couldn't find much wrong with the map also how to mod easy/normals x_x...

Good luck with the map! Kelly Clarkson is so nice :0 thanks <3

From my queue/

Hard:
NC must beginning on a strong bit.
00:02:844 (1) - move NC on 00:04:558 (4)
00:07:130 (1) - remove NC
00:07:987 (1) - NC
00:18:058 (2,3,4,1,3) - this patterns should not be placed on the blue points (ticks). This applies to all patterns on the map, Including all diffs.
00:49:558 (1,2,3) - use here Distance snap
00:56:415 (1,2,3) - ^
01:39:271 (1,2,1) - stack or use here Distance snap
01:44:414 (4) - use here a simple slider or s-slider
01:46:128 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:49:128 (8,9) - stack this notes
01:52:986 (1,2,3) - use here Distance snap
02:37:128 (1,1) - stack this notes
02:47:414 (7,8) - ^
02:58:128 (1,2,3) - use here Distance snap
I think, for that diff requires partial remap.

Normal & easy:
no comments

Thanks for the mod

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue/

Hard:
NC must beginning on a strong bit.
00:02:844 (1) - move NC on 00:04:558 (4) Done
00:07:130 (1) - remove NC Done
00:07:987 (1) - NC Done
00:18:058 (2,3,4,1,3) - this patterns should not be placed on the blue points (ticks). This applies to all patterns on the map, Including all diffs. It is, because it's mapped on the vocal, and there it fits
00:49:558 (1,2,3) - use here Distance snap For all if those parts: It's always something Special I wanted to make different from the normal DS, so I will Keep all of these
00:56:415 (1,2,3) - ^
01:39:271 (1,2,1) - stack or use here Distance snap
01:44:414 (4) - use here a simple slider or s-slider I like my slider =/
01:46:128 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:49:128 (8,9) - stack this notes
01:52:986 (1,2,3) - use here Distance snap
02:37:128 (1,1) - stack this notes
02:47:414 (7,8) - ^
02:58:128 (1,2,3) - use here Distance snap
I think, for that diff requires partial remap.

Normal & easy:
no comments

Hey Ylinestra44. That two years bump though, and 2012 mapping style.
There's another suggestion for all of the difficulty. A spinner that start from 03:30:486 to 03:37:129 or 03:33:700 to follow the fade out. Good Luck on ranking this map.

Hey there. Thanks for the great mod.
I applied almost everything expect few pattern-things in Hard.

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

wow, really old map 0.0


(thou idk why u set so much green lines lol

good luck

Added (except one Thing) everyting you mentioned, thanks for the mod =)

Random mod from #modreqs. This is my 1st mod, I'll do my the best

Easy

00:16:558 (3,4) - I would avoid that really small kind of overlap, but it's OK, u don't need to change this

Normal

Fine!

Hard

00:42:700 (1,2) - I would stack them together.
01:39:271 (1,2,1) - ^
02:06:700 (1,2) - ^
02:37:129 (1,1) ^
03:21:271 (5) - Add Whistle
03:21:700 (1,2) - Add Whistle on the beginning of sliders

That's all! You did really good mapping at this! I love the music too (Sorry, my English is not Perfect)

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