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Utada Hikaru - Merry Christmas Mr. Lawrence - FYI [Osu|Taiko

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Topic Starter
Xakyrie

Haruka wrote:

http://puu.sh/1edqs

... 2 weeks later and you still haven't applied mods.
shush, you. :o
Breeze
[General]
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
    - [Hard] : 65265
    - [Haruka's Taiko Oni] : 64971
    - [Makar's Normal] : 65265
    - [Taiko Muzukashii] : 64971
    Make them the same
[Makaer's Normal]

  1. 01:08:208 (3) - Add a finish here fits music
  2. 01:17:619 (3) - ^
  3. 01:43:501 (2) - ^, slider end
  4. 01:55:265 (4) - ^, slider end
  5. 03:01:149 (3) - ^
  6. 03:10:560 (3) - ^
  7. 03:22:619 (1) - Make the middle 2 node overlapped would looked better, like this
    SPOILER

    192,112,202618,6,0,B|136:100|96:156|124:204|124:204|196:172|258:235|258:235|288:304|368:308|368:308|336:396|256:356|256:356|176:396|144:308|144:308|224:304|259:219|259:219|316:172|390:204|390:204,1,1008,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  8. 03:36:442 - Add a note here better imo, and maybe you use a spinner after it instead of 03:36:736 (1), lasts to 03:37:913, might be a short spinner as a normal diff, so slider is fine, too
[Hard]

  1. 01:08:207 (4) - slider end, add finish?
  2. 01:15:266 (5) - Finish
  3. 01:17:618 (4) - ^, slider end
  4. 01:24:677 (3) - ^, slider end
  5. 01:43:501 (6) - ^, slider end
  6. 01:45:854 (3) - ^
  7. 01:52:913 (6) - ^
  8. 01:55:265 (3) - ^
  9. 02:02:324 (2) - ^
  10. 03:01:148 (4) - ^
  11. 03:08:207 (5) - ^
  12. 03:10:560 (4) - ^
  13. 03:17:618 (3) -
[Haruka's taiko oni]

  1. 03:32:620 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 03:35:267 (1) - Unsnapped circle
Get some more taiko mod and call me back for a bubble
Haruka_old
ye
also made some last minute changes
Makar
@Breeze: I went through the finish suggestions, and I do not like them and it feels very out of place to me.
As for the slider suggestion, I had it like this before, however, it is harder to tell which direction the sliderball is supposed to go (I got complaints about this from MATs/BATs in a previous map, and one from a MAT in this diff).
As for the note suggestion, I wanted to make the ending more calm and fit the piano, so no change.

Thanks for modding :3
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
Hmm, not sure if I should wait to get a storyboard...Regardless of how long it takes, I was hoping to get one. I'm also searching for some nice skin elements to add to the mapset. :?

+update
chaotic_iak


Unrankable, problem, plausible problem. Yay good stuff.

[General]
This is the color of Combo 3. It's too bright; namely, 03:03:796 (1) in Makar's Normal gets the worst effect (bright color + kiai + large slider = too bright for me). Maybe darken it somewhat?
Neat hit bursts.

[Makar's Normal]
03:22:619 (1) - Normal players shouldn't be subjected to overlapping sliders, especially if you don't really know where you should go when a beat lands on the intersection. (If I hadn't remembered that the slider snaked bottom-right-ward before looping clockwise to top-right, I probably would have missed it.) Most likely either make it not overlapping, or don't put a red point in the intersection.

[Hard]
Many spacing violations, but having BPM under 120 and no extremely annoying mistakes make it not really a problem.

Hm that's all I can see? Normal has no problem besides that one. Hard has many but all minor violations, although that many might make someone think that it's an Insane...whatever. Your choice. Good luck!
Coro
jonathanlfj asked me to take a look at this, so-

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Use alternating colours next time~
I'm guessing this is still WIP. So far I really like the patterns though, good job.

[Haruka's Taiko Oni]
02:34:971 - K

Wow, uh, it's a really good map. Sorry I can't find much wrong with it~
Haruka_old
quick update

oh yeah and I have a mod too, gg me

CoroQuetz wrote:

jonathanlfj asked me to take a look at this, so- haha thank you both -w-

[Haruka's Taiko Oni]
02:34:971 - K done on purpose because there are no vocals to emphasize here like the same parts of its kind; also, k, harmonizes with the piano, so that is why it's not a don.

Wow, uh, it's a really good map. Sorry I can't find much wrong with it~ ye thanks~
sherrie__fay
http://puu.sh/1pmBI

release rar then copy codes in .osb file into .osu :3

30th design work

signature update

no kds plz

we are going to uuuuuu~aaaaaa(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
Update on Haruka's Taiko Oni, muzuhashii, and added storyboard. Maybe I'll wait to rank this as a Christmas map LOL (even though the song has nothing to do with Christmas as the title is extremely misleading orz).

Thank you sososososo much sherrie for the storyboard! It's so lovely like you ><

Edit: thanks to Makar for storyboarding the lyrics onto the taiko difficulties xD
Edit2: thanks sherrie for adding effects :3 it's amazing (*ノ▽ノ)
Makar
holy shit



SPOILER

Xakyrie wrote:

Thank you sososososo much sherrie for the storyboard! It's so lovely like you ><
;_; yes

sherrie__fay wrote:

we are going to uuuuuu~aaaaaa(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡
this should be in OP <3

Xakyrie wrote:

Maybe I'll wait to rank this as a Christmas map LOL (even though the song has nothing to do with Christmas as the title is extremely misleading orz).
lmao yeah so misleading :c


Also you were not supposed to put the lyrics in the taiko diffs silly =w= though if you want I can adjust the code so it works with Taiko as well (like in Hikari) just talk to me in PM later if you are interested o.o
Nemis
[General]
AiMod says that Taiko difficulties have got a different preview time

[Hard]
00:11:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you stack this pattern on 00:10:266 (3) - ?
00:22:030 (1) - Whistle on this slider since you did the same 00:26:736 (1) - here
00:27:324 (2,3,4,5) - You should use the same spacing for this pattern
00:44:971 (1) - Shoudn't be there a whistle on the end?
01:08:501 (1) - New combo
01:13:060 (6) - You should add a circle here
02:09:530 (6) - You should add a circle here too
02:20:854 (3) - I suggest to move this slider a little more far from 02:20:265 (2) -
03:06:001 (6) - You should add another circle here
03:09:089 (2) - I suggest to make this slider more adherent with 03:08:501 (1) - 's end
03:14:383 (1) - I suggest to fix this slider form (to make the first curve use one more point, the curve will be better)
03:36:736 (1) - I suggest to change this beat in a slider that finishes at 03:37:324 (2) -

[Normal]
I suggest to use AR3
00:27:619 (2) - I suggest to move this at x:220 y:288 and move 00:28:502 (1) - this on 00:25:855 (3) - this
03:03:796 (1) - Move the 5th point (bottom-center) to x:256 y:348 to fix a little the ticks
03:22:619 (1) - Try to fix this slider too (same problem as above)

oh wait it's graveyarded
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
Thanks everyone. I'll be going over the mods I previously never had looked at and hope to finish this in a couple of short days. I'll be working towards a pending status and shoot for a rank hopefully by Christmas since it's sort of related to it.

Muzukashii is still not done; will need to be finished. Taiko bgs will also be fixed asap.
jonathanlfj
omg
hype
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
Taiko bgs are modified as best as they could possibly be (aka: share the same bg as the standard diffs as well as placement).

All mods applied; time to get some standard mods for this baby.

Edit: Muzukashii is complete! Beatmap pending; time to get taiko mods as well.
wmtokok
from m4m

Your map is look good :)

Hard
01:23:795 (3) - too near of 01:23:207 (2,4) - suggest to put(3) jump more eg. x:328 y:112
01:43:795 (1) - reference 01:47:618 (4,1,2) - suggest to jump more eg. x:428 y:72
01:52:618 (6) - add finish or whistle on 01:52:913 - here have a some music
01:54:677 (4) - ^ on 01:55:265 -
03:17:324 (4) - ^ on 03:17:618 -
02:01:736 (5) - reference 02:58:207 (5) - suggest to jump too more and put over upper left (feel not well
02:56:442 (6) - add whistle



I can't mod any thing in Makar's Normal...it is perfect :)
You just only give me insane or hard is OK
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
Thanks! Applied some suggestions.
Haruka_old
fixed the ending stream and the end time of the last kiai (mine was different than the other diffs for some reason) http://puu.sh/5UGpv

also quick mod for the muzu, as requested:

[Muzukashii]

  1. 01:06:589 (141) - idk this pattern is probably okay... but how about moving the d back one tick? doubles starting on the offbeat can be a little bit weird
  2. 01:08:942 (149) - same thing here from the previous suggestion, and likewise to similar parts in the kiais.
  3. 01:22:618 (186) - k also sounds good? (if so, apply in the other kiais too)
  4. 02:21:883 (340) - for these doubles, you can just completely remove them and it'll work well.
and that's all :oops:

I really like this.
a lot.
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
tyty sis, will apply and update with your diff tomorrow and stuffs.

I KEEP POSTING ERRYWHERE BUT NO ONE SEEMS TO LIKE UTADA :(

Edit: talked with Haruka irl about mod; updated.
Lanturn
Artist: 宇多田ヒカル
Romanised Artist: Utada Hikaru

Add Sakamoto Ryuichi 坂本 龍一 to the tags please. He was the original composer of this song and really needs to be credited.

Also add This Is The One | Album name

Merry Christmas~

No KD
Makar

Lanturn wrote:

Artist: 宇多田ヒカル
Romanised Artist: Utada Hikaru
There shouldn't be a unicode artist; the artist should be Utada Hikaru, as it is now (it's the official naming).

Lanturn wrote:

Also add This Is The One | Album name
It's already in tags and doesn't belong in the source.
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
This Is The One is already added in the tags. I guess the composer doesn't really need to be credited? Generally I would only include composers if they were very well known for their composing work, like Nobuo Uematsu, Shogo Sakai or Motoi Sakuraba. Doing a bit of digging I guess he could be added if you really want it.
Lanturn
My bad. I didn't see you already had the album in the tags X_X;

And the composer really should be credited. Merry Christmas Mr. Lawrence is japanese movie, and the song really I guess would be the theme for it. This composer, while not famous to this generation of people, was actually pretty famous and won a lot of awards from movies 20-30 years ago, and has some recent works as well. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ryuichi_Sakamoto | This would be like not crediting ZUN on a Touhou arrange really.

If you don't plan on using the unicode name, then I guess you should change it to just "Utada" as she went by that name when the CD was released.

http://www.youtube.com/user/hikki?feature=watch | I believe this is her official Youtube channel, and all of the songs listed are in Japanese.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOSNIIx5u_U | One of her videos.
Makar
This was talked about before (the use of Utada vs Utada Hikaru) and in the past it was decided to keep Utada Hikaru for consistency reasons... either way, let the ranking BAT decide how to handle this.

Obviously, her videos will be in Japanese if she is Japanese ...
Lanturn

Makar wrote:

This was talked about before (the use of Utada vs Utada Hikaru) and in the past it was decided to keep Utada Hikaru for consistency reasons... either way, let the ranking BAT decide how to handle this.

Obviously, her videos will be in Japanese if she is Japanese ...
Fair enough. At least add her name in the tags for Japanese unicode if the romanised version becomes final.

Also. bands like coldrain, ONE OK ROCK, and so on don't get converted into Japanese, but her artist name did. Just wanted to mention this as well

This post... feels evil :P
Topic Starter
Xakyrie
Respectable. I'll add it in; your reasoning makes perfect sense. :P

I looked at Ryuichi Sakamoto's page and found that he had done both composing and acting work for the film Merry Christmas Mr. Lawrence (1983), and that in itself is enough reasoning to include his name in the tags. He obviously played an integral part in the fruition of this song!
Dark_Ai
Gogogo
You have to get this ranked this year \o\ !! ~
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