Hanjamon wrote:

If you need a mod feel free to send me a pm, i want to see this back \o/

Stefan wrote:

mfw I see Ono's mod


no just kidding, let us see what we can do here (Note: This is NOT a real mod, so please do NOT give KD for this):

[Kantan]
The Kantan is really inconsistent in its difficulty level. You have section where you've did it quite simple with big breaks while on other sections like 01:03:963 (63,64,65) or 01:19:531 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) it becomes quite complex and beginner-unfriendly. The amount of circles isn't the big issue (tho some could be removed but these are really just some. And some necessary beats are missing here, especially in the Kiai section.

To make it less dense , 01:01:369 is removed
Since the tone at 01:03:963 is similar to the one at 01:02:017, I would not probably remove them

01:19:855 removed

Besides of these things I still want to mention some parts:
00:34:774 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - Seems easier if you have only 00:37:369 (34,35) for 1/2: http://puu.sh/c0cNM/9486e0e05d.jpg
Patterns here are partially changed and some of them removed to a more simple way

01:02:017 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - by far too complex and hard to follow, my example: http://puu.sh/c0cCQ/d70ad005c9.jpg
Changed to only 1/1 notes

01:11:423 (74) - 01:16:288 - http://puu.sh/c0ccD/0c5cebe966.jpg
01:48:720 (125,126,127) - hold the same rhythm like 01:46:126 (122,123)
Fixed

In short: Less 1/2 in this Difficulty helps a lot.

[Futsuu]
This Difficulty is much more appropriate for some 1/2, they are still some unnecessary and not assisting 1/2 in which should be removed, aren't many but helpful to remove:
00:20:342 (29) - removed
01:02:017 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106) - It's quite exhausting to hold the constant metronom switch here and should be done easier: http://puu.sh/c0di6/5f755a9207.png Choosed to simplify it, and 01:08:342 removed
01:08:342 (111) - You might want to remove this to put at 01:07:523 k instead. Fixed
01:16:126 (128) - no change here, since they share similar tones. 01:19:693 removed btw
01:23:585 (145) - It has more structure in the rhythm without this note. Fixed

What I can say more is some parts seems a bit unconnected mapped sometimes, that may be me who thinks like that but oh well.

[Muzukashii]
Muzukashii is good, some less circles here but there isn't much issues here.

[Oni]
A really heavy density/note increase compared to Muzukashii. Since there are three (!) Inner Oni Difficulties (where you also mapped one of them) in your set you should use this Difficulty instead. From now try to keep a note lenght of five-seven 1/4 notes in a row. things like 01:18:882 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1) are overkill for player who comes from Muzukashii Difficulties. And in general some more breaks will be necessary to make this anyhow rankable.
Well, I prefer not changing this map since it can't be more simplified. It would be weird by removing more notes.
About ooxxooxooxx streams, players can practice on other maps , then turn to this map when good enough. It's impossible to have all oni difficulties the same level on osu

[Tama's Oni]
Except of some more complex pattern and density in the Kiai section this Difficulty is good, what I like is that oo oooo ooo is used which differs it better from the first Oni Difficulty. As said pattern and density in the Kiai section is very complex and shouldn't be here for the Oni Difficulty. Both Oni Difficulties can nearly work as Inner Oni Difficulties.

Simplified many parts of the map by removing unnecessary notes

[Inner Oni]
Seems fine, didn't found much wrong here for now.

[Ping's Inner Oni]
It's fine, not my taste to be honest but in general good mapped. The only thing which is pretty weird mapped is 00:11:099 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88). dkdkdkd is kinda unfitting, if you really want to keep the 1/6 here, make this as dddkkkd.
Indeed. Changed to kkkkkkd instead , dddkkkd is a bit too hard in 1/6

[Haereticus' Inner Oni]
Good so far.


Okay, let us come to a result: This map isn't ready yet to be qualified. Ono made a great job here in helping here and it's definitely noticable but the map shouldn't be qualified for now. From my sight you should get some more modders to solve the current problems in Kantan, Oni and Tama's Oni. But do not think your Map is bad, it's quite decent but has too many issues to be bubbled at the moment. If you think it's really ready feel free to pm me.

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• 
  The offset of Tama's Oni is inconsistent, move the bpm offset of this diff to 00:01:045 - also, you will need to resnap the inherits points of the diff

• 00:44:828 (40) - move this note to 00:44:504 - ? sounds better imo and is less confusing
  00:56:504 - add a k here and change 00:56:828 - to d? make consistency
  01:21:639 (85) - a note in a 1/2 beat, i don't recommend that for a Kantan so.. how about move this note to 01:21:477 - for consistency with 01:23:747 (88,89,90,91) - ? if you applied change 01:24:720 (90) - to k? i think is easier to follow for the new players
  01:40:288 (110) - how about delete this note? with deleting this note you can empathize more the next patterns 01:40:936 -
  01:46:612 (117,121) - maybe delete these notes? as i said before, i don't recommend notes in 1/2 beat for a kantan and without these notes is less confusing for the players

• 00:12:072 (18) - delete this note for empathize more 00:12:720 - ?
  00:33:801 (48,49) - delete these notes? a break would be good
  01:24:072 (139) - move this note to 01:23:909 - and add d in 01:24:234 - and 01:24:396 - ? kk dd k sounds better imo
  01:28:612 (150) - maybe delete this note for a little break?
  01:53:585 (197) - Kantan is using a K, use here too?

• 01:19:044 (237,238,239) - delete these notes? imo, this 1/2 is a bit long and if you delete these notes you will get a little break
  01:40:774 (318) - delete this note? a hard part is coming so the players can get more ready

• 
  01:43:044 (14,16) - maybe delete these notes..? a little ''break'' would be good, K k K k K k K etc.. is hard imo >.<
  01:52:126 - add a d here? sounds good imo

• 01:17:189 (3) - move this note to 01:17:513 - ? sounds lot better imo
  01:48:486 (1) - change this note to k? (kkkkd) i think sounds better keeping this pattern simple

• Is okay for me :3

• 
  Here i can only suggest to remove some finishers like 00:05:585 (42) - , are not necessary

• I can't suggest nothing :3 maybe only change 01:49:531 (691) - to d? dkkkkkd sounds a bit weird imo

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi mlien! i'm really sorry for the late but here the mod i promised ^^

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• 
  The offset of Tama's Oni is inconsistent, move the bpm offset of this diff to 00:01:045 - also, you will need to resnap the inherits points of the diff

Done~

[Kantan]

• 00:44:828 (40) - move this note to 00:44:504 - ? sounds better imo and is less confusing Fixed
  00:56:504 - add a k here and change 00:56:828 - to d? make consistency Added d instead
  01:21:639 (85) - a note in a 1/2 beat, i don't recommend that for a Kantan so.. how about move this note to 01:21:477 - for consistency with 01:23:747 (88,89,90,91) - ? if you applied change 01:24:720 (90) - to k? i think is easier to follow for the new players Since the actual sound is there, moving it forward seems to be wierd to :/ Thus removed the note. 01:22:450 added k
  01:40:288 (110) - how about delete this note? with deleting this note you can empathize more the next patterns 01:40:936 - Deleted
  01:46:612 (117,121) - maybe delete these notes? as i said before, i don't recommend notes in 1/2 beat for a kantan and without these notes is less confusing for the players

Deleted

[Futsuu]

• 00:12:072 (18) - delete this note for empathize more 00:12:720 - ? Deleted
  00:33:801 (48,49) - delete these notes? a break would be good Deleted
  01:24:072 (139) - move this note to 01:23:909 - and add d in 01:24:234 - and 01:24:396 - ? kk dd k sounds better imo Applied, but 01:23:909 moved to 01:25:044 for less density
  01:28:612 (150) - maybe delete this note for a little break? Unchanged
  01:53:585 (197) - Kantan is using a K, use here too? Changed

[Muzukashii]

• 01:19:044 (237,238,239) - delete these notes? imo, this 1/2 is a bit long and if you delete these notes you will get a little break Deleted a few notes
  01:40:774 (318) - delete this note? a hard part is coming so the players can get more ready Deleted

[Oni]

• 
  01:43:044 (14,16) - maybe delete these notes..? a little ''break'' would be good, K k K k K k K etc.. is hard imo >.< Deleted one note ;w;
  01:52:126 - add a d here? sounds good imo Since there's no clear sound, I prefer it to remain the same ;w;

[Tama's Oni]

• 01:17:189 (3) - move this note to 01:17:513 - ? sounds lot better imo Fixed
  01:48:486 (1) - change this note to k? (kkkkd) i think sounds better keeping this pattern simpleFixed~

[Inner Oni]

• Is okay for me :3

[Ping's Inner Oni]

• 
  Here i can only suggest to remove some finishers like 00:05:585 (42) - , are not necessary Fixed

[Haereticus' Inner Oni]

• I can't suggest nothing :3 maybe only change 01:49:531 (691) - to d? dkkkkkd sounds a bit weird imo Since 01:49:531 doesn't have similar sound with 01:49:693 I would rather leave it like this

This is all, good luck mlien! ^^

_Gezo_ wrote:

DQ'd for more than 6 months WAKE UP AMERICA
Overall a good mapset but will need further polishing on the spread for lower diffs.

[General]
all is k

[for all diffs that map the "Heavenly Moon"]

exact rhythm
diffs lower than oni changed

[Kantan]
00:01:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It doesn't feel really right to me, it's a bit continuous and because of that I don't really feel the sudden stop. Dunno if other think the same. Changed some colors for more variation
00:12:720 (11,12,13,14,15) - You could make that part less intense to differ with the previous one which was more powerful in the song. Removed some notes
00:14:017 (12) - apparently the other diffs don't have a note here Removed
00:19:207 (18,19) - make it the same as 00:16:612 (15,16,17) - , would be a bit more consistent this way. Done
00:26:990 (23,24,25,26) - Make it 3-1 here or 1-3 on 00:32:180 (28,29,30,31) - , rhythm consistency. 1-3 1-3
01:11:747 (71,72,73) - Notes on beat 3 feel really awkward to play, because you are missing the strong beat. Changed some patterns
01:23:747 (88,89) - 89 feels unnecessary removed
01:32:504 (101,102,104,105) - Same as 01:11:747 (71,72,73) - made them consistent

[Futsuu]
00:28:288 (37,38,39) - You could make a 4/1 break here, but it's not totally necessary. 00:28:612 removed
00:46:450 (65,66,67) - (and repetitions afterwards) better make it 3/2 d d instead ? unchanged
01:22:936 (136,139) - I recommend you to delete these, the patterns plays weird, and you'll get some more breaks. Deleted the weird part, added a k to connect the following notes
01:27:315 (147,148,149) - This could be a nice break as well, since it follows a pretty weird pattern. unchaged, i feel it's quite okay with this part

[Muzukashii]
00:06:234 (13) - You have d on every other diff, so this might as well be a d changed to d
00:08:828 (19) - 00:11:423 (32) - it's a huge jump from Futsuu you have here. Oni doesn't really rhythmically change though, so you might want to find the right way to make a nicer spread. deleted some notes to make it more playable for futsuu players
00:11:423 (32) - 00:12:720 (36) - it's about the same, but here we have an impact problem removed ddd, made the last one D
00:24:396 (51,92) - While futsuu has barely 1/1 notes, you have a lot of 1/2 here, if you don't want to make deletions it would be better to pump up the difficulties retroactively simplified a lot
00:38:666 (101,102,103,104,105,106) - kdd kdd instead ? it would fit a bit better yerr synth+kick applied
00:51:153 (140) - You use a structure that goes x(-)xx *x each time but here you have x(x)xx xx. Delete this note so you have the same general structure i'll preserve the present style, it sounds better for me
01:02:017 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - It felt odd to play but idk my solution would get rid of the breaks, but still worth trying: http://i.chiyozel.com/uBvV6smJ adopted a similar style to it
01:20:504 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251) - The song doesn't exactly go that way, I suggest you to try something like this (not exactly the same but the general idea) http://i.chiyozel.com/lh2Cs0HK changed
01:28:288 (268) - you could move it to the next red tick, it fits a lot better imo (and it will create a small break) removed it instead, it also sounds good
01:30:882 (277,278,279) - 01:36:072 (300,301,302) - Both patterns don't have the same impact because you use them on a severe clash (the song calms down and goes intense right after that). using a D on both could work well, like you did in Oni. both removed ddd and replaced by D
01:51:639 (358,360,362) - a bit dumb to miss k on these, lol d k d k d k adopted lol

[Oni]
prob rip 555
00:20:180 (6,7,1) - pmuch stuff that could be dkd because the song goes low-high-lower than high exactly
00:25:207 (1) - 00:26:504 (1) - 00:27:801 (1) - 00:30:396 (1) - 00:31:693 (1) - these should be 1/4 later. removed the 1/4 for ...
00:39:315 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Muzu has 1/1 here, so maybe go 1/2 here instead remains 1/4. the previous removal of 1/4 is okay but this part i wish to have 1/4
00:47:261 (2,3,1) - and others: use 1/2 here, 1/4 is not totally in the song and in the spread Fixed
01:02:017 (2) - 01:08:504 (12) - a bit continuous and will be subject to change if you apply my suggestion in muzukashii changed a d to k for some variety
01:14:666 (2) - 01:23:261 (1) - be cautious about this, because it's a pretty long part without any 1/1 breaks, while muzu hasn't that many 1/2 notes. made a break with D replacing the original notes
01:24:720 (1) - 01:30:558 (1) - ^ simplified some, the ddkkddkkddkk or whatever remains
~ 01:35:099 (1) - ^ made a lot mooooore easy - extra simplified

[Tama's Oni]
(feels like an inner.)
00:33:153 (1,1,2,1) - ddkkd as there are 5 kicks. Applied
00:45:072 - You could add a note here since the melody stops here :V added a k
01:02:017 (1) - 01:08:504 (1) - If oni gets deletions, that could need some too. Deleted most 1/4
01:10:288 (1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - The rhythm is wrong, it should be 3-2-4 and not 2-4-3. This pattern really threw me off when playing. Applied
01:15:153 (2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^ changed to 3-4-2, sounds better
01:20:504 (1,1,2,3,1) - the first note of the 5 doesn't land on a powerful sound which makes the pattern a bit wonky, so maybe make it d k ddd k Applied
01:23:099 (1) - should be 1/4 before unchanged


[Inner Oni]
00:20:423 (9) - this note is not really necessary and adds a bit of difficulty for nothing removed
00:38:666 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - Overmappy here imo, you put way more notes than the song can carry. changed
00:42:558 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - is this stream really necessary unchanged, i think its way better than putting sliders or stuff
00:45:072 - same as tama's oni added
01:18:882 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think that you're following the melody, so http://i.chiyozel.com/sYERZXLK appears to be more suitable. Applied pattern similar to it except the first two notes to k

[PING's Inner Oni]
00:05:828 (43) - Delete this note as it doesn't have any strong support in the song. deleted
00:11:099 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I think this pattern is better off with kk(kkkd), as it's how the roll goes in the song -> http://i.chiyozel.com/xV146pfA. If you think applied since its more easy for those who want to dt (?)

[Haereticus' Inner Oni]
00:39:801 (139,140,141,142) - It doesn't support 1/6 here, change to 1/4 simplified
01:30:882 (538,539,540) - Maybe delete 539 and put 538 as big, it would work better this way applied
01:35:747 (584,585,586) - Delete 585, it's not necessary modified patterns before it to make this note necessary, since there is obvious sound here
01:38:342 (607) - ~ 01:40:774 (634) - iI find this part a bit weirdly mapped since there's no strong change, just long notes in the music. It's better if you rethink that pattern because it makes the map appear bad. I'd recommend following the background drumming and mix it with the long notes? changed it to a more normal pattern, since its quite monotone here, unable to change too much. 01:39:639 to 01:40:936 changed to kkkkkkkkddddddddK to follow more the sound
still a fun diff

There are things that I might have missed, but I strongly recommend to consider these ones first. There might be retroactive changes.
Good luck reranking this.

qoot8123 wrote:

Muzu:

00:59:423 (150,151,152,153) - 這裡還可以再放點notes,難度跟futsuu有點相近edited

01:40:936 - ~ 01:46:126 - 雖然沒有很難,但是這一段的難度跟oni有點相近,把1/4簡化成1/2會比較好 edited

Haereticus' Inner Oni :

01:39:639 (619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - 這個串感覺可以改善一下,像是這樣,盡量避免串尾大圓 01:40:855 移除, 串串改了

01:46:126 - 和01:46:450 - 建議把大圓拿掉,打起來比較順暢 edited


沒啥問題了

Genocide wrote:

:o

edit: i will just give some opinions so dont KD me　ok
[heareticus's inner oni]
00:13:369 (83,84,85,86,87) - what are you following to? uh ... there are sounds here

Too many unnecessary streams >_>. well, unfortunately that's because of the music :/

[ping's inner oni]
00:05:747 (43) - same reason with heareticus's, move 1/2 forward pls Firstly I didn't understand Secondly I don't see any problems here
00:21:153 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - yes i know what are you following to, but i recommend you to make a solid colors, because background sound isn't that strong Remains the same, since this is an Inner Oni - which has to follow the background sound

Pretty fine for me.

[Muzu]
00:02:666 (6,12,18) - i know a reason why you not follow the electronic snare, but i recommend you to move these 1/2 forward This is my mapping style, I don't like to follow these sounds, so I'll keep it the same
01:02:342 (156) - move this one to 01:01:693 - , and keep blank some break here 01:02:342 - 01:03:315 -
01:07:693 (179) - delete , too long for muzukashii sorry no changes here
01:46:126 (323,324,325,326,327,328) - lol'd too many dons here. this is inevitable qq

This muzu is good already, but your muzu is a bit hard in this part only 01:05:747 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183) - , so it will be a bit inconsistency with your muzu mapping. I is surely not so consistent here, but this is the only unique part in the song, so having such notes is not so unacceptable I think.

[Futsuu]
00:02:666 (4,8,12) - same as muzu. remains the same
Well too many dons at starter and much solid colors so player will get boring easily, especially from here 00:41:747 (59) - and so on. These easy diffs are surely boring, for good players of course. I'm putting consistent color notes not for their pleasure of their eyes, but for their play. Too much color changing is too hard for novice players.

_Gezo_ wrote:

1

preview point isn't properly snapped snapped

[Kantan]
01:30:558 (97) - delete this note to have the same effect as 01:35:747 - done

[Futsuu]
00:02:666 (4,8,12) - replace them to k ? you did that on muzu well, this is futsuu >_>
00:10:126 (15,16,17) - 1/1 instead ? you'll have a smoother spread progression to muzu 1
00:27:639 (36) - could be a k so it doesn't get boring, and fits the melody change 1
00:28:936 (38,39) - 1/1 here is encouraged ry
00:50:342 (73,74,75) - tfw kantan more notes for 1/2 notes diff spread
(probably will need further spread checking, I'll leave you full freedom about your choices!)

[Muzukashii]
00:31:531 (68,69) - They should be separated by a 3/4 beat 00:31:855 added note instead
01:33:477 (271,272,273,274) - doesn't really support 1/4 1
01:39:801 (294,295) - these notes are baka and not really supported by anything :C there are sounds .-.

[Oni]
00:24:396 (1) - to 00:32:504 (3) - this has a lot of baka rhythms, you have 3/4 on most of these notes 1
01:10:612 (1,2,1) - I'd see this as dkd and 01:11:099 (2) - as k for better music support i prefer ddk changed k
01:11:261 (3) - ^ if applied the second part incidentally it should be a d
01:13:369 (5) - could move that 1/4 earlier 1
01:14:504 - needs 2 notes 1
01:15:639 (1,1,2,3) - k dkd ? 1
01:17:099 - 2 lines above for even spread
(there are many other things alike that I won't mention like 01:22:936 (4,1,1) - 3/4 melody)

[Inner]
00:29:585 (3,4,5) - is different compared to 00:30:234 (7,8,9,10,1) - 00:30:882 (1,2,3,1,1) - 00:31:531 (2,3,4,1,1) - despite having the same melody structure. make them even.
00:35:585 (1,2,1,2) - invert rhythm here, it feels better to play
00:37:044 (1,1,2,1) - ^
00:37:693 (2,3) - use kkd or ddk here, so you have similar structure
00:40:288 (3,1,2,1) - invert rhythm for consistency with previous part
01:05:180 (1) - make it a d, as k doesn't make sense
01:12:558 (1,2,3) - make sure 2 has more emphasis since it's a clear sound in the song
01:23:747 (3) - make it a k since it's a distinct high-pitched sound
01:23:909 (1,1) - if you applied ^ it's better you invert both (you will have a better fallback)
01:24:801 (5,2) - don't feel necesarry to have these
01:25:288 (2,1) - invert for better emphasis
01:36:234 (6) - could be k for pitch empashis as well
01:38:342 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this is baka stream, maybe look at the suggestion I left in Haereticus inner and adapt it ?

no change
[Haereticus]
1 i aint changing this diff either, the mapping style is already distorted. And don't worry, I don't care how others think about the map

something large, eh. I'm literally going to assure this diff gets ranked as a lot of people aren't happy with the happy mapping

00:28:288 (40,41,42,43) - These big notes bother me actually :C
00:30:234 (58 to 74) - The rhythm is better this way: http://i.chiyozel.com/8datIpaV (cursor @ 00:31:044 - )
00:32:342 (78,79,80,81,82) - ^ :CCC
00:32:990 (82,83) - should be better off as dk , 00:33:234 (84,85) - kd, 00:33:477 (87) - k.
00:34:207 (94) - could del this one, as well as 00:39:558 (135) - (they're a bit unnecessary and they still keep the empasis steady)
00:40:774 (145,146) - could invert this, giving a better flow towards the synths
01:09:477 (324) - baka note
01:18:882 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435) - http://i.chiyozel.com/ufGvYtQo It might look easier but it flows muuuuuuuch better.
01:20:909 (442,443) - invert and possibly delete 01:20:747 (440) - , move 01:21:234 (445) - to 01:21:396 -, better flow compared to before
01:23:342 (464) - move to 01:23:017 - so you get to map the melody here? if so invert 01:23:017 (461,463) - as well for flowing
01:24:720 (475,476,477,478) - and here 1/2 is more than enough for empasis
01:25:369 (483,484,485,486,487) - cut this somewhere at 484 or 486 to mark a separation (and better emphasis, again)
01:26:828 (498,499,500,501) - this current pattern feels weird. use xxx x instead
01:29:261 (519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535) - http://i.chiyozel.com/NbKyFlWn is better imo
01:35:828 (583,584) - delete these, you need to make a separation to create a much better flow. you made one at 01:30:558 - though.
01:33:639 (561,562) - k d and 01:33:963 (564) - d as the pitch stays relatively still
01:34:288 (567) - d? just a small suggestion
01:38:342 (605,606,607,608,609) - keep D on that point, it would be much better (and give a bigger break for the players) and for :
01:38:828 (610,611,612,613,614,615) - all kats here, 01:39:396 (617) - don here; you could make that flow to the background noise, it will be way better.
01:39:639 (619,620,621,622,623,624) - 2 lines above
01:40:126 (625,626,627,628,629,630) - all dons, 01:40:612 (631,632,633) - all kats for the same reason cited two lines above
01:50:342 - you could totally make a 2-beat long slider here.
01:51:477 (3,4,10) - could definitely be dons here, as kats would represent kicks.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

i'm just here to say hi!

mliencheng wrote:

Not surprised,

this is obviously planned by somebody.

PatZar wrote:

fix the source please, jubeat copious

1. Sourse: jubeat copious
2. In lower diffs HP should be 5.0 or higher. This is due to new rules.
3. difficulty spread seems unequally. Please consider changing Oni to bit easier (or Muzu to bit harder. but it's not recommended much).

1. no ddd triplet?
2. 00:57:801 - Consider adding d note here, since so strong sound. it would be nicely imo.
3. 01:40:936 (108,109,110) - change to ddd for avoiding continuous kkk pattern. (also add k note at 01:40:288 - ?)
4. 01:41:261 - 01:43:855 -, Consider adding notes for making 1/1 triplet patterns.

1. 00:32:828 (46) - change to d for making reversed pattern of 00:26:990 (36,37,38) -.
2. 01:07:207 (102,103,104,105) - Consider changing to d for avoiding continuous k patterns. also melody's pitch is lower.
3. 01:13:369 (114,115,116) - I'd recommend changing to kkd since in kiai part 1/2 are biased to ddk.
4. 01:32:504 (154,155,156,157) - doublet to doublet seems a little out of place. Consider to make once again or removing this pattern.
5. 01:46:612 (186) - 01:49:207 (189) - etc. why not finisher?

1. 01:07:207 (177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184) - Consider changing to kkkkkkkk, since this 1/2 stream is so long and bit hard. also you used kkkk in Oni.
2. 01:10:450 (187,188,189,190) - This triplet is bit weird imo. I'm not sure why not follow 3/4 rhythm.
3. 01:15:963 (211) - could be moved to 1/4 tick left, similar reason as ^.
4. 01:46:612 (325) -etc. Same as above.

1. see above, I'd recommend change to bit easier for keeping equally spaced difficulty spread.
2. 00:25:207 (1) - move to 1/4 tick right to follow the melody.
3. 00:26:504 (1) -, 00:27:801 (1) -, etc. ^
4. 01:16:288 (1,1) - Finishers are not needed here imo.
5. 01:21:153 (3) - 01:33:153 (1,1) -, 01:35:099 (1) - , 01:45:639 (14) - ^
6. 01:18:882 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1) -, 01:29:261 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - remove some notes please, see above.
7. 01:49:207 (1,2) - DK, since (2) is higher pitch sound than (1).

tasuke912 wrote:

Hello there. M4M.
[ General]

1. Sourse: jubeat copious
2. In lower diffs HP should be 5.0 or higher. This is due to new rules. changed
3. difficulty spread seems unequally. Please consider changing Oni to bit easier (or Muzu to bit harder. but it's not recommended much).oni simplified , a bit

[ Kantan]

1. no ddd triplet? added some ddd triplets
2. 00:57:801 - Consider adding d note here, since so strong sound. it would be nicely imo. notes added
3. 01:40:936 (108,109,110) - change to ddd for avoiding continuous kkk pattern. (also add k note at 01:40:288 - ?) adopted
4. 01:41:261 - 01:43:855 -, Consider adding notes for making 1/1 triplet patterns. some 1/1 triplets made

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:32:828 (46) - change to d for making reversed pattern of 00:26:990 (36,37,38) -. changed
2. 01:07:207 (102,103,104,105) - Consider changing to d for avoiding continuous k patterns. also melody's pitch is lower.changed
3. 01:13:369 (114,115,116) - I'd recommend changing to kkd since in kiai part 1/2 are biased to ddk.changed
4. 01:32:504 (154,155,156,157) - doublet to doublet seems a little out of place. Consider to make once again or removing this pattern.changed
5. 01:46:612 (186) - 01:49:207 (189) - etc. why not finisher? changed

[ Muzukashii]

1. 01:07:207 (177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184) - Consider changing to kkkkkkkk, since this 1/2 stream is so long and bit hard. also you used kkkk in Oni. changed
2. 01:10:450 (187,188,189,190) - This triplet is bit weird imo. I'm not sure why not follow 3/4 rhythm. changed patterns
3. 01:15:963 (211) - could be moved to 1/4 tick left, similar reason as ^.changed patterns
4. 01:46:612 (325) -etc. Same as above. I will keep this

[ Oni]

1. see above, I'd recommend change to bit easier for keeping equally spaced difficulty spread.
2. 00:25:207 (1) - move to 1/4 tick right to follow the melody. changed much patterns
3. 00:26:504 (1) -, 00:27:801 (1) -, etc. ^ ^
4. 01:16:288 (1,1) - Finishers are not needed here imo. changed
5. 01:21:153 (3) - 01:33:153 (1,1) -, 01:35:099 (1) - , 01:45:639 (14) - ^
6. 01:18:882 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1) -, 01:29:261 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - remove some notes please, see above. Tried, but this part is unable to simplify.
7. 01:49:207 (1,2) - DK, since (2) is higher pitch sound than (1). changed

Good luck!