jogfi2002 wrote:

[Sharlo]

我猜这个难度是Sharlo做的www Sharlo都写着了当然是Sharlo做的了AHO> <

先说下初见的感觉，节奏、排列和DS都有点乱，建议先用固定DS排一遍，再去拉出不同的间距来。（才不会说我被坑了四个X呜…）
然后跟歌词跟得太紧，连着的CIRCLE比较多，让人觉得无法放松，会有图很紧凑的错觉。
不过前几个难度都是澄空取的节奏，夏萝这个难度有个新节奏也挺不错的呢。

00:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用的DS应该是1.2？但00:14:413 (1)的prev是0.85，我觉得刚开始还是先按DS排好点，先让玩家进入下状态。
00:14:413 (1,1) - 这两个NOTE之间感觉有点空，如果是中间break的时候这么放倒是没问题
00:16:080 (1,2) - 这两个NOTE没叠好 fixed
00:16:746 (3,1) - 同第一条 这里和第一条的DS都已经被澄空改过了
00:18:079 (1) - 这个slider是在那几下连着的钢琴声之中的，从这一小段钢琴声开始排会比较好。比如说这样 => image002 嗯这样节奏挺好的不过因为前两个小节的这个地方都是不下note的所以想这里也一样^^
00:19:246 (4,5) - 这里其实应该放三连，钢琴声有三下。
00:24:746 - 至少在这个地方加一个CIRCLE，不然中间会莫名空出一段，而且钢琴声很明显。 fixed,改成了折返
00:29:579 - 同上 /w\其实我不想从头到尾都踩钢琴声并且为了减少分数才这样放的
00:31:913 (3,4) - 建议还是像前面那个二连那样排开，比较好看。另外实际上这里的钢琴声仍然是三连的……第一下从00:31:246开始。后面也有这样放二连的却不会有违和感，因为有其他的节奏和人声，这里就只有钢琴了。 fixed
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8) - 这一段咱试着排了下，仅供参考 => image003
00:39:079 - 这里最好还是不要空着，因为音乐很连续。 这里我压的是歌词,歌词这里没有唱词,所以空一下觉得更好
00:39:246 (4) - 这个slider设置得不好，跟歌词太紧，长音可以考虑用短slider来代替，一般这种三四次来回的短slider都用在颤音或者节奏特别强烈的地方。 fixed,明白了w
00:39:746 (1) - 这里也可以放个短slider，配上"どーち"的歌词 这里1,2,3都是对称的1/1拍节奏,如果1变成1/2slider的话就不对称不好听了/.\
00:40:413 (3) - 也显得有些突兀
00:51:746 (2) - 还是想吐槽一下这种slider不太好看ww让人想到魔杖什么的…… 2333,不知道怎么拉又不想普通弯曲
01:17:913 (8) - 加个New Combo fixed
02:05:746 (2) - 同之前所说的
02:09:912 (6,7) - 6换成不回转的slider好点 这里跟Sumisola难度下一样的节奏了
02:28:746 (4) - 同上 同上
02:29:746 (3) - 同上 同上
02:46:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这个连打不太合适，还是换成两个slider+circle比较好 改成了circle+cirle了
02:56:746 (1,2,3,4) - 同上 同上
02:57:579 - 加一个circle 感觉再加note会太密啦
03:12:413 (1) - 换成几个小跳的CIRCLE会更好 这里是故意下的个人风格> <
03:25:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里会坑到人w（虽然我没被坑） 这里就是故意坑人的=L=,不过已经把DS改过了w
03:30:413 (1) - 这个减速有点奇怪 这里其实是澄空的建议w
03:31:579 (1,1,1) - 这三个没有跟上音乐的说。应该这么说吧，你前面的slider跟的是人声，紧接着突然变成跟背景音乐会让人反应不过来。
04:09:413 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面所说
04:19:579 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这几个我倒是觉得换成短的回转slider不错 fixed,正想这么改(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉ
04:21:579 (1,2,3) - 同上 fixed
04:29:746 - 加个NOTE fixed


唔，重新把中间空掉的地方填一下，DS也统一起来，之前有个MAPPER和我说，可以考虑平时用1.0，KIAI用1.2这样，总之还是先保证玩家打得舒服比较好。
然后跟人声还是跟音乐最好有个主次，比例适当打起来就不会有违和感。大概就是在同一个阶段里，同样的节奏取同样的梗？
夏萝加油ww 谢谢镜子(*´˘`*)♥

Faust wrote:

On request.

Sharlo:

Mm, mixed feelings about the mapping structure, buuuuuut taking into account that this is a first-off, I actually have a good opinion of where Sharlo stands as a mapper (terms of experience, mapping intuivity and with or without assistance)

Not so much of technical modding from me.

Actually thank u for your support.^^

- 00:39:246 (5) - Not sure as to why this has to be in 1/4, 1/2 does pretty nicely, but I do notice the slider sticks out like a sore thumb if you do so, so I guess you could shape it to minimalize the effect.

Before I think that 1/4 makes the rhythm be more interesting, but there're other people hold the same opinion with you so I put it to a 1/1 slider.

- 00:41:079 (1) - Could remove the New Combo here. But as I've seen, you have a tendency to place NC's every half-way through a line of the lyrics. Consistent I suppose.

Just I think that place a NC at the begginning of the section will be better^^.

- 02:29:746 (3) - Shift this a little left so that small part isn't covered up.

OK~

- 03:12:413 (1) - Don't feel that this should be applied here.

I tried to place two 1/2 slider instead of the original note.

- 03:24:579 (2) - Deserves a note. From here on, I would suggest you connect a majority of the notes to par since it gets a little more intensive on the vocals.

OK.

- 03:29:913 - ^

^

- 03:30:413 (1) - Kind of off-handed. The only indication (still pretty vague at best) is that it's of a different combo color, which doesn't help much.
So this can be replaced with hitcircles instead of having to suffice with a slowed slider.

- 03:31:579 (1,1,1) - These in particular are quite unsettling, I cannot quite perceive any one of them to positively accentuate the song/map/playing.
Especially when - 03:31:746 - is such a good spot for a nice down-beat hitcircle.
The constant 1/2 tempo of the song doesn't give these 1/4 sliders a chance to work.

- 04:06:913 - Add a note? Shouldn't be leaving so many gaps in-between vocals for the next few parts, even more so when it's the last stretch of the map.

If I add notes in the same positions, this diff will be overmap./w\

- 04:19:413 (1) - Maybe you put this for some variety. Here's a suggestion for you:

SPOILER

Yours is pretty, and I replaced it by my way.

- 04:24:413 - Why u no put note ????????????????

/.\

- 04:37:746 (3) - I considered having a slow running slider here instead. You could give it a try and see if you like it.

That's all I have. Nice singing.

Thanks a lot.

abalee wrote:

[sumisola]
AR9有点水土不服 Orz 因为整个图遮掩程度很大，不用AR9，很多地方读图会出错，所以orz
00:43:079 (4) - 考虑下将这个和(3)再拉开一点， spacing好辨认些。 fixed
01:18:079 (8) - 这个slider的reverse arrow会被01:17:079 (5) - 的hit300挡到，换一下方向吧。 fixed
03:55:746 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的长白线上的音效可以试试加clap或者将whistle改成clap。 长白线是最强拍，因此我觉得在最强拍上加轻音效会比较好，而在3白线（次强拍）加重音效，听起来会更好，可能是个人习惯，不过这里还是不改了orz
04:09:746 (3) - 这个clap是不是忘了删... fixed

[sharlo]
话说不少奇怪的spacing啊...没看出排这些spacing的梗...
00:31:413 (1,2,3,4) - 推荐对称放置 fixed

[hard]
02:07:579 (5) - 这个不必拘泥于位置，和上一个垂直对称也好，反正要位置重叠的那个note也差不多看不见了 。 fixed

LKs wrote:

hi

[Sumisola]

我给你微调了好多 全是stack和blanket形状 你直接带入就好了 http://puu.sh/1cCHF 谢谢LKs这么耐心:) 还有其他一些没对齐的地方我也对齐了
00:18:913 (3) - 00:18:413 (2) - 感觉slider的弧度和stack都可以在做的更好
00:26:579 (5,6,7) -
00:30:913 (5) -
00:38:413 (1) - 00:39:246 (1) -
00:40:246 (5) -
00:41:079 (1) -
00:46:413 (1) - 00:47:913 (6) -
00:52:913 (4) -
01:16:246 (3) -
01:27:746 (5) -
02:14:413 (1) -
02:15:079 (3) -
02:16:746 (8) -
02:44:746 (3) -
02:54:746 (3,5) - 02:56:079 (7) -
04:25:579 (2) -
04:31:746 (1) -

[Normal]

00:46:413 (1) - 这个建议微调一下 把中间的node往右上一点 fixed
04:16:413 (3) - 这其实没必要做弧度？直接一个斜直线感觉够了 fixed


夏萝大哥下次唱tv size 累死了

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

Sharlo: 今天osu更新乱七八糟我不知道我这是不是最新版本 但我这显示的是latest ver所以 aimod告诉我:

02:28:746 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). fixed
02:28:746 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed

Spinner New Combo
01:57:746 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fixed
04:05:246 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fixed

[Sharlo]

00:20:079 (2) - 这个倾斜度感觉和右边不一样 往逆时针转一点 fixed
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - 这个比较不好 fixed
00:35:413 (8) - 不要clap 之后所有的这种都不要clap fixed
00:49:079 (2) - 这slider有点猎奇 做成这样http://puu.sh/1cCIx fixed
01:03:746 (1) - 这slider窝着有点难受 fixed
01:05:079 (1,4) - 这种意在对称的slider应该做的更对称一点 现在明显偏向尾部了 fixed
01:07:746 (3) - 01:12:413 (4) -01:28:246 (5) - 一样的问题 之后不赘述 fixed
01:13:913 (1) - 不要clap fixed
04:06:413 (1,2,1,2) - 这节奏感觉作为hard+没必要这么1/1 太死板了 fixed
04:19:747 (3,1) - 这个blanket fixed

hmm这两个难度都需要你和澄空多自我检查一下 澄空这slider也略不靠谱 把角度太尖锐的 不对称的blanket没弄好的都检查一下调整一下 尽量 /.\

夏萝大哥下次唱tv size 累死了

LKs wrote:

yo

[Sharlo]

01:34:413 (4,5) -
01:37:079 (4) -
01:38:413 (4) -
01:40:413 (1,2,3) -
01:42:413 (4,5) -
01:45:079 (3,4,5,6) -
02:10:412 (1) -
02:29:079 (1) -
02:30:412 (1) - 其实这么短的slider没必要用五点 四点足矣
02:31:246 (3,4) -
02:37:746 (9) -
02:58:412 (3,4) -
03:00:246 (5) -
03:10:412 (3,4) -
03:11:412 (5,6) -
03:24:746 (3) -
04:19:747 (3,1) -
04:26:246 (6) -

http://puu.sh/1h44i

微调时间点

老样子覆盖我给你的文件 no kd

[sumi]

03:34:246 (7) - 放到x183y72

LKs wrote:

03:23:746 (1) - arrow is totally obstructed(hidden). please make it visible fixed


no kd

Scorpiour wrote:

Popped the bubble due to an unrankable stuff:

The slider end snapped to wrong place cause two object apart less than 10ms in Easy diff


please fix it and call me back

those wrote:

Bpm is still doubled ever since my post earlier.

those wrote:

Here's why you should not base it on the piano, but the rhythm instead:
Melodies are made out tones. These tones have a set length defined by the bpm (you don't know whether they are eighth notes or sixteenth notes, for example). However, drums are not based on tones in the same way; generally, the bass>snare>bass>snare makes one 4/4 measure. With that in mind, the bpm is clearly doubled in your map.

Darksonic wrote:

lol wrong icon

Nymph wrote:

我去这下你又有的晒妹了!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sharlo's voice

这不科学