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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 09, 2015 at 1:06:06 AM

Artist: MiddleIsland
Title: Piano Concerto No.1 ''Scream''
Tags: 弦奏即興曲 kyousoukyoku dai ichiban himei 中島岬 Nakajima Misaki
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4446kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.1 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Expert (5.08 stars, 601 notes)
  3. Hard (3.01 stars, 274 notes)
  4. Insane (3.41 stars, 334 notes)
  5. Normal (2.06 stars, 159 notes)
Download: MiddleIsland - Piano Concerto No.1 ''Scream''
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for all my friends who helped me this map.
  1. Lan wings
  2. zorefire
  3. 2sister
  4. Gelbana
  5. Alarido
  6. Joon
  7. -[ Asuna ]-
  8. Rush_FTK
  9. Number5
  10. xxdeathx
  11. Niva
  12. Aleks719
  13. KSHR
  14. TicClick
  15. Desperate-kun
  16. TaikuGx
  17. -kevincela-
  18. -Bakari-
  19. pandorawindy
  20. Lissette
  21. Tari
  22. EvilElvis
  23. CDFA
  24. Garven
  25. Kibbleru
  26. captin1
  27. Sonnyc
tutuhaha
既然来了,那就顺便个沙发
Lan wings
继续到处贴irc
00:02 Lan_wings: 有两个地方不是很喜欢
00:02 cmn_891127: 嗯
00:03 Lan_wings: 00:46:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:03 Lan_wings: 这一段不爽
00:03 Lan_wings: 建议换梗
00:03 Lan_wings: 01:48:445 (13,1) - 还有就是这里跳远一点
00:03 Lan_wings: 01:49:263 (8,1) - 跟后面的区别
00:04 Lan_wings: 其他应该没啥
00:04 Lan_wings: 还有一个是slider后接4连的``貌似差点读成1/6
00:05 cmn_891127: 唔这个,因为好看嘛,前面两个我研究研究
00:05 Lan_wings: 最后一个问题不大
00:05 Lan_wings: 改不改都无所谓
00:05 Lan_wings: 主要是第一个建议改``第二个必须改
00:06 Lan_wings: 第二个不改真的太难读
00:07 cmn_891127: 最简单的就是每串改成7连打
00:08 Lan_wings: 也可以``
00:08 Lan_wings: 你喜欢了._.
00:08 Lan_wings: 如果你愿意抛弃这个梗的话._.
00:09 cmn_891127: 唔,我觉得不连贯的说,我想想,肿么摆串串好看
00:09 Lan_wings: 按照AHO说的这样放可以增加点刺激感
00:09 Lan_wings: 只要衔接的好
00:09 Lan_wings: 能够让人看出来这是没有断开的节奏
00:10 Lan_wings: 那么跳一下是不错的
zorefire
[Scream]
  1. you probably tried not to make the note's touch each other so 01:15:536 (3) is touching 01:14:445 (2).
  2. 01:21:355 (3) touching 01:22:445 (4).
    [Hitsounds]
    for the hit sounds hmm...
    Well that chime noise is a little bit to longish dont you think?
    If you wanna use it bring the chime noise down to 30 percent it will sound as if its part of the music which is a good thing :).
    Add timing points to bring the sound back to regular at 50 and when the chimes come again bring it to 30%
  3. Add control point and bring back to 50 00:01:536
  4. Add control point 00:10:082 and bring volume to around 15% sounds crazy but it might be better.
  5. Volume back to 50% 00:21:718
  6. 01:28:263 for here 10% might be the case for this cause soft music like this don't have the drums to block out some hitsounds even at 10% u cans still here it quit a bit loudly but that should do.
Excellent map :D!
Hope it get's ranked
Banana
居然挖出来了!
2sister
5星做的不错 连打好玩><!

Edit:不用给Kudosu

Artist - 中岛岬

Title - 钢琴协奏曲第1号曲 ''奏鸣''

Tags - Piano


↓ 图片点下面↓
Gelbana
From ~Freshly Baked Mods~
Keep in mind all personal opinion.

Scream
___________________________

  1. 00:44:264 (4) - Bit off sync
  2. 00:48:809 (2) - Maybe this?
  3. 01:44:445 (3) - Change slider maybe? Suggestion below
Stream
___________________________

  1. 01:01:536 (2) - Maybe?

There isn't much at all to mod; not that I can see anyway. Awesome song and map! :)
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Scream]
* In general, SV (slider velocity) feels running a bit faster than it could be imo, but I seen BMP is a bit high, then it's OK since you provide an easier diff (it's up to you unless BATs rage on this)
00:12:263 (2,1,2) - This part is a bit confusing for newbies, since they can be tempted to land the cursor on 00:13:173 (2) instead on 00:12:991 (1) -- especially with Hidden mod -- because of the more natural gesture they more like will do. To fix this, I suggest: * first select 00:12:991 (1,2) and make Ctrl+G, then select only the slider and make Ctrl+G on it. Picture result will look >> http://puu.sh/3O7vn.jpg
00:42:082 (1,2,3) - Could you avoid the overlaps here? Probably, NO. But you can make a more newbie-friendly overlaps like these >> http://puu.sh/3O7JY.jpg
00:46:445 (3) - this overlapped head will be fully invisible with Hidden mod. Could be a bit better by making 00:46:445 (3,4) like >> http://puu.sh/3O7R5.jpg
01:48:627 (1,2,3,4) - They fits well to the song and flows well too, but remember that sliders with 2 our more repeats are a bit confusing for beginners, since they may expect one repeat and, if they might not see the other arrow, mighty they'll release the mouse/kbd key and lose combos ><

[Stream]
01:01:536 (2) - This slider can be a bit hard to see because of it under the previous stream.

♥ In general, I loved see the series of streams. I could call them "Bolshoy Streams" since they reminds me the acrobacies made by the Bolshoy's Ballet Crew (yeah, they are too PRO on what they do ^^ ♥)

That's it ^^

I SO loved the song ^^ Take a Star !!! And [Stream] diff is too high quality ♥ !!! Just take + a few mods and then call a BAT !

Att.
Lan wings
01:48:536敢加个circle不 就扔那串stream的尾巴就好 后面的串稍微调整一下位置什么的 间距跟这些一样就ok 01:49:263 (8,1) -
Topic Starter
cmn_891127

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Scream]
* In general, SV (slider velocity) feels running a bit faster than it could be imo, but I seen BMP is a bit high, then it's OK since you provide an easier diff (it's up to you unless BATs rage on this)
00:12:263 (2,1,2) - This part is a bit confusing for newbies, since they can be tempted to land the cursor on 00:13:173 (2) instead on 00:12:991 (1) -- especially with Hidden mod -- because of the more natural gesture they more like will do. To fix this, I suggest: * first select 00:12:991 (1,2) and make Ctrl+G, then select only the slider and make Ctrl+G on it. Picture result will look >> http://puu.sh/3O7vn.jpg
00:42:082 (1,2,3) - Could you avoid the overlaps here? Probably, NO. But you can make a more newbie-friendly overlaps like these >> http://puu.sh/3O7JY.jpg
00:46:445 (3) - this overlapped head will be fully invisible with Hidden mod. Could be a bit better by making 00:46:445 (3,4) like >> http://puu.sh/3O7R5.jpg
01:48:627 (1,2,3,4) - They fits well to the song and flows well too, but remember that sliders with 2 our more repeats are a bit confusing for beginners, since they may expect one repeat and, if they might not see the other arrow, mighty they'll release the mouse/kbd key and lose combos ><

[Stream]
01:01:536 (2) - This slider can be a bit hard to see because of it under the previous stream.

♥ In general, I loved see the series of streams. I could call them "Bolshoy Streams" since they reminds me the acrobacies made by the Bolshoy's Ballet Crew (yeah, they are too PRO on what they do ^^ ♥)

That's it ^^

I SO loved the song ^^ Take a Star !!! And [Stream] diff is too high quality ♥ !!! Just take + a few mods and then call a BAT !

Att.

All fixed~
Thank you
Joon
hi

Hit sound modding

This map has now thinks that there is not enough Hit Sound.
Also u will need to use is the basic finish sound.
do not lead to my modding. This alone should solve a problem.

[Normal] some advice
00:21:718 (1) - 2st notes add whistle
00:23:173 (3) - ^
00:25:355 (2) - start notes add whistle
00:27:536 (1) - start notes change finish
00:28:264 (2) - 3st notes chang whistle
00:30:445 (1) - start notes change whistle
00:31:900 (3) - 1st notes change finish

good luck
Arlecchino
i'll check it
Arlecchino
Hi~
From my Queue

[General]
Your mp3 is 320kbps ,for rankable mp3 must 192kbps or below No 192+ it's unrankable
add " 弦奏即興曲 " to tags since it's the album :3
and i think you need Easy (1 or 1.5 star) see Ranking_Ctiteria

[Normal]
00:40:627 (3,1) - overlapped,how about stacking with the tail
00:44:991 (1,3) - ^
00:54:809 (2,3) - repaire this distance
01:21:354 (3,1) - ^ try to stack like 01:54:445 (5) - ctrl+g and blanketing ?

[Hard]
Check Aimod plz
00:16:809 (3) - blanket can be improved
00:19:900 (4) - blanket and stack like 00:29:718 (2,3) - change (2) to 1/2 slider and (3) too for better imo
00:34:173 (4,5,6,7) -
00:36:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc, make more easier ato reduce distance of 00:37:173 (7,8) -
01:10:627 (1) - remove NC
01:10:809 (7) - NC here
01:12:172 (1) - Remove Nc
01:12:264 (9) - NC here
01:16:990 (4) - NC
01:22:536 (5) - NC here
add spinner ? from 01:54:991 - to 01:56:263 - and add unherited point ,reduce volume to 20%

[Insane]
Check AiMod plz
00:05:718 (5) - move to right 1 grid for PF blanket :3
00:09:900 (3) - stack with slider
00:21:355 (7) - 1/2 slider to fit the music
00:21:718 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - stack properly ?
00:22:809 (1) - remove NC
00:23:173 (10) - NC here and try to all part.. like 00:24:445 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:355 (1,2,3) -
00:24:173 (6) - remove this note
00:31:355 (6,3) - stack properly ? and 00:32:809 (4) - move to (88,168) for 1.2x DS
00:50:082 (5) - blanket can be improved
00:52:991 (2) - stack with slider ?
00:59:173 (1) - blanket can be improved
01:54:991 - same as hard , add spinner ?

okay i'm still nub at modding Std but
still hope this helped
please reply my mod , make my mod be better futher
Good luck with your map~ Sorry for double post >w<)c
Topic Starter
cmn_891127

Joon wrote:

hi

Hit sound modding

This map has now thinks that there is not enough Hit Sound.
Also u will need to use is the basic finish sound.
do not lead to my modding. This alone should solve a problem.

[Normal] some advice
00:21:718 (1) - 2st notes add whistle
00:23:173 (3) - ^
00:25:355 (2) - start notes add whistle
00:27:536 (1) - start notes change finish
00:28:264 (2) - 3st notes chang whistle
00:30:445 (1) - start notes change whistle
00:31:900 (3) - 1st notes change finish

good luck
All fixed, thank you, Joon~
Topic Starter
cmn_891127

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Hi~
From my Queue

[General]
Your mp3 is 320kbps ,for rankable mp3 must 192kbps or below No 192+ it's unrankable
add " 弦奏即興曲 " to tags since it's the album :3
fixed
and i think you need Easy (1 or 1.5 star) see Ranking_Ctiteria

[Normal]
00:40:627 (3,1) - overlapped,how about stacking with the tail fixed
00:44:991 (1,3) - ^ nope, it will be more difficult to keep the distance
00:54:809 (2,3) - repaire this distance no enough space
01:21:354 (3,1) - ^ try to stack like it will overlap the reversearrow
01:54:445 (5) - ctrl+g and blanketing? not follow the distance

[Hard]
Check Aimod plz
00:16:809 (3) - blanket can be improved fixed
00:19:900 (4) - blanket and stack like fixed
00:29:718 (2,3) - change (2) to 1/2 slider and (3) too for better imo the rhythm need to change
00:34:173 (4,5,6,7) -
00:36:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc, make more easier ato reduce distance of 00:37:173 (7,8) -
it is HARD diff, I think these jump is not too difficult for this level
01:10:627 (1) - remove NC
01:10:809 (7) - NC here
01:12:172 (1) - Remove Nc
01:12:264 (9) - NC here
01:16:990 (4) - NC
01:22:536 (5) - NC here
All fixed[/color]
add spinner ? from 01:54:991 - to 01:56:263 - and add unherited point ,reduce volume to 20% nope

[Insane]
Check AiMod plz
00:05:718 (5) - move to right 1 grid for PF blanket :3 fixed
00:09:900 (3) - stack with slider fixed
00:21:355 (7) - 1/2 slider to fit the music add a note at 00:21:536
00:21:718 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - stack properly ? nope
00:22:809 (1) - remove NC
00:23:173 (10) - NC here and try to all part.. like 00:24:445 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:355 (1,2,3) -
I think nc is OK here
00:24:173 (6) - remove this note plz give one moment to consider it
00:31:355 (6,3) - stack properly ? and 00:32:809 (4) - move to (88,168) for 1.2x DS
00:50:082 (5) - blanket can be improved
00:52:991 (2) - stack with slider ?
00:59:173 (1) - blanket can be improved
not change
01:54:991 - same as hard , add spinner ?nope

okay i'm still nub at modding Std but
still hope this helped
please reply my mod , make my mod be better futher
Good luck with your map~ Sorry for double post >w<)c
Thank you soooooooooo much, Asuna~
you are really nice!
[GB]Rush_FTK
来拜见大触作图了=w=
新手试玩感受:

[General]
- 无关紧要的问题:第一个Kiai时间可以从00:01:065开始吗?刚开图啥都没有就冒星星有点233(在00:00:000插一个时间点。)

[Normal]
-00:21:065 这个滑条容易在第一次游戏时读图出现误解。(也许我反应力不够XD)
-00:22:883 这个点击可以距离临近的两个滑条近一点?
-01:30:156 这里有个重音,可以考虑加一个Circle。
-01:36:156 同上。
===
-00:54:883 玩着有点不舒服
-01:41:428 有点措手不及(

[Hard]
-精彩绝伦。

[Insame]
-01:03:883/01:05:337 可以加一个Circle
===
-00:02:883 不喜欢遮挡住上一个的梗……
-00:21:065 眼睛花了,看不清几个连打 ><(4连打还是勉强能看清的)

很不错的歌曲~很不错的betamap~我就收下学习了!
Topic Starter
cmn_891127

Rush_FTK wrote:

来拜见大触作图了=w=
新手试玩感受:

[General]
- 无关紧要的问题:第一个Kiai时间可以从00:01:065开始吗?刚开图啥都没有就冒星星有点233(在00:00:000插一个时间点。)
没问题

[Normal]
-00:21:065 这个滑条容易在第一次游戏时读图出现误解。(也许我反应力不够XD) 我觉得还好啊,尾端重叠应该不太影响的
-00:22:883 这个点击可以距离临近的两个滑条近一点?这个是标准距离呀
-01:30:156 这里有个重音,可以考虑加一个Circle。我会考虑,但是要重现排版了,我觉得改动的意义不大
-01:36:156 同上。^
===
-00:54:883 玩着有点不舒服
-01:41:428 有点措手不及(

[Hard]
-精彩绝伦。谢谢

[Insame]
-01:03:883/01:05:337 可以加一个Circle
===
-00:02:883 不喜欢遮挡住上一个的梗……
-00:21:065 眼睛花了,看不清几个连打 ><(4连打还是勉强能看清的)
我觉得目前还都挺好的,于是就没有改
很不错的歌曲~很不错的betamap~我就收下学习了!
非常感谢呀~~~
Number5
From Queue~
[Normal]
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4) - 有点难了...
[Hard]
打起来像Insane...
00:07:247 (6) - 有点难读
00:09:610 (1) - 最好可以放远点
00:35:247 (2,3,4) - 卡手
[Insane]
没有发现有问题……就是难度名改Extra比较好……
Topic Starter
cmn_891127

Number5 wrote:

From Queue~
[Normal]
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4) - 有点难了...
[Hard]
打起来像Insane...
00:07:247 (6) - 有点难读
00:09:610 (1) - 最好可以放远点
00:35:247 (2,3,4) - 卡手
[Insane]
没有发现有问题……就是难度名改Extra比较好……
谢谢~~
修改了一下hard小间距note的摆位,normal的slider形状~
xxdeathx
lol i realized you're the same guy who mapped Sis Puella Magica!

[Normal]
  1. lower your slider speed, 1.40 is hard-level
  2. 01:48:246 (5,6,1,2,3) - end sliders on white ticks to fit music
[Hard]
  1. WHOA THERE CALM DOWN WITH ALL THE 1/4 SLIDERS IN HARD, I CAN'T EVEN READ THEM THAT FAST
  2. 00:33:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - alright the first batch: (1, 2, 3) is barely acceptable but putting a circle in front of (4,5,6) makes it harder than it already is
  3. 00:36:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - also the way you overlap circles on the slider heads but not completely stack them. you should completely stack them so it's more clean and easier to read because the way you're doing it now it's hard to tell if there is 1 or 2 circles.
  4. 00:43:701 (1,2,3) - this kind of spacing with 1/4 sliders should be for insane
  5. 00:57:065 (6,7) - the music is a lot bouncier here so you can map it more interesting
  6. 01:22:610 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - space these out further apart so you can see them more clearly
  7. 01:27:792 (1,2,3,4) - space these apart too, i thought it was a 1/4 stream at first
  8. 01:48:246 (5,6,1,2,3) - again, stack the circles exactly on the slider head so it's easier to read because it's too hard to tell that the first slider has one circle and the second slider has two on top of it
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:429 (5,6,7,8) - i'd use repeating slider for 1/6 beats because it's hard for players to read the rhythm like this
  2. 00:29:429 (2,3,4,5) - ^ also the spacing is different
  3. 00:44:337 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 01:48:610 (14,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - separating every set of 4 notes gives the impression that there's a 1/2 beat between them
good luck!
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