Firce777 wrote:

asked for mod inner oni =w=
[inner oni]
00:52:459 (1) - k? - done
01:14:057 (2) - remove this? i think it's not need. - but here you can hear some sound... I'll change this when another person says so
01:39:126 (1) - d? - done
01:41:209 (1) - moved to 01:41:279 ? - at first I thought this is nice pattern but for now not so catchy... =w= fixed
01:58:362 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1) - i think is not fit the song. may be try other patterns? - changed this
01:59:473 (2) - to 02:08:362 (1) - saitama part huh :3? just aware that =w= - yup .w.
02:16:279 (2) - same as 01:14:057 (2) - - same as the before

nice map~

kevinelson wrote:

- a cool stuff here


[General]

Fix your offset at 1680 hear your song at 25% speed and see - offset changed - NO. I asked someone (pp rank around #500) to test my map with offset 1680 and 1680+15, he/she said the former one is too early and the later one is much better. So I'll keep the offset 1696 (Editted on March 22nd).
Muting sliderslide makes the map unrankable, You are not allowed to mute anything anymore - Nah, Muting sliderslide.wav is still available. See this ranked map, where is used muted sliderslider.

- I reply using offset 1680.

[Hard]

01:23:084 - Add note add clap
01:23:084 - Add clap at this point - I don't like making this 5-prets here... And an additional note here may break the emphasis on 01:22:791 (1,2,3) - . So I will reject the suggestions like this for now... sorry!

02:25:307 - Add note, add clap
02:25:584 (5) - end this slider at 02:25:723 make him reverse
02:25:029 - 02:25:862 - Clap on all red and white points

03:02:251 (3,4,5,6,7) - transform this into a stream? - what do you mean? This is 1/2 stream, so what should I do...?

03:11:973 - Add note, add clap
03:12:251 - Add clap at this point


[Insane]
00:49:890 (3) - Transform into a 1/2 slider? 00:50:168 (4) - Transform into a triplet? - But this way sounds still good as the music sounds. No change here



00:52:459 (2) - Delete there is no beat at blue tick - ok

01:02:112 (2) - Transform into 3 beats at Red/White/Red ticks - This doesn't sounds bad, though I prefer the current pattern since mine can follow the vocal better imo



01:12:528 (6) - Unsnapped Ctrl + Shift + A fix that - fixed

01:23:084 - Add note, if u follow ↓
01:23:362 (3) - Transform into a 1/2 Slider if u followed↓
01:22:807 - 01:23:779 - Clap into all Red and white ticks - same to what I mentiond in the Hard diff

01:58:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is weird but i didnt had any idea try something better - yup, but me either lol

02:25:307 - Add note, Add clap
02:25:446 (3,4,5) - Try this



02:25:029 - 02:26:001 clap on all red and white ticks

03:11:696 - 03:12:668 - Same example of 01:22:807 - 01:23:779 Add note at 03:11:973 Clap at all red and white ticks

Good luck

• Byon Byon

  [Taiko Futsuu]

  1. 00:16:140 - add d (?)
  2. 00:39:473 (4) - k
  3. 02:26:140 (3) - k
  4. 02:27:251 (2) - k
  5. 03:12:807 (4) - k
  6. 03:30:307 (2) - k
     
     [Taiko Oni]
  7. 00:02:807 (2) - move to 00:02:946
  8. 00:26:001 (1) - k
  9. 00:28:223 (1) - k
  10. 00:29:612 (2) - k
  11. 00:30:446 (1) - k
  12. 00:32:668 (1) - k
  13. 01:18:640 (2) - k
  14. 01:37:112 (1) - k
  15. 01:38:084 (1) - k
  16. 01:50:584 - add d (?)
  17. 02:11:140 (2) - d
  18. 02:39:334 (1) - k
  19. 02:41:557 (1) - k
      
      [Taiko Inner Oni]
  20. 00:03:501 - add d
  21. 00:23:779 (1) - k
  22. 00:24:612 (4) - k
  23. 00:26:001 (1) - k
  24. 00:26:140 (1) - d
  25. 00:26:765 (2) - k
  26. 00:26:973 (2) - d
  27. 00:28:084 (2) - k
  28. 00:28:223 (3) - k
  29. 00:30:446 (1) - k
  30. 00:31:279 (4) - k
  31. 00:34:890 (1) - k
  32. 00:37:112 (1) - k
  33. 01:01:696 (3) - d
  34. 01:08:918 (2) - k
  35. 01:10:723 - add d
  36. 01:14:057 (2) - d
  37. 01:17:807 (3) - d
  38. 01:18:084 (3) - k
  39. 01:25:862 (3) - k
  40. 01:34:890 (1) - k
  41. 01:35:723 (4) - k
  42. 01:37:112 (1) - k
  43. 01:37:251 (1) - d
  44. 01:39:334 (1) - k
  45. 01:46:001 (1) - k
  46. 01:46:140 (1) - d
  47. 01:46:834 (4) - k
  48. 01:50:168 (3) - k
  49. 01:55:029 (2) - d
  50. 01:55:723 (3) - d
  51. 02:10:584 (2) - d
  52. 02:20:029 (3) - d
  53. 02:20:862 (2) - k
  54. 02:37:112 (1) - k
  55. 02:43:779 (1) - k
  56. 02:46:001 (1) - k
  57. 03:03:223 (2) - k
  58. 03:03:779 (1) - k
  59. 03:05:168 (2) - d
  60. 03:17:529 (2) - k
  61. 03:28:223 (1,2) - both k
  
  Nice map, I like the streams in Inner Oni :3
  Good luck!

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod :3

Most of these are just suggestions, you can ignore some of them if you want to.

• Byon Byon

  [Taiko Futsuu]

  1. 00:16:140 - add d (?) - done
  2. 00:39:473 (4) - k - nope, this Don fits here very well imo...
  3. 02:26:140 (3) - k - done the rest
  4. 02:27:251 (2) - k
  5. 03:12:807 (4) - k
  6. 03:30:307 (2) - k
     
     [Taiko Oni]
  7. 00:02:807 (2) - move to 00:02:946 - done
  8. 00:26:001 (1) - k - done
  9. 00:28:223 (1) - k - no, sorry >_<
  10. 00:29:612 (2) - k - nope, the don can cover the drum beat the best
  11. 00:30:446 (1) - k - the don plays well imo...
  12. 00:32:668 (1) - k - no
  13. 01:18:640 (2) - k
  14. 01:37:112 (1) - k
  15. 01:38:084 (1) - k
  16. 01:50:584 - add d (?) - k instead
  17. 02:11:140 (2) - d
  18. 02:39:334 (1) - k
  19. 02:41:557 (1) - k
      - some applied... sorry but I'm feeling lazy to reply now because "I did change!" -> "No, I should not change" -> "but I can change... umm?"
      
      [Taiko Inner Oni]
  20. 00:03:501 - add d - I don't feel like so... a bit excessive
  21. 00:23:779 (1) - k - no... sorry
  22. 00:24:612 (4) - k - done
  23. 00:26:001 (1) - k - done
  24. 00:26:140 (1) - d - no, this should start with don
  25. 00:26:765 (2) - k - I use this dd_kk since 00:26:904 (1,2) - 's kk sounds much better than use dk_kd...
  26. 00:26:973 (2) - d - ^
  27. 00:28:084 (2) - k - sounds nice
  28. 00:28:223 (3) - k - no
  29. 00:30:446 (1) - k - no
  30. 00:31:279 (4) - k - done
  31. 00:34:890 (1) - k - done
  32. 00:37:112 (1) - k - no
  33. 01:01:696 (3) - d - okay
  34. 01:08:918 (2) - k - done
  35. 01:10:723 - add d - done
  36. 01:14:057 (2) - d - too heavy here
  37. 01:17:807 (3) - d - hmm nice
  38. 01:18:084 (3) - k - ^
  39. 01:25:862 (3) - k - no
  40. 01:34:890 (1) - k - no
  41. 01:35:723 (4) - k - ok
  42. 01:37:112 (1) - k - both applied
  43. 01:37:251 (1) - d - ^
  44. 01:39:334 (1) - k - no
  45. 01:46:001 (1) - k - no
  46. 01:46:140 (1) - d - no. the high-pitched sound makes me put a kat here...
  47. 01:46:834 (4) - k - done
  48. 01:50:168 (3) - k - no. according to the drum sound 01:50:029 (2,3,1,1) - should be d d k d imo
  49. 01:55:029 (2) - d - ok
  50. 01:55:723 (3) - d - ok
  51. 02:10:584 (2) - d - no..
  52. 02:20:029 (3) - d - no
  53. 02:20:862 (2) - k - no
  54. 02:37:112 (1) - k - no
  55. 02:43:779 (1) - k - done
  56. 02:46:001 (1) - k - no
  57. 03:03:223 (2) - k - I remade the stream
  58. 03:03:779 (1) - k - done
  59. 03:05:168 (2) - d - no.. fits well imo
  60. 03:17:529 (2) - k - done
  61. 03:28:223 (1,2) - both k - done
  
  Nice map, I like the streams in Inner Oni :3
  Good luck!

crna wrote:

アーティスト名はClariSではなくてNightcoreにすべきではないでしょうか？
youtubeのソースの方でもそうなっているので、ClariSはタグに入れればいいと思います
- いいえ、アーティスト名はNightcoreではなくアーティスト(ここでは歌手)にすべきです。Nightcoreはソースにもアーティストにもふさわしくありません

_VLaD_ wrote:

Naryuga
this is a great maps :3
<333

[LikeSmile] wrote:

Hm... Can i make easy diff. on this map?)

Naryuga wrote:

- いいえ、アーティスト名はNightcoreではなくアーティスト(ここでは歌手)にすべきです。Nightcoreはソースにもアーティストにもふさわしくありません

crna wrote:

しつこいですが以下がremixした本人が投稿している動画です
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WGcwuFpQJoc

Nightcore - Connect (Trance Remix)
となっているのでこれに習うべきだと私は考えます

crna wrote:

Naryuga wrote:

- いいえ、アーティスト名はNightcoreではなくアーティスト(ここでは歌手)にすべきです。Nightcoreはソースにもアーティストにもふさわしくありません

これについても私は歌手ではなくremixした人の名前(ここでは投稿者のtestmx1がNightcoreと表記しているのでNightcoreが該当)が適切だと思います
オリジナルとはピッチがかけ離れているのでNightcore - Connect (Trance Remix)
補足としてOriginal ClariSと記載する形が理想です

再度ご検討の方よろしくお願いします

Naryuga wrote:

Nightcoreは音楽のジャンルでありアーティストではありませんので、オリジナルの歌手であるClariSがやはり適当だと考えます

crna wrote:

BATの判断に任せるのは大いに賛成ですが、ニホンゴなので読んでくれるかどうか怪しいですね

Naryuga wrote:

Nightcoreは音楽のジャンルでありアーティストではありませんので、オリジナルの歌手であるClariSがやはり適当だと考えます

Nightcoreは元々存在するグループであり、それを真似てremixしているのが今のNightcoreと呼ばれるジャンルです
youtubeでもNightcoreをアーティスト名として投稿している人も多く、Nightcoreはアーティスト名としても認識されているはずです

お言葉を返すようですがosuの方で検索するとタイトルかアーティストを見れば必ずどちらかにNightcoreの文字が入っています
これはオリジナルとの混同を避けるためだと考えます
どうしてもClariSをアーティスト名として使いたいのであれば他の人のように (Nightcore Mix)と表記するべきです

Pimpi wrote:

がんばってNaryuga! :3

litoluna wrote:

ふぁいとーです!
ないすそんぐあんどまっぷ!
なりゅ～

zx_baka_0502442 wrote:

I love this song =w=
You can entirely disregard ↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓

Inner Oni

02:38:918 - d - no, it fits the sounds like 02:38:779 - or 02:39:196 (1) -
02:45:237 - k(? - ok
03:00:723 - k(? - no... sounds weird
03:02:737 - k(? - ok
03:03:640 - d - done
03:12:668 - d - ok, it fits the other pattern that I did
03:16:348 - k - done
03:18:501 - k(? - done
=w=

orioncomet wrote:

Random mods from #modreqs.

[Normal]
- Gotta love your sliders here
03:17:807 (2) - Suggestion, add new combo? - sure~
I like this diff! - owo thanks!

[Hard]
00:01:711 (1) - It's not snapped, plus the end of slider is not snapped well either, please recheck. - fixed the timing
01:31:834 (2,3) - Same as 01:32:529 (2) - from [Insane], I like sound here more 02:33:918 (1). - then removed clap from 01:32:529 - and added it on 01:32:390 - follow the drum sound, maybe that's what you mean...
02:51:973 (3) - A bit too far from 02:51:695 (2)? compare from 02:50:584 (1) to 02:51:695 (2). - That's one pattern but changing it, the inconsistency of spacing is not so comfortable

[Insane]
- I kind of want to ask you to add new combo on some past of sudden jump, but it's not that bad. - added on a few parts
01:32:529 (2) - Suggestion, remove clap here and add it at the end of 01:32:112 (1) instead [01:32:390]? or don't add clap at all? Hmm.. I'm not sure, well up to you, I just find hit-sound was off. Make it sound like this 02:34:057 (1,2,3) - is better. - added clap as well as Hard
02:14:473 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo? - maybe that would be better, added


Interesting mapset, but I couldn't mods taiko, sorry. がんばって！

iyasine wrote:

Naryugaさん　こんちゃ！#modreqsからです
Tranceという打ち込み音源のmodに挑戦したくてやって参りました。的確な提案が出来るかどうかわかりませんが頑張ります。

Insane

左右を対称とした配置がとても印象的で全体的に綺麗に配置してあったので、VolumeやHitsoundの提案が多いと思います。

00:16:834 - add whistle ? - すでについていますが...
00:30:029 - ここにclapを付けて、00:30:098 - のclapを外したほうがリズム取りやすいかなと思いました。 - ドラムの音にあわせていますのでここをずらすと変な感じになります... 代わりに00:30:029 - にwhistleをつける変更をしました
00:38:501 (2) - add whistle - うーん... 特に後ろに目立つ音もないのでこのままで　
00:38:918 - whistleに変更 - ok
00:48:223 - この静かな場面でAudio Volume80%はちょっとでかいかなと思いました。60%を提案します。- ok
00:52:807 - 65%
00:53:918 - 70%
00:55:029 - 80%
こんな感じでBメロに向けて少しづつ音量上げていくと、プレイヤーの心をギュっと掴めると思います - 数字は異なりますが提案のように音量を上げていくようにしました。全体的に音量変化に乏しい感じだったので他の部分も考えてみます
00:48:223 ~ 00:55:029を修正する場合は、他の難易度も合わせて修正してみてください。 - ok

01:58:709 - clap削除　01:58:779 - clap追加。　clapを青線から赤線にしたほうが自分はシックリきました。
01:59:057 (5) - clapに変更- ここも00:30:029 - と同様にドラムの音にあわせてあるので青線のままです。　中途半端な音取りだったので混乱させてしまったのかもしれません... パターンごっそり変えました

Hard

01:31:834 (2) - ボーカルに合わせてこんな音取りはどうかな？ - ok


01:55:723 (4,5) - Grid snapを外して、スライダーのケツのドットを0.5 ~ 1.0 grid外側にずらしたほうが01:55:584 (3,4,5,6) - このセットの見た目が良くなるかと。 - なるほど... 画像のようにそれぞれ一直線になるようにしました

SPOILER

Normal

00:36:140 (3) - 上に反らしたほうが次の00:37:251 (1) - に移りやすいかなと思いました。 - ok

SPOILER

02:11:695 (3) - 少し上に移動したほうが、見た目も良くなるし、AIMもしやすいと思います。 - スペーシングを憂慮してたのですが大丈夫でした, fixed

SPOILER

nice mapset! good luck

Satellite wrote:

hi

[General]
Lead-In 500は少し短いと思いました　1000は欲しいです - 1note目まで既に1695(+500)msあるので十分かと思います
曲の音質bitRateが128kbpsですが、BATなど詳しい方に依頼して192kbpsまであげることをお勧めします
現状でもRankableですが、より良い音質のほうが好ましいと思います - 現状のサイズが少し軽いのもあって大丈夫かなと思ってたというか、そもそもあまり気にしてなかったですorz 元のファイル( http://www.mediafire.com/?38xjby8y5iq1gqq )を調べたら320kbpsだったのでソフトさえあればできるのですが、変換ソフトを紛失してしまったので如何せんI'm too lazy to check the offsetなのもあってこのままで...
00:39:751 - 02:53:084 - BreakTimeを1メモリ右にずらすとgood? 前者はほとんど差が見られないのでそのままで。　後者はLetterboxが消えるという地味に大きい変化を起こしたのでどうしようか悩みましたが、試しにずらしてみることに... これは誰かに指摘されたらまた戻すかもです

no kudosu please~~ modしようと思ったけどたいした提案が見つからず(´・ω・｀)

[Hard]
03:11:696 (3) - 1番のほうではここでNcが入ってたので此方もあわせてみては - NCのパターンを1番2番とあわせました

これだけですね(´・ω・｀)！頑張ってください～

litoluna wrote:

192kbps...φ(:3｣∠)_
http://puu.sh/2UvvX.zip
(:3 _ )=
no kds plz

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hey Naryuga


00:01:569 (1,2) You missing slider http://puu.sh/2V9BQ

this not modding no kudosu

Edit : This is map offset -10 (1560) please.

I listen this sound offset check is better.

XL177E2 wrote:

最初ずれてる？

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761160

譜面は神でした。 - thx ><

1. Fixed the first slider in the Standard diffs
2. Offset -10

Uchiha_sorayuki wrote:

Taiko modding and for M4M - If you want m4m from me then post your modpost on my modding queue and I'll mod yours in return
most of them are suggestion
_________________________

Taiko Futsuu
dont have to be a breaktime in taiko diff, fill something on the break - umm... add a few notes on the breaktimes
00:56:140 (1) - the vocal goes down here so big d here - I'd rather use a light Kat note instead of a heavy Don note here...
01:46:140 (3) - ^ but change to d - done

Taiko Oni

01:10:042 - i think add d here - ok
01:14:903 (2) - move to 01:15:042 - - I wonder why... o_o The vocal is definitely start here, and nothing follow 01:15:042 - . It sounds really strange to me.
01:31:292 (1,1,1) - ithink kdkdd is more fit - no... here is not in the mood of a sudden stream
01:32:681 (1) - move it to 01:32:820 - - no, same reason to 01:14:903 (2) -
01:34:208 (1,2,3) - i prefer kkd - ok
02:17:125 (1) - move it to 02:17:264 - - no
02:23:236 (1,1) - try kd - no ><
02:24:903 (1,2) - try dk - dd instead
02:34:903 (3) - move to 02:35:042 - - nope...
03:03:236 (2) - delete this - following the vocal
03:03:792 (1) - move to 03:03:931 - and add k here 03:03:792 - - no...

great map and song so star~

Andrea wrote:

Why would you Nightcore a song like this? It makes me sad.

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[Normal]
Either Disable "Letterbox in Breaks" here or enable it at other diffs to keep consistency.
* 00:22:115 (1,2,3) - and some further Sliders sounds me a bit awkward... this part could fit better the song if some (or each one of) 4/1 sliders could start from the Big white tick (1st white tick) instead of the 3rd one... but seems not possible doing changes here

[Hard]
♥ Well-made patterns (:
02:33:504 (3,1) - Also it's possible to make this: put 02:33:504 (3) at x:384 y:208 and make a Ctrl+G on the 02:33:782 (1) slider. Even you don't want change it, I suggest at least testplay this party (seems feel a bit better)

[Insane]
♥ Well-made patterns, intelligent jumps, 1.120 total combo, 19.2M score... Surely Cookiezi/thelewa will play your [Insane] once your map get ranked!

BrokenArrow wrote:

Andrea wrote:

Why would you Nightcore a song like this? It makes me sad.

LOL that's funny because Andrea

CloudNep wrote:

Awesome map~!

Alarido wrote:

M4M From My Queue (:
Thank you for helpful mod!
And I can't mod Taiko.... but you may call [Luanny] to do it (:

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[Normal]
Either Disable "Letterbox in Breaks" here or enable it at other diffs to keep consistency. - well, it is already enable in [Normal], [Hard] and [Insane] diffs. Taiko is the exception, so :3
* 00:22:115 (1,2,3) - and some further Sliders sounds me a bit awkward... this part could fit better the song if some (or each one of) 4/1 sliders could start from the Big white tick (1st white tick) instead of the 3rd one... but seems not possible doing changes here - I did some changes but not slider's beginning. I prefer to hear the nice snare drum when you click the slider.

[Hard]
♥ Well-made patterns (:
02:33:504 (3,1) - Also it's possible to make this: put 02:33:504 (3) at x:384 y:208 and make a Ctrl+G on the 02:33:782 (1) slider. Even you don't want change it, I suggest at least testplay this party (seems feel a bit better) - let me try this :3

[Insane]
♥ Well-made patterns, intelligent jumps, 1.120 total combo, 19.2M score... Surely Cookiezi/thelewa will play your [Insane] once your map get ranked! - OwO

Definitely, it's not feels a helpful mod Your map is so perfect at osu!standard [Insane] and [Hard]. I feel [Normal] may need some work, specially for refrain on note stacking (but they're still fine (: )
If I was BAT and your mapset doesn't had Taiko diffs, I could Bubble this (:
But I can't....
So take a

and GO GO RANK IT!!!