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Poets of the Fall - The Happy Song

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Vass_Bass

grumd wrote:

инсойн!
02:09:635 (3) - за экран вылезло
03:00:762 (1) - я сделал симметричный, попробуй:
348,160,180762,70,2,B|340:148|340:148|332:152|332:152|328:140|328:140|320:144|320:144|316:132|316:132|308:140|308:140|304:128|304:128|296:136|296:136|292:124|292:124|284:132|284:132|280:120|280:120|272:132|272:132|264:120|264:120|256:128|256:128|248:120|248:120|240:132|240:132|232:120|232:120|228:132|228:132|220:124|220:124|216:136|216:136|208:128|208:128|204:140|204:140|196:132|196:132|192:144|192:144|184:140|184:140|180:152|180:152|172:148|172:148|164:160,1,340,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
вот с этим огромное спасибо, долго мучилась
03:18:086 (1,2,3,4) - поясню тем, что последний киаи это климакс песни и в нём совершенно сбивают с ритма и скорости 1/1 кружки на небольшом расстоянии. как-то запал пропадает. но как хочешь, это не так важно
и вообще да, профиксила все и добавила слайдеры. климакс так климакс

хард
починили сложности очень хорошо! эта теперь не такая скоростная, да и хорошую идею с шариками в "просветах" сториборды (правильно назвал?) не оставили, а поставили в инсайне. отлично.
только теперь надо чуть подправить. 00:45:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - вот эти штуки сделайте ровно, чтобы между соседними было равное расстояние. вот так например:
380,112,45973,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,104,46396,1,4,0:0:0:0:
212,96,46818,1,4,0:0:0:0:
100,232,47240,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,224,47663,1,4,0:0:0:0:
268,216,48085,1,4,0:0:0:0:
сделали просто ровное расстояние

нормал
я что-то сначала погорячился вообще с этим спейсингом. у меня просто личная ненависть к низкому спейсингу в нормалах и изях. но у тебя всё вполне играбельно.
03:38:368 (1,2) - ты только один из них обвёл, второй скопируй тоже -_- доне

изи
02:00:339 (3) - 02:50:621 (6) - 1.08 это не 1.0 :( что за нацизм :( поправила как могла окей

Irreversible wrote:

Now repair the bagel!
Google translater kinda worked this time, I can understand russian heck yeah

Don't try to understand russian lol
grumd
в изи пофиксила вообще смешно) теперь 1.07х вот тут 02:02:029 (1,2) -
я нацист, конечно, но не до такой степени.
ребублег! хотел бы ранкнуть, но нельзя(
я уже говорил, что сториборда просто охуенна?
ах да, ещё важно: со следующим батом добавь в тэги "psycho".
Topic Starter
Vass_Bass
санкую :3
Wafu
I found few issues that should be fixed in my opinion.

[Insane]

01:09:424 (1,3) - Swap NC. Other diffs also have these NCs swapped and you've even done the same on 01:02:452 (4,5) and more other places. So it fixes consistency and also it was in "red" part of a map and it was executing its end.
02:18:719 (1,3) - ^ Same reason, same problem
03:19:564 (1,3) - ^
03:33:086 (1,3) - ^

[Reiji's Hard]

03:45:128 (1) - Use red color. This is the only one diff from four that is not using it.

[Storyboard]

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\blood.png",320,240
F,0,81406,81617,1,0
F,0,81828,82040,1,0
F,0,82251,82462,1,0
F,0,82673,82885,1,0
F,0,88166,88378,1,0.01567815
F,0,88589,88800,1,0.04688656
F,0,89011,89223,1,0.07816891 0.07 is too high, if you look on 01:29:283 in map, you can see it stays stuck on the same fade, it is visible when it shouln't be. Fades above this one are not recognizable, so they don't need to be fixed.
F,0,89434,89645,1,0.1093773 Same issue as ^
F,0,89857,90279,1,0
F,0,101688,102110,1,0.03773582
F,0,102533,102955,1,0.03773582
F,0,103378,103800,1,0.04457654
S,0,103378,103800,1,1.032

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\blood2.png",320,240
F,0,164223,164434,1,0.02080663
F,0,164645,164857,1,0.06251849
F,0,165068,165279,1,0.1041317 Same issue as blood.png
F,0,165490,165702,1,0.1458436 ^
F,0,165913,166335,1,0
M,0,174364,,241,302
S,0,174364,,1.176
R,0,174364,,-1.344
F,0,174364,174575,1,0
M,0,180702,,80,255
F,0,180702,180913,1,0.004739344
M,0,181124,,475,339
F,0,181124,181335,1,0.004739344
M,0,184504,,303,302
F,0,184504,184716,1,0.0283237

That's all I considered quite important, other things should be less recognizable, however I noticed these while playing.
If you have any asks tell me in-game. Also, I hope you won't ignore this only because it is already bubbled, I'm sure grumd would rebubble it~

Great map :3
Topic Starter
Vass_Bass

Wafu wrote:

I found few issues that should be fixed in my opinion.

[Insane]

01:09:424 (1,3) - Swap NC. Other diffs also have these NCs swapped and you've even done the same on 01:02:452 (4,5) and more other places. So it fixes consistency and also it was in "red" part of a map and it was executing its end.
02:18:719 (1,3) - ^ Same reason, same problem
03:19:564 (1,3) - ^
03:33:086 (1,3) - ^
No. no, because it's bad for playing process, in tag multi for example

[Reiji's Hard]

03:45:128 (1) - Use red color. This is the only one diff from four that is not using it.
Pf, okay

[Storyboard]

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\blood.png",320,240
F,0,81406,81617,1,0
F,0,81828,82040,1,0
F,0,82251,82462,1,0
F,0,82673,82885,1,0
F,0,88166,88378,1,0.01567815
F,0,88589,88800,1,0.04688656
F,0,89011,89223,1,0.07816891 0.07 is too high, if you look on 01:29:283 in map, you can see it stays stuck on the same fade, it is visible when it shouln't be. Fades above this one are not recognizable, so they don't need to be fixed.
F,0,89434,89645,1,0.1093773 Same issue as ^
F,0,89857,90279,1,0
F,0,101688,102110,1,0.03773582
F,0,102533,102955,1,0.03773582
F,0,103378,103800,1,0.04457654
S,0,103378,103800,1,1.032

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\blood2.png",320,240
F,0,164223,164434,1,0.02080663
F,0,164645,164857,1,0.06251849
F,0,165068,165279,1,0.1041317 Same issue as blood.png
F,0,165490,165702,1,0.1458436 ^
F,0,165913,166335,1,0
M,0,174364,,241,302
S,0,174364,,1.176
R,0,174364,,-1.344
F,0,174364,174575,1,0
M,0,180702,,80,255
F,0,180702,180913,1,0.004739344
M,0,181124,,475,339
F,0,181124,181335,1,0.004739344
M,0,184504,,303,302
F,0,184504,184716,1,0.0283237
fixed, but it's not SO big broblem actually

That's all I considered quite important, other things should be less recognizable, however I noticed these while playing.
If you have any asks tell me in-game. Also, I hope you won't ignore this only because it is already bubbled, I'm sure grumd would rebubble it~

Great map :3
thanks
Wafu
I know it was not a critical problem, but why shouldn't anything be better when it is possible :3
grumd
Rebubble
Aurele
>psycho
>grumd bubbling

pretty legit.
i kinda looked at your map the other day, it seemed alright. will recheck for a rank! maybe? :3
Topic Starter
Vass_Bass

Gabe wrote:

i kinda looked at your map the other day, it seemed alright. will recheck for a rank! maybe? :3
It will be great
narakucrimson
Hello!

Well what I wanted to point out is that Easy is quite tricky, actually. Here are just a few things I want to mention:

  1. 00:24:001 (1) - Sliderend stacking in easy difficulties isn't something new players read well at all. And this isn't really fully stacked, so I guess it might cause a lot of confusion. I wonder if you can rework this pattern to space this out...
  2. 00:41:748 (2,3) - Again, can you try to unstack these?
  3. 01:28:226 (1) - You get the point :P Please unstack.
  4. 01:49:776 (2,1) - You COULD unstack these, but I believe the rythm is strong enough here for the stack to be understandable.
  5. 02:03:719 (1) - Maybe you could get this unstacked by reworking 02:02:029 (1,2) - a little.
Then, the difficulty curve is very pronounced (as in the jump from Easy to Normal is pretty big), but I guess that can't really be helped right now :( !

Well if you could fix that, it should be enough!
Catch me on irc once you finish with that!
Topic Starter
Vass_Bass
all fixed, thanks, Naraku
rank it somebody
narakucrimson
Cool!

There's a little spacing issue in Easy now, but I don't think it's mandatory to fix it.

Well then, this is now qualified! :D
Pagliaccio
Congratz Vass-nyan :3
TicClick
победа
Reiji-RJ
hooray
IceBeam
gratz, mrs. elite mapper :P
Aurele
*slaps Irreversible.


Congrats :3
Irreversible
Congratz Vass!
quiz-chan_DELETED
YAAAAAYY
Great jobs guys <33
Stefan
Nice background! Congrats
Cydros
This bg, cool map, grats :D
[DBF]
Gz.
Topic Starter
Vass_Bass
thanks to all! Gratz Reiji Elvis!yay
LunarSakuya
Congrats!! <3 :lol:
Alarido
RAAAAANKEEEEOOOOOOOOUUUU ^^

Congraaaatz ^_^ Vass_Bass
Kodora
Грац, Васс! :3
DenoisoGoiso
www congrats~
Topic Starter
Vass_Bass
thanks!
Kyouren
Gratzz!! Reiji-RJ, EvilElvisV2, and Vass_Bass!!^^
AlexaBM
О, точно. И вас грац, ребят и девчат \:DD/ осу нидс мо рок сонгс!
Satori
horowo
Sonnyc
Nice Psycho
DodgeOh
10/10 Storyboard. Really nice job. The beatmap is also great.
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