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Gamu
゚*。(o'∀')b。*゚こんにちは♪

すごく遅くなってごめんなさい_○/|_ 土下座

Request from in-game (m4m)


[General]

●完璧

[Easy]

●00:34:448 - のclap(tick)の音が合ってない気がします。00:34:103 (2)の始点にclapを付けたほうが良い気がします。
●00:41:345 にclap(tick)の音入れたほうが良いと思いました
●00:56:345 のclap(tick)の音あってない気がします。流れ的にいい次につなぐため良いと思いましたが、別になくても良いと思いました
●01:08:069 (1) - new combo 削除?
●01:07:379 (2) - 始点clap不要? (00:56:345と同じ感じ)

<コメント>
●とくに変な所はありませんでした。 すべて提案です。ただ、clap(tick)の音付け(一部)に違和感持ちました

[Normal]

●AR+1してもいいかも
●00:34:965 のclap(tick)の音いらないとおもいます。なくしても、全然不自然じゃありませんので
●00:38:241 (3) - 終点clapいらないかな
●00:56:345 - Easyとおなじ
●01:15:483 (3) - 終点clapいらない?
●01:17:552 (3) - spacingが ガガガ 1.47x?になってます。
●01:18:069 (4) - 矢印のとこclapいらない?

<コメント>
●られさんとわたしでは音付けが違うので、clap(tick)の音付け(一部)に違和感持ちました。
音付けなんて、さまざまなので、無視してもかまいません。 配置・音取りは別に大丈夫でした。

[takos's Hard]

●00:01:517 (6) - new combo 追加。
●00:07:034 (6) - ^

●↓00:33:414 ~00:41:345 までの音付けの提案。
SPOILER
●00:34:103 (3) - スライダー終点のclapを削除。 そして、始点にclapを追加。
●00:34:621 (4) - スライダー始点にclapを追加。
●00:35:483 (4) - whistle → clapに変更。 または。clapを追加。
●00:36:172 (1) - スライダー終点のclapを削除。
●00:36:689 (2) - clapを追加。
●00:37:379 (4) - finishを追加。
●00:38:241 (2) - whistle → clapに変更。 または。clapを追加。
●00:38:931 (1) - スライダー終点のclapを削除。
●00:39:621 (2) - スライダー始点にclapを追加。
●00:40:138 (3) - finishを追加。
●00:41:000 (2) - whistle → clapに変更。 または。clapを追加。

●00:42:034 - clap(tick) の音を消す。そして、00:42:034 (1) - スライダー終点にclapを追加。
●00:42:724 (2) - clapを削除。
●00:43:414 (4) - clap(tick) の音を消す。そして、00:43:069 (3) - スライダー終点にclapを追加。
●00:44:103 (4) - clapを削除。

<コメント>
●00:33:414 ~00:41:345 までの音付けの提案を見て、試してください。 この音付けのほうがbetterだと思いました。

[Insane]

●00:08:069 (4) - ちょっとスコアとかぶってるんですが、別にこれって問題ありませんでしたっけ? わからないですw
●00:56:517 (1,2,3) - こんな右下でしかもテンポをずらすとは・・・ やるなw
●01:08:414 (2,3) - 2と3入れ替えちゃうとか?

<コメント>
良い譜面でした~♪ 全然指摘するとこないです



Rankedがんばってくださいー

「未来のために、いま恋をしよう。」
Topic Starter
Rare
@Gamu
almost fixed~
thanks for modding ><

-Gamu- wrote:

●00:08:069 (4) - ちょっとスコアとかぶってるんですが、別にこれって問題ありませんでしたっけ? わからないですw
僕もわからないのでBATMATの裁量に任せてみます!
Takos

-Gamu- wrote:

[takos's Hard]

●00:01:517 (6) - new combo 追加。fixed
●00:07:034 (6) - ^ fixed

●↓00:33:414 ~00:41:345 までの音付けの提案。
SPOILER
●00:34:103 (3) - スライダー終点のclapを削除。 そして、始点にclapを追加。
●00:34:621 (4) - スライダー始点にclapを追加。
●00:35:483 (4) - whistle → clapに変更。 または。clapを追加。
●00:36:172 (1) - スライダー終点のclapを削除。
●00:36:689 (2) - clapを追加。
●00:37:379 (4) - finishを追加。
●00:38:241 (2) - whistle → clapに変更。 または。clapを追加。
●00:38:931 (1) - スライダー終点のclapを削除。
●00:39:621 (2) - スライダー始点にclapを追加。
●00:40:138 (3) - finishを追加。
●00:41:000 (2) - whistle → clapに変更。 または。clapを追加。

●00:42:034 - clap(tick) の音を消す。そして、00:42:034 (1) - スライダー終点にclapを追加。
●00:42:724 (2) - clapを削除。
●00:43:414 (4) - clap(tick) の音を消す。そして、00:43:069 (3) - スライダー終点にclapを追加。
●00:44:103 (4) - clapを削除。

<コメント>
●00:33:414 ~00:41:345 までの音付けの提案を見て、試してください。 この音付けのほうがbetterだと思いました。
ううむ、clapには規則性を持たせているのでそれを変えてしまうと違和感を感じてしまったので音付けに関してはno changeで!
modありがとうございました!

http://puu.sh/15v7e
Mythol
HowLiNg!! m4m~

[Easy]
00:00:310 (1,2) - shorten by 1/1? feels better to me
00:40:483 (3) - Maybe 1/4 not necessary here.. just note on 00:40:655

[Normal]
01:06:517 (2) - NC here instead?
01:16:000 (1,2) -

[Hard]
00:41:689 (1,3) - ♥
00:53:758 (3) - Move to 00:53:414 and add note !
01:04:793 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:04:103 (3) - Ctrl + R? Flow is much better~
00:21:862 (2,3) - ^ ?
01:35:034 (3) - This should be on 01:34:991 and 1/4 slider fits here.. but imo this drum section should not be mapped like other diffs ><

this poor mod.. orz ;_;
Takos

Mythol wrote:

[Hard]
00:41:689 (1,3) - ♥
00:53:758 (3) - Move to 00:53:414 and add note !
01:04:793 (3) - ^
This is a quite good suggestion, but I like the way it is now so I'll leave it as it is.
Thank you for modding!
Topic Starter
Rare
@Mythol
some fixed!!
thanks for modding ><

Mythol wrote:

01:35:034 (3) - This should be on 01:34:991 and 1/4 slider fits here.. but imo this drum section should not be mapped like other diffs ><
that's right :o
fixed it~
Melophobia
SFTD (Sorry for the delay)

[General]
http://puu.sh/19jLJ
hitsoundの鳴り方を基準で見たから実際叩いてみると誤差はあるかも
とりあえず現状だとdownbeatがズレててunrankableだから数値変更しないにしてもそっちは修正で

Barbarian On The Groove feat. Shimotsuki Haruka - Everywhere With You (Short Ver.) (R a r e).osb 削除

あといつも言ってるけどSlidertickのHitsoundの音量は下げるべき

[Insane]
01:20:310 - 00:00:310 - 音付け統一
00:13:414 (7,9) - 形ェ・・・ この曲げ方はあんまり美しくない このくらいの曲げ方がベストかな
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/431561
00:32:724 (3,4) - なんかこのclap浮いてるかな 外すor音量下げる
00:46:862 (5,6,7,8) - 5,6間のSpacingのズレのせいで汚い
00:47:896 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - なんかチャリチャリ聞こえるから笛鳴らしとけばいいんでないかな(適当
http://puu.sh/19jTC
00:58:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^
01:06:517 (4) - 流れ的に始点笛かな
01:19:276 - clap合わない&うるさい
01:30:655 (2,2) - もうちょっとキレイにstackできるかな

[Takos's Hard]
Takos' Hardにリネーム?
00:12:034 (2,3) - もう少しお互い似た形にしたほうが自然かな
00:31:345 (3,4) - 流れ的にここもjumpにしたいです vocalにも合うと思います
00:33:414 ~ 00:47:207 - このパートでは一番長い白線のとこにスネアが来るのでclapのパターン付けは合わないと思います
00:34:621 (4) - Finish
00:37:379 (4) - ^
00:47:896 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Insaneに同じ
00:58:931 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
01:19:276 (1) - Finish

[Normal]
00:14:448 (3) - このNoteの位置がblanketの出来そこないみたいで好きじゃない 僕ならこうする
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/445031
00:47:552 (2) - x:460 y:104?
01:16:000 (1) - 1/2短く?

[Easy]
00:46:862 - Note追加
01:08:414 - Clap?
Takos

Melophobia wrote:

[Takos's Hard]
Takos' Hardにリネーム?
00:12:034 (2,3) - もう少しお互い似た形にしたほうが自然かな
00:31:345 (3,4) - 流れ的にここもjumpにしたいです vocalにも合うと思います
00:33:414 ~ 00:47:207 - このパートでは一番長い白線のとこにスネアが来るのでclapのパターン付けは合わないと思います
00:34:621 (4) - Finish
00:37:379 (4) - ^
00:47:896 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Insaneに同じ
00:58:931 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
01:19:276 (1) - Finish
All fixed
Thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/19poy
Topic Starter
Rare
@Melophobia
almost fixed!!
いつもありがとう ;)

Melophobia wrote:

とりあえず現状だとdownbeatがズレててunrankableだから数値変更しないにしてもそっちは修正で
直したつもりだけどもし指摘したことと違うことしてたらごめん…
Suzully
http://puu.sh/19qKo

謎ドラムのタイミングをより近づけてみたver
あの部分は一定BPMじゃないから100%完全に合わせるのは無理だと思うなぁ・・・。
あと最後のノートのタイミングちょっと早いと思ったので+4しときました。
downbeatも直ってないっぽかったから修正済み。

No kd
Topic Starter
Rare

Suzully wrote:

謎ドラムのタイミングをより近づけてみたver
あの部分は一定BPMじゃないから100%完全に合わせるのは無理だと思うなぁ・・・。
タイミング計るのほんとに下手くそなので助かりました!
ありがとうございます!
YTYuyu
well me and Elly modded this together. it turns out that i did this in a chatlog. here. we both think it's ready so catch me in game for a re-check. not her.

SPOILER
17:46 Byakugan249: we got a mod request~
17:47 Elly-chan: ahh alright
17:47 Elly-chan: :3
17:51 Elly-chan: downloading le map
17:54 Elly-chan: mm one sec gonna re-FC that map i played earlier then we can start modding it
17:54 Elly-chan: :3
17:54 *Elly-chan is listening to (Tristam - Follow Me)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48901]
17:54 Byakugan249: whenever you're ready--wait who's gonna post?
17:54 Byakugan249: sure go ahead :3
17:55 Elly-chan: mm i can this time, and then next time youc an :P
17:55 Byakugan249: alright then~
17:55 Byakugan249: but you give the bubble if we both think it's ready since the SP breaks mine
18:03 Elly-chan: I DID IT
18:03 Byakugan249: YAY~
18:03 Elly-chan: 995
18:03 Elly-chan: :D
18:03 *Byakugan249 hugs Elly-nyan with joy
18:04 Elly-chan: :3
18:04 *Elly-chan hugs in return
18:04 *Elly-chan is editing (Barbarian On The Groove feat. Shimotsuki Haruka - Everywhere With
18:04 Elly-chan: ok i got it o/
18:06 Elly-chan: tell me when you're ready to mod \o/
18:06 Byakugan249: alright
18:07 Byakugan249: ready~
18:07 Elly-chan: Aight, Easy first, Correct? o/
18:07 Byakugan249: right but 1st i'll check the folder
18:07 Elly-chan: ah ye
18:07 Elly-chan: gotta open aibat
18:10 Byakugan249: everything looks fine to me
18:11 Byakugan249: you're posting 1st right?
18:11 Elly-chan: yea
18:11 Elly-chan: i'm making this log ((everything we point out together)) into a modpost
18:11 Elly-chan: lol
18:11 Byakugan249: ahh goodie :3
18:12 Byakugan249: and~ easy's 1st :P
18:13 Elly-chan: general thing
18:13 Elly-chan: 1st BPM point should start at 310
18:13 Elly-chan: offset 310
18:13 Elly-chan: or else the measures will be all screwed up :P
18:13 Byakugan249: ahh i see D:
18:16 Byakugan249: 00:05:138 (3) - this is just a suggestion but...i'm thinking a curved slider here for emphasis in the
18:16 Byakugan249: instrumental and to keep the flow going
18:18 Byakugan249: 00:07:896 (3) - and~ here
18:18 Byakugan249: sorry i'm really picky in flow ><
18:18 Elly-chan: lol it's fine
18:19 Elly-chan: i'm testin em out as if i were the mapper trying to find the best way to fix so i can provide a screenshot
18:19 Elly-chan: xD
18:19 Byakugan249: ahh ok
18:19 Elly-chan: 00:00:310 -
18:19 Elly-chan: the real question is
18:19 Elly-chan: why aren't 1 and 2 symmetrical lol
18:20 Elly-chan: as in they could blanket something :PO
18:20 Elly-chan: :P *
18:20 Elly-chan: brb fixing //runs
18:20 Byakugan249: lol alright
18:21 Byakugan249: i'll just leave [http://puu.sh/15ODO this] and [http://puu.sh/15OFl this] for the curved sliders
18:23 Elly-chan: ff
18:23 Elly-chan: all of my puush accounts
18:23 Elly-chan: aren't working atm SOBS
18:23 Byakugan249: aww ;_;
18:24 Byakugan249: mine seems to work
18:24 Elly-chan: i keep getting stupid connection error
18:24 Elly-chan: :P
18:24 Byakugan249: orz...this is only yours right?
18:24 Elly-chan: ye
18:25 Byakugan249: how are you gonna post the screenies?
18:26 Byakugan249: my best bet is sending me the photo through skype and me uploading it to my puush
18:26 Elly-chan: nahh i'll re-register with another email and try that
18:26 Byakugan249: hmm...alright :3
18:27 Elly-chan: aw shit
18:27 Elly-chan: ;_________;
18:27 Elly-chan: i registered with an old email of mine
18:27 Byakugan249: what's wrong?
18:27 Elly-chan: i sent the puush verification
18:27 Elly-chan: found out the email was deactivated
18:27 Elly-chan: reactivated it
18:27 Elly-chan: got no notification
18:27 Byakugan249: ahh is that why?
18:27 Elly-chan: re-registered
18:27 Elly-chan: and then it said the email's already in use
18:27 Elly-chan: fml
18:28 Byakugan249: ooh that sucks ><
18:28 Elly-chan: i don't have any other email accounts i can think of
18:28 Elly-chan: ;____________________;
18:28 Elly-chan: already used 3
18:28 Byakugan249: how about using mine and see if that works?
18:28 Elly-chan: did you already register with it? D:
18:28 Byakugan249: wait do i have to go off?
18:28 Elly-chan: or do you mean your existing puush account
18:29 Elly-chan: nop you can stay on i think
18:29 Byakugan249: my existing it
18:29 Byakugan249: one*
18:29 Elly-chan: ahh
18:29 Elly-chan: i can try it but then i'd need your pass too lmao;;
18:29 Byakugan249: sure i trust you that you won't tell anyone :3
18:30 Byakugan249: uh oh...i forgot my pass >< brb changing
18:30 Elly-chan: lmao ok
18:30 Elly-chan: XD
18:32 Byakugan249: there~
18:33 Byakugan249: my emal is brian.ilano@hotmail.ca. the pass is "KakeruKero~" don't ask about the pass it's the 1st thing
18:33 Byakugan249: that came in my head ><
18:36 Byakugan249: email* ><
18:37 Elly-chan: okay :3
18:38 Elly-chan: aight.. i hope this works >w<
18:38 Byakugan249: lol i hope so too
18:38 Elly-chan: ahh yes!!
18:38 Elly-chan: http://puu.sh/15OWR
18:38 Elly-chan: it works ^w^
18:38 Byakugan249: yay~
18:38 Byakugan249: so that's your suggestion
18:38 Elly-chan: kinda lmao
18:38 Byakugan249: i have another
18:39 Elly-chan: gonna delete that one and then put the code to the slider instead ><
18:40 Byakugan249: 00:08:586 (1) - this kick slider makes the map boring :< i'm thinking something like [http://puu.sh/15OXU
18:40 Byakugan249: this] to make the map fun
18:42 Byakugan249: 00:16:862 (2) - 1 repeat and a circle should work since the repeat follows the vocals. the circle follows the
18:42 Byakugan249: drums
18:42 Elly-chan: sorry oh god i was zoning out
18:43 Elly-chan: x'D
18:43 Byakugan249: i mean the piano
18:43 Byakugan249: np :3
18:43 Byakugan249: i'm already used to it lol
18:43 Elly-chan: aa hold on 5 more mins i have to go a quick afk ><
18:44 Byakugan249: sure :3
18:58 Elly-chan: sobs ok
18:58 Elly-chan: back
18:58 Byakugan249: lol wb
18:58 Byakugan249: is your sis ok with this?
18:59 Byakugan249: either way, that sounded cute :3
19:01 Byakugan249: anyways~
19:02 Byakugan249: 00:22:379 (1) - a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the instrumental
19:05 Elly-chan: osoz I DIDN'T SEE THIS PM EITHER LOL"
19:05 Elly-chan: was still perfecting that slider
19:05 Byakugan249: want me to say it again?
19:07 Elly-chan: http://puu.sh/15Pnw how does this look? ><
19:07 Elly-chan: nah i saw it all
19:07 Elly-chan: ima savelog this anyways to form the modpost
19:07 Byakugan249: ahh alright
19:07 Byakugan249: yea better :D
19:08 Byakugan249: 00:26:517 (1) - idk...i think this should be stacked on the orange (2) for a smoother transition
19:11 Byakugan249: 00:55:483 (1,2) - mm~ if the claps are following the vocals, add claps at the beginning of (1,2) for
19:11 Byakugan249: consistency. this pattern sounds odd as it stands IMO
19:13 Byakugan249: 00:59:965 (2) - if you can stack this on the previous (4), the transition will look smoother during gameplay
19:13 Byakugan249: IMO (no DS)
19:14 Byakugan249: 01:08:069 (3) - a clap at the end will give of a nice effect in this pattern since it follows the instrumental
19:16 Elly-chan: frekmgfyerijk ok screw this slider stuff //cries forever
19:16 Elly-chan: i've been on it for who knows how long now ;___________;
19:16 Elly-chan: gonna check the stuff you mentioned and actually get to hitsoudns like i said in the first place lmao
19:16 Byakugan249: are you checking the sliders?
19:16 Elly-chan: trying to get a good curve transition in the beginning
19:16 Elly-chan: XD
19:16 *Elly-chan update to latest version
19:17 Byakugan249: i'm almost done so yea...let me know when you reached normal
19:17 Elly-chan: okay
19:18 Byakugan249: 01:24:103 (2,3,1) - do [http://puu.sh/15Pwz this] instead. it shows the flow and transition in this pattern
19:18 Byakugan249: during gameplay
19:19 Byakugan249: i guess that's all from easy...other than that it's a good diff IMO
19:19 Elly-chan: it's a nice lil diffie yes~~
19:19 Byakugan249: lol diffie <3
19:20 Elly-chan: you can point out more stuff on normal hard and insane ((the stuff you'd point out)) and i'll make the easy diff
19:20 Elly-chan: into a mod post including the stuff i'd point out too
19:20 Elly-chan: lol
19:20 Byakugan249: ahh sure~
19:22 Byakugan249: for easy, the OD and AR should be insreased by 1...i feel that there's no flow shown with AR2 and it seems
19:22 Byakugan249: "too" easy for beginners during gameplay. it wouldn't hurt to challenge them a bit
19:23 Elly-chan: ahh yes i agree
19:23 Elly-chan: was mentioning that in the post
19:23 Elly-chan: :3
19:23 Byakugan249: lol we both agreed on that :P
19:24 Elly-chan: mhm
19:24 Elly-chan: also just quickly checked over the mods and i also strongly agree with the whistle hitsound one ^w^
19:25 Byakugan249: ahh yea i mentioned that because of a new pattern
19:25 Byakugan249: for normal...
19:25 Byakugan249: 00:04:793 (4) - remove the clap. yes it for consistency, but there's a mini clash in the cymbals here. the
19:25 Byakugan249: soft hitsound acts as that
19:27 Byakugan249: 00:09:621 (2) - i'm thinking that this should be aligned to the end of (1), and at (3) so that it'd be easier
19:27 Byakugan249: for players during gameplay
19:28 Byakugan249: 00:27:207 (3,1) - a repeat and a circle should work here. the repeat follows the vocals and the circle
19:28 Byakugan249: follows the piano. that circle should be a NC because of that
19:29 Byakugan249: 00:35:827 - i feeling a circle here to follow vocals and to keep the flow going
19:29 Byakugan249: i'm*
19:30 Byakugan249: 00:37:896 - here as well
19:37 Byakugan249: 00:38:241 (3,1,2) - the flow bothers me here because of the transition from (3,1). it points up a bit which
19:37 Byakugan249: makes me feel uncomfortable. do something like [http://puu.sh/15POs this] to show a smoother one
19:37 Byakugan249: during gameplay
19:37 Byakugan249: hai~
19:51 Byakugan249: 00:50:655 (3) - i'm thinking that this slider should be moved back by 1/2 and extended by 1/4 to follow
19:51 Byakugan249: the vocals accurately
19:52 Byakugan249: 00:57:379 (2) - clap at the beginning to follow the instrumental since the other notes in this combo have it
19:53 Byakugan249: 01:03:414 (3) - this overlap looksbad during gameplay, so i hightly suggest that you move it up to look
19:53 Byakugan249: neater during gameplay
19:53 Byakugan249: looks bad*
19:54 Byakugan249: 01:08:414 (2) - same as 00:57:379
19:54 Byakugan249: 01:14:793 (2) - i'm thinking a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the instrumental
19:56 Byakugan249: 01:17:552 (3) - same as above but the vocals
19:58 Byakugan249: oh for the settings, increase every start by 1 but the CS for a somewhat balanced diff spread
19:58 Byakugan249: stat*
20:06 Byakugan249: Hard...
20:06 Byakugan249: 00:00:310 (1) - a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the instrumental
20:07 Byakugan249: 00:06:689 (4,4) - try to stack these notes perfectly for a smoother transition
20:08 Byakugan249: 00:16:862 (1) - a curved slider here so that it gets blankted by (2)
20:09 Byakugan249: blanketed*
20:09 Byakugan249: 00:34:621 (4) - a finish at the beginning to go with the cymbals
20:10 Byakugan249: 00:37:379 (4) - here as well
20:10 Byakugan249: 00:40:138 (3) - and here
20:11 Elly-chan: oh god i am always so dark difrjnbh b distracted
20:11 Elly-chan: ;___;
20:11 Elly-chan: ok
20:11 Byakugan249: ahh np
20:11 Elly-chan: think you can finish insane so i can savelog?
20:11 Elly-chan: :3
20:11 Byakugan249: hmm yea i can
20:11 Elly-chan: aight
20:11 Elly-chan: i'll be on for a while still
20:11 Elly-chan: :P
20:11 Byakugan249: lol alright~
20:12 Elly-chan: say finished when you finish
20:12 Elly-chan: :3
20:12 Byakugan249: 00:52:724 (1) - and~ here
20:12 Byakugan249: hai~
20:12 Byakugan249: nvm scratch that ><
20:15 Byakugan249: 00:53:758 (3) - i don't like this repeat slider. it's following something different and it breaks the flow in the
20:15 Byakugan249: whole song. move the repeat slider back to the 1st downbeat and add a 1/1 slider at 00:53:931 to follow
20:15 Byakugan249: the instrumental nicely
20:16 Byakugan249: 01:04:793 (3) - i'm thinking a 1/1 slider starting at 01:04:965 to follow the hold in the instrumental
20:17 Byakugan249: 01:10:483 (6) - a finish at the beginning for emphasis in the vocals
20:17 Byakugan249: 01:16:000 (5) - and here
20:19 Byakugan249: Insane
20:21 Byakugan249: 00:13:414 (7,9) - these 2 sliders look weird because of the 2nd half. it plays nicely, but it looks weird. for
20:21 Byakugan249: this one, make the 2nd half of the slider look like the 1st half for a smoother arc during gameplay IMO
20:22 Byakugan249: 00:16:172 (6) - stack the ends together at (4). i think the transition will flow a lot smoother and it should
20:22 Byakugan249: look neater IMO
20:24 Byakugan249: 00:52:034 (1,2) - for consistency withe the other 2 combos, switch these around by doing Ctrl+R
20:26 Byakugan249: 00:55:138 (2) - perhaps you can stack this on the previous (3) so that the transition looks smoother?
20:26 Byakugan249: and somewhat neater during gameplay
20:28 Byakugan249: 01:04:793 (4,5) - switch these 2 around. (4) will represent an introduction to the jump in this part since it
20:28 Byakugan249: follows the instrumental
20:28 Byakugan249: 01:12:034 (1) - a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the vocals?
20:30 Byakugan249: 01:31:517 (2) - *nazi* this can be stacked perfectly at the end. just move it up a bit because the transition
20:30 Byakugan249: looks odd during gameplay
20:30 Byakugan249: and i'm done :D
20:30 Elly-chan: Okay :D
Takos

Byakugan249 wrote:

Hard
00:00:310 (1) - a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the instrumental I recognize the instrumental sounds but I don't think whistle or finish hitsounds fit, so no
00:06:689 (4,4) - try to stack these notes perfectly for a smoother transition fixed
00:16:862 (1) - a curved slider here so that it gets blanketed by (2) fixed
00:34:621 (4) - a finish at the beginning to go with the cymbals ok
00:37:379 (4) - here as well ok
00:40:138 (3) - and here ok
00:53:758 (3) - i don't like this repeat slider. it's following something different and it breaks the flow in the whole song. move the repeat slider back to the 1st downbeat and add a 1/1 slider at 00:53:931 to follow the instrumental nicely fixed
01:04:793 (3) - i'm thinking a 1/1 slider starting at 01:04:965 to follow the hold in the instrumental fixed as you said previously
01:10:483 (6) - a finish at the beginning for emphasis in the vocals No, I don't use any finishes in this map to emphasize vocals
01:16:000 (5) - and here ^
Thank you for modding Byakugan249!

http://puu.sh/1a54f
Topic Starter
Rare
@Byakugan249
almost fixed!!
thanks for modding 249 sensei ></
YTYuyu
R a r e you have to give me reasons on what you didn't fix. i wanna know why before i can continue.
Topic Starter
Rare
replying to places I didn't change.

Byakugan249 wrote:

Easy
00:05:138 (3) - this is just a suggestion but...i'm thinking a curved slider here for emphasis in the instrumental and to keep the flow going I prefer to straight slider.
00:07:896 (3) - ^ ^
00:00:310 - why aren't 1 and 2 symmetrical? http://puu.sh/15ODO http://puu.sh/15OFl since I used Ctrl+H&J, these are symmetry i think.
Suggestion (maybe you can blanket http://puu.sh/15OWR can you give me the specific time?
00:08:586 (1) - this kick slider makes the map boring :< i'm thinking something like this http://puu.sh/15OXU to make the map fun I focus on making the map more readable, rather than making it more fun.
00:22:379 (1) - a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the instrumental instead of whistle, add finish to start slider.
00:55:483 (1,2) - mm~ if the claps are following the vocals, add claps at the beginning of (1,2) for consistency. this pattern sounds odd as it stands IMO I'm not following the vocals for these claps.
00:59:965 (2) - if you can stack this on the previous (4), the transition will look smoother during gameplay IMO (no DS) I think don't have to stack. sry no change.
01:08:069 (3) - a clap at the end will give of a nice effect in this pattern since it follows the instrumental already add clap

Normal
for the settings, increase every stat by 1 but the CS for a somewhat balanced diff spread
00:04:793 (4) - remove the clap. yes it for consistency, but there's a mini clash in the cymbals here. the soft hitsound acts as that keep clap pattern as possible. I don't want to change.
00:27:207 (3,1) - a repeat and a circle should work here. the repeat follows the vocals and the circle follows the piano. that circle should be a NC because of that changed pattern by myself
01:14:793 (2) - i'm thinking a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the instrumental I won't use whistle in Normal.
01:17:552 (3) - same as above but the vocals ^

Insane
00:13:414 (7,9) - these 2 sliders look weird because of the 2nd half. it plays nicely, but it looks weird. for this one, make the 2nd half of the slider look like the 1st half for a smoother arc during gameplay IMO since I used Ctrl+H, J, these are symmetry i think.
00:16:172 (6) - stack the ends together at (4). i think the transition will flow a lot smoother and it should look neater IMO stack isn't my favorite.
00:52:034 (1,2) - for consistency withe the other 2 combos, switch these around by doing Ctrl+R i'll fix it if anybody else says so
00:55:138 (2) - perhaps you can stack this on the previous (3) so that the transition looks smoother? and somewhat neater during gameplay stack isn't my favorite.
01:04:793 (4,5) - switch these 2 around. (4) will represent an introduction to the jump in this part since it follows the instrumental No change because I want variety of jumps in my map.
01:12:034 (1) - a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the vocals? (I don't prefer using whistles for emphasizing vocals, so no change
.
YTYuyu
alright time for the re-check~

[Easy]
00:11:344 (1) - can you align this to (2)? that slight overlap seem to bother me during gameplay.
00:36:172 (1) - how about moving this down so that the transition looks smoother as it stacks on the previous (2) in this part? you're gonna have to move (3) if you do this. it should look like this.
01:19:275 (1) - reduce this slider by 1/2. i understand that you want to make this easier, but this slider ruins the flow in the vocals in this slider since there's nothing that follows that end during gameplay IMO.

[Normal]
01:15:482 (3,1) - the claps shouldn't be here. yes it's for consistency but it sounds unfitting and it doesn't flow to the vocals in this part.

[Takos's Hard]
00:10:654 (2) - make this a curved slider. in other words make this slider look like (1) for a smoother transition to the map.
01:10:482 (6) - no finish? alright then try a whistle instead and tell me what you think?
01:15:999 (5) - ^

[Insane]
00:04:103 (3) - it wouldn't hurt to move this down so that this slider is at the middle of the 1/1 repeat slider? like this.
00:05:137 (6) - make this slider look like (7) so that the transition looks smoother during gameplay.
01:07:378 (6) - this time, make this slider look like (5). same reason.

and that's all :3.
Topic Starter
Rare
@Byakugan249
thanks for recheck><

replying to places I didn't change

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:275 (1) - reduce this slider by 1/2. i understand that you want to make this easier, but this slider ruins the flow in the vocals in this slider since there's nothing that follows that end during gameplay IMO. where is your pointing out? o_o

[Normal]
01:15:482 (3,1) - the claps shouldn't be here. yes it's for consistency but it sounds unfitting and it doesn't flow to the vocals in this part. removed clap to (4)'s end slider.

[Insane]
00:05:137 (6) - make this slider look like (7) so that the transition looks smoother during gameplay. it was strange? no problem I think.
01:07:378 (6) - this time, make this slider look like (5). same reason. ^

and that's all :3.
Takos

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Takos's Hard]
00:10:654 (2) - make this a curved slider. in other words make this slider look like (1) for a smoother transition to the map. ok fixed
01:10:482 (6) - no finish? alright then try a whistle instead and tell me what you think? I actually tried whistles when you pointed out last time. I think whistles and finishes are unnecessary for this part because I want to emphasize other parts of the song with important lyrics. I would like to keep the hitsounds for those parts, so no change.
01:15:999 (5) - ^ ^
Thanks for recheck Byakugan249! :D

http://puu.sh/1aF9G
YTYuyu
last one~

In the tags, add "xbox 360" in the tags since this is also a 360 game.

[Takos's Hard]
00:00:310 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. you can hear the cymbals here, and it'll be consistent with the other diffs.
01:07:378 (4) - move this up a bit. this overlap on the slider bothers me during gameplay.
Takos

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Takos's Hard]
00:00:310 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. you can hear the cymbals here, and it'll be consistent with the other diffs.
01:07:378 (4) - move this up a bit. this overlap on the slider bothers me during gameplay.
Both fixed
Thanks for modding!


http://puu.sh/1aXl3
YTYuyu
well everything looks fine, so here you go :D

to the BATs: before you rank this or re-bubble this map, is there a way you can fix the thumbnail BG. R a r e changed it on the client and it's still showing the old BG on the thumbnail.
Aurele

Byakugan249 wrote:

to the BATs: before you rank this or re-bubble this map, is there a way you can fix the thumbnail BG. R a r e changed it on the client and it's still showing the old BG on the thumbnail.
  1. Full Submit
  2. Change the background's name on the picture and from every osu. And Full Submit.
.. I guess
YTYuyu
he did both but no luck D:
Topic Starter
Rare
@Byakugan249
thanks for bubble !!

Edit: since I wrong tags, fixed it ~
YTYuyu
alright now that the tags are fixed, and the BG as well, here's your bubble back :D
Topic Starter
Rare
@Byakugan249
thanks for rebubble ><
Andrea
Everything is good here.

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Rare
@Andrea
thanks for Ranked ></
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