Ranko - Sei Natsu

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alacat
Hi Yuko san :3 As requested.

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768

[Easy]
●OD and HPDrain +1
●00:00:382 - you should start here ~ same as other diff
●00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:39:982 (2) - add new combo
●01:17:782 (1,1) - the flow isnt good.. >< I think it'd look better and good the flow if it was symmetrical.
●01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as here.00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) -
●02:38:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
●03:01:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]
●00:00:382 - start to here ? red line...maybe confusing many players
●01:18:982 - try this ?
●02:01:282 (2) - Rotate by 20°? Aim for the start of 02:02:032 (3) -
●02:33:982 (7) - add new combo
●02:59:782 (2) - add finish on the slider's head ?

[Hard]
●00:21:832 (2) - hmm... try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492790
●00:35:107 (3) - remove note ..? Rhythm here is hard to take a little.
●00:43:432 (2,3) - try this ? like this here.00:41:182 (3) -
●00:46:432 - NC:2 sound here ? like this your pattern00:45:232 -
●00:52:432 (5) - move to x:200 y:160 . looks better and make the spacing equal here
●01:44:782 (1,2,3,4) - try to put spacing around (0.60x ~ 0.80x)?
●02:27:082 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●02:34:582 (5) - add new combo ? same as Lunatic diff . I think Lunatic diff is looks good :3
●02:40:582 (1) - 1 grid down at slider end point? same as 02:41:032 (2,1) -

[Lunatic]
●OD + 1 ?
●00:11:782 (1) - slider end point to x:204 y:216? looks better imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492779
●00:17:482 (5) - stack on middle point to this slider ? 00:17:782 (1) - like this your pattern at here.00:16:582 (1,3) -
●00:26:182 - hmm , this finish sound is a little loud . want to put 50% volume ~ gradually add finish sound ~ 00:24:982 - →00:26:182 - →00:27:382 -
●00:38:782 (1) - add finish ? try to put finish with constant rhythm ~ ? 'v'
●00:41:782 (1) - it is better to use (0.06x) like this your pattern ~
●00:57:232 (8) - more jump..? I want more spacing here >< because it is stronger sound ~
●01:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually add volume here ? 40% → 50% → 60%
●01:38:332 - only default sound ? o.o
●01:45:982 (1) - add finish ?
●02:25:282 (2) - remove finish~it follows nothing.
●02:34:282 (3) - 1 grid right . stack on here.02:32:582 (1) -
●02:47:032 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make a little jump :3

nice Lunatic !

good luck :P
Topic Starter
Skystar

alacat wrote:

Hi Yuko san :3 As requested.

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768 maybe 800×600 is ok..?

[Hard]
●00:21:832 (2) - hmm... try this ? ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492790
●00:35:107 (3) - remove note ..? Rhythm here is hard to take a little. ^
●00:43:432 (2,3) - try this ? like this here.00:41:182 (3) - No I want keep this pattern 00:42:682 (4,1,2) -
●00:46:432 - NC:2 sound here ? like this your pattern00:45:232 - fixed
●00:52:432 (5) - move to x:200 y:160 . looks better and make the spacing equal here ^
●01:44:782 (1,2,3,4) - try to put spacing around (0.60x ~ 0.80x)? haha ok
●02:27:082 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. fixed
●02:34:582 (5) - add new combo ? same as Lunatic diff . I think Lunatic diff is looks good :3 :3
●02:40:582 (1) - 1 grid down at slider end point? same as 02:41:032 (2,1) - fixed

[Lunatic]
●OD + 1 ? No...OD8 is too hard to get full combo. (OD7 is hard too ;_; I can't get FC even it's OD7)
●00:11:782 (1) - slider end point to x:204 y:216? looks better imo fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492779
●00:17:482 (5) - stack on middle point to this slider ? 00:17:782 (1) - like this your pattern at here.00:16:582 (1,3) - No, I made this blanket 00:17:632 (6,1) -
●00:26:182 - hmm , this finish sound is a little loud . want to put 50% volume ~ gradually add finish sound ~ 00:24:982 - →00:26:182 - →00:27:382 - GOOD!
●00:38:782 (1) - add finish ? try to put finish with constant rhythm ~ ? 'v' ok
●00:41:782 (1) - it is better to use (0.06x) like this your pattern ~ I can't understand...? But I think it's good enough.
●00:57:232 (8) - more jump..? I want more spacing here >< because it is stronger sound ~ ok
●01:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually add volume here ? 40% → 50% → 60%GOOD WAY!!
●01:38:332 - only default sound ? o.o my fault o.o fixed
●01:45:982 (1) - add finish ? No..
●02:25:282 (2) - remove finish~it follows nothing. ahh I forgot remove finish when I copy this note...
●02:34:282 (3) - 1 grid right . stack on here.02:32:582 (1) - fixed
●02:47:032 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make a little jump :3 :3

nice Lunatic !

good luck :P
thanks > <

thou bad wrote:

[Lunatic]
  • 神图,找不到什么问题,只能帮你把一些slider弄得好看一点
    00:00:982 (1) - 弧度大一点比较好看
    56,180,982,6,0,P|83:146|152:127|197:183|199:226,1,192,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:18:982 (1) - 修了一下
    268,100,78982,6,0,P|232:64|163:84|152:133,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:22:582 (1) - ^
    292,132,82582,6,0,P|336:156|336:228|292:252,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:28:582 (1) - ^
    300,48,88582,6,0,P|255:72|255:144|299:168,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:30:982 (1) - ^
    180,168,90982,6,0,B|232:195|288:170|295:121,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    02:29:332 (3) - 降低20%音量


awesome map! 五体投地!
Others all fixed.
sherrie__fay
mod req via QQ group PM in-game PM baka scorpiour's modding queue
……总之就是过来mod了>A<

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:982 (3) - 尾部上移一格和00:06:832 (2) - 分开
  2. 00:10:882 (2) - NC
  3. 00:17:482 (5) - 建议微移到x:124 y:132
  4. 00:31:582 (5) - 建议NC 要不这里一堆圈圈不好读图
  5. 01:47:782 (1) - 这个静音没问题吗>_>
  6. 02:15:382 (1) - 上移一格(grid level 4
  7. 02:34:282 (3) - 和02:32:582 (1) - 没有对齐


[Hard]
  1. 00:41:182 (3) - 偶数折返有点坑 建议最后一个做成单点
  2. 01:48:382 (3) - ^
  3. 01:50:782 (3) - ^
  4. 00:52:957 (2,3) - 建议长度换成一样的
  5. 02:00:082 (2,3) - ^
  6. 02:03:532 - +note
  7. 02:13:432 (1) - 去掉NC
  8. 02:14:782 (1) - ^
  9. 02:29:032 (2) - 下移一格和后面对齐
  10. 02:38:332 - +note


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:782 (4) - 建议+clap
  2. 01:00:682 - +note
  3. 01:24:982 (5) - +NC
  4. 01:44:182 (5) - ^
  5. 01:47:632 (3) - 为什么不前移一格然后做reverse 这个2连出现在这里节奏有点突兀啊
  6. 01:50:032 (3) - ^


[Easy]
  1. 01:21:382 (2) - 把前边的NC挪到这里


其他没有啥问题

(๑• •๑)感觉没有前一张做得好 一些silder拉得不是很严谨 有以grid level 4为单位的微小偏差。
静音note不让用。
不过整体来看还是不错的
加油(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡
Flask
Almost fix! Really thanks >w<

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:188142
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG4.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,68382,76582
2,135582,143782
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo3 : 245,158,185
Combo4 : 220,198,139

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116,184,92482,5,8,0:0:0
196,192,92782,2,0,B|180:260|112:264|112:264|80:304,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,384,93832,2,0,B|296:360|336:288,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,228,94582,6,0,B|444:240|504:204,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
496,136,95182,2,0,B|512:88,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
485,214,95782,2,0,B|496:280|488:336,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,356,96382,2,0,B|368:368|308:352,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,308,96982,1,4,0:0:0
184,288,97282,6,0,B|128:296,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,216,97882,1,8,0:0:0
296,236,98182,2,0,B|316:180|272:124|212:116|168:136|140:192|140:192|80:156,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,99382,1,0,0:0:0
16,204,99682,6,0,B|8:264|16:312,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,100582,2,0,B|80:76|152:72|216:124|216:124|272:104|276:32,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,28,101782,1,0,0:0:0
344,108,102082,6,0,B|324:164|272:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,232,102682,1,8,0:0:0
192,308,102982,1,0,0:0:0
76,336,103432,2,0,B|56:272|56:272|60:240|60:240|48:176,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,172,104182,6,0,B|120:128|64:96|36:112,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,228,105082,1,8,0:0:0
240,168,105382,2,0,B|248:124|304:92|332:108,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,72,105982,2,0,B|428:44,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,152,106582,5,4,0:0:0
452,172,106882,2,0,B|440:220|400:232|360:236,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,252,107482,2,0,B|304:320,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,256,108082,2,0,B|124:256,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,180,108982,5,0,0:0:0
216,104,109282,2,0,B|276:120|276:196,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,220,109882,2,0,B|344:272,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,140,110482,2,0,B|412:152|420:216,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,60,111382,6,0,B|312:60|312:60|268:20|212:36,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,140,112582,2,0,B|312:140|312:140|268:180|212:164,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,220,113782,2,0,B|296:252|228:272|168:256|112:220|144:136|160:116,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,56,114982,1,0,0:0:0
12,340,116182,6,0,B|112:340|112:340|168:324|184:272,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,200,117082,1,8,0:0:0
100,256,117382,2,0,B|28:256|28:256|-12:192|16:132,1,200
4,56,118282,1,8,0:0:0
76,84,118582,2,0,B|108:128|84:180|84:180|184:180,1,200
264,180,119482,1,8,0:0:0
300,108,119782,2,0,B|352:144|344:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,272,120382,2,0,B|352:336|400:364,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,288,120982,5,0,0:0:0
460,212,121282,2,0,B|480:168|460:156|488:112,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,220,122032,2,0,B|360:224|268:216,1,150
192,220,122782,1,0,0:0:0
112,224,123082,1,8,0:0:0
112,144,123382,2,0,B|64:148|32:172|12:216|16:288|84:328|160:292|160:292|196:340|224:360|252:368,1,400
284,300,124882,2,0,B|244:268|216:224,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,324,125782,6,0,B|424:296|488:332|488:332|512:268,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
505,189,126682,1,8,0:0:0
431,157,126982,2,0,B|418:194|439:230|439:230|381:220|318:250,1,200
270,186,127882,1,8,0:0:0
213,242,128182,2,0,B|152:260,1,50
88,279,128632,1,0,0:0:0
33,220,128932,1,0,0:0:0
18,141,129232,6,0,B|80:136|111:196|111:196|147:164,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,112,129982,1,0,0:0:0
260,78,130282,1,8,0:0:0
311,16,130582,6,0,B|353:57|333:119|333:119|333:168,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,78,131782,2,0,B|256:121|256:121|244:191|298:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,132982,12,4,135382,0:0:0
84,96,144982,5,4,0:0:0
163,88,145282,1,8,0:0:0
232,127,145582,1,0,0:0:0
267,198,145882,1,8,0:0:0
252,276,146182,2,0,B|247:330|195:366|195:366|166:366|139:366,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,298,147382,5,0,0:0:0
401,265,147682,1,8,0:0:0
440,195,147982,1,0,0:0:0
446,115,148282,1,8,0:0:0
409,43,148582,2,0,B|358:22|299:22|252:32,1,150
196,76,149332,1,2,0:0:0
90,132,149782,6,0,B|127:178|186:195,3,100,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,266,150982,2,0,B|100:254|65:222,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,305,151582,2,0,B|165:344|133:364,2,66.6666666666667,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
237,305,152182,2,0,B|256:344|288:364,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,273,152782,2,0,B|328:261|363:229,2,66.6666666666667,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
239,238,153382,2,0,B|258:199|287:184,2,66.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
185,237,153982,6,0,B|166:184|122:145,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
445,50,155782,5,4,0:0:0
125,69,156982,6,0,B|77:106|55:156,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
57,224,157582,2,0,B|73:262|121:299,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
185,347,158182,2,0,B|287:347,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
297,267,158782,2,0,B|195:267,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,257,159682,6,0,B|425:239,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
335,187,160282,1,8,0:0:0
286,123,160582,2,0,B|242:77|190:50,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,57,161182,2,0,B|94:73|50:119,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
37,198,161782,2,0,B|19:267|66:314|139:317|167:277,1,200
115,219,162682,1,8,0:0:0
100,140,162982,2,0,B|169:134|192:200,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
235,243,163582,2,0,B|278:299,2,50,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
270,171,164182,6,0,B|294:133|351:95|419:125|443:174,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
479,233,165082,1,8,0:0:0
443,304,165382,2,0,B|419:342|362:380|294:350|270:301,1,200
228,245,166282,1,8,0:0:0
148,251,166582,2,0,B|94:259,1,50
52,324,167032,2,0,B|13:288|21:230,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
165,364,168082,2,0,B|217:373|272:366|273:366,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,347,168682,1,8,0:0:0
422,347,168982,6,0,B|481:310|467:235|467:235|501:235,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,348,170182,2,0,B|283:311|297:236|297:236|263:236,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,171382,12,0,173182,0:0:0
146,114,173782,6,0,B|94:121|65:179|89:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
217,149,174982,2,0,B|240:199|211:257|159:264,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,176182,12,0,177982,0:0:0
296,300,178582,6,0,B|340:315|367:335|367:335|388:311|431:287,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,300,179782,6,0,B|172:315|145:335|145:335|124:311|81:287,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,180982,12,4,183382,0:0:0
Ulysses
From CLANNAD Modding Queue(Flask requested)


Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.


[General]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Hard] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Lunatic] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask
- [Normal] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling


Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy,Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:58:282
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:632
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:882

Hard,Lunatic :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:57:982
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:182
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:582



[Lunatic]

00:23:782 (1) -
This slider is too hidden in default skin.The other word to say,unseenable.Abosultely annoying while playing.Highly recommend you to repair it.

00:26:482 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get why you repeating this pattern(1~2)=(3~4),the feelling are different however you use the same pattern.It ruins the map itself,bring bore to players.Rather than keeping this,I suggest you to change it like this.

Or anything you think it's better than the crruent pattern,it sucks.


00:59:782 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ryu0 (NAZI) It blankets bad.Use this code.
324,160,59782,6,0,B|332:216|284:252|220:260|184:204,1,192,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:01:432 (3) - Same as above.
204,220,61432,2,0,B|244:260|304:260|352:220|344:160,1,192

01:01:432 (3,4) - I read it as 1/4 spacing since you used to use it as 1/4 spacing.But now it's 1/2,put it away.Like this:

01:20:182 (1) - The finish doesn't fit IMO.

01:24:982 (1) - Same as above

01:50:782 (3) - Repeative slider pizzes players off.1/2 slider in 200 BPM with this kind of slider speed casue players hard to determine how many reverses does it have.It's not tricky not funny but troll.Looks like you surpass your aesthetic pattern and put laziness in it.Del the last reverse and put a note anywhere is better than what you use to do here.

02:31:582 (1,2) - The spacing here is just misleading players.Suddenly 0.92 spacing when you use to use 2.0 or above.See 02:33:982 (1,2,3,4,1)


I am not forcing you to follow my suggestions but I highly advice you to think twice before resisting.A confuseion in my own opinion,keep spacing and patterns neat and you gain a senior talent.



[Hard]

00:20:482 (2) - If I were you,I won't put it as an anti-jump but stack it directly.

00:59:332 (3) - Why don't you Ctrl+G it?The spacing looks so weird.

01:07:882 (6) - lol put it on x436,y336 looks more aesthetic for me.

01:48:382 (3) - Dunno why it plays odd for me.But after using 4 notes /2 sliders/2notes plus one slider insteading it,plays better.Dunno why.

02:15:382 (1) - Why don't you stack it on the end of the pervious slider but the head of it:3 it plays better for me again.

02:35:482 (2) - (NAZI) It isn't a straight slider.Use this code.
161,334,154582,5,4,0:0:0

02:48:382 (1,2,3,4) - <_> huge jump


[Normal]

00:23:782 (6) - This rhythmsounds much much more better.

02:33:982 (7) - Del reverse and add note on 02:34:582 plays better for me


[Easy]

00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 notes is a bit hard for a easy. plays better for me ._.

01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above

02:38:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above

03:01:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Like what you did on
01:45:382 (1,2,3) -
01:50:182 (1,2,1) -

They play good.


I don't know if you are willing to change them.Depending on youself.
Nothing found in this diff.
Sonnyc
Hello~~ Sorry for the long delay..

General:

-- I hope you to start mapping from 00:00:982 (1) (except Easy) because I believe the song needs a bit time for an intro, and also I dont think the part above is a nice place for a mapping
-- I also suggest you to maintain the kiai sections exactly the same for all diffs.

Easy:

-- I don't think Audio lead in is necessary in Easy

00:20:182 (3) - 1 Grid left or something to make the distance more closer to 1.00x
00:25:582 (1) - If you can do, avoiding overlap with the first and the final may look better. Also add a Finish at the end
00:32:182 (2,2) - Maybe you've had some intention to emphasize these notes, but according from the song, just a single whistle will sound better
00:39:982 (2) - You forgot NC
00:41:782 (3) - Similar opinion from above, Delete Finish. (and you've forgot Whistle here :3) Infact, 00:44:182 (2) doesn't need a change...
01:19:582 (1,2) - I prefer you using combo as (2,1) Because First combo is for lyrics, second goes with the melody
01:25:582 (1,2) - In here, (3,1)
01:30:382 (1,2) - ^
01:39:382 (3,3) - Delete Finish :3
02:10:282 (4) - Hope you can put some effort to make the distance closer to 1.00x (by turning off the grid)
02:36:982 (1,2) - (2,1) reasons mentioned above~
02:39:382 (6) - 1 Grid Right
02:54:682 (2) - (156,50) would be an ideal spot
02:59:482 (2) - Maybe (83,120)?

Normal:

00:14:182 (6) - NC since this is a part where melody only comes out
00:23:782 (6) - NC
00:28:582 (4) - NC
00:38:182 (6) - NC
00:48:082 (4) - NC
01:01:432 (2) - Rather than this rythm, Hope you will start at 01:01:582. The current one is quite confusing, and doesnt follow the song
01:20:782 (1,2) - If you have understand about the point of comboes what I was wanting to say, hope you know yourself what to change..
01:45:082 (6) - (186,227) will be nice, Since this is quite a symmetric pattern
01:47:632 (3) - Hope you follow the lyrics. Just dragging 1/2 will not be a bad choice
01:50:032 (3) - ^

Hard:

00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacking will be better, looks quite weird
00:48:082 (1,2,3) - Nice speed down, but I think placing somewhere else instead stacking at (5) will be better to play
00:52:957 (2,3) - Making the rythm something like 00:56:557 (2,3,4,5) maybe better imo
00:58:282 (2) - Ctrl+G may make more playable? Just my opinion..
00:59:332 (3) - Strongly suggest a Ctrl+G here, I dont see big reasons for a jump here
01:28:282 (3) - Ctrl+G,To follow the patterns of (1,2). Also changing makes more playable
01:38:332 (2) - Template Whistle? maybe a mistake of Timeline?
01:41:182 (5) - I think increasing reverse 1 more is better
02:08:482 (2) - 1 Gird up and left will be better position
02:13:432 (1,1) - Deleting NC will look nicer
02:15:082 (3) - Increase reverse

Lunatic:

01:40:582 (1) - Starting this at 01:40:432 will be better
02:34:282 (3) - Imo, placing somewhere like (340,208) is better

To give my opinions about the map, Some interesting sliders you've used was impressive.
Though Lunatic's note were quite confusing to me, I think the mapset is surely nice, and almost rankable~~

Good luck with the map and get my star~ :D
spboxer3

※ 注意


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. inconsistent tags in "Lunatic" diff

Easy



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:25:582 (1) - [nazi] I guess you want to make symmetrical pattern... so~ :
    217,192,25582,6,0,B|256:146|256:146|294:192,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 00:26:782 (2) - (optional) make a slider curve to blanket 00:25:582 (1) - slider tail? it's too stiff pattern now.

  3. 00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - still a stiff pattern ((recommend to make it fun like this:
  4. 00:29:782 (5,1) - uhm... 00:29:782 (5) - is beginning for a paragraph so exchange the new combo looks better.

  5. 00:32:182 (2,1) - ^

  6. 00:34:582 (2,1) - ^

  7. 00:41:782 (3,1) - same...

  8. 00:44:182 (2) - add newcombo and remove at 00:45:382 (1) - same reason as 00:29:782 (5,1) - .

  9. 00:56:182 (1) - move to x:424,y:304 to make a pretty flow (slider 1's end & slider 2)

  10. 01:19:582 (1) - unnecessary new combo. and... wrong click time imo. because 01:20:182 - it's more suitable to make a click/hit time. but you used reverse to skip it.
    Possible solutions:
  11. 01:32:782 (1) - slider end should snap to 01:33:232 - . It's very odd hitsound for playing when you used wrong rhythm (delay 1/2 rhythm).

  12. 01:36:982 (5,1) - same as 00:29:782 (5,1) - (exchange the new combo)

  13. 01:39:382 (3,1) - ^

  14. 01:41:782 (3,1) - ^

  15. 01:56:182 (1) - 4th node to make a bad curve for this shape, please fix it. like this:
    112,192,116182,6,0,B|96:248|144:280|144:280|183:265|220:286,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  16. 02:03:382 (1) - Err... try to copy 02:00:982 (1) - and rotate 180∘to replace this shape. it's a kinda awkward shape.

  17. 02:35:782 (1) - remove this new combo? looks 02:30:982 (1,1) - it's a sentence, so... new combo it's unnecessary.

  18. 02:50:782 (2) - move to x286,y163 to make it blanket?

  19. 02:51:382 (1,1) - avoid used large spacing to center (especially easiest diff.). It's hard to play for newbie even advanced player.

  20. 02:56:182 (1,1) - ^

Normal


  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:15:682 (1,2,3,4) - Umm... I guess you want to make a square, but looks it's not a square now. (because it need re-spacing to other pattern... so I should give a code xD )
    512,72,16882,1,8,0:0:0
    356,44,17482,1,8,0:0:0
    276,52,17782,6,0,B|224:68|172:104,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    356,44,18682,1,8,0:0:0
    436,60,18982,2,0,B|492:112|492:188|452:232|452:232|452:332|420:368|336:384,1,400,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    272,344,20482,6,0,B|220:312|164:340,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    104,372,21082,2,0,B|81:328|113:276,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 00:30:982 (2) - (optional) do you want a symmetrical shape? if yes (example):
    48,296,30982,2,0,B|127:351|239:327|239:327|350:351|430:296,1,400
  3. 00:36:982 (4) - new combo for the beginning.

  4. 00:42:982 (3) - let the last node to x212,y323 to make a blanket

  5. 00:51:382 (5) - recommend to add new combo.

  6. 01:50:482 (4) - make the last node to x:528,y:156 to make a blanket

  7. 02:08:182 (5) - recommend add new combo.

  8. 02:41:782 (5) - ^

  9. 02:46:582 (5) - ^

Hard


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unnecessary green line:
    00:46:582 -


Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:32:032 (2) - recommend used clap

  2. 00:34:432 (2) - ^

  3. 00:37:582 (1) - remove finsh. It's very odd to used finish here. looks 00:36:982 - to 00:39:382 - is a sentence. and finish just like a period.

  4. 00:39:082 (3,4) - add clap?


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:482 (3,4) - used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point).

  2. 00:19:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - in this project (4,5,1) should be stressed. so remove 00:19:732 (3) - and used reverse at 00:19:432 (2) -?

  3. 00:27:382 (1,2,3,4) - 說實話的既然00:27:382 (1,2) - 用了比較大間距的jump 那為什麼00:27:982 (3,4) - 卻用小間距呢? 基本上節奏一樣強度也一樣 因此我建議把00:27:982 (3) - stack在(2)的結尾上.

  4. 01:55:732 (2) - add reverse? 01:56:032 - it's a kinda empty. used reverse to make to rhythm like "xx xxxx ((recommend: xx oxxO type. "x" is hihat (whistle)

  5. 01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,1) - 實在不知道怎麼說 節奏方面的問題 真的很建議用x xxx x xxx x x x 或是 x xxx x xxxxx x x這樣 應該是音調問題 聽起來也比較順耳

  6. 02:03:382 - 到02:05:782 - 是這小段的3,4小節 通常下節奏會讓第三節做轉折 第四段做過門 而過門會比轉折的節奏來的複雜些 (也可以說第四段才是整段的高潮) 所以你在第三段做出這麼複雜的節奏讓我聽/打起來有點confuse... ((same as 00:56:182 (1,2,3,4) -

  7. 02:26:632 (2) - add new combo to make 02:26:182 (1,2) - spacing more readable.

  8. 02:38:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同前段節奏

  9. 03:02:332 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來不是左右跳嗎 D: ((大誤

Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. tags problem.


Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:582 (1) - & 00:38:782 (1) - unsuitable finish imo. 理由同Hard...

  2. 01:44:782 (1) - ^

  3. 01:51:382 - used "Audioset" to Normal ((correspond 01:52:582 - ,01:53:782 -


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:782 (5,6) - same as Hard said. ((used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point).

  2. 00:16:432 (4) - (optional) move to x:400, y:288? make a smooth flow (Clockwise)
    ((btw: 00:16:432 (4,1) - this note it's cover the slidertick (turning point). you must avoid any pattern like this.後頭的原因盡量避免 因為這真的容易讓人confust

  3. 00:19:732 (4) - same as Hard said. (( remove this object and make 00:19:432 (3) - reverse.

  4. 00:23:782 (1) - slidertick covered.

  5. 00:31:582 (5) - add new combo to make this pattern more readable.

  6. 00:34:432 (4,1) - ._. slidertick covered...

說實話 Hard和Insane的質量夠了 應該說不錯 但是Normal和Easy真的還需要多加強 ~加油吧 (ノ・ω・)ノ
Topic Starter
Skystar

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via QQ group PM in-game PM baka scorpiour's modding queue
……总之就是过来mod了>A<

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:982 (3) - 尾部上移一格和00:06:832 (2) - 分开 沒位置了
  2. 00:10:882 (2) - NC 我覺得不需要
  3. 00:17:482 (5) - 建议微移到x:124 y:132 由於被吐了很多次我將整個pattern改了下
  4. 00:31:582 (5) - 建议NC 要不这里一堆圈圈不好读图 k
  5. 01:47:782 (1) - 这个静音没问题吗>_> 還是膜姐細心>_> 全note自設音效總會有點失誤的
  6. 02:15:382 (1) - 上移一格(grid level 4 這個已經是正中心了
  7. 02:34:282 (3) - 和02:32:582 (1) - 没有对齐 對齊了啊? >A<


其他没有啥问题

(๑• •๑)感觉没有前一张做得好 一些silder拉得不是很严谨 有以grid level 4为单位的微小偏差。
静音note不让用。
不过整体来看还是不错的
加油(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡

Nold wrote:

From CLANNAD Modding Queue(Flask requested)


Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.


[General]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Hard] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Lunatic] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask
- [Normal] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
fixed

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy,Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:58:282
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:632
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:882

Hard,Lunatic :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:57:982
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:182
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:582

Not necessary

[Lunatic]

00:23:782 (1) -
This slider is too hidden in default skin.The other word to say,unseenable.Abosultely annoying while playing.Highly recommend you to repair it. 咁你話點改... 完全冇解/_\

00:26:482 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get why you repeating this pattern(1~2)=(3~4),the feelling are different however you use the same pattern.It ruins the map itself,bring bore to players.Rather than keeping this,I suggest you to change it like this.

Or anything you think it's better than the crruent pattern,it sucks. Not that anyone must follow the vocal. I'd rather like to follow the drum. And didn't you see I always followed the drum through all non-kiai part?


00:59:782 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ryu0 (NAZI) It blankets bad.Use this code. yay
324,160,59782,6,0,B|332:216|284:252|220:260|184:204,1,192,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:01:432 (3) - Same as above. same
204,220,61432,2,0,B|244:260|304:260|352:220|344:160,1,192

01:01:432 (3,4) - I read it as 1/4 spacing since you used to use it as 1/4 spacing.But now it's 1/2,put it away.Like this: 雖不明 還是改了:O

01:20:182 (1) - The finish doesn't fit IMO. fixed

01:24:982 (1) - Same as above same

01:50:782 (3) - Repeative slider pizzes players off.1/2 slider in 200 BPM with this kind of slider speed casue players hard to determine how many reverses does it have.It's not tricky not funny but troll.Looks like you surpass your aesthetic pattern and put laziness in it.Del the last reverse and put a note anywhere is better than what you use to do here.

02:31:582 (1,2) - The spacing here is just misleading players.Suddenly 0.92 spacing when you use to use 2.0 or above.See 02:33:982 (1,2,3,4,1) 改 不過沒太大區別


I am not forcing you to follow my suggestions but I highly advice you to think twice before resisting.A confuseion in my own opinion,keep spacing and patterns neat and you gain a senior talent.

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~~ Sorry for the long delay..

General:

-- I hope you to start mapping from 00:00:982 (1) (except Easy) because I believe the song needs a bit time for an intro, and also I dont think the part above is a nice place for a mapping You can heard the drum at here(00:00:382 - 00:00:832), right?
-- I also suggest you to maintain the kiai sections exactly the same for all diffs. Not necessary

Lunatic:

01:40:582 (1) - Starting this at 01:40:432 will be better Nope, I followed the drum.
02:34:282 (3) - Imo, placing somewhere like (340,208) is better Good suggestion.

To give my opinions about the map, Some interesting sliders you've used was impressive.
Though Lunatic's note were quite confusing to me, I think the mapset is surely nice, and almost rankable~~

Good luck with the map and get my star~ :D

Only replied for Lunatic... Because I'm too busy now. TAT sorry
Flask
@nold 兩個都是故意的所以就不fix -A-
@Soyync 01:01:432 (2) - I make the slider fit with vocals o.o
@sp3 01:50:482 (4) - 感覺上還是我的好看-w-

Others all changed !!!
Topic Starter
Skystar

spboxer3 wrote:

※ 注意


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

Hard


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unnecessary green line:
    00:46:582 -
fixed

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:32:032 (2) - recommend used clap fixed

  2. 00:34:432 (2) - ^ ^

  3. 00:37:582 (1) - remove finsh. It's very odd to used finish here. looks 00:36:982 - to 00:39:382 - is a sentence. and finish just like a period. ^

  4. 00:39:082 (3,4) - add clap? ^


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:482 (3,4) - used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point). changed

  2. 00:19:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - in this project (4,5,1) should be stressed. so remove 00:19:732 (3) - and used reverse at 00:19:432 (2) -? 不愧是薯片

  3. 00:27:382 (1,2,3,4) - 說實話的既然00:27:382 (1,2) - 用了比較大間距的jump 那為什麼00:27:982 (3,4) - 卻用小間距呢? 基本上節奏一樣強度也一樣 因此我建議把00:27:982 (3) - stack在(2)的結尾上. 感覺現在這樣可以 那2個滑條其實不算大間距

  4. 01:55:732 (2) - add reverse? 01:56:032 - it's a kinda empty. used reverse to make to rhythm like "xx xxxx ((recommend: xx oxxO type. "x" is hihat (whistle) <_> 不想加...

  5. 01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,1) - 實在不知道怎麼說 節奏方面的問題 真的很建議用x xxx x xxx x x x 或是 x xxx x xxxxx x x這樣 應該是音調問題 聽起來也比較順耳 you're right

  6. 02:03:382 - 到02:05:782 - 是這小段的3,4小節 通常下節奏會讓第三節做轉折 第四段做過門 而過門會比轉折的節奏來的複雜些 (也可以說第四段才是整段的高潮) 所以你在第三段做出這麼複雜的節奏讓我聽/打起來有點confuse... ((same as 00:56:182 (1,2,3,4) - <_> 跟Lunatic的...

  7. 02:26:632 (2) - add new combo to make 02:26:182 (1,2) - spacing more readable. added

  8. 02:38:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同前段節奏 感覺這裡聽起來又順耳了...

  9. 03:02:332 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來不是左右跳嗎 D: ((大誤 <_>這個梗我也不太滿意於是改掉啦~


Hard明天再改 Done

Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. tags problem.


Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:582 (1) - & 00:38:782 (1) - unsuitable finish imo. 理由同Hard... 好改

  2. 01:44:782 (1) - ^ same

  3. 01:51:382 - used "Audioset" to Normal ((correspond 01:52:582 - ,01:53:782 - 說實話沒看懂...現在這樣我覺得可以了


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:782 (5,6) - same as Hard said. ((used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point). 好 0.0

  2. 00:16:432 (4) - (optional) move to x:400, y:288? make a smooth flow (Clockwise)
    ((btw: 00:16:432 (4,1) - this note it's cover the slidertick (turning point). you must avoid any pattern like this.後頭的原因盡量避免 因為這真的容易讓人confust ._. 這些非改不可嗎? 如果能不改的話我真的不想改...

  3. 00:19:732 (4) - same as Hard said. (( remove this object and make 00:19:432 (3) - reverse. 不愧是薯片 一下就切重點

  4. 00:23:782 (1) - slidertick covered.

  5. 00:31:582 (5) - add new combo to make this pattern more readable. 膜姐已經說了>_>

  6. 00:34:432 (4,1) - ._. slidertick covered...

說實話 Hard和Insane的質量夠了 應該說不錯 但是Normal和Easy真的還需要多加強 ~加油吧 (ノ・ω・)ノ
x847606653
fix almost,sorry for late.
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:176712
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,68382,76342
2,135582,149542
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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58282,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
58582,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
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178582,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
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Combo2 : 68,102,159
Combo3 : 245,158,185
Combo4 : 220,198,139

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240,224,90382,2,0,B|257:158|316:133,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,256,91582,5,8,0:0:0
368,224,91882,1,0,0:0:0
424,224,92182,1,6,0:0:0
400,344,92782,6,0,B|336:352|280:352,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,328,93982,2,0,B|112:288|88:232,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,208,95782,5,2,0:0:0
176,152,96082,1,0,0:0:0
200,96,96382,1,8,0:0:0
248,56,96682,1,0,0:0:0
304,32,96982,1,4,0:0:0
424,64,97582,6,0,B|480:104|480:168,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,288,98782,1,8,0:0:0
376,352,99382,1,2,0:0:0
304,256,99982,6,0,B|248:232|184:256,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,320,101182,1,8,0:0:0
112,200,101782,1,2,0:0:0
200,120,102382,6,0,B|256:152|320:120,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,48,104182,2,0,B|352:8|416:48,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,152,105382,6,0,B|480:232,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,272,105982,2,0,B|440:336,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,352,106582,1,6,0:0:0
312,264,107182,6,0,B|256:232|192:264,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,336,108982,2,0,B|160:368|96:328,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,224,110182,6,0,B|40:160,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,120,110782,2,0,B|104:56,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,40,111382,5,4,0:0:0
384,88,112582,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,113782,12,0,114982,0:0:0
112,192,116182,6,0,B|96:248|144:280|144:280|183:265|220:286,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,296,117382,2,0,B|352:320|392:296|392:296|392:232|448:168,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,64,119182,5,8,0:0:0
296,40,119782,2,0,B|216:32,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,64,120382,2,0,B|112:72,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,112,120982,6,0,B|40:160|64:224|64:224|120:256|192:216,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,122782,1,8,0:0:0
368,80,123382,6,0,B|416:40|480:64|480:64|512:120|472:192,2,240,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,126382,1,8,0:0:0
136,104,126982,6,0,B|72:152|72:152|72:264,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,288,128182,2,0,B|184:288|200:240|200:240|264:200|336:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,304,129982,1,8,0:0:0
456,248,130282,1,0,0:0:0
456,192,130582,6,0,B|448:112|448:112|352:56,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,64,131782,2,0,B|217:114|217:114|209:194,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,132982,12,4,135382,0:0:0
256,192,150982,12,4,154582,0:0:0
120,136,155782,6,0,B|72:192|120:256,1,120
224,192,156982,6,0,B|264:240|344:240,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,232,158182,5,2,0:0:0
472,176,158482,1,0,0:0:0
464,120,158782,1,8,0:0:0
432,72,159082,1,0,0:0:0
384,40,159382,1,2,0:0:0
256,24,159982,6,0,B|184:24|160:96,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,200,161182,1,8,0:0:0
232,264,161782,2,0,B|296:264|344:312,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,144,163582,5,8,0:0:0
272,104,163882,1,0,0:0:0
328,88,164182,2,0,B|400:64|480:128|488:240,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,336,165982,1,8,0:0:0
384,352,166282,1,0,0:0:0
328,360,166582,6,0,B|264:376|216:336,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,240,167782,2,0,B|104:176|152:112,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,80,168682,1,0,0:0:0
232,56,168982,6,0,B|296:32|352:64,2,120,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,160,170782,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,171382,12,4,173782,0:0:0
104,80,174382,5,8,0:0:0
160,48,174682,1,0,0:0:0
216,48,174982,2,0,B|248:88|296:64|296:64|344:96|312:160,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,176182,12,4,178582,0:0:0
128,80,179182,5,8,0:0:0
80,120,179482,1,0,0:0:0
64,176,179782,2,0,B|48:256|80:320|128:360|192:360,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,336,181582,5,8,0:0:0
352,320,181882,1,0,0:0:0
400,280,182182,1,2,0:0:0
432,232,182482,1,0,0:0:0
440,176,182782,1,8,0:0:0
392,64,183382,5,4,0:0:0
wonders
我咋觉得应该用ar8呢,这样就成为史上最难读的图了 :)
lunatic难度名不太合适吧,没见过这样难的lunatic,改成Extra吧
LKs
hi

[general]

As said reasons and chats happened in the past, I think my attidude toward the AR10 diff is pretty clear. I personally, technically don't see problem using AR10 whereas it might be considered an unnecessary feature that used only for popularity by other staff members. So, go gather opinions.

http://puu.sh/1ALfY 1024x768 BG

kiai有必要不一样吗

[Lunatic]

AR

00:05:932 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 求解这是什么形状
00:16:132 (3) - move to x193y209
262,282,15082,2,0,B|358:282,2,96,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
262,282,15682,5,8,0:0:0
342,250,15832,2,0,B|358:302|326:342,1,96,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
191,227,16132,2,0,B|228:187|278:194,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
178,310,16432,1,2,0:0:0
250,370,16582,6,0,B|196:357|178:310|178:310|130:306|86:338,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
191,227,17032,1,2,0:0:0
178,311,17182,1,2,0:0:0
97,236,17332,1,2,0:0:0
119,145,17482,1,8,0:0:0
56,80,17632,1,2,0:0:0
33,163,17782,6,0,B|77:174|117:142|117:142|173:154|205:190,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
给你小弄了下排版 如果你不嫌弃 主要是那个三角形以及00:16:132 (3) -
00:18:982 (1) - 吐槽一下blanket
00:28:282 (7) - ^
01:35:032 (2,3) -^
00:55:432 (2) - ^
00:42:082 (2) - ^
00:57:382 (1) - ^
00:28:882 (4) - ^多的不说了请自查
00:21:382 (1,2,3,4,5) - 吐槽 这个弧线打起来不是那么顺畅
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个四方跳作为你ar10的理论依据我觉得其实出现在这里没什么实际意义 不过既然加了那就放着吧
00:42:982 (1,2,3,4) - 不太好看 这四个随意放置的slider除了flow外剩下的作用都是扣分项 建议想想什么方式好看又好玩
00:50:782 (4,2) - 这种合围围的不好 很明显看出你是手动拉的 这种合围的另一边弧线都应该用翻转做的 不说对称性 弧线到circle的间距也不一样
01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这地方..做这种扁平跳虽然无可厚非但你不觉得按照音高做饱满点更好么
01:39:382 (1) - 虽说你这种逐渐拉开幕帘式的呈现slider有些新意 但明显人在打的时候不会注意到一抹绿色 所以基本建议换
01:50:932 (4,5) - 这俩为啥不按照前面的做拉大间距了

简单说说blanket 做好blanket需要3点
一点是每个元件本身不能难看
一点是blanket要符合等距原则 既以你要包围的circle为圆心 到弧线距离不能歪歪扭扭 当然不排除特殊情况
一点是在一个人们瞬时记忆能保留下印象的时间段内不要出现明显的间距变化(我指的是blanket的圆心到弧线距离) 同样是特殊情况除外
槽点比如我下面给出的这些例子 你可以看看哪些是什么问题 这三点做错一点就会毁了你的整张图 所以说请仔细查看 我觉得说明道理比帮你改有用得多
00:39:382 (1,2,3) -
00:33:382 (1,2,3,4) -
00:43:582 (3,1) -
01:26:032 (4,1,2) -
00:51:232 (6,2,5) -

[Hard]

hard加sv changes感觉其实意思不大

00:05:782 (1,2,3) - 请用旋转功能 拒绝手摆从我做起 没有手摆就没有mod
00:16:582 (1) - blanket 以后都不说了 其他难度自己看
00:16:582 (1) - 友情提示 怕你看不出来这个也有问题
00:25:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - 哦顺便 你用circle做blanket和slider同理 友情提示怕你无视
00:27:682 (2,3,5) - 为啥不能让这三个三点一线
00:30:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉不用nc
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

[Normal]

00:32:482 (1) - 间距
00:18:982 (3) - 吐槽一下形状
00:33:382 (3) - 吐槽一下形状

rhythm

00:10:882 (1) - 现在就谈谈这里开始以后

00:11:782 (2,3) - 这个节奏有点特别 但可以接受 我以为你要保持这种节奏型下去
00:14:782 (2) - 但紧接着这里又没有刚才那种节奏型了 这还不算
00:15:682 (1,2,3,4) - 这里放四个空拍的意义何在 这里首先和你之前的节奏不一致然后这里又有vocal 那你下这个1/1的四个就意义未知
00:21:082 (2,3) - 好的 刚才最开始是隔了2/1 现在变成了1/1 变成红线起了

只是简单举个例子 为了说明一下系统性的问题
人这种生物无论什么都是对称的 你不会看见他左右不对称 你也不会看见他从手指直接连着一个大腿
这就是同理作图要注意的事
你不能让人觉得我这里是手指 下一步就变大腿 而是要有身体做衔接 该是手指的地方就一直是手指 再按照歌曲的变化过渡到手臂 再到身体再到大腿 是不是很H

但是并不是说不能有变化 但这种变化就像人身上的首饰 手指上可以带戒指 胳膊上有手镯 这都是做亮点的地方 比如你在lunatic里的四方跳就有点这种意思

具体点说就是要树立小节这个理念 要树立歌曲AB段这个理念 这样你做起来歌就不是一团乱而是一条公路 周围的植被从草丛变成森林 就像从前奏到副歌

我怀疑我这是2012 best mod233

[Easy]

00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你不觉得比起之前这里5个circle连点难度浮动太大?

低难度排版不想看

但关于consistency这玩意 你要知道他不只是节奏上的排版上的
他同时也是音量上的 密度上的 难度上的甚至所有你能想象到的度上的
就像一首歌经过混音师处理绝对不会有爆音有过小 歌曲表面上看是艺术品自由发挥其实背后是制作人员精密按照规律调教出来的结果 只不过他机械化的那一面不会呈现在你眼前罢了 所以图也一样
做好的排版会花费你更多时间和耐心但他传达的不仅仅是好看这种事情

所有上述这些描述不包括跳针式的对称map

完毕
Flask
是不是很H
http://puu.sh/1B6GI
LKs
irc modded, but no KD. changelog:

NC in normal
some parts in hard

we've been working on this map for long. opinions(from XATs and mappers) were gathered and consensus finally reached.

bubbled
Topic Starter
Skystar

LKs wrote:

irc modded, but no KD. changelog:

NC in normal
some parts in hard

we've been working on this map for long. opinions(from XATs and mappers) were gathered and consensus finally reached.

bubbled
alacat
yay:D
Heatherfield
什么 都bubble了, 那就不mod了(
NatsumeRin
First map ranked in 2013.
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